/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Imma post this here too then, what should i correct or remove, anything looks weird? any tips?

>>4288163
im retarded, forgot the pic

>>4288168
Honestly, finish more of it, at least the b/w lineart phase. Other than that, looking good so far.

>>4288140
Based.

>>4288168
>>4288168
Pose looks good. I do have a feeling you're going to mess up the head/features placement, since it's not looking solid right now. Construct the head better. The dick looks a bit flat, as if it was smashed by a road roller. You can probably fix this by using overlap, wrapping lines, lineweight, rendering and stuff like that.
I'd personally draw the testicles with a single rounded shape for the sake of appeal (pic related) instead of splitting the balls like that.
It's a promissing image, post it here when it's done

Allright here's the deal, i want to become real good with dicks, pussies and fat asses. I already know all the anatomy, but i want tutorials and stuff on how to make it appealing, hot and exaggerated.
Anyone have any good stuff there? Please help me out.

>>4288197
copy other artists you admire man. Literally the only way.

>>4288180
>sem título

Nao pode seh

>>4288140
I'm pretty stupidly happy about my snek being in the OP

d(=^･ω･^=)b

>>4288221
macacos me mordam!!! brasileiros gostam de travecos?? nani desu ne

>>4288221
>>4288230
Eu não ironicamente não gosto de travecos, mas entendo o appeal.

uma

delicia

workng on some colors

beg here, how bad is it anons?

>>4288296
Increase the size of the legs and arms, the legs should be larger due to simple perspective and foreshortening techniques. You could just futz with the torso with selection tool and scale and just rescale everything with the transform function. But regardless you are going to need to expand the canvas size to accommodate the new leg length and size.

working on this

doodled some female bodies

thoughts? redline?

>>4288337
Not bad, un fact looks good, but thoose really red veins on the dick kills it for me, havent you seen a dick in real life before? Fucking gross.
Other than that keep going, looks good

>>4288140
Who drew that top left?

>>4288216
Probably a bit nit picky, I really like her body, it’s outline nicely.

>>4288180
>>4288175
I tried what you suggested, how is it looking? I might upload it in this state already idk, any suggestions anybody?

>gay pedoshit bestiality and furries

Fucking why hasnt this thread got purged by the mods?

>>4288451
move the dick and balls a bit to the right, right now it looksl ike they're partially growing out of his leg. The face also looks pretty unappealing imo, his eyes look like they're looking into two different directions. I'd tell you to do something about that mouth, but I can'tm ake any suggestions because I can't tell what he's feeling at all. Is he embarrassed? Does he not care about being exposed like that?

>>4288197
> I already know all the anatomy
>but i want tutorials and stuff on how to make it appealing, hot and exaggerated
Pick one.

>>4288221
>>4288230
>>4288234
>>4288246
>>4288260
Woah, you are so cutteeee.
GTFO or, even better, KYS.

>>4288296
Learn perspective and how to construct bodies out of simpler elements. This has 0 depth.

>>4288348
The resident pedo Lambrey.

>>4288456
the wha?

>>4288228
lol

dickings.

>>4288456
>he believe in the mods

>>4288563
what is perspective

>>4288479
Yeah, it's pretty ambitious pose for my skill level. Any suggestions where to start?

>>4288456
No bestiality or furry shit in that collage.
There's nothing wrong with gay stuff. If you think differently, you are a garbage person.
I agree about pedo shit being trash that should be banned from the world.

>>4288456
why do you want to legit LARP as some internet hall monitor? really what do you get out of putting in meaningless 'wutaboutisms' thought crimes, you're just making life miserable for both others and you in the long run.

srsly I don't get these kinds of people

>>4288332
Render these in more, include the arms, legs and head too, they are decent, now expand and experiment, learn to fail faster and learn from those mistakes, do NOT be afraid to fail, failure is a severely important part of the learning process, and do not to be afraid to post it here.

>>4284693
>>4284708
>>4284732
In case >>4281841 didn't see.

>>4288677
There's nothing wrong with loli/shota stuff. If you think differently, you are a garbage person.

>>4288456
Hard to believe people like this are browsing 4chan.
>much morality

>NOOOO YOU CANT DRAW WHAT I DONT LIKE

>>4288296
1. The angle in witch the dick enters the vagina seems off... dont know much about perspective (esspecally when it comes to applying it to the human form) so i cant really help you here , sorry

2. Give her a table to lay upon or something , assuming ground level is where she lays the man fucking her whould be an amputee

>>4288872
You can call it loli and shota as much as you want, but pedophilia involves children, which aren't consenting adults. Gay stuff involves adults.
Keep trying, freak.

i'm not gay

>>4288350
yeah i noticed the eye spacing, i'll fix it, thanks.

>>4288677
>If you think differently, you are a garbage person.
back to r*ddit

>>4288563
I'm signing a complaint

>>4289161
Well here's a newsflash for you.
You're gay.

>>4289161
Feminine benis is one thing, but focusing on the butthole is full blown gay.

Not porn just a character sheet for the future- will clothe her when Im done. Crit pls

>>4289588
Thighs and calves are proportionally too thick.

