/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

"Human hunters too noisy, too CLUMSY, I sneak creep and do job for you instead yes YES?

I want to paint this next

>>4100017
Here’s the progress on this

>>4100017
>>4100019
why can't you paint young anime girls like a normal person
these post-wall landwhales are gross too look at

>>4100031
Thanks for the crit

Sup fags

>>4100017
You should work on your construction and anatomy, friend. I like your stuff but you have a lof of misshapen features. Those collarbones are a bit odd looking, and your hands and feet look consistently very lazily done. You could make really good stuff if you put in a little more effort to get the anatomy and forms correct

>>4100036
Before you yike ooferino me too much this is the shit drawing it’s based on. If anyone could redline me on concrete proportion issues I’d appreciate it. I’m not opposed to making it look like a different person, I’m not attached to the likeness of a girl I drew 4 years ago

>>4100043
Don’t redline this monstrosity redline this one >>4100017

>>4100043
this drawing u drew 4 years ago seems to have better proportions than the drawings you draw now.

>>4100046
Are you talking about her sixhead or her holocaust wrists

Is it a sin to accidentally draw dream husbandos every single time you draw a male character ;;

>>4100046
There’s an argument for soul vs soulless but those original proportions are shit tier

>>4100052
lol, that hellboy. study more males, insteed of femenine boys

>>4100120
I know, I’m not proud of the Hellboy lel. I have actually been trying to study masculine faces though so that should help me, gonna avoid drawing girls for a while.

>>4100052
I like how the guy on the far left is pointing like "DATS A TREE BITCH"

>>4100125
Thank you for shifting his personality from some level of neo-nazi to just a passionate environmentalist, it justifies me having a crush on him aha;;

>>4100131
What is it with you and nazis?

>>4100143
Not her, but Hitler was an Artist and naturally had a sense of aesthetics which he applied and united an entire country of people into a glorious display of nationalism.

>>4100143
I’m guessing this is in response to my attempt on a military goth girl. I find German military fashion really attractive haha, I think the lines between that and nazis are really blurred so uh, yeah. I guess this is what hormones do ;;

>>4100151
You're going to be the lovechild of /pol/ and /ic/.

>>4100150
Hugo Boss was aesthetic as fuck, but his actual paintings were /beg/tier.

>>4100155
hugo boss was a manufacturer not a designer for the nazis.

>>4100121
With Hellboy you need to crank the chin to 11

>>4100163
This kills the crab

>>4100169
Woah that’s impressive with how well they pulled that choice off. I really need to get more brave with my stylistic decisions huh, thanks anon :’]

>>4100187
Brrr this made me feel cold, cute anon

>>4100052
Drawing a Minotaur, trying to avoid pillow shading and focus on construction since I did some studying the other day that I’d like to apply. I’m actually really interested in creature design, so does anyone have any classic creatures/monsters/cryptids they could recommend for me to draw? :]

>>4100019
Doesn't look like she was too happy to pose for you.

I love the way you went about colouring though Hope to see you post frequently

>>4100019
>Those hands
Snip snip

>>4100019
i feel like the proportions are off. are her arms really that huge? like, they're half the size of her ribcage...

Just messing around

>>4100568
are you nosebro

>>4100569
Hope not.

>>4100568
Stop drawing like that seth guy.

>>4100568
Are you still drawing with mouse or did I get the wrong guy?

>>4100622
You need to look at more artists

>>4100187
>>4099911
Blog on these?

>>4099911
Is it good enough for /alt/?

>>4100898
looks like she got her some head

is this readable? i tried a different angle but i don't know if it's right

>>4100946
What's going on with her right hand? Looks weird to me.

>>4100946

>>4100568
I didn't know you still posted on /ic/. Good job.

>>4099973
I really like this design and your flavor text.
Do you design professionally?

>>4100031
you sound so limited as a person lol

>>4100947
JoJo part 9?

>>4100467
I made the arms smaller. It’s much easier for me to make the model bigger and reduce it than it is to make them smaller and embiggen them. Oils lends itself well to reducing outlines, one of the benefits of the medium

>>4101106
finished this layer

>>4101162
sorry to comment so late into the painting but you should fix the left arm, the way it rests on the leg. There is no weight to it, there should be overlap between the two surfaces

>>4101162
That left claw gonna haunt me.

>>4101175
its not too late, I figure I just needa do this? connect the value, extend the outline straight across the wrist and add an internal outline to indicate weight. that's a quick fix, I'm trying to figure out what background I want to add cause it's kind boring just being a chair and a wall. Maybe flowers and a window with a small landscape outside.

