/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4219868
girl having fun at the beach

I waged war against my sloppy linework cause I didn't want anon to feel hate after looking at my drawing.
is this better?

Poorer frogs get press ganged into the artillery. Lousy, considering all the tastiest flies are closer to the front.

>>4219873
The left side is a mess, the right side looks very nice

>>4220017
did you meant to type the opposite?

>>4220007
s o u l
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>>4220043
P cool but you probably should have some more detail pieces like costuming, portrait... right now it's a bit too "general sexy mannequin woman with sword #287" to be considered a character sheet. I really like the gestures though. Nice flow.

>>4219949
Unreadable, my man. Apart from the head and hand, I have no idea what anything else is in this picture.

>>4219735
Thanks. He is most definitely a boy

>>4220043
Even though you only do sfw now I can't help but feel like the lewds-drawing mindset never really left you. Even though this is a character sheet it feels like every one of these drawings is made more to look sexy than anything else, rather than to show the character design. There's nothing wrong with having a sexy waifu oc, but I think you're kinda missing the point of a character sheet by only making it a set of poses that don't really show anything about her other than her ass.
Real character sheets usually have a simple turnaround, details on the clothes, notes on how the character is constructed, expressions, and etc. They're basically just references and show of the character's demeanor and personality.
I only say this because I don't know if you're aware of this, I know you don't like porn art any more but everything about your work screams that you drew a lot of it.

>>4220176
And a western style character sheet too if you don't like weeb stuff.
Even pose sheets tend to focus more on expression. I feel like yours does not really convey much about her character's personality. Show to us what kid of person she is

>>4220202
Nice!

First row.

god I wish anon won't hate this one..

>>4220043
>>4220223
>>4220224
i love this
god i wish i could draw figures this effortlessly

>>4220224
very nice. Moar

>>4220123
post his benis

>>4220250
>2019
>thinks boys automatically have penises

>>4220353
These are the true dark ages

>>4220250
He is too small. :(
I only post penises of mature boys

>>4220176
love things like these. Do you have anymore?

Any one have any digital tips? I've been going through ctrl paint tutorials all day.

>>4220241
Are you trying to mash together some hybrid east/western style? Consider removing details that are brunt and instead add ambiguity and abstract forms that imply these same details. For example, instead of refining the form to describe the eye lids, the nose, the lips, and the chin eliminate these forms into finer subtle details that would do one of two things:
Provide a more pleasant, younger look
Compliment the style the character is originally from
>Incoming replies with queefing roaties in 3, 2, 1...

>>4220402
Which program?

>>4220414
thanks for your input
to be completely honest I just try to imitate my favorite artist Norasuko, there is nothing more to it
I want my faces to look very 3d

>>4220241
Soul
>>4220414
Soulless

>>4220402
Make comfortable shortcuts for common operations such as larger/smaller brush, undo/redo, lassoo, move selection, transform and opacity lock

Play around with different brushes and brush settings too. Pressure sensitivity etc

Depending on how you want to do rendering, look into how people use the paintbucket in a way that doesn't generate ugly aliasing close to your linework

Get a perfectly circular plastic object, place it on your tablet (if screen-less) and trace around the object. Copy and paste this layer so you have two drawn circles on top of each other and then turn the second circle 90 degrees with the transform tool. If they line up you know that your tablet drivers don't skew your input. When I was new I accidentally drew for months on a tablet where this setting was wrong (if you drew a circle on the tablet you would get an oval inside the software), really messed me up

>>4220418
clip studios

>>4220425
Thank you!!

Alt is the best of the draw threads, so chill.

>>4220043
Ummm... Her name is Miara Toradel (sounds epic like a GoT epic character) and she's like... A badass yet sexy yet refined elf, from a totally dark and realistic fantasy world?

Why is concept art so fucking bland? Because of people like you. Do something with soul and unique , risk taking elements. Invent something for once. We've seen this character 20000 times in every book, show, game, artstation post.

>>4220476
Don't poke him too much or he'll start taking his anger out on people who draw sexy anime girls again. He doesn't listen to advice anyway.

