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What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
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FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

>> No.4386964
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some studies from today, bottom right is from The Descent :D

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>> No.4386981

>>4386964
good

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>> No.4386990
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>>4386987

>> No.4386995

>>4386987
>>4386990
You're starting to get good, nice

>> No.4386999

>>4386990
you wouldn't DOWNLOAD a mask

>> No.4387000

>>4386987
>>4386990
berry nice

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>> No.4387011
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>> No.4387155

>>4387011
It would be cute if her body was holding a hand mirror so her head could see herself applying her makeup

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>>4386964
I finally feel like I'm learning :)
>>4386981
lol that made me feel so validated thank you

>> No.4387263
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>>4386741
adding just a little bit of fills helped it feel a lot better, thanks

>> No.4387273

>>4387261
where did you find these models?

>> No.4387277

>>4387261
art decoish vibes. i like

>> No.4387278

>>4387273
One guy I just found by googling "life drawing model" and the other is the OP image from a thread on here :]

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came back from a trip and i tried to look back at this
i completly modified the face and hair just to see how it works
i was also thinking of combining this face with the older haircut just to see how it would look

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>>4386908
thanks, man
love the concept of your pic

>> No.4387328

>>4387005
How do I get good at drawing cartoony animals that still look appealing and expressive?

>> No.4387372

>>4387292
im guess you draw inspiration from Ghost in the Shell and Blade Runner

>> No.4387387
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4387387

Wasn't going to draw anything today, but later figured I'd get some progress in.

>> No.4387442
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Its done I hope.

>> No.4387444
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>>4387442
heres the TL;DR version

>> No.4387448

>>4387444
HOTE

>> No.4387452
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>>4387328
not the guy you were replying to but my go to method for learning how to draw in a certain style is to do some research and create a mood board in paint of the elements i like, and then analyse them once theyre all together in one place. then i try to extract what i like from them, what makes them all special to me or whatever and at first just try to copy/trace it. then i try to draw it without looking, and then finally once i understand how it works i try to use it in my own drawings. hope that helped, even though its kinda a basic bitch explanation

>> No.4387453

>>4387442
>>4387444
I liked it more when I thought it was Whitemane

>> No.4387468
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4387468

>>4386962
Making something. Think it might make for a nice sticker.

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>>4387261
>>4387277
Thank u :D

>> No.4387479

>>4387261
>>4387473
What books did you read to be able to do stuff like this? Your lines are so clean and your shading is very neat, good work anon

>> No.4387517

>>4387453
Yeah sometimes I think I should do fan art to get more followers but then I just know people will go "uuugh you're not going to KEEP drawing character X from my favourite series?? Well fuck your oc content"

>> No.4387521
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>>4387328
A lot of what >>4387452 said, but I recommend doing lots of studies of the actual animal, trying to distill the most important forms. Finding other artists that do things a way you like is really helpful, but try to learn from a variety, even if you copy them, it will be informed by your own tastes and as you grow more confident your style will become its own

>> No.4387526

>>4387521
This, but it seems like you're also into volume and perspective, which elevates these designs to a whole lot more

>> No.4387528

>>4387468
Shoes are just lazy, it's cool and all, but don't be lazy. Also that jacked doesn't have enough form

>> No.4387538

>>4387526
Shapes and volumes are the key to making everything look better, seriously. Make it look 3D enough and no matter what you draw it will come out looking good. From there all you have to do his hone your accuracy so that those forms better match what you have in your head. Kokimantarou is a great example of this

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>> No.4387549

>>4387372
pretty spot on haha

>> No.4387559
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>>4387468
Flatting.
>>4387528
Dang, that bad, huh? I'll see what I can do about them before I get too far into coloring.

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>> No.4387614
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how do I add more emotions to my pieces? How do I do that without faces?

>> No.4387623

>>4387602
lol

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>>4387473
sorry for spamming ;_;

>> No.4387631

>>4387602
please stop. this looks so bad

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>>4387602
In regards to your rendering, I feel you should push for greater value contrast. Using a warmer color palette could also create more erotic appeal. Here is a quick paintover to show what I mean

>> No.4387637

>>4387634
Thanks i shouldnt have used a white bg
Its too late in the night..
Tomorrow I will paint more torsoes

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h

>> No.4387705

>>4386990
Soul

>> No.4387714

>>4387602
cease

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>>4387559
Continued.

