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Disclaimer: Please [-] the thread if you don't want your mom seeing this thread.

Share your pornographic drawings that you're working on and receive feedback, "blog ?" comments, and critiques. Please contain your autism.

>How do I get started drawing porn?
6 Steps to Improve
http://forums.hentai-foundry.com/viewtopic.php?t=963&sid=3a137456306d28694f62b26029814aeb
Read Loomis - /loomis/ link
https://mega.nz/#F!es1BSKQR!spODyd0iaQmMelGA2GscFw

References -
1. Google is your best friend. So is the Artbook Thread (ctrl+F artbook in Catalog)
https://onedrive.live.com/?authkey=%21APXa9KeUpBIoyWY&id=F9815D5579F67656%2111600&cid=F9815D5579F67656
http://www.artmodeltips.com/poses/
https://www.flickr.com/photos/sudoksa/
http://www.proko.com/art-model-poses-for-artists/
http://www.fineart.sk/photo-references
http://www.characterdesigns.com

>> No.4130644

>>4130641
UNDERAGED SKELLY

MOOODDDDDDS

>> No.4130650

>>4130641
Oh...oh god

>> No.4130757

>>4130641
Hot

>> No.4130820
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I did this a while back, just felt like contributing to a thread, haven't drawn anything NSFW in a while though.

>> No.4130915

>>4130641
>am I sexy anon san?

>> No.4130947

get ready cause this thread's like your mom, taking all cooooomers

>> No.4131148
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How do I know what detail to remove/simplify when I'm drawing an elaborate or complicated design

>> No.4131176

>>4131148
Zoom out

>> No.4131254
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>> No.4132561
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>> No.4132622

>>4131148
hard to tell that's nergigante from the thumbnail

>> No.4133220
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Sorry my sketch linework is so garbo

>> No.4133224

>>4133220
Jesus wept

>> No.4133236

>>4131254
>>4132561
How do I learn THICC proportions?

>> No.4133238
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4133238

"Heya Herc'"

>> No.4133262
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got a bit further

>> No.4133381
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first try animating

>> No.4133494 [DELETED] 

>>4133238
Why does she have a dolphin pussy on her belly?

>> No.4133498 [DELETED] 

>>4133381
The head should rock back and forth a little. Everything seems pretty stiff.

>> No.4133593

>>4133494
Why do you know what a dolphin pussy looks like?

>> No.4133599 [DELETED] 

>>4133593
Because I like to draw anatomically correct mermaids. They don't have pussies on their bellies fyi.

>> No.4134008

What the fuck happened, this thread used to be way faster

>> No.4134421

>>4134008
everyone's busy this week

>> No.4134595

what characters are currently trending that would be good pagehits to make hentai of?

>> No.4134608

>>4134595
the himbo and the twink from promare

>> No.4134645

>>4134595
That atelier game is out and that anime dark souls

>> No.4134691
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>> No.4134726

>>4134691
omg blog

>> No.4134728
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>> No.4134731
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>>4134728

>> No.4134734

>>4134728
omg and your blog?

>> No.4134736

>>4134728
blog?

>> No.4134739

>>4134734
>>4134736
https://twitter.com/Ordnance20/media

>> No.4134810
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Done

>> No.4134846

>>4134810
>nocum

WHERE'S THE CUM ONE NGHHHHHH I'M SO FUCKING HORNNNNNYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

>> No.4134878

>>4134846
COOOMMMM I need it

>> No.4134901

>>4134728
OMFG need your blog right now, please i need it desperately!!!

>> No.4134944
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>> No.4134945

>>4134944
What compells you to draw stuff like this?

>> No.4134948

>>4134945
this was actually a request, as to why, who knows, but it's fun to doodle up

>> No.4134960

>>4134944
You need help bro.

>> No.4134966

>>4134944
Gains goblin what the fuck

>> No.4134970

>>4134960
>>4134966
ah man, this isn't even the hard stuff that was requested

>> No.4134994
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>>4132561
do you ever go further with that? because if you add some shadows and lighting it could become some good shit, also your lines need a better lineweight everything seems to have the same surface , soft/thin surfaces need a thinner line unlike nails or skin squishing together

shit example of some shadows and lights i never render so it may be shit but just to give you an example

>> No.4135017

>>4134994
That anatomy is crap.

>> No.4135025
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>>4135017
you right but that's more than enough for the average coomer

>> No.4135033

>>4135025
I mean it doesn't even look sexy. She looks like some kind of orc with small head and giant boobs.

