/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Is gains goblin making these threads now?

>>4274366
I clicked the first link and nearly everything is dead there. Got any tutorials that aren't decades old? I took 1 look at loomis and it's nearly a century old. Isn't there anything modern and fast that will teach me to draw well?

I just want to draw my waifu (Raven from teen titans) like shadman, ravenravenraven, and eventually make 3D models of Raven like skudbutt.

I've already learned the blender basics, that shit was piss easy. Now I need to learn to fucking draw so I can actually fucking 3D model. this is bullshit.

>>4274366
Hey retard there's a thread up I know your little dick is hard from making a thread with your shit art in the header but don't start acting like this is your "thing" now.

>>4274372
Looks like you use shadman as inspiration get higher standards, anon.

Requesting feedback, what should I focus on improving? Aside from more dynamic/interesting poses and perspective, I'm working on that next.

>>4274480
Everything! You don't even know from where dicks start!

>>4274480
Do some foot studies, find the hotkey for flipping your canvas, and maybe look at Tamagoros art to see how he negotiates anatomy with a stylization similar to yours.
Pay attention to your detail economy e.g. how much detail exist in one place compared to another? Is it justified?

>>4274480
Last time I checked balls dont emerge from the inner thigh

>>4274366
Guro is against the rules. Report and move on.

>>4274366
>Gains goblin on the OP pic once again
This is low quality bait for sure

>>4258805
>>4261063
>>4261408
I took your advice.

>>4275235
Second time seeing that cheap grain effect, is this the new chromatic aberration? It looks very stupid.

Greetings from /beg and merry christmas to you all.
I know this is not as lewd as the stuff I drew previously, but I'm trying. It's my take on krampus.
Monster girl page will be coming soon.

>>4275235
are you really a woman or just some tranny with issues.

>>4274366

>>4275296
>tranny with issues. All trannies have issues. That's why they're trannies.

>>4275235

based Marmelade Man I like the grain god I wish I could draw like you

w...why is every thread started with this same artist's work? Like I dont come here that often anymore but even months ago it was the same artist and I'm seeing the thread right before this is the same artist.
I cant seem to escape their work on any art-related thread on this site

>>4274636
>>4275133

I'll do more dick studies to get it right, I don't have a good frame of reference so

>>4275069
Thanks for the advice, I will try hard!

>>4275322
It wasn't enough to spam up every porn thread with their shit, now it IS the porn thread. This guy doesn't want to actually improve or make anything appealing. It's about making sure that everyone has to see his retarded self insert character drawn doing grotesque things.

>>4275333
I for one welcome our gains goblin as the porn thread overlord. At least he draws unlike you fags.

>>4275338
Unf!!!

>>4275342
Post your work. You can't.

>>4275235
That grain effect really ruined the pic, also the stupid facial expression she has.

>>4275345
>PYW
No u.

>>4275346
Post your work

>>4275353
>>>/b/816996398

>>4275061
Critique it as much as possible pls pls

>>4275061
>>4275382

>>4275386
>>4275382
>>4275061
I'm done dumping

>>4275375
This doesn't help your argument.

>>4275391
So what would it take to pull a piece of your work out of your ass to post it?

If you want me to step in and make the threads again in open to availability.

>>4275375
For what purpose?

>>4275404
Anyone can make them, gainsgoblin had the courtesy to make it for us but you ungrateful pricks shit on him for that.
>>4275407
Because the grain effect that is gaining traction in popularity looks retarded.

>>4275345
Why would anyone want their art to be associated with Gains Goblins trash...the OP pic is fucked up guro with some amputees guts being pulled out. I'll never post my stuff if his garbage is the OP.

>>4275408
Anyone can make them is precisely the reason things have gotten out of hand.

>>4275408
You think hes making these threads for US? This is his gallery now. We are the viewers to his degeneracy. Futa fags are bad enough, we don't need guro here.

I like your style! I also love to use halftones, what you are using, clip studio? I was going to finish krampus with it, but sai is very limited. Is it easy to create gradient halftones?
>>4275386 is pretty good, but her face looks goofy. It's not bad, but she looks like she's blazed or something
>>4275388 the thumbnail looks good, but her body lacks some definition/lines around the hips and butt. Face looks weird on her head

>>4275431
Thanks for critiquing.
It's pretty easy to make gradients, yeah. Clip Studio can convert values to half tones as an effect or you can do it directly by using a half tone brush from the start.
I need to do more intensive studies of skinny frames, hips, and the back definitely.

>>4275338
Fuck you, you retarded shit licker. I draw. I just don’t draw well. So you go burn in hell while your mother gets raped to death by a pack of feral niggers.
And Merry Christmas!

>>4275517
seething and ngmi

why is it always the same people? not just the op but the whole thread

same shit over and over

>>4275593
You chimps scared off the other people.

>>4275235
You really need to work on your facial expressions. No real criticism on everything else. Looks pretty great.

>>4274367
Pretty sure it's a butthurt prudetard.
>NSFW/Porn Containment Thread
>containment

I got some Loomis for Christmas. Too bad it doesn’t have a chapter on erected penisses

>>4275639
This, hell, even I'm afraid to post my stuff.

>>4275382
>>4275386
I like your style. Something about the face feels a bit off here >>4275388 but everything else is lovely.
Do you have a blog?

Where is the place to host nsfw art now that tumblr has banned it and twitter is talking like they're gonna start cracking down on it?

>>4275271
I'm doing this, bros.
I'm making it HAPPEN

>>4276069
uh oh

>>4276069
I'm either in the mood for reading or for jacking it, so I'd probably gear this one way or another.

>>4276069
>>4276072
cringe

What do you guys think of this?

