/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4126508
Inb4 "hey that's my art piece"

>>4126105
Like em thicc, this will probably turn out well once it's complete.

Here's my art. it's stiff and not very appealing.
What I mean is that there are pieces of art that don't show a lot of technical proficiency but have something about them that does make the art appealing anyway to capture this? In my art?

>>4126508
I tried csp instead of photoshop, feels like I cheated on a long term relationship.

WIP Selkie Princess for towergirls thread.

>>4126592
Nice composition, did you use a reference or imagination?

>>4126618
Thanks, its mainly from imagination.

Fashion girls wip

>>4126650
blog??

>>4126650
You make them look very young. Is that intentional?

>>4126657
They are 13 and 14 years old.
>>4126655
@malintfalch

Someone can advice me on how to paint skin in general, I feel lost

Last thread died before I could post :0 this was made for the witch reference thread

>>4126650
amazing

>>4126675
cute!

>>4126552
looks nice

>>4126696
missing a finger there

>>4126669
I went out and relinearted your drawing.
I suggest practicing with clean cell shaded skin and then soft shade and smudge it to your liking, also use different undertones in the shading to create atmosphere, it all depends on the look you're going for.

>>4126592
Damn nice, blog?

>>4126705
Bunny tails are farther back than that usually directly above it’s ass if I recall correctly

>>4126900
I got sloppy with the placing aha, thank you for telling me

>>4126900
Are you a vet, anon?

>>4126904
I like biology alot

>>4126903
No problem it’s a good piece otherwise though

>>4126912
I see

>>4126914
Thanks anon :]

trying flying demon girl

>>4126966
Her thigh should be longer and I heavily suggest reworking the foot, cute though, good luck anon

oof

I've seen you post your shit in most of the discords I'm in
I admire your work ethic so I decided to have a quick stab at how'd approach this. The main issue is that all of your stuff is way too stiff and the facial features end up looking really off in terms of perspective due to you being confused in your style. Also you tend to overdetail everything (mostly the hair) which doesn't leave much room for the eye to rest. If you want to go detailed, try studying other artists in how they approach designs for a good idea of this.

>>4127003
post was meant for
>>4126106
Btw, are you hardstones mcflintcock? I feel like I've seen you draw porn before that didn't have these issues

>>4126508
Been doing Norman Rockwell stylization studies using Ghibli characters

>>4127008
And here's Chihiro

>>4127009
How do u get good at rendering

>>4127008
>>4127009
I's say work on your hands and edges a bit. Norman Rockwell studied Leyendecker who was known for his tight, sharp value structures. Norman has a bit of soft edges here and there, but it's not as muddy as what you have.

update

>>4126880
Thanks, @coffee_reno

>>4126669
Dont just darken the shades, raise the saturation and depending on the environmental light adjust the hue. For starters I'd start with more pinkish colors for the shading.

Trying to learn anime

>>4127077
Sugui anon san! Bloggo desu?

update2

Any criticism? like what to do more of and less of.

>>4127133
shes cute desu
blog?

redid face

>>4126973
btw forgot to thank you for reply

>>4126592
Fix the hands.

Tried to draw an elf. I’m terrible at hands

>>4127133
>>4127133
You should render the shirt a bit more; it seems rough compared to the face and hair
You should also be a bit more thorough when coloring the lineart
very cute though

>>4127171
Drew a succubus and her husband

>>4127220
Your works reminds me of that anon who draws religious imagery and big tiddy anime girls

>>4127008
Now she looks like a white girl.

>>4127155
wtf

More fashion stuff.

>>4127008
I feel you should focus less on rendering and more on drawing, there's a lot of areas in these picturea that show you don't really have an understanding of the forms of what you're painting. Kiki's hands, legs, and feet and Jiji all look really messily done in a way that indicates you don't understand the 3D shapes of them. Are you using a photo reference for these, as Norman Rockwell did? If not I think you should spend some more time painting and drawing from reference so you can better understand what it is you're trying to draw

>>4126552
The pose is pretty energetic, so this piece doesn't really strike me as very stiff. If I were to make suggestions based on this piece though, I would say try to work on more dynamic composition, and maybe different settings/backgrounds. That can really do a lot to make a piece more interesting and engaging. It could even be something abstract to not draw much attention away from the figure, just something to complement the energy.

