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Disclaimer: Please [-] the thread if you don't want your mom seeing this thread.

Share your pornographic drawings that you're working on and receive feedback, "blog ?" comments, and critiques. Please contain your autism.

>How do I get started drawing porn?
6 Steps to Improve
http://forums.hentai-foundry.com/viewtopic.php?t=963&sid=3a137456306d28694f62b26029814aeb
Read Loomis - /loomis/ link
https://mega.nz/#F!es1BSKQR!spODyd0iaQmMelGA2GscFw

References -
1. Google is your best friend. So is the Artbook Thread (ctrl+F artbook in Catalog)
https://onedrive.live.com/?authkey=%21APXa9KeUpBIoyWY&id=F9815D5579F67656%2111600&cid=F9815D5579F67656
http://www.artmodeltips.com/poses/
https://www.flickr.com/photos/sudoksa/
http://www.proko.com/art-model-poses-for-artists/
http://www.fineart.sk/photo-references
http://www.characterdesigns.com

>> No.4049752

>>4049750
>shhh, Quiet!

>> No.4049840
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Commission
>>4049750
I wish I could render like that

>> No.4049857

>>4049840
>if I'm going to really really wish for something it might happen!
Maybe start practicing rendering instead of always ending up with half assed sketches?

>> No.4049880

>>4049840
Despite this being a commission, I notice a lot of your stuff has mouths being spread open. Is that a personal preference?
Love your stuff btw, just curious.

>> No.4049888

>>4049880
yeah its a personal preference, but the commissioner actually requested it after seeing some of the other stuff i did.

>> No.4049889
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>>4049750
How many version of this particular pose/scenario exists out there? I think I've seen 3 so far with different characters besides the original.

>> No.4049891
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>> No.4049897
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what do you guys think? also crits appreciated.

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>> No.4050017

>>4049897
10/10
but
Draw the full guy and her other hand
Squash her butt where he's impacting it

>> No.4050023
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>>4049897
>>4050017
You have to rotate one of his hands for it to make sense

>> No.4050025

>>4050003
That's really intense

>> No.4050079

>>4049889
Forbidden sluts in a monastry seems more interesting than whatever the fuck is going on in ops.

>> No.4050541

>>4050017
>>4050023
Thanks anon, I'll try that.

>> No.4051029

>>4049889
God damn she's thicc.

>> No.4051037

>>4049750
>>>/ic/nsfw
>>>/ic/pornthread

>> No.4051041

>>4051037
Do you have autism, anon?

>> No.4051204

>>4051037
Are you retarded?

>> No.4051244
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Can anyone give me feedback on a WIP I have going? This is the first thing I've drawn in a year and a half, but once I managed to finish the rough part of it I came to the realization that both Homare and Asuka's breasts were far too large relative to their heads. How do I scale them down a bit while also keeping the arms/hands in proportion?

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I feel like my sketches loose all soul when I put down linework. Line art is actually what Im worst at and have to grind the most at this point, honestly. I could use some tips about now..

>> No.4051254

>>4051248
1. Stop using buzzwords like soul.
2. Loose sketches leave more room to the viewer's imagination, so you fill in the missing gaps with your own idealized shapes. This is why they will always look better than more refined art.
3. The more you polish a sketch, the more of its spontaneity and looseness fades away. You literally can't avoid your art becoming stiffer while you refine it. To avoid your art becoming too stiff, exaggerate your sketches as much as possible. Go wild and super dynamic. Then your cleaning/inking will retain more of the original loose feel.
5. Stop hiding hands. Learn to draw them by using references.

>> No.4051259

>>4049891
Stop posting your work

>> No.4051261

>>4051259
no, die mad about it lol

>> No.4051268

>>4051244
Before you start drawing porn at all you need to learn how to stop symbol drawing. Your faces are just symbols placed on flat planes, and your breasts are just half circles, You are drawing what you think tits look like. You clearly havent drawn any foundation to draw the boobs onto too, remember, boobs are attatched to flat chest, draw the chest first. this goes for the arms as well, look at references.

Your heads are sliding forward off the necks. Just because its anime doesnt mean bodies are drawn much differently.

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>>4049897
got carried away but main thing to fix was the legs, look at your drawing upside down.

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>> No.4051352

>>4051259
Something i thought id never read on ic...

>> No.4051363
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>>4050025
thanks man
>>4051352
hoes mad

>> No.4051389

>>4051248
Post more examples I cant tell you shit from this one photograph.

>> No.4051393

>>4051363
>tee hee I'm such a rebel
This entire board is for crits yet you come here and refuse to take any of them at all. How many people have to offer their advice before you bother to listen?