>>4276069
>>4276072
>Charols
Carols. If your intent was to make Krampus a dumb teenager and the one writing this, you did a good job. Improve the page design and get a better font.
Then, draw Santa.

>>4275966
Yeah, same here. I'm someone who lives from my art (which doesn't mean I'm good, but at least a considerable amount of people is willing to hire and/or commission me) and these threads aren't welcoming.

Look at how much gratuitous shit this drawing got >>427523 even thought it's better than what most people post in these threads.

I know if everyone told each other "oh, it's perfect, don't change anything" it wouldn't be too useful, but the comments I'm reading seem to come from people who don't draw or that are just jealous.

>>4275235
Why is her hair coming parallel out the side of her head rather than perpendicular to her head

>>4276160
>the comments I'm reading seem to come from people who don't draw or that are just jealous.
Its admirable for the artist to have the balls and post their work while putting you faggots in your place but the feedback over the grain effect still stands - the grain effect is quickly starting to become cliche, overused, and it screams pandering to whatever flavor of the month that got normies's buttholes tickling.

>>4275311
is a Rape?

>>4276122
cringe

>>4276214
Now tell me what about it makes you cringe.

>>4276122
Focus on the form, and simplify the colors and shading, it kind of just blends all together visually. Do you have just the line-art of this? Also, notice what Boogie does, which this kinda reminds me of, lots of b/w lineart done and *polished* (inb4 reeeeeeeeee he sucks) and simplify the form. You have the skills, just tweak some things here and there. Remember, is this day and age, as much as I have mixed feelings about it, visual aesthetic is gold. Hope this helps a little.

>>4276173
anything specific you'd like to get crit on, vusta? it looks pretty alright so far

>>4276333
oh, just if there's anything looking off so far
it's a hard angle and I'm ha- and I'm struggling

>>4276337
Not that anon, but finish it first, at least for solid line-art, it's hard to tell, and clean up the lines too.

>>4276342
you are right, brb I'll do that

>>4275346
>>4275663
It's a pretty broad statement to dismiss any neutral facial expression in porn as being poorly drawn or that I lack an understanding. Why would she be making silly faces in this scenario? Unless you're saying something is wrong anatomically in which case I implore you to redline my work.

>>4275242
>>4275318
>>4275346
The hundreds of people asking "what anime is this from" disagree with you. You gonna start shitting on BlueTheBone now too?

>>4276769
>>4276772
Whoops, forgot trip. These are me.

>>4276769
Still retarded, please learn some facial expressions.

>>4276769
>>4276772
>unironically using chromatic aberration
I honestly cannot tell anymore whether or not someone is pretending to be retarded or just plain retarded.

>>4276769
>>4276772
facial expressions in nsfw drawings are supposed to appeal to the consumer. no one asks you to change the face into an ahegao, but to make her express more emotions with her expressions.

no one fucking asked you which anime this is from, just because you put a grain effect on it and yellow text underneath. jessie and ash are way too fucking popular characters for anyone to think it's from an anime. and everyone unironically thinking this is from an actual anime either retarded or too innocently naive to follow you on socials.

>>4276871
post your insanely successful art blog, mr marketer.

>>4276877
>pyw cuz im angry
Not an argument

>>4276879
It literally is. You’re posturing as a guru on making successful and appealing art despite having no leg to stand on doing so. You wanting a Dreamworks face in every neutral porn context means you’re a brainlet.

>>4276877
>>4276893
put your trip back on. just because you're over average and better than most people in this thread doesn't mean you get a free pass on crit. hell, even normies that never drew a person in their life can crit you.

>You wanting a Dreamworks face in every neutral porn context means you’re a brainlet.
you thinking that any emotional expression means to go whacky cartoon-y despite me saying not to turn the expression into an ahegao shows that you're the actual brainlet and should maybe socialize to see how actual humans express tons of emotions with facial expressions in their day to day life without being a mickey mouse cop out.

>>4276900
That's not me, retard. But seriously, post your work.

>>4276908
>what is inspect element

>>4276769
You might be right. This specific facial expression is too bland and unexpressive for the situation she is in. She needs more sultry eyes.
I feel I've seen this same issue with other artworks of yours, that's why I was speaking in general.
Now you can either take my advice as a friendly suggestion, or be a bitch about it and ignore me. Your call.

>>4275522
Last time I wish someone a merry Christmas! Happy Boxing Day, cocksucker.

>>4276859
Simple tricks normies love just like the grain

>>4276328
I also have mixed feelings on it but simplicity and visual appeal seem to be the right direction when making porn. I'll take a closer look at Boogie's work like you mentioned. He does have a softness to his colors that I enjoy.


>Do you have just the line-art of this?

I do. Pic related, not sure what you were planning on doing with it but ill keep checking back.

lmao, nice to know im not the only midnafag drawing here today

>>4277066
TheBoogie
>https://e621.net/post/index/1/theboogie%20midna
TheCon
>https://e621.net/post/index/1/thecon%20midna
Take a quick look at their Midna b/w poses, extreme angle views which both like to do as well, especially TheBoogie, and general clean linework. Some further critique points: her right hand (viewer's right, her technical left) could be rendered better, the fingers need work, draw in the nails subtley, and softly, the ends of her fingers show more like monster claws, than delicate fingers, also, they should be angled closer to her "member's" base of the shaft, as well as rendering and adding more linework detail in, basic line crease of the finger joints underneath, side and top, you'll have to experiment with that. Also, rendering the "member" in more, if she is circumcised, there would be more detail behind the top of head, as well as a slight gap, and inward, downward, subtle dip, and of shallow folds and wrinkles of skin behind that, as well as some subtle (very subtle), few, and humble veins, and maybe even a small, subtle, soft hole for the urethra opening, as it's a little jarring as is. The lower "sac" gets chicken scratchy at the bottom and unreadable, clean that up, and just make it rounded connecting the whole "sac" as one, giving it a smooth, curved, and bulbous appearance. Her left hand (viewer's left, which would be her technical right) thumb should be corrected, as the thumb is way too high, and at the angle of the hand, should be more partially covered by the foreshortening of the hand before it and pointing down lower, also, her her wrist should be pointing closer to her body, more than away. She is missing just the part of her right shoulder, (viewer right, technical left). As well decreasing a lot the size of her shoulder on the left and the upper arm, and moving the shoulder inward, (viewer left, technical right). Also, render in her stone helmet, the soft lines and curves read more like flesh or plastic that stone.

