/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4380785
>new thread already
Wtf? Why did the previous one got deleted?

>>4380834
People shit posting on this board bumping actual threads out of existence.

>>4380834
Mad jannies

>>4380834
Mods are fucking retards and let shitposting run rampant while deleting actual draw threads

>>4380785
>Dimension W porn

That's random...

>>4380943
Holy fuck are you gonna shill yourself in every thread or what

>>4380959
I'm not shilling. 4chan is not a place to shill. I'm seeking feedback, I'm just don't make unwatermarked versions, sorry they bother you so much.

>>4380785
I enjoy to draw fat girls

>>4381014
Do you have a fat gf like that irl?

>>4381014
jesus fucking christ, there's already so many fucking land whales irl, you are adding into it.

>>4381022
Nope I just use references o draw models on Twitter @lucho_redman

>>4381027
Thanks anon

>>4380959
The absolute state of NGMIers.

>>4381022
It's just a very dumb way to hide anatomy mistakes.

Why would the jannies suddenly take interest in these threads? we’ve had them forever. A lot of the best artists here mostly draw porn as well, are we going to run them out like we’ve managed to with every other decent artist who came here?

>>4381082
Probably some rogue autistic janitor going on a anti-porn crusade.
If these threads start getting pruned then porn will just start getting posted in all the other threads

>>4381082
There's nothing really stopping anyone from posting porn every where except arbitrarily rules made up by users on /ic/.
I can post pornos in /alt/ or /beg/ all I want and no one can really stop me or say im breaking any actual website rules.

This is a RED BOARD after all, which alot of people don't seem to realize.

>>4381093
but anon think of the children

Getting ready to ink this... crits?

>>4381167
Put her tongue back in her mouth and do something creative with her expression. Ahegao burnout is real. Machamps dick seems to be in the wrong place anatomically speaking. Other than that I love it.

>>4381167
Your style looks homphobic.

>>4381167
He needs 4 dicks

>>4381167
Looks homophobic.
yikes.

Reposting this from the thread last night that got deleted I guess.

Suggestions on improving face and/or hair? Other critiques welcome too.

Why aren't you drawing NTR/cuckold porn?
You hate money?

>>4381167
It's fine. Don't listen to those guys.

>>4381185
>>4381192
what is this shit?

>>4381169
Eeeer.. I sorta like the expression, I see the dick error tho, will work on it, thanks for pointing it out!

>>4381237
Thanks!

>>4381253
It’s a reference to the last NSFW thread.

>>4381237
How do I get really good like you? Where does your drive and ideas come from?

I like monstrous girls, not explored enough I think. I like green-skins (orcs and goblins). I made an Ogre recently. Went a bit cartoony with this one.
My body type ranges from lean (w/ big boobs and thick thighs), "thicc"/voluptuous and chubby/bbw. This is basically an ogre stereotype pushed to be hot, but that is subjective as these things tends to be. I wanna try and surf the border for a niche demographic and mainstream attention.
What are your guys thoughts on this type of thing?

>>4381237
>It's fine
>Can't see the problem with the left leg, but that looks good...
>Right leg's longer than the left, but that's okay, it's supposed to look like that when it's yanked by force...
>That's how pussies look, shoved into the lower abdomen like that, in that kind of position...

You love to give out bad advice, don't you. It's like, we know you're a woman, but you have no concept of what a woman's body should look like under this kind of distress. And of course, by your account of, "Don't worry, it's fine..." logic, the body curves that naturally, when forcefully pinned down like that.

Your praise is hollow. It's no wonder you're such a joke here.

>>4381235
Your hair looks flat and lazy. The expression on her face is supposed to convey what, come get some of this? Why is that facial expression, dull?

The pose is unimaginative, and when coupled with the facial expression as a whole, reads, "Yeah, I have a pussy. So what."

Your artwork lacks femininity. There's nothing alluring about it. The hair, the face she's making, the drab pose she's presenting, are all weak in their representation of what femininity is supposed to be.

Muscular women, can in fact still be, extremely alluring, when done correctly. Your artwork is just a guy, with ugly hair, fake tits and a lighter for pussy hair.

Back to the drawing board you go, and with good reason. Either fix these things, or consider drawing men, instead.

>>4381324
I partially agree with your argument but you have basement dweller syndrome. Go outside.

>>4381313
except for the dick, very nice work. do you have a blog?

>>4381313
You're going to die a starving artist. There is no demand for this, whatsoever.

Just listen to what you're trying to sell. A sexy ogre. You might aw well slap some tits on Shrek, give him thunderthighs and a pussy, and call it a day.

Think about it. What, if anything, about your work, is sexy? It might be to you, sure. But listen to what you're trying to "surf"? No one's going to buy that sort of idea, much less pay you for commissioned work unless you pander to Dungeons and Dragons, and if that, they're willing to shell out good money, for work, they can get commissioned, at a much higher caliber level, somewhere else?

This is a reality check. If you want to go down this rabbit hole, hey, more power to you. But don't be surprised if five years down the line, you're back here trying to address the same problem. Te only difference then, as opposed to now, is that you'll dismiss someone's brutally honest thought about where you want to go with your artistic adventure, only to come up extremely short in the end.

Take it as you will.

>>4381348
Says the person who puts up, what is that, Skyrim response pictures?

It's funny how you don't talk anything about the part of the argument you agree with, and would much rather resort to, lo and behold, basement dweller syndrome responses.

