/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

doodles

trying to design a character
>>4284760
very nice work

>>4284760
Blog?

>>4284773
Tell me what to study to get the abstract anatomical forms you have

>>4284760
vibin'

>>4284760
this is how i wanna be able to draw..

>>4284958
...

>>4284958
I'm sorry anon, I feel responsible now :(

>>4284958
>this is how i wanna be able to draw
You see how his characters lack the lines on their faces that make them look like grandmas? Try doing that.

Just a little ways to go.

>>4284760


It's original

just kidding

It's a skill you practiced but aren't really an artist

>>4285022

It's great

>>4285022

You are an artist

she has life

proportions and detail is perfect

>>4284637
Happy new year anonss

>>4285027
What's with the retarded spacing?

>>4285057

Lotta fire around

Posted this in thr last thread but it got buried. Need to fix that pelvis.

>>4285069
>>4285027
>>4285033
t. a Koala in a burning eucalyptus tree

>>4285138

It's genius

it makes me feel unnerved but there is something wonderful and amazing

>>4285140

Project more little one

Judgement is reserved to God

>>4285140

first asuka 2020

I know the left hand looks fucked anyway this is me trying to mimic the painterly style of lack and hankuri what do yall think?

so why do you draw your asukas like they're dying old women>>4285189

>>4285142
I thought you were trolling at first but this has really made me smile. Day feels considerably improved, thank you.

>>4285201
Let him have some fun, not every drawing has to be a moeblob

>>4284958
jesus, someone needs to get asuka away from the smack

Anyway I can exaggerate this perspective more before I move to color? She's supposed to be giant.

i love drawing

>>4285368
They look like used up druggy whores STOP

>>4285374
i genuinely did not indent that with this one :(

>>4285368
What the point of keeping retarded style? You can improve drasticly just by drawing face differently.

>>4285368
>>4285374
>>4285376
Honestly with all the bashing and repetitive responses towards this anon I'm fairly certain this is the same person samefagging. Stop it.

>>4285374
>STOP
Don't listen to crab

>>4285363
The hand is at the same height as the ass but it's small. You can exaggerate perspective but you have to keep it internally consistent.

>>4285363
>whats wrong 9s-kun? Could it be youre... Craving my mcnuggies????

>>4285405
Not samefagging, ive been pushing him to stop drawing those goblina tier faces and clearly I am ot the only one. Even went as far as to redraw one of his previous drawing in an attempt to demonstrate how to make some sense out of the pose. His job is to tell a story behind the figure, he has a strong gesture which I hope he will continue to do in his drawings but next time try and take the pose so you can come up with ideas on what to do with it and if it feels comfortable and not awkward.

Point in case after taking the pose myself I found the only way to make any sense out of his previous sketch was to portray some grinding 101.

>>4285478
thank you for your help to me
you arebased

>>4285138
Really good, there are very few artist that use round lines..

>>4285478
All right. I'd aruge constructive responses are better than "ewww it looks like shit" but that's the /ic/ way. Carry on Mikufag & good luck Asukafag

WHAT DID SHE DO TO DESERVE THIS?

>>4285511

>>4285511
Asuka a shit.
>>4285506
We don't know if he actually likes to draw his faces that way, all we can do is provide feedback with our reaction towards the faces because it is something subjective and we can't really critique something like that. His technical abilities are fair and maybe he has a granny fetish and wants to draw that way or maybe he just hates Womyn so much to the point he vents his angst by drawing them malnourished, beat up and weathered.

>>4285482
What are round lines? :'D (ty btw)

You DID make a drawing to celebrate 2020, right anon?
>>4284773
I remember being really impressed by your OC when I started lurking this board, I wish to draw it some day (don't count on it though I'm kinda slow between drawings)

>>4285612
I did

>>4285612
Thank you anon, I'd love to see it if you do. I love the aesthetic of this piece aswell
>>4284780
The best advice I can give you is to do some anatomical studies first to help try and understand breaking down the body into a bunch of simple forms like cylinders and boxes. Use both real life references and other artists work to determine the principles of how things should look and how other artists may exaggerate or simplify those principles

>>4285368
i love your style and i love how they do look like used up whores. dont listen to this samefag trying to bring you down.

>>4285791
Why don't you try getting a real woman this year instead of drawing yourself with your waifu.

