/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4345460

>>4345460
Would anyone be so kind as to help me out?
I'm thinking that somewhere in the torso i changed the perspective but atm i'm blind as how to fix it

>>4345474
It looks nice but it’s so generic and looks like it could be any coomer artist’s style

I'm too scared to draw digitally....

>>4345659
Seems like the arch of her back should be deeper and the angle/form of the hips and ass is a bit off.
Disclaimer: I'm shit at anatomy so definitely don't follow this as gospel, I just wanted to illustrate what I meant.

>>4345805
oh well, at least i got the nice part going
which loomis book should i read to stop being boring faggot?

Does anybody have some good sources or guides on drawin faces and expressions for porn?

Am I going to hell

>>4346359
Hell depicted by dante is full of people who know they have sinned but wont repent for a reason or the other, they could literally stop suffering if they repented. Are you going ti repent?

redline please, specially arms

These threads just keep getting worse.

>>4346390
Cry harder.

>>4345925
>at least i got the nice part going
Maybe to begs. Looks like shit imo.

>>4346396
Not at all. I'm laughing my ass off.

>>4345474
I wonder why is she anoyed.

>>4345910
I think i see what you're getting at. Thanks for redline and advice anon

>>4346359
Swastika pubes?

I hate spending so much time on a sketch to then realize it’s not worth inking and coloring. The way the girl’s torso is twisted is all wrong and makes no sense considering the position of the guy, his hands are fucked up sizes, I got lazy and decided to cover the feet with sheets. Shit, I don’t know how he’s propping himself up like that with pillows. Is this even really a bed? I’m so bad with scenery.
How do I stop sucking? Besides stopping with the furry shit.

Any suggestion before inking?

>>4347006
I just realized her ass is WAY too far back. Is there anything I got right?

>>4347013
They cheers with the cum filled glasses before she’s filled them? The flow of this page is all over the place.

>>4347026
Oh, I know what you're talking about, but the idea is when they drank all the wine she say something like "nothing like some milk before go to bed"

>>4345659
Everything but the pole she's hanging onto is in perspective. Draw some lines.

>>4345925
Maybe take a break from fundies and focus on artistic expression for a bit? Experimenting with techniques without heavy reliance on life refs can help make a unique style. You can always come back to your life refs later. Try saving a collage of all your favorite works and take from them features you find appealing.

>>4347138
Cute. Tho your line weight is wonky. Your lines should be thickest around parts that cast the darkest shadow and thinner around lighter areas

This thread should be called /beg/ instead of the actual one.

>>4347247
Then what would /beg be called?

>>4347006

Doing my best but it’s still a long road to good

>>4347013
her boobs look like they're trying to fly away from her body in the middle panel. Flatten out that V-shape at the bottom of the boobs to make it look more natural

LOL the images in this thread are so bad! Ahahhahhahahaha.

>>4347900
who is this? is it the chink or the nigger

>>4347903
What makes you so sure it’s either of them? What if it’s a spic? Or maybe a heeb?

>>4345659
I like the theme and where this is going. Blog?

>>4347138
>>4346359
>>4345826
You guy's need to study more. Please check out the artbook thread and go to the mega file beginner essentials. You also should go to /beg/ while you study up. Just because this thread is for nsfw art, doesn't mean you should post here.

>>4345474
blog, twitter handle, ...?

>>4346408
t-thanks
>>4347161
eh, less fundies is the last thing i should do since i am skipping on them too much already
i don't use reference much, though i probably should and i don't think using it hinders artistic expression
i have an inspiration folder already

either way, i am not concerned much about style, i am more interested in coming up with good composition/angles/stories
>>4347941
https://twitter.com/PachPachPachi

Thoughts? I know the head is kinda fucked up compared to the body, I want to get better at rendering tho.

>>4348000
The guy who was worried that his Medusa pic looked like she was a shortstack, right?
What was your learning material, by the way? Books, videos, ...

