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So /ic/, currently I am proudly employed as animator for a Netflix series I won't disclose, but in my commission days around 3 years ago I drew this horrendous art I've never been proud. It's not the art, but my failure to make the chat bubbles "sexy"

The original commission was "I am the anon. Im going FUCK the chippetes and KEK the chipmunks. The chippetes aren't remorseful because I'm only fucking their assholes. Hope you get the idea"

To this day my colleagues say its my worst delivery in terms of the words, not to mention the commissioner HATED it. So what would YOU have written? Is it unsalvageable? Thanks for reading.

>> No.4189823

>>4189817
Ah fuck this shit Im too embarrassed to even see your responses of this crap. I swear if the first reply is a roast Imma delete this thread and not return for a month

>> No.4189824 [DELETED] 

Christ i cant take this shit imma delete the fucking thread

>> No.4189825

what the hell is this

>> No.4189828 [DELETED] 

FUCK IMMA SAY IT SO NO ONE HAS TO. I KNOW ITS TERRIBLE ALL AROUND INCLUDING THE ART. I JUST STARTED DRAWING SERIOUSLY THE YEAR BEFORE I MADE IT, I KNOW ITS SHIT

>> No.4189829

F

>> No.4189831 [DELETED] 

IM DELETING THIS FUCKING THREAD I CANT TAKE IT. IF THE NEXT RESPONSE IS BRUTAL IM OUT

>> No.4189832

>>4189831
kek

>> No.4189834

Please stop basically repeating the same post over and over again? At this rate,the entire thread will just be 'I'm gonna delete this if the next response it mean'

>> No.4189838

Is this a copypasta?

>> No.4189842

>>4189834
Deleted the posts, sorry its just I cant handle my social anxiety. Ive only shown this pic to 4 people in the world one being the commissioner. I dont handle criticism well

>> No.4189845

>>4189823
you should delete the thread

>> No.4189847

>>4189845
Fuck it Im leaving. Enjoy the thread ill read it tomorrow

>> No.4189855

>>4189842
Most of /ic/ has drawn things more degenerate (if you disregard all the /beg/s)

>> No.4189868

pedophilic, furry, and awful subject matter. 100% tasteless, no wonder you have a job with a corporation.

>> No.4189873

>>4189868
IT WAS A COMMISSION

I WAS IN DEBT DAMN YOU

>> No.4189877

Fuck this shit Im not reading any criticisms I KNOW ITS SHIT

PLEASE just tell me what you would have WROTE

>> No.4189887

aaaaaah please understand i dont have an ego, i am VERY humble i just cringe out my fucking teeth when i see my art from 2+ years back. and i want to hide in a motherfucking HOLE when people make fun of them. I CANT take it.

>> No.4189891

Now that we have this understanding please use the rest of the thread to help artists write better, including me

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4189893

So /ic/, currently I am proudly employed as animator for a Netflix series I won't disclose,

>> No.4189896
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4189896

>So /ic/, currently I am proudly employed as animator for a Netflix series I won't disclose,

>> No.4189899

>>4189896
Im not returning to this thread, bye

>> No.4189987

What the fuck dude? Are you 5? Do you have a diagnosed mental illness?

>> No.4190366

>>4189817
anon who commission is probably disappointed you didn't go full nsfw

>> No.4190367

>>4189987
He has assburgers

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4190386

>>4189823
Fuck off from this board you degenerate faggot, if you care so much about this coomer shit, why not post it on /aco/ with your kind?

Kill yourself, you think those bubbles are shameful? Your entire posts read like it was written by a 14 years old.

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4190412

OP, are you still here?

I would gladly greentext my preferred dialogue if you want to hear it.

>> No.4190484

>>4190412
Im here anon, please suggest your words. I just want to finally correct the image after all these years and put this disappointment behind me. Also you guys can use the rest of the thread for others, thank you

>> No.4190488

>>4190484

Weren't you leaving the thread?

>> No.4190489

>>4190484
>Also you guys can use the rest of the thread for others, thank you
Ah, yes, thank you. I really needed a thread like this, very useful.

>> No.4190494

>>4190484
>Brittany: What's on your mind, anon..? Could it be my budding pre-teen tits?
>Jeanette: You don't actually care about boobs, do you anon...? It's what's on the inside that counts
>Elanor: Anon's clearly into girls with nice round butts like mine.

Or something along those lines

>> No.4190497

>>4189817
Personally, I’d recommend deleting this image from anywhere and any place you can. Not cause I dislike it. I draw superior furry porn than you on my off days. But this commission is putting a chip in your shoulder. It’s emotional baggage. It’s like a child you don’t want to raise. Deleting it will clear your mind and subconsciously delete the habits that forced you to make the mistakes in the first place.

Next time, draw your own speech bubbles and text. Yours looks soulless.

>> No.4190499

Huh. If Netflix hired you as an animator, I guess any one of us has a shot. We're all gonna make it, guys! Even this guy could do it!

>> No.4190515

>>4190494
This is absolutely not what I wanted anon.

>> No.4190516

>>4189817
how much was the commission btw?

>> No.4190517

I mean ok it says what it says but its not really what I meant when I asked for a writer

Im LEAVING this thread this is the last youll hear from me

>> No.4190525

>>4190516

Im not disclosing that

>> No.4190527

>>4190515
Aw oh well.
Writing that gave me a stiffy, uh

>> No.4190533

this thread is hilarious.

>> No.4190624

>>4189817
What is wrong with you? I thought this was actually a meme for a bit before reading your actual post.

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4190650

whats the point of replying in a thread if op wont even be around to read his roasting.

>> No.4190675

>>4190386
Anime girl vomiting coom like how op is vomiting autism on /ic/

>> No.4191793

>>4190525
He payed at least a couple hundred lol

>> No.4192363

Your brain on Corporate COOM.