/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

re watched HxH and forgot how good the character development was for the Chimera Ant arc was

If you post anime in here you should be banned.

>>4400898
Go to /beg/ retard

>>4400909
Why?

>>4400903

>>4400909
Because it looks like shit.

Layer effects

>>4400912
Because it looks like shit.

>>4400934

>>4400934
redline it

>>4400909
>i dont like it therefore /beg/

>>4400842
yay i am op...

god bless

>>4401121
this is great, but the twist in the torso seems too extreme for a just a windup

>>4401133
Thanks mate.I've realized it a bit too late so, decided to go with it.

>>4400912
Not him but yeah the face is awefull and this pose is obviously way to hard for ya

>>4401211
Your hatching has really improved, nice work!

>>4401211
Better rendering but same old facing front pose as always

>>4401189
OP of the drawing here, none of the replies were mine but ty for an actual critique, I will work on those. Was trying to emulate the character from the show but did not translate well.

>>4401218
thats what gets the likes, no one care about pose. Normies dont understand whats hard to draw and what isn't.

>>4401262
Yeah that much is clear, I'm gonna shut up for now on.

>>4401211
Very good

>>4401262
How do I learn what gets likes and what doesn't?

For today

>>4401211
Nice rendering as always, especially the softness on the face!

>>4401327
Blog? this is amazing

>>4401262
What if you're not interested in being a like-whore and actually want to improve artistically?

>>4400912
Because you're a /beg/

>>4401211
Really good stuff man

>>4401327
I've seen this exact pose in some official art somewhere, feels plagiarized / traced

>>4401467
not him, but the basic setup is a shirow staple.

>>4401159
Nice warden you drew there. Blog?

>>4401452
it's a woman and she is 13

Any suggestions on how I can improve my composition. What to add?

>>4401534
Add more elements in the further background, this looks good so far

>>4401534
Gains goblin, pls don't steal my gains.

Tried to do a background

>>4401535
Im thinking of adding some plants, purple background blend with some green and some gold coins to shine below.

Any other suggestion?

>>4401539
And this

>>4401537
You know I gonna Rob you of your gains soon. You can't stop the gains from being stolen.

>>4401061
>Projecting
Can you stop being a retarded /beg/ already?

>>4401539
Love this apart from the shadow, it's way too flat. Looks fake.

>>4401551
no

>>4401592
It's lesso that the shadow is flat, and more that the shadow does not follow the light source correctly. The shadow will only look like a silhouette of the figure if you are looking at it at the same point of view as where the light source is coming from. The shadow indicates the light source is coming from the upper right side of the image, so the shadow should look like the silhouette of the figure viewed from the upper right.
Other than this, I think >>4401539
is really great

>>4401949
Blog?

>>4401972
Do you fill over your lines or just inside?

>>4401486
https://twitter.com/SojournFantasy
Maiev is bae, wc4 never ever.

>>4401427

Not him, but it's @art_mellon

Current WIP for next mage.

>>4402028
Is she a dictator?

>>4402031

Nah, just wanted random magic staff designs and gave her that one. When I initially designed the staff, I had been playing a ton of Monster Hunter, so it's 99% likely I had subconscious influences there lol.

>>4401592
>>4401768
Was hoping nobody'd notice the shadow, yeah I fudged it. Anyway thanks.

>>4400898
update WIP. worked on the pose and face a lot more this time

>>4401974
What do you mean

>>4401955

Here you go.

https://twitter.com/WhiteBox_Studio

"Las sniper?"
"Yes and he's darn good too"

>>4402192
That arm is not working for me

>>4402199
cool

>>4402212
I agree, in done for the day but it is killing me. I'll try fixing it with fresh eyes tomorrow

>>4401987
>Maiev is bae
Yeah
>wc4 never ever.
If we go by Blizzards' standards, then even WC3 never ever again, ha. I wanna cry.

>>4401467
Really? I took some inspiration from twelves SF3 nuetral sprite. Didn't know there was something already out there.

>>4400842
ears or no ears?