>>4220476
no need to reinvent the wheel bruh

I had to shoop the face - it was a good game

Second row

>>4220518
Fucking hell this is good

god i hope that one anon doesn't hate this

>>4220518
beutiful

>>4220663
Yes I hate it especially after the fact I spent time and effort trying to show you how not to make her look like a 3dpigdisgusting. She is out of proportion and you need to study the legs, lower limbs, how to simplify these forms and where muscles originate to and from.

>>4220680
i know i will anon i know my legs are bad im sorry i apologize this will never happen again

>>4220680
>expecting people to learn that fast
let me guess, you dont draw yourself?

>>4220680
You should redline it so he can learn faster

>>4220663
are you the person that keeps posting norasuko? your faces seem like they take a ton of inspiration from the way he does things. Small round eyes, button nose, puffy cheeks etc

>>4220751
yes i copy everything from him even the brush and signature I cannot help it one day i will find my own self

>>4220764
that's not a very healthy approach

>>4220449
I really like your shapes and the comp. Her body language is very emotive as well. Although I think a colder color palette would better help express somber mood, imo.
Try to give more consideration to the light and shadows. That current feathered shadow cheapens the illustration. Maybe consider a more dramatic overhead light source (like stages light for example)
That could cast her face in shadow. The light falling directly onto the pages of the open book would contrast rather nicely and even pride some bounce light onto her.

Be more considerate of your options with lighting and color to express emotions abstractly. Keep it up!

>>4220007
I enjoy this creative take on period fantasy. I only wish you'd add more setting elements to better ground your characters in, like some grass. or even a sky backdrop Having them float in a white void takes away from an otherwise interesting scene.

>>4220223
>>4220224
Always great to see you continue grinding. You're getting better and better. You plan on doing any more animations?

>>4220420
Perish

>>4220518
Love the shoes

>>4220663
I don't hate you, anon. You have a lot of potential believe or not. I was only hard on you because I feel like you're too reluctant to break out of your comfort zone. This Asuka drawing has some anatomical issues, but I do like it better than the last one as it's at least more inline with her actual character. The legs in particular are the weakest point. The proportions are too skewed.
Her calves and feet are too tiny. Also her facial expression is too dead. She really isn't really expressing anything at all. What is she meant to be feeling or expressing? Be more mindful that the face serves a purpose beyond just being there.

I highly suggest you start doing more anatomy and nude studies. Become more familiar with the musculature and skeletal form, then learn to construct it. Everyone here would just suggest Loomis, but I suggest
-Anatomy For Sculptors
-Force by Micheal D. Mattesi
-MORPHO:Simplified Forms by Michel Lauricella
(most of them you can find in the art book thread)

Do this in tandem with studying Hideaki Anno's art for Eva (or who ever you want desu). His style is a distinct exaggeration so I only recommend doing this in tandem with studies of nude models as to not to become a carbon copy. You can do it!

>>4219868
I'm looking for similar artist to Akcho, do you guys know of any other artist with his style ?

>>4220820
thank you

>>4220116
should be a bit more readable in colour

>>4220820
downloaded morpho yesterday, easily the best resource for figure drawing i've seen, along with bridgeman

>>4220846
is that an anime girl inside a beached whale???

>>4220858
do you have a link for morpho ?

>>4220862
here you go, do ctrl+f "morpho" and youll find 3 versions, one japanese, one chinese, one spanish
https://rxih1q6u.droppages.com/
also since i'm doing this i may as well post a couple other filedump links from the artbook thread (thats where i got this btw, lurk there for great resources)
https://pastebin.com/sgZq0vUW
https://mega.nz/#F!UcNG2AiT!jeyWwP1gtQXXz6R29o5bgw!sddDyarD

>>4220876
thank you blessed anon i hope you have a good day

>>4220880
thank you i'm gonna use your blessing to ace my homework which i should be doing instead of browsing the chon (but desu i have no idea how to do it so probably gonna just keep browsing)

>>4220859
she played Death Stranding once--it was more than enough

>>4220421
kek

>>4220801
thank u for the compliments. it means more than you might think. pls keep being you

best ship

>>4221089
You god damn Renaissance man

>>4221089
Cringe

>>4220801
Thanks. I plan to get more animations in once I get the first batch of character sheets done.

>>4220518
ay, bro i remember u. wat was ur tumblr again? table guy or something?

