/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I already am

smol

I originally wanted to make the boobs look natural and soft, turn out they're fake and hard af, any ideas?

>>4145431

Their too inflated and circular to be flopping like that.

>>4145433
maybe they're fake boobs

>>4145434

Wasn't that the posters complaint tho

>>4145394
BEGONE FATPOSTER!

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>>4145518
Wow thanks a lot anon, their shape and form are clearly better

>>4145394
Why tf does the person who makes these threads feel the need to bring up their feeder fetish. This happened before and I'm thinking it's the same guy.

>>4145431
THAT FACE
AHAHAHAHAHAHA

>>4145535
Judging by the filename I think it’s the same guy who was spamming Nazi anime girl threads a while back.

>>4145535
Just report and hide the thread, it doesn't matter if it is the same guy or not.Make a proper thread and let the spam threads die.

>>4145431
Ouch. Study how pelvis and boobs works.

designing is my passion!

>>4146024
Love your work.

For C&C, I think I'm blowing out too much the glow but I feel it gives more punch like that.

>>4146024
i love your work already, it’s so fluid and cool. do you have a blog?

>>4146032
Awesome stuff!


conveying underwater is kind of weird...

>>4146024
Love ur'e poses anon...
>>4146072
this is awesome too, good job

>>4146080
maybe try to unify the colors of the character a bit more? i never drew underwater stuff but that's the first thing that comes to mind seeing the drawing

>>4145394
his stomach looks like an inverted tiddy

>>4145394
Reported
Saged
I'll make a new, proper thread without this autist spamming his shit and ban evading

>>4145431
>body paint
>derp
>tits gravity 0
> pelvis missing

if you werent a fucking faggot and take the crits you could improve a lot too bad you only listen to ass lickers

>>4146034
thank you!!
>>4146075
thanks! yes its called @Rushkyuun tho beware my style of drawing changes alot im just experimenting a lot..
>>4146081
thank you!!!!!!!
>>4146080
i love this! you really do have an interesting style and ur pieces are always interesting keep up the good work !!

>>4146032
Your stuff is pretty amazing

>>4145431
fixed it for you

I keep trying
please critique :(

>>4146161
Practice your lines more.
Try doodling something without any pressure, just letting your arm flail freely, do this at least once a day

Did these more than a year ago when i was just getting started in digital drawing.
Didn't use any brushes in here because i was still unfamiliar with it so i just did it like i would traditionally

needless to say it took me forever to finish them

Man, Inktober has been a godsend. Being pushed towards a complete piece every day, I've progressed more this week than the last month.

>>4146024
Mm now das some good anime

>>4146161
I prefer the original.

Practice a lot of poses that have foreshortening elements on them. Anatomy is another thing to keep in mind.

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>>4146185
thanks guys
also i do always notice the flaws, I just like to get a second opinion :)

>>4146185
lol

And that's it for this, came out okay part there's some parts I just couldn't figure out.
Took too long on this, back to studying for a while

/alt/ is fucking trash now, its just people sucking off anons that draw anime and ignoring everyone else. Your all fucking faggots and should be ashamed of yourselfs.

Went ahead and flatted the cute loli

>>4146442
listen man, i was not lucky in life and got the incel genes
all I wanna do is learn to draw hot anime girls and hopefully earn some bucks so that I dont have to get a normie wage job

How do you guys find motivation? I haven't been feeling it lately.

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>>4146032
you're too good for /ic/,,,,,,,,, leave before you're corrupted into being an anime shitter like everyone else in this garbage thread

>>4146442
this, what the fuck happened to you /alt/fags

What is the difference between /alt and /asg?
Because I just see anime

>>4146442
t. seething no one likes his shitty non-anime art
get with the times old man

>>4146980
this just proves that animefags draw more than westernfags...

How am I doing, friends?

>>4146442
>>4147021
I imagine a lot of people are avoiding this thread because of the fat fetish op

>>4145431
This "anatomy" is what happens when you trace everything, kids.

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>>4146177
Those look pretty neat

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>>4146866
Update.

>>4146921
Nice one gains gob

uhm I don't really remember where I left off from last time so i'll just post this much

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>>4147403
cute!