You won the argument. Here's your gold star.

>>4381345
I have trouble coming up with interesting poses. Do you have any tips on improving at that? Do I just need to start with a more striking gesture or do you think I should use a more unique perspective?

I can see your point with pretty much everything you've said but I don't really know where to start on improving my stuff.

>>4381358
I don't make money doing erotica and don't plan to. I make a living of my own job :P

>>4381362
to elaborate a little more, I've had this problem for a while now where I finish my drawings and they just feel kind of boring afterwards. Even when I try to draw stuff that appeals to my fetishes (which actually is not muscle girls) I often feel like there's nothing really interesting about it, like I wouldn't even bother saving it if I saw it on twitter or something.

>>4381272
>Eeeer.. I sorta like the expression,
Nothing wrong with that at all. I'm just saying, if you're trying to be marketable, folks are burned out on the expression and looking for something else, based on what I've been seeing at least. Look into Optional Typo for some expressions, they do good work imo

>>4381362
Poses like that, can change dramatically with a tilt of the head to one side to convey her making love to the camera, the hair (once you work on it) can cover up part of the face with come-hither coyfulness when it cascades down the side of her face in such a manner, that you can't turn away from looking at her. What are the hands doing, why are they just, so boringly to the side, why cant they have a handful of fake boob in their grasp? Sure, she's althetic, good for her, but WHY is she athletic? What, if anything about that pose, conveys that part of her story? Why, as a viewer, should I invest my time, in waiting to find out more about your work?

Look at your drawing and tell me, does this make me hard. No? Then what about it, does? Do your research, look at other PRO artists and see what they do, to make their pin ups want to be craved as good pieces of cheesecake.

MAKE me want that piece of cheesecake. Do you know what I mean?

>>4381369
Then go nuts. Shrek it up to your heart's content. No one's paying your way, so, fuck it. :)

>>4381381
artist?
god I wish I could draw my wife like that

>>4381372
See >>4381401

I tried my best to not make her look fat, did I succeed

>>4381401
Okay, I'm going to adjust my strategy to focus more on thinking about a character/setting before I actually start drawing. I think I've gotten too used to just practicing gesture drawings w/out thinking about WHY a character would be making a particular pose, or what their personality is.

Appreciate the feedback.

>>4381418
Yeah, but you managed to bubble up to the surface, another problem.

You're an aspiring animator. Why in the world, would you NOT animate the facial expression, at all? That's like, a cardinal sin, isn't it? Why does she have such a static look to her face?

>>4381425
Come on man its not finished face, of course there will be different facial expression, I stated it in another thread before it got pruned for no apparent reason

>>4381422
It takes guts to post your work for critique like that, but it takes balls to handle a good critique as well, to see your mistakes for what they really are, and want to push yourself to make those changes, and or adjustments acordinlgy.

Godspeed.

>>4381429
Hey, at least you're not whining and complaining about, "muh styels". Good on you.

Yeah, she doesn't look fat, but when the ass is down on something flat, give it some plump lines near the ass crack. You can't have a perfect ass like that unless she's cradled up in the air. Sure, you're not trying to make her look fat, but consider the environment around her.

Just a thought.

>>4381440
Ass cheeks are gonna plump, tits are gonna hang, and hair is gonna...hair. Gravity is your friend, animator. Make friends with it early on in your work.

>>4381408
The artist is Optional Typo. One of my favourites.

I have tried once or twice to explore drawing porn but I get so scared someone will find it that I have to throw it away plus actually there's plenty of material out there for me already. I don't feel like its necessity to fill a hole in the market. Plus mine isn't as good as what's already out there. I mean it's that just problem solved so don't draw porn or am I missing out on something? Part of what I like I think is novelty. I rarely enjoy jerking it to the same thing twice. It almost has to be shocking. Can you really have that effect on yourself?

>>4381313
I absolutely love this. The only thing that would make it better for me is if she had a giant throbbing dick of her own.

>>4381464
You know you don't have to post everything you draw right?

>>4381475
U know I can't disagree with you, I am a futa fan. I haven't done that here tho :P

>>4381236
You don't need to draw fetishes you aren't into to make it tho. Consistency and being prolific (tl;dr hard work) are much more important. Talking from experience.

>>4381167
>>4381237
What Marmalade said. It's very appealing, which is 90% of what matters. Maybe it's a bit flat and the hands could be better, but overall it's really nice.

>>4381313
This is great, but I'm already used to your stuff being really good. Only thing that looks off imo is the head that is too small. I know what you tried to achieve, but it looks more like you pushed the head too much away from the body and the perspective being off, than achieving a big buff character. I would make the head slightly bigger.

>>4381464
man if you have to go through so many mental barriers instead of just delving into degeneracy then it's probably not for you

>>4381505
Good point, the head may feel small in relation to her own body but also the man's. Thanks for the feedback.

>>4381498
BBC Chan, is that you?

Any good recommendations on mannequins? I don't really like the digital ones like design doll. I have some figmas I've used but all the reposing is bad on their joints.

>>4381521
Yes lol.

>>4381525
head is kinda big, very cool though

>>4381502
Oh look, more bad, hollow advice. Thanks.

>>4381554
Seems like you just hate marmalade for some reason

>>4381554
Do you think coomers have standards?

>>4381555
Whats wrong with hating arrogant scumbags?