>>4101176
when it's dry and I can draw a highlight on the tips of the other fingers, all stuff I gotta wait to do though.

>>4100949
yeh, I didn't know what to do there

>>4101046

Unfortunately no, I just do this as a hobby atm.

>>4100153
Weird how most artists who would be associated with /pol/ views have made it. I mean just look at how Frazetta drew nogs and chinks, or how loomis only ever drew beautiful white people. Really makes you think.

>>4101297
Try to mention at least 5 from the last 10 years, you dishonest sweetie

>>4099911
just finished it

>>4101183
no man, it needs to sink way lower. use your own arm to check

>>4101276
Fuk you're so based. I'd say draw more scenes or do comics, because judging on descriptions and drawings you could make good stories. If you're happy with your job then maybe don't bother, but I'd say your style is consistent and cool enough to be a part of some projects like games (board, card, computer). I don't want to impose but your drawings are so lively it would feel like a waste not to spread them around and use for something. I just want you to grow

>>4101364
this is great man

IM FUCKING BROKE i also drew this thing

Wanted to do something with all the boys, they look a bit dopey right now though
Some of the expressions/angles are boring so I'll try to fix that

>>4100569
Actually, this artist is much better than me and I've been a fan of his for many years. Sadly, he is homosexual (or a fat woman). He draws everything with a mouse btw. Amazing guy. Heres a funny piece he made 2 years ago.

sorry there is no /beg/ up r8 now but I wanna post this

>>4101795
loomis

"Imperial tariffs much too burdensome, lets take look at Squancho's wares no yes?"

>>4101795
Yeah there is, go here >>4098733

Quick thing of my friend's oc for a trade

trying to slap on random effects and textures

>>4101364
Very nice colors, but there's WAY too many tiny lines. It would honestly look better with like... a third of them. I get what you're going for, but especially on areas like the corner of the building they're really distracting from what's otherwise a good piece. Plus, less work.

>>4101871
Opposite problem here, I'd say you could push the textures even further; they're kinda hard to see.

>>4101934
i know, youre right, i tell myself i'll tone it down a bit in the next one but i just love doing them, but i'll deffinetely tone it down now, i too feel the same anout them taking away attention

>>4101447
thanks man

>>4101871
is this copied or do you really draw like Horikoshi?

>>4101848
Ah fuck! I wish I was your friend

>>4102380
He doesn't tho

>>4101871
I'm going to eclipse you orange!

>>4101934
I want to keep them on the more subtle side

>>4102380
it's not copied but I don't think it's that similar

>>4102451
I'll be waiting

>>4101364
Unlike the other anon I actually think you should hang on those lines. They really differentiate your work and you clearly have a lot of control over their direction. Love your colors too. It's there any way I can follow your work?

>>4100947
Squint.

>>4102425
Arre you the same guy that always asks to be her friend?

>>4102473
yeah sure man, aca_of_maca, insta/newgrounds/facebook/twitter

but i've mostly been uploading to instagram and newgrounds, i'm just catching up with twitter and facebook

>>4102586
Will be sure to check out anon, good shit

Drew my friend's OC, Tried to really push some neon vibes and I love how it turned out.

>>4102801
The colors really do look nice in this! The blue accents add such a nice touch to it.

Can we make /begalt/ general?

>>4102820
What's the point when everyone here is already /beg/ anyways.

>>4102828
cause in beg you're supposed to draw realistic faces :(

recent commission

>>4102845
i hate this but good for you for making money

recent commision 2

>>4102765
love how charming the expression and lineart is but hands are a lil janky

>e-excuse me Stacy can I d-draw you
Stacy: owo what’s this?

>>4102849
ouch but could u elaborate?

>>4102425
I mean if you actually wanna do a trade and don't mind drawing my autistic ocs feel free to hit me up. I am bad at making friends but I like drawing for people

>>4102867
i have no constructive critique i am /beg/ :(
sorry i will never ever respond to anyone

What do you guys think?

>>4102880
I actually like it

Update

>>4102880
noice

>>4100031
Have you ever been with a real woman?

>>4103345
Nah man Im an incel

>>4102852
Hey man, how much have you made with those commisions?

Frogging around again

I think I'm getting a little better, I've done way better faces than this but I was happy with this, I'm sure one day I'll get to where I want to be

>>4103354
I'm not sure what you changed, but I like her design more this time for some reason.