>>4347936
I finished coloring it in before i got any replies here. i'm going to clean it up based on the advice i get here. So far the most glaring problems are her back and the rod shes hanging onto. I can be found @spookyboobies2 on twitter

>>4347940
Fuck you retard I do what I want

Fucking canid how dare you even dream of speaking to me

>>4348088
I mean, if you’re a pretentious enough person to call someone a canid as opposed to a dog then you probably don’t have much worthwhile to say, anyway.

>>4347389
not as /beg

>>4348031
As i said, i am really bad at studying, i tried almost every material you can usually find on /ic/, but they don't help much since any attempt of serious grinding usually ends within three days.
What i usually do is fail, figure out weakest parts and what can be improved (by thinking for myself, comparing to other artists' work and asking /ic/) and fail a little less next time (hopefully).
If i had to name three things that helped me the most, it would be Scott Robertson's "How to draw", this https://screencast-o-matic.com/watch/cqfnbkZnai critique by nosebro and webmrelated

>>4348118
We’re that bad, eh?

>>4348251
Looks near. Blog?

>>4348262
Twitter.com/Smutbrush

ty, i hope color will push it to the next level. i am not very good at using color yet but i am trying

>>4348121
This is a nice webm.
It's what hard round brush is all about.
The people who say rendering is done with the lasso and an airbrush don't understand.
It's three brush strokes. No selections.
Digital Alla Prima.

>>4348121
>As i said, i am really bad at studying
Oh believe me, I'm the same
>What i usually do is fail, figure out weakest parts and what can be improved
Reasonable. I have to move beyond "I'm too scared to waste even more time" which is why I'm asking for tips left and right.
>>4348121
>Scott Robertson's "How to draw", this https://screencast-o-matic.com/watch/cqfnbkZnai critique by nosebro and webmrelated
Thanks!

>>4348262
>>4348265
>Looks near
Sorry, meant "neat", of course.
>Smutbrush
I didn't recognize you from the picture! Ha.
I absolutely love the bee/wasp girl you drew (I should've scrolled further down last time)
https://twitter.com/Smutbrush/status/1139021323840237569

Same question to you that I posted to the other anon (I'm gathering as much info as I can)
What was your learning material? Books, videos, ...

>>4348289
as far as learning materials go i dont study nearly as much as i should be but my go-to's are hampton and loomis. And thank you, i'd like to do more stuff like that bee girl as its what i truly enjoy but i need money to live and my audience doesnt like that stuff as much

>>4348265
>putting your paypal name in your porn blog
uhh, bro? how did they not froze it yet?

>>4348302
>hampton and loomis
Just to be sure, any books in particular?
>And thank you, i'd like to do more stuff like that bee girl as its what i truly enjoy
HELL YE-
>and my audience doesnt like that stuff as much
damn it
>but i need money to live
Understandable. Perhaps I'll be able to commission some pieces in the future once I won't have to count every cent twice for my medical bills

So I'm really new to the world of drawn porn, never used to pay much attention to it until by chance I stumbled across InCase's The Invitation series. I truly consider it to be a work of art, I find it mesmerising.
Does anyone happen to know any works similar to it?

Also, what happened to InCase? I looked him up hoping to find more good stuff and while there was some, it seems these days he only does one panel stuff and his Alfie series which I don't care for. Even went to his secondary bi patreon where he admitted it was dead and wasn't likely to contribute to it anytime soon. Seems sad to see an artist with such phenomenal potential limit themselves.

>>4348318
just the figure drawing ones

>>4348350
"Figure Drawing: Design and Invention" and "Figure Drawing for All It's Worth" it is then. Got it. Thanks!

How does it look

how did you guys learn to draw hands and feet, especially fingers? asking here cus everyone on /beg/ is retarded

>>4348504
how did you make this?

>>4348504
Bouncy. I like it. Blog?