>>4221135
dilate

>>4221138
push your contours more, if they had more accurate and distinct curvature this could really pop

>>4221314
Tumblr is dead to me, I made a twitter >>4220932

>>4220569
>>4220663
>>4220813
Spanks

just a big ol drawpile sketch dump

>>4221432
some studies too

>>4221434
>>4221432
is this all 1 day of work?

>>4221449
the sketchdump took 2 weeks cause i was just mostly focused on studying for my art but the leg studies just took prob 5-6 hours

>>4220846
Hahaha this is awesome anon, I haven’t seen this kind of art in a long time and I really like it

>>4220023
Yes.

>>4220663
You should follow the advice of anon below you.
Don't feel down about it though, take it as a serious advice.
I'm actually envy you since even at your level you are already coloring.
Just study, experiment, take all the advice you can get. And enjoy drawing.

>>4220846
I fuckin hate it and fuckin adore it

>>4220846
is she ok

>>4221432
>>4221434
amazing, saved

>>4221099
Good face. I feel like the detail in the clavicle and neck muscles could stand to be simplified, that area is rather eye-catching when the face is the focus.

>>4220663
Hi anon, Anon here from the /beg/ thread I promised to try and redline for you but the thread died. So here is what I could do in a quick note, I am not sure if you were going for the contraposto stance in her posture that I did but this is how I would do it. Hope that helps.

>>4221590
thank you very much
I always get so much help with my drawings it's insane

>>4221542
Thank you. but I disagree, I think even more simplification on neck and clavicles would make that area appear much flatter relative to her head.

I do like the fact that area is eye catching, because it's also part of the image as her bust is the focus, not jest her face. Highlighting bone and musculature plays to the realism I'm leaning into.

>>4221600
I think it's very epic

>>4221745
I think that guy identified a real issue, but maybe didn't provide the right solution.

I think the problem is that the neck itself is too flat relative to the face and clavicle. The neck should probably have a larger shaded area on the left side to define the form and make it look less discontinuous. Also, I think the lines on the clavicle make it look like a deeper crease than is realistic

>>4221755
> The neck should probably have a larger shaded area on the left side to define the form and make it look less discontinuous.
I can could see that. Although I think it's the shadow of her face that makes it seem like the neck itself it too flat. Although I the better solution is I could've made the shadow of her face cast over less of her right side to better balance the lighting. Thanks for the insight.
>Also, I think the lines on the clavicle make it look like a deeper crease than is realistic
You first crit does have a point, this one however, I disagree with. The line art of her clavicle hi-lights a bit of her bone structure, as she has a rather lean frame.

>>4221755
> The neck should probably have a larger shaded area on the left side to define the form and make it look less discontinuous.
Hmm I could see that. Although I think it's the shadow of her face that makes it seem like the neck itself appears too flat.
Although I the better solution is I could've made the shadow of her face cast over less of her right side to better balance the lighting. Thanks for the insight.
>Also, I think the lines on the clavicle make it look like a deeper crease than is realistic
You first crit does have a point, this one however, I disagree with. The line art of her clavicle hi-lights a bit of her bone structure, as she has a rather lean frame.

>>4221775
its your under clavicle shading that is weird actually all your torso shading is weird.

>>4222221
Looks nice. I like it. For critique, practice on the pose and hands more. You can do more m8.

>>4222221
Nice stuff, for the future I think you might wanna work on loosening up your poses a little. I feel she's a bit stiff

>>4222565
Very nice, but could use some polish.

big uggo

>>4220414
Eww.
>>4220241
Lips look great as they are.

>>4222565
Blog?

>>4221802
Oh that certainly is a good alternative for balancing the lighting, but since the lighting of her face was at odds with the lighting on the rest o her bust, I think it would've made more sense to reduce the shadows on her face lessen its intensity to better match the angle to the rest of her. As the lighting on her face was most at odds with the lighting on the rest her.

The bright lighting I was working from was more forward facing and suspended slightly above her. As opposed to the left of her, which would cast that sort of shadow. Looking back I should've been more mindful of that. I've been experimenting to find a balance for an animation style. Between realism and abstraction. Drawing from some of 90's era anime that captured a level of realism.
Like 90's era production IG or Madhouse to name a couple. I do admit it's been sort of challenging trying not to trap myself in creating a visual with clashing attributes in a purist to establish something that looks and animates cohesively. The abstraction of cell anime, but leaning into realism.

