/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Posted in the last thread towards the very end, just a sketch for now.

>>4351214
AYYY IT'S MY ART GOTTEM

>>4351222
>>4351275

>>4351276
shid u right anon, didn't even notice that, should be an easy fix though. Thanks mang.

>>4351257
kyoot

first guy in a while

Not really happy with this but also not sure what to do with it, or if I should even keep working on it

AHHHH why can't I create souless chinese anime renders

>>4351345
Go to the Anime Study Generals for that

A few pieces from the previous thread.

>>4351129
>>4350983

>>4351262
>artist clout or something more?
Latter.

>coom
Not interested.

>>4351344
It looks ok to me. What don't you like about it? I think the only big issue I see is his shirt looks weird in the sleeves and where it tucks into his pants, also his arms are posed very stiff.

>>4351351
>>coom
>Not interested
Ok, you're a little based.

>>4351348
I do go there but I wanted to express my grief here

>>4351345
this but unironically.

i want every faggots here to dilate and fuck off

>>4351429
based

>>4351429
I once sucked a dick for $1000, dilating will be $5000

>>4351411
I was being completely unironic already my friend

I'll be drawing more of her :)

>>4351469
What is going on with her shoes?
Also too much pink.

>>4351503
she's going Self Contained Underwater Breathing Apparatus diving later

>>4351503
looks like one of those floor cleaning slippers for lazy people that are supposed to mop the floor as you walk

First drawing in awhile!
asking for general critique!

>>4351344
Really cute OC, great design and very exprrssive artwork. Mind if i masturbate to it?

>>4351515
you should either try to make it more 3 dimensional or stylize it more, in the current state it feels like neither here or there

>>4351755
Like add darker shading?

>>4351333
his pose is awkward. try to imagine it in 3D space. his right shoulder is too high. his chin is too pointy.
>>4351344
are we supposed to have POV of the guy holding him down? if so why does his right arm extend into the upper left corner? why is the subject looking to the right when we’re above him? the color of the hands and the bed are too similar, they blend together
>>4351469
the brushy shit on the bottom of her left foot shouldnt be swept to the left like that, it should be straight pressed onto the ground. shes missing a neck. the underlying anatomy is weird. if shes a humanoid than shes missing a neck and her shoulders are too high
>>4351515
fluoride stare. her legs are misshapen and the lines around her fingers are too light
>>4351751
the lines of the object above him are too thin it looks inconsistent

>>4351771
maybe, now that you mention it i think it could work, but i was referring to the linework mainly

>>4351780
Ohh I see yeah I suck at line art i can see now it’s really not dynamic enough

>>4351697
I like the shading on the fists

>>4351697
Blog?

I hope I can fill this page with more colourful stuff soon

>>4351888

>>4351889
Can’t believe it didn’t post twice

>>4351864
one good face and youve regressed.. for shame asukashitter

>>4351898
i didnt like them actually

>>4351798
@lunydoobles

A few more poses down.

>>4351864
Grind more poses, work smaller if you have to. A problem I run into often is going too big and getting stiff poses like that

Someone from here asked to see how I would draw Jenny Wakeman. Can't find the thread but I assume they recognised me from here.
Anyway if you're reading this then dude you were right. It's hard to find something to focus in on with a character who has such a simple design. I ended up giving her clothing as a way of trying to make the simple sleak original design pop but I don't think I was that successful. Interesting challenge and highlights some things I need to think about. So thanks guy.

I tried to color this one from greyscale
It's not finished yet

>>4351935
Trash boat

>>4351972
that's pretty alright, i just don't dig the red from the cape's interior, maybe go for a red that's more pastel? this one's too strong. Idk, experiment a bit with it maybe

>>4351963
that's pretty good

>>4351977
I think I used a very dark value for the cape in the greyscale layer. I will try to see if it looks better on an overlay/hard light layer.
Thanks, I appreciate it

>>4351958
ok sir I understand
what do you think about this face
I experimented with the classical sculpture style

>>4352020
feel the form better

>>4352020
This is pretty good. Honestly if figures aren’t fun for you, you could always stick mainly with portrait stuff. People even get hired with that alone

>>4352046

nonononononoo they are fun I had fun drawing what I drew I wanna draw full figures always I try to always practice
I think I am getting better anyway compared to 2 months ago definitely

>>4351935
these are amazing, what courses did you learn from ?