>>4381559
elaborate on both of those things

>>4381554
Are you the author of that drawing?

>>4381560
Marmalade is a shitposting, shitalking piece of shit
Hes like an aggressive version of that whitebox guy. He doesn't want or need critique, he comes here to shill and start shit

>>4381555
Yeah, I hate these D-list artists prancing around like Kathy Griffin on here, giving out bad advice to artists who have a genuine interest in drawing pornography─ scumbags like BBC giving out hollow praise for the sake of looking like, "they're one of the people, for the people".

>>4381556
Don't you?

>>4381563
This is complete BS.
Marmalade is one of the few artists that actually give good advice and even provide redlines for anons.
Why are you so obsessed with them as a person, when everything that should matter to you is what they do as an artist?
Stop being such a crab jfc.

>>4381273
Draw a lot, use references, steal like an artist, focus on creating pieces you enjoy and indulge on your own thirst:) Don’t take art too seriously, just fool around and have fun!

>>4381324
Yeah, I don’t like the left leg either, nor the right knee, I’ll try to fix it! Not sure what’s the matter with the puss, other than that the adductors look a little weird... anyhow, I have a lot to work on, and thank you for giving me constructive criticism! :)

>>4381502
Keeping things fun and appealing are what’s most important to me, it’s motivating to hear you like it so far!

>>4381381
Money and fame isn’t the reason I draw, I don’t want things too look too rapey, and to keeping it female centered is important to me, but I’ll look into Typo’s work more closely, they are one of my all time faves, thanks for the heads up!

>>4381502
Thanks! Yeah, my perspective is not the best, which is why I think it looks flat at times?

>>4381561
Author? No, I'm not the proprietor of that delicatessen piece of objective art.

>>4381569
Look at this crab lol.

>>4381574
Obsessed.

>>4381574
Good to see some artists on here take honest critique with a gung-ho attitude.

Attitudes like that, are worthy of real praise. Godspeed.

>>4381525
oh yes
very nice indeed...

>>4381574
>Thanks! Yeah, my perspective is not the best, which is why I think it looks flat at times?
Perspective is king imo. If you can internalize body proportions and perspective, then you have 80% of what you need to create anything.
Being able to make bodies intertwine and give depth to that is probably the most important thing. You have confident linework which creates most of your appeal imo. Now all that you need is more of that in the perspective department.

>>4381575
Then you don't need any advice in that regard.
Give your -better- advice instead of crabbing like an asshole.

>>4381537
my gf told me the same thing and I dismissed her saying it was "muh style"... I owe someone an apology

>>4381576
And of course, rather than offer up a good debate point on WHY this may, or may not be true, you resort to the lesser extreme of the spectrum, calling someone, a crab.

>>4381586
At least that artist took the good advice given, and avoided falling for your hollow advice.

>>4381574
>Money and fame isn’t the reason I draw
Fair enough. Have fun anon.

>>4381130
>but anon think of the children

>>4381596
You make no sense lol. You even brought me in the debate even if I actually pointed out what I thought was wrong with his drawing.
Instead of focusing on criticizing other people's art, you shit on other artists and create BS stories about them.
You are just a troll at this point.
10/10 btw, made me reply.

>>4381313
>>4381525

blog?

>>4381605
Stings doesn't it, when an artist takes REAL advice to heart from some anonymous user genuinely interested in seeing their pornographic work move on to the next level, and dismisses your empty, "Don't listen to them, it's fine" rhetoric.

Here, have some ointment for that burn. The butthurt will crust and heal over. :)

>>4381591
>Perspective is king imo
Learn to take your own advice before coming on as some pretentious know it all.

>>4381614
Uhm, he didn't dismiss my post lol.

>>4381621
Oh, I'm still improving. It's also much much easier to spot other people's mistakes and miss your own. I cringe pretty hard when I look at most of my old work, like the one you posted.
This isn't going to stop me from improving and trying to help people I think have potential to become really good.

>>4381614
don't really care about marmalade, but one comment before hers was an opinion rather than critique and three others just some nonsense

>>4381622
But the artist took the better of the advice. I'm two for two, care to make it three in a row or, do you just want to bow out with your tail in between your legs now?

That's alright, there's no shame in admitting you're wrong in your advice. :)

>>4381629
I have no idea what you are getting at. How about we just do our own thing and that's it? That anon seems like a very smart guy that understands what is good advice and what isn't.

marmelade man study

>>4381629
>>4381614
Can't tell if boomer or teenager, but cringe...

>>4381625
How long have you been improving now, for over ten years now? How far have you regressed in your work?

No, no, by all means, keep going. I love that whole John Persons look you're trying to adopt.

>>4381636
And that makes it three for three. Thanks for bowing out after getting your ass handed to you.

>>4381354
>>4381612
Thanks for your interest :)
https://twitter.com/Ordnance20/media

>>4381640
We can all learn that, unintended fuzzy look you're trying to incorporate into your work now. It's fascinating to see how the mighty at one point, like the comic book industry, are now on the SERIOUS decline.

This is a PRIME example of whom not to learn from, let alone take any advice from.

>>4381637
Glorious. lol

>>4381640
I think this is one of my best works.
Especially when it comes to the colors and atmosphere, which I mostly suck at.
Improving at color theory is my number one priority right now.

>>4381641
I still don't get it lol, but whatever rocks your boat I guess.

bbc chan study

>>4381696
Post the original numnuts.