>>4401542
I love your art, anon

made an anime paint by numbers

enjoy

>>4402636
So this is how you do good eyes

Needs more mech

>>4402685
love it, except for the wonky perspective on the tits. the colors and shapes are awesome

>>4402642

im workin on doing an entire illustration this way

so far my lines have become anime ish through this

>>4402685
not sure about this one desu

>>4402709

end result

>>4402733
How do I pick good colors like this?

>>4402349

>>4402199
ahhh your stuff is so deceptively simple. I love how the low angle of this picture really puts you into the scene

hi /ic

>>4402736
I want to know this too. I have tried to study color theory for several different hobbies and I have never been able to figure it out.

>>4402771
tried to do something without lines for a change...

>>4402685
>>4397157
I'm really sorry for being bothersome, but
>Things like toshi sketches have a lot of lines that imply form
>toshi sketches
Who/what?

Question: How come most anime/manga art came to use the brow-line as the eye-line?

Do you like my shinies? My favourite is the smoke effect behind the purple artifact.

>>4403050
They look like they glow instead of shine, though.

>>4403060
They glow and shine.

loosely referenced.

>>4402917
>>4402918
I dare you to draw a single background.

>>4401159
head is too small

>>4403087
I'm attracted to this image but not sexually and I can't figure out why it is and I can't imagine it's a daughteru thing because I hate children.

>>4403087
I'm attracted to this image. Compleatly sexually, offcourse.

>>4403173
>>4403180
It's okay to appreciate young people without finding it sexual.

>>4403087
faces are kind of weird (eyes too high up skull) but nice otherwise

>>4402500
Thank you.

>>4402918
CUTE

>>4401213
Aw yus, happy to hear that!
>>4401218
>>4401262
You're right anons, it was a warm up drawing so I hadn't even thought to do something more challenging than that ;_; I'll try doing something with perspective next
>>4401271
:)
>>4401327
Thanks Mellon! always happy to see your art, this one in particular is super cool
>>4401452
Thank you, I appreciate it

>>4402927
I love how tkmiz influenced so many creepy/cute artists, i love that style.

>>4395906

Hey, it's me again, the same Oblivion fag. I tried to redraw the scene - Khajit in Dark Seducer armor assaulting a Bravil guard - in a less bad anatomy and poses. Is this any better? I used poseable manneuquin doll for reference. I got carried away and started pencilling before I realized I should post it here for crit.

Also I am taking the advice and I started practicing anatomy from photos daily.

>>4401062
Fun

>>4403212
No, the boy ruined it. I don't want him here. Whatever it was he ruined it and I want him dead or away from them.

>>4403673
Bad taste anon, the tail boy is the best part

>>4403501
I can tell you used a mannequin because they look extremely stiff. Study gesture

>>4402705
I forgot to draw in the suspenders from the nipple guard thing, here is a cleaned up edit

>>4402723
Yea, i haven’t been in the zone. Gotta keep on keeping on

>>4403018
I think all his stuff is somewhere in the /artbook/ thread, but here is a quickie link
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/42102281

the guy is like a sniper with his lines. One shot perfect forms, none of this shotgun chicken scratch bullshit

>>4402685
i hate your style more with each passing day. you might not be the worst poster on ic by any means but you sure do make the ugliest art

>>4401211
I know I said I would do something other than a front facing anime girl but I was really inspired after looking at some Hellsing art and wanted to design a similar thing. I'll do something interesting now :'')

Don't know how to describe this specific genre, but does anyone know any media in the branch of authoritarian-society/gothic-horror/supernatural/steampunk/sci-fi? I can't figure out a way to express that more concisely lol

>>4403818
>I think all his stuff is [...]
Thanks! I'll look it up.
By the way, you forgot the SpiderGwen/Lickilicky one.

Brush pen only

>>4404035
Looks good, especially the shading.
I was thinking about getting one myself, any tips and tricks that you can recommend or something to watch out for?

>>4403232
not him but I disagree, unless you want every face you draw too look exactly the same, with the same proportions. Some people have longer faces IRL, so naturally the same goes for people with cartoon/anime proportions.

>>4403673
get a fucking grip, and stop being a creepy faggot.

>>4403212
Extremely cute. Do you have a twitter to follow?

>>4403212
Is this digital?

>>4402685
>>4403818
Cool Ryuuko drawing (did you pre-sketch this with a marker?)
Do you use rulers for lines or stencils for curves when you ink?