>>4352047
Good to hear it. There’s no “right” way to do art, so just try to improve at the stuff you really want to portray and enjoy drawing

Pic not mine, I just like YW

>>4352047
Shut the FUCK up you fucking dog. Stop spamming your ugly, disjointed, gaunt faced corpse girl that somewhat resembles Asuka Langley. Your art is unexcusable garbage. You draw those ugly faces on purpose. You aren't improving and never will. Fall down a well and fucking die, canid.

>>4352057

>>4352062
I accept your concession

>>4352072
Go back to drawing your deformed fuckass inklings, dbz faggot

>>4352075
Weep and kneel, retard. Concession accepted.

>>4351963
Jesus fufk what was your blog again?

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>>4351893
cool

>>4351361
I think it's just kind of messed up on a fundamental level, like what you mentioned with the gesture. I was also unhappy with the face and got some help fixing it, and messed with the arm a little but it's still not what I want. I think I just have to move on and try harder next time, since fixing this would entail basically redrawing the whole thing.

>>4351557
Thanks anon, I would be flattered

>>4351344
your proclivity for surgery is concerning

>>4352135
Regarding the arm, assuming you mean the resting one, I think it's a good start. Maybe have the forearm bend more rowards the guy's hip and not have it bend at 90 degrees? Not really a horrible thing or something that ruins the piece, but it almost feels like he's "pretending" to look like he's lying down? I dunno if that makes sense, but having it bent more and maybe have the hand go under his body would make it seem less flat.

>>4351963
Blog?

>>4352051
Never took a course outside a single introductory course in college. I used to do a lot of gesture drawing/quick sketch as a warm up.

>>4352194
fine keep your secrets

>>4351864
>>4352020
Why didn't you finish the Asuka in the sweater? I thought that one was really working

>>4352226
i dunno man I never finish anything in life

>>4351963
Hot

>>4351697
I'm getting trigger promare vibes from this

>>4352135
Fair enough, man. I'm not going to overly flatter you or anything, but it looks very competent regardless of the flaws it has. I wouldn't obsess over it, just move on and try to make the next one even better.

>>4352235
>never finish anything
>just edging all the time
Tough life bro

>>4351776
Thanks for the critique

>>4352211
its probably vilppu

>>4349360
Im the guy who created the character. ANd i really like this !! Good job with it. Especially the clothes.

>>4351344
your colors, line-work, and over all cleanliness is great nessie, you only need push your poses and expressions more in my opinion. pic-related is different pose, attempting to push a more reluctant reaction to the hand-holding.
you also could have gone with a darker cast shadow and less illuminated areas where the attacker's body would be looming over the boy.

also the arms pinning him to the table made me think of that sonic poster with his legs splayed apart.

>>4352311
nice expression

is that you sycra?

>>4352383
No

Sekiro

>>4352389
>thumbnail
wow you're really getting there-
>open file
eyes too droopy

>>4352435
That's my sister you faggot

>>4352438
Fix your sister..

>Look ma no refs
Still trying to get pen scribbles to look classy, I’ll give it a few more days

Fuck faces, i hate them

>>4352389
I like the general aesthetic, but I agree her eyes look a little too droopy imo.

>>4352389
FOR FUCKS SAKE STOP SPAMMING THIS BOARD WITH YOUR GARBAGE HEADS
GO STUDY LOOMIS HEADS AND CONSTRUCTION FOR A COUPLE OF MONTHS THEN COME BACK

>>4352383
Thanks, but no. I'm working on my expressions, I'm really glad that you like it

>>4352389
I LIKE IT

>>4352463
>>4352057
You alright son?

>>4352460
>Fuck faces, i hate them
Too real

just having fun

>>4352521
pretty nice but stop hiding them hands

>>4352525
not sure what I want her to do yet
might have her holding some gasoline/tools and working on a car

>>4352460
Tried to study this popsicle girl, and these cheap ass markers couldn’t hold their refill and just bled out - i need a lunch break or something

>>4352506
I think I’m missing the part of my brain that is required to draw a face. Every picture has a face, i hate it. Why do people like looking at faces so much. I just don’t get it.

>>4352463
Not him but pyw

>>4352531
What about having her hands touch her crotch gently, inviting the viewer to an orgasm of visual pleasure?

