/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Already wrote mine. L2R, hapa nip, alien weeb, homeless Chinese tomboy

>>4260495
That's Anon. Is it a Totally Spies fanfic?

>>4264475
Grats*

>>4260495
DOOD PORN

>>4259805
Some day, I swear. I'm really just thinking of the format and how I'd like to release it.
May even come up with a pitch.

Cyborg hero team characters. I actually have a few of these colored.

>>4264531
Another one. While the first one is the hotblooded shonen leader archetype who's smarter than he looks, this one is a take on the cool second in command.

>>4264533
Another one. Support cyborg who specializes in making robot helpers to make up for her lack of built in weaponry.

>>4264531
>>4264533
damn these are pretty fucking cool. I really like the silhouettes of these two. Reminds me a bit of 80's OVA anime a with a bit of Bruce Tim.

It's genuinely refreshing to not just see big tiddie anime waifu #42983212457 or child porn waifu #27392938328

>>4264546
Thanks. That's actually the first time I've heard the 80's OVA comparison. It's definitely an aesthetic that I like.

I'm generally not one for making big tiddie or loli waifus either, so I get you.

>>4264531
>>4264533
>>4264539
>>4264546
agreed, these are really cool. I could see you making a really neat comic/animated series with these.

> Focalin
The little cyclops girl. She's emotional to the point of taking really rash actions. She spends her days with Risper participating in being absolute terrors, but also keeps Risper from going too far because she's really sensitive and easy to scare.
> Risper
The girl in the bandana. She's a child genius in the worst possible way, imagine someone who knows what they want and is competent enough to know exactly how to get it but is also the type of kid that carries around a sock full of quarters.
> Coca
The guy with the pompadour who follows the church of Elvis. He is a really nice dork despite trying to be cool and cares deeply for Focalin and Risper but no one trusts him around children, because it's a religion based around Elvis.
> Paroxetine
The adult female cyclops who has the problem of being an activist who doesn't understand people and thinks the more aggressive she is, the more people will listen to her.
> Diaz
The elf girl that's really anxious about her image.

>>4264531
I really want his upper arms to be bigger
>>4264539
I really want her suit colors to be as vibrant as the other two.

>>4264604
Thank you very much. That's the dream. I have experience making graphic novels, so that may be the direction I go in. Having an animated series would be the best, however.
>>4264668
>I really want his upper arms to be bigger
Fair point. I've been experimenting with how big to keep them. I wouldn't want them interfering with movement too much.
>I really want her suit colors to be as vibrant as the other two.
Interesting. I've been going with a pseudo-sentai coloring system for the whole team and added the purple to help her stick out a bit more. Perhaps a more saturated purple would help?

I’m working on a Historical Fantasy comic done in watercolors. The story is essentially like Samurai Jack but focuses on an African warrior and setting before the characters head out into Europe Asia and Mesoamerica

>>4259805
Here's one of my most recent ocs. She's a vampire gyaru that tricks her boyfriends into killing people to provide blood to her

>>4264900
blog?

>>4264910
@seesaw_yt

>>4264895
Fucking dope dude. Looks great

>>4264895
Are you black?

>>4264895
Very cool. The use of watercolor gives his design a nice texture.

Already doing mine

>>4264531
>>4264533
This feels extremely mid-2000 anime inspired cartoons

Just wait 10 years until the aesthetic become in vogue again

Some day....

>>4264900
How is the figure and rendering decent but the face is retarded?

>>4259805
Saint Oniisan is kino.

>>4265982
Can you elaborate? I have no idea how to take this critique if you don't explain

>>4266342
the forehead is too big, or the face is too small and low on the head. the chin is a razor point

>>4266375
Not him, but that’s genuinely one of those things that’s just stylistic choice. It’s perfectly fine, he shouldn’t change anything and sterilize it.

>>4265947
I grew up watching those, so that’s an apt comparison.
It’ll become cool again. One day.

>>4266454
>iTs jUst mY sTyLe

No the face looks objectively disproportioned. Even the edge linework looks bad.

I’m working on storyboarding my first cartoon short & these two are the protagonists.

>>4265969
We'll wait for you, Anon. *Salute*

>>4264531
>>4264533
anon would you be mad if i told you i ship these two. That's how good these designs are, I wanna ship them and I don't even know their stories.

I want to make a 4koma comic (with the purpose to make people laugh like 4koma usually does) with my skyrim character(s). I even wrote some short stories but I'm not good enough at a bunch of things yet. A little observation: my character looks dopey on profile and anatomy is probably broken/fucked up, don't mind please and thank you.

>>4264895
Sounds really cool. Watercolor is the coolest medium for me. Please let us know when it's done.

I don't know much about cartoony art so I feel like I can't comment on that type of art.

She started as my DnD character, then I started wrapping her up in lore. I use her mostly as a subject for NSFW art but I love writing more about her as it comes to me.

>>4269873
Shit, sorry.

I like the 90's anime look (think yoshiyuki sadamoto) but want to create a darker more sinister star wars experience. I hate the new films and want to explore more of the underworld elements. So fan fiction with a retro anime medium and star wars asthetic.

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>>4269922
I ship these two

>>4269873
>>4269922
>>4269923
Gotta have more of thisssss

>>4269873
I'm curious. Who/what are your influences?

S-someday, bros...

>>4269922
>>4269923
Love this, I need your blog