>>4403957

No, that would be those two anons who paint ugly portraits on canvas.

>>4403957
This really seems to be bothering you, and I want to help you out, but you gotta be more specific. Name drop some artists to study or something.

>>4403818
Mostly wanted to try new flesh tone markers. How do girls put on make up? So difficult to paint faces...

>>4404117
Yeah, i did the marker under sketch, but now it is making the flesh tones muddy. I need to make a new process. I free hand the ink. Too lazy to get another tool.

>>4403957
post your work.. oh wait ya wont :o go draw some boxes ya cuck

>>4403957
hhahahah fucking seethe

>>4402736
>>4402921

pixel art does color best because of the limitations of the hardware

purple is dark yellow is light is an easy one

heres some (2) pages from pixel logic that might help

>>4402736
>>4402921
>>4404313

>>4403957
Lol at this autismo

>>4404313
>>4404314
Where's this from?

>>4401062
bless you pantsu

>>4401972
what a qt

>>4402636
>>4402709
lol wtf

>>4404313
>>4404314
Can you create a palette as an example and work me through this? I don't quite get it.

>>4404334

oh it gets WORSE

>>4404228
kino

>>4404335

Does this help? i tried my best to explain...
its a semi full proof way to get a good palette

a general rule of thumb is that as long as all the colors in the pic contain some of each other, they will be harmonius

LOOMIS goes over color well in creative illustration as well
http://www.alexhays.com/loomis/Andrew%20Loomis%20-%20Creative.Illustration.pdf

>>4404322

pixel logic by michael azzi

was actually on the same forums as me growing up as pixel artists, the book is really professional and goes beyond pixel art

>>4402709
cool idea, if a bit unorthodox. would love to see whatever full-scale illustration you make with this. it reminds me of vector graphics

>>4404228
Did this one too fast, too many boo boos

>>4404433

*sigh*
thank you for the nice words but i don't deserve them as you can tell from

>>4404360

im tracing pic related and reconstructing it color by color for learning purposes, so there isn't really an ounce of creativity on my end.

>>4404448

i will post the end result of when i eventually attempt to recreate the whole pic though

>>4403999

Yo /alt/

I got a challenge for you.
This should be easy for alternative.
Don't disappoint.

>>4404493

Don't respond. Just report advertising/begging and ignore.

>>4404518
dont have a cow dude

Folds

>>4403093
you win

>>4403360
thank ye

>>4404691
It is nice to see you in these threads again, I really like your stuff. Do you have a blog?

>>4404694
nice to see you too anon.

i have my current-year twitter account at:
https://twitter.com/OekakiHam

i also have my caveman year blogspot page at:
http://roboham.blogspot.com/

>>4400842
Any criticisms on my linework? I've been on this piece for almost a month, obviously this isn't nearly all of it, and I'm like a day away from being done.

>>4404228
Try to use a lightbox of you want to clean a bit

>>4404390
I am not that anon but thanks for the link on Loomis. I like how there is a PDF E-book download copy than my physical book copy. It's just not as convenient as i would like honestly. Thank you for the link.

Volleyball girls

>>4405083
a little disappointed the left one isn't a cute boy :'( it's still good nonetheless

>>4405125
You can imagine it a boy anon... If you want to

>>4405125
faaaaag

>>4405083
Small girls not showing their cunts and just being wholesome. Actually refreshing.

>>4404049
I want to get a nice tight grip on his neck

>>4404329
thx u fren

>>4403479
funny but i literally don't consider me influnced by him at all.. i'm just lazy and can't render...

>>4403673
Lmao insecure fatass old retard cring incel coomer pedophile

>>4404439
Panty mech - tried something new coloring the hair and robot parts.

White space is so valuable, once ink goes down everything just gets darker with more ink

>>4405886
Is that you Raphanon

>>4402874
thanks bub

>>4406329
Wow what you got so good NoseBro

>>4405955
No, who is that

>>4402058
I dont know what these retards are talking about. /bes/s cant fucking draw like this and you obviously "feel the form". The first one looks pretty nice. But this ones slightly better except for the face. Practice the head for diff angles more.

lazy day today

>>4400933
>>4401327
>>4402199
>>4402685
>>4402927
>>4403087
>>4403212
>>4403999
>>4404035
>>4404228
>>4404792
>>4405733
>>4405948

<3

>>4405948
very cool hair

>>4406383
Blog?

