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Previous >>4268480

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

>> No.4278657
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>> No.4278659

>>4278657
anon whyyy

>> No.4278680
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I'm trying my hand at drawing furries after telling anons here that drawing furries takes no effort. It still doesn't but it's also kind of weird at the same time.

>> No.4278694

>>4278657
Anon! I can genuinely see you improving, good job and good luck :)

>> No.4278695
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I drew this angel for my mum because she complained I drew too much horror

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>>4278657
hi asukaposter
its actually getting better

>> No.4278712

>>4278641
Man orenji must be the comfiest artist on /ic/

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>>4278641
been a month since the last time i drew something, i played some of that game called Bad North, it's unbelievably charming and it really inspired me.

>> No.4278759

>>4278749
Nobody cares.

>> No.4278777

>>4278749
pretty nice but dont blog next time it triggers the autists

>> No.4278788

>>4278777
i just had to give some praise to the game honestly, it's really aesthetic

>> No.4278790

>>4278788
How do we know you aren't some kind of shill?

>> No.4278795

>>4278790
>>4278759
You guys are one of the reason why more decent/good artist don’t post here.

>> No.4278796

>>4278790
idk, what difference does it make?

>> No.4278797

>>4278795
How much did the Bad North devs pay you? It's okay, this is a safe space. Tell us so we can get a cut of that money.

>> No.4278800

>>4278797
Good lord i wasn't telling people to buy the game, just look up the art on google images, maybe they find it interesting

>> No.4278810

>>4278749
cool

>> No.4278812

>>4278749
You have nice shapes going on, but the circular body is a little too dominant.
If you made the mouth of the cauldron larger and thicker, it'd be a more interesting prop overall.

Also the fuck's going on with that handle, resolve that area - look up tea kettles or smth, a cauldron has to be able to be lift up or tipped and poured out of. Design more.

>>4278759
I kinda do.

>> No.4278822

>>4278749
really digging the border anon, it compliments your style very nicely.

>> No.4278824

>>4278812
haha you're 100% correct about the Cauldron in general, i looked up cauldrons on google when i was drawing but i just found most of them ugly, i know they got their shape due to it's practicality, i wanted to find a middle ground. Now that you've mentioned the opening on the top and the dominance of the ball shape I've realized that it looks more like a cartoon bomb than a cauldron lol

>> No.4278830

>>4278822
Thanks man, i think that's the thing that's been missing from the stuff i did before, they all felt kidna empty, this one is the one I'm the most satisfied with. Also limiting myself to a certain palette also helped.

>> No.4278840

>>4278795
You don't come here to blog about your personal life, what you shat out this morning, what you had to drink, the cat that didn't visit you today, the music you where listening to while your bull was upstairs sleeping with your boyfriend, nobody fucking cares.

>> No.4278852

>>4278810
thanks man

>> No.4278856

>>4278840
seething cope have sex

>> No.4278894
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Shota

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>>4278641
I want to design a cape character for a long term project. I have a preference for the one on the far right currently, but all feedback is appreciataed.

>> No.4278933

>>4278927
go to /beg/

>> No.4278934

>>4278927
\beg\

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Work continues.

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>>4278938

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Unfinished but I don't think this is bad at all

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Update

>> No.4279142

>>4278749
is there a gallery of your images somewhere?

>> No.4279172

Is the trick to getting mass attention here to be attacked by some autists drama then have everyone defend me?

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>>4278657

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>>4279204
Simplicity, simplicity, simplicity. You have simplified forms with detailed eyelashes that clash which leaves you with an uneasy and unnerving feeling when you see the face as a whole. Please stop doing that.

>> No.4279210

>>4279206
I'm sorry i didnit know
how to do long big eyelashes :(

>> No.4279213

>>4279210
Also eyelashes stick out, they don't actually go up.

>> No.4279215

>>4279210
Just remove them and use a simplified form that implies eyelashes such as a small box form in perspective and conforming to the bore of the eyes. They're not even eyelashes they look more like prickly tentacles.