Thank you for the repaint, anon.

Are there any /ic/ approved resources on stylization of the head and face?

>>4222714
Yeah, you are right. I originally held it off cause I felt like I was polishing a turd, but ah well. Working on it some more helped fix some of its issues at least and try out some new stuff

>>4222803
https://twitter.com/NessieFynn

>>4221432
B-blog?

bag boy

i'm trying a method that takes minutes to line and color instead of hours

>tfw can't make non stiff poses/movement
help

>>4222475
yeah, im still working on hands to this day

>>4222479
i was going for the nervous apprehensive look, thought the stiff posture would lend to it

>>4222829
Sorry i dont have a blog

It's so fucking muddy and I can't seem to fix it

>>4221089
wholesome

>>4220801
yer right

>>4223033
hey maybe try to just lay out the very simple shapes first, as if you wanted to use polygonal lasso tool or something. just have solid shapes filled with colors, and start blending after that? im not a pro or anything but this method does seem to help me with muddiness

>>4220846
absolutely great, my taste exactly, can we get a blog?

>>4221099
seconding what that other anon said about her neck. also dont be afraid to show more folds in her top, it will at a lot of dimension to the lower part of your drawing. i really like the face and hair. im not sure about the lips color? but that could be just my personal preference.

>>4221138
separate the outline from hatching! like make the hatching lighter or something, i feel like its a great drawing but just kinda chaotic in the rendering department

>>4222565
i like the colors and the tiny scratchy highlights on the hair a lot, pls use them more

>>4222727
>>4222873
i think these have a very nice use of perspective and a good feeling of form. maybe you could use some variety of weight in the outline, like in traditional inking process?

>>4222877
i dig the color tones in hair and skin of the girl on the left but the color palette on elsa's dress is not very harmonic/consistent i think?

>>4222885
maybe picrel could help you anon? i feel like your figures are a bit chonky which may be why they appear stiff?

>>4223167
i really like it, but i thinkg the shadow edges could use some sharpness there and there.

>>4223205
so nice

in general we have some really good stuff here, keep it up talented anons

How can I stop some of my shading (face/shirt here) from appearing so flat? I think the picture overall looks good, but it's not enough.

>>4220241
>>4220414
soul vs soulless

>>4223554
The main problem is that the lighting is not consistent. A lot of the high lights and shadows do not follow the same light source. You are also very timid with your shading, I feel as if you're afraid to put too many shadows on any area, which results in the form being less well-defined

>>4223554
You are sitting between two chairs.

You either go full fucking flat as on anime and it looks good because it's entirely intentionally flat.
Or you go full render like AS109

Right now you're in a weird spot kinda flat but flirting with soft shadows.

>>4221138


>>4221353
>>4223531

Thanks, it's been ages since I've rendered anything, i usually just stick to linework.

Started playing around with a low opacity marker and couldn't stop. hopefully I actually finish this lol.

Accidentally poasted in int not alt, what do you think of this? I don’t know what to do with the expression since IRL I have as much empathy as the fish he’s gutting

>>4223746
I like the way you painted the blood in a bright pink color, but it really draws the eye towards the bottom of the piece because the rest of the color palette is more muted and what a viewer would expect. If you don't want the floor between his feet to be the focal point, you need to have some bright, eye-catching color somewhere else in the picture.

Don't really have any issues with the expression, someone who regularily guts fish probably doesn't feel too sorry about it, most things become routine after a while. Might help if you could make it a bit more clear that he's looking down/at what he's doing.

>>4223794
Thanks anon, thoughtful critique. I’ll adjust it and take it on board!

>>4223716

lol

>>4223554
Add a picture frame and it'll be funny

>>4223554
If you want it to not look flat, shade it like a thing that's not flat, instead of like a flat thing. You've got the head shape implying the cheekbone and eye socket and stuff, but then you shade it like a perfectly cylindrical mask.

The shirt has two problems. One, you drew it flat, so it doesn't even face the way the neck and shoulder imply the body should be facing. It's head-on and symmetrical about the xx thing. But also, the creases in the shirt don't delineate any real shapes. They just look like weird indentations in a block of plasticine. Imagine you had to draw a grid of contour lines showing the 3d shape of the clothing folds. How would it look if you tried that now?

