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public embarrassment edition
Previous thread: >>4076714

Disclaimer: Please [-] the thread if you don't want your mom seeing this thread.

Share your pornographic drawings that you're working on and receive feedback, "blog ?" comments, and critiques. Please contain your autism.

>How do I get started drawing porn?
6 Steps to Improve
http://forums.hentai-foundry.com/viewtopic.php?t=963&sid=3a137456306d28694f62b26029814aeb
Read Loomis - /loomis/ link
https://mega.nz/#F!es1BSKQR!spODyd0iaQmMelGA2GscFw

References -
1. Google is your best friend. So is the Artbook Thread (ctrl+F artbook in Catalog)
https://onedrive.live.com/?authkey=%21APXa9KeUpBIoyWY&id=F9815D5579F67656%2111600&cid=F9815D5579F67656
http://www.artmodeltips.com/poses/
https://www.flickr.com/photos/sudoksa/
http://www.proko.com/art-model-poses-for-artists/
http://www.fineart.sk/photo-references
http://www.characterdesigns.com

>> No.4087371
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>> No.4087375

>>4087356
i cant believe im in the op image

>> No.4087383 [DELETED] 
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I realized I can't render for shit so here's something that I'll never finish ;(

>> No.4087387

>>4087383
I find rendering looks boring anyway. I prefer really detailed line art much more. Rendering just makes everything look foggy.

>> No.4087389

>>4087387
are you colourblind?

>> No.4087395

>>4087375
kek

>> No.4087403

>>4087383
gimme ur socials anon ill shill your work

>> No.4087404

wipwip

>> No.4087405

>>4087375
based

>> No.4087419

>>4087404
is there more of this in heaven?

>> No.4087420

>>4087419
For muslims, yes.

>> No.4087422
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4087422

The cocks I draw could be murder weapons

>> No.4087424

>>4087383
What's your blog nigga, this actually looks slick.

>> No.4087426
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>>4087420
im not falling for that again.

>> No.4087432

>>4087404
i can't take this much smug. great job

>> No.4087436

>>4087432
>>4087419
Thank you friends

>> No.4087609 [DELETED] 

>>4087383
>>4087424
>>4087403
@gakibakii on twitter, I rarely attempt making finished pieces though, maybe I should try to do it more often

>> No.4087616

>>4087601
I think my biggest complaint about this picture is that her arm wings are in no way long enough to support her body. They're also curled in unrealistically which breaks my immersion of this pic.

>> No.4087752
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>> No.4087767

>>4087422
but you always draw pencil dicks...

>> No.4087769
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>>4087752

>> No.4087780

>>4087383
I dunno brah I can't render like half as good as that

>> No.4087788

>>4087752
the foreshortening i kinda fucked up, it makes it look like her tits are in the middle of her torso or a really large ribcage and no stomach

>> No.4087806

>>4087752
wew lad. whats your blog?

>> No.4087812
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>> No.4087860

>>4087404
MODS!MODS!MODS!!!!

REPORTED!

>> No.4087885

damn, the porn thread actually has some good stuff this time

>> No.4087903

>>4087860
What was posted?

>> No.4087906

>They actually deleted it
Fuck, wish I had saved it I didn't think anyone would be that sensitive over a pair of tits.

>> No.4087911
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i hate this so much
what a complete waste of fucking time

>> No.4087928

>>4087404
>>4087432
>>4087860
What?

>> No.4087930

>>4087903
>>4087906
https://boards.fireden.net/ic/thread/4087356/

>> No.4087934

>>4087903
it was 3 pre mature girls sitting on a bench in a girls change room, one was exposing her 'you know what'

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>>4087930
>>4087934
>big black dick on your face a-ok!
>furshit with homo sex no problem!
>A real underaged mtf demonstrating how he uses his dilator how progressive!
>2d with cunny? Literally worse than Hitler!

>> No.4087954

>>4087911
His tail seems to form a tangent with his arm. Can you have it straighter at the end?

>> No.4087956

>>4087930
what makes that not okay but
>>4083353 gets a pass?

>> No.4087994

>>4087956
not enough reports. neither of these should get a pass.

>> No.4088050
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>>4087953
Isn't this whole community built by lolicons tho?

>> No.4088055

>>4088050
You're thinking of reddit, 4chin doesn't tolerate innies or anything depicted other than beef curtains.

>> No.4088074

>>4087994
>>4088055
Since when does /ic/ not allow loli? Is it only a /b/ and /trash/ thing?