>> No.4279216

>>4279102
I like the pose

>> No.4279217

>>4279213
>>4279215
i apologize i will fix this i promise

>> No.4279218

>>4279217
and stop being such a goody goody two-shoes it's getting fucking annoying.

>> No.4279219

>>4279218
Sorry!

>> No.4279224

>>4279218
I'm Polish

>> No.4279225
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>>4279204
>>4279206
It is less an issue of simplicity, and more that the shapes do not read well as eyelashes. You are basically symbol drawing them. Observing a real set of darkly mascara'd eyelashes (assuming that is the look you are going for) you can see they form more of a square shape rater than distinct triangles of lashes (a look which in real life is considered very undesirable)

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>> No.4279233

>>4279225
thanks man
in my head i was thinking about their direction in 3d space of course but it is difficult as they are curved and yeah it turned out flat

>> No.4279235

>>4279219
Kek

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not quite sure if this qualifies as alt, but it seemed a little cartoony

>> No.4279259

>>4279241
/beg/ faggot.

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>>4279259
what about this one?

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>>4279303

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Another Update

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>>4279224
keep going asukanon.

>> No.4279355

>>4279302
Why are you even in /alt/?

>> No.4279416

>>4279330
Do you ever get tired of always having the same subject matter?

>> No.4279435

>>4279142
i've got artstation https://www.artstation.com/acaofmaca

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>>4279330
any help?

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A few recent things

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>>4279446
Wrong image

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>> No.4279462

>>4279416
I'll be heading back to the ink and fullbody render commissions soon. Just needed to practice in these portrait comms.

>> No.4279465

>>4279453
is that a digital brush? may i ask what is it? really looks like ink

>> No.4279470

>>4279465
"bit husky" in the india ink brush menu of CSP

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>>4279470
thanks

>> No.4279494
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4279494

Been drawing for about a year now, still a mediocre drawer but willing to learn. I recently drew my favorite character Rosalina a couple days ago. Any advice?

>> No.4279498

>>4279494
You aren’t even medicore, just shit and go to /beg/, fag.

>> No.4279542

>>4279494
A year and you still can't resize? Jeeezus.
Like the other guy said, go to /beg/.

>> No.4279548

>>4279542
not him but whats up with the resizing autism? whats the problem with it

>> No.4279550

>>4279548
big pictures take ages to load which is a bit unfortunate on a image board

>> No.4279551

>>4279548
If you want feedback, it shouldn't take 10 seconds to load, take up drive space, and fill half my screen. Makes it really hard for me to give a shit.

>> No.4279554

>>4279550
>>4279551
uhhh.. but it takes like 5 secs and my internet is crap, 850kb/s.

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>> No.4279636

>>4278797
>>4278840
what a hack.

>> No.4279673

Imagine getting triggered over a guy saying he likes a video game on a Mongolian shadow puppet forum

>> No.4279677

Hey guys there's this game i've been playing lately that inspired me a lot, it's called Raid Shadow Legends, check it out

>> No.4279692

>>4278894
small qt!

>> No.4279693
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4279693

Why did the mods delete the caricature thread it seemed perfectly relevant

>> No.4279694

>>4279571
Pretty cute anon

>> No.4279727
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4279727

Y’all like Wonderbread?

>> No.4279734

>>4279450
Giant oven glove

>> No.4279736

>>4279734
You made me spit wine at my screen, thanks Anon.

>> No.4279742
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Another update. Just one more to get up to date, then I can move to the fullbody commissions.

>> No.4279744

>>4279727
Weird teeth, but dope as fuck

>> No.4279750

>>4279727
flat and formless. Learn to draw 3d shapes and actual rubberhose cartoons

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>> No.4279765

>>4279750
Draw me a cartoon then. Please show me how it's done; I'd love to know.

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>> No.4279771

>>4279742
jesus do you even feel shame scamming those retards

>> No.4279775

>>4279753
very nice belly and linework

do you have a blog?

>> No.4279783

>>4279771
>get what you pay for
>scam

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>>4279742
idk if this appeals to you but it's what i would do

>> No.4279792

>>4279765
not him, but he doesn't need to draw it. Just compare it with other cartoons of the style and you can see where you went wrong.