>>4289592
I want that to be the style. She's really kind of stocky and her calves are huge. But I can tone it down a bit, especially around the knees on the right side version.

>>4289597
There are still rules to follow on how parts of the body attach to each other and where the fat deposits are. Without knowing the underlying anatomy, she ended up looking like she has tumors.

>>4288383
Based.

>>4289588
great colours, especially shadows

>>4288228
>polishing a turd
Just stop man

>>4289088
except thats not how psychopaths/pedos work. sick fucks will immediately harm others in the worst ways possible. There's no "safer drug" to stop their addictions; so regardless of whether they had the worst pornos in their hands or not, they'll mutilate and kill some rando and get off from it. also they tend to be massive sociopaths; look at the Epstein/Prince Andrew shit for example.

Fucking coomers who have double digit IQs and fap to pornhub 24/7 will even steer away from CP.

Also cartoons are "too vague" or in better terms, too idealized and perfect to dictate who you wanna fuck. back when tumblr was new, and it wasn't complete shitshow that it is now, there were LGBT blogs who've lamented how dumb teens were asking if they were gay for fapping to futa tentacle hentai.
IRL porn with real people will dictate what you fap to, not cartoons; and the production of irl porn requires actual people.
I'm a casualfag too who doesn't like loli/furfags but I'm gonna just ignore that shit and not cry to the government to make dumb ass laws.

trying to make something appealingish, any help is appreciated!

why are shortstacks so superior bros?

>>4288216

>>4288451
Tried to redline it

>>4290035
did you shade the tits differently? cause they're kinda grey looking compared to the rest

>>4290042
yes i used a cool gray for the highlights and rim lighting. i got feedback telling me to try to shift hues more, i tried to add a contrasting color but i think maybe it wasnt ideal for the environment since shes at the beach

>>4290045
ah. Also, might wanna try removing a bit of the linework where the collarbone meets the shoulder, the two look connected now, as if the collarbone is jutting out a lot.

>>4290048
ok i will, thank you

>>4290035
stop pillowshading

>>4289414
I'm just a normal person and I'll stay here, freak.
You can do the same and keep being offended whenever somebody points out that you are a freak.

>>4289899

>>4289557
nice, there's not enough subtlety with giant women porn.

I have a problem

>>4290193
yes, they should be bigger, normie.

>>4290193
Your only problem is that you attach those to kids, fucking freak.

>>4290193
can i suck on your problem

>>4290193
where do you get your cock reference

>>4290270
Saved from /gif/ and /hm/ from back when I visited those places, although some are from imagination

I sketched these out last night, thought I’d post them somewhere to get some critique.

>>4290285

>>4290286

>>4290290

Starting a decade with something cool

>>4290277
Will you ever finish anything?
Unironical question. Do you do any therapy for your pedo problem?

>>4290285
>>4290286
>>4290290
>>4290291
>Traced photos
No value whatsoever.

Stop tracing and first learn some fundamentals.

>>4288174
LOL

>>4290457
The last one is actually my own dick. Is there anything wrong with drawing lifelike models or something?

>>4290492
If it's obvious it's traced. like in your case, then yes.
If you can manage to draw something from reference by adding your own flare and style to it, then no.

This stuff here is obviously traced or overreferenced.

>>4290492
If it's obvious it's traced, like in your case, then yes.
If you can manage to draw something from reference by adding your own flare and style to it, then no.

This stuff is obviously traced or overreferenced.

>>4289161
Blog?

>>4289899
good question

oh hey if marmalade is still hanging around I sincerely appreciate the feedback/redline from before. just saw it last night and made changes

>>4288480
give twitter

>>4290949
never mind found it

>>4290872
hey can i have your twitter? very appealing, reminds me of modeseven

>>4291335
Thanks, that means a lot to me actually. Dude's a porn god and an inspiration

Be forewarned, I post pretty infrequently and never finish anything (although I want to change that this year)

>>4291110
I like your interpretation of her hair a lot!

1. You're relying on pillow shading and your lightscouce is inconsistent. You're afraid of strongly-edged shadows. I want you to locate the direction and intensity of your strongest lightsource (ie: the sun) and don't be afraid of having some hard-edged, saturated shadows.

2, your shadows are very muddy. I would suggest adding more warm colors/color variation to contrast the cold highlight colors. Try adding some splashes of color via overlay layer and fiddle with the opacity. Add some purples, greens, yellows.

3, The perspective of her crown doesn't match the rest of the piece.

4, Anon are you hiding her arms/hands because you don't like drawing them? You can't run forever! Her elbows/the outer part of her arms should still be partially visible in this position

thoughts on this in its sketch phase?

>>4291828
tell me about it, very kind too and only 28. ive PM'd him before and he was nothing but cool.

>>4291859
>pillow shading
the light source on the reference photo is from the front haha im so triggered right now

you're right though its a pretty inconsistent piece all around, im calling it done and posting it since im tired of looking at it but thank you very much for your feedback ill keep it in mind. im not used to working with color at all so im kind of just stumbling through all of this :(

>>4291893
It's hard to tell. Polish and finish it more, only thing I can see, would be the left demoness shoulder is way too far out, it looks like it's dislocated, the legs, notably the lower leg segement is too short, and the feet on the demoness. I'd suggest just redrawing her legs completely, the demoness'es that is. As for the rest, it's clearly cartoon anatomy, but the real question is, how far do you want it to look technically proper vs catoony balance?

