/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4255508
PMFAOJWNIABSKNAUABA

>>4255503
Any tutorials on how to draw heavy cocks like that?

>>4255539
Found this
https://exhentai.org/g/1504979/ad4cbbddf6/

>>4255546
I just see a black and white cat

>>4255539
whipped up a quick and simple one

>>4255550
You don't know how to log into exhentai? Then try this:
https://e-hentai.org/g/1504979/ad4cbbddf6/

>>4255550
I downloaded it for you.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1zd_CWfHbMJ1O8wnJea-1btzkp8LFUQq6

>>4255522
I'm not entirely sure what emotion this post is attempting to convey

>>4255554
>>4255555
lmao

Shit OP leads to shit content. Let this shit sage off the board and try again without cringe to start it off.

>>4256086
Pyw

>>4255503
>>4256086
yo nsfw content is not allowed faggots

>>4256107
Haha get a load of this guy

dear AztoDeus
your eyes still suck and you draw breasts too high-up

Goblin's torso and thighs are annoying me, what can I do to improve them and other mistakes?

>>4256107
stupid newfag, BEGONE NGMI

Is making money off your art even possible if you draw loli?

>>4256329
Yes, until FBI knocks your door

>>4256331
It's not illegal her, but no relevant website allows it. It's terrible.

>>4255503
>gains goblin on the op image?
are you retarded anon?

>>4256107

Quality bait.

>>4256335

Don't worry, mate. Draw trans children and you'll be fine.

>>4256394
It's either gains goblin or a big dicked hypersperm giantess Miku.

did we have a porn artist that was normal or has it always been this shit?

I promise I'm really trying, but every time I finish something, I feel like I'm still miles away from leaving /beg/. I'm terrible with hands, left them for last and they look terrible.
If it's not asking much, can someone redline the hands and other stuff I screwed up?

>>4256458
And her face in a higher res, it's the only thing I think I've done right.

>>4255653
You're telling me you never motorboated a pair of ass cheeks before?

>>4256473
me personally? I'm an incel

>>4256464
>>4256458
And this one is my previous drawing. Hands ruin everything again.

>>4256473
I guess i never thought of what a motorboat noise typed out would look like

>>4256473
I motorboated the cleavage of a woman with fake tits. Got punched in the mouth by her husband.

>>4256170
I think it's more like the arm then anything else and switched the pose a little, I imagine him holding ripped clothes from her or something.

>>4255556
You are in no position to make tutorials, goblin. GTFO.

>>4255556
Any advice on the divot area behind the head? I always struggle with that in particular, makes the rest of the cock look weird.

>>4256480
you're good. i like the slick, black and white metallic look you're going for. the only problem with the hands is that they look a little too geometric, if you added joints and detailed the knuckles a little bit more it'd be ace. good luck drawing anon

>>4255556
>OP pic gains goblin
>also gains goblin making tutorials
Abort this thread immediately.

>>4256933
contribute, stinky.

>>4255503

>>4256958
this looks like clipart

>>4256974
MODDSSSSSSS

>>4256990

>>4256685
Just fucking learn to draw in general and you'll know how to draw a fucking dick. WTF is wrong with your brain?

>>4256949
He is contributing. He's warning other users not to be idiots.

>>4256996
The perspective on those stockings is completely fucked. Stop mindlesly copying stuff and learn some fundamentals.
Then you won't look like a complete hack when you'll be adding elements from memory to your xerox art.

>>4257033
contribute, pyw

>>4257027
Thanks for the non-answer. You sure epic trolled me.

>>4257033
That drawing is mine lol
Also who pissed in you cheerios this morning?

>>4257033 #
That drawing isnt mine lol
Also who pissed in you cheerios this morning?

>>4257055
I just say things as they are. Why the fuck do you post other people's art here? What's the point?

>>4257059
Whats the point in your obnoxious attitude? And i post whatever the fuck i want.
Ops my hand slipped.

>>4257059
dont ignore me
>>4257036

Any ideas on how to portray a blowjob on a very large penis without it looking stupid?

>>4257102
buy a dildo an a go pro

>>4257112
Hahaha you're so funny bro epic lmao

Last time I was told I had an advanced case of symbol drawing. Working on it.
And what is a gains goblin? You damn kids and your slang. First crabs, now this.