>>4102880
>>4102889
>>4103090
thanks guys, doing some landscapes right now thoughts?

sorry, I just have sketches right now.

>>4102930
Your style really reminds me of this one other artist who used to post here. I think they drew elves. I remember a miko.

>>4103462
Cute!

>>4103466
thank you anon!

>>4103401
I like this a lot, but I feel you should consider your use of negative space, silhouette, and value some more. A lot of elements blend together, parts of the leaves merge into the clouds, parts of the clouds merge into the hill in the background, and parts of the water merge into the foreground hill. If you were more deliberate with the value of your hatching and used it to break up your elements better I think you could make some really great landscape sketches

>>4100902
K E K

>>4102871
At last a crab comes out of his shell

>>4103477
Thanks man! Really shows what some value changes can do!

What are you thoughts about this one? Bit more loose and abstract tham the landscape one

>>4103462
Reminds me of Tressa from octopath

>>4103488
I like this even more. I think if you could use all these different thicknesses of hatching in a landscape piece you could really elevate it.

>>4103464
Name of this artist?

>>4103462
cute, would fuck.

>>4103494
Thanks! Do you have any socials?

>>4103496
That's what I'm trying to figure out. I forgot their name, but they posted here a lot when I used to check the general.

>>4103491
looked up her, the design is hella cute anon

>>4103499
t-the raccon or the penguin?

>>4103494
>>4103494
you have good crits, hit me up Hauta___ @insta

>>4103521
>>4103502
Sure man, just followed you. I've liked your stuff for a while actually so it's nice to know your blog

>>4103350
$70 for the group pic and $30 for the solo portrait

>>4103506
Example of the artist's work?

>>4103598
I've got this one at the moment, but I can try finding more if you like.

>>4103636
That's Flintcock, he's the same guy who did the first image.

>>4099973
I really like your grasp on fantasy.

Some boxs that turned into a couple roboboys in the middle of practicing.

>>4103651
These are cute as hell, I love how dynamic they are. Blog?

>>4103636
He is just actually started progressing.

Welp, I finally got time to finish this Assassin Man.
Any final feedback would be awesome, thanks for the help /ic/.

Working on a larger illustration, this is just the very rough sketch. Any crit on the composition?

>>4103811

You should have a primary and secondary focus. So if you want it to look like theirs a crowd or a busy location than I think you can simplify whats focused by having a lot more overlap.

>>4103601
The lower body is slightly too exaggerated for my liking but I think it’s justified. This looks really good

>>4103936
I'd say it's okay considering that the character has a lot of leg attacks and similar shit.

>>4103811
It's lovely, but I think you could offset the two characters so they occupy more depth. Really quick and dirty sketch to get the point across

>>4104069
>>4103811
I think it depends on what he wants to focus on. The original version feels a bit more like those two characters are part of a larger picture and, while they have some focus, their importance yields to the world around them. I think that kind of composition is nice if you want to emphasize the setting.

>>4101798
I love this so god damn much

>>4102845
Pretty cool. Just curious, what are your rates?

paintings coming out shit but I feel like im learning a lot

>>4103741
if youre going to go that dark with the character, at least add a dark background to make it consistent. other than that, keep going. your proportions, posing, and anatomy are agitating, but stuff like that can be worked on over time

>>4104160
applied some of the lessons from that one to this one, think it looks way better now

>>4101467
Flip canvas?

>>4104173
this one actually looks better flipped. yikes

>>4103401
>>4102880
If you're going to throw lines everywhere, do it tastefully like >>4101364

>>4104176
The hatching in >>4102880 is deliberate and it looks great.

>>4104195
It’s just a flavor of the month style poster. He’ll disappear within the month cause he can’t draw anything else.

>>4104195
>shit anatomy
>inconsistent line length, depth, and variation
No its not, its just bad

Cordyceps. If this counts as guro jannies can nuke.

>>4099911

Recent

>>4102845
>>4102852
I like this quit a bit, I need to draw more men myself.
>>4101364
Faaaantastic

>>4104257
Nice. That's some happy demon.

>>4104257
Kino, this eclipses my work aahhhhh

>>4104248
>>4104266
guys join me in /beg/ we can learn a lot together, I am grinding daily we can be big by december

>>4104171
Drew this girl

>>4104291
blog?

>>4104269
>>4104268
Thanks anons!

i'm drunk and i love you all

How can I make this look less /beg/ I feel like my line art is really shit I just try and replicate weeb shit with thin lines but I don't do it quite right any recommendations?