>>4348506
drawing hands from reference, drawing my own hands. Turn on your brain while drawing and you'll improve. Don't draw mindlessly.
I've got a ways to go, but this sentiment has helped me drastically improve.

>>4348508
Uhh, drew 8 frames? What do you mean
>>4348510
Later, when I finish it

>>4348504
software?

>>4348615
Clip studio paint

>>4346382
The anatomy and perspective are all wrong.

Help, I'm too old for /beg/ and too shit for /styl/

>>4348504
Her arm that's holding her leg appears to be way too thin (perhaps even too long as well?)

>>4348682
Be like me
Post where you want and tell these nogs to fuck off dude
You just need more mileage or something like that

>>4348777
>the lucky trips of fortune and generosity
Thank you anon, I'll keep at it.

>>4348078
You're the one who's retarded with how you draw.

>>4348682
good areolae

>>4348682
Beg isn’t a matter of age. It’s skill. How old are you, anyway?

>>4348682
She looks quite retarded.

>>4349051
22, and I meant in mileage not literal years on this earth.
>>4349056
I was going for angry.

>>4349058
I think your skill is acceptable for your age, specially the coloring

>>4348328
He wants Alfie to have beautiful settings and painted pages which means it eats up most of his time.

thoughts?

What books do you guys suggest for someone trying to draw fictional people. Fun with a Pencil is no help as a base.

>>4348682
this is really beg tbqhwy

>>4349186
learn fucking lineweight and how do masses deform that vagina is made of steel,also that fucking nose yikes.

>>4349214
WRONG the hair is wrong, also the right leg is wrong and the perspective is also wrong.

>>4347002
MIGA zoomer cuck gets redpilled at a trump rally
>>4347940
i know i need to study more and get better but im terrible at memorizing and applying anatomy to my figures, dont you have any specific suggestions? its obviously stylized

>>4348695
Made some adjustments, is it better?

>>4349265
this is really good.

Does this pose look okay and which of the outfit designs do you favor or thoughts on changing the design?

>>4349435
i personally like the right design more
Nice work so far

Although im not quite fond of the pec gap/cleavage you have going on. makes them look like long breasts imo Maybe its the strong curved lines. It looks fine on the large figure though

>>4348682
lets try something else.

>>4349489
fuck, ignore that mouth, or point it out REEEEe

>>4349489

>>4349485
Yeah I didn't notice how that looks weird, I was paying more attention to the outfit. It's okay though, those won't be used for full illustrations just as mannequins so to speak, heh.
Thanks for the input anon!

Haven't had much time to draw lately but Ive been having fun with this page
>>4330858
I think I fixed it

>>4348121
>facial feature fraternity
hahaha oh wow

>>4349596
Blog?

drew the meme

>>4349592
gotcha
that being said do you have a gallery?

>>4349596
You always draw women like stumpy fat ugly dwarves. Draw something that will actually get my dick hard.

>>4348612
What program?

>>4349628
Here you go https://twitter.com/hayabusart
>>4349943
I dont know what to tell you, this character is supposed to be short

>>4349186
JUST KILL YOURSELF ALREADY, SICK PIECE OF SHIT.

Just finished this drawing of a friend's OC

>>4350103
Fucking gross

>>4350004
Hey newfaggot retard, did you know 4chan used to have an entire board dedicated to lolicon? Stop sperging out and reporting people over a drawing. Go back to whatever hugbox you came from if you get offended at artwork that differs from your worldview.

>>4350167
Yeah it's not everyones cup of tea

>>4350190
Just. Fucking. Kill. Yourself.

>>4350374
>>>/r/eddit

>>4350374
Ironic

>>4350374
I want you out of my board by tomorrow morning

>>4349943
You got a problem with short stacks, bub?

>>4350405
while you are at it tell reddit to change 4chan's board rules maybe.
>>4350433
cope.

>>4350455
sorry buddy. the world doesn't want your kind anymore. time to do that sudoku you were postponing.