>>4147400
my fav fren

painted this dude

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>>4147403
one more!

>>4147628
talent, but untrained

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>>4147711

loomis please

One day, when I’m more skilled and ambitious, I’m going to redraw some fanart for this movie and match it to my fascination perfectly. For now this is all I can manage though

>>4147796
Your shit's always really cool Anon.

What software brushes do you use?

>>4147847
Thanks man, i just use the default pen brush in TVPaint and a custom one i've made with that same pen brush for colour texturing

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>>4147862
I imagine the sketch for this was really cute but it's pretty clear that you don't really understand light and shadow as a concept. If you study more you will probably create some really great stuff.

Finally got my bf watching BB after like 11 years.

Finally got my bf watching BB after like 11 years.

>>4147911
Why is it fucking sideways I rotated that shit.

>>4147899
study more what

>>4147915
Study more light and shadow.

>>4147912
You didn't save it.

>>4147963
I'm phoneposting.

Trying colors again.

>>4147862
I disagree with other anon, the shading is pretty good.. also very cute

>>4148329
looks cute too anon

>>4148358
It's completely nonsensical. There's no apparent light source. Random points of the drawing are spontaneously highlighted, like the hands are randomly lit up despite being nestled beneath the sleeves, and a giant portion of the left sleeve is lit up with an independent light source. The way the hair has painted gives it zero volume, like it's been cut out from paper.

Drawing could be really cute, just needs to fix the lighting.

>>4148358
i love you extreme perspective anon

>>4148379
i kinda figure there is one main light on the right and another less bright on the left. It kinda just seems like that's what he was going for... either way i understand your point too of it being on the pillow shady side.

>>4148382
thanks anon the truth is I just don't know when to stop and end up doing these things that I have to color after ;_;

>>4148358
try to study curvilinear perspective a little more anon. everyone gets so caught up in trying to be like kjg right out of the gate that they forget how useful it is to learn from grids.
regardless your style is very appealing tough, i like it a lot.

>>4148405
i agree and will do also thank u anon...

>>4148444
I really like this! You’re doing a good job

Guys! can I get some help here?

>>4148472
With some decency

>>4148473
Does she need to pee? What kind of retard stands like that, go out and actually study real people

Another practice.

>>4148451
Thanks! Here's an update.

what is the logic of lineart?
I really would love to be able to do sth like pic related, that soft and squishy look
but I can't deduce what makes it so appealing
mainly where it shoult be thicker/thinner etc

>>4148491
Bit's fucking cute
I fuckin know how to square up to shot, but it was not my intention to begin with.
tell me if the anatomy is broken or something, cuz I literally stood in front of a mirror and I look freaking cute in that pose

>>4148491
Because it's fucking cute
I fuckin know how to square up to shot, but it was not my intention to begin with.
tell me if the anatomy is broken or something, cuz I literally stood in front of a mirror and I look freaking cute in that pose

>>4148527
Okay tranny

>>4148522
thick lines imply perspective overlap, weight, pull of the eye, closeness, whatever feeling or visual effect you think a thick line can be a symbol of

thin lines do the opposite.

A line that's thick then thin implies movement into the picture space. Implies movement in general, stretching.

That's the gist. Read books on composition.

>>4148439
trying to convey rust?

>>4148527
It looks like a mangled sanchin stance made by a complete amateur that doesn't know what she is doing.

I really dislike how the eyes look

I don't like how the eyes turned out

>>4148634
anon she is beautiful and i want to marry her

>>4148631
>>4148634
then change them, dummy.

>>4148642
I tied but it became worse

>>4147862
I dont really like the hair shading

>>4145431
People giving all sorts of criticisms to this piece. But I'm just here wondering, was the chromatic aberration really necessary?

>>4148725
Actually cute face.

>>4147838
A little off topic, but how did you like the movie? I'm going to see it, probably, next week.

>>4148725
HOTE

>>4148917
I absolutely loved it! it's one of my new favourites actually- I think you'll like it. It doesn't follow most comic movie formulas which I really appreciate.

