/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4230801
soul vs soulless
still fucking disgusting though

>>4230801
O B S E S S E D

>>4230801
Marmalard gonna freak

>>4230806
>>4230809
>>4230810
Why don't you shut the fuck up and post your work fagtrons.

>>4230811
About time the real Mikufag started posting again, was getting sick of that imposter who’d always post one of your WIPs when asked to PYW.

>>4230801
Is this a draw this again?
Cause left one is pretty cool, but right looks soulless.
Except for the shit, which looks... yummy, for a lack of better words.

gotta figure out a better way to stylize faces

>>4230816
I was commissioned back in 2016 to do a redraw of the original Tekuho pic because the client wanted it in my style and I was OK with taking scat comms. But OP is trying to do a new strategy where he pretends everyone else is as mentally ill as he is and acts like a redraw is plagiarism, despite me giving credit in my original posts on Tumblr and HF. https://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/MarmaladeMum/504829/Strawberry-Shortcake-Version-1

I've since done a different pic that isn't in my ugly old style from when I was in high school. Pic related.

Thanks for the signal boost though, OP! You guys can all check me out here:
https://twitter.com/Marmalade_Mum
https://www.patreon.com/MarmaladeMum/
marmalademum.com

>>4230850
That's a very long way to say "No", dude.

IMO this new one looks equally uninspired.
Why is her shit thicker, dried and strawberrier on the tip? I'm triggered.

>>4230871
Do normies really get this buttmangled over somebody else referencing another piece?
>I don't want to be "THAT" kind of person, but -"
There's nothing worse than a passive aggressive cunt.

>>4230871
Fixed that for you.

>>4230879
Fix "your" art instead.

>>4230880
Always the moving of the goalposts with you. Post your art so I have something to aspire to.

>>4230801
>there are people that will unironically defend the op image

>>4230848
holy based anon, what's your blog?

>>4230850
Your shit is always so stiff.

>>4230806
>>4230810
>>4230850
>>4230871
>>4230877
>>4230879
>>4230880
>>4230881
>>4230919
>>4230936
Stop circlejerking each other and get back on topic you fucking niggers.

>>4230811
based
>>4230848
Yeah the face stylization doesn't really fit the body imo, it's still appealing though.

>>4230940
Shut up Mikufag

>>4230930
I post on https://twitter.com/pokinha.. Thanks, anon!

>>4230940
yeah i don't know if it's not anime enough or if it should be more realistic or something

I definitely screwed up the lowerlegs and feet. Any other advice?

>>4230848
Learn how to draw hands. Palms are longer and fingers have 3 joints cumbrain. You made her skin folds, especially in her stomach, look like some kind of rubber latex material.

>>4230919
quick run down on the op ?

>>4231206
Who hurt you, anon? I know i have a long road to go, so what? I'm improving.
Also, pyw

>>4231232
>>4230811

>>4231235
still waiting tho

>>4230848
Kyle fan?

from [s4s]
doin it for fun. not trying to be an artist

>>4231239
Older drawing but at least it's got both hands. Not digital either so no copy/paste/mirror.

>>4231287
it shows

>>4231211
Read the fucking thread

i love you marmelade man you are based dab on them haters

>>4230850
>Draws scat
>Calls other people mentally ill

Holy shit the coping

>>4231500
It was a comission for some coomer.

>>4231500
He did it for the money. I would draw incest or guro if the money is right.

>>4230811
The Legend is here

>>4231345
I love this.

>>4231345
Both way too long considering foreshortening and there's too much skin between the fingers on the left. See, we all know what a hand looks like, it's easier to see than it is to draw, specially when it's not our work.

>>4230940
>Stop circlejerking each other and get back on topic you fucking niggers.
Maybe if you didn't post a distracting image, we wouldn't go off-topic.

>>4230850
Is there any learning material you recommend? Something that allowed you to make a big jump?

>>4230850
Is there any learning material you recommend? Something that allowed you to make a big dump?

Haven't posted here in ages, got a new medium intuos tablet and this was the first thing I finished on it.
Challenged myself to do at least 3 drawings a day from here on out.

>>4231195
It’s been like four threads and I’ve gotten no comments on my stuff. Am I really that bad? Am I NGMI?

>>4231691
That subtle drool underneath her chin makes it look like she has a developing neckbeard, please fix it.

>>4231693
If you really want more eyes to be caught with your work try painting it so it can look more interesting on thumbnail.

>>4231691
There's something weird with her expression i can't identify, other than that nice work.

