/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4295818
was there really no other image you could've chosen from the previous thread?

>>4295948
Ok

Considering shading this one some more with a light shade of lead.

>>4296093
Why is she so piglike in appearance?

>>4296098
Her head is titled slightly upward, and the perspective of the picture is looking upward toward her from a plane slighlty below.

>>4296098
because there is a line at the center of the nose where the shading will be, obviously.

>>4296055
Why did you draw Asuka like she would be a drug addict?

>>4296055
el goblina....

>>4295818
>>4296055
Ew

>>4296055
No matter how much people shit on you, keep drawing/posting

>>4295818
>>4296055

this is not me that posted these
stop impersonating me

zostawcie mnie w spokoju ja nic nikomu nie zrobiłem

>>4296162
I just picked a different Asuka pic from the thread as a joke, I didn’t intend intend to start this faggotry.
Just keep drawing, breh

>>4296162
>polish
why does this keep happening

>>4296162
Holy fuck, were you the polish dude that kept wanting to know how to make $ with art?

>>4296176
yes

>>4296162
whaaaat? Are there two Asukaposters now?

>>4296055
unironically would coom to gilf asuka desu

>>4296162
>/ic/ starting to bully the pole
Too cute.

>>4295818
I have to clean up the lines on the middle one but do these all look like the same guy?

>>4296162
Keep doing your thing Asukaposter! Never give up!

>>4296231
the nose looks different on each guy. very scratchy lines. keep at it bud :)

>>4296162
stop drawing so many circles in the eye area, makes them look old/weird

>>4296162
>chuj ci w dupę podszywaczu jebany
kek

>>4296093
Now I'll call it finished.

Update.

i was redrawing this and then i realized that i dont know what to do in this specific part of the drawing, is there any book or videos that can help me to push my art to this kind of perspective?

>>4296270
did you smuge the pencil around to suggest some shadows?

I mean it might be me but it looks a little bit weird and what begginers do when they start drawing . I suggest erasing the pencil and creating the shadows with some pen crosshatching.

I've been curious about 5 point perspective and looked at a couple tutorials. I free handed this and was wanted to ask some questions. The objects have to bend in the shape of the arcs formed by the interacting perspective lines and things get wider and more normal looking in the middle while things on the side get thinner right?
Are there any other rules that apply to these interactions that I'm not aware of?

update on this piece

>>4296302
and on this one.

I changed the hue a little.
I also changed the colour of the highlight and added some greens on the back.

>>4296296
Yes I did, I just wanted to add alittle depth without adding any more hatching, as I was going for a lighter overall rendering to the picture.

I felt like something different, as I do alot of hatching on most of my other pictures, for example:

>>4295405
gollum gremlin etc. every single time is really losing it's charm bubba redline it or no more (you)s
>>4295586
>nty, still too stiff. And your OC, the one you actually draw from imagination sucks balls.
anon they're all from imagination you'll have to be more specific? wonder why you'd want to think that haha
>>4295636
it is -pure- unbridled jealousy from low mobility /ic/ bads

ANIME ROCOCO BOSH

キリスト

>>4296290

>>4296325
link the blog please.

>>4296336
you literally only draw a 3/4 angle of your mongoloid oc with the same face..

>>4296355
you're the hero ic needs.

>>4296355
>detached lower body
>tiny arms
>those hands
but at least its got big titties to jerk off to
>>4296497
fix her right arm and both of her hands
her legs make it seem she's hanging
her hands that she's leaning
and is the thing she hanging from a circle or a triangle?

>>4296368
hey i love this!

>>4296336
I like your work dude, but you really gotta learn to work on your attitude towards crit before people start reacting to you like they do Jay.

>>4296602
LOVE IT.

>>4296602
composition wise lets say it's okey
but please bring some variation and some new colours to it. Personally i can't find a main focus point.

>>4296162
>>4295818
Hey man I really like your stuff. Mind posting your construction for a beg?