I know this art style is kind of frowned upon here, but I'm doing a collab (they did the lineart, I did the rendering) and I'm enjoying it a lot. It's fun

>>4148634
The eyes is what I loved most in this honestly, love almost everything about this one, good job

GOD fucking damn it I wish how to shade&render and make it so my lines don't look like I traced something

Cat

>>4149253
blog?

Here's a cover for my comic I've been working on, all feedback and advice is appreciated

>>4146080
blog ? I like deep water stuff

>>4149253
Furry

>>4149253
neat character design

>>4149224
cute button nose, tho

>>4145394
I prefer fat fucking to fat eating

I did this some days ago

>>4149289
Its super cute!

>>4149289
Could be cute, but hell, that's a huge cankle.

>>4149407
Yeah, I been trying to tone down more legs these days, so they don't have those problems.

>>4149253
Well, damn. I can't seem to be able to draw the same character twice. She looks so different in other poses/expressions. And she lost a bit of thickness.

I suck at faces. What are some artists whom you think draw very appealing female faces, so I can try learning from them?

>>4149528
literally your favorite anime person

For me, it's ABe

>>4145394
was going to scrap this, but decided to give it another chance.

Any glaring issues I should address before I move on

>>4148527
>cuz I literally stood in front of a mirror and I look freaking cute in that pose
well then, show us

>>4149851
Ew, wtf I'm not that gay

>>4149814
>Any glaring issues
ok let me try. do you have any sample of artist you want to emulate?

>>4148473
I think something is wrong with her head/face, I think her forehead seems too small (or cut off) under her hair to the images right side.

girl

>>4150031
Cute, but no consistency.

>>4150032
what do you mean by consistency?

>>4150002
just get to the point and say its trash

>>4150031
SHE CUTE

A week's worth of bug kemonomimi inktobers incoming

>>4150031
Cute, I like your style

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>>4150131
god your stuff is really good! I like the use of blacks in that last one and over all your characters have a real strong sense of personality with each characters, keep up the good work!

>>4149435
Try making a physical reference sheet. having an image you can refer to and check your drawing with helps a lot with getting a character to look like themselves from drawing to drawing

hey >.<

why all these retards are replying to a bait thread?

>>4150211
1. There isn't any other /ALT/ thread currenltly in t he catalog

2. Just because the OP is using some weird fetish drawing doesn't make it "bait"

3. ur dumb

What a hoot.

>>4150211
>Everything I don't like is literally Hitler!

i wish i had passion in coloring for now i will sketch forever..

>>4150789
omg this is amazing, blog?

>>4150796
This, but unironically.

>>4150811
i didn't say it ironically :(

>>4150201
The green monster is looking past and above the worm. Lower the gaze.

Pay me my fee cus fightin aint free

i hate the 'robe' suddenly

>>4150927
I was going to say this was coming out good but then I saw the bulge and changed my mind.
This is coming out great.
Blog?

>>4150924
Nice pic and good taste anon

>>4150924
this one feels weaker than your usual stuff, mostly just the face

>>4149255
That's awesome, I'd love to read it

>>4147303
Das it mane

>>4147303
wow you're actually a pretty good artist

>>4149261
pantsu_ripper

I like that too... may do more

>mfw unique artstyle finally kicks in

>>4151720
don't hurt yourself kicking in that style, cause it looks really solid

>>4151818
I quite like it, blog?

how do I into composition

>>4151847
use fibonacci spiral

>>4151847
trial and error and rule of thirds.
Being aware of horizons, and perspective.
Being mindful of lines and elements that will guide the eye.
Avoid awkward symmetries and tangents unless they're intentional.

Typicaly here there's not much to say, except that the girl and the sign post are positioned at roughly equal distances from the border, drawing a strange symmetry between the two.

>>4151847
You read books on composition and cinematography.

>>4151847
use da prienciples of poses(balance)

Thats really all you need, thigs have to balance

I may rest now...

>>4151956
About time you started drawing furries.

>>4152044
I refuse to ever stray down that dark path...

>>4150895
please post more/a blog. i love your work, id really love to learn more about how you draw

>>4151847
Blog?

