/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Gentlemen, upon further consideration and with a great deliberation on the part of myself and my colleagues, I have decided with a certainty and solemnity befitting the gravity of the situation, that I will in fact COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

thank you for your time

a color test for a RWBY commission
>>4322822
Cool shapes. Blog?

>>4322824
ty!

Twitter.com/Smutbrush

An attempt was made

>>4322823
Try reconstructing her left leg, it becomes far too thin at the knee

>>4322889
>left
Anon are you okay

>>4322895
Right, sorry
I should probably go to bed

>>4322822
Okay I like this

>>4322818
I repeat; what's the point of construction if you don't follow any perspective rules?
Instead of drawing 3d objects, you draw 2d shapes.

>>4322889
Adjusted Thanks!

>>4322822
The dick ruins it desu but I'm just not into futa.

>>4322889
Good lines.

>>4322816
The hentai foundry link has all the images in it fucked by photobucket.

I need help. I dont know what to do...
My shit is unappealing and boring.
I posted in the earlier thread.

I hoped that thicker lineart and using a textured brush would help me but its not that hot.

How do I improve from here?

Im not hoping to finish this piece just hoping to get an idea of what to do from here.

>>4323254
need to work on fundies, it's basically a rendered anime head on top of a vaguely human shaped blob

>>4323280

I dunno where I went wrong with my attempt at construction, any advice? Note that this was upscaled horribly before the lineart.

>>4323287
post the whole picture thats just annoying dude

>>4323328
Okay, sorry. Its just the part I was trying to work with when it came to trying other methods for the future.

Personaly I feel a lot of the problems show up when I do the lineart and colouring.

Okay, sorry. Its just the part I was trying to work with when it came to trying other methods for the future.

Personaly I feel a lot of the problems show up when I do the lineart and colouring.
Also reposted with all of it and deleted old post. To be more helpful.

>>4323334
well maybe stop drawing landwhales if you want your art to be appealing.

>>4323334
that's fucked mate
your forms are kind of okay in some parts and flat and weird in others, looks like you make an okay-ish under drawing and then ignore it entirely when you go in on the lines. it seems almost like you copied something and then went over it again on your own and fucked it up. arms and limbs are stubby and formless, clavicle shoulder and neck are 2d and the heads look pasted on.

i think the main problem that im seeing here is that from what i can tell it seems like you drew a normal body and then tried to thicken her up by adding an even layer of fat around her entire body, making them look like sausage people instead of allocating it naturally.

>>4323354
also you're not respecting the planes of construction at all, i think you dont understand 3d form very well, the point of breaking things down into simple chapes is that youre supposed to be able to handle sim[ple shapes easier, if you break an arm down into a few cylinders, youre supposed to know how to manipulate and accurately draw a cylinder in 3d space from any angle or else it's pointless

>>4323354
>your forms are kind of okay in some parts and flat and weird in others

Fair. Arms especially here are bad, Ive been doing studies of arms and hands the last couple of days to get better at it for whatever I try to do next. Im hoping that it will at least help with the issue on stubby arms and hands that look like crap in the future. Here I only tried different colours and lineart.

>>4323359
>also you're not respecting the planes of construction at all, i think you dont understand 3d form very well

Hence you say I need to take another look at the fundamentals again I guess. Makes sense and it might be what frustrates me.

For the left one I used airbrush and blur tool, middle was attempt at using a textured brush. Any suggestion on which of these are best to use in the future?

And thanks for your input.

>>4322824
She has T-Rex arms, and boobs don't squish like that unless they sag enough she can throw them over her shoulders. There are plenty of drawn and RL porn images in this position. Look them up for reference. Also the dude looks bored/disgusted? Also why is he winking? She needs to be looking the other way in his direction even though realisticly she wouldn't be able to see him from that position but at least it reinforces that THEY are fucking and she's not just eyeing a piece of cake somewhere across the room.

>>4322946
Dont bother he wont learn from you or anyone else and has proved this by posting the exact same shit drawn in the same way for literal fucking years, this guy has ingrained some near useless circle construction that was only ever meant for beginners to grasp how joints work and has never moved past it to a more intuitive natural flow of gesture combined with construction. Hide his posts and ignore.

>>4323395
>the dude looks bored or disgusted
Not that anon but that is sort of in character for him. He's sort of the stoic badass archetype

>>4323395
Thanks for the critique. Is it passable now?
The arm lenght + boob squish issue combined made me gave up on that pose, so i decided to make him hold her with both her arms on her back. Also fixed the eyes and added the hair pulling thing (the client previously asked for this). By the way, he's supposed to be containing himself

>>4323523
Wtf am i watching?