>>4296368
very good

>>4296355
I like it despite the perspective and proportional inconcistencies. Work on that and you'll have lovely pieces.

>>4296620
sorry I am a /beg/ myself please under no circumstances learn from my drawings

>>4296527
thats exactly what i wanted, thanks

im trying to have her drop in from a roof or something, but the legs look really bad, like even if i cleaned the lines it doesn't seem like it'll fix the perspective problems

>>4296808
lol

>>4296837
oof, it's that bad?

>>4296808
Change view. You want her to drop from a roof but not unto the viewer face.
COULD look cool but it depend on much experience you have drawing dynamic poses.
Make her legs smaller than right now and fix the gun

>>4296548
>>4296639
Thanks!

>>4296368
Your use of hatching and colors are really good here, nice work. It's always nice to see new stuff from you

>>4296897
thanks, ill see what i can do.
i dont have much experience doing dynamic stuff, so this is mostly a learning curve im trying to force myself through. this is the last thing i did with the view I normally do

>>4296954
youll get better
that right hand though

Took a break from this and came back to it. Almost done but I love putting the sketch, lines and colours together to see what a shitshow it was in the beginning.

>>4296986
looks good
finish it

>>4296998
I'll do my best senpai.

help!
next stop: hell (wip)

>>4296336
love your style tho

>>4297074
forgot my pic

>>4297068
beside that first and second buildings looking like a cardboard cutout and taking into consideration the artstyle
and hands seeming small
and the left eye being bigger than the other
it looks alright
now fix the stuff, do clean lines and finish it up

I have just noticed how uneven her calves are in the left image. God damnit.

>>4296299
you have the right idea. keep in mind that you can only draw inside of the "sphere" established by the vps, working outside of it will cause a distortion.
if you wanna try some other warps, this tut helped me a lot:
https://help-me-draw.tumblr.com/post/142427352390/toshinho-perspective-warped-perspective

>>4296162
Post #20

>>4296517
I don't have a blog per say, but I've got an insta if you wanna check it out: gka.1987

im doing this paiting but i feel it very unispired, can someone give some guidance about improve this one?

>>4297147
This is awesome.

>>4297200
Biiiiiiiig head.

>>4296937
thanks bro

>>4296368
Ooooh it's you. Your style is totally different from what I do and I love it.

>>4296497
what rank are you?

>>4296986
okay, now THIS is epic

>>4297404
Thanks man. It's supposed to be my version of one of those "draw this in your own style" challenges, but I ended up changing it a lot as per.

>>4297147
I like the confident texturework and crisp confident edges

>>4297400
diamond 1

>>4296986
Looks great man, I love your lineart and coloring. It's simple but really effective. Blog?

>>4297110
Just woke up, this blog is very valuable material.
Thank you.

>>4297743
Really nice

>>4296368
I like the work, but in my opinion the slight bend at the shoulders/upper chest and neck away from the viewer makes it seem like a man with his back too us looking slightly down and with his mask on backwards

>>4297434
Ur fucking amazing, love your style

>>4296620
Not OP but Loomis really has a good method, his books make me want to gouge my eyes out too
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLAz3Gdbcp_LAV0_oOATypj2i1zJZIpODK

>>4297902
>>4297473
Thanks guys. I'm vshtone on Twitter. I haven't really uploaded much to it yet but I'll be posting more from now.

>>4297103
cute! blog?

Update on the pencils.

>>4298202
Nice construction on the puma.

>>4297743
you should work it fully. Looks badass.

Laying down the construction. Does anything look off?

>>4298382
I would personally bring the left leg closer towards the camera to give it some neat perspective, but other than that it's gucci.

>>4297385
haha i'm really glad to hear that man

>>4298382
Like another user said put the left leg a bit closer. Also are the horns meant to be doing opposite directions? I personally think it would look better if they pointed the same way but that’s me

>>4296361
>キリスト
Was this inspired by a verse?