>>4405304
This is great, love it. The figure is not well balanced I think, but great overall

>>4405948
Head placement is off.
Left leg's perspective makes little sense, it has one perspective at the calf and another at the ankle.
I would change the left hand gesture, trying to straigthen it up.
Nice colors. .

>>4406404
>hair
will try a few more things tomorrow

>>4406502
Thanks for the crit - i only noticed the head earlier, I’ll keep an eye out for the other stuff

>>4406412
@art_mellon on twitter, but I dont usually do these.

>>4406494
Ah yeah I can see it now. It's kind of floaty. Her left leg should probably be more centered as she leans into it. For stylized effect I could also probably bend the knee inward a bit to imply the weight of her thicc thighs.
There's probably a million things I'm missing but that's what stands out to me right now.
Thanks for the critique anon

Got sidetracked from finishing this for a long time, life has been hell and this picture was a huge struggle. I just hope it's good enough.

>>4403501
You legit have potential, but you shouldn't worry too much now about trying to get things right. Start smaller, study gesture, perspective and basic line control, which you can learn from Peter Han's Dynamic lessons or drawabox.com.

Draw a lot from life too, study those mannequins and random objects and even self-portraits. Keys to Drawing is an excellent book for this and one of the best books for beginners period.

>>4406672
that astro boy is nice

>>4405733
>funny but i literally don't consider me influnced by him at all.. i'm just lazy and can't render...
cmon dude your art is so similar to his

>>4404439
i think this is one of the best drawings you've ever done. most of your art is so angular that it's ugly, in my taste, im sure heaps of people love it, but something about this just works. it's realy fucking good looking dude. the only advice i am qualified to give you is draw new stuff and leave your comfort zone

>>4404439
Really like those effects, well done.

>>4406932
don't get me wrong, his work is amazing
but I literally just read his stuff the first time like a month ago...I am aware my stuff is similar, but it isn't intentional, just the result of always rushing it and a lack of knowledge of other techniques other than basic pixel brush, solid colors and blending for the shadows...

>>4405304
Newer one. The clothing really blends together and the legs below the knee are a bit of a mess among other things but I thought I might as well post it.

>>4407127
HOTEEEEE

>>4405733
Gimmie twitter pls

>>4407148
@pantsu_ripper

>>4407127
Blog?

>>4403957
kinda agree. He's really skilled at what he does but that style doesn't do it for me

>>4403957
Imagine being this jealous kek

>>4407190
i agree he sounds jealous, but the truth is there IS something unappealing about that guy's style... NOT trying to take away from his skill, I think he puts a lot of time and effort on them and I am sure there's people who really like his stuff, but there certainly is something off putting about them, the style looks western and comes off as annoying for some reason, colors too... at least for me...

Clood

Slowly...

>>4407228
I always love your aesthetic. My work can't match up. It's so much more pleasing to look at yours.

I don't know where the beginner or furfag general thread is so here.

Honestly, she could use a redesign before pilot launch.

Actually, I'd like to finalize the sphynx twins of Sparse and give everyone one more once-over to keep it all aesthetically and thematically pleasing.

Last one for now. I'm eager for /ic/ to tear me apart, honestly.

>>4407232
Aw thank you for your kind words, it all come down to mileage mostly, i still have a long way to go.

>>4405948
Panty is best girl

>>4407259
>>4407266
>>4407275
Looks kinda stiff but the chara designs is good if they are yours

>>4407275
These ultra long feet are unappealing as fuck but it's alright otherwise. I suppose furries will like the heels at least.

>>4407476

Okay, so change Frell's feet.

>>4407460
Yeah, they're all mine. I won't shill my site, I'm sure you have a Google. I could try making some more dynamic modelsheets for sure. In fact, I think I will do exactly that soon for April once I get home.