>>4323727
I'm not the best at big squishy boobs but make it something more like this. Consider adding a tight shirt or something thats halfway up the tits that'll ad some more curves. Look at Legomans stuff hes good at drawing bit squishy tits.

>>4323841
That makes perfect sense. The table's perspective looks better now too, thanks.

trying Leonardo app

>>4324300
Creepy

>>4323352
Your anatomy is wonky even in the lineart.
You got cankle wrists. Poorly drawn hands.
Your lineart for the face doesnt match to the sketch. You need to work on the perspective of the eyes and mouth. And the breast looks weird.0

something from yesterday

Just made a NSFW twitter, @LiquidFireX

>>4323352
i feel like theres a flow to her that youre half ignoring.

thin lineart is trendier btw

>>4324791
i hate paper-thin lineart

>>4324787
You can't explain people into liking your art. They either like it or they don't. Take critiques and try to implement changes even if you are afraid to. Try something else and maybe it works or it doesn't but don't cling to whats not working otherwise you'll be the next Gains Goblin.

>>4324300
Reminds me of psychonauts

>>4324759
I like your style.

>>4324759
Rework the feet, they look like stubs. Have her standing on her tip toes

How the fuck do I pick a pose when I am making something lewd that isnt the same few I always do?

>>4323423
So am I being retarded or is he basically symbol-drawing construction instead of actually constructing?

I'd love to see a full critical takedown that really explains just why the gains goblin's work is just so ugly. It bothers me, no matter what the subject is, it just looks nauseating. But I don't have the learning yet to explain the technical bits of the why it's so awful.

>>4324986
but bad. dont disrespect peter chan like that

>>4325309
He doesn't draw bodies and faces well because hes got a symbol for everything. The way the arms are all too thick and the shoulder is too small for example. The feet are all blocky and wrong looking. The head is entirely symbols, its the same tiny heads with the same eyes and grinning mouth with snake hair and wedge nose. He just got to a point where he thought his shit was good enough and no amount of critique or tips has changed anything about his stuff. He posts here to make everyone look at his grotesque self insert big balls character and probably beats off to the thought of it. Nobody can understand why he won't improve his shit..my guess is unironically autism.

>>4323352
Foreshortening with her arm is a little weird. I usually take photos of my elbow/arm in a mirror or something and try to draw from life to understand shapes. Find reference photos. Practice with coiling to feel out the shape.

I've found that drawing skeletons inside images (from life, not stylized) helps with proportions a little better.

Posted on /beg/ but no one replied to me there so posting here instead

>>4325900
not terrible but generally unappealing. Pretty middle-of-the-road. Looks like you're trying to learn anatomy from nsfw art instead of from figure drawing itself? Linework is sloppy and needs improvement. Also the figure/pose is very flat and lacks any sort of perspective/foreshortening.
Also i just noticed the toes, wtf? Were you hoping no one would notice XD learn to draw toes

>>4325900
>>4325960
I completely agree with that anon. You generally just need more knowledge of anatomy and proper proportions. You should push your gestures more.
What I did in this red line is, on the left it's your original gesture with more correct proportions, and on the right a more pushed gesture while also tackling some of the problems your sketch had, aside from it being a flat pose. She only had dummy thicc thighs, whereas the fat should have been more distributed along her body. I have to keep this brief since I'm about to go to bed, but you should study more and keep it up!

>>4324215
Any critique for this one?

>>4324215
looks like you might be referencing for the pose, which is good. Face needs a lot of work, eyes are two totally different sizes, which I think was an attempt at cocking the head slightly to one side without actually angling features like the nose and mouth, which are sort of drawn as symbols.

The hourglass figure is taken a little too far in my opinion, given the overall level of realism.

It's good that you're going at this loose and trying to find big shapes and construct things, looks like you care about the sketch!

So.. are you going to give it a lighting treatment or not? You've got a sort of charcoal-ish texture to the rendering so far, but you've almost ignored the lighting entirely, like you're afraid of ruining the form by throwing large dark areas on it. Don't be, push the value contrast. If you fuck up the lighting, it'll most likely be because you need to get better at figure construction and form, so it'll help you learn.

I dunno why the nipples are like, on the outside of the bra. Also, what's her other arm doing? if it's tucked behind her, you'd still probably be able to see some part of either the arm or the shoulder.

Good luck.

>>4325963
nice feathering/linework on the right sketch :)

I finally started drawing again. I feel like I shouldn’t have.