>> No.4135050

>>4135033
i know he's not going to be levels of sakamichichan bad anatomy/good following but if he add more shadows/gradients gets a better lineweight he can get some following, i have seen worse artist get a fanbase just because they polish to the point they blind the coomers from their shitty anatomy


im not defending his bad anatomy:
short arm and bad foreshortened
the pussy is all the way in front of her belly
belly button/abs are way too low she lost her pelvis
broken finger on the left hand and falcon claws grab, shitty hands in general


he could just use a ref and just work on a better polishing and lineweight and be next robutts

>> No.4135053

>>4135050
Is references the key to making it anon-san?

>> No.4135075
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>>4135053
refs can only get you so far, if you just want to draw pin ups and random anime girl posing #983616736297362 yeah, but you can't reference stuff that doesn't exist duh , if you look at sakamichi, robutts, jadf and the like they are beg-tier for /ic/ standards, but they polish their stuff enough for their coombrain audience to overlook any flaw and that works for them so it depends on your goals

pic, jadf senpai 600 patrons

>> No.4135077

>>4135033
To be fair, that's actually not too far off with the original design.
Raita can't fucking draw half of the time.

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>>4134731
>that filename

>> No.4135209

>>4134944
Haha, did you seriously go back to drawing small skulls?
SHOO FUCKIN SHOO YOU ABSOLUTE GARBAGE GOBLIN.

>> No.4135211

>>4134691
Now that's very nice

>> No.4135357

>>4134726
>>4134734
>omg
Please kill yourself.

>> No.4135379
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>> No.4135392

>>4134944
gain goblins why even
i know you are perverted but thats too much

>> No.4135398
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>> No.4135403

>>4135398
did your twitter get deleted or did you just move?

>> No.4135405

>>4135398
Add more color variety to the materials (especially the skin). All your stuff looks dead and boring because it lacks that.

>> No.4135407

>>4135405
i like his skin alot. It does not look bad for me at all. I wish k knew how to shade like that.

>> No.4135410

>>4135407
Who cares if you like it and you are unable to achieve this kind of quality. Why are you even replying?
>>4135403
Are you baiting or literally retarded?
https://twitter.com/kairunoburogu

>> No.4135412

>>4135410
who cares about your opinion then? Right here right now your does not weight any more then mine.

>> No.4135419

>>4135412
It's not an opinion lol. It's a fact. Skin has a much bigger range of hues than what Kyle usually draws it like. All his girls look like corpses because of it. That's his biggest flaw.
Just because you are beg and can't see this, it doesn't mean it's not true.
If you want to give the man advice then do it. Replying to my posts and defending flaws, just because you are too much of a beginner to see them won't help him at all.

>> No.4135426

>>4135419
i'm not defending it, i just say i like it alot. Maybe you are right about colors, i just saying there is still people who like it this way.

Is there some tut/demo for us begs if how to shade like that? I'm talking about process, did he use masks and stuff to shade boobs for example? Id it base color first and on top of that oclusion and lighted areas?

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>>4135426

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>>4135426
This one is from Kyle.

>> No.4135438
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What kyle's coloring lacks the most is pic attached.
His forms and shading are pretty realistic, but then he stumbles into uncanny valley because he doesn't push the hues enough.
It's the same with his face stylization. The bodies are drawn semi-realistically, while the faces are very stylized and anime-ish, which creates a disconnect and very uncanny feeling.

>> No.4135909
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>>4134726
@tangdraws in the usual places

>>4135211
Thanks anon

>> No.4135925
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4135925

>learn anatomy
>go to bed
>forget anatomy
is the cumbrain meme real

>> No.4135967

>>4135925
b l o g ?
l
o
g
?

>> No.4135998
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>>4135967
https://twitter.com/HonHearthy

>> No.4136001

>>4135398
Based i love you kyle youre my biggest inspiration

>> No.4136009
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>>4135998
I love the way you draw dragons and paint, don't use twitter tho but been looking for you since this was posted.

>> No.4136017

>>4136009
i appreciate it. it's strange and happy feeling knowing someone saved my stuff cause they liked it, rather than to put it in some cringe compilation

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>>4135925
Yes.

>> No.4136181

>>4134994
>>4135025
>>4134728
So how do I learn this exaggerated anatomy?

>> No.4136270

>>4136181
Plz don't, it's garbage, learn proper anatomy instead.

>> No.4136275
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4136275

>>4130641
I've been thinking of doing stylized pinups, maybe in a serial thing kind of like Tawawa on monday, what do you think?

>> No.4136279

>>4136275
tiny legs

>> No.4136282
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>>4136279
oof

how's this?

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>>4136282
As a rule of thumb, the crotch is halfway up the body. Just do some Loomis/Hampton/Whatever to learn your proportions

>> No.4136295

>>4136288
this is wrong.

the legs, from the heel to the crotch, is usually the same distance from the crotch to the neck or chin.

if you're drawing anime, maybe the legs are half of the entire body including the head, but not in reality.