Thanks /ic/

I redid the face and now just the lineart...I'm definitively doing inktober this year cause lineart is what I dislike the most

>>4407213
This looks great

>>4405948
I was being a lazy shit at the beginning of the drawing, then I got into it at the end. I wish i took this one more seriously. Quickie ink snap shot before coloring

>>4406949
>>4406939
Thanks, I’m slowly trying some new things while attempting to finish 31 robots in march

>>4407195
>>4407186
>annoying
Definitely one of the strangest pieces of feedback I’ve gotten. Any suggestions on how to make it less annoying and more appealing?

>>4407460
Panty rocks, stocking a shit

>>4407940
So close yet so far, need more iterations to figure out hair

Also no more day light, camera is ass

trying to figure out how to make the hand hair thing work
>>4407702
This looks great, I'm a big fan of the colors! I think the saturation makes for an aggressive tone, which meshes well with Edelgard's nature.

>>4408076
Nice.

>>4408057
Annoying critique anon, I think this one is nice!

It might be that there's too much going on on the others and its hard to tell things apart which makes it offputting... this one is really nice in comparison

>>4407163
I don't post my stuff anywhere right now. Just doing drawthread requests for fun and some practice

>>4408076
Thank you friend! You got a pretty cute Midna in there too

>>4405948
>>4408057
I like the coloring, how did you come up with that?
Is the yellow area under vagina supposed to be something?

>>4408515
>area under vagina
English.exe stopped working
her*

>>4408057
I really really don't like your art style. But I appreciate it and I want you to keep drawing. It's so 2000s it's a nice time capsule.

>>4405955
bruh i'm insulted you think thats me you autistic statistic

>>4406672
dost thou posess an blog?

>>4408262
Ok now this is a based boogie

>>4408262
Your progress took a huge jump lately. Did you use cocaine or something?

>>4407228
your rendering is always so lovely

>>4403212
I love sketch collections on a grey background. Easy save

>>4408635
epic atoms

>>4406932
It really isn't that similar but they do have similar influences like Yume Nikki

>>4408635
draw gigantor

>>4406329
this is so cool wtf

>>4402917

yeah the place for the arm to be even be in the position just cant be done, the forearms would be too long to pass the face like that. i like what you're going for though, i'd consider showing some of the upper arm or seeing what some other adjustments bring because right now it looks like it's just someone elses floating arm
>>4402222
god damn i love when people draw like this, it's really nice jankiness

>>4409411
Anyone else see an elephant with a flaming fart in the thumbnail?

>>4409083
thx u fren... i just disregard useless thing like health

>>4409478
You 60yo version of yourself is sweating right now reading this post.

>>4400842
Finally finished this fucking monster. Took way too long, but I did it at least.

>>4409599
wow that looks a lot bigger than your wips! good job anon, very intricate

>>4409599
your lack of technical skill betrays you. props for attempting such a big piece tho

>>4409809
What’d I do wrong? Need some advice.

>>4409813
you clearly aren't feeling da form frend, it is interesting nonetheless and the effert really shows!

you should focus on figure and gesture drawing from reference if you want to really improve

>>4409856
Thank you, I needed to hear that, been working on that more and more recently, thanks anon.

>>4409599
Finally lol

not gonna work on this anymore

>>4410027
Why not? I love it. Do you have a Twitter?

>>4410027
>>4410031
Yeah why not

>>4410027
is this a trap?

>>4400903

>>4408057
I forced myself to draw this one. I hate stocking because i can never draw her face.

>>4408118
I guess less is more, been trying to taper off some of the colors, but its hard for me

>>4408515
>vagina
Fuck me, i accidentally drew a vagina. I’m going to forget to delete it. It’s just the bottom mech part.

>coloring
I was bored doodling, trying to make backgrounds with markers, and realized I never use the chisel tip on the back. Still trying to make it look good, just doing trial and error with every drawing. Please have patience.

>>4408524
Heh thanks i guess. What kind of art style do you like?

Pixel art threads don't feel like a good fit for me since pixel art is just a medium, but my style is more alt

>>4410356
My PP is growing

Saw some cool Skull Girls fan art yesterday and wanted to draw something in the style

>>4410356
Dam it i don't wanna fuck a clown...

>>4410356
You're too good for this board.

>>4410356
Getting early 2000's gameboy flashbacks
I miss that style.