>>4285478
Prost!

hello, i just updated a character of mine, any suggestions? pic related, before

after

i kinda like the big clunky boots, should i bring them back or keep the pointy ones?
should her glove arm stay as is or should i add lining to the wrwist portion of the glove to break it up a bit? i think having it plain balances out the robot arm well. checkers on the wrench too busy? should i change the shape of the wrench head?

>>4286271
The bigger, clunky boots fit more with her theme imo. Also, just having the knuckle pieces on the glove like in >>4286268 is good enough for them. For the wrench, as long as most of it is the same metallic grey the checker pattern shouldn't make it too busy. Overall though, I like the design a lot! A personal suggestion is maybe the shorts could have overall straps, which I feel would fit very nicely with the rest of the design

>>4286292
thanks for the feedback, i agree. i waws worried the overall straps would make se too similar to Tifa Lockhart but visualizing them a bit i think it would actually seem great, they would balance her silhouette out a bit more like Attack On Titan characters. I intend to eventually animate this character so i hope it wont add too much extra work though

>>4286322
If you're worried about that, perhaps just put one over her shoulder and leave the other? Though what you have now is good as well. Also, I think they're a great choice for animation, mostly because now you have an element in the design which will move independent of the character, making motion more interesting in the long run. Good luck anon!

>>4286399
what's going on here?

>>4286406
mikufag has become such a pedo at this point that he can only get off if the umbilical cord is still attached

>>4286406
>>4285478

>>4286408
based

>>4286408
Toppest of keks.

>>4285363
This isn't how perspective works. Her waist should be barely visible and the upper half of her body should be marginally smaller but also squatter. Downlod Hyper Angle and study from it for reference.

I hope to draw more this year; maybe even finish stuff.

>>4286322
and here's the first rough sketch of a major antagonist

Wip, any crit on it before I get into rendering?

>>4284760
Can you give me an idea of your learning path and hours drawing for to draw in this kind of style?

Happy new year.
Thanks for the crits last thread.

>>4286470
>>4286558
Blog(s)?

>>4286661
How do I be like you and make my drawings seem effortless but good

>>4285368
and we love you too! keep working hard i belive in you.
you still gross me out tho

>>4286558
very dark souls ish, blog?

Bear princess wip

>>4286692
if she hugs me, will I die?

>>4286694
most definitely. do it anyway

>>4285368
You cut off a part of the mouth.

>>4286692
Watercolor pic soon?

>>4284760
>>4284773
>>4285022
>>4285044
>>4285200
>>4285612
>>4285958
>>4286399
>>4286558
>>4286692

>>4286766
checked

>>4286766
???

>>4286766
same anon. same

>>4286734
hopefully soon.

>>4286766
i'm sorry,

>>4286766
Can't go a single thread without shitposting huh

>>4286470
make them kissu
something about the flat top edge of the tree, the girl’s hip and how her hair lies on the ground bothers me. I’m having trouble getting a sense of perspective from this between the lily pads on the left and what you’ve established with the land part. I think the lily pads might be elevated which is why it looks off in this wip state? that isn’t very clear at the moment. but i like everything

>>4286766
pyw cuck

>>4286766
based and tiredpilled

>>4286792
>>4286807
cringe and coompilled

Done with the clean inks.

Let me know if anything looks off. I plan to finish these tonight along with the five fullbody pencil sketches.

>>4287160
soul

Tried to draw oc trad and it came out quite bad but at least i know what i need to work on

>>4287161
Shut the fuck up

>>4287160
AHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA
asukashitter you are a gift that keeps on giving

>>4284760
this reminds me of Boogie’s artwork for some reason

>>4286604
I'm @Nessiefynn

>>4286794
Thanks for the feedback. I tried to fix the perspective.
>I think the lily pads might be elevated
Yeah, I was trying to draw water lotus leaves, which grow above the water

>>4287578
wholesome~

idk about this lads this started out as a vintage manga study but things took a weird route

>>4287578
cute aff as always

>>4287599
enough for tonight, i'll define and sculot the shadws more tomorrow

>>4287599
skin skin skin let the skin touch the skin <3

>>4285138
cool shit my dude, keep doing it.

>>4285363
>>4285410
You're right I definitely made the hand way too small. I have a bad habit of that.
>>4286426
I made some adjustments to the torso like you said. Also, I have Hyper Angle already and was wondering if posing a model in a 3D program would offer the same sort of help?

