/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

honestly u should probs yell at me at this point for this one

>>4302698
i like your feet, dude. any tips?

>>4302742
accidentally acquire mild foot fetish after studying feet/looking at too much of kyle's artwork

>>4302765
whos kyle? sorry, i'm new here. I just learned about the kangaroo 2 weeks ago

>>4302844
Most overrated artis here.

>>4302844
@kairunoburogu on twitter, he's known to post here on occasion, he likes feet a loooot

I haven’t drawn in almost a month. I feel like I’m back to basics.

Let me ask you all something, and this question is tailored to the artists who post their work here...

...why does it look like ALL of your drawings have retarded faces? Why do they have these, retarded grins on their faces, do special needs people need gravy on their mashed potatoes too, and by association, do you all represent that group or, that lifestyle?

It's okay, you can be honest. If you like to draw retarded faces on your work, hey, thumbs up. But really, why?

>>4302871
>take it in the pussy, cock

>>4302861
>>4302863
ah, thanks.

>>4302883
Retards are hot, bro.

>>4302883
Pyw let's see you'r non retarded realistic faces.

>>4302698
have you made a blog yet

>>4302978
https://twitter.com/macpalomar

>>4302883

>>4302975
^ this

>>4302883
I believe the proper incantation is "shoo, gains goblin"

>>4302698
Dude, you do the same shit over and over again. You never finish anything and most of your subjects are underage kids. Just seek help already. For both.

>>4302765
So you are basically saying you are collecting all of the most disgusting kinks and fetishes?
Pedophilia, feet fetish. What will be next? Guro? Vore?
What a fucking waste of potential.

>>4302883
Most people in here are really bad artists. They try to draw faces that express pleasure, but they lack subtlety.
I know you are baiting, but since you are probably the same kind of bad artist, maybe what I'm saying will help you too.

>>4303132
pyw crab

>>4303172
Somebody recognised themselves in my post.
Please, don't cry.

>>4303206
pyw

>>4303280
Shhh, stop crying.

>>4303132
nobody enjoys sex.

>>4303734
speak for yourself, loser

>>4302662
who did the op image?

Lil something I did for fun

Mitsuki Bakugo
https://mobile.twitter.com/wootbloot

>>4303989
first, no one asked your blog
second, you kinda nailed the kyle render, but the hair and the grenades need some work, also stop color picking from kyle, it would never work the same when you put the shadows in another layer.

>>4304030
I don't color pick from kyle but I do love his artsyle. Otherwise, fair criticisms.

>>4304030
>>4304056
gotta agree with dogeposter, this feels unfinished

Ooh I finally have something for these threads
Here's 1/2 gelflings I drew for a thread on /aco/ recently

>>4304084
And here's the second one

Gelfling faces are FUKT man
I just went more for expression than realism here because where the fuck is the realism in a puppet face???

>>4303989
Souless atempt to be like that idiot of Kyle.

>>4304088
Here's the original face I had for him, but a friend called the face soulless and expressionless so I went a bit over the top in the other direction

Which one do you guys prefer?

>>4304090
;_;

>>4304030
>first, no one asked your blog
Oh fuck off

>>4303989
Very solid construction and rendering, but even fake balloon tits will face out away from each other on the chest. This looks too far along now to make any changes but it’s something to keep in mind. If you like them pressed forward like that there are plenty of ways you could do it using clothing. I’d also raise her left one a bit more with her arm, the way she is posed gets kinda lost with the boobs being the focus of the image.

>>4304088
The pose is fairly stiff so the exaggerated expression doesn't match the body, so try a clenched teeth with tightened eyes expression in combination with the hands and feet tightening up.

>>4303989
nice, great line weight

>>4303491
Loving the lil robo sketches
Any main influnces on those?

>>4302902
Noice, I'd hit that...with a baseball bat, try and knock some IQ points back in its thought process. Reboot the OS.
>>4302975
>>4303022
Yeah, two butthurt artists who misconstrued an honest question about their work. Either one of you have probably posted your Bike Helmet Beauties on here, or else you wouldn't have replied. Keep up the good work boyos, the world needs more retarded face fuckprints.
>>4303070
That's true, but the goblin's still posting it's work, so... :^/
>>4303132
That's a good critique, anon. And if I were bad at drawing faces, this would help. Thanks.
>>4303172
>>4303280
Only crybabies who can't take an honest critique answer this way. Here's your bike helmet, soft spot. Put it on.