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>>4136295
Okay.

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>>4136302
>retard pulls up "ideal male proportions" drawing.

>> No.4136308

>>4136282
torso is too long
chop it

>> No.4136311

>>4136307
Sorry, anon, it doesn't look like those legs are the same length as the distance from the crotch to the chin. Maybe you want to try again with an image of Peter Dinklage or something?

>> No.4136329 [DELETED] 

>>4136311
I don't agree with any of you tards. I've not posted in this conversation until that reply.

>> No.4136341
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>> No.4136351

>>4134944
is that the singer from incubus?

>> No.4136354
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4136354

>>4134846
>>4134878
You're in luck anons

>> No.4136355
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4136355

>>4136354

>> No.4136398

>>4134944
Guy's dick does not fit loomis cock proportions and girl's limbs are way too short. Read the sticky.

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>>4136351
no but that's fucking hilarious
>>4136398
girls limbs are short cause they're cut off

>> No.4136469

>>4136181
You first learn normal anatomy (and the rest of the fundamentals you need) and then you learn to fo whatever the fuck you want with it.
Fucking millenials and their 24/7 lazy mode. All you guys want is shortcuts and handholding.
If you want to become a good artist, just fucking accept that you'll have to put in the effort and it will take years.

>> No.4136473

>>4136329
It's just a fact that, the length of the legs equals the length of the rest of the body. Heel to hips = hips to top of the head.
Obviously this is meant for the average or ideal body type.

>> No.4136486

>>4136460
thanks, glad someone thought it was funny

>> No.4136489
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Commission. dick proportions would be very different if I had my way

>> No.4136505

>>4136489
You still get to draw your beloved little kids though, sicko.

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>>4136505
These two are absolutely adults. The dude could be in his early twenties with these proportions

>> No.4136514 [DELETED] 

>>4136489
finally you drew a small dick :weary:

>> No.4136516

>>4136489
>>4136510
How do I achieve this level of proportions and volumes?

>> No.4136545

>>4136510
Yeah, definitely. Our dear lambrey definitely has a history of drawing exclusively adults and this guy here is proof of that.
GTFO.

>> No.4136600

>>4136181
get a solid grasp on normal anatomy, learn body construction so you can control proportions consistently. Develop a good sense of shape design so you can bullshit the less-than-feasible parts without making things look ugly. Anatomyfags will call it ugly anyway but frankly those people are boring

>> No.4136984

>>4136341
>those feet
I like the feeling of the pose though. Comes off strong in a good way.

>> No.4137558

>>4136984
Yeah... Idk what happened, especially to her left foot. I guess I slacked off since they were 'far away'. Lesson learned, gotta fix my foot game.

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>> No.4138260

>>4138245
>What are tangents?
>What is perspective?
>What is gesture?
>WHAT IS IMPROVEMENT OVER 2 YEARS OF POSTING THE SAME SHIT OVER AND OVER AGAIN WITHOUT EVER GETTING OUT OF YOUR COMFORT ZONE?
This is your brain on autism mixed with cum.

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>>4138260
sometimes in big projects i like to take little breathers with drawings like>>4138245

>> No.4138306

>>4138269
You just posted what I described above in greentext.

>> No.4138508

https://www.patreon.com/unfairr
https://www.patreon.com/vantuziq
https://www.patreon.com/Alloniya

what makes this guys so unsuccessful?
their pics are "featured" on hentai-foundry
i think their skill is decent

much worse people make thousands more on patreon
I just dont wanna make those mistakes
are the characters they draw not popular enough?
the style is too western?
maybe I can't see their lack of skill?
maybe they don't shill themselves hard enough?

>> No.4138536

>>4138508
>maybe they don't shill themselves hard enough?
This. Plus maybe they aren't networking enough.

>> No.4138848

>>4138508
Not trying to be an ass for the sake of it, just saying what comes to my mind when i open the page.

>https://www.patreon.com/Alloniya
Colors are dirty and non appealing, what i'm even subscribing to? There is no info (don't expect me to read paragraphs of text) on this page whatsoever that catches my eye.

https://www.patreon.com/vantuziq
What is this header? What are those tier images, i'm subscribing to child book illustrator page to get some tips right? Again there is no info on the page, i only saw header, cute hedgehogs and "Strictly 18+" text, i'm not reading anything ofc.

https://www.patreon.com/unfairr
Cute waify, she looks like she want my dick, that's better, interesting, h'mm.
>70+ patrons

See?