>>4295818
Why is it called "alternative"? A large majority of the most commercially successful art could be classified as "cartooning".

>>4297886
Yeah i get what you mean, i noticed it while i was about to finish it, i tried adjusting it by changing the hat a bit and i wanted to put something on his coat to signify his front but i just couldn't make it work. I only notice stuff like that when i'm about to finish a piece and by the time i do i'm already all spent and can't go back to redrawing it for the life of me, i'm hoping those types of mistakes will correct themselves as time goes on.

Im trying to get the mason lindroth vibe

>>4295818
Alternative art is just a nicer name for shitty art.

>>4298477
Way back when these used to be called the Anime threads but after a couple of months the elitists of this board started to bitch and moan about how beginners will start to shit up the board with their anime drawings and that it would make them feel welcomed to post bringing down the quality of content posted as opposed to having fear of posting without first going through some rite of passage from the regular draw threads to be able to post hence the Loomis remarks and reading the sticky.

>>4297743
blog pls thanks

idk

i gave him his dmc4 hair because doing his dmc5 hair is pissing me off so i'm reworking it

hopefully he looks more "nero"

>>4298928
I just realised I didn't fix his ear and fuck

just a doodle but i like this dude

>>4298997
Broken neck

>>4299019
The placement of her left arm looks super awkward and the pose is a bit stiff

Wip, not feeling very happy with this so far. Value composition is kinda fucked

>>4299053
Fuck u right
>>4299066
This is really cute Nessie

>>4297467
>>4297288
Thanks

>>4299071
Thanks.
Also, cute boy <3

Update. Any advice on where to tighten the forms before I begin inking?

>>4299071
Cute boi

Some sketches of a character that, so far, I never use for anything.
I may use her in a sequel to an old webcomic.
>>4297743
Very cool. I like the pseudo-xenomorph face.
>>4299066
It's looking quite nice, but I can see why you'd be a bit frustrated with it. Wouldn't want the piece to be cluttered, but perhaps play around a bit more with that space between the trees and the bushes.

>>4296368
soul

>>4295818

>>4298464

>>4298464

>And when Jesus had cried with a loud voice, he said, Father, into thy hands I commend my spirit: and having said thus, he gave up the ghost.

Working on this atm. It's pretty rough right now, but I'm excited to finish it. I know her shaved side is supposed to be on the on the opposite side, but compositionally, I think the piece just looks better facing the way I have it. Hmmm.

>>4299436

i like the face so far

マザー・メアリー(綱手)
Mother Mary (Tsunade)

>>4296302
EASY BREEZY!

>>4298555
That's so cool

>>4299330
Hm, yeah. I'll see about playing with the shapes there more.

>>4299748
Soulless
Go back to your dad circle jerk

>>4299330
You wouldn't mind if I lewd her would you?

>>4299748
I feel like the overall color and shading has too much magenta-ish or that's just me

>>4299748
little rapist boy on the left there has a huge head.

>>4299600
y e s

>>4299450
yo i know you from like a while back? Do you got a discord man?

>>4299066
Perspective looks weird, like they're standing in the middle of a slope

>>4299748
they contrast from the background too much, also can you tell me how you learned how to paint these beautiful backgrounds?

>>4296055
damn that "curse of the eva" shit aint no joke huh

>>4296530
>>4297743

love these, these are super good

>>4296873
Not that bad, no. but the camera seems to be in the middle of the foot, so you see the upper part of the foot but the lower part of everything else, and it's really weird.

>>4299310
drizzt is gay tobehe

>>4299049
I like this.

>>4299802
I’d probably be flattered if you did.

>>4295818
hehe

>>4299922
I'll try lowering the horizon line a little. I tried using that Loomis method of hanging heads on the horizon line, but I don't know if I was doing it right or not

>>4299934
>they contrast from the background too much
Can you elaborate on what you mean by this?
>also can you tell me how you learned how to paint these beautiful backgrounds?
Thank you. Doing photo studies of foliage and master studies of animation background art helped me learn a lot

>>4299825
Oof. I'll fix it. I wanna exaggerate my characters proportions a little but I do not know how far I should go with any part.