If you want to change the style of your rendering to add a bit more interest, you could try to loosen up your lines a bit to emphasise movement and character. Your colours are pretty nice, but you could experiment with complimentary colours or alternative lighting.

>>4126556
Made a more focused version, anyone feel like this visually communicates better?

feel like this ended up all over the place, was fun nonetheless. Thanks to all who gave feedback.

daddy

Tried Ukiyo-e for the first time. This was a request by a friend (I don't like HP nearly as much as she does).
I know the kanji suck and line width is non-existent, but I drew this on my shitty Galaxy Note 5 and resolution was pure ass.
Other than that, let me know what you all think!

Tried drawing Asuka with reference. Loved the original illustration, I was in awe of it the whole time while drawing so it really put me in my place aha

>>4127620
I don't like the contrast of the black linework with the light bluish grey skin but the rest looks very authentic and cool.

>>4127625
Great stuff. give blog pls

>>4127665
Ty anon :] beholdnika on Instagram

>>4126552
I also struggle with stiffness in my drawing as well as with them being appealing.

There are two problems to tackle here, first off the stiffness. I have been studying the past few months a way to improve the dynamism of my drawings, the way to do it seem to be primarily
practicing gesture drawing and dynamic poses from photos or drawing from artists you like.

In the example I made based on your drawing I exaggerate the pose and also tried to get more curves out of the figure, which can be seen in the comparison between gestures.
You drawing has also problems with balance since the character has more mass in front of her body than in the back in that position, making it look like she can't hold that pose longer than a fraction of second without losing her balance.

The second problem is harder to grasp for me, i still haven't found a way to make my drawings more striking,
some things I can recommend at this moment are:

> Make the character face more expressive (a simple front face with a faint smile is dull).

> The use of perspective/foreshortening in the figure seem to give the drawing a lot of appeal, for example in this case making her front leg be in first plane or changing the position of the viewer from botton to top might improve the drawinfg overall composition making it more interesting.

> Draw several gestures and sketches of the figure you have in mind in different position,angles and perspectives, then choose the one has more appeal to you. going with you first sketch is not always the best choice.

>
Improving your rendering skills, the way a drawing is painted can draw a lot of attention to it, the colors, the contrast of values, etc. Is not uncommon to see artists with poor construction skills, but fantastic rendering that can fool people thinking they are the best there is.

Sadly, I can't show examples of this since as I stated before, I still have a lot of problems making my drawings appealing.

I hope this was helpful.

>>4127627
Oh fuck, you just reminded me I was supposed to color the lines!
Too late now (ー_ー゛)
Thanks for the complement! I'm proud of the result for once lol

>>4127133
This is personal preference but I think your choice of pallette is both sickeningly oversaturated as well as lacking in cohesion.

If I'm having trouble getting my pallette to be cohesive usually I find that throwing a single-tone layer set to overlay helps to highlight where I'm fucking up.

also wanted to draw Asuka

>>4127715
proportions are off, try using a reference next time if you aren’t already to get a better hang of the figure

>>4127740
hmm yes i went too wild with that
maybe this is better

>>4127774
Anon is saying ur anatomy is poop

>>4127775
ok i understand
sorry i will work on anatomy

>>4127714
>>4127133
>http://gurneyjourney.blogspot.com/2011/09/part-1-gamut-masking-method.html

Practicing expressions, it's probably coming time for me to get back on studying faces and bodies again

>>4127961
Mind if I ask what, if anything, you're using to study expressions? It's something I need to do but the resources haven't been as easy to find as other stuff.