>>4257102
how large are we talking about?
also it unironically depends how realistic/cartoonish/stylized the drawing is

>>4257116
Diameter probably around 3/5 of the character's head's height. Would be viewed from profile.

>>4256458
Gid, could you have the scales folow the form atleast a little but? This looks so flat.

>>4257122
do you have a sketch I can see?

>>4257144
Not really, I don't know how to approach it so I haven't begun.

>>4257122
Unless you are going for a Spumco style, something that vastly beyond the realm of physical possibility will look like shit no matter what.

>>4257148
do you have any other similar work so I can get an idea of how to do it?

>>4257070
Congratulations, you are a dumbass.

>>4257075
Pic attached is last thing I drew. Now PYW, champ.

>>4257153
BBC isnt an asshole shitposter, you coward

>>4256458
God, could you have the scales folow the form atleast a little but? This looks so flat.

>>4256646
wow good job in not fixing any of the problems w the image and making it look worse a

*visits venus body thread on /d/ once*
I know the face is kinda fucked, need to learn how to properly draw faces viewed from below (specially the jaw part)

>>4257167
he always has been an asshole and a raging sjw here you must be new

>>4257153
Fake and gay.

>>4257167
Why do people keep pushing this fake meme of BBC being kind and friendly? He's a huge asshole and SJW.

>>4256933
lmao man, he asked if i had any tutorials on how to draw em like that, so i showed how i do it

>>4257212
>>4257227
have you tried DESTROYING him with FACTS and LOGIC?

i pm'd him asking for advice and hes been nothing but nice and helpful, personally.

>>4257227
I don't agree with his politic, but he's nice and very helpful in pointing and red-lining my drawings

i think i've found a happy medium between quality and turnout, need to step it up still

Four image set, my latest attempt at horny art.

>>4257264
That looks unappealing as fuck

>>4257335
I don't get how women are so excited by doing titjobs in hentai. I've done it and it's like "yeah ok dude... Having fun? Cool. Lmk when ur done :/" and staring at the ceiling, wall, or a grunting sweaty titan.

Maybe I'm just not getting tit fucked by the right people.

>>4257372
>Maybe I'm just not getting tit fucked by the right people.
Get off my board dirty roastie

>>4257372

I mean I dont get how hentai protagonists can cum approximately 1/2 their body weight in jizz but I still think its hot as fuck.

At least it’s not straight shota this time. I can’t sleep. I need to sleep. Kill me.

>>4257374
It’s yogurt.

>>4257372
Hentai is fantasy. It will always portray pleasure regardless of what's happening.

>>4257372
No amount of hormones or surgery will ever make you female.

>>4257372

dilate tranny

>>4257114
Gains Goblin is a guy who almost exclusively posts in Porn Threads. His art style is pretty recognisable (He draws those OCs with weird faces with big sharp noses).
He usually writes handwritten speech bubbles with hearts in them. He's not too popular because his artstyle is unappealing, his subject matter questionable and his improvement over the years nonexistent.
Yeah, and he never listens to criticism.

Your artwork is pretty good this time. Just pay attention to proportions.The womans arm is a little short imo.
Keep going. I can already see some improvement in your art

>>4255503
Awaken my masters

>>4257363
Youre about the fourth hundred person to tell me, thank you.

>>4257153
Goddamit, how about you post your own work instead of mine.
>>4257227
Why am I a huge asshole? I can see how people could perceive me as a SJW. If somebody is against racism or homophobia (basically the only stuff you might see me react to in a negative way) is automatically perceived as an asshole? Basically the only way to not be perceived as an asshole is to keep quiet all the time?
>>4257258
What politics? SJW stuff like the other anon said?

>>4257114
The term originated from /fit/ so you know it's just a stupid meme right away.

>>4257465
It might be a stupid meme, but it fits gains goblin perfectly.

>>4257456
I fap to your yuri and futa porn but still hate most irl fags/trannies since they actually spread disease and social degeneracy.

You can crusade for black wheelchair-bound lesbians all day, but ultimately your job is to just be a pornfag and make coomer art. No one is interested in your social activism because that's not what they're paying you for.

Darkies are also fine by me if they're not actively harming others, but racemixing deserves capital punishment.