>> No.4387828
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>>4386990

>> No.4387830

>>4387828
I love your work but I hate this drawing with my soul

>> No.4387835
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>> No.4387836

>>4387828
KEK

>> No.4387837

>>4387634
>>4387602
please for the love of god dont have him switch his style for this.
id much prefer the unsaturated color palette

>> No.4387842

>>4387634
Your shit looks worse.

>> No.4387843

>>4387828
Kind of uncharacteristic. Is this a fetish of yours?

>> No.4387845

>>4387843
i just thought it was funny

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>> No.4387857
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4387857

Hey more head tilts.

>> No.4387878

>>4387828
god i wish that were me

>> No.4387881

>>4387857
I want to be friends with mike

>> No.4387942
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4387942

Had to look at a reference ‘‘tis guy looked too much like a bear

>> No.4387953

>>4387942
The artstyle looks homophobic.
No joke.

>> No.4387956

>>4387828
goddamnit yumanikki-anon don't go to the dark side

>> No.4387957

>>4387953
W-what does that even mean? This as gay as it gets

>> No.4387970

>>4387614
Color choices and body language/pose, also, generally composition helps with that.

>> No.4387997
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4387997

I like big hair

>> No.4388006

>>4387997
awesome! super cute and sexy!

>> No.4388009

>>4387261
Wow you actually drew my pic from the thread in which I was looking for a pose

>> No.4388012

>>4387261
This one basically >>4383851

>> No.4388019

>>4387997
I like big butts and I cannot lie

>> No.4388056

>>4387953
Agreed, be a little more sensitive OP

>> No.4388057

>>4387845
haha

>> No.4388079

>>4388057
imagine that you get bimbofied by a magical mask, just as joke of course haha.

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>>4387953
>>4388056
Here now he has a best friend/coach/father figure for him to secretly crush on

>> No.4388085

>>4388080
where did you learn volume in drawing, papi?

>> No.4388090

>>4388085
kjg, koki and jjfrenchie primarily

>> No.4388101

>>4388090
>jjfrenchie
oh, it shows

>> No.4388108

>>4388080
I love your shit fisher. Do you manage to make a living with your art? Because if not you definitely could, it's just that you never seem to finish a thing

>> No.4388120

>>4388108
thanks, i tried commissions briefly, it was fun and could probably be sustainable but i don't think freelance is for me. Without somewhere to physically go to work i start acting really unhealthy and don't get anything done. Aside from that i haven't made any money off of it, although now that i deleted all my nsfw stuff i could probably focus on making a portfolio and see if i can get into some studio

>> No.4388147

>>4388120
People rarely care so long as you keep it separate and don't draw something straight up illegal, Nesskain works on Overwatch and draws gay porn in his spare time and everyone just rolls with it.

Comic, animation or char design could be good.
Did you finish that comic about an old fisherman and the girl? If you do I'll send you $5 to kickstart your art career

>> No.4388152

>>4388147
lol, i haven't finished it but i may as well take you up on that. As for the porn I haven't broken any laws but i've put some pretty extreme stuff out there

>> No.4388246

>>4388080
When shoulder moves what, Fisher? Please tell me your anatomy secrets.

>> No.4388253

>>4388246
not fisher, but looks like "when shoulder moves forward"

>> No.4388284

>>4387263
this is very good.

>>4387559
>>4387817
looks cool. I don't like the radial gradient at the bulb head, I prefer a more organic, textured feel but it looks really fun and good.

>> No.4388294

>>4387957
Just another retard trying to push his forced unfunny meme

>> No.4388331
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I don't think I'll do more than these semi-flat colors.
>>4387602
Lubię twoje rysunki, trzymaj tak dalej

>> No.4388337

>>4387468
do you have a blog?

>> No.4388338
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not quite where i wanted to have it, but still pretty happy with how it turned out

>>4388331
god i wish i had ifrit, but at least i pulled eyja

>> No.4388348

>>4388338
I would change his left hand position/how he holds the staff. It looks a little unnatural and would be better if we could see him grab it in a different way. Otherwise I really like this, I hope you make a twitter or blog.