>>4104352
Your much bigger problem is clothing. anatomy is also not that good but the non-existent forms of the clothing ruin everything. It all looks like it is made out of extremely thin sheets and has a shitton of nonsensical lines and shadows over them.

>>4104352
Besides flaws in anatomy thumbnail looks pretty good desu. I think the problem is that your character looks like it was paste in some background and it don't match well. There's no mood. Try to throw some gradients and effects to make her belong to this landscape. Also work on your shadows and plan where to put them next time.

>>4104360
Yeah I agree I tried drawing at an upward angle but it doesn't convey that I suck at drawing characters with perspective ,

it may not be perfect
but i finally understood how eyes work

>>4104499
FUCK sorry wrong thread

Drew an ig friend

>>4101364
straight to my inspo folder

Why does noise add so much soul to cel shaded art?

>>4104640
They add soul because smoothness is what makes digital soulless.

>>4104640
Areas of pure flat color have less visual interest for your brain to process, so you perceive them as less interesting. Adding textures and visual noise gives your brain more content to process, making it more interesting

>>4104653
I remember a video of some animator talking about how no objects in real world have absolutely even colour with no texture. Our brain automatically thinks that such objects are fake.

>>4104522
i like the arm

>>4104657
Even if you close your eyes there's visual snow you'll see and static you'll hear. I see color noise, not monochromatic noise, but I doubt it really makes a difference what kind of noise you add to your image.

>>4104522
Reminds me of a qt tattoo artist I follow.

>>4104692
Fun fact, that visual noise when you close your eyes might be actual light generated by your eyes, and your eyes are basically seeing themselves. There's something luminescent about the receptive cones, I read an article about it.

>>4104657
I can only think of this

>>4104754

>>4104257
reminds me of LDR great work anon

>>4104166
>agitating anatomy posing
If it bothers you this much, please show me how these problems could be fixed. Otherwise get lost, I don't really trust the average person on ic anymore

>>4104293
don't have one, sorry

I literally do not have a style of my own. I draw like different people constantly, i dont have a comfortable house style i settle into when im drawing for myself. this had made it incredibly hard to gain a following on social media as people expect consistency. what should i do? does anyone else have this problem?

>>4105195
Try character design maybe. Choose/create a world and create a bunch of character with short, like 2-3 line descriptions. And then try to draw them in different situations keeping faithful to the original design. Don't forget to also design backgrounds.

>>4105195
don't worry about it and don't focus on it. intentionally locking yourself into an artificial style that you don't understand and haven't developed is going to hurt and become very limiting down the line when you figure out better methods of stylization, simplification, rendering, etc that you will stop yourself from trying because "oh it doesn't match the house style rules I set for myself 3 years ago".

copy and take bits and pieces from whoever and whatever you like and over time and with practice you will settle into a rhythm of doing things and develop a consistency.

this is not to say that you can't be thematically consistent, or world-consistent. you can easily focus on horror, or depression-era america feels and topics to get something running through your work.

how tf do u paint

>>4104640
to me, noise gives drawings some age. i feel like i'm looking at an old photo or a vintage movie screencap

also holy FUCK that drawing is amazing. the way the city glows, and then the black mountain on the other side - fuck

>>4105246
Before jumping into color you should study values, how light reflects off of surfaces, cast shadows ect.

>>4105246
Disregard the other anon's advice and just play around with color. A lot. The more experience you gain, the more of an understanding you get. Trying to study technique and trying to see what may or may not be there is annoying. Playing with colors is direct and to the point, you like it or not, then fix it in the next iteration.

>>4105279
uh no, this anon>>4105277
is right. your colors will looks like shit and are pointless if you dont understand value and light

>>4103499
kys

>>4105246
Here's a quick paintover, sorry for the sloppiness of it. The biggest issue I see is that you aren't thing about color in terms of shape. Early on in the painting it helps a lot of do block-ins of your basic colors and tones, with more focus on the overall shapes of the colors rather than blending/rendering. This allows you to make sure your values work and your forms make sense before you jump into rendering and playing with your edges.

>>4105279
I honestly agree with this. Value is very important, and while many people say it's better to approach value before learning color it's perfectly possible to learn them concurrently. What you need to do, though, is constantly make a greyscale versions of your image to see if the values have clear contrast with one another until you're able to train your eyes to see value well.

does it really look like she's shoving something into her cooch?

>>4105362
A little bit yeah.

>>4100019
This is really ugly. Just start over, you’re polishing a turd at this rate.

>>4105362
Not really. Is that the intention?