>>4352590
yeah maybe

>>4351222
Finished the sketch, gonna work on my next primary, any suggestions other than what >>4351276 said? Figured I'd do that as I draw the next image.

still trying to improve my coloring. i'm kinda happy about the hair but idk how to color fabric without it looking very unnatural

One of the best shit i created since the beggining of the year. Thoughts?

>>4352701
It's unfinished.

>>4352701
you're gonna be broken hearted when you can't find the rest of the composition. spent too much time on the details, you're losing the image

>>4352701
That thigh is way to skinny

>>4352601
lower the navel

>>4352311
have this (you)

>>4352701
nice eyes nigga

>>4352420
I like it

>>4352737
good call, thanks

>>4352847
This is pretty good but I think her arms are slightly, just slightly too long

>>4352847
I want to fuck her in that coat

>>4352699
WHERE'S THE FORM
STOP THINKING ABOUT MUHSTYLE AND RENDERING FOR TWO FUCKING SECONDS AND DO SOME FUCKING STUDIES

>>4352847

>>4352701
love the color choices

>>4352699
You need to be able to replicate fabric fairly realistically to be able to color it well.

>>4353076

>>4351935
Where do you get your pose references?

>>4353091
I feel the gesture

I can understand why someone like Nessie gets a lot of yous, but I don't understand all the attention pseudo-asuka shitter gets.

>>4352701
B l o g

>>4351257
i feel like im ruining it by trying to render

Spiraling down the drain, lads. Need to study more but I get burnt out on studying then want to draw for fun, then I churn out a big fat slop of shit like this.

Style test for comic I want to start on.
Anybody have good recs of really good really dynamic manga artists?

>>4351935
This is fantastic way to showcase the character design process.

>>4352359
Thanks a lot for the redline. I was gonna put this down but decided to mess with it some more because your redline/crit gave me some ideas and I'm a bit happier with it now, thank you.
>you only need push your poses and expressions more in my opinion. pic-related is different pose, attempting to push a more reluctant reaction to the hand-holding.
Yeah, I definitely should have pushed the pose and messed with the expression more before I started. I was going for an overwhelmed, but not unwilling look. Something more submissive than reluctant.

>>4352137
I made characters for a story about a doctor and now I am cursed to draw surgery-themed art for the rest of eternity, it is the burden I bear.

Oh god please help me, I can't make this face right no matter how many tries

>>4353481
What is "right"? The perspective? The expression? What do you want it to look like

>>4352701
>coloring before finishing the sketch

your life will be very VERY fucking hard if you keep up this habit

>>4353481
boi you got more to worry about than just the face

>>4351222
>lunydoobles
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>>4351344
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>>4351515
>>4351697
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>>4351864
>>4351877
>>4351893
>>4351972
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>>4353076
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>>4353204
Critique

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5-PWGUWjYWY

>>4353537
>completely skipped over your work
haha th-thanks

>>4353537
pyw

>>4353537
fuck off

>>4353537
>actually stealing work and using it to boost his shitty channel
I wish we had mods

Finished this. And I think I finally figured out a way of painting that I actually enjoy.

>>4353682
>people shitposting other people’s art without posting their work themselves
Yeah mods would be pretty nice on /ic/

>>4353682
>>4353700
Then this place would become too decent.

>>4353698
dinner Saturday?

>>4353706
Ha, you're the same person who brought up DAD last thread, right? I was actually planning on trying it starting with this piece, thanks for reminding me about it. I need a break now tho

>>4353698
your colors lose potency on a full render but you're heading in the right direction. keep it up! i would suggest trying to work faster, though - you post at least 3-4 wips of every piece. being able to hash out lots of ideas and concepts will lead to more finished pieces.

>>4353110
please keep going, this is charming

>>4353712
Huh, are you thinking of me? I usually post 2 wips tops (I did 2 for this one), or just straight to the final version if it's quick. But yes, this took me very long, had to figure lots of things out. I think it'll be quicker now that I've figured out this painting workflow.

>>4353711
and dont stress about missing deadlines, its my third time getting to level 3 because im just busy all the time

>>4353537
>He started by spaming your style/my style threads
>Now he's moving on to every single general
Is no place safe?

Also, how long have you been on this board? I noticed in your vids you don't seem to know the name of a lot of posters.