In marketing terms you can say that maybe this page is for "closing" only, that customers will come from much better place where they will be shown promo materials, images, basically they will be ready to subscribe, but i'm not sure this is the case.

>> No.4138854

>>4138848
yeah the reason I posted these 3 is that as I said I saw them on the "featured" section of Hentai Foundry and really their art was quite sexy, viewed tens of thousands of times

>> No.4138905
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>> No.4138918 [DELETED] 

>>4138508
Marketing and poor judgement of which rewards people should have.

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>>4138905
stop chicken scratching!

>> No.4138927

>>4138923
this gave me nightmares thanks anon...(also what anime?)

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>>4135432
Thanks, anon. Been looking for something like this. So people use masking to shade different areas, like belly etc. and control hard edges and soft edges. I see.. Now i probably need to learn how to shade. Turns out even i know the technical method, without some underlying knowledge it looks like shit.. My is right, Left is from guide.

>> No.4139097

>>4138245
wtf is going on there???

>> No.4139208
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4139208

how do i make this shit look good color wise

also how do you guys make sure your final product maintains gesture? I try my best to emphasize gesture in the beginning but when I go to fix the poses up, they get stiffer

>> No.4139237

>>4139208
Just coom

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last of the Tio's

>>4134994
There's only so much I'd be willing to do for a doodle

>>4136181
learn the basics of anatomy and proportioning first, then start mix and matching proportions according to how horny you are at the time

>> No.4139530

>>4139269
>doodle=/=clean lines

>> No.4139535

>>4139530
for me doodle is anything that i dont put my back into, some would call it rkgk

this leads to a lot of inconsistent quality from piece to piece but i've gotten used to jumping into what some would call lineart as soon as possible

>> No.4139700 [DELETED] 

>>4139535
>for me doodle is anything that i dont put my back into
Doodle is not a term for you to personally define

>> No.4139770

>>4133220
C-Carl Wheezer ...a-and Ms. Fowl?!

>> No.4139796

>>4139097
a giant man, using a petite amputee girl as a wearable cocksheath, testing whether her fat tits can give a boobjob to her cock bulged belly

>> No.4139862

>>4139796
I wondering how do you come up with these ideas.

>> No.4139867

>>4139862
Autism.

>> No.4139872

>>4139862
i simply try to imagine ways to use the hyper sexual nature of my art in situations that would be cool, like using your own hyper full balls as a water bed to pound a twink stupid on

>> No.4139890

>>4139700
ok guy

>> No.4139904

How can I get someone else to sketch up some porn for me then I finish the art?

>> No.4139923

>>4139904
Develop a multiple personality disorder and have your other other self do the sketch.

>> No.4140159
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clothes are seriously my downfall.

>> No.4140161

>>4134944
i used to talk to a girl who was into this she was also into hucow it was derranged as fuck

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happy #horsedicktuesday

>> No.4141615

>>4141602
>furry

MOOOOOOOOOOODDS

>> No.4141616

>>4141602
Blocked and reported

>> No.4141770

what do hentai artists reference when drawing assholes? because if it’s the most obvious answer, that would mean...

>> No.4141791

>>4141770
Yes Steve. You've been looking at men's anuses artists drew from the mirror your entire life. You've finally discovered the ultimate gay secret

>> No.4141811
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this is the 4th time I redraw this Image, how do I fix it?

>> No.4141912
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someone was mad at my lack of perspective in my last doodle

>> No.4141919

>>4141912
You don't draw vaginas as often compared to dicks and it shows.

>> No.4141922

>>4136545
why bulli, lambrey is a good artist

>> No.4141926
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>>4141919
sure, but also there's a difference in detail between something i do as a full drawing and something i do as a sketch

>> No.4141936

>>4134691
Good stuff
I like the way you draw the eyes

>> No.4141971

>>4139770
Yes, thats what i was goin for

>> No.4142159

>>4141912
Your perspective is still lacking. That hand is huge.

>>4141922
He's also a pedophile.

>> No.4142239
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4142239

>>4139208
You have improved a lot since the last time I saw you friend. Good job at that!

On his particular piece I think you went in a bit too hard on the the dark spots of the AO where it clashes with the lineart, more slightly lighter midtones in the dark areas will help with that.

Otherwise you could vary the green of the dragon more. For example giving her more reddish colors could vary up the body. Reddish is subjective in this sense, what I mean is that colors appear differently based on the context/surroundings around them. In order to have the green appear to have reddish we can simply use the magic of digital tech and move the color wheel towards the red areas into the yellow-green and and yellower areas. And it will appear like she has a reddish blush and the places here she is groped. You could pick color manually or use the Overlay layer setting and use a weak red on it. (I did that one most of the body where I changed it) But do not go overboard with because it pops out a lot so keep it light!