>>4303023
Where can I follow you? I like this

>>4304385
https://twitter.com/lobsterkiahlart

Might as well post this here too

>>4304511
Did you draw that?

>>4304518
Yeah, it was just a quick thing for fun. I kind of like it though

>>4304529
You do commissions or take other forms of payments like software keys?

>>4304353
Metal slug, Miyazaki, and Kim jung gi

>>4304385
What the fuck???

>>4304511
Blog?
And what's up with the whole Amy n Rouge's costume stuff? Because of the SA2 mod?

i like the kero blaster stuf

>>4304631
Partially that and because the official Sonic Twitter retweeted it.

>>4304638
What about your blog handle?

>>4304581
blog?

>>4304720
@Lambrey3 for nsfw, @ohheythatfisher for sfw

>>4304866
thanks man

First time I've ever drawn NSFW. Felt pretty goode :^] However I think the pose could've been better

>>4303490
Blog?

>>4303805
desgardes, calliope, boxman, whatever he goes by nowadays
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/1551752

>>4304936
Finally some soul on this threads.

First time doing nsfw.

>>4305028
Thanks bruv.
>>4305035
Clean stuff right here, man! Got a blog or social media account I can follow?

Colors

>>4304127
He's not wrong. Makes him look desperate af.

>>4304581
Your stuff is so fucking obnoxious jfc.

>>4305101
pyw

>>4305101
obnoxious in what way?

too kold can't stop shiverin nini

>>4302978
it's @nellipher

>>4303490
>>4303491
>>4303918
>>4304511
>>4304581
>>4305066
lovin it~

>>4305155
Her face looks like pacman. Learn to draw heads

>>4304963
Greeeeeeel?

>>4305155
More obnoxious shit. Disgusting.

>>4305254
sigourney

i was just looking at some of lambreys stuff

>>4305265
lol

>>4305258
>>4305101
You're just a voice pal

>>4305313
Mr Holmes just landed into the thread.

from imagination

>>4305035
love the shapes, you got a blog or something?

>>4304095
This face is better. The ballsack seems too high and should be almost a separate entity from the ding-dong.

>>4305349
wtf is that?

Thoughts or criticism?
I really suck at this render thing, or anything that isn't flat color, don't know where to start.

>>4304936
Soulless, guru ant is a parappa 2 stage not a lammy stage. Change the text.

>>4303734
All sex is rape.

>>4305488
you just need to practice more the basics, there is proportions issues, composition, and coherence things like the tail and wings that dont make sense, is clear that you put them to make more interesting the image, but you don't thing in the structure of those things and just put them there they are just gonna look like floating.

>>4305841
you don't thinked*

>>4305841
I completely get it about the tail, could you indicate/redline me some proportion/composition issues tho? Thanks for the response tho

we all want that amyrogue clout
still trying to solve the face

>>4305946
Her hair is a tad bit too short, don't you think?

>>4305960
im a retard, forgot the file

>>4305962
idk i dont ever draw sonic characters, i guess so
>>4305960
what do you mean?

>>4305960
>we all want that amyrogue clout
Hey, I am just here because I want more her.
>still trying to solve the face
Look at this guys drawing >>4305963 one of the better ones imo

>>4305963
i hope this helps

>>4305965
i mean that everytime a new waifu appears we the drawfags start to work to get popular using them
>>4305974
lmao im the same anon tho
>>4305979
it does! thank you man, to be honest i wanted to give it a cartoony vibe but didn't knew how

Any comments before I start coloring this?

>>4306057
tits too high
right feet should be further from viewer, putting feets on the same plane looks really boring
overall posture looks unnatural and face could be less manly, but that's not something you can fix quickly

>>4305963
fixed the face a lil bit

>>4305991
>lmao im the same anon tho
Well, I liked the approach and >>4306123 is definitely an improvement. What's your blog?

And what about your blog, Doc Red-Line? >>4305979

>>4306133
thank you anon, twitter.com/eifiemoth

>>4305979
>this redlining
I-Is that actually a Loomis Head in action?

>>4306135
>eifiemoth
At this point it's getting ridiculous lmao. That's the 3rd time in two weeks that I am asking for your handle. Remember the comment about Indeedee and Lurantis? Perhaps you should add a small signature or I should just look at your twitter beforehand, ha.

I was trying for a dynamic pose and experimenting with lines and coloring...does anybody have any critiques on this? This was a $20 commission!