>> No.4388377

>>4387625
Imagination is better. You've made it.

>> No.4388381
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4388381

Even more head tilts

>> No.4388405

>>4388246
>>4388253
When the shoulder moves forward, the muscles labeled 1 and two both flex, and span the open gap between your shoulder and inner clavicle and sternum, making a distinct muscle bulge that looks great but seemingly comes out of nowhere

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4388411

oh goodie i was thinking of making a thread about this.

a fun excercise i like to do is do first a very detailed face and then try to break it down into its most key components while still having it be recognizably the same person

>> No.4388415

>>4388381
Literally my sister

>> No.4388426

>>4388337
I’m @aesderelict on Twitter.
aesthetic-derelict on tumblr/newgrounds.

>> No.4388444
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Update.

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>>4388338
the weight center was a little bit weird so i sort of tried to fix it i guess

>> No.4388461

>>4388348
yeah, i noticed the staff being all sorts of fucked up way too late, thought about redoing the piece from sketch up

>>4388445
damn that does work a lot better, i'll try to adress this when i'm redoing this
thank you very much, anon

>> No.4388466

>>4388461
no worries!
i really like your style! when you have time please do post your twitter or blog. I would love to follow it

>> No.4388478

>>4388411
cool
>>4388381
kinda looks like my sister
>>4388080
great as always
>>4387625
damn
>>4387602
ASUKAPOSTER!
>>4386964
good textures

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>>4387011

>> No.4388560

>>4388556
cute!

but shes fat

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>>4388478
>kinda looks like my sister

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>>4388331
>>4388338
>mfw dupe ifrit when i just want the sheep

>> No.4388597
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Mindless doodle.

>> No.4388714

>>4387857
>>4388381
keep it up. This feels like a good mix of the flat 90s-2000s toon look and the 3-dimensional eastern artstyle

>> No.4388727

>>4388597
It shows.

>> No.4388740
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How to draw Shibuya Rin??

>> No.4388751

>>4387857
where can I see more of your art?

>> No.4388792

>>4387828
love this

>> No.4388809
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4388809

>>4387540

>> No.4388857

>>4387830
>>4387878
>>4387956
>>4388057
>>4388079
>>4388792
thanks frends, this is very encouraging. expect more bimbofication.

>> No.4388977

>>4386964
Carrie? Post ref.

>> No.4388982

>>4387828
Sigourney has corrupted you. Turned you into a tranny too.

>> No.4388993

>>4387997
Your best piece of work

>> No.4388995

>>4388597
Discount Typo

>> No.4389023 [DELETED] 

i did this,
Is her face too smug?

>> No.4389025

>>4389023
lil bit

>> No.4389027
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I did this,
Is her face too smug??

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4389045

>>4387479
Not gonna lie anon, I haven't read any books yet because I've only recently acknowledged just how much I have to study. But thank you! >>4388009
I did :'] I hope that doesn't sit with you wrong
>>4388377
Ohh, that's nice to hear :D have to practice many more angles now
>>4388478
Thanks anon
>>4388977
Nope, the Descent. I cheated by using colour picker but next time I'll avoid it

>> No.4389046
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4389046

Hello, I still have no idea if I'm allowed to leave /beg/
Anything I should improve before posting it on my pixiv?

>> No.4389052

>>4389027
Blog?

>> No.4389068

>>4386990
do you have somewhere i could follow you? because wow

>> No.4389077

>>4388556
Is this real? I want to read this

>> No.4389082

>>4389068
thx u glad u like it...
@pantsu_ripper on twitter

>> No.4389092

>>4387005
This image carries a lot of weight. also kind of reminds me of "gleipnir" if you've ever heard of that. Really like this one

>> No.4389095

>>4389027
2nd for blog

>> No.4389101

>>4389027
there is no such thing as too smug

super cute and sexy frend

>> No.4389102

>>4388338
Looks retarded

>> No.4389109

>>4389052
>>4389095
>>4389101
thx for response
im at https://twitter.com/Stuffted1

>> No.4389163

>>4388857
Oh well, another one falls.