>> No.4088075

>>4087404
Great job! Even though it's gone now,

>> No.4088086

>>4088074
desu nobody really made a fuss about it up until we had one gigantic faggot that threw a boardwide temper tantrum over the rules and even made a /qa/ thread pestering mods to enforce global rules which includes shit like >>4087911

Technically it's against the rules but nobody gives a shit other than a few vocal minorities with a powertrip. Also I keep forgetting there's a /trash/ board, they allow loli there too?

>> No.4088088

>>4088086
Nevermind, it's a glorified /d/ board with furry.

>> No.4088099

>>4088075
thank you very much. i suppose i'll post the finished product on exhentai. lol

>> No.4088160

>>4087422
This whole image is just unattractive.

The dick is too thin and long and the colors look atrocious.

Try to use pre-made pallets for now until you get better at intuitively picking complimenting colors.

>> No.4088162

I have no money to pay anyone for this but if anyone would like their art featured in a video for a christian black metal type album let me know.

>> No.4088231

>>4087953
Nice false equivalence

>black people

Containment thread

>furries, lolicon, shotacon

/trash or /b

>trannies

Hopefully suicide, /trash or /b idealistically. Drawn shit? Gets thrown into containment threads; non-negotiable.

Still against the rules, faggot. Just because of the split doesn't mean GB3 is suddenly void.

>> No.4088263

>>4088086
No Loli on /trash/

>> No.4088294
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About to finish this one, I think

>> No.4088302

>>4088294
anon i think if you added some detail inside like the urethra and vaginal opening, it'd look better?

>> No.4088331

>>4088302
I’m an idiot it requires more time. Thanks for the advice anon

>> No.4088336

>>4088331
i love your rendering btw

>> No.4088350

>>4088336
Thx anon
<3

>> No.4088378

>>4088074
>Is it only a /b/ and /trash/ thing?
yes

>> No.4088380

>>4088099
Nothing of value was lost. Also, a piece of advice. Stop drawing loli if you want to make it.

>> No.4088381

>>4088074
Only /b allows underaged content. No exceptions.

>> No.4088385

>>4088294
Great work Firez, you are getting better and better.

>> No.4088388
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>>4088385
Thanks anon. I try and will keep trying. I hope you do the same

>> No.4088483
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lineweight is hard

>> No.4088564
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>>4087767
so they're always murder weapons

>>4088160
could you mess around with it if you don't mind and show me a palette you'd go with? not trolling, i understand if you dont want to though.

The cock is preference to be honest but I know what you mean, i made it shorter here.

>> No.4088739

>>4088470
smol leg

>> No.4088740
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I made more wrinkles to the bed to add weight to characters.

Any advice before coloring?

>> No.4088742

>>4088483
Blog?

>> No.4088744

>>4088742
https://twitter.com/hayabusart
I usually cover things up before posting though, sorry anon

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>>4088470
>>4088739
Thanks anon, worked on some more things too

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>>4087375
I understood that reference

>> No.4088846

>>4088803
Goddamnit, it reminded of my ex and now I'm feeling sad. Good art though, I like the lightwork and the line weight

>> No.4088853

>>4088846
Stop porking hams, anon

>> No.4089114

>>4087860
this is the most insufferable kind of post to exist

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another wip~

>> No.4089492

How do you start sketching 2 people fucking? I have a really hard time coming up with a natural feel for the scene, so I always start out with a reference.

>> No.4089498

>>4089320
thats some ugly face and anatomy

>> No.4089556

>>4089498
post work

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4089563

>>4087356
>tfw im in the op image 2 times in a row.
thank you op, i hope you didnt expend too much time waiting for the last thread to die to do this one.

also dont worry guys, here is my blog, that way you dont have to ask.
https://twitter.com/RonmeruArt

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>>4087752

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>>4089556

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>>4089598

>> No.4089605

>>4089601
don't bully

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pushing and moving values around until i get to work on defining edges and making it look more tight

>> No.4089691
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not a serious post, i can do better than this

>> No.4089739

>>4088564
Much better cock length in this one imo.

>> No.4089763

>>4088564
you need to practice character design because its just ugly dude

>> No.4089982
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4089982

>>4089607
i have a feeling it would look better if you just gave up on line art or try making your lines red/orange/fitting with the fill color. Also try avoid using black for shadows.

>> No.4089999

>>4088853
Eh I just love some extra pounds man, I can't help it

>> No.4090148

>>4089320
this is my fetish. hope it ends in bukkake

>> No.4090310

>>4087953
>>big black dick on your face a-ok!
SEE. THING.

>> No.4090330

Is oppai loli allowed?

>> No.4090348 [DELETED] 
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Anything I should do before I finish this?

