/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4133693
inb4 it's a woman near a tree in a field

>>4133709
Irreversible damage

>>4133693

>>4133693
hate to tell you dude but /ic/ has become too trash for these kinds of threads.

>>4133709
is that a portrayal of Israeli–Palestinian conflict?

>>4133745

>>4133745
do you have a stroke?

>>4133773
Yes, because of replies like this:
>>4133807
People are actively punished for making art on here. It's crazy.

>>4133826
>/ic/
>Artwork/Critique
>Critique
>?
whats wrong with my critiqe?

>>4133830
First of all that wasn't a critique, just an insulting shitpost. Furthermore critiquing the early stages of a collab (or any other work really) is counterproductive for the same reasons you don't discriminate when you brainstorm. There's literally nothing there to critique yet.

>>4133835
here is my critique on your approach to this wonderful thread (OPs contribution is great in my opinion(you make it worse(5yo child could do better and more creative work than you did(but its not behoind repair, I'll give you that(guy after you fixed it))))); you put less effort into your contribution than into your last reply. no offense, just being honest and as an art teacher an professional artist I know what I am talking about. I hope my message to you is clear now.

>>4133835
>>4133841
but for real; its not that bad. dont worry about it and go paint something nice

>>4133841
>>4133830
I mean it's a collab, if you don't like the previous person's contribution add to the collab yourself to make it better

>>4133852
I dont have teblet or photosop atm s I will join later.

it's a collab, but it is also on board called Artwork/CRITIQUE

>>4133806
Going off this.

Also friendly reminder to ignore the trolls and not to respond to shitters. These threads are always filled with:

"Hurrr you ruined it"
"Well why don't you make it better anon?"
"Hurrr you ruined it"
"Well why don't you make it better anon?"

Ad nauseam. Contribute, change whatever and just have fun with it you fucking morons.

>>4133854
/ic/ stands for I Crab

>>4133709
>Year 10XXX, Muad'Dib overthrows House Harkonnen, colorized

>>4134270

>>4134808

>>4134830

>>4134841
lmao

>>4134841
Expanded the scene a bit. Let's keep the canvas reasonably high res - there's no need to shrink it down to 1375 x 850

>>4135104

>>4135117
we can do it my dudes

>>4135442
really good, bumperino my fagoot

>>4135442
Palette switch to a more autumn feel felt appropriate. + some added deets

>>4135551
I think I prefer >>4135442. Previously the colour of the deer and figure stood out, but changing the palette to mostly reds and oranges makes it lose focus.

>>4135753
Sure think - I think it could go either either way. Here it is with the original colors in tact.

how do you guys get such beautiful combinations of colors with seemingly little effort
i cant into color theory for the life of me i just throw down colors and use the hue adjustment scale until i get something that isnt an eyesore

>>4135780
>how do you do thing
>i don't do thing or practice thing
wow

>>4135818
i don't do or practice thing because i don't know how to do thing which is why i am asking how to do thing.
what about this doesn't make sense

>>4135780
A few quick thoughts:
+i added in the red dude earlier because we had a pretty standard outdoors palette of blues and greens. The drawing didnt quite have a focal point, and one way to create a focal point is through color. Red compliments greens and blues because red is very contrasting to those and helps create a focal point.

+just like compositions, you often dont want too little or too much of one thing. Reds are the accent color. There was too little of it with just the figure, which is why I added the red floral later. Green and blues almost act as a backdrop for those reds to pop. Think about how an imbalance of how areas of color can work to make some things pop more than others.

+don't be afraid of pushing saturation

+color has value. Blue can be very dark, or very light. Some people are very wishy washy about their colors and it makes their drawing look faded and sloppy. There's a lot of weight and power to a color that is a solid midtone with some decent saturation to it.

+reuse the same colors. If you're drawing more grass, just use the same color green you've been using. The more limited the color scheme, the easier it is to control.

+try using a more opaque brush with a harder edge. Paint in areas solidly and confidently - it's much easier to control. Things can be most easily broken down into simple flat shapes.