>>4299817
Hmm, I wanted to go for a pink-ish palette. I kind of see what you mean, though

dumb oc power
>>4298857
ketteii on ig

>>4299066
>>4299748
Cute piece. The values are fine in so far that I can tell what's going on even befor clicking the tumbnail, but the biggest contrast is between the bushes in the front and the floor which draws my eyes away from the characters faces.
Generally, this background doesn't quite work for me. The idea of the symetrical trees is cool, but I'd say you either need to stylize them to be more abstract, or add some slight variations to make them appear more natural - right now they're in a bit of an uncanny in-between stage.
I also think the piece needs some yellow tones in the foliage. Not much, since I'm guessing this is an overcast day, but since you have some yellow tones in your color palette (blond hair, skintones), it looks a odd to have none in the leaves when there should be some fresh young growth somewhere. Alternatively, you could go with a more stylized color palette of only green and magenta and the neutrals you can mix from those two, but then you'd have to go with a silverish blond for the hair instead. I guess what I'm saying is that the characters color palette and the enviroment don't quite go together.

>>4300129
this was a nice warm up

Anyone got tips on drawing the face in profile in a mamga-ish style? I have some courses by neil fontaine but theyre not too great, and the whole the bottom of the face being pushed forward a bit is messing with me.

>>4300260
way to completely miss everything unique about her face

>>4300296
pff, i get ya ~ but i've done that in like 15 minutes and i didn't even try to use it as a portrait reference. Just pose and angle. So ofc it's souless and boring.

>>4300309
then don't post it

>>4300320
jesus calm down bro, go outside and get some fresh air
damn

>>4300226
Thanks for the detailed feedback, anon. That makes sense, I'm gonna try and work on that

>>4300260
I like the way you did the tits

>>4296744
kek

>>4297434
This is really good

>>4300376
thank you! glad you like them

Regarding the base of the neck, less detail is more, you drew it like hard edges when itcs a very smooth area on a person. While on the topic of the neck, where her shoulders curve up to her neck is a lot slimmer than her neck at the top, this could have been solved by sketching all of the anatomy first before touching her hair at all. Her nose isn't bad, but it's pointed to the viewer when it should be slightly to the right looking at the rotation of her chin, which, she has quite a large jaw, and your mouth is not properly centered with her chin making it look even bigger. Aside from mostly her misshapen face, pencil smudging, and your liberal use of hard lines it actually doesn't look bad, your hatching is decent enough. Just remember, less is more with hard lines, linework is not detailwork, details should be much thinner than your linework to not muddy the focus. Work on your anatomy and not making the entire image linework, less is more. I'd say flip the image horizontally on your phone or comouter and you'll see your issues a lot better, and get into the habit of doing so often to help you self critique and grow as an artist. I believe in you, anon.

>>4296270
Regarding the base of the neck, less detail is more, you drew it like hard edges when itcs a very smooth area on a person. While on the topic of the neck, where her shoulders curve up to her neck is a lot slimmer than her neck at the top, this could have been solved by sketching all of the anatomy first before touching her hair at all. Her nose isn't bad, but it's pointed to the viewer when it should be slightly to the right looking at the rotation of her chin, which, she has quite a large jaw, and your mouth is not properly centered with her chin making it look even bigger. Aside from mostly her misshapen face, pencil smudging, and your liberal use of hard lines it actually doesn't look bad, your hatching is decent enough. Just remember, less is more with hard lines, linework is not detailwork, details should be much thinner than your linework to not muddy the focus. Work on your anatomy and not making the entire image linework, less is more. I'd say flip the image horizontally on your phone or comouter and you'll see your issues a lot better, and get into the habit of doing so often to help you self critique and grow as an artist. I believe in you, anon.