>>4353728
hes a redditor faggot who says things like "u mad bro" unironically and just came here and tried to become a "personality" like every other retard with no self awareness thats done this over the years.

Any feedback welcomed.

I think it's a little bit too saturated and im not sure about that green around the torso. I will be back later on it later at the end of the month tho so maybe i will change some things then.

>>4353537
thanks for the crit, but i dont post finished art on /ic/ much

>>4353537
god i cant wait for you to crit me so i can strike your video

>>4353829
desu this probably *does* count as fair use

>>4353537
Is there any way to keep you from doing this to one's art in the future? Because I hate the idea of my art being used as "content" for some guys channel, and would prefer to not be in these videos at all. If you have crit why not just type it up and post it in the threads.

>>4353839
id like to see that fat stupid blubbering gook try

>>4353537
Thanks chop suey guy

>>4353289
Since no one has said it yet and I think you deserve the (you) this is really cool. Pleasing to look at both color-wise and looks well proportioned. Good job anon. Do you post this anywhere or can I see more?

>>4353855
>>4353537
Can you just use a trip code, and if we want our stuff reviewed we will just reply to you or a thread you made and ask for review

kill yourself unoriginal youtuber attentionwhore shitcunt

>>4353537
Just use a trip already so I can filter you ugly chink face

>>4353537
I'm going to DMCA you channel if you use my work again

>>4354094
>>4354140
Honestly, he seems like a newfag, don't think he even knows what a tripcode is.
And probably posts "Who's Moot?" unironicly.

>>4353537

the ching Chong is actually not that bad. Its not the meme fest I thought it would be

>>4353797
Maybe this is just preference, bit I think the eyes should be further apart, specifically an eye's width apart

>>4354175
that's because you're bad

>>4354187
no u

>>4353289
this is lovely

>>4352532
Did this one sans ref, but had to go digital because I was burning paper trying to lock in the sketch

Any feedback before I print for inking and color?

>>4353396
Hey, I read your comic. Good stuff.

not gonna post work anymore until the corona bug fucks off

>>4354333
Based trip poster

>>4354336
fuck off

>>4354336
you are a god among men

>>4354336
is this the based department

>>4354336
based
>>4354339
cringe

>>4354336
Looks very cool. If it were me I would add a line near the upper arm to make the back more visible, if you get what I mean.

>>4354343
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>>4354377
i dont get it whats the big deal, is that a specific character or something?

>>4354381
samefag/reverse crab

just ignore them and go draw

some chart im making

>>4354395
must be cozy in that comfort zone

>>4354395
Very nice

>>4353728
He DID say he was gonna start shitting up /alt/ in another thread, but I’m pretty sure that’s been deleted.

ok what about this kind of face

>>4354443
kys

>>4354395
this genuinely has potential, but you need to limit your colour range and maintain a consistent line quality to make it work. try to pull up some ref for orientation.

>>4354395
id put this up as a poster on my wall

>>4352359
redline anon pls give me your blog

>>4351344
wow, we have a porn thread. use it please

I did this to get some quick likes but I have zero interest in this character

>>4354248
I’m kind of rusty, I’ll fix it up a bit then color when i get back

>>4354090
Thank you, I haven’t posted it yet but it’ll be up soon on @ohheythatfisher on twitter

>>4353493
The perspective I guess

>>4353513
do you have any suggestions what I can fix?

>>4354492
Somehow you managed to make him look like a lesbian lol
Maybe move the eyes up more
And the pinky and ring fingers are as long/longer than the middle and index fingers

>>4354509
god I love when you do digital

>>4354492
the neck doesn't seem centered, even though it's a tilted pose

>>4354570
nice progress, keep improving!

>>4354443
reminds me of a dog i had that had droopy eyes.... maybe lower them and make sure the eye facing the viewer isn't drifting off to the side of her face

>>4354570
Stop fucking around and learn proper anatomy. You also need to do more figure drawing to solidify your studies.

>>4354570
Face too manly

>>4354605
He will never learn as long as people keep sucking his dick, once hes out posting his shit and nobody gives a fuck outside of the ones from here, he will finally realize how shit he is, because if he really wants the cloud he either caters to a niche or becomes uber good or just draw porn like the #9744515 drawfag otherwise he's just gonna be a another slowfag and in the future another stagnatefag like nosefag, mikufag gainsgoblin etc

>>4354643
but I've only been drawing for 5 months :(

>>4354647
and recived about x100 times more help than anyone ever yet you are still making the same mistakes that people warned you from the beginning

status: NGMI

>>4354657
that's with everything in my life

>>4354643
>>4354657
Post work or begone, Sataniaposter

>>4354669
Prove that im wrong first

>>4353682
You are posting in a public forum. Artwork and critique section /ic/

If you don't want to be critique then why the fuck are posting here.