>>4350463
Your twitter inbox isn't the world

>>4350483
You must clearly know very well what the world looks like in your mom's basement.

The world is ran by normies, not by your kind, sicko.

>>4350486
This post was verified!
Basedvote!

>>4349596
Your lines are so crisp! Do you have any tips for makng lines that smooth?

>>4350503
Unironically JUST FUCKING DRAW.
Confident lineart is born from experience.
That's just how it is.

>>4348006
Please help i need feedback

>>4350486
Could I get some critique on my nsfw drawing in the nsfw thread of /ic/ - art & critique please?

>>4350533
If by critique you mean a report, and if by nsfw drawing you mean badly drawn pedophile crap, then sure.

>>4350538
they're 18 racist.

>>4350552
I suggest you to learn to draw in order to not end up in jail in the future kek.

>>4350459
newfaggot those rules havent been enforced or updated for a literal decade MOM IM ON 4CHAN I KNOW ALL THE RULES EPIC STYLE

>>4350566
I'm not a faggy cucked leaf, kek.

>>4350569
Oh, I see. Then that's probably why the post that was quoted here >>4350004 got deleted, right?
LMAO

>>4350570
You also can't draw kek.

>>4350578
ROFL!
https://youtu.be/cP1SsfnSFDs?t=83

>>4350584
>turns into a child the moment they get destroyed
GG

>>4350585
LUL! kek.

>>4350586
Why did that post get deleted? ugu UwU?

>>4350503
I take a lot of time and try to be very deliberate with my lines, sometimes even "ghosting" the line over the page before actually drawing it. I find that even when taking your time it will be infinitely faster and better looking than using ctrl-z a lot (though I sometimes fall into this trap too)
Also this >>4350511, it does take a lot of practice and it wont start out pretty but I think it's worth. Also if you're wondering about the brush, the sketches are just the default csp colored pencil and the black is the grease pencil from here https://www.deviantart.com/thecgcy/art/Cy-s-CSP-Brush-Pack-495366611

>>4350591
Cause you're a neo lib bully harassing content creators who aren't harming anyone. Die tranny.

>>4350593
You said the rules aren't enforced. Why it got deleted then.
This time answer without crying.

>>4350599
I said nothing about rules, all I pointed out was your white knightfaggotry over drawn fictitious girls on 4chan. The artist is a fag, but virtue signaling is just as bad.

>>4350603
Then you are good.

>>4350511
Gotcha
>>4350592
Looks like i've got to get some mileage down. thanks for taking the time to explain it to me. i definatley fall into the trap of wanting to do fast strokes then ctrl-z everything. Right now i'm using kirita but i'm sure i can find a similar analogue for the grease pencil.

>>4349181
Im struggling with expressions, may I get some input here?

trying to find angles to show specific features

trying to find specific angles

>>4350810
wtf??

>>4350818
?

>>4350819
We have people here that think subject matter and their opinions about it are relevant. Just ignore them.

Also, love how dynamic your art is. Just keep it up.

>>4350810
>top left
GENTLEMAN

>>4350867
hah

>>4350374
>>4350459
You sound like barneyfag. "Just. Fucking. Kill. Yourself." KEK at how angry you are over this. No surprise the newfag redditor uses meme words like cope. Announcing a report is a bannable offense btw, maybe you’d know that if you lurked for more than 10 minutes, nigger.

>>4350846
What's your blog? Let's be friends.

>>4350937
I know that, retard. I didn't announce a report. You'd understand that if you weren't a retard.

>>4349569
updato

>>4350004
The mods did their duty. Hats off to them for finally cleaning up this board after the constant coomershit floods post-split.

>>4351628

is it bad that i 98% draw from imagination, i really hate drawing from reference, something about it makes me lose the all sense of excitement and fun.
do you think this going to affect my progress? and do i have to force
myself to copy and practice from refs, master studies, etc?