>>4230801
LM fucking AO, of course Marmalade made this, she's the worst person on the entire board

>>4231711
pyw

>>4231701
yea initially this was over a grey background and i didn't change the color down there.
>>4231705
is it the eyes? I've been having some trouble on getting them to look like they're focusing on anything.

>>4231693
Your art is unappealing to the demographic on /ic/. My critique, composition and subject matter. I'm too beg to say anything more.

>>4231355
lole whats so bad about doing it just for fun tho

>>4231714
Different anon, but yeah it's the eyes. Very soulless and dead. Either give her ahegao eyes and blush or make her looking at the viewer? idk

>>4231718
Well I don't feel like returning that particular drawing but I'll post new sketches here when I get the chance today and go over things with those then.

>>4230801
Part 10 work in progress... I couldn't finish this in a week. I just wanted to step up the quality a little but it ended up taking too long.

>>4231715
Damn. And I thought I had been improving. I’m sorry.

>>4231727
Not him but it is an unfinished sketch what more is there to say? Apply yourself.

>>4231263
not really, but i like him
never understood the hate on him, he seems to be a really hardworking dude

>>4231745
Success breeds jealousy.

>>4231287
i like this. blog?

>>4231752
wasnt he making like 100 usd or was that firez

Fuck how do I draw butts!

marmalade's a tranny nigger

>>4231775
by drawing a box and then an ass around said box

>>4231775
step one: find ass
step 2: draw ass
> pic

>>4231782
this

>>4231771
I think that was probably Firez, though Firez is making a lot more than that now.

>>4231775
Look for some reference, you lazy fuck.

>>4231769
i've only recently been drawfagging on /s4s/ so far lel. i know my art is low tier and i'm not taking this seriously, just wanna make a few people smile.
>>>/s4s/8277093
i do have all my stuff up on 4chanhouse currently though, if you wanna check. there's even a small comic, on the 2nd page. it's based on a greentext story lol
http://shimmie.4chanhouse.org/index.php?q=/post/list

are these lines appealing?

>>4230811
updating with bare cunny because fuck Niggers fuck Roasties fuck kikes and most importantly fuck jannies.

>>4231840
Lines? Maybe. Anatomy is awful, any lines will work if you know how to draw

>>4231840
The head looks off.

Despite all the people telling me to stop I decided to go on with it, how do i fix it? is still layered, is the vagina positioned to high?

>>4232169
Is this a character from something?

>>4232169
The pose is a bit stiff.

>>4232187
I want it that way I always draw using rulers so everything looks equal, what freaks me out is the vagina's position I think is to high even if the pelvis is bending, I subconsciously always draw it where the penis should be on a man, is freaky how low vaginas really are..

>>4232169
the lower legs are too short, i think it should look more like this

>>4232169
You should make her eyebrows visible to show more emotion and have her look at the viewer. Right now she looks like a doll in a trance which is pretty distracting.
Get rid of the line art around the nipples, ribs, tummy line, inner thighs and knee caps and instead portray those shapes with shadow. Having line art there makes those soft forms pop out when it should almost blend right in. Remove some of the line art from the under boob on our left and the top separate line of the breast by the clavicle. The forms are also too defined there.
Put less definition on the urethra and hood of the clit. The urethra isn't a little donut, it's a hole. The pink color for the hood is fine but needs softening to blend better, so remove the line art for it.
The dick veins are messed up. There should be a well defined vein going up the center from this angle and smaller veins wrapping around. Try to only define these veins by putting lines where shadows would be cast. After all, that's part of what lines represent.
Belly button is also a bit too low and large.

Best of luck! I couldn't red line, I'm busy working on my own projects. Though I'd love to see some updates!

>>4232169
I can do most of what you say, I agree in the belly button and I had no idea about the dick veins I thought they were random IRL, except on the part about eyebrows, she has no eyebrows in cannon.

To the artist who drew this 2 threads ago:
plz give us your twitter or something
I'm hoping you're open for commissions

>>4232193
No, you are right, they have to be about 12 to 15% longer.

>>4232222
What does the original character look like? You've got a ref pic?

>>4232226
She actually has spindly legs and arms but I changed those, but I wanted the face to look the same or at least almost the same. I think I could put discrete eyebrows like in the Loud House.

Where can I find the full version of these tutorial notes?

>>4232274
I have an art tips folder full of stuff I've collected over the years. Hopefully you find something useful in here.

General stuff
https://mega.nz/#!8ggljQKZ!mYyOQDvzWjZHfULHYAikV1jbr4F0Q-DHwEzGCfafbIw

More lewd stuff
https://mega.nz/#!Q45QUIxb!emCdy3NJFPXmRcCFdsNoi8Kjqhb0l3AM8IxjBLva9Vc

Do you guys piggyback by becoming friends with more known artists or do you just draw the new hotness and grow from there?