>> No.4389169

>>4389046
Cute, you're good to go

>> No.4389171

>>4388740
ask sodaman

>> No.4389174
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4389174

drew this

>> No.4389179
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>> No.4389180

>>4389174

Go to the porn thread you retarded faggot. That shit is /beg/ tier too.

>> No.4389186

>>4388556
Wait, she can't see her self. She's not even looking in a mirror.

>> No.4389196

>>4389180
Nudity =/= Porn
Stupid child.

>> No.4389199

>>4389196
If she is spreading her vag and ass for the viewer then its porn.

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>>4389179
i tried fixing her eyes because after i uploaded it here i was so annoyed lool

>> No.4389216

>>4389196
Holy fucking shit you’re retarded. I kinda should’ve expected that from cumbrains.

>> No.4389224

>>4389196
>”This is not porn”
>showing vag in front for sexual situation
>Brain rot.jpeg
Ok retard.

>> No.4389251

>>4389196
>>Nudity =/= Porn
Exactly. And yet you still posted porn.

>> No.4389284
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4389284

Avoiding anything even remotely productive

>> No.4389344

>>4389174
it doesn't give me a boner so I don't think it's porn

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>> No.4389365
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4389365

I'm new to watercolor

>> No.4389373

>>4389284
Cool, love to see new stuff from you.

>> No.4389377

>>4389365
Very charming, I like it

>> No.4389408
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4389408

Update

>> No.4389476

>>4389046
I was just searching for your stuff the other day. Still cramming through old threads and trying to find it. I don't have a pixiv account so I can't see NSFW stuff, is it on there? And man, how have you been?

>> No.4389483

>>4389284
>Avoiding anything even remotely productive
You say that, but drawing at all is more than most do. Also, those are some lovely tiddies. Did you design that outfit for Gwen or is it an official one? The hood kinda reminds me of Filia and Samson (Skullgirls).

>> No.4389503
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4389503

Wip
Starting to feel like I bit off more than I have to chew, with how much I have left to work on

>> No.4389521

>>4389503
That's really cool. Blog?

>> No.4389524
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4389524

Fuck, don't know why my construction for the head tilts suddenly fell apart doin this character.

>> No.4389534
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4389562

>>4389203

>> No.4389566

>>4389524
Hey, at least you get the general gist of it. I can't decipher Loomis for the life of me.

>> No.4389592
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>> No.4389618

>>4389524
i'm saving this as a reference for good gestures k thanks

>> No.4389621

>>4389503
beautiful!

>> No.4389628

>>4389524
your action poses lack energy

>> No.4389644

>>4389179
>>4389203
I superimposed both images over each other and literally nothing changed, you didn't change anything.

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>>4389687

>> No.4389695

>>4388995
Hey now. I know you’re trying to insult me but that’s more of an insult to Typo if anything. Love their art but my garbage doesn’t resemble theirs in the slightest.

>> No.4389707

>>4388338
what kind of expression is this supposed to convey? everything here is so awkward from the chibi-but-not-proportions to the pose, costume, everything minus the coloring

>> No.4389738
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4389738

>>4389373
i can’t tell if that means you want me to draw a new / different topic, but I’m riding a gwenom wave so we’ll just see how long it lasts

>>4389483
I was having fun with the original outfit (pic related). I wanted a more crazy hoodie, fishnets, and sneakers. I might fiddle some more tomorrow.

>> No.4389769
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4389769

the hurting

>> No.4389789

>>4388120
Do you have a blog?

>> No.4389794
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4389794

>>4388857
another one falls to the power of coom

>> No.4389795

>>4389359
another ballmaster fan!
that's a very THICC

>> No.4389832
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4389832

Scissors are fucking hard

>> No.4389836

>>4389521
>>4389621
Thanks anons. I post my work here:
https://twitter.com/NessieFynn

>> No.4389847

>>4388597
>just a sketch :)
Shut the fuck up

>> No.4389862

>>4388597
>>4389847
kek

>> No.4389864

>>4389847
Makes you wonder just how much it helps to say it

>> No.4389895

>>4389832
>>4388080
>>4387942
>>4387005
Love your stuff do you upload it somewhere besides here?