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>> No.4279795

>>4279793
nice brass

>> No.4279796

>>4279790
better but the skull is fucked beyond salvation, and the shoulders being on different angle doesnt help either

>> No.4279801

>>4279775
you'll have to find me ;)

>> No.4279803

>>4279796
you can correct him without being so derisive anon or else you come off as a bitter crab rather than a knowledgeable authority which I'm sure you are (post your work)

>> No.4279806

>>4279775
https://twitter.com/gigawix

>> No.4279808

>>4279806
fuc kyou

>> No.4279836

>>4279571
Ah rally liek et.

>> No.4279887

>>4279793
really like

>> No.4279889

>>4279793
yes yes

>> No.4279909

>>4279302
the colors are fun, keep practising your anatomy.

>> No.4279910

>>4279353
These are nice, blog?

>> No.4279914
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>finish lineart and filling in shadow layer, into the coloring phase
>70% done
>realize just now that the perspective on one of the parts of the body is fucked
GOD FUCKING DAMMIT

do I fix this or do I favor "quantity" to shit out my artwork (in order to garner an audience for comission $$$) as quickly as I can?

But fuck maybe I'll just use base colors instead of dicking around trying to know the shadows next time.

>> No.4279941

>>4279914
depends on the body part

>> No.4279963

>>4279330
ugly

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>> No.4279970

>>4278680
You can't draw tho

>> No.4279974

>>4279330
>>4279742
Where can I find a collection of these portraits?

>> No.4279979

>>4279968
How have you been learning mech design?
I always wonder where the ideas come from.

>> No.4279981
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Any idea on how can I get this to look better? I'm brainstuck rn

>> No.4279996

>>4279981
No sense of depth. Objects closest to the camera are traditionally to have the highest amount of contrast while objects farthest away have the least amount, which gives the piece a greater sense of depth. The giant purple dude should have a fogginess to him if you wanted to illustrate his gargantuan size. Because as it stands right now, everything looks to be as though they occupy the same plane, so the purple dude doesn't feel as huge as it should be.

Another thing is that the value composition is weak, I feel like you wanted the focus to be on the girl (or maybe even the purple giant), but you felt like every aspect of the image should be given the same amount of "love and attention" so it's not immediately clear where one should start looking. Additionally, it doesn't help that the background is largely the same color as the girl's hair color and skin tone, so it makes the girl subject stand out even less. I suggest perhaps darkening the characters in the foreground while leaving the background elements untouched to give greater contrast between the two planes while also addressing the issue with the girl subject blending into the background elements.

There are also some minor gripes I personally have issue with regarding the composition of the picture, but it's too subjective to be worth giving as a critique.

>> No.4280004

>>4279353
nice fish

>>4279435
>https://www.artstation.com/acaofmaca
Cool, how do you get that random hatching? Is it a custom brush, a texture overlay or do you set up a ruler and do it all freehand?

>> No.4280028

>>4280004
I do it all freehand without a ruler, but that usually takes a toll on my time.

>> No.4280118

>>4279996
Thanks a lot!
Is not subjective at all, this critique is valuable and I apreciate you took the time.
I'll be back with the second version.

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>> No.4280145

>>4279979
I think the work process I go through in making mechs would go something like:

>Establishing the pose
>Is it ground, aerial, or water based?
>Is it a offensive, defensive, support, or special unit?
>Can I incorporate things into the design from real life? i.e, basing it from an animal/ existing machinery, certain name choice, mythology reference, other media reference, etc.,
>establishing the "main function" or the mech and which parts of the body will be human, artificial looking, or full metal.

It usually goes like that, but there are instances where I make a design because of something that I thought was interesting. This one, for example, came from looking at pistol shrimp videos, so I made the design to include a tail with an end part that mimics the shrimps snapping effect and just added parts that established it as a water unit.

Other times, I end up overcomplicating things and end up making stories of designs rather than drawing them directly.

>> No.4280146

>>4280141
Did you used refs for this pose?
Anyway reduce or erase the lower eyeslash, look like they're about fall off or something

>> No.4280148

>>4280146
i did it from imagination but later I looked at my body in the mirror fortunately i have a similar body (male)
please help if it's all wrong

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>> No.4280166

>>4280148
Her arm looks big and the boobs are a little bit too small to show any form.