Also love the teeth. It's a great tie-in for the characters backstory/alternate form/thing

here

>>4127995
Thanks, anon. I mainly try playing around with shapes and angles, and whenever I get stuck I try looking at the works of artists I like for inspiration, mainly Trigger artists. Also have a mirror to make faces in for reference helps me.
This guide has also always been helpful to me when trying to think about expressions.

>>4128031
Thank you for the considered response anon and thank you for posting that pic. Saves me from having to google it every time I need to reference it. xD

>>4128017
Loving the face.

>>4126552
Sorry about giving up on drawing foot.

Gesture-anon had a point with their drawing about how to make your pose more dynamic but they failed to draw it properly. He was very right about her weight feeling very much to the left, to the point where it looks as though she is falling backwards.

You have double the amount of lineart you need showing in this drawing. You dont need any on her shirt to indicate wrinkles- thats what all your painting is for! I would also consider lightening your lineart significantly. Try doing some paintings without any line-art at all, homestly.

>>4128079
Blog?

Haven't coloured it yet, but I wanted to do one of those 'modern witch' pictures that usually start flooding in around fall, such a comfy aesthetic.

debating adding color or not.

>>4128125
Honestly it looks nice enough as it is, I think adding colours might just complicate the nice tone you've got going.

>>4128125
I really love this

>>4127536
>>4127014
Yeah, you guys are right. Thanks!

>>4128125
I love this but it looks like nothing in the thumbnail. I would make things slightly brighter.

Lately I paint the imagine in black and white and add color with different tools. Sorry for the huge file.

>>4128175
fascinating

just your average hellspawn getting in trouble with the judge man

2b asuka
i jumped in my chair and came a little when I got this idea

colored this pen drawing

Hello /alt/ it's been a while.

>>4128508
colored this too

Slave mines of Kesseltob.

>>4128619
I wonder, have you ever been a DM and used these illustrations in a session?
also, great work on this one.

>>4127678
Your figure drawing is incredible

a drawthisinyourstyle

>>4128175
gorgeous
>>4127961
love the one on the middle right

ending this cause i have no idea what i'm doing
need a better workflow and more patience before adding colors/shading/rendering
and ofc much more figure and anatomy practice

>>4126650
Cool I like it! Here’s my WIP anon

>>4128619
dem slaves a cute!

>>4127778
Not op but you shouldn’t apologize for posting your artwork. That’s what we’re here for anon, to ignore the crabs and get valuable critiques. So when you improve upon it you can come back and post your amazing art

>>4128798
sometimes I don't know how to respond cause I'm afraid of sounding like an asshole

>>4128805
I FEEL you so much. Social interaction has just been weird for me the moment I got into middle school. Then it was a whole new thing and ever since it’s been tough to socialize but still you shouldn’t let people walk all over you or just feel bad man. Take it in stride

>>4128619
Blog please

>>4128197
Cute buns. Maybe adjust the levels if you can to take all that yucky gray/scanned look. But I like the drawings, simple and appealing.

>>4128685
Cool. Love the blacks and how that peg leg silhouettes into shadow.

>>4128823

any advice? something about it feels off to me but i’m not sure what

>>4128827
needs shading

>>4128632
I don't play dnd that much but that would be a great idea!
>>4128746
no touchy!
>>4128816
https://www.instagram.com/bagbossart/

Arkkos and Krystos are a pair that can't be beat but one them gets awfully mad when he's hurried to eat!

>>4128915
Please stop drawing these lifeless eyes
I saw your art late at night last week and felt unnerved
the breasts did nothing to alleviate my fear

>>4128921
I think he's having regrets.

is my waifu cute?

>>4128921
b-but i like them
>>4128924
while my patrons are increasing, im good. And they need to increase, quickly, support me on patreon!

>>4129053
this looks like someone tried to copy firez

>>4128926
drew a space mechanic

>>4126669
yeah sorry bubba I was gonna redline your piece but I accidentally the whole thing

>>4129076
why do people do shit like this. it's so petty

>>4129076
wowww

>>4128915
I like the mood tho

>>4128527
god0 kun??