>>4277066
>>4277131
Comporable poses, and works:
TheBoogie:
>https://static1.e621.net/data/bf/3e/bf3e0059c20edcb7d0edbdf47b25ebd5.png
>https://static1.e621.net/data/5b/1a/5b1a69580bdb073d925adadf16caa748.png
>https://static1.e621.net/data/a4/85/a4858ad269451e336aef6ce2e6f8622b.png
TheCon:
>https://static1.e621.net/data/7f/58/7f5833516a52c8f7f006fe7f9e403079.png
>https://static1.e621.net/data/fa/9d/fa9dda01ff867f62690b1cbb63cca763.png
>https://static1.e621.net/data/62/3e/623ea3a070b0eeff24ab0b6aa87c9409.png
Remember, use them as a reference, don't outright copy them, study, compare, find problem areas, experiment, study again (irl anatomy), and correct accordingly.

I don’t have a clue how to paint properly or draw hands. Any crits are appreciated

>>4274372
Get perspectivepilled anon. Once you learn perspective deconstruct shadman drawings of your waifu and get a better style than him. Practice head shapes and body shapes first before you move onto details to get the grasp of em. I'm serious anon, don't be like the rest of the ngmi begs and learn perspective. This is literally all you need in order to learn to draw your waifu.

>>4277172
Depends on what you want to replicate for painting, honestly your better than me for just basic values and light, any examples of what you would like to accomplish with comparable work? Also, hands are pretty straight forward once you do a few self-studies. Only thing I would crit is the right hand (viewer right, technical left), the thumb is poorly rendered, the back fingers should be showing out more prominently, they wouldn't be going back to such an angle, unless she's death gripping the bow, compare her left and right hand, (viewer), there's even a noticeable size different. Try gripping an item and just experiment with the shape. Also, try adding nails in, it gives it a better rendered view, especially on that thumb. Other than that, it honestly is VERY passable, and for the norms, they'll eat it up. Nice job as far as it is. I would say, to challenge yourself, try making an actual background and not just a blurred out generic one.

I can only draw female hands, but how to make it more male?

>>4277172
Good color choices. Blog?

>>4277214
draw hands more block-y to make them appear more male. figertips, handbalm, wrist, thumb and joints can all be made with a bit more edge than being smooth and round-ish.

>>4277299
that yours? think her ass could use some motion blurr or motion lines to look like shes affected by the thrust. try to construct the heel with a box, currently it makes the shoe look out of perspective. would also add some of the minor shadows you used for the bodies on the shoe and the ground. them being the only things without shading in the picture makes it seem a lot more unfinished.

>>4277308
>her ass could use some motion blurr or motion lines
Don't know why i din't do that

I'll fix the heel too, thanks for the tips

>>4275918
>>4277299
>>4277308
I know it's not polished, it was ment to be a quick daily sketch
hope it looks better now

>>4277522
Not going to critique your work, you know what really irks people? Your humble bragging where you clearly put some time into it you pass it off as "Oh it's just a quicky sketch :) I know I didn't put much effort into it I just wanted to see" Fuck off.

>>4277526
dude it's literally a 3 layer 1000x1000pix file, fuck off

>>4277522
atill missing some shadows on the ground. makes it look like they're in a void. boot too overrendered now, so attention is getting drawn to it.

>>4277522
I think you should draw her hands bigger. Her ear is a flap that is hanging too loose. Her forehead is huge. The volume of the eye could be more prominent.

>>4277539
>>4277541
i'll try these and come back later so the thread doesn't get too flooded

>>4277526
Cope harder, faggot. Keep projecting your frustration like the autistic crab you are.

Sorry to double post from the last thread but hoping for crit if anyone can help me out.

>>4278004
i really like this, maybe the table? or whatever she's on is a little too flat for me, also those hands, they could use a bit more of details, you can't draw nails on some and then don't draw them on the rest of them

>>4278075
Very true. I definitely neglected both those areas. Thanks!

>>4278004
Looks good to me, but what’s with the glowstick dicks? Curious why you made the decision to make them that bright green rather than just red.

>>4278108
Just for fun. It was a Christmas thing sort of.

>>4277089
changed it a bit

honestly i jus really really wanted to draw some feet

Any porn artists that you recommend to study from?
The ones I follow don't make illustrations, only hentai, and I'm not learning much from them since many of them abuse POV and other gimmicks, and barely use colors.

>>4278351
Study irl anatomy first and foremost. Unless you like a certain generic style, like Kemono, or something. But don't get stuck on the loop of studying other artists. You are NOT going to learn much of anything, if you actually learn anything at all. Learn what you are drawing, best way is irl, go to the source, not the second hand, or even bottom of the barrel source, go to the best, draw real people from real sources. All extreme POV's are closeups of sections of the body, learn the natural human form first and foremost. Wait on color, and values, just stick to the basic bread and butter, bare bones of draftsmanship and building your internal mental library of human anatomy.