>>4291859
>furcadia port guide
holy shit am I back in 2001?

>>4291901
Post the ref anon lemme see

Honestly, take your time
I'm still unsure about colors too but working in monochrome/doing black and white studies has definitely made me more confident in value/shadow placement and I think it may help you as well.

>>4291893
Unfortunately I can't quite understand what's happening : (

>>4291944
im really comfortable with my values when i work in grayscale or black and white but for some reason color just fucks my head up and i dont want to do grayscale>color because it tends to not look as good
its just a matter of mileage i think. im still uncomfortable painting i usually do line drawings with lots of crosshatching like pic related.

Im working on a fucking 1024x768 cheapass monitor with shit color range, i ordered a new screen for my laptop and it got here after 2 weeks only to discover that the connector pins were wrong and im pissed... dont have enough money to afford a new one yet.

>>4288296
Get the sizes right, it’s not too bad. It’s ok to use reference sometimes. That face is hilarious but not sexy and imo it’s too simple compared to the rest

>>4291958
You post anywhere?

>>4290687
@pokinha

Tried mirroring and didn't like the face.

What do you Anons think?

>>4291930
Alright ill do some redraws and polish.

As for the caroon/real stuff? I guess my goal is more like theboogie's work with more cartoonish proportions but a sense of realism behind the construction and rendering, though my rendering level is nowhere near that level desu.

Guess the plot

>>4289899
>>4290857
>>4291893
>>4291958
Blogs?

>>4292856
Sorry im just starting so I havent made one.

>>4292951
Which one (of the posts that I tagged) are you?

>>4292856
Yeah, a lot of good budding artists, hopefully we can help them blossom.

>>4292792
If you want Boogie's style, I'd say go technical anatomy then. And heavy over the top rendering with lots of shiny bits. Any other artists that inspire you as well to draw from reference?

>>4288140
Quick question, where would you recommend uploading your work?

>>4292968
3rd

>>4292997
I really appreciate Incase but I feel if I followed their way of doing things Id be deviating a lot.

As for other ones I like id have to check

>>4293051
I'd say then lean more heavily towards Boogie, some of Incase's stuff can be pretty stiff pose wise, and has a bad case of same-face. But great at rendering and attention to detail. The Something about Incase's stuff doesn't sit well with me. It just feels very static to look at.

>>4292856
>>4292993
I only have twitter, it's eifiemoth

>>4293095
Ah, yes. I remember you from that Lurantis pic you posted on this board. Keep on going with those cuties, you're drawing them well.

>>4292856
https://twitter.com/DizzyTizzyPrime
I draw weird shit

>>4293112
thank you!

>>4293211
Judging from diving into your twitter you have good taste. Keep it going. I like the way you drew Ranamon.

>>4288228
your pixiv only has sfw stuff

>>4291958
This is some good rendering

>>4293311
Study the pubic arch of the pelvis, consider its plane and how the abductor muscles attach to it conforming to the same plane as the pelvis in perspective, this will allow you to understand where the pubic mound and Bagina originates. Find a reference with someone raising their arms and notice how the clavicle behaves along with the pecs and breasts that are pulled by the humerus. Stop trying to conveniently obstruct forms you do not understand behind hair it is lazy and it will show when you do it; head is slightly disproportionate to the torso and her left arm is not convincing enough to show that it is being bent it is too flat especially with the way you drew the deltoid there's no overlap in forms indicating space. The Deltoid would be moved behind with the dominant form being the chest muscle that attaches to the humerus.

It seems as if her right arm is broken into two, this is because again you are conveniently hiding forms such as the joints to avoid working with them and her right forearm seems to be reversed with the ulna facing us instead of the radius with her thumb originating form it.

>>4293332
Damn...

>>4291958
Seconding this one >>4293293
The rendering looks really good. On that note, what was your learning material in general? Any book list/recommendation, etc.?

>>4293332
I admit that I have a long way to go, but I was not trying to hide anything.
Would you mind posting some of your own work as an example of where I'm going wrong?

>>4289588
I like it. I'm erect.

>>4293357
Not the anon that gave you the advice, but don't feel ashamed about your stuff and go deleting it. We're all here to git gud in the first place.

>>4293357
This is as close of a redline you'll get, you both have similarities in the clavicles and breasts not being pulled.

>>4293380
>Mikufag is the Satanachia poster
oh

>>4293380
But neither of these are correct either. I'll just go do some studies instead.
Thanks for the critique though.

>>4293393
You're quite welcome you passive aggressive little faggot.

>>4293248
Thanks friend. Still gotta work on my muzzles though, even though I prefer Kemono 9/10 times

>>4293380
>he thinks breasts hang off of the clavicle
fucking lol

>>4293397
I didn't mean it like that, I'm genuinely thankful for the advice. I just don't see those as particularily helpful examples

>>4293401

trying to do something more rendered this time maybe fucking it up

>>4292746
I mean, I nut to it so

I made this little animation recently. What do you think?