>>4306133
Lol ok
NSFW Twitter.com/Smutbrush
SFW Twitter.com/Pheranloathing

>>4306145
ohh yeah lmao! thats crazy, i actually add signatures when I finish my works, except that i haven't been able to finish the Indeedee one thats why I haven't posted it yet

>>4306155
please say sike

>>4306160
>Smutbrush
Damn it, Smutty-boy! Same case with you. I also asked for your handle just this week, ha.

>>4306166

>>4306170
UwU

>>4306110
Thanks

>>4306137
This was a genuine question. I didn't even start learning.

>>4306219
Oh yeah I guess it is. Its not so much a loomis head as it is the general principle that Loomis attempts to impart. I'm not using his measurements but I am creating contours around a sphere and placing the features symmetrically by using these contours as a guide. This is what Loomis teaches in Fun With a Pencil, yes.

>>4306264
>This is what Loomis teaches in Fun With a Pencil, yes.
Is it a good starting point or are there pre-requirements that I should know? I mean, for someone that's more prone to folding planes out of paper than use it for drawing. I'm talking beginner of beginners here.

there, i want to shade it but im afraid to fuck it up lmao

>>4306273
Fun With a Pencil is the first book you should get into, but it is CRUCIAL that you try to understand what he's teaching you and not just mindlessly copying. something a surprising amount of people here cant get their heads around. also be prepared to grind and draw a TON since you're getting into a new skill and you need to just get some mileage and figure some things out for yourself. drawing is as physical as it is mental so you need to build up muscle memory

>>4306296
>but im afraid to fuck it up lmao
Perfect time to practice it on her, eh? Make multiples of the file and use different light sources

>>4306322
>something a surprising amount of people here cant get their heads around.
Well, now you've got me worried. When you say/write it like that, what should I put more attention to?
Sorry for the barrage of questions, but when I have learned one thing in life it's that unlearning something is harder than learning something new.

>>4306341
if you know how to learn then you'll be fine.
just do his exercises and then do them again but with your own original art

>>4306367
>if you know how to learn then you'll be fine.
That's the problem I've been fighting with for a lot longer than you'd imagine. Only shit sticks, not the important stuff, though. Never learned how to learn and most learning material online is dubious at best. If [insert subject] didn't stick with me by trying it a few times I was lost.

i tried

k, i tried

>>4306494
oh you :^)

>>4306572
>That top left tho., UNF!

>>4306572
Did you read Scott Robertson's "How to Draw"? Asking because of the ground beneath the bottom left drawing.

>>4306660
no, i dont study nearly as much as i should.

>>4306672
>i dont study nearly as much as i should.

>>4306672
You just don't draw nearly as much as you should.

>>4306494
Best one so far.

>>4306494
>Rouge de l'Eggman

>>4306855
also true but im trying.

>>4305813
How about a lyric from the Milkcan album instead

>>4306918
Is being a faggot the endgame of porn? Every single time they proceeding to draw dicks where there should be none

>>4307180
bro they're just weenies it's a drawing they're not gonna bite you

>>4307180
You draw what you are comfortable drawing, retard. Endgame of porn is appeal, not the subject matter, retard.

>>4307180
Think about it ike this, a guy banging a girl wouldnt be called gay, and everyone seems to agree that porn is better with a dick involved, so instead of having a guy in the picture you just draw a girl with a dick and have her fuck the other girl. Same as having 2 girls and a strap on. I don't want to fuck a girl with a dick but I do want to see a girl fuck a girl. You may not like it but this is what peak straightness looks like

>>4306572
>>4306494
>>4306489
>>4306296
>>4306123
>>4305979
>>4305963
>>4305946
>>4304511
cringe

>>4307633
Pyw

Was commissioned to draw this p5 porn

>>4308060
Is...her ass smoking from getting pumped to fast?

>>4308143
Lmao i didnt think of that

>>4308188
thats literally what it looks like

please tell me she doesn't look like she suffers from dwarfism…

>>4308233
>brap

>>4308233
Nope. The fingernails are looking out of place, though.

How do I fix this? I feel like its too flat and boring when it comes to skin shading and I dont know how to fix it.
It might be the values and I think I have gotten the lightsourve and shading wrong.

Also fat womans eyes arent that good. I'd love some help on that too.

>>4302662
Latest commission.

>>4308233
she does
you didn't push the perspective hard enough so she ended up looking like a chode

>>4302698
Looks western af

>>4306155
20 bucks? Fuck, I could do that and I don't even know how to select colors in Gimp

>>4309720
>people unironically use this as an insult

this is your brain on moeblobs

>>4303805
>>4304989
its me, ronmeru

>>4306155
20 bucks for that shit? who was the idiot?