>>4278315
It reads more like Midna's head stuck on a normal body, or that she isn't even a shortstack anymore. Her head in design, is massively big, like for reference, Jimmy Neutron level head proportion. I would just take the selection tool, and use the transform function to increase the size of the head to be much larger. Also, do the same with her foot, but decrease the size. Her hand is way too huge, unless I am reading that wrong visually, as it's hard to tell, but I would say decrease her hand size. Post a b/w image of it, if you have that available as a layer.

>>4278349
It's looking good, finish and clean the linework, and then move from there to basic values and colors.

>>4278365
there you go anon, i'll try using the transform tool, desu didn't noticed the head size, only the hand and foot, thank you

I’m obviously getting nowhere trying to draw smut. How do I stop? Should I jerk off more? Less? Have sex? Go to church?

>>4278004
Face isn’t good. The way the tongue is interacting with the rest of the mouth is especially bad since there’s no depth to it, making you h whole thing look disconnected. Go study real faces for a while.

Which sketch do you prefer?

>>4275235
Good work on the lighting. The grain effect doesn't bother me at all.

>>4278561
Left but put the nose where the mouth is and put the mouth a little bit down on the face

>>4278580
Fix her man hand

>>4278580
good but fix her face, i need bug-eyed monsters with tiny mouths and no nose to get my microdick hard enough to cum on my t-shirt

>>4278580
>Muh realism

>>4278580
a shameful display of nudity!!!!...said my great great great grandma.

These are 2 sex slave characters for a very nsfw story series I wrote lookly set within warhammer 40k
https://amaazingpages.wordpress.com/2019/12/23/the-violet-rose-society-warhammer-40000-setting/
parts 2 and 3 are also on the site if you want to read the sex stuff.

>>4278494
Agreed about the tongue for sure. I've been doing some skull studies since then since I'm really weak in that area.

>>4277522
>>4275918
Pode ser só sketch mas dá pra ver que o estilo é bacana. Tem blog?

Commission

>>4279349
holy freakin' based

>>4279349
is that the guy from Detroit?

I'm fine with figure drawing but I dislike 3D porn quite a bit, but I feel like I'm missing out on good angle references by approaching things that way.
Any thoughts or input on this?

>>4279065
Valeu, to postando no @pokinha mas tem pouca coisa ainda.

>>4279369
just use it for reference? What's the big deal

>>4279369
Are you looking for specific angles for a specific piece wip, or just wanting to practice, experiment and study?

messy color test from someone's oc

>>4278580
Study hands, left hand's huge.

>>4279432
Well injecting your mind with images of gross people having sex for hours a day IS a big deal for anyone caring about what they put inside their mind.
>>4279436
All of those really. I get my post/question was dumb but I needed to get it out there.
Up until now I've just never really put that much thoughts into the process of most H-artists out there, and it occured to me that most of them probably heavily reference 3D porn and whatnot and don't really construct their stuff themselves. I'd like to be wrong though.

>>4279685
>3D
Do you mean like digital modeling 3D, or referring to actual images of actual real people as reference? As for Japanese and actual professional Hentai artists, (not indie), have used and just drawn over real people and 3D models, and just spiced it up to cover their tracks. I suggest, learning the actual way to draw, so you can be a lot more free to draw what you want, when you want, how you want it. Rather than endlessly relying on pre-found images to draw over. As for angles, extreme perspectives, and what not, go on /s/ and find some solo females, just browse until you find relatable and comparable images, they are there, just nab and save, and then begin studying them. Or just googling it honestly. /s/ has some great, and sometimes high quality image dumps that are great for study source material and inspiration, although 99% of the board is fap-crap.
Art /s/ threads:
>>>>/s/19292621
>>>>/s/19274824
They used to have a general HD quality one of just pretty much nude girls in nature, that were stunning sources, but it's been swallowed and devolved by the usual fap-addict thread bumpers, killing any thread that is of any decent quality.

>>4279682
can you draw version with pubic and armpit hair

>>4279706
Thanks for the detailed reply.
I got a few pics I liked from these threads, but I think the problem lies in me having difficult tastes and not liking real people very much.

>>4280200
What kind of source would you be interested in, if I may ask?

>>4276772
this is based

>>4280256
No, this is pedophilia.

>>4276772
>"anime"

said no one ever

>>4280489
>>4279461
>>4279349

>>4280534
this is where people will disagree, but personally i think the severity of degeneracy of loli and shota is anisotropic with respect to who the intended audience is supposed to relate to, or who the beholder relates to at the time, i.e. if you personify yourself as the kid it's much less creepy than personifying yourself as an adult wanting to fuck a mentally and physiologically immature kid

is nsfw art the way?

>dont have to study clothing or landscapes as much
>there's a lack of quality 2D porn animations
>just do same generic sex shit but with different characters
>people will settle for less skill if the subject is obscure enough
>fetishes are getting more and more accepted these days

only downside is maybe your mom will be disappointed

>>4280604
lmao if you have patience to grind animation to half-decent level then you can become professional concept artist or whatever else goes under your definition of GMI

>>4280642
And then live minimum wage from that instead of making better money with freelance smut?
Wake up.

>>4280760
quick googling says that average concept artist in burgerland gets $50-60k per year
it maybe not that much if you have family to feed, but for every successful porn artist out there there is dozen that gets like $300 per month

>>4280790
>for every successful porn artist out there there is dozen that gets like $300 per month
Same goes for your average concet artist in burgerland.

Trying to learn coloring, anatomy is kinda fucked though.

>>4280925
First learn form, proportions, perspective, gesture. Then come values and color theory. Stop polishing turds.