Another thing I would change is to make her expression softer and more sensual to show more emotions, I also added her hand on the head of the guy to show that she is inviting him openly. These small things can change a lot about the entire feel of the picture. I also removed the lineart from the boobgrope area to make it look softer.

As usual keep practicing your anatomy you will improve further!
Did this help?

>> No.4142363
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Don't think it can be critiqued properly, and I know I fucked up legs a bit. what do you think still?

>> No.4142675

>>4142542
who was in the wrong here?

>> No.4142677

>>4142363
why is it so shaky?
Anyway it looks unfinished unless you're going for this style

>> No.4142773

>>4141912
Sorry Gains Goblin but your perspective is awful and your style still really unappealing.

>> No.4144513

>>4142675
>who was in the wrong here?
you

>> No.4144516

>>4141926
I still say it shows

>> No.4144928

>>4142363
are you drawing for ants? draw bigger imho

>> No.4145000

what killed this thread? the last ones only lasted like 12 days, this shit has the same and is only 150 posts in,lol

>> No.4145020
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4145020

drawing this

>> No.4145227

>>4145000
you and the other people that aren't drawing.

>> No.4145258

>>4145000
I don't want to post my work in the same thread with that goblin, it's disgusting

>> No.4145261

>>4145258
Same.

>> No.4145287
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4145287

uhhhhh

>> No.4145291
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4145291

>>4145287
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

>> No.4145292
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4145292

>>4145291
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

>> No.4145419

What software do you guys find works best for drawing porn?

>> No.4145442

>>4142239
How did you know it was me? I appreciate your help and detailed description. Thanks for the tip about how to vary hues, it seems obvious to me now but I didn't know it was that easy.

I tried overpainting it again while following your advice but I found myself constantly looking at yours instead of thinking about what to do. I don't think I know what I'm doing so I'll probably either scrap this or come back to it later. I'm always scared of overpainting some particular detail that looks good or changing something for the worse, so my attempts are often underwhelming.

Do you use pen pressure for opacity/density? I find that having it on makes for some ugly semi-transparent brushstrokes when I'm trying to add some extra mass outside of the lines, or it just looks blurry. Using a brush with 100% density is annoying as well though, since you really have to be careful with the colors you pick or a stroke you make will end up looking out of place.

Thanks again for your help. I still need to study a lot more before I can paint whatever I want

>> No.4145530
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4145530

>>4145442
>How did you know it was me?
I took a guess from the previous pic related since it looks quite similar.

I do use density pressure both on airbrush and the square brush I think it was you that I showed my brush settings on the Towergirls dragon yuri image but could be wrong. If I am wrong I can repost it for you. You are right one needs to practice with using pen pressure to utilize it fully. It can be some ugly brushstrokes, you could try pressing lightly or fiddling with the Anti aliasing to achieve desired result.

I totally feel that feeling of overpainting some details, that is a constant feeling once one is doing the fine details, one get unsure. Just use layers to create different versions over the old then take a break and and come to see which is better.

Do not worry just practice more pay attention on the edge hardness and you will get the hang of it eventually.

>> No.4145539

>>4145292
Now this, this is some good shit, but maybe get rid of her beer belly.

>> No.4145597
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4145597

drool

>> No.4145670

>>4145287
bruh this is ep[ic

>> No.4145683
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>> No.4145705

>>4145258
understandable

>> No.4145721

>>4145287
>>4145291
>>4145292
amazing
blog?

>> No.4145871

>>4145292
Is your goal to some day make it as a (smut) illustrator?

>> No.4145901
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4145901

anatomy and proportions are hard >.<

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on the last thread here some guy FUCKING lied... he make this corrections but...

>> No.4146631
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>>4146627
he put her eyes to far apart from each other! now she looks like a frog. this is how it looks correctly.

>> No.4146652
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4146652

drew this from ref

>> No.4146655

>>4145287
OMFG plz blog right now, i'm dying here, i need your blog so bad!!!!!

>> No.4146662

>>4146655
wtf.

>> No.4146680

>>4146652
Pretty good.

>> No.4146686
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4146686

>>4146631
and another one! uh I would feel a bit ashamed now.

>> No.4146687 [DELETED] 

>>4146627
>FUCKING lied
>>4146631
>now she looks like a frog

You're implying I knew she was a character from some obsolete series, and according to you, the majority of people look like frogs. The eyes being an eye width apart is a rule of thumb so your characters don't look like they have some congenital disease from inbred parents. The art style of the show is objectively bad now that I'm seeing it, and doesn't do it any sexual justice.
Go ahead and draw her on model, but that doesn't change how unappealing that stylistic decision is.