>>4129076
why 4chan filename?

>>4129077
i think they changed enough that its not really fair to consider it a paintover. is there any of the original piece left at all?
definitely a dick move though.

>>4126106
This is really great anon, the face is the only weak link

>>4126508
Oh... its the anime eyed shortstack cute "goblin" again, never seen this one before

>>4128827
The left leg looks like it's not connected to the thigh.

>>4128961
I gotta say I like your drawings but you really bombed on the nose.

>>4128482
love it

>>4129083
Extension probably

>>4129166
lol pyw bug-human. you won't

pleas feet bag

>>4129324
How come you never got back to me with the request(s)... you said they sounded great...it's been nearly a year...I don't mind or anything though

Art looks great as always. A bit dull but I guess that's just because haven't added light/shadows to it yet

>>4129334
dang it i am really sorry its just that if I can't come up with a decent idea for a sketch i don't do it and eventually forget about it... i don't remember the requests in particular but if i didn't do them it was because of that... ;_; pleas fore give me fren ilu

>>4129324
Unf your perspectives are always nice to look at. How do you lay it out on the sketch layer? I'm always intimidated in doing backgrounds like this

Hey /ic/ I'm not done yet,what needs work before Final product?

>>4129077
Ikr? Why flex on the dude? Yes you're better than him, now what?

Fucking petty. I wonder if the same thing happened to them when they were learning so now they feel like they gotta continue the cycle of cuntness.

>>4129076 feel free to chime in on why you're being a cunt to a fellow anon asking for advice.

>>4129356
a lot of boxes, horizon lines and grids... i draw the main character's sketch, then i draw boxes around it to bring out the forms and then from there i go through a bunch of layers of sketching bg until i like it, then start correcting the initial sketch's perspective and refine the details...

at first I would use a lot of perspective grids for 2 point perspective, but after a while u realize that results in really stiff drawings. eye balling it until it looks right gibs u a lot more freedom for doing funky bending stuff... just remember u can always break things down to boxes, and if you can do the box then the rest is details...

this is the sketch of a drawing from last year...

>>4129365
nose. the way you have the shadows on it makes it look beveled like a star trek alien or something. left shoulder should be further retracted too

GOD DAMMIT

EVERY TIME I TRY TO DO AN ANGLE LIKE THIS THEY COME OUT THICK
I'M TRYING TO DRAW A PETITE TEENAGER
IT IS PHYSICALLY IMPOSSIBLE FOR ME AND I DON'T KNOW WHY

>>4128489
Qt3.14

>>4129440

make butt less wide, add thigh gap, tone down the obliques a bit

>>4129076
why are people calling this guy a cunt, all he did was paint a pretty picture

>>4129447
Thanks a bunch, that's definitely better. I just don't get why I never get it right, even with reference.

>>4129447
Not him, I appreciate the effort but you kinda ruined it my dude.
The foreshortening, the hip bone, the gravity pulling down her butt fat and most importantly the appeal.

>>4129440
>>4129447
I want both

>>4129455
you just had your ratios a bit off
notice how her hips are the same width as her shoulders, and her obliques are basically non-existent

>>4129366
>>4129077
>>4129096
How is that a dick move and why is everyone here so fucking sensitive? I'd KILL to have someone better than me redraw my shitty art so I can see what i'm doing wrong. Go to deviantart if your gonna act like a faggot. This isn't some forced positivity safe space.

>>4129076
This is AMAZING

>>4129076
Looks nice but if you're gonna do a redline for someone you should at least show them what they did wrong

>>4129485
>I was gonna redline your piece but
>I was gonna
>I was
>but
Read his post again

>>4129373
ty for describing your process anon!!
if you had to go about it in a program like mspaint, where you can't rely on layers, though, what would you do? every time i try a more intense composition in paint, it gets so messy so fast and most of the time drawing ends up being cleaning..