>>4223943
Needs a shemale dick in his mouth.

>>4223531
You can find me here:
https://twitter.com/monotone_ink

head a bit too big, but it's too late now. Apparently, I 2b pencil is still too light for this paper.

>>4219868
i
ve become fixated on dead whales.

>>4224661
>muh quirky and avantgarde fixation just like muh tkmiz!

>>4224673
eat a dick, dead whales are cool

Trying.

>>4224716
Why is her face a polygon?

>>4224716
the chest isn't a red line, im not 100% sure if from this angle the curvature of the eye socket should be visible but im damn sure that her jaw in the right is too damn far back

im back at it again

>>4225018
ay dios mio, what style is your goal?

>>4225030
cute hot

>>4225018
lower the nose and mouth since it looks too scrunched up

>>4225032
post a ref

>>4225101

>>4222885
I am not sure what exactly she is doing so excuse me. I think she is hitting that bomb with a hockey stick maybe? If you want to make it like movement then have her be a bit unbalanced shift the weight on one leg and have her swing that stick (?) on wider arc like she i putting all force in that hit. Also do not have look at the camera, make her look at what she is doing, that also helps conveying the idea that she is in the middle of something.
Maybe like this?

>>4225018
stop copying him, the way he does things clearly doesnt work for you
and no, I dont think it will improve with time. not everything is for everyone
you need to develop your style naturally, see where it is inclined to go on it's own, without shoehorning elements to it, especially when you dont know how they properly work
I understand you like his faces but you simply dont know how to apply them
besides, why do we need more of the same style? anyone that likes his work will go to his page for artwork and you will be seen as a terrible bootleg till you do something of good quality that sets you apart

>>4225106
i don't feel it really cute or sexy the small and round eyes are a little to close to be realistic but thats just my opinion.

now this pic i do find it qt and sexy

>>4225116
ok i will stop drawing im sorry

>>4225120
stop forcing things, dont stop drawing all together
pls go back and read the post more carefully instead of replying in this defeated and childish manner, noone is buying it

>>4225125
my life is a mess and a misery and I am very frustrated and desperate im sorry you are right

>>4225130
not him but are you shitposting? because if thats how you really think... that's some big yikes right there you sound like a 17 y.o little bitch and if you are shitposting you look like a fedora reddit faggot how do you type that shit without cringing.

Need critique NOW raaaaaargh

>>4225142
everything he said about me was right and I got a little upsed and defeated

>>4225142
dont reply to people like that, they thrive on attention
they will just keep posting their artwork over and over again with only two possible outcomes
they never improve or they become a mediocre copycat at best

>>4225018
>>4225125
Brah, listen. If you are feeling down then just draw something for yourself you do not have to post everything here. If you post here then you are voluntarily inviting people to criticize you and that is the opposite that of making your feel better. It is fine to make mistakes, it is fine to make shitty artworks if you know that it is but you don't give a damn about it at that moment.

Anyways we can improve your picture by fixing the eye level of the face and reposition the parts of the face, the realign the shoulders and breasts to that angle to keep the perspective reasonably accurate.

Your "style" is not bad, just pay more attention to these basic ideas as you work if you want to post them. If you just want to scribble and stuff then go ahead and do it but don't post them.

Now get some rest okay?

wip.

>>4225130
>>4225120
Hey, Dairenke. I think you are a little hard on yourself and you let crabs get to you too easily. I think anons are consistently very unpleasant to you, and you should not make them the people you try to please. You still have a lot to learn, but so long as you keep pushing forward and keep on trying to improve yourself towards your goals, you will make progress. I'm sure of it.
I kind of detect that you get more destructive critique than constructive critique around here, correct me if I'm wrong. I don't think that makes for a good learning environment. I'd recommend leaving /alt/ and maybe /ic/ altogether and finding a different group of artists to ask for crit from, I found the /las/ discord to be very helpful for getting thoughtful critique
Ganbatte

>>4225160
dont encourage bad habits
he might feel bad now, but if he tries something different it could potentially lead to a better result in the future.
even if he insisted on copying, he needs to get a better feel of the material he is referencing, and I am sorry to say this but your fix isnt doing that either, it looks uncanny
sorry if I sound mean, i dont want to. i just genuinely believe this is a bad approach to things

>>4225160
no no I want critique and I always thank and agree with every criticism
I did not half-ass this drawing, this was done to the best of my current ability, I didn't think I was doing something shitty consciously
thank you for your overdrawing

>>4225167
>>4225152
Can you post your work?