>> No.4090355 [DELETED] 
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broke in my new tablet with this
it looked better in grayscale, maybe I gotta pick better colors or something?

>> No.4090358
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>>4088846
Look at the brightside you had a gf, thanks btw

I think I'm done with this comm, I feel I had an epiphany regarding lightning with this one

>> No.4090359

>>4090330
Look bro, industry secret. You call /ss/ size difference, and you call oppai loli shortstack even if it's clearly not. Never had problems

>> No.4090395
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4090395

>>4089320
You're just placing things. Not even thinking about the construction or how even these things would interact in perspective.
You gave yourself easy mode by giving her stockings and you still cropped out the feet.

Here's a red line on how I do construction. On extreme perspective images like these, I make sure to block out the muscle groups so I know how things interact. What you did is a mess and I think you should head back to /beg/ and study up a bit more on perspective, construction, and other basic stuff. You're headed in the right direction though, the general forms are getting appealing.

>>4089598
This is bad art.

>> No.4090413

>>4090395
your lines look so delicious

>> No.4090417
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4090417

>>4090395
Not any of those two, but nice post. Really insightful guidelines.

>> No.4090441

>>4090395

Question, what's the circle in the top of her skull for? Just figuring out where the top of her head would place?

>> No.4090443
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4090443

>>4090395
The construction is solid, but if you change too much the face is not Connie anymore

>> No.4090450

>>4090348
Ask to yourself: Why I like draw this shit?

>> No.4090453

>>4090450
But I know the answer to that.

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>> No.4090539

>>4089982
I'm not a painter, no idea how to make it look like that without it being a complete shit.

>> No.4090550

>>4090395
What did you read/watch to do something like this?

I know is probably lots of practice + different sources but maybe you can recommend a starting point/crash course?

>> No.4090558

>>4090395
Wow this is wonderful. Thank you for the great readline

>> No.4090622
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Thoughts?

>> No.4090628 [DELETED] 

>>4090539
figure it out...

>> No.4090657

>>4090395
And of course you go and redline a pedo artwork.
Literally KYS.

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>>4090395
Thanks again for the crit, here's an update on a new start. Trying to think more about the body forms in the drafting stage like you;'ve said.
stupidly i've done this backwards.. tried to think of a composition/pose and then afterwards come up with the structure, when I should have been doing it the other way around.

>> No.4090671

>>4090662
1. center that body on the toilet
2. stop drawing little kids in sexual situations, retard.

>> No.4090672

>>4090671
>she's short
>she must be a little kid
lol

>> No.4090674

>>4090662
>tried to think of a composition/pose and then afterwards come up with the structure, when I should have been doing it the other way around.
No, that's the correct way to do it.

>> No.4090686

>>4090672
>this amount of denial
LMAO

>> No.4090687

>>4090674
You do both at the same time.

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>>4090662
another wip from me..

>> No.4090794

>>4090622
Draw kyuubi

>> No.4090796
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4090796

>>4090743
another

>> No.4090804

>>4090539
Then learn how to

>> No.4090807

>>4090395
holy fuck, that's fantastic. i think it's the first time an anon doesn't fuck up the redilnes

>> No.4090813

>>4090657
cope, granny

>> No.4090837

>>4090539
Just use the soft brush tool around/near lines, and use the dropper tool to blend shit in, but don't overblend or it gets rid of all the detail.

>>4090671
Lines aren't children?

>> No.4090840

>>4090657
ngmi

>> No.4090847
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Thoughts?

>> No.4090869

>>4090395
that character is Connie Mahashrawn.
She's supposed to have a big nose

>> No.4090889

>>4090837
If the "lines" didn't adequantly represent sexualized children (especially in written speech pattern, if included, and body shape) in any way there'd be no market for or appeal in loli or shota art.

>> No.4090890
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>>4090441
I draw a simplified version of the frontal bone so I know where the forehead will be. It helps me put it into 3D space and think about the rest of the skull anatomy and planes of the face better. Picture related.

>>4090443
>>4090869
I'm not going to draw only the head in the same style as the show if the rest of the body isn't. It's uncanny and stupid. The chin I drew is round and not even defined from the rest of the face because I was aware of this, and a wider nose than what I'd normally draw, but only in the shapes and constraints that the OP had drawn.
I'm not familiar with the show and only had what OP was drawing as reference.

>>4090662
>>4090743
>>4090796
These are looking really good anon! Keep it up. I forgot to mention to also check out gesture drawing. It'll help keep your drawings loose and fluid. Force is a good book.

>> No.4090891

>>4090890
>These are looking really good anon! Keep it up. I forgot to mention to also check out gesture drawing. It'll help keep your drawings loose and fluid. Force is a good book.