>>4129487
I mistyped. I still think it's kind of unpleasant to redo someone's entire piece when they're asking for advice without telling them what they're doing wrong or how to do better, though. They clearly have the knowlege, they might as well share it

>>4129484
its like an adult stealing child's idea and making money from it

>>4129493
The same ideas are presented in the second one, just better. If you're the original artist I'm certain you would be able to see solutions to problems you had.

>>4129076
based d/ic/k dabbing on beglets

Last one, moving on.

Clean up sketch. Hopefully I won't get distracted this time in coloring it.

>>4127625
Good drawings, especially the Asuka one!
>>4128527
A nice softness to it. Good job, anon!
>>4128685
This is really appealing, anon. Blog?

>>4129584
I love your style.
>>4129592
Sick, very solid construction.

>>4129592
>good drawings
That means a lot coming from you, anon :’) thank you. Pic related is gorgeous

>>4129083
4chanx lole
>>4129077
>>4129366
>>4129534
you have really bad personalities
stop calling people cunts and stop calling artists children! thanks

>>4129638
Dorki?

I used multiple references for the middle guy’s anatomy but I’m struggling trying not to copy and instead actually understand the form and structure. I don’t think I succeeded with this one but I’ll keep trying lol

>>4129715
I like it

>>4128659
LMAO

>>4129076
Giraffe neck kek.

>>4129638
Fix that overly long neck dude.

>>4129491
That sounds hard... i would not know how to approach it either... things would get messy lole!

>>4129592
thanks man, i got ig and twitter if those count:

http://instagram.com/carlito.0000
https://twitter.com/2jumpcancel

drew a lady knight

>>4129638
>>4129076
Your proportions look a bit off desu. Even despite the character being foreshortened, her head looks a bit too large for her body.
The lighting in the painted version is somewhat inconsistent. Where is your main light source coming from?

You have your share of mistakes in your version as well. I see no reason for you to behave so arrogantly, it makes you look short sighted.

>>4129592
Are you Shinkawa?

>>4129933
Yoji Shinkawa's art looks nothing like that lol

here's a character design I made recently

>>4129940
Yes it does

>>4129965
Are you blind?

>>4129951
cute!

>>4129440
you're drawing a "petite teenager" like that? why the fuck are there so many pedophiles on this board

>>4129986
>what are 18-19 year olds

>>4129986

>danger zone
>milf zone
>dream zone
>getting blown

you can choose one

>>4126552
>>4127678
>>4128079
>>4129324
the alt thread for some reason has had some really good stuff for studying depth this round

>>4129986
I honestly don't know either. So much of the work that gets posted on here is so derivative because of this.
Every other poster is making cute or sexy anime drawings of young girls or straight up pedo bait.
Save for a handful of posters with more unusual or interesting concepts in their work, most of the original art on this board is so fucking boring.

>>4130006

i try anon i really do, but my non sexy shit always gets ignored

>>4130016

although truth be told i haven't really tried executing something polished and non sexual

>>4130022
>>4130006

but thanks for letting me know. I totally agree actually, I'm just a weenie with low self esteem so i like replies even if they're negative.

>>4129915
drew a hammer guy

>>4126552
>appeal
Deviant art has a lot of low structure high appeal drawings so go there. From what I can tell, it's largely just learning specific things that look good (memes). Things like adding a thick black outline surrounding the art, and / or a white outline surrounding the art (I do both). Having the hair cover over the eyes. Making a (usually) purple shadow for the hair so it gets a nice second color for effect. Oh and glowing effects, absolutely. Make the skin glow with some light airbrush over all layers, not just the color but the lineart too. Putting white in the center of the eye.

That and just doing stuff that you think looks good. It's usually not some big massive construction, but something simple and charming. So find some things that are charming!

Disgraceful

>>4129979
Are you?

>>4130033
polished it some more

>>4129076
Look its Shinobu poster LMAO.