>>4257484
I'm no activist lol. I don't engage in drama on socials. My internet presence is only tied to my work.
I really don't get what you are trying to say here.

i dont have many places to post my nsfw, and get opinions on it

>>4257533

>>4257169
Was my first time drawing scales and I have no idea how to make them look good and follow the form =/. I can see your point though, I'll try to improve it today.
>>4256929
Yeah, I know. I'm super beg with hands, they end looking weird no matter I do. Will try to draw the joints, thanks for the advice, anon

>>4257484
Go back to /pol/, white kid.

>>4257335
Pretty nice, but tone down the sparkles, looks like tinkerbel came glitter on her face.

>>4257264
>>4257363
You could make this a lot better if you actually gave her a decent, sexy face instead of this blurry psychotic look.

>>4257416
>Your artwork is pretty good this time. Just pay attention to proportions.The womans arm is a little short imo.
>Keep going. I can already see some improvement in your art
Thanks. I’ve been doing more features drawing as practice and I realized a big drawback was that I didn’t sketch before doing detail, instead drawing it all at the same time along the way. This lead to the “Frankensteined” look someone once mentioned.
And I must not fit in here. I don’t mind gain goblin’s stuff.

>>4257535
I don’t ... what ... do people get off to this?

>>4257676

The sparkles were actually just by request of a friend who thought it was hot. Im pretty ambivalent to them desu.

>>4257718
well no, but its not sfw

>>4257372
For me it's the reverse, I'm not that interested in it, but when gf does it it's because she's turned on by the idea. So what actually goes on with the nerve endings etc. in the boobs aren't as important as the thought of the act for her... I assume, haven't sat down and talked about it.

>>4257335
you have to full on emulate the 'hentai screenshot' style- only super pros can pull off that westaboo style that has soul in it.
though groups like Yumei chara CG (pic related) copy/paste poses/angles, they have the decency to emulate the show's original style using setteis etc. (if the animators released any in public). Some were from video games which had no cel animations but they still followed the base 'rules' or patterns of cels from anime.


your faces need work, first the line width is inconsistent with the rest of the body and too thick, lack of thought put into line width can notably affect the eyelashes too making them look out-of-place and also lose 'emphases' because everything else on the head has butch hartman thick lines.
tons of anatomy errors- the one that stood out were the nipples. nipples are not fucking ball sacks. honorable mentions are hands, armpits, and Phineas nose.
don't use glitter as an element for your light source. all stylized visual effects should be used very, VERY sparingly. you probably know this reason from what I've said earlier- along with that glitter is just uncomfy, its like pouring sand in your asshole.

I could go on but there's too much.

>>4257153
>Congratulations, you are a dumbass.
you must be 18 to browse 4chan, my child.

>tfw get a boner from my own drawing for the first time
>tfw its kemoshota

>>4258110
Recently fapped so hard to one of my commissions

>>4257456
I love you bbc chan you're the best and a huge inspiration

>>4258113
Share it hardR.

Messy unrefined sketch but I did this on my phone by fingertip. Will probably try to do something with it later.

Drew this in a catholic highschool for a classmate, then colored it digitaly. He liked it.

>>4259012
Not gonna lie. This looks really fucking good for a highschooler

>>4256458
I like this a lot, even if like others mentioned there's improvements to be made.

Ironically I'm also working on a snek "girl". This is a WIP so if there's any crit I can get from anyone it's appreciated. Sorry for huge rez I forgot to resize before exporting and I'm out of the house.

>>4257780
My tits are too small for it to be fun for either party

>>4258381
Yes, finaly some natural looking breasts with some sag. For some reason those are so rare here, most draw baloon boobs, like this guy >>4258805

>>4259313
just for curiosity how many time do you take for do that?
I think looks fine in general, maybe i will think a little more the tongue curves in the part when touch the breasts. Ah and maybe some proportions of her fingers, like her right index finger, and her left pinky. The other things are fine.

>>4257990
He's not wrong.

>>4259535
thanks, is the second time people tell me they apreciate the way i add weight to breast cuz they look more natural.

>>4259564
I don't know an exact amount of time but probably too long. How long my art takes is something I worry about. Maybe 5-6 hours so far because I've had to rework a lot.... And it's no where near done yet.

Thanks for the crit though, I'll check that stuff out!

>>4259535

Im sorry Im hentai addicted and perky tits are a fetish.