>>4288140
how does ic feel about fart and scat porn art? is it allowed? srs

>>4293466
i mean i think it's allowed just everyone will judge you

>>4293403
idk, i just tried doin something, thank you passive aggressive one

>>4293510

>>4292339
>>4292856
>>4293342
Twitter.com/Smutbrush

>>4293293
Thank you

>>4293449
kewl.

>>4288319

>>4293342
sorry i gave you my blog instead of answering your question haha.
Loomis and Hampton are really fantastic, everything i learned about hatching i learned from reading R.Crumb. I love black and white american comics, not so much 90s super hero comics but indie stuff. Aeon Flux, Ren and Stimpy, Fantastic Planet
Ralph Bakshi, Bernie Wrightson, Craig McKracken, old Mad Magazine illustrators, Scott Mcloud, Jim Lee, Frank Miller, Mike Mignola, all the big american guys (frazetta, arthur adams) as well as a lot of french artists like moebius and the magazine Heavy Metal in particular were heavy influences.

>>4288140
Absolutely Degenerate

>>4293567
>sorry i gave you my blog instead of answering your question haha.
No problem. I figured that you'd respond to the others for the blog request so I didn't mention it in my post. Thanks for answering my question.

WIP, Starfire and Beast Boy

>>4293666
Neat and checked!
Why not something along the lines of Raven or Black Fire fucking Star for being annoying, though?

>>4293679
Was tempted to put Blackfire in Starfire's place on the bottom because I like her a lot, but I just decided to stick with Starfire

>>4293666
>>4293682
I forgot to ask in the previous post: blog?

>>4293685
I don't have one

>>4293686
based

>>4292951
>Sorry im just starting so I havent made one.
>>4293686
>I don't have one
Twice in one thread. I'm being played.

Pic source for anyone wondering:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yoHR8qwuqmY

>>4293694
Im just starting with lewd imagery but I do have a nonH twitter/tumblr

>>4293704
The faces on the males are starting to grow on me, maybe because you keep posting and it is a learned appeal but please do something about your female faces at least have some variety.

i really gotta stop putting off anatomy studies

>>4293720
I think the anatomy looks alright. Maybe some weirdness on the shoulder area. Unlesss you really want to show off some tone.

>>4293449
Very cool anon.
Only thing i might change if i were you would be to make the part where she kind of recoils at being hit by the penis last slightly longer. I could be wrong though, since dont animate anything.
>>4293430
>shading with black

eh i think i need to stop blending and just transition with a hard round

any thoughts on how to improve the dick? ignore everything else.

>>4293868
>ignore everything else

im fucking dying ahaha

>>4293868
Notice below the dick, is the crease of the pants where each leg meets, copy and paste it to there. His dick is coming out of his stomach anatomy wise. Also, would love to see it finish, keep up the awesome work.

Doodles and some studies

>>4290038
>>4288463
Tysm for the redline, i tried following it, and this si how it came out, critique pls.

>>4293883
thank you for the advice, if I've made mistakes again, please tell me. again, ignore everything else

>>4293720
Perspective knowledge and dynamic gesture is what you lack.

gotta goto werk but i wanna stay home an draw big dumb tidd an some other gay shidd

>>4294019
What you are drawing is called pedo shit.
Nothing of value is lost. Skill and subject wise this is shit anyway.

>>4294019
man at least clean it up a little

>>4294085
I'm going to have to ask you to never post anything ever again.

>>4294109
well youre getting a full color version later today so i'm gonna have to break your heart

>>4294085
I have literally never seen anything so offputting and damaging to the human soul. You have unseated the guy that posts in here that never improves.

>>4294140
>I have literally never seen anything so offputting and damaging to the human soul
you must be new to the internet

>>4294085
This belongs in /horror/ instead

>>4294140
but i am improving you just dont like my subject matter :v

>>4294085
loooool

>>4293894
nice

>>4288140

How do I draw tits??? Redline maybe?? everything about the body looks kind of fucked

>>4294085
Hope they paid you a lot, i mean, a fucking lot for this. Any cent less and this was now worth it.

>>4294085
gotta be honest, what's the story behind this?

>>4294217
im a madman and the law cant keep up

>>4293720
1. stop drawing nasty shit
2. you gotta learn to stop drawing so much unnecessary shit which makes things look gross or overly done. (learn to simplify)
3. profit.

>>4294274
but i like doing those things. i want to draw like Nezumi

>>4294160
Oh wow, I just realized something.
You are drawing more and more disgusting stuff only so that you can convince yourself people dislike your art for the subject matter and not for the poor skills and lack of improvement.
Lol, what a retard.

>>4294228
people with poor skills have to make up for that in outrage. it's what shadman does.

>>4294289
>>4294385
This is another great example of what I just said.
You mask the very bad foreshortening (and other fundamentals) with rendering and a very outrageous subject matter.
It's like how drawing boobs make up for bad art when it comes to porn and coomers.