>>4381696
You should study real masters or from real life. My stuff is too wonky, rushed and stylized to be good study material.
Also, I know it's bait, but it's genuine advice for people that might do that for real.

>>4381704
ok man sorry they told me in /beg/ to study other artists mainly faces but your stuff is just so fun to draw i love you thanks

i know the legs are a bit confused... hope it's appealing none the less.

>>4381704
Oh please, stop humble bragging and let him suck your dick you earned it but your humble brag is just as bad as those faggots that call a fully rendered piece with a complex background and full blown ambient occlusion "just a sketch or doodle :)" fuck out of here.

>>4381729
>futa
Garbage by default

>>4381490
I didn't mean here. I meant in my sketchbooks or computer.

>>4381734
I meant every word of what I said. I recognize my own mistakes in my art that is just a few weeks old and less experienced artists can take them on. Of course I'm super flattered when people use my stuff for studying, but it can be very counter productive.
If you are going to study artists, you should go with the cream of the crop, not some med tier ones imo.

>>4381696

post-study imagination drawing

>>4381774
Is this a futa? The face is cute but if they're supposed to be holding a dick then the hand/cock/pelvis relationship is a bit out of wack

>>4381770
aren't you supposed to be streaming right now

>>4381787
I am.

>>4381425
So how is it? She will also blink in the second or third loop

>>4381875
May i ask what software youre using to animate?

>>4381875
Not bad, animator. The subtle differences in the mouth make for a more appealing watch than say, the original animation you posted. If you can, and I'm sure you can because you made the subtle differences in the mouth, have her wince an eye closed or something.

She's enjoying the fuck, so show that she is, you know? And it's just a few frames of animation in the eye, it doesn't have to be a full on closed wink.

Not bad, animator. You're another success in terms of taking a good critique, and applying it to your work. That's progress, kudos.

>>4382009
So much so, that you have other anons asking about the software you use to create what you did. That's a win in my book. Well done.

>>4381729
Honestly the legs are the least of your problems here I'd say. The arms are way too skinny even for Crim, and they're also too far away from the torso in general. The clavicle looks so boney it looks like he's dying from starvation, which doesn't really fit with the thicc thighs you have going on. Just a style preference but I'd also say the eyes are too big, I think it would look a lot more appealing if there was 1 eye space in between them. (making each eye smaller should remedy that)

>>4381729
We get it, borderline lollipop with a dick. If that's your thing, hey, who is anyone to judge. You do you. Be careful with those hands, it makes her look REAL awkward. Seinfeld hands, watch out for that.

That facial expression needs work on, too. Is she embarrassed, does getting a hard on hurt, what's the emotion here. It's not telling me teh right story, so, on the next drawing, learn to convey the emotion better what you're character is feeling.

There's thin, and then here's anorexic. Again, if that's your thing, cool. But if you want more people to like your work? Give the girl some meat around the clavicle, and don't let all the baby phat collect at the head.

Eye reflections don't streak across wet eyeballs like that. Pick a point of reference, and add the highlight. Look at the streaks of light across her body, but where's the one on her face? Sure, you could argue the broken halo on her head is creating that, but at that intensity? Check your light source.

Is that wet shorts, or latex, or leather? Do more research on those textures. There are plenty of guides out there that will show you.

It needs work. Don't go back and obsess over this one, learn from your mistakes and apply them to the next piece. Good luck.

>>4381661
Okay BBC, I'll give you credit. Unless you're shitposting, that reply sounds like a slice of humble ass pie. Showing that kind of humility shows personal growth. More artists of your caliber tier can learn from this. Good on you.

Here's a lesson to all of you would be porn artists. Eat your slice of humble now, and you avoid being called out on your shit.

>>4381704
>>4381770
Good advice. Kudos.

>>4381313
I have never seen anything like what you have described before. It's worth a try. Who knows? There may be a niche audience that enjoys art like this.

What do ya'll think of this comic?https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/venuscomics/sister-night-1-cover

I've never really drawn porn before and wanted to try it. It's ultimately a sketch but would like to know if it's worth to put more work into it or just keep sketching. I know the head's a little weird.

dragon lady

>>4382204
Why do you have that patronizing attitude?
>I'll give you credit
>Good on you
>Here's a lesson to all of you
>Humble pie
>Called out on your shit
Do you even draw or are you just some kind of background character who stalks relevant people and gets kicks out of playing mentor?

>>4382647
Also if anyone has any crits on how to draw the anatomy in these spots please let me hear it

>>4381502
>it's a bit flat
I’ve struggled with this for a long time, is it just perspective? Why does the art appear flat?

>>4382665
Her collar bone shouldn't buldge so much, Thigh line is drawn too far back, don't even know what that is on the back but her tail should be lower

>>4382647
Blog?

>>4382724
Thank you, the circle on the back is the same as the area on the thigh line, im really bad at defining waists

>>4382732
https://twitter.com/itsukarine

>>4382681
I think in this case I think it's mainly because of how the forms of the bodies interact with each other. The deformation of the soft tissues is not clear and pronounced enough, so you end up with something that looks like 3d models clipping through each other.
Personally I think interaction between different character is one of, if not the, most difficult thing to draw when it comes to porn.
Learning perspective is crucial in this case. And using rl refs helps a ton I guess.