>>4259727
But they're not perky, they look fake. Brests that size could never support them selfs and would sag downwards.

>>4259806

No sense of imagination baka

>>4259806
Pyw

>>4259012
Is that like the mascot dragon?

>>4257437
It's not like you can't save yourself, just work on your faces and colors that look washed out

>>4259418
That's why we have butts too.

>>4258805
>>4259727
Assuming this is the same person.
This mistake occurs often when an artist uses breasts that are in a bra as a reference. Here's a red line of what I came up with. It's clear you didn't use any construction when creating your drawing, as parts of the rib cage don't line up with the shoulders, the hips are broken and the belly button is improperly lined up with the waist on top of being overly defined with harsh lines.
If you have any questions about other changes I made, feel free to ask, but it's typically just about knowing proper proportions and anatomy and putting it into a 3D space.

>>4259806
Agree completely.

>>4261063

You killed it. You killed my boner.

>>4261063

Honestly tho jokes aside just finish your version its plenty hot but its trying to be a completely different drawing in a totally different art style with a different posture than what Im doing. Why not have both.

>>4261408
Not that guy but bro you might want to at least listen to him about the anatomy issues you're having. If you're going for the posture of a woman who has fallen down about 5 stories and busted up her back, ribs, and collarbone then more power to you. But I think it's a bad idea to just dismiss every little piece of advice and critique you were given because "muh style"

Fucking coomers. No wonder you guys never improve lmao

>>4261408
Correct anatomy does not mean a different artstyle.

>>4261408
The retard who can't take critique is the one who gets the redlines. Sigh

>>4261408
>"It's not broken anatomy or a bad picture it's just my style"

Are you pretending to be this incompetent or is that just how you act every day?

>>4261408
Is this a joke? If so 10/10 it was good bait to laugh at

>>4261408
>Bad anatomy is an art style
Yikes

>>4261063
Nice construction
Blog?

>>4261063
based marmelade man

>>4261063
please redline mine
>>4261548

>>4261622
Go study anatomy first, you lazy cunt.

>>4261621
obsessed

>>4261622
Needs more Norasuko.

>>4261624
this redline i will get will be a part of my study :)
>>4261801
im finding my own style slowly it started yesterday

please help i don't know how to draw anime tiddy. I think the head is wrong too

>>4261063
Ruined

>>4261874
pyw

>>4261408
>Le style
It’s always the fucking retards that act so entitled when given a redline.

>>4261874
Salty "muh style" boi detected

>>4257264
Washed out colors and sharp bold outline, it's actually a really cool look if you worked on conveying volume and refined it a bit (legs/bottom), but definitely not appealing for porn. Think disturbing painting or metal album cover.

>>4262016
I dont see the disturbing part at all. My biggest weakness is that ive gone blind to what other people see as weird or gross. I tried to make something more traditionally appealing with >>4260076

>>4255508
Hot as fukk

>>4262062
>traditionally appealing
>Girls with dicks
Are you retarded?

>>4262152
Duhh me wetawded hehehehehe xdd

>>4262153
Well, I guess that answers my question even though it was rhetorical.

>>4262301
Thanks for your time and feedback.

i'm having trouble with the arms on Cera (the middle one) does anyone have any recommendations for how to tweak em, or any other advice on her pose, thinking of changing her legs but not sure what to do with em

>>4260076

>>4262053
Blog me

>>4262390
>her

any comments/suggestions/recommendations for this one? (not currently accepting "kill yourself")

>>4255503
This is my first attempt at hentai

>>4262998
Have you attempted suicide by chance

>>4262998
Needs line weight variation.especially the horse cock in the foreground. I like it though

>>4263082
Good first attempt but the rendering needs work. Nipples also freak me out but that could just be your taste. Also don't hide hands if that's what you're doing here.

>>4263098
Thanks for your critique! I did it from imagination. I guess I should use a reference. I can render that way very well. I wanted to make the nipples like baby's dummy. Very suckable. It was a choice to position her that way. I'm not afraid of hands, hah

my first try at animation

>>4263242
Not bad for rotoscoping. Needs more movement in the top of the body, to match the legs. Right now it looks very unnatural.

>>4257533
I find this style appealing.

Do i need to draw porn digitally if i only care about money?