>>4306155
I mean, I'm sort of surprised you got 20 bucks for blatantly tracing real porn

Something I'm working on. I'm gonna draw this gay stuff and take a break from school girls.

any advice? just did some colors and am preparing to do some motion stuff and some spoogecraft

>>4310507
think I might redo the face on the left

>>4310507
Slow down and polish up more on the construction and b/w phase.

>>4310638
Like where

>>4310831
Everywhere

puppypuppypuppypuppy

>>4302662
>isis
>hathor headress

>>4310583

Getting comfortable with my iPad...

>>4311365
cum ver soon

>>4311948

>>4311949
so you just went ahead and finished this without taking anyone's advice huh

>>4311976
I wasnt sure exactly what some of the advice meant sorry

>>4311982
this is an 18+ website you know

>>4311983
I mean it looks better than the original when I took some advice(in previous threads)

>>4309200
The transition from sketch to linework lose the soul of the sketches. Look closely, and try to flib the canvas.
You can see it clearly on the left girls arm. The proportions is all wrong.
And line weight. It's too simple.

>>4312004
>>4309200
And fix the faces. Learn to draw "real" faces, before drawing the weeb shit.

Any crit for this? Working on colors and values. Not sure it's immediately clear what's going on

>>4303989
Could add more detail like veins on the tits
Also can try a different underwear to emphasis her curves and personality so have a look at some lingerie, gravure or playboy models

>>4306918
Where did the dick come from????

>>4303069
Honestly the best artwork in this thread

>>4310920
>pedo shit
>sketches
This has been your end game for years now. Get a hold of your fucking life dude.

>>4312512
Stop giving advice if you have no idea what you're talking about, dumbass.

>>4303069
Hahahaha. I am sure it's the same vein fetishist non artist expressing his dumb opinions.
GTFO dickbrain.

>>4312556
why do you want my attention so badly

>>4312004
>The transition from sketch to linework lose the soul of the sketches

Any advice on how to fix that? It really frustrates me. Or is that why you say the lineweight is too simple?

>>4312958
sketch let things into the imagination, sometimes fixing some mistakes, this is why sometimes sketches looks better than lineart.

>>4312611
hard to read at this point

>>4310920
how long did this take you?

from /a/ drawthread

>>4313018
YES YES YES

>>4313018
Face looks retarded af

>>4313003
about 15 minutes, i’m trying to make some procreate brushes i like cause friend wanted to see time lapses of my work an procreate has that built in

here are some hyper rough sketches of some of their requests i tried to do with one of the default brushes, ended up taking wayyy too long cause fighting the brush whole time, everything on left draw came out wack, no weight, good brush that handles how u want is vital

>>4312584
Because you have a ton of talent and you are wasting it for crap like this.
GET
A
HOLD
OF
YOUR
LIFE

>>4313416
if you want to tell me what to draw so bad then commission me

How much would you ask the commissioner for a work like this.

>>4313433
20 DA points.

>>4311988
That's not nearly polished enough, can't remember if you posted a more polished version of the construction/sketch phase and base lineart phase, but it needs to be pretty well polished. Anatomy wise too, which needs a lot of work on, notably looking at the finished, the frontal figure has no midsection, it's just a torso and hips. Technically the foreshortening isn't correct and the entire torso should be moved left and slightly up showing the midsection. Same problem with back figure to an extent. Reading the general anatomy of the arms and legs, she's not a shortstack, and if she did indeed have a really small midsection, it could be rendered better. It could be passable if you tweaked a few things. The hands are a dead give away, and need works, the one on the thigh/hips. Frontal hand is passable. The jutting out shoulder too. In general, the back figure needs a whole lotta work, as the front figure is the stronger of the two.

>>4312611
Skip the side poses and make more dynamic, foreshortened poses at 3/4 frontal angle.

>>4313433
nice balls.

something i did a few days ago. I'm streaming RN, come say hi!
picarto.tv/Nouvellen

>>4313704
Skip the figure, the background is a hell of a lot more interesting.

>>4313667
I see. I can go back into it. Any advice for a better polish?

>>4313839
Lock your lines down more. Make it look like clean lineart before you paint. It makes it so much easier.