>>4280925
at least clean your lines you lazy motherfucker ass nigger

>>4280925
OMFG that chicken scratch

These are the only things I draw anymore. I don't touch the tablet for some weeks, then finally sit down on Sunday, decide to draw something cool, and end up with this kind of stuff instead. I mean I still have fun, so maybe it's still alright, just not something I could share with people outside of the Internet.

>>4278004
You forgot to add the SFX Untz Untz Untz Untz Untz, Tuntz Tuntz Tuntz Tuntz to go along with those glowstick dicks.

>>4280247
These are the ones I saved from the both threads anon sent me, if it can give you an idea of my taste.
If you meant what I'd want as references to draw H, my answer would be too long and boring to read.

>>4280940
One time I was told that my work wasn’t worth commenting on because it was “just an unfinished sketch. (Learn to apply yourself, you lazy nigger.)” now this poor bastard is told to stop polishing turds.
It’s almost like you retards have nothing of value to say.

Very early stages, but i think i can fuck up a simple standing pose since /ic/ has never helped me let's see if by a miracle someone does says something useful. Since last drawing was a mess and had to be trashed out.

>>4281112
>/ic/ has never helped me
That's because you keep posting old shit that you've worked on a year ago after everyone's exhausted with it and you continue to post regardless. Now everyone's identified you as a waste of time and I believe you're not even the artist that made that but instead someone else trying to stir shit up.

>>4281112
Everything has outlines except the hair which makes it look out of place especially because its the only place where you decided to use weird gradient shading when everywhere else you have flat shading

>>4281112
>/ic/ has never helped me before
I have, and I won't ever again.

>>4281117
well I tried to emulate this. its very confusing to me.

>>4281120
You aren't a true fan.

>>4281139
You made more work for yourself by not actually using a gradient, but somehow you also fucked up the order of the colors lmfao

>>4275061
>>4275386
>>4275388
>>4275382
lineart too thick/unpolished
faces are shit, no expressions, too cartoony

>>4278004
Soul

>>4281102
Disregard all the rest I wrote, yeah. Go fuck yourself with comments like yours.
If you want to help them, then do it, retard.

>>4281236
>too cartoony

>>4279349
blog anon?

Want to finish something before the year is over. Thoughts/tips to make it better?

redline please especially the anatomy? it's a fanart from manga messi

>>4281496
Spotted the pedo.

>>4281531
they're easier to animate. I just want to learn how anon draws his characters

>>4278379
that face is JAB-tier
stop that

>>4276772
>Quem tá comendo não tá reclamando
based

Not sure if this counts as porn or not, but is her torso anatomy screwy to you guys?

>>4281497
You're drawing the pussy too high/forward.
https://prismblush.com/pussy-box/

>>4281841
The face face needs a lot of work, especially the eyes. Nothing wrong with the torso. Good work so far!

>>4281864
Oof can you tell I've been struggling with it? I think I've been fiddling around with eye/ mouth placement for way too long and it still feels very off to me. What do you suggest?

And thank you for the input, I genuinely appreciate it

>>4281497
I used to draw a lot like you. I used ultra-thick lineart because I felt I couldn't get a smooth outline with a thinner brush. When you focus on making every line the perfect weight/shape, you often end up feeling like your sketches look more alive than your final lineart. That's because you lost the energy that was in those messier strokes. See the picture I've attached for an example of lineart which is very messy but extremely energetic as well. I would recommend trying to capture that feeling more in your art. Force: Dynamic Life Drawing is a great book about this. Also try to learn more about making your drawing feel more 3-dimensional.

You have a lot of room for improvement, but if you put in the work and are very patient I've no doubt you can achieve things well beyond what you think you're capable of.

>>4281884
I was trying to copy the offical style. A few people on /v/ (and myself) wanted to see porn in this style. Which now that I seen it, doesn't really fit. Or at least I need to get more familiar with it. It's my first time using vector layers and ellipse tools, so I probably went a bit overboard. I'm gonna try and take what I learned from this and apply it to more of my orignal works. Thanks for the encouragement.

>>4278580
cute feet

>>4281870
Constructing the face is a very important step to creating an appealing face. This way you can make sure your eyes are the correct sizes, and the mouth and nose are placed in the correct places. Loomis gives basic examples of this, but I think Scott Robertson might help you out a bit more with your skill level, seeing as you're thinking in 3D with the body, but not the face.

>>4281841
looks good, try and color it.

>>4281905
sorry if my post implied that using thick lines is inherently bad -- it's not. I think the core of the issue here is that simplified styles like the original usually don't look very good with anything other than an eye-level or bust-level POV. Maybe look at Genndy Tartakovsky stuff if you're interested in pursuing that look. It's also totally fine to prefer cleaner lineart, but it can really help your drawings to feel more expressive if you try to incorporate some of that sweeping sketchy feel.

Lastly, I just want to say that for all my critiques it is still a pretty cute drawing and your taste in video game princesses is top-tier. Good luck with your art

>>4281496
@Lambrey3 on twitter

At least it’s not ss.

How does one get into the voice over side of animations? Just find artists that do animations and hit them up if they need voice work?

i had fun with this one

>>4283057
>.gif

>>4283066
the high quality one's on my twitter

>>4283069
Nobody cares. You are here for critique, not to shill your shit.

>>4283104
then criticize it fag

>>4283108
You aren't worth my time, sorry.

>>4281498
󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 Please redline my work!!!
Or
󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 your
󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 mum's
󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 󠛡 dead tonight

>>4283066
>1557712516408.gif
Anon you can't post that

>>4283132
>redline that formless mess
It's impossible, anon. I guess I'll say one last goodbye to my mum

can't decide if it looks believable to have this much of the torso showing from this angle

I draw porn for commission bucks. But recently I've been considering doing more depraved shit if it pays significantly more. Any anons that have experience in drawing fucked up shit for money?