>>4300462
blog ?

>>4300462
nice

>>4300496
man ur faces are ok, but u never seem to improve bodywise.

>>4300462
Colored it really quickly. Kind of prefer the sketch though. Thoughts?

>>4299066
Nessie, your characters are amazing but it always puts me off how you completely neglect the background. This could be a really awesome piece if only you gave a more interesting treatment to the environment. I realize it's unfinished, but... path in the middle + bushes and trees on the side... I think you can come up with something more original than this.

I'd really like to see some pure landscape art from you. I think a few studies of environments could help you develop as an artist. Just some friendly advice, otherwise you're doing great.

More Rei love.

>>4300538
No, I agree with you. I kind of phoned the background for this in especially, since it's something I've been procrastinating on for a long time and I just needed to get it done for a project.
I'm gonna try doing more environment studies, and especially inorganic stuff this year so I can get outside of my comfort zone. I keep falling back on generic trees and plants whenever I need a bg, and have no ideas, I really need to work on breaking out of that. Thank you for the advice, anon, I appreciate it.

>>4300533
Your colours and colouring style give me a Tetsuya Nomura kind of feeling, it's comfy and simple. I like it

Ok so this is what I'm thinking for his pose - gonna sit on some rubble or shit

ngl i wanted to show off blue rose more and add red queen into it, but maybe another time

also i like coming here for any feedback - anything is appreciated

>>4300638
Composition tip to always keep in mind: don’t cut off at the joints. His knee is sliced off, which hurts the image a bit.
That’s the main thing that sticks out to me. Keep at it.

>>4300958
cute pups
i'd outline the pups too though, to make them stand out like the girl

>>4300965
Thanks, I agree. I tried to do a darker outline for the doggies but struggled to make the fluffy/fur look good

>>4300992
maybe just add a darker shadow underneath them, the white bois will pop more

>>4296055
Oh lordy

>>4296270
You would benefit greatly by studying comic book inking. If you are going to ink lines, you have to commit to the whole piece heing rendered with ink. The harsh black lines do nothing but outline soft contours. Parts where this stuck out was the collarbones and lips. A line represents a dramatic contour shift. It is a shadow cast upon a surface with a sharp slope. It can be used to separate a character from a background for example but not a half inch, round, contour like the collarbone.

Eliminating many harsh black lines around the neck and mouth/nose will be much more appealing imo.

I did it, I drew a cartoon. Tell me your opinions.

>>4301427
I'm going to fix the right eye and hair shading with a white gel pen. Tips?

>>4300992
What about something like this? It's pretty close to what you have in your sketch, just added some darker lines.

>>4301664
Blog?

>>4301665
mothesstuff on instagram. I've been thinking about posting on twitter too but I'm not very good with social media.

>>4300919
Oh yeah! I remember reading something about that, like cutting limbs to half way is way better for characters when it comes to composition. I'll need to find that again, it was really useful. Thank you though anon, really appreciate it!

>>4301427
Looks a bit flat. Cartoon or not, it always helps to think of these things as 3D figures that exist in a real space. You’ll like the results more if you keep that in mind.

>>4301664
This takes me back to the art from breath of fire. I love it. Keep it alive.

>>4301719
not op but this is another useful composition trick

Assuming that you already know your basics, them being line, shape, form, perspective, anatomy,etc.
How does realistic art and "draw what you see" helps with drawing stylized art?
Does it conflict with information inside your head about drawing with symbols or without reference?

>>4301957
hm not sure if i know what you mean but the better my observation skills get and the more refs i study the easier it gets for me to draw my stylized stuff from imagination

Todays sketch

Any stuff similar to this?

A sketch i did

>>4301501
nice

>>4297434
Blog?

>>4301957
I just find that a better understanding of realism always leads to a better grip on stylizing your art. A better grasping of the rules will reveal new ways to bend them.