>>4302662
I tried to do a more dynamic pose than i normally do and i think it came out alright. Any tips on poses like this would be very much appreciated

>>4313704
good stuff

>>4313868
Oh so just more sketch/lineart phase stuff. I thought you meant the render polish

Question. What makes a drawing of a woman seem voluptuous? Is the pelvis much closer to the bottom of the chest? Should the pelvis be wide than their shoulder length?

>>4314080
Having a much smaller waist than anything else is the most important thing, doesn't matter whether you emphasize boobs or hips/ass as long as they tuck into a tiny waist

>>4313868
>>4313667
I think this anatomy is better?

>>4304989

nope i, desgardes did not do that one!

ronmeru i like your stuff obviously kek

>>4314310

i did this one ~

>>4313429
I'm an artist, I don't commission others.
The problem is not that I want you to draw something particular. I am just giving you an advice on how not to fuck up your art career.

But I guess the fact that you never finish anything tells more than I thought it does.
You are probably just too young to realize what you are doing will haunt you later on in life.

Keep drawing crap.

>>4314298
Good, now fix the arms, hands and shoulders.

>>4314340
Cool. Yeah I think the arm muscles need definition. Though desu I kinda dig the large hands thing and im foing a pudgier body for the left figure, but the right figure ill def work on.

>>4314725
I just noticed too >>4314298 the front figures hands are vastly different in size compared to one another.

>>4302662

>>4315056
So... is furry really a gold mine?

>>4315067
idk i've never done commissions or gotten paid for drawing

>>4314990
Are those tits or water balloons?

>>4315085
Yes

>>4315056
You post anywhere, really liking it.

WIP

whats wrong here?

>>4315508
I like it

>>4315652
You haven't read Color and Light by James Gurney. That's what's wrong.

>>4315719
what wrong with the lighting
also, is that a e-book i can get off prime ?

>>4315056
Pretty good, unfortunately is furry.

>>4315728
You lack a basic understanding of how light hits forms and if it comes from a certain direction. You're pillow shading and not thinking about why or where you put shadows. It's a pdf you can find for free on cgpeers or thepiratebay. If you want, you could buy it.

>>4315759
Subject matter shouldn't really concern you, if you are an artist. If you aren't an artist, then just GTFO.

this one ?
just looking to do better

>>4314340
>>4314891

>>4315864
I think I may want to make the pupils larger on the left figure

>>4315864
Shouldn't the figure in the back be thrusting the hips in towards the one in the front, instead of just standing totally stationary? Especially if they're supposed to be feeling as good as their expressions show. Their bodies should be reflecting that, too. The gesture is so stiff, there's no motion or feeling conveyed here. Very weird

>>4315870
ah yeah I was feeling that too. I was more focused on reworking the anatomy that I kinda softened up the pose

>>4315874
the genetalia seem to be rendered differently from the rest its kinda juxtaposed. they also the kinda lack depth on the anatomy, looks a bit "drawn on"

>>4315877
I was having some trouble making line art for genitalia so I wanted to try out painting them in.
Thanks for the feedback.

>>4314321
stfu moral faggot nigger. god you people are a plague on this board

its always somewhat frustrating to keep on remaking the same image but I feel like with each attempt I learn something

>>4315894
It's not about morals, you absolute imbecile. It's about drawing something that will ruin any of their chances of becoming a successful artist (smut or not).
Kill yourself, brainlet.

>>4303989
I like how you did the explosion designs. The rest is completely ok, and would be a good piece of you fixed her left arm and gave her a face that is not completely dead.... the smell of soulless pandering is so strong.

The nipples also look weird

>>4315056
I think boobs should splash a little more to the sides considering that she is laying down on the bed.

>>4316057
I haven’t seen more than the two pictures drawn here, but it looks more like skinny twinks than shotas... I say just let that anon draw what the like to draw, their drawings look good and I think they’d lose passion if they had to censor themselves.

Do they have a blog?

>>4316057
If anyone needs to get a hold of their life it's the dork trying to order artists around on 4chan

>I am just giving you an advice
You're an abusive psycho, leave your computer & go outside

>>4316270
They post in here all the time and it's always the same content I talked about.
https://twitter.com/nellipher

>>4316282
>cope

>>4315410
thanks friend, gigawix on twitter

>>4316373
>>c-cope
You need to cope with your feelings before you start acting even more silly

>>4316392
>i am rubber you're glue
die in a fire or something

>>4316373
Aaah, they are so good, it’s annoying:/

Wonder how they practice...

WIP, same artist as the Fem Erebus pic

I hope >>4298053 is still coming along well.

>>4317121
Bad news, I lost the file fren, hence it'll never get done

>>4317131
el ripo the el dreamo then.