>>4285363
Show your reference and let's break it down.

>>4287926
Sorry but for this drawing I had no reference. I hadn't drawn in a while and just wanted to get something out of a sketch.

>>4288041
The proportions are much better in this one anon, theres real progress here. The colors are very pale and washed out though, personally I would like to see some saturation somewhere. Perhaps try adding some more color to the hair to bring it out, as her red hair is one of her primary distinguishing features.

>>4288041
Hey, do you have a blog or collection of your work? It's awesome!

>>4286661
Draw a ton of sketches, copy other artists (JJ Frenchie in his case) and never finish anything.

>>4288086
Thanks
>>4285550

>>4287100
Stiff af. Like most of your work.
Loosen up your sketches and try to put more dynamicity into your lineart.

>>4288041
you are a SHIT
SHIT

>>4287887
not a great demo but even if you're exaggerating the perspective it needs to be believable

try constructing first and then you can push it farther

>>4288041
I genuinelly like the long features, it reminds me of early 00's mature (not porn) mangaka styles.

guys how can improve my art.

>>4288173
Make it look more like __hakurei_reimu_touhou_drawn_by_kedamono_kangoku_tou__sample-d48fd065d6340442e33b4592472e3b96.jpg

oh shit I used the wrong file

>>4288041
This one actually looks a lot better than your previous stuff, it doesn't give that drugged up used up whore impression anymore.

>>4285612
i finished up my hirscht study in the drawthread to start the new year on a clean slate but otherwise no

quick ovopack study from this morning

>>4288041
A step in the right direction. You'll stl have to work your ass off.

Are you looking into going towards a western comic book style such J Scott Campbell, or you going for something else?

dumb redrawn anime protagonist

>>4288300
Are you copying twistedgrim by any chance? The face style seems the same.

>>4288409
No but i've heard of his animations.

>>4288173
I don't like the mouth and chin on yours. >

>>4287155
It's gorgeous... How can I get my lines like yours. Holy shit.

>>4288291
I don't know what I'm going for
every drawing is an experiment :/

>>4288670
That's not really an experiment if you draw the same thing over and over

>>4288300
another redrawing

>>4284637

>>4288850
i love you kyle

>>4288670
at least try to experiment on cleaning your line work a little more.

>>4288300
>>4288818
SOUL vs SOULLESS

>>4288818
You're that CrabArmGuy from before right? Your line work has become much more clear.

>>4284637

>>4289033
the curl of hair on the top right reads as a nose. her hair needs to be lower on the face on the bottom left or else it looks like she only has one eye

>>4289047
Better?

>>4286399
what the fuck

>>4288670
Try doing actual good art, best experiment of them all.

>>4288850
Pls pls pls have feet involved

>>4289164
try posting your work for once, that would be an experiment no one ever witnessed before

>>4289177
If it's so important show me how to do it by posting yours first.

>>4289181
You have to go back

>>4289268
faggot

>>4289284
>can't post their own work
>on the artwork board
If you can't even validate your critique then you dont belong here, idiot

>>4288850
Is she supposed to be looking straight ahead or to the viewer? Maybe move her irises to the right a little bit more.

>>4288670
Remember that the anime face outline is always "wrapping around" so to speak
if you draw it like it's closer to the viewer than the eyes, the eyes look sunken and you get a corpse/granny girl
>>4288850
you're doing it too much

>>4289317
You are good but I think you should learn how to draw more than one kind of female face

>>4289325
didn't I? >>4288617

>>4289327
I mean, those honestly looks the same to me. Same eyes, nose, and face shape. I understand you like one character type, but I think when you redraw other peoples art in your style for corrections, it is kind of revealing that you are stuck in a comfort zone.

>>4289288
>>can't post their own work
Do it yourself then, cuck

>>4289317
This general has fallen so hard in quality that your art now looks top tier in comparison.

>>4289317
thanks for taking the time
I understand this
but I really wanna draw more realistic eyes
in this drawing maybe I made the eyes too big that they seem like I was going for anime

pic related is something I'm going for, would love to be able to draw like this

>>4289338
Still waiting, anon. Your critique means nothing if you can't validate it.

>>4289346
now that I know what you're going for then everything makes sense. You need to study more heads first and then begin your stylization process using this artist as reference.

>>4285947
Thanks, that will be my New Year's Resolution. Although I'll still draw her no matter what though.