>> No.4147017

>>4146627
>>4146631
The guy's version is more correct. You are an idiot.

>> No.4147018

>>4146686
I would feel ashamed if I knew that series and thought those eyes in the original looked good. Go away, brainlet.

>> No.4147096 [DELETED] 

>>4133381
PLEASE tell me this will be a buttjob scene

>> No.4147105

>>4147096
GTFO Dickbrain.

>> No.4147117
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>>4145539
as kamiya once said, they ain’t comin off

>>4145670
>>4145721
>>4146655
danke
nellipher on twitter

>>4145871
at this point in my life i’d be ecstatic if i could make enough from doing art on the side to afford health insurance

>> No.4147134

>>4147117
I don't remember Kamina saying anything like that, unless you didn't fuck up his name and you meant Kamiya as in the hack fraud Hideki Kamiya.

>> No.4147198

>>4147117
>at this point in my life i’d be ecstatic if i could make enough from doing art on the side to afford health insurance
Then stop drawing pedo shit. You will never make it if that's the only stuff you are known for.

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>> No.4147417

Did the forced coomer meme really killed this thread

>> No.4147429
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4147429

doing lewds for the first time

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4147482

>>4147299
Speaking of furry. I know it's /beg/ tier but I'll fix it in post.

>> No.4147493 [DELETED] 

>>4147429
Anon please give me a blog/name, anything.

>> No.4147508
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4147508

I really need help with the eyes not looking super goofy/tardy. if anyone is willing to help redline that for me i'd appreciate it because i'm not sure how to go about it

>> No.4147514

>>4147508
so you're doing porn now? will it feature Zach?

>> No.4147520

>>4147514
who tf is zach

>> No.4147538

>>4147520
You don’t know who Zack is?!

>> No.4147625

>>4147134
i-i really like his games ;-;
stylish character action is my favorite genre

>>4147198
i don't, is jus size difference, i proportioned her to be like 8-9 feet tall cause giants are cute

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>> No.4147795

>>4141926
>tee hee I don't care what people think
>here's my shitty OC
>gosh my fetishes are just so shocking lol
>I-I'm purposefully bad at drawing I'm saving effort
Its like you're every shitty part of /tg/ and /ic/ at the same time.

>> No.4147816

>>4147482
I think I know that artist your influence by. She keeps deleting her accounts.

>> No.4147833

>>4141811
seems fine, except for composition: the background is too noisy and bright

>> No.4147902

>>4147816
The only furry artist that I follow is the one that got #metoo’d but got jail time without any evidence.

Post link of the artist you’re talking about.

>> No.4148083

>>4147625
You do realize he didn't do any of the good games in his own series', right? like he directed DMC 1, the 2nd weakest of them all, it's only better than DMC 2, which is sad. Bayo 2, which is better than 1 wasn't directed by him either. Or remember when people had said DMC 5 had been in development since almost right after DmC Devil May Cry had failed, and somehow, the character for Platinum's game scalebound looked like Nero, but with short hair, and talked like Nero from 4? Pretty crazy, almost like, Kamiya and his team for scalebound saw Nero concept art for DMC 5 and tried to copy it and use the design before the king Itsuno could release his game. Pretty crazy, lad. Pretty crazy.

>> No.4148120
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>> No.4148123

>>4148083
>>/v/

>> No.4148222 [DELETED] 

>>4147117
>nellipher on twitter
I've been following you for over a year now and you haven't posted anything. You've really improved and I would happily reblog your sketches if you posted them. :/

>> No.4148225

>>4148222
>:/
Not him but you sound like a whiny passive-aggressive cunt.

>> No.4148229

>>4145020
sorry is this meant to be a human being

>> No.4148230 [DELETED] 

>>4148225
>>:/
Look who's talking :o

>> No.4148278

>>4148230
>he doesn't know what greentext is
>unironically uses emotions
Underage retard detected.

>> No.4148288 [DELETED] 

>>4148278
I like using emotes. Everyone uses them, they're just "reaction images" now, dingus.
On a side note that goes with my original post though, I really do enjoy his art, but if he wants to succeed he really should be posting it on places besides 4Chan porn threads. I have about 20k-ish followers on Twitter and I wasn't joking about retweeting it. It's sad I don't get to see more of his work solely because he thinks it's "not worth" posting.

>> No.4148298

>>4148288
>le dingus
Stopped reading there. Make sure you get good grades in school and go to bed on time.

>> No.4148342

>>4147625
>i don't, is jus size difference, i proportioned her to be like 8-9 feet tall cause giants are cute
Nobody will ever buy this kind of BS.
It's such a shame seeing promising artists like you and lambrey throwing away your future. You guys really need help.