>>4317168
I might do something with Blackfire and BB though, because I really like her, or a different thing with Starfire

>>4317170
Looking forward to it.

>>4317245
Do you have any ideas? And as an aside, I'm pretty vanilla, so I won't be doing anything too nuts, and it'll likely be something with BB, because he's my favorite character from that show

Doing Nsfw commissions if anyone interested https://twitter.com/Nonehub

>>4317252
what the heck is going on with her lower half?

>>4317252
Noone is interested, thank you.

>>4317266
Fuck off

update

>>4317278
stop being a nigger, newfag

>>4302662
i looooove these threads

>>4317248
I'm pretty vanilla as well, so i'm sure some basic stuff would be good.

>>4317514
based and coompilled

>>4317516
I might do a Blackfire cowgirl loop, or I might try to do a different mating press pic with Starfire

>>4317529
Either one sounds good to me.

>>4315895
>>4315870
which pose is better? or should I just finish the current one?

is it frowned upon to just copy a pose from some other piece you like?

>>4317664
no, nobody owns any pose.

>>4317301
Fuck off.

working on this

HOW TO BECOME GOOD AND DRAWING PORN I WANT TO MAKE A GAME FUCK

>>4318051
Same way you get good at drawing anything else - learn. Basic forms, perspective, anatomy, light, colour. And then you go for animation and start beating your head against the wall.

Can i trace just screencaps from porn and just render it and make money?

Do you guys have any good resources for drawing boobs in particular? Real life references are often too small or too static. I have no idea how to draw them in motion most of the time.

>>4318398
buy a small beanbag and use that

>>4318378
It would look like shit.

>>4302662
not good with colors

>>4318887
Too saturated

>>4319257
Got anything new you're working on?

>>4319321
finishing up a few wips, and plans for a non porny nude washing pic to show some character interaction

>>4319342
Neat. You should practice gesture more instead of just doing straight up shapes. It'll loosen up your drawings a lot more and then on top of the gestures you can then construct. Sketching in thumbnails really helps too.

>>4315830
I bet you unironically think the shitting dick nipples image is good just because it's competently drawn.

>>4319455
We are here to critique art skills, not subject matter. Nobody cares about anyone's personal tastes.

Any tutorials for chubby/fat chicks?

>>4319453
Anon #862 wasting time giving him tips he will never use.

>>4319342
work on your goddamn faces
your art is so fucking unappealing god damn it ugh

>>4318887
>>4319703
Blog?

>>4319802
Why are there so many asuka posters in ic? Also the cum looks like piss in the bottom right, unless thats what your going for

>>4319802
Why is she covered in pimples

>>4319913
Arent they Warts?

>>4317514
4chan should just change its name to 4coom

Just did this commission of a cute girl based off of this mushroom. Feel free to critique but most importantly-

How much should I be charging for stuff like this? I feel like I got a bit of a low amount for this, hence why some of it isn't very polished.

>>4320373
The shroom hat is good. Girl is bad - flat, one block for the whole body, arms and legs are like cylinders. Hair nice. Where it doesn't try to interact with the body.

>>4320432
How can I fix the shading on the girl? Client seemed pretty happy but I know I need to work on bodies.

>>4319913
>>4320012
me thinks it's sweat

>>4320373
Shame about her cataracts. Hope she gets them fixed.

>>4320591
Okay, I laughed pretty hard at this

>>4302662
I did this piece pretty fast so i'm not too worried about it but i'd like some advice if anyone would be so generous. I can't help but feel like her hand is off but i can't figure out why.

>>4320451
>How can I fix the shading on the girl?
You can't. You fucked up on the construction/drawing study before even getting to shading. The only way to right it now is to remove everything besides the hat and the head and just redo it.

>>4320875
>I did this piece pretty fast so i'm not too worried about it
>I drew this but I don't care lol
You just nulled any chance of getting a redline

>>4320875
It's the whole arm. Look at an arm that's actually gripping something large, like find a pic of someone hugging a fat person. Work out the construction from that.

Anybody need a red line on a WIP?

>>4321047
That's actually really helpful. Thanks anon!

>>4321265
What's the point of construction if you don't follow any perspective rules?
Instead of drawing 3d objects, you draw 2d shapes.

>>4319802
looks like the cock got split in half on that bottom right pic

>>4321265
Please stop posting your shit, it hurts my eyes.

>>4322498
no

new thread

>>4322816
>>4322816
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