>>4129933
I wish.

>>4130025
>I'm just a weenie with low self esteem so i like replies even if they're negative.
I can see that, why are you pretending to be me

>>4130050
Trying doing more dynamic poses anon, itll really level up yer work. Easier said than done, though. Im trying to get out of the habit too.

>>4130452

More stuff

>>4130454
way too tall

>>4130456
ok manlet

>>4130463
:(

>>4130464
im sorry

>>4130025
its regression-chan!

>>4130454
I WANNA FUCK IT

>>4129487
holy shit, literally didn't think you had it in you to do lewds

Didn't get any real feedback from the drawthread.
Hopefully yall wont let me down...

How does this look? Should I just switch to superflat or can this be salvaged?

went to fate grand order wikipedia
picked nice looking girl
imagined that im getting a comission

I think I’ve just accepted I like to draw cute people in cute clothes, but I wanna be good at doing that and be able to place them in rich stories and environments with correct form.

>>4130659
sounds like you need to practice backgrounds then. Also nice sketches

>>4130673
...irrefutable point, do you have any interesting references that you could share in the reference thread? Thank you for the compliment too <3

ehh whatever

>>4130679
Blog?

>>4130678
Not on me right now but you can always looks for them at the reference thread >>4102305
Hope that helps in some way.

>>4130685
dont have a blog, waiting to be good enough
in the case that you were being ironic, I understand.

>>4130745
not him, but its always nice to start up your blog, even if your not necessarily “pro” yet.

>>4130679
>ehh whatever
That is exactly why this "work" looks like it does.

The head is gigantic, I have no idea what you were going for with the arms but you clearly failed, don't get me started on it's waist.

>>>ic/beg/

>>4130659
Squeezed another one in tonight. Curly/messy haired boys are so precious, his face looks awkward though because i’m still practicing drawing characters facing the right

another godzilla chick

>>4130797
you just know

>>4130873
T-thank you, I don’t know why I’m so bad with positioning pupils

Is this structurally/anatomically sound? I couldn't find an exact pose ref so I just want to make sure it doesn't look weird.

>>4130797
>i’m still practicing drawing characters facing the right
and we are okay with this as a people?

>>4130797
>>4130659
STUDY ACTUAL PEOPLE
FUCK
STUDY ACTUAL ANATOMY
STUDY CONSTRUCTION
DUMMY GIRL HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU

>>4130928
Not him/her but I’m convinced being a recluse and an incel fucked my ability to do proper figurative work maybe I should give up and do mecha or landscapes ...feels bad man

>>4130931
I hope you make it, anon. I really do. but if you cant bring yourself to interact with other people to get drawings you're gonna have a much harder time doing this.

>>4129324

>>4130988
you'd be famous if you were a jap

>>4130990
Why would tkmiz be popular

>>4130988
Godly work, you improved since the last time I saw your stuff, but the last time was also really good.

>>4130988
Kinda weird, the girl does not match the lighting of the scene at all. If that's what you're going for it's not different ENOUGH, it just looks off.

>>4131015
I agree with that, thank you; it does look off. Not intented, it is the blending

>>4131018
come on man nobody wants to see that jesus christ

>actually post work
>get troll responses
>try again
>completely ignored
Great board you got there /ic/.
10/10

>>4131072
"git gud", as is the common parlance

>>4130551
i didnt do it retard its just a screencap of something she posted cus i thought it was funny

>>4131072
Which work is yours? I'll give you my honest feedback, anon.

>>4131079
>>4131018

>>4131018
kek

>>4131079
No, its too late now, fuck off.
Don't need your "feedback".