>>4263502
No. There are a lot of porn artists who draw traditionally and make a pretty good amount of cash. One example that comes to mind is Arania. She mostly draws commissioned transformation porn and almost always draws it traditionally.

>>4263117
>that hair
>that composition
>those shaky lines
>"I did it from imagination"
Post the original because i don't have it anymore.

>>4262390
Seems like you're having trouble with the entire pic. It looks like shit.

>>4257227
>>4257227
>Why do people keep pushing this fake meme of BBC being kind and friendly?
because he make dem pp hard
And it's not like he hasn't any skill. His art is consistent and has decent style and appeal.
I mean, he has been drawing for a decade or so and has pretty much made it.
>He's a huge asshole and SJW.
>Implying it's actually him whenever there is some arguing and like pottery his work get posted
Hard to tell if it's actually him or some insecure faggot that believes posting bbc-chan automatically wins any arguments when being absolutely retarded.
Or if it's him pretending to be himself.
Of course, he's going to be nice when interacting on socials, how else is he going to get money and support from coomers?
If you have some life experience, you can see that the guy raises a lot of red flags.
also
>pic related
you can't argue against me
i win

>>4263740
boi, you draw like you'd defend bbc. He looks like your fav artist.

Why do people ignore everything I post. I try so hard and I want to die

>>4263806
What did you post?

>>4263806
Post your work.

>>4263799
He may be a theoretical shit but that doesn't mean his work automatically sucks.

>>4261909
I don't think she should still be holding the machete at that point. That and the position of the legs are like she's thinking "yeah, whatever, I'll just keep going".

>>4263806
I'm guessing no appeal. Probably stuck in the zone between beg and decent, where there just isn't much to say.

>>4263740
>If you have some life experience, you can see that the guy raises a lot of red flags.
Such as?

>>4263806
It means you're in the middle, not shit enough to shit on but not good enough to shit on for catharsis either

tweaked

>>4256480
Keep it up anon! Your art is really cool

>>4256170
Go back to the sketching stage and rearrange those limbs until you get something solid.

OK I went to /aco/ for feedback but I barely got any.

>>4264025
I changed the face halfway through because coomer and then just left the machete in.

>>4265626
Right hand looks like it is short a finger? The frame of her glasses should cast a shadow

>>4265626
I gave you advice last time you posted and you said it was the "style". Fuck off.

>>4265701
dios mio

>>4265701
Have you ever drawn a girl laying on a dock?

>>4265626
bro youve been working on this for months, you need to do something new

Is this any good?

>>4263740
the rendering makes it look like she's 80 years old lmao

>>4266907
There is no point in that, every drawing I make is wrong I just want to make a single correct one, from 100+ wrong drawings you can't make a correct one.

>>4267827
that is extremely wrong and backwards. That's literally what practice is, ask any professional artist and they'll tell you that theyve made 10,000 terrible drawings or more . Ive never seen a post more wrong man, you're trying to compose a masterpiece worthy of Beethoven when picking up a guitar for your first time.

>>4267394
Looks like a retarded succubus.

>>4261063
how much u make a month?

>>4263680
Cell shading + nasty rash + bird shit on them?

Not feeling confident with posting this one boys.
Been getting back into drawing after a 2 month burnout.

Yall hate my shit and treat me like a drooling retard but hey its useful some of the time so here's the PC finished version of that fingertip sketch regardless.

>>4267827

M8 if you spend that long on a single thing you lose the ability to tell whats actually wrong anyway and your brain starts inventing reasons leading to a cascade of failure that's just gonna last forever.

>>4268124
Just FYI I don't hate your shit I just hate that you cry "muh style" when people give you very legitimate and helpful critiques. It makes me never want to give you critique again because what's the point of wasting my time on somebody who doesn't want to learn? Fuck you again for acting like that by the way.

>>4268135

Fucks sake, I dislike "redlines" that just redraw the entire image, change the pose and artstyle because they are very hard to integrate into a piece without just copying NOT because they are bad or even mistaken in their crit. I still manged to get some use out of it, if I didn't get utility from this shit I would not be here. You all hear style and have a gargantuan fucking aneurysm about how hurr durr being bad isnt a style but like no shit it just helps to have redlines actually go for the same thing you're going for its not some commentary on how much I hate the crit itself or something. Besides, if you draw a very good, very different image to crit a sketch it comes across kinda looking like an excuse to flex from the other end.