>>4325960
>Looks like you're trying to learn anatomy from nsfw art instead of from figure drawing itself?
I used this reference.

>Also i just noticed the toes, wtf? Were you hoping no one would notice XD
haha, i think the right foot toes are not that bad except for the pinky, wouldn't you agree? but toes on the left look bad, i agree

>>4325963
Thanks, just a little note about thighs, i was kind of intentionally making exaggerated proportions with thighs cus i like super wide hips, not saying in invalidates your criticism of course

>>4326245
this is one of those times when you should actually trust your feelings bro

>>4326245
looks like you're going to be the next Leonardo da vinci if you keep that up

10/10

>>4326387
No, all of the toes look bad. You're picture is very /beg/. If you're going to exaggerate proportions but you know nothing about them, you need to have more references of thicker girls too. You lack a lot of basic knowledge and don't seem to be constructing things as though they were in a 3D space.

>>4326435
I did use some references of thicker girls (though not in this same pose), maybe im just bad at applying them
as for construction, i'm trying to follow instructions of proko figure drawing videos and some loomis/drawabox

Trying out a more simplistic look to see if I can increase output.

Still took me a bit but I think it came out nice.

Is it legally problematic to make my own porn artist site ?

I'm googline some 'by clicking enter you agree that you are 18+ years of age blabla' warnings but they seem very off puting and make me look like some shady jew business. I feel like it'll put people off... then on the other hand, a too simply phrased one might be legally invalid and if the son of mr-conservative-billionaire ends up on my porn site and he wants to ruin my life he probably could...

at that point, why even bother with the warning ?? halp

>>4324759
consider the shadows on the pole
right now the depth is completely fucked, making it look like she's phasing through it all kitty pride or some shit

>>4326100
Thanks, anon. This helped me understand what is wrong about this one. Will work on the points you brought up.

Thanks a lot

>>4326389
>>4326401
So am I NGMI or not?

>>4326515
every site that hosts adult content of any kind will usually require an age check. Websites for alcoholic drinks (Absolut, Heineken etc.) require you to input your birthday. You need to input your birthday on Steam to look at mature video games. There's nothing shady about it. Also I don't know what you mean by the practice being "jewish", so I can't speak on that.

As long as you aren't hosting illegal content or content that straddles the line (loli/shota, revenge porn, heavy and sustained rape content, depictions of real people in adult situations) you will be fine. The worst that will happen to you is that your website will be deleted.

>>4326492
Why is she pouring yogurt out of her dick?

>>4327017
>her
>dick

Maybe I'll actually finish this one.

>>4326988
This is really nicely drawn. I think that nipple might be in the wrong spot though but I'm having a little trouble figuring out exactly how the body is turned and posed.

Trying to get back into it

>>4322816
this pic makes me wanna eat ASS even though i shouldnt

>>4325963
TEAL RED LINE IS THAT YOUU :0

>>4327529
shut up you werent even here when teal was around youre just name dropping

>>4324995
thanks :)
>>4325005
Thanks for the feedback, you're right i didn't put enough work into them.
>>4326524
Thanks for the feedback! I agree there should be different shading on the pole.

>>4327017
It's an appetizer.

do i have chance be a gmi ?

>>4327614
Pops nooooo

>>4327614
atta boy. Welcome to the coom club. Head is slightly disproportionate from the figure, I advice to resize her torso along with everything else to make it easier for you.

>>4327624
>>4327614
Like so, also consider zooming out to see the entire figure as a whole and flip the canvas to spot mistakes much easier.

>>4327624

>>4322889
New stuff

how important is dialog? I just want to draw the pictures.

>>4327639
I guess it depends on who you want to appeal to, but most of the time it's not necessary. Porn dialog is a cringefest 90% of the time anyway so even if you do write some trash it wont really matter.

>>4327631
and sfw head

>>4327635
I love her

Have you guys ever thought of something like 10 basic poses the aspiring porn artist should have in their repertoire for stuff like pi ups or something like that?

>>4326925
It depends. If you are 5 years old, you still might have some chances. If you are older than that, then you are definitely NGMI.

>>4327639
Just add some sound effects
>*SCHLOP SCHLOP SCHLOP SCHLOP SCHLOP*

>>4327923
I was thinking of having the guy narrate the relationship to the girl and the observations he has about her insatiable desire for fat dick in her mouth. I think this would be hotter than trying to communicate her flowery moans and wet gasps for breath after he blasts a massive amount of cum in her throat.

>>4327639
Stop drawing kids, you sick piece of crap.

>>4327639
blog?

This took way too long.