>>4131018

help

>>4131087
Giving the benefit of the doubt that you are the actual artist, the anatomy and forms are extraordinarily well done. The face seems a bit odd to me, but that may be because I'm used to seeing the character drawn as a child-like loli. It's ultimately a stylistic preference though, and if it's what you like, then go for it.
I feel the coloring looks a bit odd, and this is something I've seem across your works. You use a rather small range of hues for the skin color in particular, which gives it a less lively look. I feel it could help to add in some redder shadows and yellower highlights, as well as to use a wider range of saturation for more visual interest. Lastly, adding a shadow under the neck might help seperate it better from the face. This is more of a design thing than a technical issue, as I mainly feel this could help because the neck and chin are so similar in value they blend together at a glance, creating an unattractive look.

>>4131097
that's not me but im sure that other guy would appreciate it.

>>4131018
are you trying to piss me off you piece of shit

>>4131096
This is really beautiful, but the hips and legs on the girl on the right is scrunched, squashed, and small. Hips are too small, legs don't connect in correctly, and the thighs are mashed together so that they're physically taking up the same space. Also, the feet don't point in the same direction as the knees.

Really nice overall tho

Since the thread is pretty active right now, could someone just give >>4130902 a quick look?
Just need to know whether I need to fix anything before I clean and color.

>>4130902
>>4131105
The only real issues I see are his bicep to our left is a bit short, the part of his chest under his pecs/latissimus dorsi is too narrow, and the lower hand looks sloppily done. Other than that, it's pretty solid

>>4131014
Aww... thank u anon.. such nice words ;_; ilu

>>4131102
Thanks for the input. Gotta grind more on that area i guess.
This is the first time someone on /ic/ unironically called my work beautiful. Am I slowly making?

Of course not.

>>4131018
You render extremely well, but the drawing is really bad. Rib-cage is stretched and twisted. Shoulders and clavicles are compressed. The outfit looks like it was spray painted on her skin. The hips are the wrong shape and size. The breasts don't line up with the mid-line of the torso. The torso doesn't squash and stretch right. The belly-button is way too high up. The legs connect into the pelvis wrong. (study skeleton) The muscle shapes are all wrong in the legs, especially the calves and knees. The feet are drawn horribly. The ribbons are so thick and stiff they look like they're made of plastic.

Now for the face... The eyes are too big, they don't fit the eye socket. The hair looks like octopus skin, and its not even rhythmic, it just lies dead.

You need to do a LOT more figure drawing. Don't bother shading. Just learn form and anatomy. Don't be wooed by details like you are.

>>4131116
Post work, anon

>>4131118
you're unironically ngmi if you keep up this attitude

>>4131018
Good stuff as always Kyle. My favorite piece from you is still Boosette.

>>4131120
I'm not him, I just think it's ridiculous you're going so hard in on one of the most technically sound drawings in the thread while hardly anyone else gets this level of scrutiny. Kinda smells a bit crabby to me

>>4131116
>telling Kyle the feet are drawn horribly
jeez why not tell him he's the reason for his parent's divorce while you're at it

>>4131116
>The feet are drawn horribly.
This dude just went there

>>4131111
Thanks anon, I really appreciate it. I'll address those issues and move on with it.

aaaaaaaaaaaa 1 more to goooo

>>4130939
Thanks Bryan

>>4131116
This gas lighting shit needs to stop

Butt's still too big and spine is broken, but getting there.

>>4131116
>The feet are drawn horribly
holy based

>>4126552
It's bland, you need stop being a coward and do typography + BG

>>4130928
Anon I have I have I promise you don’t shout at me I’m genuinely trying to improve my anatomy but I have to unlearn a lot of bad habits that I picked up over the years of drawing on instinct and force my brain to understand form but I’m too dumbbbbbb

I’ll watch some proko and read some today because I’m taking a sick day from college so hopefully I’ll be able to actually learn something with no distractions

Saw these lost animal peep drawings in an old file, did some quick lines of em.

I remember taking a good while to draw these when the new lines were only a few minutes.

>>4131253
Forgot to add pic

>>4131255
These rule

>>4131018
>that face


stick with 3dpd, anime doesn't go well with realism

Hey I'm not done with this piece yet but on a surface level is it appealing? and what can be done to enhance it?