>> No.4280186

>>4280145
Nice, I love pistol shrimps.
Blog?

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>>4279694
>>4279836
Thanks, I am glad you rike it.

>> No.4280233

>>4279974
Here you go.

https://twitter.com/WhiteBox_Studio

>> No.4280238

>>4280225
I think her neck is too short but it's an appealing drawing otherwise

>> No.4280255

>>4280186
I go by @art_mellon on twitter

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>>4279836

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>>4279996
Something like this?

>> No.4280730

a commission for a friend.

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>>4280730
I was so sure I attached the file

>> No.4280772

>>4280733
nice, I like the hatching on the pants

>> No.4280792

>>4280772
Thank you :D I had the most fun with them aha

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Concepting out my RTS units. The other units in the Italian faction include chefs, artists, and mobsters

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>> No.4280896

>>4280884
go to /beg/, dumbass
>>4280889
Sometimes I swear you’re doing this on purpose.

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Uhhh I think this thread is the most appropriate for posting this.

>>4279353
Overalls and gasmask, very cool.

>>4280357
I like your colors, and the changes help. Plan composition better when you're starting next time, it can go a long way. If you're trying to salvage this piece, try removing the sense of perspective (mainly on the ground) and push the "sidescrolling" feeling.

>>4280884
Unironically SOUL

>> No.4281008

>>4280889
what's this nigga's deal?

>> No.4281015

REPENT PEDOPHILES

>> No.4281022

>>4281015
Never woof

>> No.4281093

this is great do you have other work posted somewhere

>> No.4281097

i like the way you shaded and the border, thanks for adding a game rec

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no

>> No.4281105

i like the eye lashes. not for auska fan art but its styleistic

>> No.4281108

very cool use of colors

>> No.4281124

>>4280889
...bro

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I wanted to play with colours so I just did a simple painting of a girl, though I feel like this atmosphere is pretty promising so I might go back to this in the future and add a cool background.

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Drawing pokemon

>> No.4281162
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>>4281132
drew another pokemon

>> No.4281190

>>4280141
You're starting to grow on me, idk about the stylization of the face, but keep it up
>>4280889
FUCKIN HELL

>> No.4281193

>>4281162
>>4281132
I like your forms anon, now draw something I can masturabe to

>> No.4281194
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>>4280148
>Using your own body (male) to draw female figures just as the masters of old.
Absolutely based.

>> No.4281196

>>4281190
Think again fucker, lmao.

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>>4279795
ty

>> No.4281225
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forgot to resize

>> No.4281265

>>4280889
shes got some gilf vibes in this pic, would coom desu

>> No.4281293

>>4278695
This background story is hilarious, anon. Thank you. Cool angel though. She does look a bit like a demon in disguise. Don't tell your mom I said that.

>> No.4281351

>>4280889
Are you losing your mind polish anon

>> No.4281364

>>4281225
Really nice overall.
Now color it.

>> No.4281421

>>4281225
Blog?

>> No.4281431

>>4280889
Asukaposter, what the fuck is this?

>> No.4281442

>>4281126 so nice, i love it!

>> No.4281443

>>4281225
will you be my art friend!?

>> No.4281448
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>>4280889
I know you're going for an edgy aesthetic or whatever but her nose and mouth are out of perspective with the rest of her face.

>> No.4281449

>>4281448
manface

>> No.4281479

>>4281225
I love you, andrae.

>> No.4281483

>>4281448
Thanks for takinh your time but I just cannot see how this nose you drew is in correct perspective I see it as turned to the left

>> No.4281488

>>4281293
Hehe, she does look a bit evil doesn't she, I'm glad you like her ^^ thank you for your words
>>4281442
Thank you :D

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>>4279571
thought it looked cuter as a boy

>> No.4281682

>>4281488
I'm hoping to see if you do something with the background

>> No.4281684
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Is this more of a western or a weeb style?

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I'm trying to learn how to add characters to an environment. I'm balls at it. Any advice?