>>4351664
ill save this for my suicide folder if I need a final push.

wanted to do a nsfw edit of the towergirl i drew earlier

>>4351897
would start referencing, just don't do a copy but use the pose or whatever you reference and add your own twist to it

>>4351926
love the hand expression

>>4350603
Rules are rules. Anyone can draw what they want, but the site you post on decides what content you're allowed, not you.

>>4351664
I'll save this for my "artists definitely worse than me" folder for when I feel bad about my art.

>>4349265
>Made some adjustments, is it better?
It still gives off the impression that it's just a long stick. Perhaps it's just because the hand holding the leg is out of frame. Or it's because her forearm and upper arm appear to have the same thickness throughout the whole arm.

>>4349265
>>4352117
But, needless to say, it's a really neat animation. I really dig the style.

(^ that didn't make the cut in my last post because I accidently clicked on post)

>>4352045
neck looks too far bent forward. If thats what your going for fine, but I'd suggest curving the torso more to make it fit better

>>4352133
client specifically requested deepthroat and i was struggling for a while to find an angle that would accomplish that without bending the dongs too much while still showing the boobs and belly, i think you're right i probably couldve just bent the spine since the back is out of view

>>4350988
I don't post r18 stuff on it but twitter at pentaerythrit0l

>>4352045
HEY STEVEN! Check this out!

>>4345460
Anyone have that blog of just ahegao faces without the porn?

It was something about anime girls eating food or about to sneeze or something

tried to draw from reference and then from imagination in a similar pose (used some reference for the right foot though).
i know im /beg/ but i get a lot better advices here than in /beg/ so I post here once in a while

drew boobs

man flatting and colors really exhaust me

>>4350797
I think the expressions look alright, the tongoe of the woman on the right just looks a bit flat

>>4352285
You need to really put your mind to drawing 3d objects and construction.

>>4352019
>>4351636
>>4351209
>asskissing mods
commit suicide

>>4345460
This might not be the right place to ask but I don't see a stupid questions thread up. I'm still /beg/ but have done some NSFW, would it still be a good idea to open myself up for commissions?

>>4352638
Cry about it. Leave if you don't like the rules.

>>4352698
pyw

Line is done, should I add balls like on rough or no

>>4352877
I mean, couldn't you just draw the balls on separate layers and make 2 versions? One with and one without balls

>>4352322
Excellent work. What’s flatting?

I gave up on it. As I Probably should’ve done earlier.

Let’s sneak one more in, before I get banned.

how to into hands holding/gripping objects

>>4353121
Filling in flat colors duh

>>4353123
I still don't understand inking at all.

First time animating...know it needs work but I’ve been drawing at least 3x a week past couple months to get better. Hope somebody enjoys it

>>4353131
not me also
>>4352322

>>4353123
I recognize your gross style. Just because you switch to furry doesn't mean it's more appealing.

>>4353228
>I recognize your gross style
Oh shit. I’m sorry.

>>4352877
What background should I make? Copied city or ruins? Keep in mind I'm not good at backgrounds

>>4353221
That's an incredibly detailed cock compared to the rest of this prelim.

>>4353228
What makes a style gross? How does one remedy it? Is it simply gross because it’s too /beg or is it actually a style?

>>4353265
If you don't find a fucking fun with a pencil head gross I don't know what to say

>>4345460
Any tips on building a following on twitter?

>>4348251
lmao her face and mouth.

>>4350810
wtf is this shit? kek.

>>4353221
gross and unappealing.

>>4350603
Imagine being this mad because your weird obsession with fake children isn’t allowed on ic LMFAOOO pedophiles are fucking weird freaks

>>4353273
I thought loomis was required reading in these parts?