>>4302179
>>4301957

pretty much boils down to having to know the rules to break them

>>4301921
Oh damn, that's good! Thank you so much!

>>4297103
qt3.14
got a blog?

I really enjoyed doing this, trying to put effort into improving my compositions and form

>>4300578
blog?

>>4302484

https://klinckfoster.tumblr.com
https://www.instagram.com/klinck_foster/
https://twitter.com/ArtKlinck

>>4300638
I'm back!
I fixed the composition and I feel like I like this one way more - gonna change right leg boot though maybe?

Not sure how I feel about left arm and Blue Rose, but who knows

Critique/Assistance always appreciated!!

>>4302541
Composition's much better. It doesn't feel cramped. Are you going to do anything with the background?

>>4302621
I'm thinking buildings - was originally going to add the tower of life but where the gun is, it'd end up being blocked

I'm kind of roughing something out atm - took a break because I powered through a lot within like an hour or so

>>4300496
Why are you using aliexpress to name your drawings, Pops

>>4302723
This actually looks pretty cool, I like the sword, but I think you should add that level of texture to the rest of the piece as well

>>4302727
i'm planning to color it, tho i did just see that i forgot to give woodgrain to the shield

>>4302657

love it.
blog?

>>4302737
This needs much much more detail beyond just coloring

>>4301434
Yea something like that works a lot better. Thanks for the tips anon

>>4299894

im not tech savvy enough for a discord kek :v

>>4302960
this image is so big, when I opened it I thought it was fucking sick but as i started scrolling down I becomes more and more disappointed that shield looks like a MS paint doodle compared to the sword.

The bottom 50% of this drawing does not do the top 50% justice in the least bit

>>4303160
what types of detailing would you recommend i add?

Coming down home stretch in this.

>>4302758
Here you go

https://twitter.com/WhiteBox_Studio

>>4303162
Try adding some hatching to the armor, remember to follow to form while doing so. Also I feel that your style would really benefit if you took advantage of black shadows too. (kinda like pic related, not my work, just something I has saved)

>>4303183
That mouth is making me uncomfortable

>>4303199
Better?

About an hour clocked for the inks so far.

>>4303368
Draw the teeth, it would help with giving the mouth more depth.

>>4296556
>I like your work dude, but you really gotta learn to work on your attitude towards crit before people start reacting to you like they do Jay.
Hey fuck you man Jay got -actual critique- redlines and ignored them; I am contending with a sea of bottom-tier baddies and still gaming my dick Off
Initially thought you meant Jace, too; I guess he's like Jace 2.0? What is it with Ja-name artists and being absolutely fucking skitzed, unbelievable

im alive

>>4303600
Please go die again

>>4303605
i wish

>>4296055
Does she have AIDS or cancer?

>>4298197
>>4302455
if you guys are still around
https://twitter.com/yarharcannon

>>4296808
show the bottom of the shoe

>>4302482
no amount of renderfagging is going to give you 'composition' and 'form'. you know you don't have the slightest grasp on either.
stop drawing symbols. stop drawing symbols. stop drawing symbols. stop drawing symbols.
>>4303600
ahahahaha back to square 1 i see
never change asukaposter
>>4303646
i love ur stuff please do more papercrafts

>>4302482
your rendering and line work are great, but you really need to work on anatomy, proportions, perspective and construction. the kings head in particular has major issues with feature placement. his eyes are too low, brow/forehead is much too large. his ear is much too far forward, it looks as if it is attached to the front plane of his face, when it should be on the side. the top of his head under the crown is flat, and it looks as if his head is a bit too “deep”. I think you should work on doing construction under your drawings with pencil. you can plan out these things much easier this way.

>>4303712
this poster is a cretin don't listen what he says.

>>4303795
>his ear is much too far forward, it looks as if it is attached to the front plane of his face, when it should be on the side
meant to say it should be on the side of his head, not his face. just realized that may be unclear.

>>4295818
Gargoyle Princess warm-up.