Im at a loss as to how to grow more than I have. In the social/popularity sense. Ive heard about joining people's discords and getting followers that way.

tl;dr What do YOU do to get more people to notice you? Please.

>>4232377
Draw a lot and post every day.
You need to create exposure in order to gain followers/supporters.

>>4232513
I post every two days, and while I do have a small but steady following, I do not have nowhere near enough what I want. And the growth of followers have stagnated.

Networking seems just as crucial as putting out good work. I think I might try going for more popular characters without deviating too much from what I normally put out, as to not alienate my audience.

I agree with your point, in the sense that I need to have an active presence.

>>4232764
How many followers you have currently and what is your goal?

>>4230801
This should be a 'draw this in your own style' thread! Because strawberries

>>4231723
Bloooooooooog?

>>4232780
Very small following of about 190 followers.

My goal is to have 10k minimum. Ambition and possibly being able to live off it is what's keeping me going.

But it's going to take a LOT more of me than what i'm doing currently to reach such big numbers. I'm just rambling at this point. But the point is that i'm looking for insight/tips on how not to spread myself too thin and burn myself out while efficiently getting my name out.

>>4233077
Post your blog, I know a thing or two, maybe I could give you some advices.

>>4232377
Fuck no at piggy backing. I just constantly make fan art, upload on both pixiv and twitter. Pixiv you will get followers coming in quickly if you're decent, so there you can link your twitter and say to follow you there as well. As for twitter, just use hash tags and make sure the uploaded thumbnail is good

>>4233213
>just use hash tags

Wait WHAT? I didn't know I had to use hashtags in twitter. Please tell me that is not crucial.

Don't you have to censor your work on Pixiv? I see some people do and some people don't. I also need to figure out the thumbnail thing on twitter as well. Fuck, I feel like an old man.

>>4233194
You could still post your advice here without me having to post my blog.

I'd rather keep it to myself this time due to the nature of these questions. Especially the ones regarding piggybacking/taking advantage of people for my gain.

>>4233284
Move her nipples lower. Can't you see they look like balloons right now?

>>4233243
Hashtags are for sure necessary. Pick a few things from your drawing and put like 3-6 hashtags on it. Or you can use the art hashtags during art times like #inktober or whatever.

Hashtags = visibility + free advertising

Why wouldn't you use them? Because you're an old hipster? Get with it, old man.

>>4233409
Not him but I've got large tits and it's true that the nipples can move higher up the breast when you raise your arms as they're not secured to the actual breast tissue inside, they're attached to the skin. Similarly if you lie partially on your side the breast tissue rolls down onto your ribcage but your nipples will become situated on the side of your breast and point upwards towards the ceiling.

No, the problem with this is that the breasts aren't seperating in thy centre in accordance with gravity.

>>4233431
show tits whore

>>4233431
The problsm is they look like balloons and not tits. They need more weight and moving the nips suggests that just like ur ref, dumb broad.

>>4232297
thanks, my dude!

>>4233481
>trying to argue with a superior big titted woman
Get on ur knees, peasant weak male. Know your fucking place.

YA-HO-HO! You found me!

>>4233254
Rule no1, you don't refuse when people ask you to pyw. Exposure is exposure, no matter it's good or bad, intentional or unintentional.

I want to see your blog because I need to know your problem first hand. Or you want some generic advice that you can search on internet instead?

>>4233710
Az give me 2 tips on rendering pls. Plus one bonus tip.

>>4233704
Oh no I sunk her butthole way too low.

>>4233713
Craig Mullins and anime titties sounds retarded, but his method of practicing help me improve a lot, especially in value control. Krenz is also doing it https://www.artstation.com/artwork/519kP

After that, it's just polishing your rendering, and the most efficient way is to look for your fav artists and try to emulate what they did, why they did and how they did. In my case the core of my style is NPA https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts?tags=npa_%28sirokurokuma%29

>>4233726
Papa bless you Az.

>>4233794
Are you the guy that did like 10 different versions of that chick strapped to the table impregnated with an alien?

>>4230811
Dis niggas drawing make me kek too hard, i gonna show that to my dad

>>4233794
Good lord. This subject does not deserve this amount of hatchwork and attention to detail.

>>4230801
Working on this animated loop of Jalter, this is the first part but it still needs a few more frames.

>>4234065
no sir.