Bless you anon. Do you have a blog I could follow?

>> No.4090895

>>4090891
https://twitter.com/Marmalade_Mum

>> No.4090901
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4090901

Juri Han

>> No.4090928

>>4090840
in this day and age you'll more easily reach mainstream audiences if you don't draw something that is getting banned from every major social media. if you don't realize that, then I guess you are just dumb or led by your dick instead of your actual brain.

>> No.4090930

>>4090901
ahh, there's nothing better than a drain dick in the morning.

>> No.4090934

>>4090928
>being this mad your work didn't get red lined

>> No.4090935

>>4090657
embarrassing honestly

>> No.4090939

>>4090934
I didn't post anything in this thread.

>> No.4090958

>>4090622
Too many angles on the tits. Making them sharper is okay but more than 3-4 angles and it looks like crap.

>> No.4090985

>>4090939
exactly

>> No.4091018
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Daria!!

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>>4088294
I would increase the volume of the left boob like this to match the other one and make it a bit rounder on the squishing area.

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>>4091018
put legs in perspective, don´t make knees and calves symmetric, you made one thigh bigger than the other, the pubes should follow the curvature of the pelvis, by tilting the head to much down you gave her hyperkyphosis, by removing the other arm you can open her shoulders, give more room for the hands inside the pockets.

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4091060

Been trying to understand the torso over the last couple days
Wanted to ask any furfags around, what are the sites where it's easiest to get a following? Twitter is obvious, thinking about pixiv as well. I would get an account for everything but it's a pain in the ass to appropriately tag and post all my finished works again

>> No.4091066

>>4090934
>being we've forgotten your episode trying to shut down Paheel pilfering your content

>> No.4091072

>>4090901
dem toes <3

>> No.4091073
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4091073

an attempt was made

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>>4091073
it might just be a preference but id add more saturated colors

>> No.4091080

>>4090355
colors look fine to me

>> No.4091189

>>4088740
Why is Freezer retarded?

>> No.4091255

>>4090985
are you unironically retarded?

>> No.4091268

>>4091255
>crab trying to censor people on a porn thread from an arts board from an anonymous site instead of just posting his work
i know you are. try to change that or just go be a retard somewhere else. thank you

>> No.4091272

>>4090928
>>4091268
>don't draw this! draw mainstream instead!
>trying to censor people from drawing what they want
Everyone knows you're the real retard here.

>> No.4091281

>>4091272
>b-but i was just aggressively suggesting after throwing a tantrum and telling them to kill themselves
hehe, sure retard-kun.

>> No.4091282

>>4090958
>more than 3-4 angles and it looks like crap
interesting. got any examples of geometric/angular tits that follow this rule?

>> No.4091284

>>4090657
isn't this you?
>>4091281

>> No.4091286

>>4091284
no

>> No.4091291

fug

>> No.4091299

>>4091286
I think we're both on different pages then. I guess that's the downside of being anonymous.

>> No.4091333

>>4090847
You either need to change the shape of the tits - flattening them and properly showing that they are pushed up by the skinsuit - or you need to move them lower. Cause right now their shape implies that they are hanging off the chest but their position is if they were pushed up.

>> No.4091345

>>4090889
But lolis and shotas look nothing like the "real counterpart". Cartoons represent loli more than reality does.

>> No.4091377

>>4090889
But lolis and shotas look nothing like the "real counterpart". Cartoons represent loli more than reality does.

>> No.4091378

>>4091268
I will always try to bash people for posting pedophile garbage.
>go somewhere else
make me, pedo.

>> No.4091380

>>4091281
marmalade, why don't you tripfag when you insult people? afraid of losing supporters that think you are only wowely dowely all the time OwO?
I know it's you, you are the only dumbass here that uses -kun.

>> No.4091408

women are subhuman

>> No.4091474
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4091474

>> No.4091581

>>4091377
Im not implying that anyone who likes loli or shota is going to actually go out and rape a child. But there's clearly an appeal for some people in distinctly young underdeveloped bodies (not only just shrunken down mature forms with a flat chest), innocent naivety when it comes to the world and sex (requiring a parental role), at times characters in doujin even express themselves about the illegal nature of their acts and that "their love would be rejected by society" ...there seems no doubt in my mind people get some gratifcation out of sexualizing an idealized and stylized child by consuming this material. Else there'd be no distinction made between porn that features adults and adult bodies when you use the phrase loli or shota.