>>4303600
kekw

Been experimenting with different rendering styles lately what you guys think?

>>4303892
Your monster designs really seem to be your strong point in my personal opinion.

>>4303600
I hope you don't mind but I did a paint over your Asuka, as I see you a lot here but wanted to just give you a heads up on some things. It's not very perfect, and I wanted to try and keep your style, but I hope it helps you out.


1) You made her nose a little too flat, and her nostril way too low. Noses will point out so you can see a definite shape, and nostrils are higher than the tip of the nose that connects to the philtrum (cupid's bow). The top of the nose will also follow the shape of the face to connect to the eyebrow.

2) Her eyes were a bit too huge, so I made them a bit smaller, but wanted to keep your stylized eyelashes. Female eyes are more so rounder than males and not so sullen looking and pointed.

3) Her chin was too low and too out, female faces are a lot more smoother and have more curves, and chins are not as big as mens can be.

4) Her ear is a bit too big and same as the chin - needed to be smoother, lots of female ears are quite rounded. You got the position of the ear right though!

I like the colours you use for her though,but are you gonna draw proper bitchy Asuka instead of Sadsuka's? :(

>>4303892
The biggest issue with this is that your values don't read well, it's very hard to look at the focal points of this image because they are all the same values

>>4303900
shut up you're all fucking bad lmao

>>4303712
>you know you don't have the slightest grasp on either
I do know, that's why despite me saying that I'm putting effort into improving them the end result still turned out fundamentally broken. But it's a matter of experience, if I keep studying and practicing eventually I'll have something I'm proud of.
>stop drawing symbols
I promise I'm trying to
>>4303795
>>4303801
I'm extremely grateful for the detailed response, anon, thank you! Now that you've pointed them out, I'm seeing all the said issues, I've always struggled with construction but I'll do some more practices tonight to try and improve, then possibly do a redraw of the king to document progress. Again, I appreciate the feedback.

>>4303948
It's ok man, we all still got time to learn and practice.
Hopefully you can too

>>4302960
if you fixed the eyes this would be epic. right now he has kawaii anime eyes and it really doesn’t fit. he looks like he needs more fearsome lizard or bug like eyes. love that flaming sword.

>>4303600
Tfw Asuka has a manlier face then you

>>4302960
if you fixed the eyes this would be epic. right now he has kawaii anime eyes and it really doesn’t fit. he looks like he needs more fearsome lizard or bug like eyes. love that flaming sword.

wip

>>4303183
>>4303690
My dude, you really need to work on your faces, they're your weakest point.

what do you guys think of this style? I've been trying to experiment a bit lately

How the heck does one draw like this? For context, the only kind of rendering I know how to do is cel-shading. When I saw this picture, I tried to recreate the rendering using the airbrush tool and a soft eraser, and it ended horribly. If anybody knows where I can learn to render like this, please let me know. Where do I start, how do I progress, etc.

>>4303955
powerful fungal cock
>>4304248
budget orenji
>>4304294
die

>>4304294 me again.
>inb4 pyw
I made pic related. Whilst trying to draw like the other pic I posted.

>>4304294
It's just like cel shading but with lots of soft edges. The style is heavily I spired by mucha. If you're having trouble rendering like that, you're probably not good enough with forms to fully understand what you're doing. Study more.

>>4304300
>>4304301
Yep, forms are an issue for you. Have you ever tried drawing the asaro head? Learning the planes of the face and body would help you. More forms, more values, more anatomy.

>>4304306
I googled asaro head, I'll try drawing that next. Thanks for the input.

not sure about the perspective on this. I want it to look like the smaller girl is lying on the other gals back seen from above

>>4296055
Eye bags

>>4304315
I don't have much to say in regards to critique since I'm /beg/, but do you have a blog? Your style is very appealing.

>>4304411
Hey thanks man! Unfortunately I don't really have a blog at the moment besides instagram, and its got a lot of non art related bullshit on it

Working on keeping a characters likeness consistent at different angles.