>>4234125
that is literally the most common feedback i recieve

>>4233431
What you posted doesn't look like balloons, what the guy posted looks like balloons. Moving the nipples and shaping the breasts according to that would fix things much better than just a bigger separation between the boobs.

>>4233694
Only thing that matters in here is art skill. GTFO.

>>4233710
>>4233726
Focus on improving your perspective.

>>4233710
aaAAAAAAAaaaaaAAAA please aztodio please learn to draw faces better I see your drawings on twitter you can'd draw anime eyes properly they are wrong please study anime faces I don't wanna say loomis but perhaps you would benefit

>>4234227
I'm trying, as my perspective sucks ass

>>4234228
Your point is too vague, if it's possible could you redline it? It's not that I didn't learn head construction drawing but anime is different than realism so I fucked up many times. I only start to draw anime in more than one year, it's hard for me to realize my own mistakes because I lack experience

>>4234278
ok I started doing my fix on one of your drawing and I realized what is actually the most wrong
almost all your eyes are outwards derpy
this is why it looks so off
I finally see it

>>4234287
Fuck it, now to think of it eyes must be my most severe weakness. I'll think I'll copy like 50x pair of anime eyes a day from now on til I improve. Do you have any suggestion of great anime artists that draw great eyes?

>>4234297
honestly, I don't know that many anime artists by name, all of them sorta do the same thing and I personally don't like anime eyes,
I suggest to always copy from life and then try to stylize it
I'm not saying to do photocopies but maybe try to draw realistic eyes and then gradually make them more anime?

is this a fetish?

>>4233710
>Rule no1, you don't refuse when people ask you to pyw. Exposure is exposure, no matter it's good or bad, intentional or unintentional.

>I want to see your blog because I need to know your problem first hand. Or you want some generic advice that you can search on internet instead?

Very well. This is my blog and pic related is what i'm going to work on next.

https://twitter.com/Boltss_

Tell me what you think can help.

>>4234333
What the actual fucking fuck fucks in fucking fucked hell

>>4234333
wtf

>>4234354
>>4234368
>normies

>>4234130
I know you're trying to make her blink, but in a case like this, the rest of her face has to match the motion, cause otherwise it looks like there's something wrong with her brain. Or just make both of her eyes close, while making her eyebrows scrunch up a bit. Don't be afraid to exaggerate a bit, I'm sure you're gonna do a good job

>>4230850
Way to profit off the backs of actually creative artists.

did an animation in charcoal

>>4233077
Maybe stop blocking people?

>>4234421
Looks traced

still gotta rework the background's values/forms/shading/whatever but i got work soon an i'm still sick as shit hah ahahahahasdf p happy with the rendering on the body tho, all things considered

>>4231001
>>4231003
i love an adore absolutely everything you do, u'll always be one of my faves, lambchop ;w;

>>4234421
cute!

>>4234646
that looks fucking dank dude

>>4234333
Does she eat through her vagina?

>>4234646
Imagine the smell

>>4234758
that'd be a bit silly.

>>4234341
Your problem is Poppy with a penis.

>>4235228

>>4231701
i second this.
>>4231723
gold. love your paneling.
>>4233710
could be better. the hands could use some work.
>>4233794
(you) deserve more attention

Everyone posting these 4k images need to resize their pictures goddamn.

>>4235246
Debatable.

>>4233794
Hey smut, i noticed that you uploaded a fuckton of pictures to your twitter after not posting for a while and then slowed down.

You should have slowly dripped it so that you would have a semi consistent ouput. Not just dump it and disappear. It seems counterintuitive. Glad to see you are back though.

>>4235357
Youre right. Thanks

>>4235357
Youre right. Im not super stable so im not hoarding art and the releasing it, i just produce at like 200% efficiency for a couple of weeks then stop drawing for a month or so. Ty

>>4235393
Heeeeeeere's Johnny!

>>4230801
What's the best/hottest way to express penetration? pic related

>>4235500
its like somebodies opening their purse and there are boners inside for some reason.

>>4230850
I don't like scat but I love this

>>4230801
Finished it off...its shite but I at least hope I learned something from it.

you know when youre stuck for ideas, so you go with the first one that comes to mind.

>>4235620
You're heavily symbol drawing. You should go back to /beg/ and checkout the artbook thread.

>>4235584
didn't listen to anyone advice when you posted this last time.

>>4235584
you should avoid try the non lineart style if you cannot generate depth in your works. Make the lineart, set the shadows better, and you will have better looking images. If you want to still try the path of your image, better practice to yourself in exercises and don't upload them, so you can take all the time you want to make them better and you are not gonna feel bad because you not get the attention you wanted for you efford.