>>4382681
In this case I think it's mainly because of how the forms of the bodies interact with each other. The deformation of the soft tissues is not clear and pronounced enough, so you end up with something that looks like 3d models clipping through each other.
Personally I think interaction between different characters is one of, if not the most difficult things to draw when it comes to porn.
Having good perspective knowledge is crucial in this case. And using rl refs helps a ton I guess.

>>4382681
Have you spent much time studying perspective and applying it? Drawing architecture, people in environments, complex forms in a space?

>>4382771
Yeah, thanks! I’ll definitely look up some perspective and more refs!

>>4382775
I have spent next to no time studying perspective:/

>>4382811
>I have spent next to no time studying perspective:/
Consider working on the technical stuff for a little, the gains will come quick and stick with you. I have faith in you eggu

>>4382811
>>4382836
This, your stuff looks really really promising. You have the appeal and nice tight lineart down, you just need to get the same level of confidence for foreshortening/perspective and you'll be good... to dwell into the bottomless pit that is color theory. XD

>>4382009
CSP ex

Does this look okay? I want to improve at drawing muscles

I'm about to start inking this. It's my first time drawing some form of penetration and I must say i am a little proud of myself

I'm about to start inking this. It's my first time drawing some form of penetration and I must say i am a little proud of myself

I'm about to start inking this. It's my first time drawing some form of penetration and I must say i am a little proud of myself

>>4382139
>>4382173
>>4382204
>words words words
Whos this redditor

>>4382659
You're a dying breed of toxicity. Look at the help being provided after your obvious and ridiculous attempt to bait.

Seethe. You provide nothing. You don't exist. :)

>>4382285
Nice tits for having given it a first try. You can talk to a few porn artists and they'll probably tell you, yeah, it's worth the effort. Are you ready to take commissions, probably not. Practice a bit more, and I'm sure you'll be ready down the road.

>>4383026
Study body building magazines. Those will help you better understand how muscles appear.

>>4383037
Fuck it, ink it up. :D Practice, practice, practice!

I think I'm bad at drawing guys

>>4383089
Working on it now

>>4383111
you're right. bad drawers sometimes can be spared if they have #soul. sorry, you draw better than you soul, and you do not draw well.

>>4383089
>magazines
What’s a magazine?

>>4383111
He's missing his lower body

>>4383111
i know that the type of woman is somekind the muscle type, but you should adjust the tits and make them more big and less muscular, or adjust the penis and make it less width, because it's seems incorrect for the volume of the boobs

>>4380943
how many time you spend in the lines? serious question

>>4381005
that's fine no one cares only bitches

>>4381014
esta buena tu mierda anon, te recomendaría que hicieras fanart si quieres aumentar un buen numero tus seguidores, pero es un arma de doble filo porque puede hacer virar tu trabajo hacía sólo ese espectro, podrías hacerlo ocasionalmente de todas formas

>>4383119
Nice. You'll get a better understanding of how muscles work when under certain distress poses, adding more confidence to your work over time. Don't expect results right away, and remember that mistakes are still going to happen. The important thing to remember, is not to dwell on the mistakes. Practice.

You'll notice a difference soon enough. Good luck.

>>4383183
Gracias por el consejo anon Y de hecho tienes razón, aunque tengo otra cuenta para esos trabajos

>>4383183
>>4383327
You have to go back.

>>4380785
Buff bod, tiny arms.

>>4381185
>>4381192
Fuck off, Sigourney. Just because they don't draw futa girls sucking on their own 9 foot long cocks doesn't make their style "Homophobic".

Hey, I heard you guys like walls of unreadable text

>>4381167
>making 2 accounts for porn and hardcore porn
coward. merge them. there's already a massive amount of overlap in the type of people who would follow either account anyway

>>4381313
>niche porn
>art is actually good
anon if you don't already have a patreon, youre a fucking fool

>>4382665
youre being nitpicky. it looks good enough to finish, if that's what youre asking

the tail appears flat compared to the rest of her. that's my only gripe

>>4383690
Her left tit is coming out of her armpit

>>4383781
>armtits

>>4383171
>tits less muscular-
I don't know exactly what you mean- they look too hard? or they connect to her chest wrong?
>the penis is too wide vs the boobs
Yes his dick is absurdly large- like satyrs on old greek pottery
It's mostly to use for slapstick- he's working in a kitchen- his apron rips- his dick flips a table which starts a grease fire
>>4383167
It's kind of illegible that his thighs are going under her arms yeah
>mulligan

>>4383781
Was trying to show motion without speed or impact lines. My main concern is how to make the text more readable without a giant speech bubble.

I've spent so much time on these boots, wew. At least you learn many things while animating h-haha

>>4383835
Fuckin nice. What did you use to strengthen you animation fundie knowledge?

>>4383840
I really don't know. I tried to read Hampton few weeks ago but then realized I can't even draw a box in desirable angle. I studied it until the head construction, copied few drawings, did some gestures from the imagination. As for animation I just jump between frames and draw lines until it looks good, onion skin really helps.

>>4383812
>Was trying to show motion without speed or impact lines.
What does that have to do with the tit being drawn as a tube coming from underneath her arm? As you've drawn it here they wouldn't rest on her chest while still but rather inside the armpit.

>>4383862
That's the excess skin where it attaches underneath the armpit. It's stretched to show that she's being thrust violently forward.

Feel free to redline it.