>> No.4389930
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4389930

Idk doodling and trying to be more dynamic with angles. Advice/crit would be appreciated

>> No.4389936
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4389936

>>4389284
Can’t decide if I want to make a Gwen or gwenom

Any feedback before ink?

>> No.4389939

>>4389936
maybe some more contrast and hard lighting mixed in with your colors to make it more dynamic. Looking good so far, your colors are cool and I love your gesture work

>> No.4389950

>>4389707
not him but that is a lalafell from ffxiv and the clothes and proportions are spot on, I assume he is casting stone skill as a whm

>> No.4389958
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4389958

>>4386962
Hey guys, I'm back with more Sonichu shit.

>> No.4389983

>>4389707
i didn't think too much about the expression i suppose, just thought i'd do some weird mix between speaking and shouting lol
otherwise this >>4389950

>> No.4389984
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4389984

Sámi girls

>> No.4389986

>>4389958
you should spend more time learning how to draw and less time trolling a mentally ill autistic man

>> No.4389989

>>4389077
Yes, soon
>>4389186
I thought that too, but figured it wasn't a big deal. Lots of fiction with dullahans can act with autonomy but you are right it does look kind of weird

>> No.4389990

>>4389986
How am I trolling?

>> No.4389996

>>4389990
>redrawing oc garbage from a mentally ill man instead of making your own shit
honestly what is your goal? your art is not good enough to make the original "better" in any way. try to draw your own shit

>> No.4389999

>>4389990
the fact of the matter is you don't know how to draw and le epic owning XD chris-chan by redrawing his OC isn't going to teach you how to draw.

>> No.4390011
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4390011

>>4389996
Well, I'm not sure if this is going to make it any better but I actually like Sonichu. It kind of mildly reminds me of the Paper Mario games in terms of how whimsical it feels but there was always some things that I felt were holding it back and I couldn't let go of it. So for a while now I've been writing a borderline manifesto about making it what I always wanted it to be.

Here's the audio so, just so you know I'm not lying and I do make fun of him a fair amount but also make fun of myself, the industry I'm hoping to get into etc
https://vocaroo.com/c8YS1LSR3qM

>> No.4390021

>>4390011
Go to bed zoom-zoom, it's a school night.

>> No.4390023

>>4390011
your art could work for a webcomic but I dont think what you are doing is not a waste of time....

>> No.4390026

>>4390021
Fuck you, I'm gonna be a swan one day

>> No.4390035
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4390035

still not good enough a;lsdjf;lasdjf

>> No.4390048

>>4389795
Hell yeah!
I'm watching the new episodes tonight

>> No.4390050

>>4389359
This show was so fucking good, we're not going to get another season and I'm worried at this point they aren't even going to release an OST

>> No.4390054

>>4390050
>>4390048
Wait new episodes?

>> No.4390056

>>4390050
>>4390054
season 2 literally JUST premiered yesterday

>> No.4390059

>>4390011
This niggas more autistic than Chris chan himself

>> No.4390060

>>4390056
DREAMS DO COME TRUE

>> No.4390065

>>4389628
What could I do to add more energy to em?

>> No.4390072

What show are you all talking about?

>> No.4390075

>>4390072
Ballmastrz9009 you idiot, have you been living under a rock?

>> No.4390076
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4390076

>>4390072
Ballmastrz

>> No.4390078
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4390078

>>4390076
From the same people who made Superjail

>> No.4390084

>>4390075
Imagine getting angry someone doesn't watch a cartoon show kek

>> No.4390089

>>4390084
Aren't you too old to fall for bait?

>> No.4390090

>>4390089
>joke's on you I was only pretending to be retarded

>> No.4390097
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4390097

>>4390090
well it's not me is the thing

>> No.4390117 [DELETED] 
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4390117

I know this looks really off but I can't put my finger on where/why. Help
I shortened the torso on the right but I don't know if it really helped

>> No.4390120

>>4390117
It's a child you sick pedo

>> No.4390123

>>4390117
You got a good start, but it seems like you were drawing her from two separate positions and composited them together. Try to make the middle of it when you're making it

>> No.4390125

>>4390120
It's not real you schizo

>> No.4390129

>>4390120
fuck off
>>4390117
the problem is you're shying away from your weak points by leaving the areas you're struggling with loose and ambiguous. most obbiously the collar bones, wrist and elbow.
Try refining it more

>> No.4390142

>>4387828
any blog?