>>4354719
Asking for critique isn't asking to be used as fodder for a youtube video

>>4353700 I don't shitpost. I tell you about my opinions in your face. And with my face. I don't hide.

>>4353537
FUCK OFF FROM /ALT/ YOU FUCKING CHINK ATTENTION WHORE PIECE OF SHIT.
WE DON'T WANT YOUR SHITTY CRITS POLLUTE /ALT/

>>4354724
If you're gonna use lack of anonymity as your gimmick please just use a trip or something

>>4354721
I do it on YouTube because I want to improve my English language. I hold myself accountable. And my intent is very clear since the beginning, draw more and Git gud. It is a win win for me. I draw, you draw, we create content. Everyone wins. Draw more. Stop giving excuses.

>>4354727
I have already shown my face. And I can't be bothered.

>>4353537
you're absolutely clueless stop it with your buzzwords bingo and faked personality

>>4354657
based

>>4354647
Dont listen to sataniafag he is worse than a tripfag

>>4354735
And you draw like shit, it’s practically blind leading the blind.

>>4354785
Lmao that is exactly why I need to do it.

>>4351963
You did great. I love how you retain some of the flat abstracted quality of her features while adding more depth and nuance.
I did a (crappy) drawing not too long after talking to you, after seeing your post today ended up sketching her a bunch on my boogie board and did this sketch on my tablet >>4354786 before I went to work tonight. I felt I should reciprocate since I asked you to draw her, and translating Jenny's design is fun anyways.

>>4354735
>want to improve my English language
How are you gonna improve by having a one sided conversation?

>youtuber
as if fags isn't bad enough, the absolute state of this board

>>4353537
Can someone copyright this gook piece of shit

>>4353537

>>4354794
by pronouncing English words properly and going on the fly with art critique.

The feedback I gotten from /ic/ was that I wasn't articulated enough.

That is true because everything was done on the fly, I need to be able to speak and be coherent while catching up with my train of thoughts. I assure you, after my 1,000 video upload, I will be good at it. Please give ma chance!

I know it's hard for a retarded incel cum gargling self fellating semen sipping exploitative ESL attention whore like you to understand but one-off crits on an anonymous artwork/critique imageboard are completely different from using people's shit for youtube clicks when no one said you could

The first four rows features Cerise, the last row features Miara. At the point of C4-IV, I ran out of ideas and wanted to wrap this sheet up. This should keep me busy for the next month or so.

Which to keep, which to redraw at a different angle, and which to revise?

>>4354934
keep none of them
redraw none of them
stop posting here cocksucker

>>4354934
Why do you work on so many projects at once? Juggling all this would make my brain melt out of my skull.

But seriously, trash at least half of them. Keep it quality over quantity.

Crits? I feel like the color and lighting is garbage but I can't put my finger on anything in particular. Perspective is a goner but I can't be bothered to fix that atm.

>>4354570
The hair makes it look like her head is freakishly long. Watch out for that

>>4354979
My immediate read is that you need more warm tones in the background to contrast it further from the foreground. Right now both the fore and background are cold toned even though you're implying a warm light.

>>4354979
Lighting is not accurate for the girl. Her hair should have more lighting due to where the sun is at and some small blue changes to the jacket where the light hits. I would also try to have some dust on the ground or in front of them for effect small details can add up to huge things almost always. It's not so bad.

>>4354395
Keep going anon. Definitely great work. I would also try looking at some trippy or abstract work for colors as inspiration if you feel a bit lost. Especially some Android Jones or even Alex Grey.

>>4354890
This

>>4354934
are you still drawing all of these in note 8? That's pretty impressive tho

With all of your weaponized autism combined, you could all dislike the video so it doesn't get recommended to anyone else. Or just report the shit video out of the cum guzzling clout whore

>>4354890
I don't need your fucking permission to do anything, fuck you you fascists piece of shit.