>>4288993
I FUCKING KNEW IT MY SOUL IS GONE DUDE.

>>4289007
Yea, I'm assuming that's me. I did a lot of mspaint drawings and posted them here before.

>>4285478
are you the same mikufag who made that post about the clouds?

>>4288605
not him but i used to have a similar lineart style and all i can say is:

work on a large canvas (in the low to mid thousands at leasts) and later scale it down so you can get really thin lines with a lot of detail.

turn your stabiliser way up. dont both messing with line weight stuff for the first strokes, just get your general outline with clean, smooth lineart so you can add variation later. avoid areas that would require much thinner lines.

once you've got your general lineart down, look for where the lines converge. go over these areas with heavier pen. repeat until you've gone over the whole image.

now, use a really thin pen to ink in the extra details that help add some variety to the linework.

most importantly, dont rush the lines. even if it looks effortless in the end it takes a lot of time to get lines like these, so keep that in mind.

>>4289585
>turn your stabiliser way up

>>4289587
>He thinks stabilizers are a bad thing

>>4289590
They are nothing but a crutch.

>>4289591
They're just one more tool offered to you by an art program. If they're there and you find them helpful, you might as well make use of them.
So long as the end product looks good, who cares if you use them or not?

>>4289596
The less your lines are interfered by a software the more unique and personal they become. Line art is like a language, with each stroke you make you leave behind a sense of aesthetics with graceful S curves and C curves. Stabilizers makes the line art too stiff and modulated as opposed to an imperfect human making lines with a personality.

>>4289591
A better picture is a better picture

>>4289605
Stay stupid, /ic/.

>>4289609
>ur stupid

nice post

>>4288850
the hairline is weird

trying to paint some more

>>4287582
>>4287599
Danke

>>4286692
It's nice to see your work again, I really love your lineart

>>4289705
Cute stuff as always. Why does she have stitches?

>>4289372
I can't really tell whats going on but this has soul to it.

>>4289950
Most useless post of the year so far.

Gonna go back to purely painting after this, not feeling the "rough lining -> paint over" process.

Will resume after I get back from my walk.

>>4286766
I love how this board applauds mediocrity, but gives little to zero feed back on people who are good, or always insult their work to bring them down, lol. Cope more

Practicing again with colors.

i got a lot of --i think fair --criticism on my line quality recently so i tried to really take my time with this. does it suck? any suggestions to make it better?

Anyone have an idea how Endy gets that angular but also soft(?) lineart? This exactly the look I’m trying to get for my animation. Idk if this is a filter or what

skin

>>4290523
Another example. There profile is here. https://twitter.com/endshark

Is sculpture allowed?

>>4289707
Teach me how to paint ness

should i make the hair more dynamic?
also any feedback is welcomed

>>4290873
Make her hair flow higher, her face a bit shorter, and the hips wider because she looks like a teenage boy

>>4290919
Or maybe just a less defined chin if you think the face looks fine

Drew a spooky scene from a dream I had. Any critiques?

>>4289346
I love that artist but he draws teeth so consistently wrong I wonder if it’s a deliberate choice

>>4290924
Add more detail and wrinkles to the skin and exaggerate the joints. Your man looks like a dollar store No-face right now.

>>4290925
Seems like stylistic laziness

>>4290924
Please remove the chromatic aberration, it's giving us eyecancer. Aside from that consider showing the skin folds more at the bends of each limp like you did with the chin.

>>4290924
crosshatch on the shading and have it fade into a different technique when it gets closer

>>4290924
color the baby doll's face (like vintage 50's dolls) and make the blush the brightest color in the picture for contrast.

>>4290789
I would if I knew how. I just do cel shading and then mess with edges :(

How do you get that coloring?
How is that even attainable?
How can I color holy shit

>>4290946
the same way you started getting good at line drawing/ anatomy. Start saving references specifically for coloring / shading, try to color everything, don't post it cuz it sucks, rinse + repeat. see ya in 1-3 years.

>>4289428
If I was a girl I would suck your dick anon, keep at it.

>>4290946
Base color->multiply-color dodge->adjustment layers

>>4290984
Gender doesn't restrict one from putting a penis in their mouth

>>4285947
I wish I could draw myself with my waifu

>>4288850
How was your new year's Kyle?