>> No.4091738
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4091738

trying to figure out an efficient pipeline for coloring and lineart

>> No.4091741
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4091741

i'd appreciate a quick paintover of this, ive been looking at it so long its hard to see problems although i know its riddled with them. dont really like it but forcing myself to see it through to completion

>> No.4091916
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4091916

>>4091019
Thanks a lot anon.

Done with this one

>> No.4091937

>>4091738
thats a really meaty pussy

>> No.4091974
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4091974

>>4091741

>> No.4091979

>>4091916
Congrats, anon! Very fappable!

>> No.4092028

>>4091974
i was willing to bet 100$ the first reply would be an unhelpful insult. like just give feedback at least if youre going to be shitty

>> No.4092033

>>4088294
i hope you wake up in another 30 years and finally get the soul crushing realization of how bad and ignorant you are, you buffoon. learn something already jesus

>> No.4092035

>>4092028
well it is an extremely autistic and degenerate piece, you shouldnt get any praise for this

>> No.4092042

>>4092033
He's gotten better, he just makes extremely slow progress and needs to stop taking lazy shortcuts (sameface, leaf brush, bad improvisation).

>> No.4092044

>>4092033
S E E T H I N G

>> No.4092056

>>4092033
Not backing up your opinion (not even by pyw but by describing what's wrong about it) Also that is not even the final piece you tasteless dumbfuck.

>> No.4092060

>>4092035
who the fuck asked for praise i just want feedback and advice on how to improve it

>> No.4092066

>>4091039
>>4090395
When did ic become helpful?
Cheers guys peeps like you might save this shithole in the end

>> No.4092069

>>4091741
>please polish my turds
Just start over. Pretty much everything is fucked. Your sense of scale is off, the anatomy is botched and the premise is stupid. Nobody grabs an erect dick blindfolded and doesn't know it's a dick. Plus it doesn't even appear attached to "Robin."

>> No.4092077

>>4092069
the entire idea of a critique or a redline is "please polish my turd"
sorry my dick girl porno premise wasnt realistic enough.

>> No.4092084

>>4092077
if you're working with fantastical elements, all the more reason for there to be grounding.
>UHHHH, SORRY MY SCI FI WASN'T """""""""""""REALISTIC""""""""""""""""" ENOUGH FOR YOU

>> No.4092086

>>4091378
>I-i will always try
hehe

>> No.4092091

>>4092077
No it isn't. You started to render when you should have been nailing the sketch down and now it looks like shit so you can't salvage it without divine intervention. Think the concept through. How does the dick interact with the bowl and the rest of her body?

>> No.4092097

>>4092084
epic

>>4092091
yeah i think i was too hasty. the sketch looks better than the render for sure. the idea was that there was a hole in the bowl and it was one of those peeled grapes and spaghetti halloween things. obviously a normal person would know its a dick. alright well i might as well start from scratch or refine the sketch and re render

>> No.4092109

>>4092097
Massive throbbing cock tissue doesn't feel like a hot dog. Children fall for peeled grapes and spaghetti because their textures are foreign.

>> No.4092117

>>4092109
bro how is this what people are focusing on i know a dick doesnt feel like a hot dog.

girls dont usually have naked slumber parties and call a cable repairman either

>> No.4092125

>>4092117
Because it makes you the artist seem mentally uninvested in your work. Sorry for having (pretty low) standards.

>> No.4092129

>>4092117
>i don't give a fuck about my work because it's porn
epic

>> No.4092130

>>4092125
dont apologize for everything its a sign of insecurity.

>> No.4092131

>>4092129
haha you said what i said earlier, thats badass

>> No.4092132

>>4092131
epic

>> No.4092150

>>4092132
stop being so butthurt jesus christ

>> No.4092155

>>4092150
how about you actually give a shit about something for once, anon, rather than deflecting with irony.
deep down you're jealous of people who get butthurt brother, i know.

>> No.4092169

>>4092155
how about you dont act like a bitch for no reason and i wont have to come up with ways to avoid addressing people who act like cunts for absolutely no reason other than the rush they get from putting other people down.
sure my picture sucks but when i know it sucks and then come into a thread asking how to improve it and the only feedback i get is "bro that sucks you suck LOL" you can excuse me for being a little pissy.

>> No.4092377 [DELETED] 
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4092377

any thoughts?

>> No.4092387

>>4092377
look at your own penis and then come back here and tell me with a straight face that's what it looks like anon.