>> No.4390143

>>4390117
All of you pedos are repressed gays. You might as well draw a guy.

>> No.4390145

>>4387614
>>4389365
what are ur blogs?

>> No.4390147
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>> No.4390149

>>4390117
MOOOOODS!

>> No.4390165

>>4390143
>Small
>Has stereo typically feminine facial features
>Evokes the protective instinct
Have you never seen a woman and do you not understand what sexual dimorphism is?
Feminine beauty is generally very stereotypically associated with youth and in the case of this drawing, it's just taking it to the extreme.

Pedophilia is bad but this close to willful ignorance of what people find attractive in women makes me think you might be gay.

>> No.4390192
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>> No.4390193

>>4390117
based mods I love you

>> No.4390198

>>4390142
https://www.twitter.com/pantsu_ripper

>> No.4390213

>>4390120
>>4390149
>>4390193
Cringe.

>> No.4390217

>>4389832
ouchies

>> No.4390221
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4390221

>>4389179
>>4389203
>>4389562
I had to.

>> No.4390234

>>4390213
Seething

>> No.4390287

>no one has called my drawing shitty yet
Finally

>> No.4390343

>>4390287
which one is it, I can do it for yo.

>> No.4390367

>>4390192
I'm trying to find out which construct this stems from. Loomis? Hampton? ...

>> No.4390410

>>4390367
Imagination

>> No.4390412

>>4390287
I can change that depending on how it looks.

>> No.4390477

>>4387186
blog?

>> No.4390490
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>> No.4390495

>>4390490
Why do you do the red ears and noses? They would lot better if you made them a lot more subtle.

>> No.4390508

>>4390213
This is why only a handful of /ic/ posts their art, your lines may offend someone and get you a 3 day vacation on all boards.

>> No.4390512

>>4390508
would you rather have happypussy69 drop by here everyday

>> No.4390515

>>4390512
Nsfw should stay in the nsfw thread but it doesn't matter because the same thing happens there.

>> No.4390527

>>4390512
I’m glad he left, he will definitely get written into the history books as one of the more annoying posters

In increasing order of offense
>firez
>illustrat
>San Jose doll fag
>nosebro
>habbyboi
>nazi poster
>here’s what you do fag

>> No.4390529

>>4390527
>giving a fuck and remembering names
rent free

>> No.4390532

>>4390508
>Cope

>> No.4390542

>>4389562
thats not the issue tho i meant right eye, it looks slightly off, left one is fine.
Imo she looks cute in my vers

>> No.4390611

>>4389895
Thanks, I put the cleaner stuff up on @ohheythatfisher on twitter. Some anon here apparently has an archive of the other stuff but I don’t know how you’d go about finding it

>>4390217
He had it coming

>> No.4390722
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4390722

Imagine praising moderation staff
You people are like a slave race
You embrace being opressed
I hope whatever was deleted wasn't lolichaddery...

>> No.4390727

>>4390722
it was a cute drawin

>> No.4390732
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4390732

>>4390727
Oh...
Now i see...
He who does it for free hates cuteness
I dont approve

>> No.4390817

>>4389476
Yup. One anon mentioned I should create a account, so I did it. Not drawing much lately, kinda down with how slowly I'm progressing.

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4390910

Trash that kills
Would you give it to me?