>>4225116
>>4225152
I don't see the issue here, it's pretty normal for beginner artists to have someone they look up to and want to copy. Thing is, no one gets gud from one day to the other, so over time he's gonna find other artists he likes and incorporate elements of their styles into what he's doing. Most people end up with something of their own eventually through this process. Style is really not something that's worth stressing out about at the start, one way or another.

With that said, >>4225151, if you're actually worried about just being a mediocre copycat, why not work actively on incorporating elements from other artists you like into your work also?

>>4225171
obviously not, since the advice I try to give with care for a random anon is being called crabish by some out of the blue hugbox
last thing i want is get some autists to shittalk about me for trying to help and not sugarcoating things
>>4225164
>destructive critique
yes, telling him to try to achieve quality true to his style and not mindlessly stick to one thing is destructive, come on people

>>4225164
>>4225167
>>4225175
god damn it guys thanks for all your words
I do not think I get bad criticisms, I get almost too much good crits, everytime I post I get tons of replies and I am VERY THANKFUL

>>4225167
>and I am sorry to say this but your fix isnt doing that either, it looks uncanny
Oh I know it is dun worry, I just quickly tried to adjust the balance of the body a bit to show how the symmetry is of but half l way I decided to draw in instead cause that felt better to illustrate what I mean but yeah I rushed it.

>>4225171

>>4225175
yes, let him get INSPIRATION from MULTIPLE sources, not COPY a SINGLE artist, that's how your style and skill properly advance.
It's what I am trying to say all this time, but I got called a crab instead
>>4225182
no worries man, noone get something right on the first try
I would try a redline myself but that style is not rly my valley either

>>4223554
Here is a quick and shitty overpaint, add more shadowy areas and that can give it more form. I chose the light source to come from the left cause that is what the face suggested in general. I added shadow to the shoulder, torso, hair cape and switched the light in the eyes from right to left to align it with the rest. I even put a similar highlight on the frog at the background and the gemstones at the chest to help with this.

I do not have time to fix the hand, please have look at it

now that the dust have settled,
i made some changes

>>4224661
>When you try emulating the japanese so much you end up hating whales as much as they do.

See you next year when you will be commiting war crimes in China/Korea.

First row.

some flats before painting

>>4225228
worse than before

>>4225379
>>4225382

These are incredible!! blog?

>>4225435
White box basicly spams these threads, how are there people asking for a blog every time he posts?

>>4225440
Samefagging, perhaps?

>>4225435

Here you go, anon. Don't mind Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dud above. They've had this weird obsession with me. After a while, you just get used to it.

https://twitter.com/WhiteBox_Studio

i did finish it
i consider it an improvement over my previous drawings in the end

>>4225379
>>4225382
you are always doing so much and I rarely understand it but I envy how you can draw so much figures easily

>>4225239
If she were standing up, her torso would he a head length longer than her lower half. I strongly recommend shortening it, followed by lengthening her right leg (viewer's left). Take an hour or two to study proportions (especially when the subject is sitting down), then head back into the piece. Good luck.

>>4225672
>>4225667

god damn it anon but thanks
well I will get the proportions right the next time

>>4225584
yeah im so confused as to why anyone would talk about you when you always ignore critiques (the purpose of this board), only respond to asskissing that's probably you samefagging, spam threads with your tantrums over anime tits, and are worse than dentist-kun and nosebro combined. they must be obsessed!

dork squad

>>4219868
lookitme ma im on thumbnail

>>4225676
You went ahead and finished it which is what really matters so good job. Just be sure to take the lesson and try and incorporate it into your work from here on in.

>>4225680
Snip snip. Post that work or get fucked.

>>4225698
Ew.

>>4225110
Ty. ily.

>>4225698
more like goblin squad

>>4225018
Here's something I did really quick.