>>4284174
If you charged more then 5 for this you should be arrested

>>4278561
>tabi-like socks
Good taste.

>>4283057
Chopping off one black dick at a time. Good.

year of rat

>>4281498
I have a bud irl who is gay, who draws almost exactly like you, dare I take a gander at the first letter of your name, starts with an "S"?

Long time without drawing but here I'm again.

Thougts?

Requesting feedback, I don't like how this is going but can't figure out how to fix it

>>4284398
Work on those hands, but, it does give it an interesting style.

>>4284539
Bottome guy has no neck, take the select and transform tool, and move his head away. Also, the top of his head should be longer.

>>4284529
Is the dude supposed to be some kind of animated sex doll?

>>4284596
Lol no, he is an alien and the girl is in other planet

first time trying something like this any suggestions?

>>4284529
I really like this.

>>4281841
Here's what I mean by construction. This is what I normally do with my drawings.
I'll post what I come up with after this stage.

>>4284693
Not that anon but did you practice realistic proportioned heads before stlyized?

>>4284699
Absolutely! It's helpful to understand proportions first because then you can apply them to any skull no matter how long and tall, or squished and small.
>>4284693
Update. I did my best to keep the expression, nose, and eye shapes the same. Left both sketch layers on for easier comparison. I'll finish it up next update.

>>4284708
>>4281841
Here's the final one!
Aside from my whole critique on the head construction, another thing I noticed is that you were likely drawing Peach from memory. If there's anything I've learned when drawing characters off model is that you need to keep the general hair shape and facial features the same. For example, peach doesn't have a cupids bow on her lips and has specific hair that parts above her ears with prominent sideburns. Her eyes are round with distinguished lashes. You need to keep these things in mind when doing fan art. Keep a reference pulled up at a similar angle to what your drawing so you can nail these aspects.
Scott Eaton has a course on facial anatomy. You should check it out, as well as anyone reading this that has problems with facial construction.

Best of luck, and Happy New Year!

>>4284529
The ilustration is done, only the dialogue balloons and gonna go for the next page

>>4284117
should have the hand on the ass and it should look alright, but at the moment it looks like the torso is disconnected from the pelvis; might have to make it a bit bigger, and also the thighs look a little short, unless that is intentional

>>4281841
>>4284732
Blogs for both of you?

>>4284480
w-wew. how did you know that?

>>4284832
Not sure if your messing with me, but, to test, what is the first letter of your last name?

>>4284832
Not sure if you're messing with me, but, just to be sure, to test, what is the last letter of your last name?

had fun with this one :)

>>4285294
holy freakin blog?

>>4285296
gigawix on twitter :D

>>4285294
It's looks great, only thing that I would say is work on rendering her tail and back some more, maybe adding some subtle slight musculature on the back, as well as the frills on her back, and some added detail to her tail. The frills aren't rendered in a way like they don't look like they quite belong. Other than that, great job, keep up the good work. I'd suggest expanding and pushing the boundaries of playing with the values and ambient color of the lighting, warm vs. cool light sources, as well as where the light sources are coming from and how it interacts with her form and feeling of the piece. Also, got anything else to post, really solid stuff, would love to see more.

>>4285307
Cont. Also, try playing with creating backgrounds, maybe even try a dungeon or forest background, or whatever suits your fancy. Push outside your comfort zone and boundaries and experiment, experiment, experiment.

>>4285307
>>4285312
wow thanks the for the thoughtful reply, i definitely wanna work on all that stuff and get more ambitious with my drawings going into 2020. thanks for the encouragement

>>4284628
Give her a dick

>>4285319
how big ya want it boss?

>>4284628
Firstly, draw her nude, and show where your anatomical problems lie, as it's apparent there are a lot (not trying to discourage or dis you), and work on improving from there. As this is a very toony piece, the composition and quickly easily read form is paramount and needs work, it is hard to read sometimes what is what. Too many severe and random sharp points and sharp turns on the forms. You can do sharp turns and sharps end points on heavy line-art stylization, but, the inner form needs to be softer, as she is a cloth/scare-crow being, so, it she should be softer in design as well as her clothes. The color palette is fighting with one another making it hard to focus on any one thing, as it's mainly monochromatic and the colors are too close to one another on the design spectrum, noticeably the upper half background reads visually as a mess. The upper part of the piece is fighting for visual dominance over the lower half. It constantly forces the viewer's gaze down. Which it shouldn't, as it's intended design is to be a full piece figure. It leads directly to the poorly rendered lower section of the body, groin which doesn't read at all as it's so small and the boots leading to feet dominate the lower picture with harsh, sharp edges of the boots. She has no right (technical left) knee cap, although on the other side she does. As well as the poor anatomical rendering of the "members" and her hands, and her arms. It reads rather sloppy in terms of composition and form, and color. I amend you for adding the background in, but it is very symbolic drawing. Which isn't bad in itself, but it doesn't match the style and more detailed and thought out figure and the complexity there within. For the background, double or even triple the monochromatic value scales, I see 5, I would add in 10, to 15, or even 20, changes in the basic values, just to experiment.

>>4285343
Cont. You know what you are drawing, and what you want, it's just tweaking and fixing quite a few things in general with your skill set, and I think you would be okay. Focus on the form, composition and harmony of the form. I'd suggest drawing this figure/character of yours in the nude and try different poses and angles, and to polish up the anatomy.

>>4285167
R

>>4285369
Hmm, it was a close coincidence, person I was thinking of, last letter in last name was an "L". Swear it looks exactly like my anon friends work, but smeh.