>>4151818
cute

>>4152617
Ni

>>4151818
the duck lips are kimoi

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>>4152623
fucking pedo cumbrains have zero taste

>>4152649
>implying all lolicons have no taste

>>4146980
Hi jay

>>4147796
I save all your posts. Just letting you know

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>>4148329
Nice work anon

My hand hurts from hatching all the dark values lel, I’ll add some stairs soon to semi-fix the fucky perspective

>>4149185
yeah this is ugly as fuck

>>4153245
Honestly I'm honored to hear that

>>4153257
Feelsbad.jpeg

>>4149185
im diggin it i like how the facial expression is done

>>4153253
Going to rough out the remaining days up until 10.

>>4153364
um... 10 is tomorrow

>>4153282
T-thank you anon

>>4153399
blog meow

>>4153399
This is so good

Finished my pyramid head

Roughing stuff out.

>>4153427
Why are you doing them all digitally? Doesn't that kind of defeat the point of the event?

Wanted to try a more conceptual storyboard pass for a simple scene, I think I’ll paint backgrounds later today and work on actually animating tomorrow

>>4153476
Not that anon, but if saying "I'm doing inktober" gets you to draw more than usual, fuck the rules and the point

>>4153253
God this is absudly good, I really like the expression and lighting you got going on the face, and the hatching on Pyramid Head's outfit, I don't know if you've posted it or not but do you have a blog?
btw are you gonna try something to make the inside of that lapel stand out more, in it's current state it blends into the suit a bit

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>>4153404
fuck I didn't see it was finished

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>>4153639
Anon I’m incredibly happy to hear this, thank you so much!! I did struggle with James a bit because I was really unfamiliar with shading lighting that has a light source from behind the character, that’s why the details in his design (such as the lapels) just blended under one value. I am happy that you like it though! I post on @beholdnika on both Instagram and twitter :)

>>4153534
Whats going on with her nose my dude

>>4153404
Your shit is as stiff as ever. Study people in movement, or do gestures.

>>4154052
I will next chance I get, thanks anon

>>4149224
I despise your noses. Is that your style and are you sticking with it?

>>4154116
some people said they are cute :(
im sorry

>>4154153
soul

>>4154153
CUTEEEEEEEEEEEE

>>4154140
Wait, that person said button nose. Is that what you're going for? I can't see it on second glance but at first glance they always look like they're sharply upturned. Or like the tip has been sliced off. I think that's why they make me feel uneasy. Have you tried the same effect but without a full circle? Maybe just parts of a circle to convey a bulbous/button nose?

>>4154250
I can* see it on second glance

>>4153534
dios mio la creatura

>>4154250

my favorite artist is Norasuko and I was once trying to break down his faces and I made this circle as a nose cause he kinda draws them this way (little button noses)
and I thought to myself what if I don't go any further and leave the circle
dunno
just drew pic related but saw your post too late
changed the nose in paint
maybe sth like this would be better

>>4153404
Yeah like the other anon said it's stiff
But I still love this

>>4152079
http://twitter.com/wholesomeorenji

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>>4151929
Thanks. It might be too late for this picture, but I'll just call it done and move on.

>>4154153
oddly charming, just get better on fundies while still not going soulless.

>>4154375
I have no idea why, but the placement of that sign, even if it was probably the only thing composition wise you changed (at least in terms of placement), made that field feel more open, wide and, dare I say, Ghibli-esque. Not bad/10

mmk

>>4154518
CUTEEEEEEEE

>>4154462
is this better?

>>4154709
Ehhhghghghhh it's hard for me to decide. On one hand, the sign makes it feel like it's one small area (the girl and the bus stop) in the middle of a big and wide area that makes it sort of a rustic type of location for a bus stop, which I like. On the other hand, the one without the sign really embraces the vastness of the field more and makes it feel more whimsical for some reason. Solid piece either way.

>>4154709
Put the sign all the way left

悔い改めのマグダレン

>>4154709
Not him but don't.
The street sign is important because it a really good way to break off the monopoly of wide fields, countryside that's why nips LOVE using it.
Your problem right now is there's nothing for the viewers.
The girl is interesting but as soon as they glance to the right there's nothing but boring field.