Gotta love how salty (and bitchy) the crabs are recently

Keep it up the people who are actually drawing, some nice stuff this thread

>>4294193
the top of her head needs to be expanded upwards a bit. Shoulders need to be render better as well, especially the right (technical left). Look to irl references, find some comparable breasts, or breasts you want to draw, and use them as reference, and then proceed to experiment, also, breasts are rather lower on the torso location wise. They are attached to the pectoral. If you think of them as water balloon sagging down, attacked at both the upper and lower pectoral, one unit with the pectoral it could help. I would also suggest doing a full body, or a dynamic pose with this, one of the reasons you probably are having a hard time of this, is because it's so heavily cropped and your working in such a confined space, increase your canvas size too. The face is fine and passable, good job so far.

>>4294193
The top of her head needs to be expanded upwards a bit. Shoulders need to be rendered in better as well, especially the right (technical left). Look to irl references, find some comparable breasts, or breasts you want to draw, and use them as reference, and then proceed to experiment, also, breasts are rather lower on the torso location wise and they separate due to the curvature of the wedge of the torso of the rib cage. They are attached to the pectoral. If you think of them as water balloons sagging down, attached at both the upper and lower pectoral, it could help. I would also suggest doing expanding the image with a full body presentation, with a dynamic or an interesting pose with this, maybe even experiment with foreshortening. One of the reasons you probably are having a hard time of this, is because it's so heavily cropped and you're working in such a confined space, increase your canvas size too. The face is fine and passable, good job so far.

>>4294383
>>4294385
>>4294388
im not masking anything with outrageous subject matter. im not a pro artist, i just like what i like. i dont understand why you assume im trying to hide anything.
if i didnt want to improve i wouldnt be posting here at all. i try my best to take people advice but i need something more than "lol ur a retard" and "fucking gross stop posting" if im going to improve.

>>4293894
blog? what learning materials did you use to get to your level?

>>4294433
for example, i've posted 2 WIPS of the comic page, and ive gotten NO constructive criticism at all

just this
>>4294109
>>4294140
>>4294143
>>4294166
so ive just gone ahead and kept working on it with no changes because people are too busy telling me how much they hate me to actually help my art in any way. this place is getting worse

>>4294433
>>4294443
They're just being crabs, I assume it's also about the SJW character too. I usually give critiques to those who need it. I didn't give you one, because honestly it they seemed good enough, and I didn't see anything wrong with it. It was fine honestly. Probably it either hits on their childhood or not their fetish, or the SJW firestorm revolving around this character right now >>4293793

>>4294443
I'll help anon.
You missed a bit on the zipper
I think the cowprint would look a bit better if it wasnt blended/smudged.
Some saturated shadows could help it pop a bit more.
Oh and the pants leg should break the panel too at the bottom, considering the shoe is. Or keep the shoe in the panel, either one

>>4294460
>Oh and the pants leg should break the panel too at the bottom, considering the shoe is. Or keep the shoe in the panel, either one
Different anon, I actually like the leg coming out of the panel, it gives it a more unique and interesting visual display and flow. I agree with everything else he said though.

>>4294460
tyvm

>>4294274
What do you mean by 'nasty shit'? Futas aren't particularly outrageous imo

>>4294510
I took the advice of a mentor and began charging a tax for futa content early. Saved me from some truly disgusting shit down the line.

>>4290440
I like it. Do you plan on coloring?

>>4294566
Her pussy shouldn't be dry when it's unzipped. Especially after soaking through her zipper.

>>4294582
yeah all that space around it will be covered in goo, i just havent moved on to rendering that panel yet

>>4294510
If you can't see what's disgusting you are too far gone.

>>4293793
The pose is shit, to stiff and lifeless. The rest is pretty good, you seems to have a good grasp on anatomy and all that, just look for a reference next time.

>>4294566
dude, her swollen pussy looks so disgusting, but also kinda hot, good job I guess

here's mine that I painted

>>4294566
Is she supposed to be some kind of onahole modification?

>>4294939
>>4294965
Tell me if you think its disgusting nobody's said that one before thanks for the input

>>4294167
Thanks dude
>>4294437
None yet, but thanks. Mainly just looking at other artists work

updated the anim, completed the second frame

>>4295203
Reminds me of Chelodoy

did something more vanilla for my 420 follower thank you pic since everyone here hates the stuff i like

>>4295516
Do you have to draw your dicks like that?

>>4295520
i dont have to do anything. it looks better once rendered, though

>>4295516
Any tips on getting good line weight like the drawing you posted? That’s something I’ve been struggling with for quite awhile.

>>4295523
i sculpt my lines usually, its hard to give advice on lineweight because i usually just feel it out, but as a general rule objects closer to the camera should have thicker weights, objects you're trying to highlight, and the undersides of things as well as crevices should be thicker

>>4295520
>>4295523
Where's the original image, why was it deleted?

>>4295562
its here i just uploaded the wrong version
>>4295522

WIP on interior shot for the Starfire and BB scene

Working on a scene. Need to work on my perspective.

>>4295522
They are still pretty unappealing but you do you.

>>4292839
Finally a decent Tsunade doujin, maybe you should aim for a patreon

>>4293285

register then you can see nsfw stuff

>>4295397

good tasteful nice

>>4295605

hello where was this in the thread <3

>>4294566
as off putting as this congratulations on your entire life because wow way to stick to your guns dont let em crab u down kek

i await your entire fanfic in sheer curiosity and proof of the human spirit and craft

>>4295760
Cringe

>>4293793
I coomed, well done anon

update on this animation

>>4293793
Your linework is great. I don't think you need to render super hard. If you want to render, I thibk crisper shadows and somewhat higher contrast would work well.