>>4285343
I tried a bit with the BG also tried some other things with your advice. not sure how much I can fix the anatomy, and can you circle out the soft/hard form stuff because im not quite sure what you mean about that

>>4285319
also one for this guy

>>4285680
Her boob on our left is significantly larger than the one on our right.

>>4285687
Fair enough, I shall fix it

I was trying to make the one angled to the camera seem forshortened a bit. Might just start again

>>4285343
>>4285345
I did a naked ver in some sketches today, what do you think?

>>4285957

>>4285957
>Godzilla fucking a weird woman

>>4285957
Gains gobbo back at it again at krispy kreme

art is a little old, but is she cute anons?

>>4285957
SSGG
in seriousness though keep at it my nigga

>>4286107
p good.

>>4285471
I could circle much more, but it would be a bit overwhelming. Notice the boot-lace design, and how flat and poorly rendered it is, as well as the boots, and aspects of the clothes. From your other b/w poses it shows you understand what is going on well enough anatomically. But I'd say this piece is very poor in comparison to what you can achieve with your current skill set as you've presented. I think you may have rushed this. Slow down, as even the line quality in areas varies, especially with the "members'. The "members" could even be rendered better, it's all very symbolic drawing and flat form-wise. Use reference when drawing those clothes too, especially those boots, they really stand out as the problem center piece. Again, I think you may have just rushed through the line art phase and jumped straight into the next stage of rendering.
>>4285973
Much better, and much softer. Especially the bottom right one where she is standing. These are actually much stronger than your original finished piece, pose, form and gesture wise. I'd say redraw another image of her and expand from the original piece, with a more dynamic pose, take your time. Also, expand those backgrounds too. If I am having trouble with clothed figures, I find it helpful to draw the figure nude first, and then to add clothes if I am having a difficult time of it, it also helps with experimentation, which is key to seeing what works and what doesn't for future pieces, as well as using reference for clothing and items I do not understand or have memorized in my internal visual library.

>>4286141
thanks for the kind feedback sire. I think I may try and further render the B/W poses further after making a redraw of this one but it may take me a while

>>4286107
Good anatomy, dynamic pose, very solid, now post a finished b/w line-art image. Would love to see a finished piece of this on the right side, and add color and values. Your solid on everything else so far, good job.

>>4285997
not godzilla, but close so 1/2 a point
>>4286110
i plan to, this was mostly a warm up for the new year, not really an exercise in flexing my skills

>>4285718
He thighs are massive compared to the rest of her body, especially length wise, notice when compared to the arms, roughly speaking, the length of the arms and legs are about the same in humans, that's also including each segment, but the forearm can be longer than the upper arm, and the thighs can be longer than the lower leg, but again, as a general rule of thumb, in total, they are about the same length. Her neck is really, really small, as well as her head, her head could be expanded just a bit, as well as the top and back of her head, adding even the flow of hair up to the knot from the back to show the implied cranium of the back of the head would help, also, notice how small the head is compared to the main portion of the torso. I would suggest expanding the image downward and finishing the lower legs and feet too for a full pose. Other than that, it is very solid, and you can fly by on it honestly just as is, just tweak a few things and you'll be good.

>>4286147
Np, I'd suggest opening a new canvas, cut and paste one of the poses into a new canvas, transform and expand the image and go from there. Also, before you begin, try experimenting with the pre-planning stage of compositional planning. As even boundaries of the canvas/image border can affect and interact with how the form is interpreted.

>>4285386
can you post one of your friend's work?

>>4286170
Did you want a critique of it?

>>4286190
i'm always open to them, tho mostly looking for it based on structure of characters or perspective, not like 'your fetish disgusts me, kill yourself'

>>4286177
Damn... thanks for the feedback anon. Better just cut my losses at this point, try and make the next one better.

>>4286199
Okay.
>>4285957
The pose, and composition is flat, and uninteresting, though the form of at least the female is interesting. The hard 90 degree right angle of the image really just cuts into the piece. Create a more dynamic pose from a different angle as well. The monster design is poor, and could be designed much better. The monster's eye should not be that big, and there is a lot of symbolic drawing a design aspects taken for granted in the monster. The frills read more like Sonic's frills, rather than an actual lizardarian sail, think o a Spinosaurus, or the back frills of an adult iguana. Which are usually thicker, and blubous and chunky to a degree, compared to the paper thin protrusions as it. The neck of the monster should be pushed back more to meet the back of the torso, think of just the image of the human spin. The neck does not come from out of the middle of the torso, but from the back section of it, remember, the ribcage expands out from the spine, being that the spine is the entire backbone structure of the body. Also the hands/talons, poorly rendered, lizards and avians have very weird but to an extent similar, long, thin digits, with huge knuckles, but again, this varies with the reptile and avian. The talons/claws are massive, as well as missing digits, and it reads more like an inflated bear claw, reptile hybrid. The digits and hand should be much longer, unless your taking artistic liberties and making a human/lizardarian/avian hybrid hand, even then, you have to get creative, maybe this creature has actual nails which end in huge curved claws, or they come out of the skin as bone line lizards and avians, and then design from there using irl references and artistic liberties and creativity. The same goes for his foot talons, it's very heavily symbolic drawing, use references heavily to learn and understand what you are trying to convey. The legs are digi-grade, but are poorly proportioned and rendered.