>>4383894
Not perfect but you get the picture. The tit starts much farther up. The fatty flesh can sag into the armpit in certain poses, but it certainly doesn't belong there when the motion is pulling it away from the pit. Right tit starts far too low as well. Tits basically start where the shoulder connected with the pit (but not actually in the pit).

>>4383920
>that redline
I'll see what I can do.

>>4383927
I'd highly recommend just looking at porn videos, honestly. That'll be the best way to see a naked tit flopping around in motion.

>>4380785
STOP WATCHING PORN

>>4383690

>>4380785

I drew a self portrait

>>4384102
yikes

>>4384102
Nice balls, brah.

Ok I think it's the final version before I start lineart and render

>>4384102
What the fuck brian, you have no pecs

>>4384299
is just that his arms are cso the torso looks more slim

>>4384296
Below the knee looks too skinny in comparison to rest of her leg.

>>4384330
Which one

>>4383690
>>4383920

>>4381313
Seriously, where do you post, need to follow asap.

>>4384339
Where's the fix?

>>4384371
I fixed the tits. That was the only thing people were complaining about.

>>4384386
No you didn't. The breast still originates under the armpit. Like, look at a real woman in that position and compare your drawing to it. You didn't even listen to the redline.

>>4381475
Fags like you ruined the internet

>>4384394
Pyw and let's see what sort of great content you make.

>>4384393
Your redline is garbage and you know it.

>>4384386
Where's the fix anon, if anything it's an even deeper armpit tit

>>4384339
bruh your entire shit is fucked.
your anatomy is all guesswork and lazily thrown together and it shows no sense of force or weight or appeal (even if her tits are floppy and she's supposed to be ugly). nothing about this is arousing, only hilarious. the text is your least concern.
but as far as readability goes, you have to build your image around text early on in the composition process. it can't be added as an after thought.

>>4384339
not the best redline but welp. dunno what's so hard about accepting that boobs don't come out of the armpit

>>4384417
Better, but not correct.

>>4384407
Not my redline. You need more fundamentals. You don't understand the structure or even what a line represents.

>>4384407
Being this stubborn and defensive about criticism is probably why your art is such an unattractive mess

>>4384407
>Found the retarded coom /beg/

>>4384407
Here's a redline I did on my phone with my finger in 3 minutes. Learn your fundies.

>>4384393
Once more into the breach.

>>4384415
>>4384417
>>4384425
>>4384428
>>4384429
>>4384431
And here come the crabs.

>>4384431
Forgot to add. The breasts may be the worst, but the rest of your picture is horrible as well. Saving it for those threads about horrible art mistakes.

>>4384433
Good, now onto fixing the rest of that terrifying body.

>>4384415
I am glad that someone appreciated my attempt at humor, but I'd have to completely rethink the dialogue for formatting like that.

>>4384436
No, I think I'm good for now.

>>4384434
Do be sure to use the latest version, thanks.

>>4384438
Text was just placeholder to show how less cobblestone in the background helps the readability, not a guide for sizing or layout. You could fit your original dialogue perfectly so long as you lengthen and narrow your handwriting, and even then you'd only have to do so slightly.

>>4383690
>>4383927
>>4384339
>>4384433
>>4384439
Anon pls.

P.S. Using your own art as a reaction image is possibly one of the faggiest things you can do.

>>4384459
It adheres to the rule of only posting your own artwork, so I'm afraid you'll have to deal with it. I do appreciate you drawing my ugly OC, however.

>>4384469
Do you enjoy being retarded?
Also hidden and reported for faggotry.

>>4384474
>announcing report
Heh whos retarded now

>>4384481
>heh
End yourself.

>>4384483
I can't, I'm too busy becoming the best artist in the world. Maybe you should go spread your negativity on twitter :)

>>4384489
>muh negativity :(
Nigger, where do you think you are?
Take your 'pretending to be retarded' humor to leddit if you want to be a faggot so bad.

>>4384494
Stay mad

>>4384495
>sperging 'crab' at anons btfoing your shitty art
>bitching at 4chan for being 'negative'
>I-I'm gonna be the best artist!!
Stay delusional.

>>4384498
>he thinks there's only he and that /beg/ coomer in this thread right now
Oh don't be such a baby anon, some day you'll gonna make it

>>4384501
>he and that /beg/ coomer
>you'll gonna make it
Stop pretending it's not you faggot.
And I don't talk to retarded ESLfags who reveal their Engrish powerlevel. Later homo.

>>4384474
Well that's a shame.

>>4384339
You have no idea what perspective is. Learn that first, and then render stuff.

>>4384433
>Weird tits; too low on the chest and not "tall" enough
>stumpy, lumpy arm
>Lumpy, weirdly shaded ass
>bulging stomach

Picture an actual woman who looked like this, and imagine how attractive she would be. The girl's left tit is in a totally bizarre place. Rather than gradually coming from the top of her chest and her sternum, it awkwardly protrudes from the bottom-left part of her left pectoral.

Hey guys, quick question: what's the best time of the day to post on Twitter? I figured the lunchtime window and weekends being the worst days don't apply here, since no one in their right mind would look at porn at work.

>>4380937
Well, I got into Dimension w in a big way recently, after not finding too many porn of it after a cursory search, I decided to draw some myself.

>>4384580
Okay, thanks.

>>4384591
She's supposed to be average and pudgy.