>> No.4281700

>>4280733
how tf did you get paid for that? That feels like you copied it from reference, what's so special about that? Plus why is /ic/ the only board where people forget too attach their pics so often

>> No.4281702

>>4281684
Western

>> No.4281706

>>4281700
Because /ic/ is mostly filled with autistic retards.

>> No.4281724

>>4279102
your lack of understanding the forms really betrays you here eg. the clothing folds flatten the image out instead of adding the illusion of depth. start thinking in 3d

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girl

>> No.4281946

>>4279227
Do you make art with these kind of colors often? Also, blog?

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>>4281954

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>>4281956
reup because im retarded

>> No.4281986

>>4281917
Oh my god its so cute

>> No.4281989

>>4281917
Prefer the v1.
The proportions are better, holding the phone closer is exaggerated action, her facial expression is more engaged, the fabric wraps better around her wrist.

You put less effort into it, but you'll find out the best pieces come out when you don't care too much.

>> No.4281994

>>4281431
he doesn't deserve to be called asukaposter

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4282007

sketch

>> No.4282008

>>4280889
BASED CRACKHEAD ASUKA

>> No.4282011

>>4281449
well, she is German

>> No.4282083

>>4280163
Nice

>> No.4282086

>>4280884
LOADS A SOUL
Keep pushing it even further anon

>> No.4282090

>>4281917
1 has more soul

>> No.4282093

>>4282007
work on them hands boy

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I made a bikini girl

>> No.4282225
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>>4282197
and this one too

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Revisting a character design

Practically a redraw. I redesign her, but idk what to do just yet, since she looks kinda boring

>> No.4282300

>>4282263
There's a lot of blue in her design, maybe throw in some other colors, add a design to her shirt, give her a nice jacket?

>> No.4282306

>>4282300
>There's a lot of blue in her design
how is that a bad thing?

>> No.4282320

>>4282306
It makes the character kind of bland and not interesting to look at.

>> No.4282322

>>4281994
fr I’m about to start drawing asuka a ton just to take that title away from him. asuka doesn’t deserve this

>> No.4282334

>>4282320
I disagree, but you can think whatever you like

>> No.4282341

>>4282322
>mfw it turns out to be a reifag sullying asuka's name

>> No.4282421

>>4282263
You can go many ways with her
Either play with the stylization and make her even less dynamic by building her with mostly geometric shapes, or you could play with the proportions of her design. What are you aiming for? What is the spirit you are trying to get out of this?

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4282559

Some unfinished shit.

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>> No.4282631

>>4282421

The character is pretty much a sleepy, overworked artist with unfulfilled ambitions stuck with a dead end job. Basically dead, but wants to start doing more with her life. Your average NEET, but actually works.

I'm planning on doing more expressive drawings of her to better convey this, but I'm just trying to get her default look down.

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>>4282594

>> No.4282640

>>4282634
Yeah the torso was even longer in the beginning. Think I pussied out in lowering it properly because I feared having to redraw the legs to not be in the way. Also unsure about the leg foreshortening. Thanks mane

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>>4282640
when you draw in perspective you need to be aware of what can you see and what not, i usually do this to have an idea

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>>4282664
Haha, went out for a walk and came back and it really does look stupid. Head's tiny too. Just gonna cut it up something like this as a simple bandaid and color it I think

>when you draw in perspective you need to be aware of what can you see and what not
Yeah. Didn't draw the complete figure before I started tryharding the details, classic

>> No.4282735

>>4282728
Select head lines and move it backwards slightly too and you're gucci.

>> No.4282776

>>4282306
You say the design looks boring, and that's because nothing really "pops". Her hair is blue, her undershirt is blue, her pants are blue, her socks are blue, and her shoes are also blue. The only things that aren't blue are her skin and overshirt, and the white details. And alternating shades of blue doesn't help because it's still just more blue.

>>4282334
I'm replying to this with the guess that you're the original poster, but you said yourself that the design feels boring. There's a reason why.