>>4105362
she's shoving an egg up or ass or what?

>>4105368
Not at all no, I just needed a place for her right arm to relax and I figured I could get away with this.

>>4105370
would that be more appealing, at this point it might as well be drawn that way.

>>4105372
go nuts man. the more outrageous the better.

>>4105372
You could just adjust the hand a little so the fingers aren't hidden near the crotch. It's a nice drawing, I don't think you should make it lewd unless that was really your intention

>>4105362
If it bothers you, maybe you could have her elbow rest on her knee instead?

>>4105362
I don't get that feeling at all.
This is btw my favourite drawing in the thread so far. Blog?

>>4105362
it looks like she's scratching her balls

>>4105362
It already looks pedo-ish, so you moght as well go full lewd.

>>4105277
>>4105279
Thanks for the feedback, I disagree that I can't do both. I will continue studying value form colors and anatomy together >>4105304
I learned a lot from that paintover, thank you

>>4105362
maybe like this? You can show off pantsu this way too

>>4105362
the hand is bent too far inward

>>4105362
That's the pose I do when my hemorrhoids start flaring up again.

A quick lil' rendering study

>>4105500
Pretty good burn victim illustration

>>4105392
>pedo-ish
The literal pedo symbol is on the shirt

>>4105503

>>4105362
blog?

i feel like polishing shit. any suggestions?

>>4105750
Torso might be a little long. It's a really comfy drawing besides that though :)

Haven’t done imaginary figures just for the fun of it in a long time. I’m sick of static pinups

>>4105785
Anon these are great!

>>4105785
Do dynamic pinups!

>>4105785
really solid work

>>4105854
qt

>>4104069
>>4104071
Thanks for the crit. I do not want to have the characters be the sole focus as I want to show off the environment in the picture, but I tried to give them more depth.
Any crit on these colors so far?

>>4105785
Still too artificial.
Sorry

>>4105762
Hands, torso, legs and joints, fix those and it'll look nice. Also that's now how a pussy work. You forgot a part sadly

>>4105503
Based

>>4105785
Very epic, I hope to see your animations again sometime soon

>>4104352
>How can I make this look less /beg/
You are insulting everyone in the /beg/ thread, that is far better than /beg/ thread tier.

>>4106029
Holy fuck! Desaturate more the lil frogs o the stairs, and the background in general, separate it more

This isn't finished, but whatever, it isn't a project piece regardless.
I was experimenting with stylization and happened upon 'depressed gypsy pothead' for some reason.
I wanted to know if I should develop this style a bit, what do you guys think?

>>4106410
this bitch got 2 left hands

>>4104290
your linework is lovely

>>4105854
That's cute.blog?

>>4100052
holy shit that hellboy looks like he has severe downs. this is what happens when you draw the same anime shit over and over

>>4102845
>drawing black people
and people say drawing furry is gross

>>4106410
aside from >>4106415, the lines in the hair are very confusing and don't suggest a flow of hair at all. You're clearly capable of it (see: the cape/scarf thing) but it reads like matted paste at the moment.

Johane Vanderbug comes from a long line of distinguished aristocrats. His skills would be useful in defending the Marshlands, but alas he enjoys the comforts of his families fortunes.

>>4106463
LOL haha lmao

>>4106505
That hat is hard to read, it honestly took me a few seconds to understand what it was

>>4106415
OH SHIT.
That's what I get for doing a speed sketch while sleep deprived...

>>4106466
I get what you mean. I had rotated the paper while drawing and didn't fix it when I did the rest.

Two beginner mistakes in one sketch...
I feel like the biggest tard now lol
Regardless, thanks for the help guys, I'll fix it after a quick nap.

>>4105854
give blog

>>4102845
Not bad, but is it just me or is the forearm on the far right guy's left arm (our right) longer than the one on his right arm (our left)?

>>4105891
thank you anon!
>>4106463
>>4106682
twitter.com/bongbai

>>4106722
meant to tag >>4106432 instead, apologies

danny brown

>>4106706
nah ur right, a lot of the volumes are screwed up cus i overused the liquify tool to 'fix' things in a hurry

>>4106724
I like these poses and your use of shape, these have a lot of personality

>>4106724
>using the liquify tool in drawings
How so?

>>4106728
if a limb is too long or a facial feature is askew for example, i like to use the liquify tool to adjust it if i can get away with not having to redraw an entire arm.

>>4106727
thanks, ive been making a more conscious effort to have consistent shape language so this is encouraging

Dongho Kang study. Anyone knows why he just disappeared from the internet?