>>4349666
I need to make one on either Newgrounds, instagram, or somewhere. For now I'm just on twitter... @mad_onyx
Thanks for asking~

i havent posted on this board in literally a decade but nel made me draw this

>>4353670
10 years and that’s all you can do wow

>>4353336
I'm gonna beat you up punkass

>>4353696
By your response alone, I'm 100% sure he's better than you lol.

colors always make me want to fucking quit

What anatomy for artist books are good if my end goal is drawing porn? The books I have now are almost entirely men.

more poses

>>4353281
Furry porn

>>4353129
draw the object underneath first, wrap the structure of the hand around it

>>4354307
ty

>>4351849
awkward pose, legs too small

>>4355090
looks good, sorry i didnt stop my post in time.

not a fucking joke
i am wagecuck wanted make hentai panel 2 or 3 page something like that
it doesn't matter even i can't publish on panda
i just want put my rage on that panel

should i master anatomy before i start?
i can handle clip studio little bit

how can i even start it? just copy panel?
i can post doodle or whatever crap i made it's on pixiv i draw 4-6 hours per day i will gonna post stuff i made too even that is shit

>>4354293
Should I use hashtags, retweet popular/unpopular art, etc.? I've been living under a rock for a couple of years, fresh account.

>>4355090
is there a guide to for forshortening limbs, or am i better off just practicing?

>>4355109
full disclaimer I fucking suck at this.
Most limbs are cylinder based. I usually throw down a bone base which is just a cylinder in perspective (further ellipse is more rounded and smaller than nearer ellipse) then build off of that.

>>4353670
Nice, that face is cute. I didn’t know you used to post here

Done and done

>>4355675
did you get around to make a version with balls?

>>4353670
What did your art look like before?

>>4355680
Nope

>>4355707
ah, too bad
i do really like how it turned out tho

>>4355675
Look better at the sketch phase for some reason.

>>4353670
>>4353741
I really like this design, would love to see a human version of her TF into this version.
I'm kinda iffy on the colors though. I wonder if coloring on such a dark grey is making you pick unintentionally muddier colors? My sense of color isn't great but idk I kind of find the palette unappealing.

>>4350190
They also use to have a literal children posting nudes, things have changed dumb fuck, stop wanking it to children

>>4353670
If it weren't for the dick, I'd really like this

I once thought it'd be a good idea to draw my penis. Not like drawing on it, but making a portrait of my penis. So, young me thought it would be a good idea to get naked, stand in front of the mirror with a sketchbook and do the thing. The thing in this case was nothing bad: look at my penis, draw a bit, look at my penis, draw a bit. I was so focused on this task, I didn't noticed when my mom had walked in the room. She stood there probably for a minute, dumbfounded. I guess she though her son was a retard, or a pervert. Or both. I can say proudly that I'm none of those. Anyway, my mom finally asked what the fuck I was doing, which startled me and made me drop my sketchbook. Unlucky me, the sketchbook fell on the floor flat open, but on a different page, on one of those where I drew some hentai. So my mom got closer and looked at it. Badly drawn girls with huge tits. How could I explain to her that I was not drawing that, but something more harmless: my own penis. That wasn't any better, was it. I was fucked. I was a pervert in the eyes of my mom. I wanted to disappear. To die. So I did the only thing I could think of. I held my cock, which by that moment was so shrunk of fear, it looked like a baby's penis. But I grabbed it regardless and scream at my mom: you fucking pervert, can't you see I'm naked here! She reacted in a way I didn't expect. She kicked me in my balls. You don't talk to your mother like that you fucking pervert. I couldn't talk anymore, I was barely able to breathe. I've never drawn anything since that day. I'm afraid of mirrors, and I lost half a testicle. This thread triggers me. I'm sorry.

>>4356555
I saw you mention on a previous thread you wanted to go all out with crumb hatching, but had trouble making it look appealing. I couldnt remember the name of the guy at the time but if you aren't aware of him already you should check out Paolo Eleuteri Serpieri

hi anon, im pretty new at coomer art, pls rate

>>4345460

>>4357819
2/10 face/hair and perspective
4/10 body details
6/10 gesture and rendering
10/10 hands

Only the goodest boys get a visit from Mrs. Claus.