>>4233426
>>4233243
you get punished if you use too many hashtags per post. my rule of thumb is to use 2, although i still tend not to use them because i think it makes me look desperate. maybe thats not the word i'm looking for but it makes me look like i don't care about my art

>>4235857
I believe they've altered their values a tad, but yeah, dude needs to go back to linework first.

>>4234341
You lack of general appeal and super niche style is going to make your goal take x10 as long to reach. It's fine if you have your preferences, and I'm not saying to drop doing what you like, but maybe work on tweaking some things like not using such hard lines for contours. Makes the bodies look way to stiff, and rock-like. Another thing would be to be careful when doing fan-art of a character as people will find it jarring if you change too much about their likeness.

i guess i should have made the breasts a little lower, right?

>>4236485
What is your obsession? Why is it so specific?

>>4236502
i want to be know by a genre, and style. So this can make my work feel more personal, i guess, and recognisable. At least for now.

>>4236529
Style and genre sure, but its the same dead-eyed realdoll in every picture

daamn just found this pic from 2015

could've been a porn artist but ended up doing nofap insted

defecation as OP is very fitting:
so far all posted work did not engender any lust from me. And I'm pretty much a living personlaization of coomer meme.
I don't wanna shit on you (hah), some of these artworks heve solid elements and are technically impressive, but all of them fail to capture je-ne-sais-quoi of good porn.

Ironically I find that successful objectification hinges on presenting or at least implying a subjects agency.

>>4235575
Maybe I'll draw some flesh around it so it looks like it's pushing into something, rather than a void. pic is a for vis novel I'm working on.

Working on a large painting. Wish i had higher stamina, i get so bored of working on a single thing

>>4236807
Forehead is a bit large and bulbous, the anatomy looks pretty fucked regardless of your stylistic choice

>>4236834
Can you redline then

>>4236834
>>4236839
Heres kinda of what i was thinking if that helps

>>4230850
Eh, it's kind of hot. I want to pretend it is actual Taffy and she can't actually poop.

>>4236861
I don't know whether to laugh or cry anymore.

>>4236892
I mean can you help or are you just getting off on insulting me

>>4231287
Worlds longest taint

>>4236896
I’m not
>>4236892
But these are just picky stylistic choices, the main problem I notice is just the forehead. I like the idea you had with the large legs compared to the thin body, it adds a lot of character.

>>4236922
Maybe a little more arm? she's like merturkey.

>>4236922
Yeah i think the forehead was a bit overboard i guess i was trying to force strong shapes. I think i'd keep the butt but the calves and pelvis look better, thank you

>>4236927
No problem anon, god speed

>>4235584
holy shit

cant keep eyes open any longer

>>4236474
Lack of general appeal and not so in-canon appearances have been the main things people have pointed out before.

I'm still working on the general pleasantness/appeal of what I post. Plus, I don't seem to invoke downright disgust anymore, so that's always nice. But you're right, it will take much longer in my case. So I just have to keep going.

roastie toastie

ah forgot to fix the thumbs currently on wrong side b4 posting

>>4238017
I feel so dirty. Is this what it feels like to be raped?

>>4236699
can you explain more please?

>>4238025
samefag here, I have to add that it is rare for something to give such a strong impact so kudos to you for being able to deliver this feeling to an audience that's the whole goal of an artist to invoke a feeling. I'm having goosebumps.

>>4238017
based

>>4238030
thanks a lot, this is an idea ive had for a short ero manga about a very insecure girl but ill probably never get around to making it

>>4238017
Is it actually possible for them to look like this without getting dicked or is that just a Feminist meme?

>>4238017

And what? Was she born without an asshole? baka dumb bitch.

>>4238076

>>4238074
It’s only possible to to look like that through being born that way. Believing someone’s anatomy will change that drastically due to a few minutes of sex every now and then is absolutely ridiculous. It’s not a feminist meme its an incel meme.

>>4238082
Didn't mean to reply to last post

>>4238130
>>4238082
You should finish these up more. I mean, the second one's feet are literal blobs so it's not really feasible to critique.

>>4238030
>I have to add that it is rare for something to give such a strong impact so kudos to you for being able to deliver this feeling to an audience that's the whole goal of an artist to invoke a feeling
Says you. That isnt the purpose of art nor will it be. I hate you faggots with these idealistic perceptions of what art should mean. Its just art ffs it doesnt have to mean anything you cant satisfy everyone and nor will everyone expeirence it the same way. Making something disturbing doesnt make it anymore better than something thats not. It just makes it disturbing.