>>4268144
The redline you got was perfectly useful and didnt drastically change anything in your image besides improving construction. Nibody is asking you to replace your drawing with somebody elses, take what is objectively improved and ignore the rest.
Im not >>4268135 but you do seem to be pretty butthurt.

>>4268124

boobs too high

>>4268151

Well thats fine. It doesn't really make a fuck what you think of my mindset as long as /ic/ continues to provide insultingly blunt reasons to dislike my art because nobody else is gonna do it honestly so we're stuck with each other.

>>4268163
I mean nobody has to be "stuck" with you if you just dont throw a fit whenever you're critiqued

>>4268168

If you guys hate my product even a tenth as much as I do having to deal with it is stuck enough.

>>4268124
>>4268144
you recieved a redline and instead of fixing the anatomical issues it adressed and making it work in your style you completely ignored it and ended up with a mess. a redline isn't to trace over it and change your style it's to help you with things you obviously struggle with.

>mouth doesn't work in this perspective, sitting too low and looking like it's running off the face
>neck looks too short
>shoulders seem too high and seem differently proportioned despite the collar bone suggesting they're both front-facing
>nipples are too high placed
>the tits seem to not be affected by gravity thus looking like baloons
>right elbow (from viewer) is too high, and because of the upper arm thickness it doesn't look like the arm is pointing back
>hands grip looks too loose
>folds are nonsensical and dont follow the flow of the grip or the textile itself
>ribcage suddenly in sideview, despite the collarbone still suggesting it's a front view
>tummy extends too far down and making the hips and general transition from ribcage to hips look broken
>dick looks like a chode, due to it's rather triangular shape
>several missing skinfolds and muscles at the legs or abdomen of the dude
>pillowshading makes especially the legs look formless while the texture messes with the perspective
>some shades extending or not following the lines that are supposed to indicate shades
>overall pretty weak shadow values, which makes the piece look more like a flatshade
>inconsistent highlights and shadows that do not work with the suggested light source

>>4268198

I didn't ignore it anon I am just very, very bad at drawing. This is a good summary of the myraid reasons I hate this thing though and articulates a lot I couldn't about it so thanks. I'll take it as a note.

>>4261869
Worrying too much, looks good. Go to crazy and you fall into uncanny vally

>>4268177
>my product
Oh fuck off.

>>4265626
My guy although I appreciate you making the hair adjust on the arm to show that it isn't flat that's not enough.
The rest of the hair needs to as well. She's on a pillow but her hair is still flat.
Did you ever look at someone's hair lying down?
Spread her hair out more. Octopus it to give it flavor. Also her bangs are flat, and floating. Asian hair sticks to the face.
I know it's more cartoony but these are the issue I see.
Also there's no shade on the bed from her or the guy.

>>4268124
belly looks like a sack of potatoes

>>4268208
>I am just very, very bad at drawing
Yes and you'd get better if you'd stop being so defensive about your mistakes in the sketch stages and actually take critique. But noooo, somebody has to turn down every single suggestion and keep rendering. This is the first time I've seen you take anything without shitting on the people who are trying so hard to help you get better.

It's your own fault that you suck, don't you dare use that as an excuse. Suck it up, disconnect yourself from your art. Nobody is directly shitting on you when they're just pointing out what's wrong with your work. If you're not going to grow some balls and learn how to take totally reasonable critiques, you might as well stop posting here and go off to tumblr or deviantart and tell them you just want compliments only.

>>4261063
You draw the hips very well but the breasts are noticeably smaller and the arms are in a completely different position.

>>4269137
Just stop already.

>>4268548
I dont understand, why dont you show me instead of telling me because I cannot simply imagine it differently, in fact her hair used to be a solid figure, this is how much it should spread and it is already spreading more than twice that..

>>4269146
I'm sorry but I wasn't home to try to edit it. Are you trying to maintain that style in the image? Or do you want it to have some more weight? The image is fine if you don't want to follow physics.

>>4269137
Are you seriously still butthurt about getting critique? Stop samefagging and fix your anatomy and perspective issues. It's fucking sad watching you try to shit on someone better than you who was trying to help. Go study.

>>4269137
Wow not critique that shit of of a drawing like this one? ————> >>4268124
Now, fucker samefagging now?