What do you guys think/like/dislike about this piece?

>>4357931
thanks i hate it.

>>4357931
god I wish I could draw like that and then draw something else

>>4357453
>AUTISM

>>4357843
>10/10 hands
Kek. /beg/ spotted

>>4357931
>Old hags and shota kinks.
>rotten brain
Nice art, but can you be any more disgusting than this? Have you ever considered seeking help from specialists?

>>4357952
post your work, normalfaggot.

>>4357952
Seeking help for what? Some women are by nature hairy and aged women need love too. Also, these are niche commissions, they pay (and align with my fetishes).
>>4357955 is not me, I always pmw

Tried coloring for the first time in ages... shit sucks. If any one has tips for coloring in CSP that'd help I'd appreciate it.

>>4357931
Why does she looks so flat

>>4357931
The hair on the thighs is too excessive (hairy women won't get hair growth to that degree unless they had a hormone imbalance), otherwise pretty nice.
Definitely polish the joint lines on the guy, assuming you're finished.

How's this looking

>>4357968
you got a blog?

>>4358232

pixiv id is 24103472
'NGMI' on deviantart and
'exodusisnear' on hentai foundry

>>4357968
>and align with my fetishes
That's what I'm saying.
Necrophilia and pedophilia.
I repeat, can you be any more disgusting than this?

>>4358159
Weird and rigid, don't try animation when you can barely draw a human figure.

>>4358580
>can you be any more disgusting than this?
sweet summerchild, you haven't seen my disgusting drawings

>>4357968
I think its good to diversify but the way you draw your older women kinda reeks of "unf my weird fetishes" instead of trying to capturing any of the emotion. Maybe its just me.

>>4358710

>>4357787
Oh yeah I'm a huge fan of that guy hes great

>>4348251
>>4352322

this is hot af dude.
Got anywhere I can follow you?

>>4359087
Twitter.com/Smutbrush

>>4356555
I don't think I can do anything but laugh at your art.

>>4359169
i dont care what with you do with it, i just like money.

>>4345460

>>4358710
got a blog?

FUTANARI=AUTISM

>>4359192
>I DONT LIKE THING

nice post

>>4359184
This thread is for NSFW that you made yourself, not other people's work.
This isn't a anime porn dump thread like the ones you yank your 2 incher to on /v/

>>4359221
Cry harder, kiddo.

>>4359229
not as hard as your mum crys at the failure she raised before me.

help, does this body part even exist? how to conect leg to hip?

i have to sit down and figure out how Modeseven colors, color is really hard for me right now

>>4359325y
your colors are absolute garbage, why don't you just use a ref to emulate literally the easiest way

>>4359280
Its not a body part its hip fat. Its optional and shows up on certain body types.

>>4359329
yeah thats what i said you ape

How do I git gud?

>>4359356
from what ive seen of all your art, you really need to work on forms, all of you stuff looks flat and warped. i'd like to see some underdrawings

>>4357936
I think the face is cute/sexy

The proportions of the limbs and the perspective are all fucked up though.
Just use this as a learning experience i suppose. Seems like you got a bit overambitious.

>>4359325
Disgusting

>>4359359
Thank you, anon.

>>4359429
Very helpful thanks for the critique you know your stuff

>>4359435
No problem

>>4359390
Judging by thumbnail, I thought this was a bee or wasp girl.
What is that supposed to be

>>4359448
why would you say "no problem" and accept thanks when that was my comment. such a pointless weird sociopathic thing

>>4359472
I didn't know it was that important to you, dipshit.

>>4359488
but why would you even say it, you werent part of that conversation at all. and now youre being super hostile, whats wrong wih you?

>>4359472
You're reacting like this over such an insignificant response while calling him a sociopath is disturbingly ironic
>>4359496
>gaslighting

>>4359496
There's people here drawing awful creatures with giant dicks and shit like that and you're worried for that? really?