>>4282631
Maybe she's in a bit of a depression, so maybe she takes shortcuts with how she looks. Miss-matched socks, unkempt hair, no shoes unless she's leaving the house, maybe she finds comfort in oversized hoodies, she dresses/cleans up a bit for her job, but when she comes home she immediately changes into sweatpants. stuff like that.

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Shitty doodles of a game where u play as Operative Karen fighting security, store managers and mall trope bosses.

>> No.4282816

>>4282790
this looks dope

>> No.4282919

>>4279225
left eye looks like makeup. right eye looks more like eye lashes but only because i can see the black is popping off the eye like real lashes

>> No.4282929

>>4280141
Dont bother reducing the bottom lashes. I think it goes really well with the style. This version of lashes works great, keep it up.

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>> No.4282969

>>4282776
>nothing really "pops"
I highly doubt that's truly due to using a limited color scheme. Unless you also think something like Megaman is also bad design

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>>4282776
>>4282969
Nothing pops because all the colors have low saturation and contrast with each other. Not to say that a character design always needs to be bright and "poppy," but having some more value contrast might make it a bit more appealing

>> No.4282991

>>4282988
change the color of the glass frames to get a tertiary color in there

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>> No.4283289

>>4282728
>>4282594
Why did you delete your blog?

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4283299

Found a weird helmet in my reference folder. Could I bother anyone with a redline or pointers on this one regarding the figure and perspective in general please?

>>4280004
>>4280918
Thanks
>>4279910
mothesstuff on instagram

>> No.4283333

>>4282594
>>4282596
>>4282559
>>4282634
>>4282649
>>4282728
>>4282790
>>4282932
>>4282988
>>4283128
>>4283299
Trash

>> No.4283335

>>4283333
checked

>> No.4283336

>>4283333
*Yawns*
Some low effort bait

>> No.4283341

>>4283333
Holy shit quads

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>> No.4283355

>>4283350
kill yourself

>> No.4283356

>>4283354
one day i will impress you...

>> No.4283364

>>4283299
oooh she's pretty, anon! sorry I couldn't help you with redlining it

>> No.4283366

>>4283350
why..
is this a fetish...
.....

>> No.4283401

>>4283366
I believe asuka poster is some kind of long game performance artist. it’s like he’s trying to draw his anime waifu, but can’t get the likeness or even a basic human form correct and everyone rightfully shits on his work every time he posts. he’s going mad and the more harsh criticism he receives, the more demented and deformed his asukas become. it’s actually kind of fitting. I like to imagine it’s that interesting anyway and he’s not just another typical /ic/ pedo that can’t draw a human female.

>> No.4283411

>>4283333
pyw

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>>4282988
>>4282776
>>4282300

Did a quick and messy redraw before bed. How's this anons?

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What do you think? It still far from finished but yeah...

>> No.4283437

>>4283435
Go to /beg/ faggot.

>> No.4283457

>>4283299
perspective looks pretty good for the most part homie, right arm is a little weird and you could probably tilt the left foot a few degrees outward just so her balance feels a little more natural

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>> No.4283507
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>>4283496

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>>4283333
OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

>> No.4283517
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4283517

I hope you guys have an amazing New Year's Eve

>> No.4283535

>>4283401
>>4283517
come on, am I right? are you trolling or what?

>> No.4283585
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4283585

Is this the right thread for stuff like this? According to drawthread anons it should either be this or /beg/.
>>4283401
If this is true he's actually pretty based, definitely more than any of the crabs/reifags hating on him. He also has good taste.

>> No.4283598

>>4283585
No, you should post your art at /beg/ or /asg/, since it’s at that level.

>> No.4283604

>>4283585
it depends, did you use a strict reference for this or is it at least partly from your imagination?

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>>4283517
>>4283350
A granny fetish? Well at least the Roasties will not queef at you as much. You do your thing.

>> No.4283615

>>4283517
>>4283535
Filename roughly translates to “Skinny asuka sitting” so i think he just likes starving girls

>> No.4283622

>>4283604
I had a reference for the yukata, but I constructed the pose myself.
>>4283598
Oh you're right /asg/ was the thread, I mixed it up with this one. But isn't it strictly for anime?