>>4269137
fucking retard. you will never be good with this attitude

>>4265626
You really need to learn about the wonders of the pussy box

>>4269154
the hair is supposed to be a single piece ex. think of it as an asset in flash and how much can you modify it in a laying down position, you can only do so much.

>>4269190
I am not that guy, I am the guy who hates anime.

>>4269241
None of those pics are remotely in the same position or angle. it is wrong, but that pic is not the correct answer is something random.

>>4255508
how can i achive that line of work ?

>>4269259
Bro I'm not giving you an exact reference for your image. This is about constructing the pussy box. Surely you can look at that and then go try it on a reference that's similar to your drawing, right? You understand how to extrapolate information from something? How to take something in a different pose and move it in 3D space?

Because if not you have a lot more work to do than I thought.

>>4265626
>>4269241
More pussy box

>>4267394
Digastric plane makes her look very unappealing, I get that you're going for a fish(piranha?) look but I think you can pull it off more effectively
slope of the chest going into the breast is a little bulky and the breast, even if that small, would be a bit lower
Ribcage and pussy area need adjustment

Other than that not a bad start

>>4269132
nice but gay

>>4269157
>>4269182
911

Just finished this, I like robot girls.

>>4267394
one arm is noticeably longer than the other and her neck is to small and I think the hand on the log arm is wrong, I think the thumbs should be pointing inwards?

>>4268893
The supercock and and the superass nice!!!

>>4269412
>>4269300
>>4269241


why is her pussy up so high why is it sticking out of her stomach? gross

>>4268893
This illustration are in other level, the ass of girl and the cartoon anatomy are funny!!!

>>4268893
that happens when you mix storoids and viagra, the girl has a sad face that is disturbing.

>>4269599
>This illustration are in other level, the ass of girl and the cartoon anatomy are funny!!!

>>4268102
Good. I hope you continue.

>>4269738
>A J T O 509 235 GTDS/702 FCER

>>4269738
> You are a Beg

>>4269412
Don't worry you won't become second nickleflick

This is like the only one I've drawn lately that I actually like. I worked pretty hard on it and I know it desperately needs color, but any advice/critique?

>>4268893
Seconding what another anon said. The anatomy on the dude is kind of off. And the sad facial expressions on the girl is disturbing and not sexy.

>>4269877
hey i just saw that on paheal yesterday, good pose and concept
the lineweight needs some variation, the composition would be better if you cropped 1/3 off of the right (or put something relevant to the action in that empty space)
there's something off about the unicorn's muzzle. the shapes are too small/detailed compared to the rest of the design. a common problem in the show's actual designs after season 1 iirc

>>4269885
Hey thanks. Yeah thats pretty much where I've been posting my stuff.
When I do eventually color it I'll probably crop it or maybe push the right side to the further background and crop it that way, I really just wanted to empathize the setting. I've heard this line variation critique before but I kept that in mind while doing this and made the lines in the foreground bolder than the background. Should that difference be more dramatic? Because I can't change the brush strokes if thats what you mean. And yes I think that is just the design, its the corrupted unicorn and he was built pretty weird in the show (small muzzle, bulky chest, skinny backside).

>>4269877
On a side note, my picture was the 69th pic in the thread.

>>4269898
i mean among the lines in a subject, and along individual lines themselves
bruce timm is an extreme example, but there's weight/thickness variation in svtfoe's designs too
if you're using vector software there's usually a tool that can adjust line weight after the fact (adobe animate width tool, toon boom pencil editor tool)

>>4269247
If you're trying to keep the flash style then it's fine.

any advice ?

>>4270070

>>4269870

>>4270114

>>4270339
And I guess you’re a generic nerd whose room smells like instant noodles, sweat and cum ?

>>4269931
Ok yeah I get what you mean. I am using a line tool in Gimp because I dont have a tablet so I just use my mouse with the line tool. I'll have to research or mess around with it and see if I can do that.

>>4270489
Not him, but your art is lazy and low effort. You are heavily symbol drawing and don't seem to care about the end result. You haven't done anything to make the subject interesting to look at, the subject being a standing boy with his weiner hanging out.