>> No.4390974
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4390974

trying to figure out this character's general form and whatnot

>> No.4390976
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>>4390011
The final one is done

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4391011

drew a sleeping girl

>> No.4391035

>>4390976
I like this a lot

>> No.4391056
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copic markers

>> No.4391060
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>>4390490

>>4390495
its a habit im finding hard to break desu

>> No.4391066
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orb hands

>> No.4391134

>>4391066
Super cute

>> No.4391189

>>4391066
hands are way too big but cute

>> No.4391193
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4391193

From a drawpile sesh :]

>> No.4391200

>>4391193
BLOG

>> No.4391201

>>4391189
No anon that makes it more cute

>> No.4391207

>>4391189
I think that is the point

>> No.4391214

>>4390611
>>4389895
heres his nsfw blog, should be most of everything before the nuke
https://mega.nz/#F!njJxAYyC!ISb8r8enQofDUJB5zKyDQA

>> No.4391253

>>4389503
I really like the style, cool shapes and colors.
His hips feel too high, theres something off looking

>> No.4391256
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4391256

Going to color a new draw before finishing >>4389936

Coloring is so stressful

>> No.4391260

>>4391193
beholdnika on instagram :>

>> No.4391261

I assumed you were criticizing me so I tore up the drawing when I got home

>> No.4391269
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4391269

>>4389179

>> No.4391323
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4391323

I wanted to practice a western style but couldn't figure out if this looked good

>> No.4391328
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4391328

>>4391256
Meh - next

>> No.4391331

>>4391328
This style is so fucking boring.

>> No.4391337

>>4391261
you need therapy

>> No.4391341

>>4390065
push your poses. Also, the direction and arc the punch is being made in correlation to the direction the other guy was being knocked back by just doesn't make any sense and fails to convince me that it was anything but a sissy-tickle flower-power punch. Even just a cursory study-up of boxing or mma and you'll know that there wouldn't be any power behind a punch like that when most of the weight of the punch is being transferred to the shoulders while the arms look like it's just noodling about. In that particular pose, the full weight of the punch wouldn't happen until after he keeps following through the arc of the swing and by then he will quite literally be facing the opposite direction of his opponent.

It's not that your poses are stiff, they just don't make any damn sense. I think you'll have a better grasp of conveying energy if you understand better how punches work.

>> No.4391344

>>4390287
You know how they say a mediocre movie is worse than an awful one?

>> No.4391346

>>4391331
that's just like.... your opinion, man

>> No.4391347

>>4391323
How can white women even compete

>> No.4391352

>>4391256
>>4391328
Did you color over the lineart? If so, why do the fishnets still look so good?
Also
>405x640
>399x640
bigger versions available?

>> No.4391364

>>4391323
sometimes I wonder if people type this shit out on purpose to illicit some sort of response. She literally looks like a street hooker.

>> No.4391378

>>4391352
>>4391346
nice samefag tablefaggot

>> No.4391380

>>4391214
I understand why he purged this

>> No.4391382
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>>4391378

>> No.4391394
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>>4390065
Nta but I think the main thing your poses are lacking is realism. You have strong lines of action, but since they do not correspond to how figures move in reality, they look awkward and fake. There is no shame in using photo reference to give your art extra believability, compare pic related to your top right sketch and see how the lines of action are completely different. Even trying to act out poses yourself can help you better understand how they will work.

>> No.4391483
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>> No.4391488

>>4391214
bless you

>> No.4391497

>>4391483
Any tips on for someone starting out? Literature?

>> No.4391499
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4391499

>>4391341
>>4391394
I see what you mean. I'll make a note to do some MMA studies as soon as I can. How do you guys translate realism and push it even further? There's an artist I really like, name's Willard Mullin. I'd love to have this kinda raw power and energy in my work.

>> No.4391553

>>4391499
Think like a used-car salesman and try your best to sell your scene to the audience. You want to convince your viewers of something whether it be how powerful an impact was or what have you. That's why the most popular moments to depict action that many artists default to is the lead-up and follow-through (when someone is winding up to punch something and the moment after something has been punched): both of them engages the audience to think with their imagination as to the power of an action. When you draw the exact frame a fist makes contact with a face there's less action because the audience is only aware that something has been punched, but cannot yet understand how powerful it was. This is just a general explanation of what is generally done, though. Plenty of other artists have depicted the moment of impact of a punch to sell action to the viewer.
Take a look at that picture you posted, that is an example of a follow-through frame, because the punch has already happened and you're depicting the action of the punch following through the arc.

>> No.4391555

>>4391483
That looks pretty good as a sketch.Good luck on the process.I would love to see the finished work.

