/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4244624
Soul

>>4244624
Work in progress for me.

>>4244624
how do you enjoy drawing? it is extremely painful for me to draw

>>4244728
Idk, with all the shit going on, it's like an escape for me

How’s this. Procreate

WIP
Self portrait actually
Also your render of the cloud is nice

>>4244624
Nice

>>4244728
Why draw then

>>4244728
You're a big guy, you can do it

>>4245489
thanks fren

I did this Luigi

>>4244624

My latest work. I tried my hands at a beackground for a change. I feel like I slowly get the hang of digital art, but still beg obiviously (Hope weeb Shit is okay here)

>>4245734
are you looking for criticism or nah

>>4245742
Always open for it

Please crit me bros

>>4245756
Nice but their faces are ugly and the foot looks wack too

>>4245756
You thought about the form of the tree when texturing it. Cool.

Two things will drastically improve your work if you study them:
>Lighting
>Perspective

Truth is man, there's a weird soap opera effect to your lighting where the light source is the viewer's eye. You're not really shading anything with true lighting in mind. Value studies needed.

And perspective, well, there's a lot of imitation of 3D in this drawing, but the depth is as flat as the paper you used.

You will skyrocket with improvement if you focus on value and perspective. (Value / lighting)

>>4245755
Basically its just that your characters are shaded and detailed while everything else is flat and has very minimal shading. They just look like blobs and they don't compliment each other. Add more depth and shading to the rail and floor and possibly improve the water if you can but it looks like its just a photo you put over it so idk if you can.

>>4245734
There's an extremely fine balance between realistic rendering and cartoon rendering. You must know how anime backgrounds have a painterly look, while the characters have clear outlines. You tried it, but it didn't work, it's kinda jarring. You gotta make the background a little bit more cartoony. But don't mistake cartoony for just defying all rules of perspective and lighting -- you're on the right track as is, don't drop all that.

>>4244624
looks nice but the perspectives off

>>4245764
Thank you for taking the time to critique it. I will keep your Input in mind when i paint the next time! I am only 2 years into this whole 'taking Art serious' journey and there is so much to learn, so its nice to hear that i am somewhat on the right track.

>>4245761
Thank you so much

>>4245768
Only 2 years? You're doing great. I've been drawing for my entire fucking life and at the rate you're going you'll kick my ass in no time.

>>4245777
very welcome

>>4245687
This luigi is very wholesome!
>>4245734
Good luck in your journey with art anon, I can tell you have a lot of potential and love for art. Also I think /ic/ is 90 percent weebs.
>>4244624
Super comfy, the colors are wonderful. Really like the painterly clouds and how they contrast with the more flat-colored house, it makes your piece more interesting to look at.

>>4245687
Love it, keep at it

>>4245756
the volume hints on the tree are actually fantastic

I wish I had coloring skills.

>>4244664
nice

>>4245756
what the fuck

>>4245978
I saw the Adam and Eve work you did a while ago, I love how you go in and do so many intricate lines, I really wish you would at least try with colors. Your stuff still puts off a neat look, like old technical drawings.

>>4245830
Thanks man! Appreciate it