Obviously not my art, but I have a question: what's the name of this muscle on her inner thighs that connects to her vagina? I see it a lot and I personally think it looks pretty hot, but I can't find the name of it.

>>4328184
Pretty sure it's the adductor brevis or longus

>>4327646
Her shoulders are too stiff. When you draw shoulders atleast for girls/women draw them slopping down from the neck. It makes it look more natural.

>>4323352
I am kind of a fatso, but when I look at my arm, it still visible taper to a kind of boney wrist for some reason, but I felt like stuff like that isn't unreasonable. Its hard to articulate what I think was wrong with it so I try drawing over it, but I think her torso is short and shoulder too narrow.

>>4328175
Cool comic, kinda reminds me of sidneymt art

>>4328184

>>4328257
This looks like shit and nothing like what that anon made, which is really good.

>>4328175
why would you put so much effort when you're still beg tier

>>4328422
You are either an amazing artist, or delusional if you think that's beg tier.
Pyw. You won't, right?

>>4328438
>I can't take criticism

>>4328422
This is not criticism >>4328517

>>4328523
ok, do i need to state the obvious?
his anatomy, linework and construction are beg tier

>>4328539
Explain why it's shit and how he can improve it, dingus. That's constructive criticism. Better yet, red line it.

her left foot is fucky, but is there anything else to improve on? Drew this yesterday in like, 30 mins

>>4328551
She has six fingers

>>4328548
I already explained it. He needs to study fundamentals more

>>4328566
ah, I see what you mean. That "extra finger" is actually just uncolored hair, I was in a rush to get this done haha

>>4328517
I didn't draw that, idiot.

>>4328570
You explained nothing.
I already told you. PYW, mr critic. Let me see if I should take your words seriously or not.

>>4328551
Study perspective/foreshortening more. Otherwise this is pretty cool. Especially the lineart.

>>4328422
>so much effort when you're still beg tier
And if he didn't you'd tell him his work wasn't worth commenting on because he didn't apply himself. Christ, this board is as worthless as /biz.

>>4327872
I'll show myself out.

remaking my dva

>>4328096
>>4293516
I draw mature women from time to time but the flat chest is better than drugs to me.

>>4329085
Please learn some anatomy.

>>4328566

>>4329085
i hate all your art, its just UGUU anime face with massive balloons EVERY time

learn to draw holy shit you just hide everything under as many sound effects and sparkles as you can and not youre literally tracing, pathetic

>>4329331
i agree with this anon. It's just a bunch of symbols, face + boobs + cocks doesn't really equal a human figure. It's your art tho, w/e

commission flats from earlier this month. I would post full render but I like the flats more

>>4329335
>>4329331
>>4329240

i will return to doing studies then

>>4327330
this is really nice

>>4329384
youve never studied a day in your life

>>4328005
I don't see a living, breathing human there, just a drawing

>>4329429
You certainly haven't been to school in your entire life and your deadbeat parents didn't teach you any manners.

>>4329429

i watched all the vilppu videos in high school, but that was ten years ago.

so thanks, im actually gonna sit down and watch them again

>>4329240
point out what exactly is wrong his his anatomy

>your proportions are bad
>your anatomy is bad
>your perspective is bad
>go back to fundies
literally worthless critique unless you can give a detailed explanation (that arm can't bend like that, ribs don't end there, hands are too small, etc)

>>4329504
suck my cock lol pyw BITCH

>>4328422
have you ever felt like you are running out of time? like living with a sense of impending doom? I also felt the impotence of not being able to complete a good execution of my ideas, but I couldn't just let go of certain concepts, and I want to explore it before I am too tired or my hands became too stiff to try to execute it. a confluence of my professional and personal obligations reduced my time to draw considerably, and then now in my 30s health problem crept up on me and when I came home my useful wakefulness has often elapsed. there are times in my life where I kept waiting to work on things because I thought not everything was ready, didn't start a story, didn't finish world building, don't promote comic, it was not good enough, I want to redraw it, I kept it up for 10 years, and then life came crashing down. now all my waking moment was just wanting to be able to sit down and draw, at work, on my commute, I just endlessly yarn for it, until I came home and all I can do is pass out. I had to manage my usable wakefulness and draw comic in pieces over the course of 2 months because i kept having these ideas in my head, its not ideal but at least its visualized, you sound like the kind of guy who want to wait until you are ready to do your ideas, you want to study and work on all the different things that goes into execution before you start, I mean its good to want to get better but don't wait too long. sometimes you learn the most by stepping in it , you will realize what you need then, not everything can be ready when you start, but I think its important to start something, anon.