>>4290670
I like this a whole lot, do you have a blog where you post more like this? also I imagine it would go in the trad thread

>>4285368
I like your stuff but there are small things you do that age the characters more than you probably intend.

In this case the drooping line at the end of her lips and the drooping angle of the eyes are attributes you'd normally see in someone who's older than Asuka. Drugs abuse also causes the same aging look which is why people joke about your versions being on smack.

Keep it up anon

>>4291095
I kinda see Daenerys in this. It's an improvement still

>>4290173
Can you explain the background to me?

I've finally come back to this one, having a lot of fun with it ^^

>>4289317
I actually agree with :
>>4289325
>>4289330

Your characters are suffering from same-face syndrome.

>>4286766
yea /alt/ threads have pretty much become coomer waifu threads. it's a shame desu, but whatever.

>>4286766
>>4286815
>>4291145
Post your work cringelord

>>4291128
Regarding the colours just a little too saturated imo But if you like it that way i guess it works

>>4291245
I wanted to draw something really warm since the winter was keeping me down a bit. The saturation looks really different from every screen that I view it on so I settled with the thought that I’d rather have it oversaturated than pale :’)

>>4289340
the younger rises when the old doth fall babey
>>4289325
>>4289330
>>4291136
hmmmmm if you can redraw my "one character type" differently -without- making it uglier you have my attention
otherwise please stick to insults these non-critiques aren't my speed

>>4291095
Holy shit, this is so good, the original looks like a shitty edit

>>4289705
Blog?

>>4288229
quick and stress free from ref 4fun

>>4291104
?
It's just some clouds.

>>4291249
It's not so much the saturation that looks ugly but the lighting on the blue top which is far too bright, it looks like pure cyan if you were to shine a torch directly onto it in a dark room.

super simple but i really like it for some reason

>>4291493
Who's the original artist?

>>4291629
https://twitter.com/kokakimumose

>>4291558
If you try to do what she is doing with her right arm youll realize why its a bad pose

>>4291558
put her right arm on her chest and make her left arm push the hat a bit downwards.

fishies, first set of doodles of the new year.

>>4288670

I've been trying to emulate the same artist.

>https://www.artstation.com/tahra

pretty much just study the artist drawings then try to apply to your drawing. like mixing two style together. experiment with it.

just so you know im a /beg/ with limited experience. hope this help somehow.

>>4289707
I want to fist this man.

>>4291821
>>4288670
I like Tahra also anon.
I tried copying some of Tahra's art and I see what's the problem.
You two drew the noses too big.
Tahra's eyes is kinda near to realistic eyes. It is indeed stylized but near on the realistic eyes.

Also, try to clean up your drawings.
It's ok if you want to get that (You)s but if you want to improve try to clean those lines first, make it a habit.

>>4289428
I love her

>>4291305
keep drawing more dudes instead, I love these

>>4286483
>>4284775
Seeing these posts makes me wonder if every single anon from 10 years ago have died or moved on from this board to have people not recognize who this artist is

>>4292176
Explain.

Ripperino. Press F for us down under and S for ScoMo.

>>4292278
Cute. Is the black circle a nose or a mouth? I think something should indicate that

>>4292291
It was meant to be the mouth, sorry for not making it clearer

>>4290873
update

Is it better ?

>>4291072
https://twitter.com/REPUBLIC32
I don't have a whole lot on it atm but i'm gonna actually try posting more.

>>4292481
I really should start having a more stable workflow. I just wing it usually and its way too messy sometimes

>>4291493
Nice! Any tips on doing a study?

Gotta fix the eyes and maybe the nose because they look like shit and flat and bad after looking at it

Anything else that could be touched on before I work more on it?

>>4292496
Shapifanny?

>>4292559
Change the face angle back to the original and give her eyebrows

Did a bit of a sketch before bed, might pick it back up tomorrow and finish it, not sure, I'll see how I feel about it with fresh eyes tomorrow.

>>4292652
her right ear looks too close compared to her left.

>>4292624
like this ?

>>4292662
I think I fucked her eye up more so than the ear, giving that effect, or it's a mix of both...I may just redraw it completely tomorrow.