>>4303690
That is some tight line work ya got there.

thoughts on my art?

>>4303900

you made it worse

>>4304553
I love it

wip of some MHW fanart in a krenz style

>>4302723
I like it, but a bit more variation in line weight would help it read more clearly.

>>4304553
Very cool
Not joke if I was at a yardsale or something and a record had this cover I'd get it just because I like the cover a lot.

>>4297743
this is amazing! I love your art style. :)

Was trying out some new pen nibs/watercolor brush on krita and ended up sketching this.

If anyone could give criticism on this piece, I would really appreciate it. :)

>>4295818
>>4296055
Dunno who this is but she sure as hell ain't Asuka.

>>4304553
I love the little patterns and the colors and the persons eyes and all that. It's so cool!

>>4304553
Love the colors and stylization, but the neck anatomy and way the arms attach to the torso look off. II get the impression that you have a lot of experience with drawing faces and coloring, but not enough with anything else.

>>4296368
I love everything about this.

>>4304461

>>4296368
Oh hey! I've critiqued your work last year. You were already good but now you're even better anon!

>>4304553
Can you try shading the shirt slightly on the edges on certain parts(maybe at 20% opacity or smaller). I do not know if this would work but it might help the shirt from looking a bit flat. Also >>4304884 is right on the neck Albeit I think the white lines could be slightly softened. That is it really.

>>4304874
You may want to try to thin the lines from the cheeks to chin. It's a bit too thick and comes across as a male character slightly because of it.
>>4304875
I would try experimentation with lighting maybe on the hands maybe a glow effect or something really minimal. So it moves the eyes towards them.

>>4304639
Ah shoot, anything I could have done to make it better?

>>4304243
>>4303690
I agree with this anon, Sometimes you draw really flat looking faces.

>>4304639
nah original was worse, he's bad, but still not as bad as the OP.

>>4298202
Drizzt?

drafting some prints, any input is appreciated

>>4305177
Woah, this is good. Do you have a blog?

>>4304964
It's like I hear the empty cans clanging through the picture. Blog?

>>4305177
he looks cool

>>4304998

>>4304884 that's true, I'm still studying anatomy and I understand why it seems weird.

Thank you so much. And yes, you are right, I'm not really sure why I did that thing on the neck.

Thank you again for your attention and your advice.

>>4304669

>>4304847

>>4304884


Thank you so much! Btw I recently did this

>>4303948
>>4304639
me next me next

>>4302621
I've started adding in some buildings for the background, just playing around and working on something at the moment, might change it tho

I tried vaguely referencing certain parts of this to help, worked the tiniest bit but time to study again

>>4301739
Thank you. I'll find the time to push it further and hopefully it won't fall apart in the process.

Liked the doomer girls look so gave a it a go.

>>4305760
I love this

>>4298555
i dig it

>>4305760
Your backgrounds remind me of an artist whose design I have on a shirt, although I don't know that artist's name. Who inspired you? Also, blog?

>>4305760
ok but what was the point of posting the sketch for critique if you didn't fix shit?

>>4306042
To show off so he can praise himself of course.

>>4304730
making progress

>>4306151
I'm liking this a lot, keep it up!

>>4305760
Saved

>>4305264
Legit real good. Would look good as a pin or a sticker.

scraps

>>4306796
I like the designs and you can feel the energy, pretty cool.

>>4306796
Seems like Melon?
Very cool stuff. Much to learn from

GOOOO >>4306938

>>4305044
Right hand looks like it's clipping through her body to me and her left foot seems pretty lazily done, like you just stopped using perspective for it. She has a lot of character and it's a pretty difficult pose arms-wise so I think you did overall pretty well with it.

>>4306565

Thanks. Yeah, that's what I'm planning. I've also made some Evangelion stickers.

>>4306796
Love it when your art hits my feed, keep pushing those poses