The changes I made:
- moved the nose and mouth down
- added a more prominent jaw/chin
- shrunk eyes and moved them apart a teeny bit
- new eyebrows

You shouldn't give up, a lot of people here want to see you succeed.

>>4225110
Side note, I struggle with setting up a plain/POV point and drawing on a set grid. For the most part I just wing the perspective according to the construction/gesture but end up with an out of place background.

>>4225239
>>4225667
>>4225953

Ah shoot, I didn't see these. Sorry, anon, I'm a bit of a speedreader. I like the final drawing's quizzical facial expression.

I've been fucking around trying to figure out how far I can push this large, almond eyes aesthetic. Is this too far?

some doodles

>>4226038
very cool, blog?

>>4226038
so good, blog?

>>4225972
Kek she looks like an alien trying to be human.

>>4225972
>>4226048

>>4226048
>>4226070
lol thanks, I guess it IS too far.

I'm bad at productivity when I have a day off. Aside from gesture daily, I'm too intimidated to do a passion project. Can you guys give me an assignment to keep me going straight?

>>4226038
Holy shit that’s good. Blog?

>>4226114
>do do do do do do, do do doooo
>*gong crash*
>haaawwwwww

>>4226130
you mean
>YOOoooOOoooooooooooooo

working on colors

>>4225698
I like the dude but the girl looks like an ayy lmao gremlin

>>4226038
qt

>>4226038
That feel when you know Velma is canonically only fifteen years old and gets lewded all the time.

>>4226235
I didn't expect to see you doing something with colors

>>4226131
Nah because the yooooooo is from Japanese noh theatre and that boy looks to be dressed in mid-century Thai dress. >>4226167

>>4225901
>>4225915
>>4226299
redline it

>>4226328
meh too lazy

>>4226330
guy busy samefagging 'too lazy' to draw, yawn

>>4226343
wut..

>>4223205
soul

>>4221089
>the skirt hold
sexy and wholesome, the best kind of sexy

>>4226038
god this is amazing I am so humbled
blog?

>>4219868

>>4226471

>>4226542
the head to body ratio is .....uhhh...YIKES!

>>4226542
eyes too close
nose left nostril too low
torso back too small

school uniforms

>>4219868
Any opinions on this?

>>4226677
Neat design, pose is stiff and the form feels flat. I can understand if the detail made things confusing to work through though

>>4226542
jesus christ improve already you arrogant fuckass

>>4226662
Cute!

>>4226038
Honestly, drawing goals. This is probably a redundant question, but Do you have a blog kind sir? Or mam?

>>4226038
>spend 2 hours on drawing one figure
>this ASSHOLE just sketches 50 perfect figures in 10 min

>>4226804
build a bridge and get over it, you "woe is me ill never be this good wahhh" posters are pathetic. You're the only reason you'll never improve

>>4226830
Why you didn't fix her face

>>4226830
I feel like her facial features are shifted to the left?? Like i want to select it with a lasso tool and move it to the right, eyes especially
Apart from that its real nice I like your linework a lot, do you have any resources on inking/lineweight to recommend or you figured it out on yourself?

>>4226725
Woah nice dude, that's way worse

>>4226840
t. blind

>>4226312
yeah, don't usually do color but felt like it for this one

>>4225972
KEEP GOING FURTHER

>>4226542
I think you pushed the nose and mouth too much to the right

>>4219868
>Alternative Art
Alternative to what? What does that even mean?
>Any form of cartooning is welcome
So it means nothing, just pyw

Thoughts on this? This was supposed to be a study but I turned it into a full drawing

me too me too

>>4226957
I prefer this one over the original.

>>4226530
Blog? I can't read your signature.

>>4226957
Based
>>4226542
Shit, worse than the original.
>>4226725
It’s slightly better than original.

>>4226913
Worse than the original.
>>4226957
Better than the original.
>>4226725
Slightly better than the original.

>>4226937

>>4226998
>>4226957
>>4226913
>>4226725

>>4226985
Come on man I was already assblasted yesterday. I'm just looking for critiques man. I'm a beg. That's all.