>>4384907
>average and pudgy
>with that much rib showing
bro, you need to do some more studies before you go rendering shit. Currently your little doodles are better than what you posted before. Study up on some figures and figure out how breasts truly fit on the body. Really look at how the shapes on the body of a woman come together to make them attractive and then compare to yours and see how you could capture it better. Take some notes from artists you admire, hopefully with a high amount of skill

>>4384924
I think I'll go back to drawing action scenes of buff men. As always, I do appreciate the feedback.

probably good to find some reference, i felt a lot of her feature can be soften up if you are going for pudgy, but I don't know what level of thickness you are going for.

>>4384982
Sweat drops being flung off the body? Wish I had thought of that.

>>4384395
I'm not here to compare. The drawing is fine.
Drawing futa is degenerate and immoral, that's all.

took me around 5 hours and I came twice while drawing it

>>4381525
Do you like tang?

>>4384084
That's showing better muscular structure in your work, in comparison to your first post >>4383026
,which works mind you, but do you see how not accentuating EVERY single muscle, makes it look more appealing to your eye?

That's good progress, I'm impressed with your learning ethic. Keep practicing and you'll start to see that your work will look so much better in no time. You still have a long way to go, but at least now, you have something on which to build upon.

MAKE friends with REFERENCE material. Study. Practice. Rinse and repeat. Good job.

>>4384296
Nice job, animator. NOW she looks like she's enjoying getting fucked.

Well done. Here's to your continued learning, receiving honest critique about your work, and coming out the other end with acceptable results.

This, is nut-worthy. Kudos and job well done. Keep at it.

>>4385137
>dem blue veins
Keep it up. Making them attractive is the holy grail of milf porn.

>>4385137
Varicose veins, nice. Healthy tits need all the blood they need. She's got Buckwheat in a headlock, man, and that carpet shag, holy shit. lol

Hands and feet; finish up the visuals. It's a shame to see a drawing like that fall short because of them.

>>4385137
holy shit IM GONNA COOM

>>4383077
thanks. that's one of the things I want see more artists draw better (myself included) since it seems people just put spheres on a girl's chest and call it a day.

Second drawing this month, already better than my monthly average. With such pace I'm glad I only stagnated and haven't gotten visibly worse than I used to be.

>>4383183
I don't keep track, but I guess it heavily depends. This one was super stylized, so lines took less than usual because they are so thicc and undetailed. A few hours I think, if I count from sketching to finishing clean lines.

>>4384846
Did you draw more of that...cat? Also, blog? I dig the way you draw.

>>4385137
Yesssssssssss. This is the good stuff.

>>4385140
>>4385149
>>4385150
>>4385194
thanks guys hopefully in a few months I will have much better anatomy knowledge to actually pull this off

>>4385181
Nice!

rate my porn

>>4385139
Why are you talking like some kind of a reddit knight?

>>4385243
3/10

what are some good gay artists to follow?

>>4384102
I colored it

>>4380785
Just delivered this one

>>4385579
If you're going to do the noselip thing I'd say you probably shouldn't be rendering the rest of the nose in such detail. A minor complaint though, looks good.

>>4385589
Thank you. I thought the face was looking too flat so I started working on some of its features. I'll take care next time.

>>4385137
Asukaposter straying from the path

Could I get some opinions and anatomy critique on this piece please

>>4385137
ew

>>4385137
>anons find this hot
I hope they're just memeing because this looks hideous. Even his crackwhore asuka looks better.

>>4385729
is this the power of a visual library

>>4385739
Its the power of having a small visual book that you have skimmed over once and claimed to have read it when people scream loomis at you over and over again

>>4385658
That's Melony Melons. Nice.

The neck's too far off against her left shoulder. Fingers could use some work, on both hands, and when a tit leans to one side like that, don't use vertical strokes like that to accentuate gravity, or curvature. That girl's got curves for days, learn to use them.

You can't have lines and small dashes like that on the babushka, on her head, without it coming out looking like a pink Sno-Ball cupcake, or some weird ass cactus. You almost got the look on her left cuff bracelet, though.

But then, yeah, those fingers.

Is she pregnant, or is she chunkers? It's hard to tell where the fat ends and where it begins on her stomach. If you're going for thick, the belly button doesn't stand out like that unless it's an outie, which then of course, she's carrying buns in the oven. But I doubt that was the look you were going for.

A thick ass, deserves thick thighs. They don't curve inward that way unless she's wearing SUPER fucking tight ass thigh-high stockings. And even then, thick, muffin tops.

Spend some time on the negligee. It's hard to see ALL of the allure of the drawing go to the eyes, and then gets goes to crap once you head south. Melons likes to fuck, so spend some time having her wear something WORTHY of getting ripped off those titties. Just a thought.

Eyes and mouth are alright, but again, there's nothing you can do to go back and fix. Learn from your mistakes, and move on to the next one.

>>4385759
Then don't skim over it, sit your ass down and really look through it.You're a beginner. Everyone starts out that way. Been drawing like that for months already? So what. Keep practicing. Learn at your own pace.

Look up Save Loomis on Google, you'll find all the pdfs you need.

>>4385666
Low t faggot detected

>>4385666
Get ye back, devil!

>>4385813
Thanks man, I appreciate the crits.

Agreed on the fingers, I will have to try better on the next piece. They are where I struggle the most (like most people I'd guess).