>>4292566
1. always have a goal in mind you want to learn (unless you're doing it just 4fun), plan around that
(e.g. do value studies in monochrome w/ flat round and limited palette, try to break down major planes + shadows etc.)
2. try to deconstruct what's going on in the painting/photo you're studying from
(e.g. you could colorpick the hair shadows here but instead i used a round opacity w/ a desaturated blue to try to get the same effect)
3. don't do too many/remember to make original pieces or youll get stuck in the rut of everything else you make looking terrible like me

(personal pref: i only use round flat + round opacity and 1-2 layers, you might need textured brushes or multiple layers to get some effects)

>>4292664
The cheek highlight was bothering me and I think this is the reason for it.
Other than that, I think you are over-detailing the face. I see you are going for an anime-realism style but you do not need quite so much detail, especially on areas like the nostrils. I think it is more helpful to think about the face as big , broad areas of light and shadow with tiny value/hue variations within them.

>>4292695
Thank you! That honestly looks so much better.
I do tend to draw more men than women and usually the guys have more face planes, especially around the nose. I shall correct what you mentioned and tone down the amount of details.

>>4292695
okey so i tried to simplify the planes as you said but imma take a break from it for now. I will come back to it tomorrow. Thank you once again!

how the FRICK do I draw anime eyelashes

thoughts on my art?

>>4292617
eh

>>4292737
here's my attempt at it

1/2

>>4292898
and here's an overpaint Mathias did as well w/ his comments

"I think it is fine. I have a bigger issue with the shapes and proportions. I focused on the main areas such as jaw and eyes
Red is a very dominant color in this character's design. But pushing everything to high saturation makes everything dominant and just noisy instead
If you want to you could create a difference by adding cold atmosphere and rimlight"

Casual shit I did today for a friend's Facebook group. The theme was dinosaurs

>>4292831
very cool, i dig the colors

>>4292858
It looks good. Don't you dare "eh" it. Be proud

>>4292963
It's mostly eh because I'm still practicing and trying to better myself. It's better than the Doll I did like a year or so ago lul.

I got back into art and I'm just really rusty

>>4293023

It's OK. We are all trying to improve, going back to art after a long time can be quite challenging so kudos for that!

>>4293050
Bless you anon, thank you.
Hope you do well with your art too

On route

>>4292905
Looks less masculine and the lighting is great. Just remove the strange line on her ear.

>>4284958
What part of it do you mean? i could try to help

>>4286483
i started off mimicking my favorite JP artists but i think it helps to really think about what you value and find appealing(for me it’s round forms)

tfw no aisle 10 gf

>>4292046
I am glad you do!

>>4292051
working on it
>>4293091
you're painting a lot recently it is -motivating-

I know this has a lot of errors, but does anyone have any comments regarding the design specifically?

>>4292905
this is so much better than anything I've drawn therefore I will not be drawing Asuka anymore

>>4293355
>I will not be drawing Asuka anymore
You keep drawing her you little faggot.

>>4293303
you're dudes are hot. Maybe you're destined to draw hot guys and cater to girls *wink wonk*

>>4293317
i like it
she cute

>>4293232
This is really cool, I love the energy and life you put in the figure, I can't wait to see this finished if this is planned do be finished that is.

>>4287578
I think the colors can use more work, like more reflective light? Not sure what the term is, but like more greens in the water because of the plants and some blue tones on their feet because of light reflecting off the water. Some more contrast would be good too. It's turning out pretty good though, cant wait to see final product. pic semi related, for reference on how different tones are used in the water.

first piece of the year

>>4293478
Thanks for the feedback, anon. I have already put it down and done with it but I'll definitely think about that for next time or if I touch it up later down the line. I should probably do some water studies soon, I have been dissatisfied with my skills for a while.

>>4293317
>>4293384
Aw thanks anon :D

I'm pretty frustrated with my current level so I'm doing practices, gonna dedicate a day to studies next chance I get

>>4293303
the females u draw are all stiff and ugly.

>>4293649
>I'm pretty frustrated with my current level
I think that speaks for the majority. Those are interesting colors by the way.

character designing for manga project

>>4293755
The art is alright. but I can't help but feel the design feels very generic? I have seen armor designs very similar to that one many times before, in many different anime, and as a result the character does not leave me with much of an impression.
Perhaps you should consider some of these things with the design
>What rank is he? Are there any outfit differences between higher and lower ranking individuals?
>What culture/era is this inspired by?
>What is the practical purpose of each item of his outfit? What does each item of his outfit say abut his personality?
Additionally, you have a lot of details that are really unnecessary for the design. Speaking from experience, when you are doing a comic you will very quickly get tired of all the little details in your characters outfit. Try to find a way to simplify it, so you can get the character across with fewer penstrokes. You're gonna have to draw this character dozens, if not hundreds of times, make it easier on yourself.