>>4106753
The hack has arrived.

I can't seem to figure out how to make the eyes look not retarded

>>4106772

>>4106753
Neato. I like it

Detailing the hair and refining the values.

>>4106039
as you mentioned above i reduced torso and had to rebalance whole figure. idk this is right or not because i don't have talent or what so over

>>4106864
i tried

>>4106457
pyw crab

>>4106374
Yeah, some of those elements were blending together. I should probably take more breaks to refresh my eyes.
Here is the current WIP

>>4104248
Me liking this

Finally getting somewhere on this.

>>4106926
Damn this is so good.

>>4106844
that looks preety nice anon

>>4106940
Neato

>>4106940
Done with this one. Planning to make it part of a larger piece.

>>4104991
i know this is a shitty attempt at fixing your stuff. the main issue i noticed was how short your character looks. it seems as if this wasn't deliberate. i also tried making sense of your poses in the way you drew them. not the way you wanted them to be, but enough to show why they look odd. anatomy wise, i didn't change anything. the arms are beefy as fuck in pose # 2 compared to #1, and your abs in both look like a halloween costume with muscle pads inside the lining. might be from blurring/ airbrushing your colors when youre only using 2 colors total per surface, like with cel shading.

"agitating" is my way of saying they're not blaring issues, but issues nonetheless. otherwise, i think we have pretty similar art styles. are there any artists youre trying to emulate?

>>4107351
>>4106960
blog?

>>4107544
Here you go.
https://twitter.com/WhiteBox_Studio?s=09

>>4107567
oh, you're the anon who made that head turn animation I critiqued a while ago. glad to see your twitter, I really like your style. keep going!

>>4106560
I disagree. It didn't really take me long at all. Maybe it's just you?

>>4106457
I know man I drove myself into a corner :( trying to work out of it now

>>4107522
goddamnit, replace the "foreshadowing"s with "foreshortening". i was too tired to realize this while writing before i left home.

>>4106844
Maybe a little darker hair in the shadow and a little less details on it?

>>4107967
She die falling off the swing?

Drew a weird thing the other day, had no idea what I was doing with the hands tho

pen recommendations?

>>4101593
cont

>>4107567
woof woof

>>4107967
Reminds me of avocado's work

>>4108068
>>4106505
>>4106410
amazing, i love straight to the point shit like this.

>>4105362
It's very pretty, nicest thing i've seen in a while, but you need the hand to be pointed straight towards the ground.
Composition wise it's fucking amazing.

>>4106463
I don't get it

Not sure if this belongs here but I've had such bad art block lately this is all I can do

>>4108068
Learn perspective, please for the love of god.

For a coworker

>>4108400
I always love seeing your linework

>>4107683
nah he's right i shoulda made the hat a different color its hard to see green on green.

"No one can say how the legend of XR-81 came to be. Did he kill his own master on a hunt? Was he the creation of some sinister lab? Is he friend or foe? What ever the case it makes for a good stories around a camp site."

>>4108068
Centropen Document Fineliners.

>>4101593
Most of them are a little dopey in the story too.

>>4108620
appreciate it g

a request

>>4103664
Nah i don't got that anons, appreciate it tho.

>>4106724
You a fan of Chase Conley or D-Pi?

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>>4104352
The shirt looks strange, like it wants to be tight fit and loose fit at the same time.

Here's something I quickly drew to show you what I mean. A shirt won't wrap underneath the boobs if it's loose.

>>4107967
really cute, I like the pallete!

>>4103354
Pretty cool man, but frogs shouldn't have hair desu. Gotta tap that bald loli market namsayn.

A simple practice gone array

>>4108803
This looks cool anon

>>4101798
He put Ree in the cage!

>>4108568
can you draw giant gorg in your style

>>4108388
it's rather obvious the distortion is intentional...

>>4109024
Maybe, but it's not the informed abstraction of someone with command of their craft; anyone can tell you still don't know perspective. There's a big difference between breaking the rules and not knowing the rules.

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>>4109032
fair enough. I don't necessarily disagree either. Although I just wish you would've better expressed that in your initial post lol

It's not necessary to shoot for the most patronizing tone because we're on a 4chan board and everyone is faceless or some are acting like assholes. I get that this place reinforces the worst habits in some of us, but keeping things more sincere and in good nature will have a higher chance of being well received. Not telling you how to express yourself obviously, just a suggestion.

>>4109460
That wasn't me, that was another guy who I'm sure did not want to help.