>> No.4283625

>>4283622
Honestly who gives a shit just post wherever you like

>> No.4283634

>>4283615
maybe I’m just coping and can’t fathom someone making the same mistakes over and over and getting even worse despite receiving buttloads of constructive criticism.

>> No.4283644

>>4283622
/asg/ is strictly anime, so that’s why I said /beg/ too.
>>4283625
The anons here do, since any art that is /beg/ tier will get shit on and told to use /beg/ or /asg/.

>> No.4283654

>>4283634
>maybe I’m just coping and can’t fathom someone making the same mistakes over and over and getting even worse despite receiving buttloads of constructive criticism
Hey man i do the same thing so im on asuka posters side now

>> No.4283666

>>4283644
>The anons here do, since any art that is /beg/ tier will get shit on and told to use /beg/ or /asg/.
Well don't listen to them because they won't ever post their work.

>> No.4283667

>>4283666
god damn it you stole my number

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>>4283610

>> No.4283674

>>4282790
These are cool as fuck. Do you have a blog?

>> No.4283676

>>4282790
soul

>> No.4283679

>>4282790
all got soul apart from the lady on the left

>> No.4283692

>>4283654
>>4283401
I was referring to my asuka poster theory that the crabs are literally sucking the life out of poor asuka as an art project in itself with actual meaning. but maybe I’m projecting or seeing something that’s not there and giving some polish perv the benefit of the doubt. interesting that he hasn’t responded to me yet though, usually he tends to reply to crabs.

>> No.4283695

>>4283692
i just wanna get redlines for anatomy

>> No.4283698

>>4283695
Imagine begging for redlines to learn anatomy.

>> No.4283699

>>4283698
it can be a part of learning

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>> No.4283725

>>4283517
Soul in every picture despite it looking like a garbage. Never leave, you're gonna make it

>> No.4283731

>>4283695
shame, I’m disappointed. you shouldn’t have responded and I would have thought more highly of you. you’ve gotten more redlines than most current posters ever will. I guess the coomer meme is true and you really have some kind of brain damage.

>> No.4283735

why do /alt/ threads always have to suck

>> No.4283741

>>4283731
i always dissapoint everyone

>> No.4283747

>>4283735
by all means post your work and raise the quality of the thread

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>>4283747
I'm not talking about the work, I'm talking about how these threads are always filled with pointless shitflinging and crabbing

>> No.4283767

>>4283755
you picked the worst starter

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>>4283731
>I would have thought more highly of you
>Thinking highly of someone or trying to win respect on an all female Anonymous boy lovers shotakon enthusiast mommy fetish & honeypot image board probe
How amusing to think that someone actually wants to respect or look up to any of you fucks.

>> No.4283788

>>4283496
p sick stuff

>>4283517
>auchwitzuka

>> No.4283789

>>4283782
I hate this board and everything everyone here draws so much. I like evangelion though and I thought maybe he was doing something almost fakedeep. you are correct though

>> No.4283801

>>4283695
I'd rather not redline something like this

>> No.4283805

>>4283767
not him but I'd fuck the smug 3rd evo of the water starter

>> No.4283807

>>4283782
>>4283731
>Imagine respecting /ic/ anons.
FUCK my sides, why in the ever living fuck would you respect these autistic retards? This is a fucking shithole, it doesn’t have any good qualities, except maybe the resources that the majority of the board barely make use of.

>> No.4283818

>>4283805
that’s exactly why it’s bad

>> No.4283819

>>4283818
:^)

>> No.4283848

>>4283716
I like your stuff anon, any tips on inking?

>> No.4283849

>>4281946
Sadly I don't draw like this often. It's usually when I just go a bit wild and do what I want. Glad you like it :)

>> No.4283876

>>4280884
Soul, 10/10

>> No.4283883

>>4283849
It's great. Keep up the good work anon

>> No.4283889

>>4283420
Really cool, love the style. I would make the hand just a bit smaller or maybe rounder but that's just me.