>>4294443
>people are too busy telling me how much they hate me to actually help my art
bro, it's already perfect

>>4293380
You have to remember the muscles do connect that way to the deltoid but you also have to remember there is fat and especially with females the tits wont move the only part youll see move are hints of the armpit never the breasts.

>>4296175
There's connective tissue in the breasts it's not just fat. The breasts would definitely change their form and behavior once the arms are raised even the nipples and you may exaggerate this further with the stretch and pull.

I'll fix his eyes later, but i think i'm done

>>4294566
Lineart looks neat, the poses are good too. Shifting the yellow on their clothes to a warmer tone is probably make it look better. The colors on the thumbnail look muddy.
>>4295605
Might be a perspective problem but it feels like she's falling to our right/her left. Pretty cute tho.
>>4292839
>>4296198
>>4296200
Blogs?

>>4288197
sometimes knowing the anatomy of something isn't enough and you just need a "cheat sheet"

>>4296256

>>4296259

>>4296260

>>4296262

>>4296264

>>4296248
this week im gona draw pron and i later create twitter for posts

>>4293449

Reminds me of those stolen animations in porn ads

thoughts?

>>4296400
um, based?

>>4296400
Practice penile anatomy and cum physics and spend more time on it.

>>4296468
>cum physics
its a web

Regarding nsfw art, what does pin-up mean?
Sorry, im still new to this stuff.

Starting working on a collage, been having a hard time coming up with things I want to draw lately. Been trying to force myself into drawing again, and recording time lapses so I needed to focus on the drawing at hand and not just wondering off to some youtube video somewhere. Although I couldn't find any good platform to host those time lapses so I can show my friends.

>>4296481
That doesn't mean it magically looks good, retard

fukt up with hooves/legs but eh

>>4296672
show me a good looking shooting web then

>>4296672
I wish you could see how much of a bitter crab you come off

>>4296214
No. Look at any ref and they wont stretch

>>27615989
Any fresh eye feedback for this would be appreciated.

Any fresh eye feedback for this would be appreciated.
>>>/trash/27615989

>>4296301
cool, quote this post in the next thread with your blog

>>4297093
>/trash/
fuck off furry

>>4295813
Motion is inverted

>>4297356
What?

>>4297093
Can't tell, finish it.

both dude, weed, as well as lmao

>>4295813
the ass of starfire should jiggle during the "impact" frames

>>4297851
Shut the fuck up, boomer.

>>4294027
don't worry, they let me go home after i finish my shift

>>4294030
werkin on it

>>4296198
>>4296200
>>4296615
cyoot

update

>>4297851
>ugly nigger
yikes

>>4298178
/pol/ leave

hi anon can you redline my drawing pls?

100 % beg here, going through Steve Huston's material mainly.

Drew from imagination and I can feel there is a lot of things that are off with the pic. Anything blatant that stands out to a more experienced eye? Head angle? General composition? Arm placements? Length of limbs?

>>4298297
It's heavy symbolic drawing overall. The face and hair are very off putting and needs work. The lines are way too thick and reads like a man with cheap makeup on and a mop wig. The forearm and upper arm, holding the head is too long, compare it to the other side's arm, they are not the same size. Draw the head without hair, showing your inner-construction line work of the shoulders, neck, and head. Use irl reference for the face and hair, the point of reference is to help you understand what you are drawing, not to copy. I would also suggest scrapping the other figure, and draw in the main figure sitting down and just focusing on this figure at the moment. Then, once it's rendered in well enough, add in the other. Increase the canvas size too and use a smaller pen size.

>>4298234
For future reference, red-lining doesn't help at all with helping the artist improve. It just robs them of doing the work and mental and visual examination and problem solving work for them. Onto the critique: the foreshortened forearm, where the upper arm meets the lower art on the outside needs work. Where the forearm meets the wrist, the forearm right before the wrist should be smaller than the wrist/hand, it should not be the same size, notably on the inner/top part of the forearm. Her bangs/hair should not be hugging her forehead and should be drooping down from gravity, it looks like her bangs are stuck to her head. Her chin should less pronounced, her head is not jutting out away from the neck/spine, it is pushed in and the chin would not be that pronounced. Mouth too high. Ears need to be increased, the proportional placement and size measurements need to correlate with eyebrows and the opening/crease of the mouth, notice how the left (technical right) is much larger than the other ear. Also, render in the hair better, it reads like a scraggly, thinning old woman's hair, not lush nor young.

I really need to learn how to draw

>>4298366
>symbolic
Yup! I think it's hard to know when to take mental shortcuts if I'm drawing from memory, and when to stop and look up refs. I feel like if I'm stopping to find refs for every detail and unique angle of that detail it'll derail any kind of flow I'm having.

Is a possible solution to just treat these as gesture drawing exercises and skip adding any detail such as hair or faces?