>> No.4148348

>>4148298
That's marmalademum you are talking to. You 4chan basement dwellers should really rethink your whole edgy "you have to talk like we do in order for us to allow you having a conversation" bullshit. GTFO retard.

>> No.4148354

>>4148348
Literally who?

>> No.4148368

>>4148354
An artist that's been around here for a long time, so they aren't a normie or outsider, like you/that anon is trying to portray them.

>> No.4148418

>>4134731
The way he squeezes her arms is kinda harsh. He's breaking her bones right there.
Also his forearms muscles are a little too flat.

But overall, I like it.

>> No.4148446

>>4134691
Good good

>> No.4148554

>>4139269
Well, it's good to see that indistiguishable, boring sameface on every one of your 'doodles'. Learn how facial expressions work.

>> No.4148603
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>> No.4148616

>>4148603
I feel like the chin is too recessed unless you are going for a kind of monkey look.

>> No.4148868

>>4135379
I like it! Do you post on Twitter?

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4149002

>>4147493
I don't have much in terms of NSFW content so
I guess I'll plug both my SFW stuff and NSFW.
https://twitter.com/SubuLewds
https://twitter.com/SubuDraws

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>>4149002
Forgot the full file.

>> No.4149004

>>4135410
woah, chill douchebag!

>> No.4149133
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4149133

>>4147755

>> No.4149165
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4149165

where do I draw nips?

>> No.4149226
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4149226

I'm not an artist, but why do so many people draw light colored hair characters with black pubes? I rarely ever see the carpet match the drapes and it kinda annoys me.

>> No.4149230

>>4149226
because often the carpet doesn’t match the drapes irl kek

>> No.4149238

>>4149230
Is this a meme among Japs? All light haired characters just dye it? So many artists do this.

>> No.4149334

>>4149002
>>4149003
Welcome to the dark side, subu >:)

>> No.4149375

>>4149334
Oh hai Mat-
Err, I mean Ordnance.
:)

>> No.4149380

>>4149165
is she pulling her tits back? draw em up and kinda close to the hands

>> No.4149383
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4149383

>>4149375

>> No.4149385

>>4149383
it really is the worst kept secret lol

>> No.4149405

>>4149002
>the most detailed part of the image is the cock
you straight male artists puzzle me

>> No.4151853

>He dosent cum on something to make a unique believable cum splatter pattern in their own artwork

>> No.4151882
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4151882

Critique plz

>> No.4151983

>>4151853
>he doesn't know fundamentals and how cum flow gets affected by the forms of the drawn bodies.
go away normie

>> No.4151996

>>4134691
>stocking bondage
niiice

>> No.4152000

>>4145683
cute

>> No.4152023

>>4134608
Tell me more about this twink. Are we about to get a new trap porn avalanche like Astolfo/Male Shimakaze?

>> No.4152073

>>4134691
There's a lot of character and charm to these. Nice job anon!

>> No.4152126
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4152126

is this ribcage?

>> No.4152131

>>4152126
portruding dildo

>> No.4152132

>>4152126
yes

>> No.4152135

>>4152126
It is whatever the artist intended it to be. Don't learn try to learn proper anatomy from other artists.

>> No.4152150

>>4152135
i mean it looks good, so the artist must know about applying anatomy

>> No.4152152

>>4152150
one doesn't imply the other.

>> No.4152157

>>4152152
pyw if you're implying that one doesnt need anatomy to draw good porn

>> No.4152208
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4152208

>>4152073
>>4151996
>>4148446
>>4141936
>>4135211
Happy you liked those, anons

>> No.4152216
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4152216

>>4152157
looking good doesn't mean good anatomy

>> No.4152218

>>4152208
why do you go with such a dim and blurry lines/coloring?

>> No.4152229
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4152229

>>4152218
I don't know. I get my lineart through refinement of sloppier lineart, maybe that process leaves it fuzzy? Dunno about the colors though... I'm willing to try other approaches. Here's that same thing as just the lines.

>> No.4152233

>>4152229
i love this lineart

new goal: get to this level of lineart

>> No.4152390
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4152390

WIP

>> No.4152391
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4152391

Another WIP

>> No.4152631
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4152631

I come with /beg/ tier art that I did on my phone. Havent really done much of anything digital and I suck. Do I have any potential for coomer artistry?

>> No.4152634

>>4151882
Most disguting thing on this thread, and that's saying a lot.

>> No.4152737
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4152737

k done

>> No.4152740

>>4152634
>t. gainz goblin

>> No.4152837

>>4152634
Well drawn thing you don't like doesn't make it badly drawn.

>> No.4152987

>>4152837
>Well drawn
Unironically, are you blind?