+look up references. There's no easier way to tell how something is colored thang to just check a reference.

+ there's nothing wrong with using the sliders until you find colors that work together. Over time, you'll need to do this less and less as you start to remember successful color combos.

>>4135765
cleaned up some of the values and color palette

>>4135780
I don't know how to paint, but what makes you think they do it with minimal effort?

I don't know how to paint so I might've made this worse

>>4135442
Why did you remove the poop wtf bro, you're supposed to expand on my artistic vision not delete it.

>>4133841
>nests 5 parentheses
>I hope my message to you is clear now

>>4136074
>lol poop guys lmao poop!!
>lol i drew dicks lmao

>>4136205
literally my facial expression when i was painting over said poop

anyway i like the drawing we did okay especially the anon who painted the landscape

I can't be the last one to paint over this, plox

>>4136020

>>4136493
;P

>>4136074
>>4136205
>>4136231
where is the poop?? I cant see shit

>>4136521
It's under the red dude

>>4136521
>>4135117

>>4136493
IMO the previous values were much better. This is too dark in the foreground.

>>4137396
?

>>4137718
ehh.

poop-cover-up anon here. added a friend for the lonely devil guy.

>>4137772
The shit I drew coming out of his ass looked better that that deviantart-tier "friend" you drew. Do us a favor and delete it like you deleted the other literal SHIT.

>>4137798
child, i will allow you to add the poop again, but only if you paint it within the existing gamut. I see this poop is of extreme importance to you so i believe you can do it anon.

>>4137772
it's a mama!

>>4137821
If anything I'll delete the ugly fucking turd you drew

>>4137822
i fucking love this, made my day thanks

Weird green mountain old man

>add main parts of painting
>time for detail
>add more main parts
>add more main parts
>no detail

o no

>>4138070
this. time for zoom and detail boys. also, fix those ugly ass horns on that deer, or I swear I will do it for you!

>>4137852
the trees have eyes! and a beak i think
tried to work on the horns a bit

>>4137822
suddenly it's a divorce

>>4138188
>fix those ugly ass horns on that deer, or I swear I will do it for you!
Go ahead. It's a collab thread after all...

>>4137822
now it looks like she left him for the deer and took the children with her

>>4138206
Detail pass & tweaked several things

>>4138763

>>4138802
This is a mess and should be ignored

>>4138763

>>4138938
This is a mess and should be ignored

>>4138802

DON'T DRAW OVER THIS ONE:
>>4138938

DRAW OVER THIS ONE:
>>4138763

As some anon said before me, >>4138938
changed almost everything that was done in really weird and unappealing ways such as adding fucking white borders to everything and such

>>4139869

>>4139869
FUKCKKKKKKKKKKKKKK

>>4139869 Here, got really fucking confused, I hated this one >>4138980, not this one >>4138938, and thought this guy >>4138977 was referring to >>4138980

whew

>>4139869
>>4139871
>>4139874
>got really fucking confused
yeah, it shows. I am pretty sure everyone here was eagerly waiting for your upvotes and downvotes, retard. contribute or fuck off faggot. nobody cares about your opinion. thanks for the bumping anyway

A lot of the colours were getting lost especially in the shadows, so I added some small edits. Also the pushed background back further to help the scene read better. Please keep it up lads, this is brilliant.

>>4140353
I like your color changes, but I wish you didn't work off the guy that uses that awful texture brush. It's a pain in the ass to work from and it looks terrible.

Here's my attempt to clean things up and keep pushing it forward.

Bumpan

>>4140649
how'd you managed to fuck up deers mouth AGAIN?

>>4140649
Is this done? Should we start another composition?

>>4143256
If you want. Make an abstract comp and see if anybody follows up

>>4137772
>>4138938
It looks like the water thot wasnt satisfied with the devilbois micropeener so she goes to get some of that MDC (Massive Deer Cock)

>>4143416
make a new thread for this.

>>4144518
ok

>>4140649
milktruck just arrive

>>4133709
Cumming on that stick figure. Hot.