>> No.4092431

>>4092387
i think its supposed to be a furry dog dick

>> No.4092458
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4092458

Contributing

>> No.4092473

>>4092458
stop trying to find excuses to post this, its so trashy and cringy. you posted it in the pepe thread for godssake

>> No.4092490

>>4092458
porn aims to arouse this looks more like its intended to be shocking

>> No.4092533
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4092533

>> No.4092547
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4092547

>>4092533
i like how ambitious you are but i wish you wouldnt do the big nose anime face every time

>> No.4092556
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4092556

Never attempted lewds, had a bit of time to doodle earlier though.
Enjoyed trying out ways of drawing liquids

>> No.4092585

>>4087404
so what this stuff counts as cp?
It's drawn though, it doesn't harm anyone besides tumblr moralfags

>> No.4092590

>>4088086
I wish they would bring the furry board back so a bunch of retards get permabanned for just posting on it once

>> No.4092593

>>4088470
unironically going to use this as a reference

>> No.4092606

>>4092556
this looks fantastic anon
The colors blend very well!

>> No.4092608

>>4092606
Ahh thanks anon, slowly trying new things. Colouring is my favourite thing to do!

>> No.4092610

>>4092608
It shows! And you really nailed the gooey consistency of the fluids!

>> No.4092614

>>4092610
Yeah I was kinda stuck on the fluids for a bit, had to trial a few things, but I think it works!
I might tone the amount down for serious works, haha. Got a lot of practicing to do!

I'm super happy you like the colours though, thank you!

>> No.4092678

>>4092533
So you just posted a picture of you giving a fuck last time just to show you're purposefully not doing your best?

>> No.4092688

>>4092533
SHOO SHOO

>> No.4092715

>>4087404
What was the image? It's gone now even from warosu.

>> No.4092834 [DELETED] 
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4092834

it's me again

>> No.4092994
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4092994

I like the weight im getting on the cocks now, it can be better though. Maybe more blending.

Thanks to that anon who suggested harder edges.

>> No.4093001

>>4092431
i thought the hand just had bad shading desu

>> No.4093007
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4093007

>>4092533
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4093008

>>4092994
She looks like she is made out of old leather filled with water. Like a waterskin.

>> No.4093015

>>4092994
the face is too realistic compared to the rest of the body's anatomy, it's not stylized enough

>> No.4093018

>>4093007
Shoo shoo gains goblin

>> No.4093029

>>4092834
Not judging here, but are you actually attracted to children?

>> No.4093047

>>4093015
I'm actually holding back a lot when it comes to the faces so hearing that it's still too realistic is surprising, im guessing it's the lips/nose combination.

>>4093008
I see what you mean to a degree, i'll mess around with the blending on my next one, I still like how it looks though but idk since my taste are warped.

>> No.4093053

>>4093047
I would say it's the eyes as well, there's potential to be had there

>> No.4093064

>>4093047
Hey dude we draw similar stuff and I'm having the same issues with warped taste as you, I think we have enough in common that we could collaborate or maybe be art pals. I'm Smutbrush on twitter if you're interested

>> No.4093082

>>4093029
children don't look like that. the only similarity is the size difference.

>> No.4093103
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4093103

This is my first time drawing a cute girl. She looked better before, but then I tried to lewd her and ruined things.

>> No.4093104

>>4093103
Oof, hard >>/beg/

>> No.4093112
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4093112

>>4093053
I messed with the face a bit, is this what you mean?

>>4093064
Sure, i don't mind adding you.

>> No.4093114

>>4093104
Thankfully I haven't drawn anything in at least 3 years, I'd kill myself if I was actually this bad after practice.

>> No.4093118

>>4093064
you're set to not receive messages on twitter apparently

>> No.4093162

>>4087356
take the yellow pill

>> No.4093171

>>4093007
>>4092688
Maybe he will go away if you stop giving him (you)'s retards

>> No.4093175

>>4093171
an interesting theory, let's see if it plays out

>> No.4093213
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4093213

>>4093029
no,
personally i like thick girls with big tits, but all of this i post is commission work, so these are all to other people's specifications.
but I dont draw children just petit chicks. i dont really have a problem with loli but i'd say my stuff is borderline. i never draw them to look like children and always make sure they look like fully developed but small adults (wide hips, narrow waist, etc).

>> No.4093220

>>4093213
also the guys in these pics are supposed to be fucking huge. look at the size of the dude compared to the toilet the chick is sitting on. and the tp dispenser on the wall he is leaning against is like mid-thigh height on him. the girl herself is supposed to be like 5'3

>> No.4093252

>>4093118
My bad didnt realize

>> No.4093350

>>4089598
Blog?

>> No.4093655

>>4090901
...this...tastes like kyle...

>> No.4093661

>>4093213
yup this shouldn't be called loli. normies are so quick on the trigger and it bothers me man

>> No.4093667
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4093667

>>4093213
man remember when steven universe porn actually got you some traffic...