>> No.4153142

>>4152737
cool shit

>> No.4153218

>>4146652
Blog?

>> No.4153750
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4153750

>> No.4153780

>>4153750
nooo stop focusing on anuses thats gay

>> No.4153847

>>4153750
Buttholes are a major turnoff for me, but the drawing technique itself is pretty solid.

>> No.4154067

>>4153750
jeepers resize your stuff man

>> No.4154081

>>4153750
Why are your nipples always so pointy?

>> No.4154438

>>4153750
I love your lineart and rendering style, but you really need to work on your anatomy and perspective.

>> No.4154530

>>4153750
Excuse me, but where can I find more of your art? I find your style to be fascinating.

>> No.4154613

>>4153750
do you still upload to twitter?

>> No.4154623

>>4154081
>Why are your nipples always so pointy?
you cant just ask someone that, dude...

>> No.4154636
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4154636

>>4130641
Sketch for something. Gonna finish it digitally. Why can’t the computer just draw it for me?

>> No.4154672

>>4154613
Wait? This artist had a Twitter? What was it?

>> No.4154683

>>4151882

dick seems off, but I dig the rest

>> No.4154821
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4154821

>>4154636
Oh shit nvm, turns out it could but not that well.

>> No.4154845

>>4135379
>>4154636
why can't everyone at least namefag like ordnance
>>4154672
ordnance20

>> No.4154920

>>4154845
So people could shit on them on both platforms?

>> No.4154931

>>4154920
so i don't have to say 'blog' with no reply.

>> No.4154946

>>4154931
Just acquire some fucking taste already and stop shitting up these threads.

>> No.4155074

>>4154946
fuck are you talking about? i wouldn't need to shit up anything if just signed their names on their artwork or namefagged. wouldn't need to ask for blogs.
you're the one shitting up the thread by crabbing needlessly. thanks for sharing how good your taste is, retard. don't @ me next time.

>> No.4155343

>>4155074
the fact that you are asking for this guy's blog >>4154636 tells me you have 0 taste. That's all, dumbass.

>> No.4155484

>>4155343
Not him but thanks for low-key insulting me, anon.

>> No.4155512

>>4155484
not either of them but i think your work looks great, anon!! keep it up.

>> No.4155729
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>> No.4155987

>>4155729
>draw a girl
>give it a dick
Why are you homos keep doing it

>> No.4156025

>>4152126
I read that as the ilium protruding, it's too off to the side to be her ribcage. At the same time it looks too far up to be part of her pelvis.

>> No.4156028

>>4155729
God I wish that were me.

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4156122

>> No.4156164

>>4155729
hot. got a blog?

>> No.4156280

>>4155987
I'm not gay
>>4156164
fumi2moe on twitter but I only post girls atm

>> No.4156451

>>4155484
Your art is bad. Look at those hooves and lower legs. They look ridiculous.
Instead of crying improve it and you won't get that kind of reception anymore.

>> No.4156687

>>4156280
>draws (((feminine penises)))
>I'm not gay
Anon, I...

>> No.4156762

>>4156687
I'm female lol

>> No.4156782
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4156782

I drew this in pokemon art academy.

>> No.4156811
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>>4155729
I like your rendering skills but I'm not okay with degeneracy

>> No.4156945

>>4156811
Learn to draw before you attempt editing better artists' stuff.

>> No.4156990

>>4156945
Do it better and I'll shut up ;^)

>> No.4156995

>>4156811
>>4156990
I hate it, please never edit my art again, thanks.

>> No.4157001

>>4149238
Pubes are almost always black

>> No.4157047

>>4156990
I don't edit other people's art without asking for permission first. I'm not an asshole.

>> No.4157088

>>4156451
Duly noted, anon. But even when I'm at my best, all I ever get is negative reception.

>> No.4157125

>>4156811
This just in,drawing porn of men is now degenerate

>> No.4157132

>>4157001
i have naturally platinum blonde hair an can confirm that my pubes are a much darker shade

also keep in mind that darker hair colors like purple and black an green etc are often just stylized forms of black hair

>> No.4157155
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4157155

goddamnit ive been corrupted

>> No.4157158

>>4157155
I will never understand what the appeal is of randomly placed floating ghost dicks, it's fucking retarded and at the very least provide a silhouette showing the pelvis and lower limbs and by doing so would help you with the composition better.

>> No.4157163

>>4157158
Eh that's fair the ghost dicks were kinda added there because horny energy but now I kinda think that I should've just had her arms up behind her head or just straight up

>> No.4157206
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4157206

luchored.comisssions@gmail.com

>> No.4157573

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>>4157572
>>4157572
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