>>4359497
????? and now youre pretending youre somebody else? are you autistic or something wtf

>>4359499
take your meds you schitzo lunatic

>>4359506
>schizo lunatic

yeah okay but pretending to be someone else and replying to a conversation isnt weird at all fuck off im in the right here

>>4359512
except that never happened.
Pay attention you crazy cuck.

>>4359455
think thats corona chan

>>4359515
Yeah it did. Some guy gave critique, op said thanks, and for some reason someone who wasn't the original critiquer said "no problem" as though it was him. It's really odd.

>>4359180
You were drawing this gross shit before you were getting commissions, dumbass.

>>4355078
is there any books on legs/how muscle squishes together? I feel leg length and how the muscles work together is a huge hurdle for me.

Still trying to find a comfortable style that I think can be marketable.

>>4345460
Threads like this cement my belief that women should avoid men who watch anime cause they have bisexual tendencies

>>4359801
What about women with bisexual tendencies?

>>4359805
Bisexuality isn’t real

>>4359813
What about me, I'm greedy for ass and a cute face?

>>4359814
Most often than not bisexuals meme their fetish for homosex into a sexuality

>>4357823

>>4359815
What about trap on female, futa on female or futa on trap?

>>4359817
Addiction to sex stimuli

>>4359820
I'm gonna need a copy of your MCATs or I'll have to call you a literal who with no real argument familam.

>>4359822
Ok coomer

>>4359823
>Literal who on 4channel.com board-/ic/ using discord tranny memes at 4am
Are you proud?

>>4359827
Dude. Oscar Wilde has a famous quote who goes like “Those who go beneath the surface do so at their peril”. You watch jaded shit you became jaded. Simple as that.

>>4359832
>quoting Oscar Wilde
>going to a porn thread on 4chan,at 4am, spouting discord tranny memes
>still think you're in the right
gain a modicum of self awareness or just kill yourself you retard.

>>4359835
(You)

>>4359839
Go post a wojak or actually make a difference in the life you want cringe inducing nigger, posting on /ic/ about your ideals won't do shit. If this is how you cope, consider you're on the spectrum and you should end your misery in a real way.

>>4359835
>taking the bait at 4am like a good little sucker
>still a jaded little sucker blowing off coomers pennies like a good little whore
>pretends this thread hasn't been flooded with gay animu trap and fagshit

>>4359843
Why even come on here then?

>>4359845
(You)

>>4359879
It isn't bad, but eyes are to high and mouth is to big, this raise a question, did you draw the belts and than placed the face based on that?

>>4359935
*Too high and too big ffs

>>4359935
Shit, yeah you're right. The belts didn't come before the eyes but they did before the mouth

>>4358710
Apparently all of your subject matter is disgusting.
NGMI is a pretty good pseudonym. Shame.

>>4359986
pyw

>>4359992
kys

>>4360001
bad portfolio tbhyngmifamilam

>>4359325
>>>/d/

>>4359692
Torso is too flat and the shoulders are too wide. The tits look like they're being pulled off to each side. Remember to give them depth and not just width. Don't be afraid to draw the hair big and going off the page.

>>4360281
Thanks for the redline and critique! This helps a lot, I struggle a bit with drawing and quite a bit with keeping proportions in check. I usually jump into painting and then get caught up in a tunnel vision.

>>4360281
anything horrifically wrong with this?

i drew this girl for a commission, just about finished, it look okay?

>been posting in these threads for months
>either always get ignored or just utter toxicity from users
>unironically get more feedback when i post in /beg/ or discord
Yeah, i think im done with this place.
Have fun being a dead general, retards.

>>4361017
which one are you? ill give you critique

>>4361060
Don't need your pity crits now.
Its too late.

>>4361154
Post it or leave man, this is not the vent thread.

>>4361169
I already said im done here.
No point in being passive aggressive like this just to get the last word.

>>4361171
Just GTFO already.