>> No.4093684

>>4092533
Shoo shoo shit goblin

Also... wtf is going on there?

>> No.4093763

>>4093171
Doesn't work. He treats the thread as a personal art dump. He must have some mental issue of attachment to the giant balled characters he makes and seems to think they're so great that everyone else needs to see them. The occasional new guy comes in and inevitably gives him solid advice to which he does absolutely nothing with. I've been lurking for probably 8 years and i can remember him from at least 3 years ago doing the exact same shit.

>> No.4093910 [DELETED] 
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>> No.4093918

>>4093213
doesnt even look underage, the vast majority of women aren't built like venus statues

>> No.4093947

>>4093213
>>4092377
>>4090796
>>4090743
>>4090662
>>4090395
>>4089598

MODS!

>> No.4093962

>>4093947
woof woof

>> No.4093973
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4093973

>> No.4093977

>>4093973
the long-winded dialogue always weirds me out, like they're talking over lunch.
>no daddy, your assumption is wrong
>in reality, this is why you are feeling what you do

>> No.4093979

>>4093213
>>4092834
>12 years and 9 months ("Steven's Birthday")

>13 years and 5 months (as of "Reunited")

>15 years (as of "Steven Universe: The Movie")

KYS

>> No.4093980

>>4093979
>he looked it up

>> No.4093981

>>4093977
that's fair, i prefer to do these images as a kind of 1 page Tijuana bible so i include a bit more dialogue than you might see in a regular porn pic

>> No.4093984

>>4093979

There was a fucking MOVIE?

>> No.4093987

>>4093980
>pretending they havent used every excuse

>>4093213
>>4092377
>>4090796
>>4090743
>>4090662
>>4090395
>>4089598
>GB3
>no lolicon, shotacon, furry, and guro pornography is allowed on any board but /b

MODS!!!

>> No.4093992

>>4093987
you have dug your own logical grave, sir.
in >>4093979 you admit to the idea that fictional characters can age, yes? in doing so, do you not also admit that further renditions by other authors may also increase said age?

>> No.4094004

>>4093992
Yeah, no. The artist, and the others on the list, drew underaged. Following this up with the "really 18 or 300 guys, I promise!!!!" BS? Really, faggot?

Crawl back to /b.

>> No.4094005

>>4093661
>>4093918
thanks guys

>> No.4094007

>>4094004
but sir, please, do not pivot; address my central argument and engage in reasonable debate. i assume you don't want your name to be tarnished; do you wish to be known as unreasonable?
does it not follow from your post (>>4093979) that character may be aged up or down?

>> No.4094014

>>4094007
>aged down

Back to /b, faggot.

>>4093213
>>4092377
>>4090796
>>4090743
>>4090662
>>4090395
>>4089598
>GB3
>no lolicon, shotacon, furry, and guro pornography is allowed on any board but /b

MODS!!!

>> No.4094015

>>4094014
my god he's retarded

>> No.4094032
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4094032

Someone give some feedback on this one..redline it and maybe suggest refinements to poses?

>> No.4094052

>>4093973
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN.

>> No.4094053

>>4092533
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN.

>> No.4094055

>>4094032
Learn perspective and body proportions. This is garbage from top to bottom. Nobody is going to redline something that needs to be drawn from scratch and on top of that someone with your knowledge will never understand what the redline is trying to tell you.
You just haven't drawn long enough in your life.

>> No.4094056

>>4094032
You are way ahead of yourself. You need to be able to construct a single character in a simple pose well before trying a scene like this. This is pretty bad and redlining wont help you because you wont be able to understand it. Don't be like Gains Goblin...go back to basics and learn to put one foot in front of the other before trying to win the 100m dash. Unironically read the Loomis books.

>> No.4094057

>>4093981
You are just an autistic gains goblin fuck.
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN.

>> No.4094058

>>4093973
SHOO!!!!

>> No.4094059

>>4094007
>i assume you don't want your name to be tarnished
>your name
Are you legit retarded or are you unaware this is an anonymous image board?

>> No.4094062
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4094062

>>4094055
>>4094056
Hey...at least I'm not the only one that fucks up perspective

>> No.4094079

>>4093973
what kind of lifting is he even doing, it makes no sense, the motion of the barbbell will bump into the fuckboy

>> No.4094093

>>4094062
Whataboutism won't help you get better. Just because you aren't he only bad artist in the world this doesn't make your art any less shitty.