>>4238133
Fix your stiff poses you land whale.

>>4238161
Please post your work so I have something to aspire to.

>>4238174
what now fat cunt

>>4238183
shit art kek desu desu

>>4238133
>the second one's feet are literal blobs
The fucking irony.

>>4238187
>>4238174

Why you feel the need to tripfag, niggers? Who gave you that sense of importance?

>>4238197
These are the same person. Marmalade is a notorious samefagger.

>>4238183
Nice generic subpar weeaboo shit I've seen literally at every turn on the internet

>>4238197
I remember being in the same discord with marmalade mum. It was an ic discord where u had to keep your streak or you get kicked out. Anyways i remember how marmalade had these "eureka" moments with lighting and went on to explain to everyone how this amazing and it changed her work. I mean no one really bought it because its literally self evident. I believe it was about reflected light and how they reflected color mixed with the surface. Eitherway i just couldnt help but laugh at how dumb marmalade is. Marmalade's work is the literal definition of a polished turd. Marmalade at end of the end day only gets by because porn is the only way for a brainlet.

>>4238222
>eureka moment
>environmental reflections
The highest of keks.

>>4232377
Post sexy pics of yourself occasionally on your art accounts. Works only if you are pretty.

heres some stuff ive done recently in charcoal

>>4238254

>>4238255

>>4238133
Fair point, I am terminally lazy. Will try and knock out some finished pieces.

At this point I'm starting to have more respect for Mikufag over Marmalade.

>>4233047
@ac120rfw

>>4235335
Thanks! Although I thought my approach in this is rather conventional.

I wish I have more time to draw.

>>4238278
>respect
>on an anonymous urethra insertion/cock vore fetishist/testicle impregnation online internet forum
I wasn't aware that we're having some kind of dick measuring popularity contest. You Niggers keep your little e-dramma and buttplay to yourselves fuck off to your tranny discord servers.

>>4238293
im going to fuck nico and there is nothing you can do about it.

>>4238294
This isn't /biz/ fuck off

>>4238295
>browsing multiple boards
imagine being this guy

>trendhopping

uhgggg soulless

>>4238412
Based Satanachia poster.

>>4238459

>>4238286
Dick with healing property?
or is it that she can only heal if she has a dick inside her?

>>4238465
kinda, although my idea has change somewhat since I written that page. Are you familiar with a doujin called "milk hunters"? The man in this one is kind of a scummy guy, so I want to make a nicer version of it. Its also kind of like tsugumomo kind of situations, I guess, phsyical contact facilitate exchange of magic, having intimacy or heavy petting upgrades it, and exchange body fluid super charges it, or something like that.

>>4238407
the rendering is sublime, I felt the cast shadow on the tatami could have been push more because the butt doesn't look like its in contact with it at the moment, its somewhat distracting.

>>4238407
i love you kyle if this is really you you are my 3rd biggest inspiration

>>4238668
Wish i could like his work but puts me off that hes a massive cunt with a huge ego

>>4238670
Hes been drawing the same since 2013. Basically no progress for 6 years.

>>4238017
source? website? anything?

>>4238407
Whew Kyle has really been working hard on all this facial variation. Go on son.

>>4238222
I love how envious you are haha.

>>4238670
Where did you get this info? WTF?

>>4238920
He is lurking here

marmelade man - based
kyle - based
crabs - cringe

>>4238943
t.memelade

>>4238017
Hot but also gross

>>4238920
He posts sometimes and he's a cunt. He's the only pro I wish /ic/ was capable of scaring away for once.

>>4238943
>>4238916
>>4238187
Shut up Marmalade we know it's you.

>>4238668

FUCK OFF KYLE

>>4233704
I ended up changing it because the pose/perspective was flat as fuck.

>>4238017
Only good thing in this thread. Post more.

>>4238707
Why the fuck did this get deleted? Seriously fuck Jannies she was practically a full blown Roastie! Was it because she lacked grotesque head sized breasts? Holyshit.

>>4239435
was meant for >>4238017 so upset I missquoted kek

based janitors doing their job.

>>4239510

Do you guys post everything you draw to your blogs, or just finished/special stuff?
I haven't posted anything in a month cause I pretty much draw the same shit over and over, and I'm still learning to render, so I'd just be spamming my feed with the same half finished sketches every day.
Though when I think about the potential followers and notoriety I could have achieved during that month it makes me think I should have posted my drawings regardless of their quality or uniqueness, just to maintain some kind of traction

>>4239588
I like the way you draw bodies
Regarding your question if you want growth just post everything. More content more clicks more likes etc etc. As long as you aren't posting more than 2 or 3 times a day I don't think anyone would find it spammy. Esp if you format the posts like you did here, multiple sketches in one image rather than divided up into 3 or something

OK, on photoshop the pen pressure changes the size and opacity of the brush, how do I make it so it doesn't change the opacity?