>>4328257
well, its been a while since I saw slimy thief, but his stuff is really something else. I couldn't say I do fetishism quite like the way he do.

>>4330173
your style is lovely, do you have a twitter or something where you post your art?

>>4330173
tl dr?

trying to just go with the flow and draw in an enjoyable way instead of being super delicate with linework

>>4330199
Draw right now until it's too late.

naughty nun

>>4330333
I know you're trying to not use greay, but the black futa just looks bad with that kind of hatching. Especially the boobs look disgusting. otherwise this doesn't look too bad, I actually enjoy the linework

>>4330445
>disgusting

if one more person uses this word to describe my art im going to go nuclear

>>4329984
There's an ugly dick in your drawing.

>>4330510
that's not incase dude cmon

>>4330474
Lmao

>>4330418
made quick edit to pose and lineart

Not even gonna scann it until I get advice, any redlines or suggestions?

>>4330620
Make his dick bigger, please.

>>4330638
My main concern is with he man's legs some say he is too short while others say he is too tall

>>4330772
well just post the whole picture so we can see

>>4330620
Stop drawing child's porn you sick shit.

>>4330760
>her
hmmm

>>4330814
hmmmmmmmmm

>>4330474
is off-putting better? Because it still fits really well. Have you ever seen anyone else shade black characters with hatching like this?

>>4322824
>realistic male character

>animu chick

dafuq is with this shit?

>>4330760
you have some cool gestures doing on but then the rest isnt really appealing in the slightest

>>4330830
kind of, alphonso dunn, crumb. thats just how i hatch im trying to improve every day.

>>4330834
so frustrating, the most common feedback i get is literally "unappealing, disgusting", i genuinely cannot see why its unappealing ive looked at my own art so long that im blind to it. if you could break down in painstaking detail why you personally find it unappealing while trying to be objective i would appreciate it. people are very vague about what technically makes it unappealing and what they just personally dont like stylistically or content-wise.

>>4327017
probiotic

>>4327635
i feel u should change the overlap of the line in the lower back in the ass shot so it shows more the hips moving back into space

>>4330842
for me, personally, the separation of forms is too detailed in things like the feet, while on stuff like the dick or titties they look too stiff and mechanical, the rod and balls dont look like they have any amount of softness or give that human meat has, the titties being perfectly parallel also harms the flow of the drawing, and in general your style of hatching doesnt fit too well with more erotic works, but your construction is fine, id suggest a style study from some porn artists you like to see how they soften up stuff to make it look better

>>4330773
thats the end of the paper, didn't planned it that way, thinking on erasing the guy completely but the dick. However you people claim to know anatomy so you must know where everything must be located.

>>4330873
thank you

>>4330884
dont get shittiy with me kid

>>4326492
dick looks detached from her, like it's on a different "perspective"

>>4330873
it's fucked because i want to be a hatching porn legend like R.Crumb but things like pic related get a lot more likes than the stuff i really love to do. I really just want to hatch the shut out of it but its so hard to be restrained and only doe a few lines for shading here and there

i know there MUST be a way to find the perfect medium ground between Modeseven and R.Crumb and im trying my best to find it. there HAS to be a perfect balance

>>4330887
I think the drawing must be trashed since it has multiple and several mistakes. what most Japanese artist do is just draw a floating dick, much easier. however they can convey that in such a form that it does not looks lazy nor retarded.

>>4330908
kino

>>4330901
>caring what random people like and following trends
Ngmi

>>4330989
oh shut up im allowed to look up to people and have ambition you stupid memester

>>4330887
cartoonfags just dont care ngl
https://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/2728421

Hi, Hows this so look far?

>>4331117
Doesn't look like a girls head. Could easily pass as a boy as there is nothing feminine about her. Maybe give some eyelashes. And it's overall very unappealing.

>>4331117
Looks beg tier shit

>>4331269
will do

>>4330173
Very nice response anon, and more than that guy really deserved. Too many people seem to feel that nothing should be done until it’s perfect, not recognizing that applying your work is how you get better.
Keep up the work. Your stuff has an appealing style and speaks to my fetishes. :)

>>4331352
His face looks too feminine

does my art have soul

>>4331650
and do my characters look und*raged they r not supposed to

>>4331650
>>4331651
I think there's soul, but they definitely look hebe.

>>4331655
do you like my art? i dont post it anywhere because im afraid people wouldnt like it

>>4331352
Love the expressions in this, and the dialogue made me chuckle too. Do you have a blog?

>>4331693
There's aspects of the style I could enjoy, the issue of them looking too young keeps me from liking these as much as I potentially see myself liking your art.