>> No.4283895

>>4283517
GMI, don't give a fuck about crab anons and keep drawing your weird fetishes

>> No.4283905
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I needed to make something "extra" in between commisions because I hate drawing plain boring clothes

>> No.4283909

>>4283905
it’s kinda hideous fashion wise but well drawn and I like it

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>> No.4283923

>>4283920
Go to /beg/.

>> No.4283924

>>4283909
It wasn't planned. The concept was mostly "fantasy". Something I could maybe use in a d&d setting or something like that

>> No.4283926

>that one retard who keeps telling everyone to go to /beg/ despite never posting his work

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>> No.4283931

>>4283926
he's never gonna leave. its a disease. i fucking hate him. i bet hes the same faggot who gets diarrhea when someone posts in an /int/ thread

>> No.4283941

>>4283926
>>4283931
Keep seething retarded /begs/.

>> No.4283944

>>4283928
a bit dark isn’t it anon? nice work

>> No.4283946

>>4283941
Thanks For Confirming That's You, Faggot.

>> No.4283952

>>4283923
Go to hell nigger

>> No.4283970

>>4283926
>>4283931
I mean, he’s not wrong about the /beg/ tier art you see on this thread. They should go their respected threads desu.

>> No.4283984

>>4283465
>>4283463
>>4283941
>>4283970
>>4283716
Fuck you rat
I know this is all you
I didn't forget your last spergout

>> No.4283986

>>4283941
>>4283970
Dont be so obvious

>> No.4283989

>>4283984
rat is a crab now? How the times have changed.

>> No.4283993
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4283993

i will not give up

>> No.4283995

>>4283993
Anon you want to be asuka right?

>> No.4283996
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>>4283984
>>4283986
Yeah sure

>> No.4283997

>>4283995
i cannot say..

>> No.4283999

>>4283996
>2nd (you)
You're still apart of the problem

>> No.4284030

>>4283996
So you rather show how stupid you are instead of lying and say that you 2 were the same person?
Fine by me

>> No.4284062

>>4283993
People might have asked you already but why is it that you give her such a big nose, strong eyebrows and brow ridge? Do you want to draw the character that way?

>> No.4284083

>>4283984
Lmao get off this man's dick you filthy coomer. He hasn't had a sperg out in months.

>> No.4284090

>>4284062
yes i like that

>> No.4284101

>>4283420
I like it! I love the crocs, it really sells the "tired artist who doesn't give a fuck" vibe.

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>> No.4284165

>>4283993
you faggots broke this nigga kek

>> No.4284218

>>4284030
The stupid one is you, pal.

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>> No.4284253

>>4284218
Go be cancer somewhere else

>> No.4284257

I WILL DRAW LOTS OF ASUKAS
WELL DRAWN ASUKAS

>> No.4284297

>>4284257
let it be the year of Asuka

>> No.4284300

>>4283993
bruh

>> No.4284399

>>4283926
It's whitebox

>> No.4284417
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4284417

Colors and values turned out a bit basic but it was fun practice with hard/soft round + lassoo on a single color layer. Gonna draw greyscale for a while now I think, and use G-pen or something instead of flat

>>4282735
Wasn't sure what you meant and didn't wanna spam up the thread so I just went with my original plan. You meant tilt her head back like in >>4282634? Oh well.

>>4283289
Realized I want to use Twitter for other stuff at the moment. Still have my Pixiv though

>> No.4284639

gogogo >>4284637

>> No.4285322

>>4283350
Reminds me of the deviantart crystal zombies.

>> No.4285326

>>4283755
>Complains about pointless replies
>Posts a picture made by Nessie

You fool, 90% of replies to Nessie's posts are pointless praises that do not bringanything relevant to the debate.

>> No.4285974

>>4283517
Nigga, take your time. dont rush things.

>> No.4286196

>>4278790
It was free, god

>> No.4286226

>>4283952
Based

>> No.4286231

>>4283993
Can I add you somewhere? So we can be friends and we can discuss art without involving these retards. Asking genuinely
Also thank you for the happy new year, likewise

>> No.4286257 [DELETED] 
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4286257

hello, i just updated a character of mine, any suggestions? pic related, before

>> No.4286259 [DELETED] 
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4286259

after

>> No.4286984
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4286984

Done with the clean inks.