Roughed nine frames in one hour. I can do better than this.

>>4293479
Comfy car, really nice

>>4293262
Top kek that looks fucking cool, blog?

>>4286604
>>4286665
mothesstuff on instagram
I don't know if I should post studies so I don't update much

>>4293755
new ver

>>4293769
Oh damn, thanks that makes a lot of things clearer now

Was feeling that the design wasn't popping out to for some reason but couldn't home in on what

>>4284637
can I skip the /BEG/ thread and just start here

>>4292652
Decided to redraw it, and fix the right ear and eye this time, before inking. Once I get it looking proper, I'll add the other details in.

>>4293651
females are stiff and ugly

>>4293925
retarded hats

>>4292898
>>4292905
these are actually super nice! Thank you for the overpaint. I will work on it today and take your advices , see what i can do to tone down the high saturated colours and change the atmosphere a little. You guys have like a discord group for critique and stuff? I would love to join. This year i had a hard time working to improve my art so i think it would be a good motivation if i had a place like that.

Also this is what i drew today as a warm up. ANY feeback is welcomed since . Im still in the rough sketch state so i can modify lots of things with no problems.

One-fifth of the animation is roughed out on fours. Anything look off?

>>4293479
this board needs more perspective-based drawings. Nice work, anon

>>4294169
Make some yourself then. It would be a good challenge for you.

>>4294031
Some more progress on this piece.

>>4294145
I hang out in the /las/ discord from the /dad/ thread, its not very serious but you can just mute non-art channels if you prefer it that way.

>>4294204
Can I join if I'm not part of the website

>>4292831
you got a blog?

From the roll thread

don't draw, play umihara kawase

don't draw, make crap robots

I don't normally draw men, so this was fun for me.

I tried drawing Nero from DMC5 but i'm not really good at drawing dudes

minus the thicc eyelashes does his face look okay

>>4294749
reminds me of eddsworld

>>4295080
rest in peace

>>4292747
cute idea. i think youve made her nose too wide. she looks like a dwarf actually the whole face is kind of wide.

>>4293651
>the females u draw are all stiff and ugly.
yeah fuck you suck on my stiff and ugly
>>4293368
>you're dudes are hot. Maybe you're destined to draw hot guys and cater to girls *wink wonk*
fellas is it gay to draw hot guys

>>4295229
You just don't have the loli artist genes in you, they look like gollum. At least you can always fall back on drawing hot guys getting fucked in the ass if you need money.

>>4292747
anime eyes are usually impressionistic by nature, where western artstyles in times of old traditionally liked to define as much forms wherever possible with its linework, anime tended to leave a lot of form changes to the imagination and anime eyes are no exception. In addition, there is nothing really "anime" about eyelashes, there is nothing anime does any differently to eyelashes that is in any way significantly different from the varied methods by which any western artist would do the same subject.

That being said, your eyes would need to have less form definition to have that "anime" appeal to it, that also goes with your facial structure but I would suggest heavily to keep doing what you are doing for now in order to better understand the forms you are depicting, so that you can imply them in more subtle ways in the future.

>>4293658
Fair enough, I’m really motivated to improve this year though! :) thank you anon

>>4295229
>fellas is it gay to draw hot guys
Maybe. but girls will flock to you :^)

>>4295049
Nero's facial features are sharper, he also has a shorter, squarer face, since hes supposed to be the young inexperienced one
Other than that the eye position was slightly off

>>4295229
nty, still too stiff. And your OC, the one you actually draw from imagination sucks balls.

>>4295586
>>4295405
Is the artist a massive shitposter to get this much targeted hatred or something? I'm out of the loop

>>4295636
Not that I know of, but he's been kind of annoying and a dick in the threads before which is probably why people are lashing out

>>4295579
Aw nice, thanks anon
Did have a feeling he was a bit soft looking, but thanks again for the help

>>4284637


gooooooooo oooooooo >>4295818

What's the name of that thing when the atmosphere or something sucks the color out of things because they're far away and shit?

>>4295883
atmospheric perspective

>>4295891
Thank you. There's no stupid questions thread and I don't like starting threads.

>>4293867
sauce please?