>>4330609
why post this here

>>4331651
>and do my characters look und*raged
>und*raged
Just the fact that you have to censor "underaged" tells everything. GTFO, sick piece of shit.

>>4331716
How does that make sense?

>>4331681

>>4331698
>>4331716
how do i make my characters look older?

>>4331727
Use real life references of adults. Fucking dumbass.

>>4331649
They're both supposed to be androgynous
Broad shouldered musclegirl, fair faced feminine man (I haven't drawn my characters fucking at all really)
>>4331695
I do gay shit too
Should I do a platform other than Twitter? I have a Newgrounds and Hentai Foundry- though HF keeps rejecting my shit
https://twitter.com/NsfwShedra/status/1221650344217849856?s=20

>>4330760
perspective on the right boob (her left) is fucked up
nice feet

>>4331650
post a finished piece retard, the soul in sketches is often false, because the viewer fills in the blanks unconsciously. only a finished sketch truly shows the artists vision and is therefore the best way to determine if soul is lost or abundant.

>>4331693
Pixiv would enjoy it.

>>4331727
The boy looks like a middle schooler, you can't make that one look of age without a lot of structural changes, even twinks have broadish shoulders and some muscular definition.

The only real difference between a tall girl and a small adult female is hip to waist ratio. Just increase that a little bit more and you'll be fine. Making the thighs slightly slimmer would also make her look taller and more like a fashion model than a teen.

>>4332859
none of that shit matters, his anatomy is all wrong, he needs to grind fundies instead.

>>4332973
>muh buzzwords copypasta
Go back to any of the ten Loomis dicksucking threads already on the board.

>>4322816
Delivery for /v/

>>4330620
A waste of paper

>>4333065
bro just look at those limbs, those hands, the torso... oof.

>>4333385
big oof bro sm.h fa.m tho, dont simp, ngl he deadass needs loomis fundies anatomy tb.h, join my belle delphine orbiting discord its lit, im a white 17 year old pepe.jpg

>>4333406
Zoomerspeak was a mistake.

>>4333406
i just had a seizure

>>4333406
pls stoppit, you are making me cringe.

>>4333432
pls stoppit, epic cringe boomer, cursed image subscribe to pewdiepie, ironicdoge.jpg

>>4330900
The one guy i wanted to see here...great work as always. I only wish i knew what you have in mind for the complete piece. Be careful with the feet pls thnx.

>>4333406
kek
based as fuck

>>4330333
black girls penis looks like an R.Crumb drawing lol

>>4333321
>>>/beg/

i need help with the legs

Ok I know that this is wacky giantess stuff, but like, any critique for the anatomy/anything? I feel like I've been capped here for a while and wanna improve.

>mfw theres stuff in alt hotter than any of the shit here

>>4330760
her balls are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
she's cumming on the floor already, warm spaghetti

>>4335134
Because if you still haven't noticed this thread became the gayest thread on this board

>>4333651
thank you i learned a lot from him

>>4333651
>black girls
>penis
It's all so tiresome

>>4331650
>>4331651
>>4331727
blog for scientific purposes

finished this oil painting for now

>>4336178
paint isnt an excuse to be bad at art bry guy

>>4336182
PYW

>>4336178
i love how you paint. but you obvious need to work on the fundies. did you use a ref for this? her chest should be facing the left following the neck, which is too long. shoulders should be straighter. the left boob looks all fucked. alien pussy.

This thread has lower quality than the /beg/ one. Sad.

>>4334792
it kinda looks like her hand left hand fingers besides the thumb are a little short but maybe thats just because they're hidden by that black glove
overall looks good imo

>>4336289
im beg but i post here because i receive a lot more useful advice than on /beg/

>>4336374
ah yea I see what you mean, definitely. thanks!

God damn it I can never think of anything sexy to draw.
I'm always worried every idea I come up with has been drawn before or done in real porn and then it feels like it'd be pointless for me to draw it, at least if I can't make it amazing somehow. I'm never gonna be a popular coomer at this rate.

>>4336289
fucking how?

>>4331352
i love this

>>4333406
>he deadass needs loomis fundies anatomy tb.h

he do

postmortem?

>>4337068
>>4333385
can you actually explain what is wrong with the picture instead of just saying “needs moar anatomy”

am I making it?

>>4337462
This is a 3d model and obviously so. The shading is a bit too harsh and angular for my tastes.

>>4337079
I like it, my major gripe is butthole placement seems to forward.

>>4337462
Avoid using drop shadows, and fatten up those fingers, looks like witch.