>>4355040
>fascists
newfags i swear to god
Dont forget to report his video

I don't know what I'm doing anymore
I need critiques, everyone else just says "nice" and nothing else

>>4355051
Not nice
But seriously, what the fuck am i looking at here?

>>4355058
I appreciate the honesty, and that is all the information that I needed. Thank you.

>>4355051
honestly, this is so heavily stylized it's hard to critique it. It looks like clip art or something, if that's what you were going for.

critique please? :)

>>4355051
More contrast would help a lot, it is hard to read the shapes because they all blend into one another

>>4353537
In case anyone does not want their art in his video, he posted this.
boonhow.desu@gmail.com

>>4355075
>wordfiltered
heh...

>>4354509
The best part of drawing is putting fishnets on spider gwen, but i had to draw them blind because the markers covered the undersketch... I almost asphyxiated myself i was holding my breath for half the drawing.

Maybe I’ll post process a background in

>>4355110
Here was the final sketch / color test

>>4354563
Only the sketch was digital, i printed it for inking and color

>>4355051
nice

Trying out a new brush
I cant seem to make the steam look right though

>>4355051
nothing else

>>4354005
Social media or streams?

>>4351234
trash

>>4353797
The lower body anatomy looks wonky but the lighting in this is cool

>>4352046

you are delusional

Quick wireframe/quick value study.

...which I then colored, because why not?

>Alternative art

>Thread is just full of manga

Amawus everybody.

>>4355136
stop forcing this its lame you reddit retard

crit me pls

>>4355190
Blog?

>>4355136
>full of manga
You fucking wot m8

>>4355136
>If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.

read you dumb nigger

>>4355191
@sorarinnnnn

>>4351758
nice

>>4355190
pose is extremely stiff, should practice gestures more imo.

>>4355233
youre right, its just hard to put that into practice alot of times and i go back to safe poses

>>4355233
>stiff meme

>>4355239
I feel you. There's nothing necessarily wrong with that pose(anatomically or anything), it's just extremely plain and lifeless. I looked at your twitter too, you have a nice way of rendering, but your anatomy looks like it could use a little work. A lot of your pics have really small hands/forearms in comparison with the rest of the body. I would spend a little more time mapping out the proportions and making sure they're right, even measuring them if you have to. Cute art though, you're def gonna make it if you keep trying to improve and don't listen to cocksuckers like >>4355246

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>>4355044
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81GbDYoZPMc

Yeaaah gonna stop posting my shit till Corona chang leaves

>>4355287
Like your art is any good in the first place, faggot.

>>4355287
this but actually without any irony. being clickfodder for these soulless chink videos is so fucking unappealing to me. the whole point of using 4chan is that we're self-contained on this site, and everyone giving/receiving critique is anonymous. as soon as you start posting everything to youtube, it just feels fucking wrong. not to mention, no one wants to watch these fucking 20 min videos just to hear your 5 shitty seconds of critique, just write it down like a normal person.

>>4355287
Will you stop drawing?

>>4355296
No, I want to improve my English and my art. Best way to learn and improve myself. Please let me critique. I will improve the video and critique soon.

>>4355296
he's lawful normie to boot, disgusting. the kind of guy to laugh too loud with unfocused eyes at rage comics

>>4355297
Course not, i'm just not gonna post here.

>>4355304
Good. Keep drawing. When you need some c&c

>>4355304
Phew, good keep drawing. Stay classy.

>>4355298
what does that have to do with improving english

>>4355261
thanks anon

>>4355314
Because I get to practice English while at the same time express my thoughts on the fly. I am trying be coherent and master the use of language while I catch up with my train of thoughts. It is challenging desu.

>>4355319
so does typing the crit in the thread

>>4355296
It feels very wrong to throw unfinished art into the youtube spotlight.

>>4355332
I see... but it is just for critique my dude, 5 to 1 m in second max...it is not like a full blown art analysis

>>4355246
>Word meme used as a meme.

>>4355347

telling someone to finish their art isn't really a critique. If you have nothing to say about a piece, you do not have to force yourself.

A lot of anons here just share their sketches.
I also see you have a thread already asking people for art that you could critique. You're getting butthurt because not only are you going into /alt/ you're also not really saying constructive about most of the work.

If you wanna do this, maybe you could redline and actually guide anons.