>>4286237
based

>>4286107
>>4286137
>>4286149
ty, i only post that because ive gotten a bit better at drawing since then and wanted your opinion on this redesign

wip

snorlax x SwSh heroine

>>4286237
thanks, i appreciate the composition advice, 1 thing tho, the monster is a feraligatr, like the pokemon, so there's some translation aspects of it that aren't my doing

sorry im gonna delete and repost in the Alt art thread, shes a coomer character but i dont have any pictures of her getting rammed yet

>>4286243
Anon is she wearing a wig? If not why does she not have a hairline

>>4286237
Cont.
The creatures face needs a lot of work, again, this is where creativity and liberties come into play, and again, it's very heavy symbol drawing. Use a t-rex skull as reference, or another predatory lizard, you will find that modern day lizards heads are not what you expect depending on the skull, a komodo dragon skull vs. a crocodile skull (there is a big difference in the skull shape and evolutionary design between the crocodile and alligator) vs an alligator skull vs. the various monitor lizard skulls vs. snakes vs. alligator snapping turtles, etc. Look towards the horned and frilled lizard on Google which will help, as the protrude out of the skin, as sometimes actual thorn/horn-like protrusions, and see the protrusion and where they appear, as well as the eye placement and size with regards to the rest of the size of the skull. Notice lizard skin too, which the huge chunks do not read very well design wise on the piece. The female's mouth really is off putting, when looking at someone from the side, their mouth doesn't open up like a snake or dog, just the lips slightly open, not the hole face, hence why we have such small mouths compared to all other animals. Also, where her nose meets the upper lip, and her lower jaw, look to anatomical skulls and see that they are not that severe. Also, move the image up from the bottom border of the canvas, it cuts off and reads very poorly as composition.

>>4286242
Honestly I'd say you're good enough to continue as you have a decent grasp on anatomy, and it's easy to read the form and design well enough. I'd say just create a b/w piece with a dynamic pose, or multiple poses finished and inked (can be scratchy) as long as it's easy to read. So far good job, show off some more dynamic poses or a simple rendered image. Solid work so far. Just need to show you can go on to the next phase of rendering.

>>4286244
Pokemon designs are very weird. They do not function normally either in their design or when animated. The creature reads more like a reptilian monster than inspired by pokemon, other than the big eye. Skip trying to copy pokemon designs and go straight to the source, real animals. Copying somewhat flawed but popular symbolic designs aren't going to go far if at all. It's just copying symbol drawing with the added layer of more symbol drawing. Also, pokemon are easily broken down into simple shapes, that feraligatr is essentially a bunch of spheres, a giant bean shape and cylinders. Again, I'd say just go to the source of real animals and design your own.

>>4281884
That lineart looks shitty tho, actually looks like a sketch

>>4286177
Actually, would you mind doing a redline? Would like to see how you'd change it

>>4286327
So, I redlined it, I think I may have been wrong about the thigh at first glance, maybe because it read as a lot bigger and thicker since it was bordered with the bottom of the canvas, so, I drew the original thighs and the new slightly smaller thighs with the drawn lower body along with a stack of her head as measurement to 7.5 heads. I think it's the head size that is throwing it off now looking at it again and working through it. But somethings off that's cascading the effect, I can't point it down though. I wanna say the head, as when I readlined it, and just did basic outlines of the head, it was small compared to other comparable measurements of the body. Honestly it kinda has me stumped.

>>4286258

idk i just followed the official art

>>4284758
Thanks for the feedback, I think I fixed some of the issues

>>4286252
idk what you did but that perspective looks really fresh, hyperreal

current wip

>>4286617
What the fuck is that?

>>4286625
a pokemon!

>>4286252
How did you do the perspective?

>>4286643
Ahem, I say, I say, do you have a blog? That is amazing. Only thing is notice her right knee cap on the right side (technical left), other than that, perfect as is.

>>4286643
blog pls

>>4286660
>>4286662
thank you thats very kind.
i'm twitter.com/smutbrush

>>4286674
Oh, I've actually seen you're stuff circulating on /ic/ before. Great stuff btw.

>>4286252
such wasted potential

>>4286643
Learn some line economy and stop drawing fucking children, dumbass.

>>4285473
That legit made me jump back in my chair

>>4286699
ok

alright not perfect but im happy with this for being around 4-5 hours of work

>>4286762
Looks fucking great. Keep it up dude!

>>4280542
shut the fuck up digibro

>>4286713
I love you.

>>4286762
Looks pretty solid, but I would reccomend not shading in black for colored pieces. For example, Mac's skin tone looks much darker than before, and the black just overall clashes with the bright, cartoony colors.
The rendering itself is fine (it follows the shapes believably), but it would look even better if you learned/applied color theory to it. I would only recommend shading in black if your plan on a monochrome piece, or if you want to shade a sketch/lineart.

>>4286762
>that long for that result
Dropped

>>4286778
i didnt use black for anything except for the lineart. i am inexperienced with color and rendering though

>>4282989
Publish some voice overs on twitter or something
Make an account on fiver so you can offer your services

>>4286779
speed comes with experience. im not a master artist or anything. 4 hours can fly by expecially when youre listening to a podcast or watching youtube when you draw.

>>4286762
You ruined it dude

>>4286780
What he means is that you’re shading only by shifting value (if you were traditionally painting, this would be adding black), not by shifting hue. Shadows are typically hue shifted in addition to value shifted depending on the color of the incident light on an object.

>>4286786
luckily, you have the uncolored lineart available to you in this very thread.

>>4286788
oh okay. correct. i do ignore hue too much and usually just move saturation and value sliders

>>4285957
>>4286713

why are their bodies made from pillows

from the imagination, hows my perspective

>>4287240
oh sorry about the file size, i forgot it

>>4287240
Cute! Blog?

>>4287244
Thank's
posting on https://twitter.com/pokinha

>>4286184
I'd crop it out if I did so ppl can't backtrack the image, I'll ask this though, does this anon have a tattoo on his hand/fingers/knuckles relating to the "wilderness"? I think I know who it is, might pm them on social media.