>>4337412
If he could he wouldn't have just said "needs moar anatomy".

>>4337469
lower the shadow opacity, got it
what do you mean by angular?
>>4337479
fattier hands, got it
I was using the concept art from Dishonored as a reference for the hand shape though I now know it doesn't work on a female

>>4330173
lol. good luck dude. art skill's some shit that usually never degrades with time, generally speaking.

>>4337383
is this inu yahsha fanart?

softer shadows, no backshadow

>>4323523
looks like doxy

>>4337079
I agree with the other anon about the butthole placement, I'd place it a bit further down. The thing that really bothers me though, is what I circled in blue. Maybe it's because of how far the boobs are pushed to the side. I also think the boobs don't really look like they're being pushed up, maybe keep the lineart black on the book that's being pushed up the most?
The blonde chicks arm that's grabbing the dick also looks a bit skinny at the top.
Pretty funny idea btw. Not my cup of tea, but it looks really good otherwise. I don't think most people will really notice any of the issues I've listed

First major attempt at multiple subjects. Also I had the bad idea of only doing the loomis box for perspective so I'm not sure whether anything looks good.

>>4337647
With skirt

>>4337494
That also doesn't work for younger men, either. That's middle-age, elderly hand.

>>4330893
It might be the color not meshing slowly into the sheath. Which does make it seem like more of a strap-on of sorts.

>>4330181
You can find Anon as ac120 on Twitter and baraaag.net.

>>4337575 yeup

>>4337479
what's a drop shadow?

>>4337475
>>4337590
Tyvm

quick colors

>>4337061
Thanks anon

>>4338782
these could be pretty good but your linework is really clumsy and rushed

Tried experimenting with paneling, but now this just looks confusing from the thumbnail. Have at it crabs.

>>4338815
>crabs
refusing to give you feedback based on using this retarded newfag meme

>>4338815
Get better at making a single image before trying to make a comic.

>>4339095
Bad advice

>>4339095
Anything constructive to add?

>>4338829
Thanks anyway.

>>4338457
I redrew this and tried to make it closer to what I first envisioned.
Is it sexy? I'm trying to get better at sex appeal.

>>4339227
i think so

>>4339227
I like this expression more anon, good work

>>4339235
>>4339242
Sweet, thanks anons.

>>4337580
the fingers are very unnappealing, abs too but thats more of a personal preference.

>>4339135
The anatomy is beginner level with very poor forms. The thighs for example are symmetrical bowling pins that don't show how actual thighs...even stylized thighs should look. The hands are especially bad and the feet are little more than blobs. The tits are saggy water balloons and the nipples are placed wrong with too much of an attempt to give them a puffy shiny appearance that makes them look like plastic. The shading overall is muddy and lit as though they are in front of a white spotlight instead of being inside an inn or something. Not enough range in the values with the lights being blown out and the darks not being very dark. The color of the skin is very monochromatic meaning its just a lighter and darker version of the same color with no hue shifting which usually for skin is yellower on the lighter area and redder on the darker, but that's not applicable to every situation. The hair is drawn in contour with no attention given to the overall 3D structure and is painted with bare minimum effort. When drawing hair try to think of ribbons and locks of hair rather than trying to render every hair strand.

None of this shit you'll be able to fix soon though. It's good to try to do finished things, don't let all these practice sketchers tell you otherwise, but move on from this and try to study the bodies forms and not just copy a porn scene. Drawing is more important than painting though...no amount of rendering will save a bad drawing. Work on feeling how the form is in 3D and not just doing the contours..."wrap" the contour lines in cross section lines. Think about the way the X-men character Collossus is drawn how all his forms have those lines that wrap around. Just remember it takes a long time to get even half way good at drawing and even longer to be good at painting. Getting frustrated is part of the battle...just try to stay consistent at improving what you know and learning new things.

>>4339227
Supporting shoulder feels disconnected. Hand is a little too small. Forelegs are a little too short.

>>4322816
can I post lolis here¿?

>>4339332
fixed the bony hand
less muscular
more light dependent line thickness

>>4338815
Your style is disgusting and gross. Looks like greasy meat.

>>4338815
You aren't good enough to have this kind of shitty attitude.

>>4339584
pyw im interested in the justification for your shitty attitude

>>4339504
Not according to the board rules.

>>4339585
Telling somebody they aren't good enough is a shitty attitude?
I don't think you can compare that to yours/his, can you?

>>4339589

Just pyw dont be scared, youre being cuntier than he was

>>4339521
Abs were nice, hands still look bony, the change of girth between articulation and phalanx isn't that sharp at last not for an healty young/middleage woman

>>4339609
I didn't post in here to get help acting like a complete shitlord.