>The face and hair are very off putting and needs work. The lines are way too thick and reads like a man with cheap makeup on and a mop wig

100%. Line stuff is hard as heck. I just switched to using a hard round WITHOUT pressure for line width when doing studies to get less horrible results. The resources, like Steve Hustons videos/book that I'm currently looking at don't have much info in terms of digital brushes and good defaults. Got any resource for this that you can link?

Will use a bigger canvas next time and not over complicate the composition from the get go.

I polished the turd for a few more minutes, but will now drop it.

>>4298447
>I feel like if I'm stopping to find refs for every detail and unique angle of that detail it'll derail any kind of flow I'm having.
Your in the learning phase I would say, so it is going to slow you down. It's a partial improving and studying process when you use references.
>Is a possible solution to just treat these as gesture drawing exercises and skip adding any detail such as hair or faces?
You can, but the idea behind gestures are to create and experiment and stretch your drawing ability with dynamic poses using sometimes just a few lines to represent a form or more complex images but with equal dynamism and flow and weight. These are to help feel the form and weight of the gestures. Though it still comes down to having to do raw studying of human anatomy at the end of it. But, that comes down to your own goals and where you want to aim for artistically, leaning heavily more towards cartoony or realism? Regardless, anatomy and polishing anatomy is important and even fundamental.
>Got any resource for this that you can link?
Which program are you using to draw with? Also, honestly, just use a small brush and draw on a larger canvas. Your improved image lines are about where you want the brush size, maybe even smaller. What size canvas and DPI are you using?
>I polished the turd for a few more minutes, but will now drop it.
Don't, not quite yet, I'd say work through it some more. Really analyze what and where went wrong and think and improve on the image mentally first before the pen hits the paper so to speak. It's gonna be bumpy, but you will improve quite a bit, if you are willing to continue. Usually polishing a turd means you don't stop to improve anything and just keep going. You are in the sketch-phase of rendering, so it's fine.

>>4298446
Clean the lines, lower the crotch section and the stomach and naval a bit. It is passable. The mere fact you can draw feet decently foreshortened shows you know what you are doing. Continue rendering it in.

>>4296615
New gestures, second image revised

>>4297923
>cyoot
i don't understand!

>>4298483
>Cont.:
>Critique:
Notice the right arm length segments compared to the left's. Move the entire forearm of the right (technical left) over and lower it. Notice, if you are going to cover the breasts with a 90 degree angle, notice the other side arm joint, it would bend closer to the stomach, and would still cover the breasts, but the breasts would need to be lowered, as they are too high even being held up as is, and are not so round, remember, treat breasts similarly to water balloons, refer to here: >>4294423
>Look to irl references, find some comparable breasts, or breasts you want to draw, and use them as reference, and then proceed to experiment, also, breasts are rather lower on the torso location wise and they separate due to the curvature of the wedge of the torso of the rib cage. They are attached to the pectoral. If you think of them as water balloons sagging down, attached at both the upper and lower pectoral, it could help.
The face is better, but the hair is still very symbolic. The lower ear should meet where the crease/opening of the mouth is. The hands are on the small size. The midsection needs to be increased upward, her upper body needs to be pushed back. Erase the hair and just show the bare face and head. Get rid of the other figure, open a new layer, get a blue color, and begin to construct the form, notably the torso, midsection, hips area, legs, arms and shoulders. Work through where the anatomy is wrong and look to references for what these proportions and sizes are with regards to the sitting figure and the squashed forms that naturally morph due to being compressed.

>>4298498
I think the anon means "cute". Honestly, these are fine, I would say clean up the linework and begin on either values or base color rendering.

>>4298162
Her pussy is bigger than her head.

>>4291930
I just redrew it

>>4298486
Do you have any suggestions for how to go about doing lines in Procreate? I've never been much of a lineart person and they always look all wobbly and bad

>>4298742
Much more engaging and interesting, watch those hands and make sure to draw them in good proportions, they look like clown hands. Also, extend the hips and butt to the left, so it's not so much at a side angle, but a partial frontal 3/4 view. The back figure has no mid-section/naval. I would just extend the canvas up, or transform the image down to fit, then selection tool, and move the upper body up. Other than that good so far, remember to measure everything.

how does this look?
how tf can i achieve appealing porn, any tips? especially regarding anatomy, composition and colors

>>4298890
I know a footfag and she told me that foot focused pics that have them in the foreground taking up 70% of the image are terrible and cringeworthy.

>>4298890
Study perspective omg

>>4298917
>>4298890
THIS. its so hard to make feet appealing if you have them huge like that. best turn her legs to the left sude more, and make feet look casual

>>4298764
Never used Procreate, if it's anything like traditional digital software, go with a smaller harder brush.

>>4298890
Select, transform/resize, move around until it looks right, paste it, draw in the rest of the now missing parts.

>>4298781

>>4298930
Coomer artists aren't good at subtly. Except the smart ones

>>4298483
>>4298524
Thanks for the critique! About the ear, I was kind of picturing the viewpoint being a bit above her head, so looking down on her. Dunno if I'll scrap that thought or not. I started the redline/blueline layer but didn't have time to finish it today. I'll see if I have time finish it with your comments in mind tomorrow!