>>4239436
i thought it was pretty obvious she wasnt a loli but oh well,
its probably just a jannie dropping by from a report or two and made quick work of the situation seeing how thing like
>>4230811
are up daily

>>4239791
>it isn't from a hard side angle like an Egyptian hieroglyph
At least you saying you'd try new things wasn't a total lie.

Please do some studies on expressions, these faces look the fucking same every time and it sucks the life out of every drawing you post.

>inb4 haha I'm sucking ON PURPOSE

>>4239859
Jannies work ONLY based on reports.

>>4240166
well then id like to imagine a cute insecure roastie did the reporting!

what was deleted? i need to know, what if i do the same thing accidentally!

>>4240222
Illustrations of a young girl in her underwear lamenting her protruding labia. They were quite good.

>>4240222
Don't draw naked lolis and you have nothing to worry about.

>>4231195
why are right's knees perfectly aligned when her hips are clearly tilted?

>>4240239
fffffff

>>4240285
don't worry lolifag you can always bypass the janny tranny

>>4240285

did you actually got axed? or deleted your pic for ebin memes

She wasnt a loli, just for having small tits doesnt make her that.
Do you have source for the artist? It was really good and I want more

>>4239791
Oh you're into cbt now?

>>4230801
This shit is getting out of hand, the figures that were deleted are entirely subjective just because she doesn't have visible breasts does not necessarily mean it is "illegal" are we actually starting to ban people for illustrating small breasts?

>>4240420
Flat is justice

>>4240420
thats it.
small breasts = illegal
pic related is the deleted one

and also, she had pubic hair, so more reasons.

>>4240417
not really a 'now' thing, it's just been a bit since i drew it as the focus of a piece

>>4240430
Exactly, same for pic related. Both had a well defined and matured figure. Do we have to state that the figures we illustrate meet with local, state and governing laws and are of legal age of consent? This is reminding me of that incident which occurred in Hungary if I'm not mistaken that there was actually a court case where the prosecutors had to determine if an anime figure was illegal or not and they came to the conclusion that her glutes were "too flabby" to be illegal or some ridiculousness. Don't call it a grave, this is the future you chose.

>>4240430
Pretty sure I read somewhere that in Australia any porn with small breasts or no pubes is illegal because "it is depicting a child and therefore is CP"

How am I doing?

>>4240444
Nigga, wtf? Who is fighting against my right to draw? I will kill them all!

drawrign

>>4240379
it was axed.

>>4240420
>the figures that were deleted
Wait, what did I miss? Which figures do you mean?

Not sure if I'm allowed to post this here. I know "no furry" but not sure about monster x girl stuff.

>>4241029
Sex onomatopoeia never fits with comics. Also draw comics like a proper fucking comic artist using black and white not this retadrd purple color. Makes it look more convoluted than it needs to.

>>4241270
You can shorten your twitter handle to @rodan_r18
I like the Cinderace one. Is there gonna be a female version of it?

>>4241270
>>4241295
And before I forget about it: Shield is the female player character, not Sword.

>>4241273
>Like a proper fucking artist using black and white

Why? I would like to use a lot of purple, brown and red in the final stages to make it seem warm.

>>4241295
Thanks! It's not in the plan right now, but I might potentially do female pokemon in the future.
Yeah the signature needs work.
>>4241297
I thought the actual name was Gloria, but I called her sword in my game so I was going with that. Either way though good to know (I also mispelled Drednaw like a dumbfuck)

>>4241302
>I thought the actual name was Gloria
She's been referred to as both of them, actually. Shield and Gloria.

(If you want to make people cry, you can use her manga name.)

>>4233726
I see that's the artist of the thread topic image that's spammed on /ic/ sometimes

JK = Best
WIP

>>4232377
>>4232377
> joining people's discords
uhh hello cringe department? I cant think of a single instance where a discord server didn't eventually devolve into a shitstorm and gay drama. e-friends not even once. interact with other artists on social media if you want but never ever go beyond that and stay away from discord.

>>4241273
I agree with the onomatopoeia part, but I don't see how the use of color detracts from the quality. Maybe a more subtle hue would have fit better?

>>4241298
keep using the tones you want, it makes the difference. never forget /ic/ is a toxic community

Any idea on how I can improve my line quality?