>>4339363
Thanks for the crit anon. Which hand did you mean? I'm guessing the back one since you mentioned that arm but I wanted to make sure.

This drawing is from 2017 or else lol but I never finished it until the other day. But I didn't put that effort tho, the whole composition and pose is really poor

>>4339346
Thank you. This was more or less my assessment as well - more variation in hue and value.

>>4339529
I'll keep that in mind.

>>4339584
Sorry, trying to emulate board culture.

>>4340045
You are correct. It's pretty much crap.

>>4322816
I’m so sick of seeing OP when I scroll past the porn thread. This shit has been up for 10d, you guys draw so slow

Or maybe all the shit posters left...

>>4340341
I know you are a retard that is just baiting, but I hope you realize how dumb you make yourself look like for not knowing there is an option of hiding threads.

what are some rules of thumb when drawing the vagina?

>>4337412
>>4337412
>can you actually explain what is wrong with the picture.
LOL i dunno bro... maybe um... the anatomy is wrong? lmao
just look at it man, that is not how a human body works at all, those arms, those hands, those hips. the body is mush and deformed.
don't you give me any of that muh style bullshit pls. it just needs more practice and study. it looks amateur. it looks completely /beg/ tier.
anatomy is exactly what the artist needs to work on.

>>4340574
Redline it or shut the fuck up.

>>4331650
First of all, love your style, but definitely looks like lolicon stuff. Try placing the eyes slightly higher, and broadening the shoulders for more adult looks.

>>4340574
secondly, bruh. how is this amateur? it's quite obviously stylized, as opposed to not knowing anatomy. Like >>4340609 said, redline it or fuck off

>>4340621
>>4340609
>redline my terrible sketch
bruh the entire thing needs to be redrawn, the anatomy is not right, why are you so against studying anatomy? do you not want to get better?

>>4340642
So you don't know what's wrong with it and don't even draw. Stop shitting up the thread you fucking loser.

>>4340642
>still no redline
here, since you obviously can't add anything productive, I'll do a redline myself. It literally doesn't even need one, but since OP wanted a less childish look, here ya go.

>>4338795
>linework is really clumsy and rushed
That's true but I'm not sure how to better utilize my lines

>>4340657
study people who draw really dynamic lines, and see where they thicken and thin their line. Also, just go a little slower. there are lots of little mistakes that can be avoided that way. Overall, though, very nicely done.

>>4340045
Reiko from golden boy?

>>4340649
those hands look right to you? that stomach?

>>4340718
>still no redline
that's the stylized part, dumbass

>>4340720
literally MUHSTYLE excuses,
those hands, that torso are incredibly cringe and bad, its a fact,
i am just trying to help you anon, but you don't want help, just keep on drawing your wonky animay girls then , go on, i wont stop you.

>>4340731
I am not OP, you absolute baffoon. I did not draw the original image that you keep yelling "MUHANATOMY" at. In fact, my art style tends to stick rather closely to typical anatomy and the fundies. I just haven't been able to turn my brain off the the extent that /you/ have throughout this entire thread to not be able to see this /blatant stylization/.
>i'm trying to help
no you're not, you're a fundie puritan who cannot fathom something not looking *exactly correct*, even though i'm sure 100% of your art is lower than /beg/ garbage.*

*Source: NO FUCKING REDLINE
>>4340731
>>4340718
>>4340642
>>4340574
>>4337068
>>4333385
>>4332973

Any advice before proceeding?

>>4340749
only 3 of those are me man, and yeah i think the artists needs to work on anatomy, i think it would help make the image more appealing,
but we are allowed to have different oppinions anon, its fine, if you and your brain for some reason seem to think those hands, arms, and torso are totally awesome and cool looking then thats fine man! :^)

>>4340763
So now that it's proven you are a shitposter who can't put his pencil where their mouth is you'll whine about a part of the drawing that doesn't even look finished.

You so showed everyone you're the authority on drawing.

>>4340493
Index and middle finger in the pussy, thumb in the stinker.

>>4340031
Meant the front one. Honestly could go forward an not have issues, the main thing that is off is the forelegs being a tad too short.

>>4340642
>>4340731
im the artist of those drawings, those replies werent by me, i havent checked this thread for days

lol

Doesn’t help when I’m high. Am i gay?

>>4341959
dude weed lmao xD

Can I get some critiques?

>>4342664
At least she doesn't look like greasy meat.

Can someone make a new one? I’m too scared.

>>4342892
new thread*.