>> No.4094114
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4094114

>>4094007
>but sir please do not pivot for.me
>address my argument as a reasonable debatoor
>but please, I don't want to tarnish your name sir
>we dont want to be unreasonablre

>> No.4094744
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4094744

Does this belong here? I posted something suggestive in other threads and was shunned haha.

>> No.4094770

>>4094744
Is she going to burst? Cause even pregnant fat horses are not that round.

>> No.4094794

>>4094744
Are you salcedobidujos?

>> No.4094799

>>4094770
not intentional, noted.
>>4094794
yeah.

>> No.4094805
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4094805

how to fix this? specially talking about her right hand.

>> No.4094811

>>4094799
Why did you delete your blog? Where do you post now?

>> No.4094812
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4094812

>MODS! MODS! MODS! PEOPLE ARE POSTING ART!

>> No.4094814

>>4094811
Just changed username, salcedoisab on instagram. Thanks for the support

>> No.4094816

>>4094812
based

>> No.4094820

>>4094814
Oh, I see. I don't have an IG account, so just bookmarked the page. Love your work, man.

>> No.4094827

>>4094007
Bro, why the fuck are you talking like that?

>> No.4094839

>>4092834
the faces are so ugly

>> No.4094847
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4094847

>> No.4094850

>>4094812
kek

>> No.4094851

>>4094812
Reddit and twitter and shit have leaked into here and formed a little authoritarian puddle. These NPCs care more about enforcing the rules than the mods themselves. Those rules are mostly in place to prevent legal trouble by the way, and don't reflect actual site culture, which aliens like these fucks never seem to understand

>> No.4094871

>>4094114
>>4094059
guess a guy can't kid around once in a while.
i was just trying to brighten everyone's day by doing a little bit i like to call "polite man just wants to engage in discussion in the pursuit of truth and nobody needs to be mean or nasty and in the end we can all sit down and live and laugh and cry and love and laugh together and nobody needs to say who's right or wrong we can just accept a new found position which we came to reasonably and with good faith and love inside our hearts."

>> No.4094885
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4094885

>>4094871
>nobody needs to be mean or nasty and in the end we can all sit down and live and laugh and cry and love and laugh together and nobody needs to say who's right or wrong we can just accept a new found position which we came to reasonably and with good faith and love inside our hearts.
dilate

>> No.4094907

>>4094847
this looks good, but I feel like the girl would feel really uncomfortable in that pose. maybe make her feet touch the ground more, because there's no way she can lift her ass up this much the way she's hanging right now. Rest looks really solid

>> No.4094918

>>4094812
"""""ART"""""

>> No.4094933
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4094933

>>4087375

>> No.4094963
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4094963

final rough before i go in with lines and flats

>> No.4095024
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4095024

i drew this awhile ago

>> No.4095032

>>4094820
thanks brother!

>> No.4095053

>>4090928
Its drawn porn, its not hitting mainstream anything.

>> No.4095061

>>4095053
Please tell me yo aren't dumb enough to be unable to understand what I meant with that.

>> No.4095062
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4095062

>> No.4095090
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4095090

One piece samurai boi

>> No.4095095

>>4095062
did you mean to post in /beg/

>> No.4095128

>>4095024
Nice one anon.

>> No.4095140

>>4088483
It looks great though! Good job LWA anon

>> No.4095148

>>4095090
Afrobull?

>> No.4095194
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4095194

Don,t want to talk about hands...

>> No.4095231

>>4095194
Cute
>>4094847
I love this style. It reminds me of those playboy comics
>>4095024
Great anatomy and perspective

>> No.4095378

>>4095194
Blog? Cute style anon

>> No.4095385
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4095385

I know its a bit over the top, it was a request from a friend. I don't have a good grasp of anatomy yet, but I thought this was pretty funny so I want to share. I take inspiration from nagi ichi's style

>> No.4095468

>>4095378
>>4095231
Thanks! twitter is @fumi2moe

>> No.4095503
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4095503

>> No.4095543

someone make a new thread

>> No.4095557

>>4093973
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!!!!!!!!

>> No.4095612
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4095612

thoughts anons?

>> No.4095701

>>4095024
Blog please?

>> No.4096002

>>4095503
it looks like her titties are about to blow some bubbles

>> No.4096004

>>4093973
based

>> No.4096150

>>4093114
it looks like you skipped construction, no amount of practice will help you if you skip basic figure drawing fundies.

>> No.4096389

>>4092556
torso too long.
look up the word, "foreshortening."

>> No.4096439
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4096439

i need help

>> No.4096606

NEW THREAD:

>>4096601
>>4096601
>>4096601

>> No.4097264

>>4087356
Anyone got the original gwen drawing from ops pic?