Dang, why?

>>4234333
This drawing is cursed as hell

>>4241941
Improve your understanding of forms. I know it sounds unrelated but line and line weight rely heavily on proper form. Also I know you just threw down times haphazardly here but your art would look a lot better if your tones were put in going along with the form rather than flattening it out the way you're doing it.

>>4240444
that pic is disgusting you fucking loser

>>4240444
You can excuse it any way you want but it's pretty damn obvious you're drawing lolis my dude.

>>4240444
>well defined and matured figure

Yeah because no curves, small undeveloped breasts, no pubic hair, childlike face-to-cranium ratio, tiny hands/feet, and being 3-4 heads tall is obviously "well defined and matured"

What the fuck are you smoking?

>>4242518
>>4242521
>>4242534
Guys, isn't it that obvious bait? Chill out, it's just an autistic troll.

Is this place still any good? Remember posting here 4 years ago...

I probably haven’t improved much, I feel like I’m sorta stuck

>>4241345
You drew that??? That’s amazing, so soft^^

>>4242632
I wish. Unfortunately he's just a delusional loliposter.

should I finish it? Something about the boys hand and face feel very off.

>>4243085
Everything is really strange. I don't know what it is about your style but it wigs me out every time I see it

>>4243107
Fuuck. That bad, huh? You're not the first to say something like that. How does one rethink everything about how they draw?

>>4243110
Honestly? You just need to study more. Proportions, anatomy, forms and gesture would be a good place to start. Something about the faces I think is what's fucking with me. Expressions? Proportions? Style? I can't say. But something in the face.

>>4243110
Honestly, I think what you have is an advanced form of symbol drawing. Try to rethink basic fundamentals such a anatomy and perspective, and try to sort out why things look weird. It looks like your over-reaching, which I actually think is great, as your vision might fill out really nicely eventually, as long as you keep learning and correcting yourself:)

Also learn how to set eyes, specially the guy and girl in the back don’t really look at anything.

Trying to make my stuff less stiff, might finish this one up cause I like it

>>4243138
>>4243121
Well fuck. And here I thought I was getting better at arting and I was just getting better in all the wrong ways. Thanks.
So, Loomis? Cubes?

>>4232190
hmm it looks like you´re male, so a tip would be to draw the vag where your balls are, if that helps you, i had the same problem with dicks, but then again just try to draw futas and it will work out in both ways to do it right

>>4243191
Yep. Clit would be around the base of the dick and balls is vuvla and vagina zone.

>>4241298
Because colored lines just makes you look like a faggot and just doesnt look good either way. I go around reading some comics and i come across a faggot like you having to look at this awful color when my eyes are adjusted to a more contrast black and white. They especially look like shit on laptops, phones and tablets and sometimes on shitty monitors.

>>4241029
The onomatopoeia don’t really work, but I don’t think the colors are bad. I think the characters seem to lack connection and seem trope-ish, shallow and poorly developed tho.

>>4243376
Disagree, you are making yourself look like an autistic faggot. "awful color"
Using color can be an artistic expression or add something to the image. Black and white is boring when it's overused.

>>4243540
Yes youre right. It really expresses how much a flaming fucking faggot really you are. Cant stop you from that.

>>4243547
Hehe, I'm straight you butthurt loser.

>>4243547
>>4243376
>t. doesnt draw

>>4243376
>>4243547
Your mental issues are showing.

>>4243387
Interesting. Could you expand on this? I don't read or draw a lot of comics, but from what I've seen of lewd stuff, those concerns hardly seem to matter. I would like to make something as appealing as possible, however, while also budgeting my time.

practicing thinner lines than I'm used to

>>4242967
>tfw eggs will never hold you down and make you suck her dick

>>4241069
>>4242653
This shit stays with no problems but the other deleted pieces god forbid someone ever exposing a flat chest. This is plain bullying now.

>>4244155
Different anon.
You need to use better words. The ones you used are just distracting and unattractive.

>>4244810
what did i ever do to you anon? i just came here to post my drawings

>>4245209
It's not you mods are just being fags as usual if they're going to ban content under global rules fair game ban all the content that is not allowed outside of /b/ don't be a biased double standard and hypocritical cunt.

>>4237334
You need to work on your shading and making your color pop more. Use brighter colors instead of darker ones.

Doing a commission at the moment and looking for some inspiration. Anyone knows of a nsfw artist who's really good at drawing stretched flesh, like spread vaginas and anuses, and skin/fat bunching up under the grip of fingers etc.?

>>4246174
Jadony

>>4246839
LMAO