>You can't have lines and small dashes like that on the babushka, on her head, without it coming out looking like a pink Sno-Ball cupcake, or some weird ass cactus. You almost got the look on her left cuff bracelet, though.

How can I achieve the fluffy look using pencil touch? Can you elaborate a bit on this?

>Is she pregnant, or is she chunkers? It's hard to tell where the fat ends and where it begins on her stomach. If you're going for thick, the belly button doesn't stand out like that unless it's an outie, which then of course, she's carrying buns in the oven. But I doubt that was the look you were going for.

Actually, pregnancy was the exact look I was going for; I made this piece for a friend who's into it. Do you think I need to make the tum way bigger or something then?

I was quite lazy on the negligee and shading, I figured if I ended up inking it I would put in way more lacy detail so I just used some place holding scribble.

>>4385563
you have small pp

i know there's probably countless things wrong with this drawing, but what seems to be the biggest glaring issue here? i'm having trouble figuring out what's best to focus on.

>>4386010
>biggest glaring issue
The neck.

>>4386030
u-rite, didn't even see it till now

>>4386010
>>4386030
>>4386034
Looking at the neck leads to the realization that those are some broad fucking shoulders (and chest).

>>4385927
its of an average size :D

>>4385729
UUUUuuunnnffffffffffffffff!

>>4385849
>>4385863
>I love blue veins and hairy armpits/vag
You faggots might as well be jerking off to monster porn.

>>4385892
Pregnancy starts at sternum and ends just above the mons pubis, you can make it bigger or even hang over it depends there is no 100% correct way but don't get pressured into hyper sizes and baseball sized outies

her right shoulder looks longer than her left, you're hiding the rest of her fingers on both hands and everything >>4385813 said.

Lost of potential in your piece stylization reminds me of Yuichiro Tanuma.

>>4383061
You should lurk and stop being a hypocrite.

ay ma, look, i finished someth

now go listen to the beetlejuice musical u dummo
https://open.spotify.com/album/3Nkueud4hqLWhSzOepKi7p

>>4386506
bonus unfinished character design illios for that sweet sweet b4 n after effect

>>4385892
>How can I achieve the fluffy look using pencil touch? Can you elaborate a bit on this?
One example of how this is Oda-Non, though there are several other pro artists out there that do it just as well. See how drawing the texture makes it look fluffy?

>>4386520
But see how even the pros add in unnecessary pencil strokes? Look at the strokes just above the tits, it makes them look, off. That, and the strokes around the stomach area.

Just because you can, doesn't mean you should, you know?

>>4386520

this bitch got chest hair?

>>4386436
upper and bottom halfs of the torso seems to be disconnected, but this is really nice, blog?

>>4386525
>>4386528
The absolute state of /beg/s.

>>4386775
what do those lines above the boobs represent then?

>>4386622
>>4386623
MORE

This is technically sfw, I think. Lets see how deviantart reacts, I mean it doesn't break any of their rules, does it?

Man I love to walk on the border between sfw and nsfw

>>4386808
if this weren't simpsons i would like it

>>4385130
like, the drink?

>>4386808
oh god this is so good
did you draw this from imagination? I wanna reach this level so bad
blog?
though Im sure I already follow you

>>4386818
Blog?

>>4386824
Thanks, yeah its from imagination.
I'm NGMI on Pixiv and DeviantArt

campy vampboi wip
https://youtu.be/FvvWEEigAPg

>>3862881
Theres a chain of drawings in the /aco/ oc drawthread.
I got a cintiq recently and I'm having an easier time drawing without destroying myself. Critiques or noting anything that seems to be a consistent habit would be appreciated

>>4386808
i think it lacks a bit of saturation

>>4386808
This is very NSFW. I don't know how detached from society you have to be to somehow think this is even remotely SFW.

>>4386808
Wow, you are so cool and edgy.

Fucking retard.

>>4385579
There's a huge gap of quality between the two. What happened?
Also, the lower one is traced

>>4386905
ahahahahahaha dat rage

>>4386923
I don't trace, my man.

>>4386508
Looks really good, I like your style and perversion. Blog?

>>4386697
i have that issue a lot and dunno how to fix

itsukarine on twitter

>>4387051
>followed by ishimiso
i am proud of you son

How's this chicken scratch shit coming along?

>>4380785
why do you even make these threads? 90% of the board is porn
just advertise on the catalog directly you stupid hookers

>>4386808
how do you draw shota THAT good, senpai?

>>4386844
bitch, I wanted that pseudo

Posting in the coom thread

>>4381345
>>4381358
>>4381360
>>4382173

Someone took more than their prescribed adderall tonight. nice reddit spacing btw fag.

>Wanted to draw porn
>Look at references
>Ended up fapping
its hard bros

>>4386506
0 sexual appeal, literally just disgusting. do you happen to do meth btw?

>>4387638
you get used to it, the porn loses it effect after a while

crit please

>>4386840
>>4381612
https://twitter.com/Tangdraws

I'm always glad to read yours comments

poosy

>>4386808
fix your fucking values

>>4386965
This board is not for children.

How do you go about doing alt versions? Do you simply draw and color them on a separate layer?

>>4386050
make it hard

Any big mistakes here before I move onto coloring?
>inb4 "the biggest mistake is you"

>>4381358
you wrote all that shit yet it isnt even true. there is a demand for content like that

>>4390195
Scroll though this thread and read all reddit spacing posts, this is some kind of schizo

:/

meh