>>4410190
It’s a samus ménage-a-trois
>top usual shenanigans
>left sketch it only, no pen
>right chisel tip only, no pen

Does anyone do the marker first, then the ink? Like water coloring where the ink is only accent. Or i guess like painting, and you never use pen.

>>4410425
My girl!
I like it, #3 is very cool, but I think the hair could be depicted better
All of the colorful squares and lines gives me Halo 3 terminal vibes.

>>4410190
>Fuck me, i accidentally drew a vagina. I’m going to forget to delete it. It’s just the bottom mech part.
I can't tell if you're being sarcastic or not. Why would you want to "delete" it?

>>4410356
another girl thing

>>4410356
>>4410460
Blog?

>>4410460
god i love girls. also please let me use this thread from now on

>>4410461
twitter is @ _98fumi

>>4410463
I love you and your art.

>>4409599
Did this as a cool down.

Whitebox here.

Just wanted to let you guys know that I've joined a program for promising animators, and will be moving to another state in a few months to pursue that dream. Both 2D and 3D animation fundamentals will be taught, and nearly 70% of all who attend get jobs in the industry in the first six months, with Disney/Pixar and Universal being among the top employers.

It's been over three years since I applied, and now I finally have an opportunity to pursue my dream.

Thank you guys for helping me get this far.

>>4410518
epik!

>>4410518
Lol animation. Good luck being an inbetween wage slave. Your general drawing skill is below average.

i love you /ic/

>>4410518
good luck man

>>4410518
Congratulations! I've always enjoyed your art, so I'm glad you're going places.

>>4410463

you remind me of my old style , youre very good

i wish i could do pixels again ... maybe i will

>>4410518
Good, now you will be preoccupied instead of trying to turn this fucking board into a nanny state.

>>4410518
Three year application. Wow. Never heard of that before. Must be intense.

>>4410463

also had a friend who was good but he lost his mind also

you might be inspired by some of his stuff

>>4410602

&

Grug

>>4410518
I hope you'll still post here from time to time. I'd love to see how your work will improve from all of this. And best of luck.

>>4410597
This is beautiful anon! I would love it if you made more pixel stuff, this is great. So high res and yet you never got lazy with the hair, or the little details. Admirable.

>>4409298
Mazinger z still had a better op

>>4410707
how bout some giant robo?

>>4410648

oh stahp ~<3

your sense of presentation is tops
it's like your art has the pro's of pixel art (color wise) youre smart enough to use the GB pallete but
the subject matter is more towards what digital art does bravo

>>4410648

but if I did have one critique of your otherwise perfect style it is : where's the full bodies?

i think if you challenged yourself to recreate one of these from pkmn gsc you would capture what nintendo did right which is get that appealing proportion down to the pixel level; might i recommend (0,-3) or (3, -7) or! (4,-1)

>>4410713
Out of time for tonight

This is the test for the colors. I'm struggling at coming with something bright, but grounded.

>>4410518
>and nearly 70% of all who attend get jobs in the industry in the first six month
>Disney/Pixar and Universal
Really nigger?
You want to go to those souless western studio?
You disappointed me

>>4410518
Maybe they can help you finally draw good faces.

>>4410602
>lost his mind

Coloring is bothering me in a drawing I'm otherwise proud of. Is it as simple as contrast being too high or am I missing something?

Cloud, using statue as ref.

>>4410518
Goodluck jay. Godspeed woof man u_u7

>>4410518
If that truly is you whitebox, I wish you the best of luck.
>>4410955
Coming together so beautifully . Only critique Id be able to give would be to see the bottom part of the right strap push over enough to follow the line of the chest, if only to give it a little more volume.

>>4410955
Bretty good my man. My only issue is his far shoulder. It's too far in front of him / too long. It seems like it's faithful to the statue but that's only because his turtleneck is so thick. If you were to draw through it, you'd see it. His neck is actually farther back than that of the statue's, so when you figure out the angle between, say, the nose and the shoulder, you can get it correct but it would be incorrect compared to the placement of the neck.

Sorry if I can't explain further. I'm a filthy /beg/.

>>4410975
>>4411007
Hey thanks for the crit! The pose is actually referenced from a different picture of the statue, and this pic I'm referencing only the light source, but the pics are p similar so. I'm sure there are wonky stuff I haven't noticed yet.