>>4226045
>>4226046
>>4226118
>>4226450
>>4226783
twitter.com/magister_JP (NSFW main)
twitter.com/magister_EN (SFW)

>>4226804
This was like 2 or 3 sittings desu, I'm not very fast

My friend asked for an art gift and it gave me a chance to practice realism / semi-realism. Haven’t posted here in a while hehe

>>4227101
Oh, this too!

>>4227026
>twitter
>90% of posts are just retweets of other artists
I have to put in effort just to find your own posts. Are there any better ways to view your gallery?

https://i.imgur.com/7hLgBjr.jpg

>>4227007
go to /beg/ then

>>4227143
Isn't /beg/ mostly realistic stuff though? Idk if anyone could give me any advice because they're not in my niche

>>4227170
idk, I don't go there. free entry though

REEEEEEEE https://i.imgur.com/DUfvQ0t.jpg
I CANT INNTO PERSPECTIVE

>>4227116
you know there is a Media tab, right?

>>4227306
Sometimes half of it is memes or mobile gatcha games

bloodborne

Still trying to add the rain droplets to the rest of the window, trying to get back into posting again

>>4227404

>>4227404
You gotta focus on studying figures more man, you use that 3/4th perspective torso for almost everything, even in situations where it doesn't work like here.

>>4227445
Thanks for letting me know, I'll keep grinding those figures.

>>4227404
This is what symbol drawn perspective looks like.

>>4227454
I'll see if I can redo it, but I might throw this one away. I can see the issue with the torso being incorrect as well as perspective being kinda weird. I the biggest problem I had with this other than the lack of mileage of other torso views is that I lost sight of fixing the drawing

>>4227404
take my red lines with a grain of salt.

>>4227479
I respect your pupil placement. I rarely see people not point the iris outwards.

>>4227479
i love you, oshii

>>4226969
Signature?

>>4227445
Got some time to change a couple things, is this any better? Hopefully if I can fix this sketch it shouldn't be too hard to fix the lineart

>>4226474
>>4226471
Nicely done

>>4226662
aaaaa cute!!

>>4226725
>gremlin edit>>4226957

>4226725
>gremlin edit

There's something glaringly wrong with this and I can't figure out what. Please assist.

>>4227404
Very cute
She kinda looks like me

There's something glaringly wrong with this and I can't figure out what. Please assist.

>>4219868

>>4227563
>>4227563
The lighting is inconsistent with the environment in every possible way.

The shadow colors are too warm.
The shadows/light relationship should be crisp, not soft.
Theres no reflected/environmental light.
If the main light source is supposed to be a rim light from the sun. Why the fuck is there a cast shadow on her inner thigh?

>>4227597
agreed, she should be glaringly bright in that environment. way too much shadow on the character.

>>4227546
Her thighs are too long compared to the rest of the body.

>>4227546
This must be fixed, it's the biggest issue imo. Midriff currently way too short and femur's bent/super long. Check some anime refs and body proportion diagrams

>>4227597
>If the main light source is supposed to be a rim light from the sun
The main light source isn't supposed to be rim light. It's a beach setting so it's supposed to be originated from the sun directly overhead. I'll take the rest into account though thanks.

stan your local manlets with a hug

>>4227586
idk why but your work seems dated for some reason

>>4227630
back to your containment thread

>>4227631
i purposely want it to look retro. i love 80s and 90s anime, idk if thats what you mean.

>>4226119
Do u ever wake up from a long day dream and realize you've been drooling on yourself?

>>4227561
Do the feet match? I can compare for you

>>4226119

>>4227645
nope

>>4227742
yikes

>>4227546
use a fucking ref holy shit

>>4227650
:^/

closer

zap

>>4227931
I like it so far, left foot could be smaller if it's further than her right one.

>>4227941
I should've stepped back a bit to catch that. Thanks for the pointer tho, anon.

go go go >>4227989

>>4227128
What the fuck

>>4227622
>>4227617
So the main issue was that the upper leg was too long and the mid riff was too short?
I think I saw a diagram that said the upper femur was should swivel to the top of your shoulder in it's length.

>>4227527
The thing in the bottom right corner.

>>4226804
I'm sure they're also been actively drawing way longer than you, but that's okay because you're not them

>>4220371
No point to drawing cute boys if you can't /ss/ them.

>>4219953
Is this the inferior version of Norasuko?!