>>4131267
face features are too close together and neck too large

I dunno where to ask, so I'm asking here. Are there any cool /ic/ discords I can join?

>>4131269
No

>>4131269
>discord
pfffhhahahahafirst time on /ic/?

>>4131271
>>4131273
I know you all have a secret club LETMEIN

>>4131274
heres the best advice about discord only join small groups of 5~8 people

>>4128017
Listen to this guy
>>4127003
Her face looks like she has downs and your chwracter looks stiff. Also lineweight.

>>4128730
You should just give up after this much good advice doing nothing for you, you sperg.

>>4128745
Is this an insult.

>>4127028
i really like the curves in the right thigh

>>4131297
>>4130794
you are right
I tried to work too fast cause I watched too many "drawing timelapse" videos
i rushed my drawings, overestimated my abilities and ignored many fundies

>>4131161
If it doesn't look right even to you, then fuckin fix it, don't be fuckin lazy cunt

>>4130988
Mate, start positng on pixiv, you'll do well there

>>4130797
What's the difference on people facing the right and people facing the left? You better not be symbol drawing from memory

>>4130849
Incorporate the desing to the actual character it looks like you just slapped a tail and called it a day.

>>4131352
I don’t think I am, but for some reason ever since I was a kid I found drawing faces facing the right almost unrecognisable. They’d look off to me but no matter how hard I tried to take it apart I couldn’t pinpoint why they looked bad, then if I viewed them through a mirror I would instantly notice the exact errors. Because of this I just never practiced them since I found them so intimidating and now, even though I’m a lot more comfortable, they still look slightly awkward. On this topic, I noticed that whenever I make a composition I subconsciously favour the left side of the drawing and have everything almost lean towards it, when I flip it the other side looks really empty and careless. Is there a specific reason for this? Am I autistic??

>>4131018
this is something shown out of a amateur jumpscare videos

>>4130902
he's pretty cute

>>4130988
I think it would look better if her shadows are cooler, maybe a bit purple-ish perhaps? Still, this is really nicely done

>>4131225
Have you been to a figure drawing session yet?

>>4131382
I haven’t, though I’d really like to

>>4131346
It's called a work in progress, friend. I am putting it aside for now specifically because I am not being lazy, and instead working on a project I am being paid for.

>>4130157
What vomit manufacturer you use for paint?

>>4131267
her head is really small

I think it’s less the head being big and more giant fucking giraffe neck

>>4131097
>>4131018
Assuming you are actually Kyle and not some random shitposter then please give more detail to your work and use full reference images instead of half references. I know you have a foot fetish but your toes an fingers are too big, this was apparent on your Kana picture. She was supposed to be a loli yet she has sausage workman fingers.

You do your face as you want we have seen your work but I think on this one you made the cheeks overall too small and everything else too big. the head itself could also use more hair to make it look bigger so that the eyes nose and mouth are smaller.

Here you go, I tried to continue the body while playing with the face a bit.

In b4 "I made it even worse", "yikes" , "don't redline for X months" and a plethora of other awesome meme comments.

>>4131487
soulless
seething cope

>>4131487
you silly beg

>>4131487
I have to be real here, you made it worse. Kyle's was a bit uncanny but your paintover just triples that factor. This is straight out of those weird bighead porn edits.

new thread

>>4131497
>>4131497
>>4131497

>>4131487
>>4131097
thanks for reminding me why I shouldn't waste time on here

thank fuck us Aussies can post again.

>>4131522

finished this

painted my daughter again but experimenting with a different style and process

>>4129054
that is a firez drawing bruv

>>4128915
If you toned down the boobs and nose this would be a neat creepy picture. Right now it looks like the boobs have assumed direct control and are watching youtube.

>>4126508
That 1911 is missing it's hammer and beaver tail.
She's not sighting down the barrel or watching the road. wtf.

>>4133452
This looks so fucked up, did you traced 3d model