>>4411007
>His neck is actually farther back than that of the statue's
by reference to what? In what way is it farther back
>so when you figure out the angle between, say, the nose and the shoulder, you can get it correct
Angle to what? What angle? What do you mean you can get it correct? Get what correct?
>but it would be incorrect compared to the placement of the neck.
compared to what about the neck? About it being "farther back"? How can you be this terrible at explaining things? This is just so fucking confusing, mate. You say you're a beginner? Maybe you should stick to studying your fundamentals before you lecture other artists about how to draw.

>>4411007
>>4411050
Gonna try to translate the critique:
>My only issue is his right shoulder. It looks too long from his torso. It(I have no clue what he's referring to here, could be the shoulder or just the body/pose in general) seems faithful to the reference image, but that's only because his turtleneck is so thick (this makes absolutely no sense, could be referring to the fact that the turtleneck being thick means that it's masking the anatomy of that part of the body, but even if it did hide anything the only thing it would hide is just the neck, but you'd still be able to gauge the position of the neck to the torso. Or perhaps he meant that the drawing only looks faithful to the source because the turtleneck is making it look correct by hiding flaws? If that's the case that is also just as retarded due to the reason I explained earlier). If you were to draw the neck without the turtleneck, you would see it(see what?). His neck is actually farther back than that of the statue's (I think he is making a surface-level observation here while ignoring the fact that the drawing based off the reference image is so stylized that this shouldn't even matter in the slightest, like the same basic monkey-brained observation like how some people on twitter would argue about skin color by color-picking a dark pixel and then proclaiming that someone whitewashed a character), so when you figure out the angle between, say the nose and the shoulder (same surface-level observation that contributes nothing to the critique overall) you can get it correct, but it would be incorrect compared to the placement of the neck (at this point he has completely forgotten all about the shoulder being too long, and has now moved on to neck placements for whatever reason).
This is my attempt at trying to decipher the mind of a /beg/ artist

Working on this dude.

>>4410740
Do you draw on an ipad?

>>4411071
jack is that you?

>>4411127
Yeah, procreate and csp

Done i guess cuz I'm tired of working on it.

>>4411172
Post on reddit and get free useless karma with the ff remake

>>4410518
>haven't posted a finished animation a single time

>>4410955
something looks a bit odd to me about his right shoulder, the rest of it looks good though

Can you guys give me some honest opinion on these? I know these are not very /ic/-ish.

3/2

>>4411342
3/3

>>4410031
>>4410055
some elements are not coming together for me.
>Do you have a Twitter?
i didnt use to but i thought why not make one

https://twitter.com/cyferx1

>>4410093
it is what you want it to be :')

>>4411050
1. I'm not fucking lecturing anyone.
2. Before acting high and mighty, kindly improve your reading comprehension.
3. I see no problem with my advice. The distance between the shoulder and the neck is too long. Not sure if you're also >>4411067 because the dismissive tone is similar, but goddamn you missed the point.
4. I never said anything about the neck being "wrong". What I said was, if you're trying to figure out the position of the shoulder in relation to the chin from the reference but you've also stylized the position of the neck, then you need to take that into account.

Goddamn low IQ fucking crabs.

>>4410727
Thank you! I actually have been working on a game which will have 8 directional full bodies and walk cycles, so Im on it! Thank you so much though

>>4410460
>>4410463

motherfucker pls drop ur blog

>>4411792
Read the thread nigga.

>>4411675
incredible what making someone butthurt does to their ability to properly explain things
>The distance between the shoulder and the neck is too long.
>if you're trying to figure out the position of the shoulder in relation to the chin from the reference but you've also stylized the position of the neck, then you need to take that into account.
literally all you had to say

>>4410458
the vag is a little too lewd for me, trying to keep my twitter SFW

>>4410448
I'll try it again later

I wonder if my art is ugly often, especially now that im doing it in 3d

>>4412166
>3d
Yikes
Seriously though, it looks pretty fucking sick. But if you are aiming for the gray fabric to be skintight, I would personally like to see more definition on the body. More angular.

>>4400842
go go go >>4412277