>>4270645
You’re right, I’m still beg and doing an entire figure is already a big step for me ! I’ll work harder

maybe i will stop giving up on backgrounds next year

>>4268124
I see you are another fishine fan. But because you have no actual passion in art, refuse to look at reality, that you end up with a cringey half-assed picture that is filled with amateur mistakes. You can make excuses like "coomer audiences are dumb anyway" or "muh /ic/rabs" to not listen to critiques and put actual effort in your drawings, you are

NEVER.

GONNA.

MAKE.

IT.


fishine's art is more than just "eyes look cool and edgy" btw- hopefully you can finally learn how to see drawings and understanding the significance of fundies

the inside of a shortstack is like hammerspace

>>4271571
>gains goblin does guro now
To what depths are you willing to sink?

>>4271577
i've done ryona/guro before

>>4271571
could talk about some stuff in your anatomy, but i think you heard enough about that already. but please edit those organs.

>remove the one wrapping around his arm, since it looks like he lifted her up before ripping her open, so there would be no way it'd wrap around the arm this way
>the ones losely laying over each other look resting, while a lot of the other entrails look still in motion
>especially the parts in his hands look too flacid, would probably be more bloated
>some parts too thin
>she seems like having too much form despite the amount of entrails that have already been ripped out
>probably too many entrails in the first place, so i'd just remove some of the thinner squigly ones

i actually really like the first from the top. enjoying the motion you gave to that one.

>>4271655
thanks, that's actually pretty helpful, i'm about to sleep but i'll keep these on tab for editing this

>>4270803
Damn that's really nice. Blog?

>>4268124
God awful.

>>4271669
https://twitter.com/PachPachPachi

>>4270489

>>4268124
You'll get there anon

>>4271577
>now

>>4271571
Disgusting and stupid.

>>4268893
yep that's definitely the art of a spanish speaker

>>4271571
>>4271577
THIS ISN'T EVEN MY FINAL FORM
AND THIS IS TO GO BEYOND!!!! AAAAARRGGGHHH

(btw guy in the pic isn't photoshopped, but he died soon after his ballsack plastic surgery kek)

>>4272765
>Tank’s family alleges that he was ordered to increase his testicles to the size of basketballs while he was a “submissive” in Dylan’s Seattle-based polyamorous group. Dylan’s submissives, or “pups,” would perform acts to win his favor, which included the requirement of having an oversized scrotum.

Finished. Learned a lot doing this and had fun. Crit is appreciated. I want to get better.

Can someone do a breakdown of this anatomy of this? How about the equivalent of the pussy looks like? I'm still trying to wrap my mind on how it should be placed and logically.

Other than digital copies, pillows, artbook, posters, keychains, what are other product ideas for my lewd characters? Any printers that accept lewd drawings printed on t-shirt or something?

>>4273054
missing a "y" at the end of firs last response

>>4273069
shit
fuck
goddamnit
i read that sunnofa bitch like 3 times, this is what i get for finishing at like, 2 AM

>>4273070
should start lettering with text tool for easy edit potential in case you make a mistake, or are you using sai?

>>4273075
i'm using sai, but i'll be betting CSP

>>4273054

why are their bodies made from pillows?

>>4273080
in case you shouldn't have the funds at the moments for getting CSP or you're waiting on a sale you could look into the medibang desktop version. it's not that good for drawing in my opinion, but it's free and allows you lettering and gives you some access to paneling and toning options and it can read .psd so you should be able to import drawings you made in sai

>>4273084
i just got my little holliday bonus so i decided to finally get the damn csp, thanks for the tip tho
>>4273082
what do you mean?

>>4273086
nice, have fun with CSP. it's honestly my personal favorite so far from all the drawing programs i tried. also has tons of free assets that are easily accessible without searching through the internet for downloads, though the basic brushes, pens and pencils you get are pretty good by themselves already

>>4256974
blog?

>>4273086
>what do you mean?
He means you don't know how to draw muscles.

>>4273082
Don't talk to him.

Any advice on drawing fishnets?

>>4262062
That face is some creepypasta shit man
Mine are not notably better and I can't render worth a fuck tho

>>4274142
Hair really lacks some shading

>>4258805
>>4261063
>>4261408
I took your advice!

>>4274633
the hair is the one thing i tried to touch least, because i wanted to keep the shading light. but I think I managed make the body more... consistent, with it.

I still need more criticisms, if possible.

>>4275607
her right foot is broken, ie it does not bend that way.
i think the bottom of the foot should show and not the top because of her position