>> No.4391559
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4391559

>>4391499
Also, I did a quick glance at Willard Mullin's work, and it seems more as though he's more interested in "depicting a moment", rather than trying to "capture" a "scene". Like in this picture here none of the poses really try to sell the idea of punches or any sort of action other than telling us they're punching and dancing around and the way the characters are drawn are all there to further the idea they are slipping around in the boxing ring. He probably looked at a boxing match and thought to himself, "wow, they're dancing around in there" and wanted to draw something to depict that. Another artist might look at the same scene and go "daaaamn, that punch was raw" and try to draw a scene to depict how powerful that punch was. It's all about having the idea in your head, having something that you focused on, and trying to best depict that in your work.

>> No.4391612

>>4391553
Thanks for breakin it down, man, I appreciate it.

>>4391559
That's a good way of putting it. Plenty of comics have had some pretty intense fight scenes depicted, but if I do a comic I want it to be funny. Depicting the fight through the look glass of each character involved would make it more personal, and keep the audience focused on what the characters are thinking. And if that's incongruous with the intensity of the fight itself, or at least what we think of when that word comes to mind, that could be some real comedy gold there. In the last couple years I've come to believe that the characters themselves are the story, since it's not like you're gonna wow anybody with a story that's never been done before. It's how you interpret it through the characters that makes it so they can do anything and still keep your interest, even if it's just them eatin a sandwich.

>> No.4391615
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4391615

>>4391328
threw a lazy BG behind it and made some tweaks. Might try it again on some other drawings

>>4391331
Sup boredanon - i wish i could help you save your precious you’s

>>4391352
I took a photo of the inks before I colored the markers. Markers are like a trad multiply layer - attached a bigger export

>>4391378
I’m insulted that you think so low of me

>> No.4391620
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4391620

Can’t draw the short ones head to save my life

>> No.4391622
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4391622

lines before color. I always fuck up buildings by inking them stupid unrealistic colors so hopefully that doesn't happen

>>4391035
thanks anon, I appreciate it

>> No.4391652

>>4391615
>attached a bigger export
Thanks

>> No.4391665

>>4391214
Very Cool thanks ;0

>> No.4391831
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4391831

>> No.4391953

>>4391831
uguu

>> No.4392045

>>4389377
Thank you sir

>>4390145
I have an Instagram @mpitchkites. Do you have any art to post, anon?

>> No.4392307
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4392307

>>4386962
Gonna post some traditional stuff

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4392310

>>4392307
another one

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4392328

>>4392310
desu I need to go back to this style. It got me my own private exhibition and made a bit of mone. Branching out into digital painting made me lose track of what I really wanna do.

>> No.4392334
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4392334

>>4392328
Maybe I'm gettin a bit back on track though with what I'm working on now though.

>> No.4392416

>>4392334
Are u that anon working on the huge ink for like the past month?

Just finish it man

>> No.4392529

>>4392334
It's been like a month and this nigga still going with the same piece lol
Sunk cost fallacy

>> No.4392556

>>4392416
>>4392529
I work 50 a week and go to school full time, hard to make the time desu

>> No.4392567

>>4386990
Handle? IG?

>> No.4392591
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>>4391615
wrapping up the gwens - i think this will be my last one for a while. Going to print and ink - see you on the other side

>> No.4392680

>>4392591
oh this is a really nice pose and concept, what a treat to see

>> No.4392681

>>4392567
pantsu_ripper on twitter frend

>> No.4392719

New bread kids - come get some while it’s hot
>>4392718
>>4392718
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>> No.4392780

>>4392591
Surely your a pro?
Are you making money off these drawings?
If not you are wasting your time.

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shapes are a lawt of fun!

>> No.4393719

>>4391066
blog?

>> No.4393948

>>4391620
Taller cat's whole lower torso definitely needs work. The thigh/pelvis connection looks ghastly even if she's really skinny and the distance between her belly button and her privates is extremely short. Shorter one's shoulders and perspective of the arm don't go together but I sadly can't redline now. Those caught the most attention

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>> No.4394640

>>4392334
are you trying to flatten the images/shapes with crosshatch?

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