>>4355398
Look, I think you are confused. I think there are a few people in alt that assume that kind of unfinished look is actually good art. It is not, I have explained why that is the reason, it is because of those half-done work of famous artists being exhibited in art exhibitions.

I am moving around /ic/, my own thread clearly is being trolled. So I didn't touch on that. Lastly, I think most of /ic/ wants to be anon. Which I can respect, I am only exposing those who wants to be. And I am exposing myself.

In the end, I made a few people draw more, and that is my intent.

>>4355400
they're unfinished because we want to share our sketches, I don't think anyone here expects their half-done animu sketches to make it to a gallery. You do you, but you seem to already know and revel in what you've made.

>>4355400
no one posting here cares about art exhibition art dude

Daniel you triple son of a bitch there are other ways to practice your english or social media marketing that aren't even a fraction as faggy as this. And your constant shilling in not only here but also on other sites as well as your uncooperativeness about the whole deal makes it clear that you're just acting maliciously and selfishly.

>>4354643
But aren't you mikufag?

>>4355417
The tiger thread is evidence that I made other draw and have continue to motivate others to draw.

If you do not want to support my videos, don't click it. Hell, if you don't like my shit, dislike it.

I don't see why you have to get butthurt and make stupid claims. I have nothing but good intentions.

>>4355468
can we call you coronachan tho is that cool?

I will prove you wrong sataniachan I will learn you'll see

>>4355468
Do you eat bat soup?

>>4355287
>>4355296
Same, gonna post my next piece when it's done and i'm out.
Last thing /ic/ need is more /beg/ giving out crits like he know shits

>>4355272
>check comments
>the same fag that was trying to shill some literal who’s Picarto a few months ago is in there spouting "c-crabs!"
Like pottery.

>>4355287
>>4355296
Me too probably. It's clear the HAR guy has no interest in actually listening to people, the best thing to do is probably just to deprive him of art to steal for his videos before he gets bored and leaves.

>>4355777
>deprive him of art
should deprive him of (you)s instead

>>4354395

>>4355794

this is good i dig the bunny bitch

>"I just want to practice my engrish"
>"I just want to help anons draw"
any human being who isn't a low-functioning autist can recognize that this is complete bullshit
>unga bunga u butthurt
anyone would be butthurt after finding out they have to coexist with a literal retard like you
get it drilled through your thick skull that you and your channel were unwanted, unwarranted, and should be retroactively aborted immediately
back to shitposting on whatever singaporean basket weaving forums you crawled from

>>4355111
nice trips and exceptional work man

>>4355977
Thanks - nice dubs

Progress.

>>4355802
wack

love it

>>4355802
I like your design choices on this. If your technique were better, this would be 10/10.
Nice work nonetheless, keep it up. I really want to see this finished.

>>4356116

muh edit

also blog?

>>4355347
You can justify it to yourself all you want, it still doesn't make you right.

People in this thread are telling you that they don't want their work in your videos, yet you ignore them because YOU want it, so it's okay, right? It's not.

What you're doing isn't encouraging people to draw. You're stopping people from sharing their work on this forum because they don't want to be in your shit videos.

Don't use people's work without their explicit permission. And no, them posting their work here is not permission for your to exploit their art.

>>4353682
>>4353700
>rulefags on /ic/
ngmi

>>4356249
face was fine as it was, go edit the fucked up hands, arms and feet, faggot.

>>4355272
You couldn't just wait for that anoying noise to stop so you could make a slightly less shitty video? How are people suppose to take your mumbling shit seriously if you don't even make an effort? Dunning Kruger son of a bitch.

>>4352420
Kal Kestis.

>>4356271
Damn, bunch of you faggots are huge pussies. If something like that is gonna stop you from posting your shit art, then leave without making an announcement. You are only saying that just for attention.

>>4353537
WTF most of his critiques and advice are legitimately good.

Can we please have more posters like this guy.
Respect for not hiding your face either.

>>4356504
This. Chingchong is a huge faggot but you guys are acting like twitter.

go >>4356539

>>4353537
This dude is based as fuck.

Good and fair crits

Contrarians have arrived. Funny how it's a bunch at almost the same time.

samefag

LOL

Someone's mad people don't like him shilling his shitty videos

>>4355319
If people don’t want you to do this with their art, why don’t you just make vids about something else. Critique movies or games. Vlog I guess. Skits. There’s so many things