>>4154754

not Original poster but thoughts on this perhaps?

>>4154758

nother take

>>4154766

now it just feels like the sign post is getting closer and closer to raping her

>>4154767

im done

>>4154766
All the way like left of her

>>4154758
This one
Need to be bigger + 3D like pic related.
The sigh looking straight at the viewer really make the whole thing look flat and make the girl + sign look like they stand side by side.

>>4154772

???!

>>4154783

i was gonna suggest falling leaves but its clearly summertime

>>4154783
Uh oh

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>>4154709
Both look worse, the original composition was fine for what it was. Not fantastic, but fine. Take what you learned and try starting a new piece, this one was really cute and charming anon. I bet you can make something even better next time.

>>4154783
I think the composition needed to be extended downward so we actually see at least some of the road that's presumably there, right now it just looks like a sign in the middle of a field and that's concerning me way more than where the sign is at

but at this point we're just talking about an entirely different picture so I'd just move on.

>>4154800

true dat

ill stuff away my crazed fibonaccis now

>>4154802
>that sign far away
Fucking kek
Need more cute autism like this on /ic/ instead of daily crab shit flinging

>>4154802
I don't think people really understand the fibonacchi or something. They seem to think if you just put stuff inside, that's it. You're supposed to adjust everything else to align.

>>4154709
Put a dead body on the field

>>4154365
I appreciate that :’) thank you

>>4154375
here's my take

wip

>>4154952
Nice signs weathering bro

i painted a copy of Salvador Dali's "Atavistic remains after the rain"

what painting should i do next? (that would be cool to own a copy of)

>>4155154

pls critique >.<

>>4152059
https://www.instagram.com/bagbossart/

>>4155218
I prescribe Vilppu for the next 6 to 12 months

>>4155232
that's a big sign

>>4155218
Thighb obviously too big but if style. I don’t know, blog?

>>4155260
for you

okay i used a reference now im sorry im sorry :(

>>4155262
https://twitter.com/dairenke_art

>>4155273
Is there any reason why you are drawing noses the way you do? They look like someone took a knife and cut off a portion. Not meant in a condescending way. It just looks really weird to me.

>>4155322
Looks nice. Blog?

>>4155340
i thought it was cute and unique :/
okay what about sth like this

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>>4155354
Reminded me of those chipmunk in chip and dale :)
>>4155322
Anon why did you break her right leg?

>>4155342
Thanks. @fuuka2rin

>>4155359
The character has a fairly tall crotch and I wanted to exaggerate the movement a bit but I think you're right that I placed the joint too high.

>>4155392
Oh, it's you! I was thinking about your art but I forgot what your blog was called. I missed your stuff. It's great.

>>4155354
I like this a lot better.

finished

A butt

>>4155657
why are you neglecting your fundies

>>4155694
Im i am studying i just wanted to create something finished I think it's important to try :(

>>4154981
finished it

>>4155707
w-what?

I guess it's done

>>4155694
>anons who think that progress happens after studying from books for a week and not by actual experience

You make me sick

This is v e r y fundamentally weak but I still enjoyed drawing it. When inktober passes I’m definitely gonna dedicate some time to studying fundies

>>4155707
teach me sensei

>>4155718
source on this? it's neat.

>>4155769
I'm going off of this
Yume 2kki Rose Church

Would it look better for her to have her top buttons done up or undone?

>>4155706
Ur legs r fucked bro

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>>4155739
kinda fucked faces and the instagram filter is cringe but it looks nice, I like the hair
>>4155846
sexy as fuck
>>4155894
yes that would make more sense
>>4156015
the outline of the light on the face is distracting and I think the stained glass light should distort more over distance. But just a minor gripe otherwise it's real pretty

>>4156015
this is the good shit

>>4155739
You could be so much more

>>4156185
I can’t help but love the filters anon, makes my feed look so much nicer haha. Thank you, you’re right about the faces
>>4156233
I WANT to be so much more :”)

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>>4156294
New thread

>>4156185
I agree that I could have done way better with the stained glass, I kind of just guessed how it should look like. Really tricky stuff and I kind of cheaped out
>>4156232
t-thank you

>>4155846
Blog