>>4299254
And it's CSP with 350 dpi. The image was just a small part of a bunch of quick drawings on a B4 canvas though. Copied the rough sketch to a new canvas and scaled it up to fill the thing so I have some room to work with when doing the blueline.

>>4299173

>>4299278
alright this is the point where I think im gonna start working on it the cleanup and lineart

>>4299278
Much better, the front figure is very good so far, focus on rendering out and correcting some of the anatomy on the back one, shave off the huge bulge of the shoulder too, looking good.

>>4299254
>>4299264
Good, break down the naval of the body into three sections, and understand their most basic shapes as well, would be another good exercise, those would be the torso, midsection, and hips. I would also do a few copies of the human skeleton as well. That may sound boring and tedious, but it really helps build on your internal memory for you to draw later on. Especially the skull from different angles and much more dynamic and foreshortened compositions and forms. You'll begin to think of the inner structure in multiple layers inside your minds eye before the pen hits the paper. I'd also suggest going through some basic art books as well. Notably, for the absolute beginner to beginner, "Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain: 4th Edition", it really is great. Some will push you towards Loomis first, but, if you don't even know the fundamentals of draftsmanship first, it can make attempting Loomis very hard. One of the exercises is pic related, drawing this figure upside. It may seem useless, uninteresting and boring, but the point is to force you not to draw what you think you see, which is symbol drawing in a sense, but what you actually see, technically speaking, while also identifying negative space. Would highly recommend "Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain". Remember, people don't go from zero to hero in a day, week, or month, it takes time, but that book is an amazing fundamental piece.

>>4293754
its not black dear anon, its dark purple

also what the fuck is wrong with the m0ds? they banned me for posting porn in the fucking nsfw thread

https://garyc.me/sketch/gallery.php#6615274

I've never posted on /ic/ before. I draw link-related in a thread on /v/ as a joke and I want to know how it looks. I've never practiced drawing and don't know much about the fundamentals of it all but how does this look as a beginner?

drawing a doujin someday sounds fun.

>>4299394
What exactly did you post?

>>4299434
i posted this >>4293430

i don't know if they banned me for posting "furry" or what lmao

>>4299612
it was probably for posting garbage

>>4288140
Anyone know of good guide on how to draw futas?
I don't want to use trannies as reference cause their hip bones are not women's hip bones.

>>4299820
Learn how to draw woman, then learn how to draw penis, then insert penis on woman. I suggest getting two reference pictures (woman, penis) at similar enough angles and lighting. Most futa artists have drawn enough to combine them from imagination.

Worked on it more, any advice?

>>4299350
I'll see if I haven't downloaded that book already. Will check it out. I'm getting an idea about the body form and gesture from Steve Huston's NMA videos. I just started with them though but they are pretty damn great for a total beginner such as me.

On my first day of drawing again I did do that upside down exercise as well as some grid drawing. Might be useful to rewind and go back to that to help capture detail again.

I'm mentally prepared for sucking forever and am forcing myself to put pen to paper every day with the Draw Art Daily stuff. You can see my mix of lazy 5 min stuff mixed in with more ambitious studies here:
https://dad.gallery/users/1585/submissions

Attached pic is where I'm at with the blue line. I decided to keep the horizon line well above the subject in the end because that was how I kind of pictured it at the beginning.

I think the length of the arms might be OK, but the torso, thighs, lower legs, feet etc. might look way wonky to someone experienced.

>>4299882
Ankles don't bend sideways, anon

>>4300006
Oops I meant knees haha

any critiques on this, im not even sure if the pose is very readable

Finished.

Plz R8

>>4299931
>I'm mentally prepared for sucking forever
Good, very good, it will keep you motivated and going. Most people get too caught up in wanting to be the best, being afraid to fail (which pit-falls a LOT of people), or whatever other vague goals they tell themselves, or don't have and flop and draw only occasionally if at all ever again. You've made leagues of improvement just with that right there, amazing, proud of you. Also, I compiled this for you, really puts the "polishing turd" to rest when people are motivated to learn from their mistakes. Keep up the awesome work.

I've been learning to use my tablet over the past couple months and and now here, I know her her cleavage is a bit wide and noticed too late.

>>4300374
Lineart

>>4294228
i honestly like Jessies face a lot, its just the megavag that freaks people out

>>4300104
Not bad, but her facial expression is shit.

>>4300388
thanks, it's clearly a hyper pussy fetish piece, i assumed 4channers were a little more thick skinned

>>4300416
Prolapsed Cervix is another good one, not enough of that.

>>4300119
Thanks a lot! You helped motivate me to not go about it lazily. :]

>>4300468
Not that guy but like your art too, you got this

>>4300416
4chan isnt what it used to be

>>4300486
This. It's becoming Tumblr-lite for a while now.

kairu is simply too based for this world
a god amongst men
one can only dream of reaching his level
amen

>>4300563
Thicken the neck up some.

I think these should be called NSFW/Coomer threads. Porn is so 1997

Gonna keep this alive
>yeet

I really want to get into drawing more porn but drawing sex scenes is not my strong point

>>4300586
meh

>>4301407
>what is thread bump limit
>hurr durr

>>4294228
why is woody's nose in 3/4 profile if he's facing forward? Everything else is pretty solid