>lol I don't care
So leave, people here are trying to get better and its frankly insulting to have people reply to you in vein. Holy fuck BBC's entire career was launched in the span of time you haven't learned to draw new faces. How the fuck is years of stagnation not a warning sign you are doing a terrible job of growing?

>> No.4051399

>>4049840
blog?

>> No.4051429

>>4051351
Always the same unfinished shit over and over again.

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>> No.4051561
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i want to improve my perspective game, what should i do

>> No.4051615

>>4051561
Draw still life stuff using RL references. You aren't good enough to draw bodies from memory.

>> No.4051621
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>>4051561
#1 issue I see here: stop flattening the torso.

>> No.4051695
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>>4051389
Sorry I posted a sketch instead...

>> No.4051702

>>4051470
gib blog

>> No.4051707

>>4051429
Not him, but you sound jelly af.
Who cares if he doesn't complete his work, that's his problem, not for you to police him about.

>> No.4051709

>>4051399
@Lambrey3 on twitter

>> No.4051757
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working on hatching, reworking an old sketch, gonna throw up now k bye

>> No.4051769

>>4051351
Who made this drawing?

>> No.4051772

>>4051769
>>4051709

>> No.4051773

>>4051757
Who made this drawing? I want to see more of their art.

>> No.4051847

>>4049840
>I wish I could render like that
Just render normally and throw up lots of film grain and blur effects to cover your mistakes.

>> No.4051859

>>4051847
>He doesn't use effects to prevent piracy and people doing "edits" of his work.
pyw

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Oh I didn't know there's NSFW thread in here
anyway, most of my NSFW artwork are doodles. Hope it's okay coz I'm gonna sticking here

>> No.4051874

>>4051867
Looks good aside from the right guy's midget neck.

>> No.4051886 [DELETED] 
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>>4049891
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4051894

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4051899

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4051907

>>4051886
shoo shoo gains goblin!

>> No.4051924

>>4051351
Cute ghost cock
Blog?

>> No.4051941

>>4051886
>SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4052027

>>4051470
dat ass tho

>> No.4052030

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4052037

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4052107

>>4051429
>>4051769
>>4051924
Im not lambrey. Its me, VU.

>> No.4052111

>>4051886
>shoo Shoo GainS Goblin!

>> No.4052113

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4052114

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4052133

>>4049891
Blog or social media handle?

>> No.4052136

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4052172

hypothetically my audience is evenly split between japanese and americans right now. So, patreon or fanbox?

>> No.4052205
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hey ic is it worth finishing

>> No.4052214

>>4052205
Of course!

>> No.4052237

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4052239

>>4051867
no gays allowed go away

>> No.4052241

>>4049891
Learn to draw faces for fuck's sake
also
>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4052247

>>4051757
Contact info?

>> No.4052281
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>> No.4052284

>>4052172
Why not both?

>> No.4052458
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nya

>> No.4052473

>>4052458
but why is she trying to dab?

>> No.4052486

>>4051707
I'm not jelly. I'm just speaking the truth. I never once saw him post a finished artwork. He's insecure as fuck.

>> No.4052488

>>4052458
>>4052205
>>4051470
WHAT THE FUCK IS WITH THESE ASSES? WHATS WITH THE INDENT?

>> No.4052491

>>4052107
Oh, I apologize then. I thought it was lambrey. He's the insecure guy I was talking about. You are totally fine, as you experiment with different approaches and try to push yourself. Lambrey is comfrotzoning way too much.

>> No.4052492

>>4052133
kiahl or lobsterkiahl is what i go by

>> No.4052493

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>>4052133
I love how salty you are. SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4052495

>>4052492
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4052497

>>4051561
needs more dog

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>>4051886
oh man this is great, what's the rent cause it looks like i'm living rent free in your head, also shoo shoo gains goblin
>>4052241
could you provide an example of what a better face would be

>> No.4052501

>>4052500
SHOO

>> No.4052506

>>4052488
My guess is that the artist is gay or a girl, because those are male asses

>> No.4052510

>>4052500
The salt is real.

SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN.

>> No.4052516

>>4052500
someone pointing at you and having a laugh at your expense isn't living rent free in your head, but don't let that keep you from coping lol

>> No.4052523

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4052524

>>4052500
>muh rent free
Just get gud at faces and you won't be a laughing stock. Now
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4052566

>>4052500
>that face
lol
>provide examples
Use a chan archive and look at the literal years of advice you've been given and immediately discounted.

Enjoy your memehood. You didn't quite put in enough effort to be a Tommy Wiseau or put your whole life on display like CWC; but you still managed to find a way to really stand out from the typical garbage we see here.

Oh shit I practiced today,

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN

>> No.4052588

>>4051363
Why does he spilling spaghetti in that dude's asshole

>> No.4052624
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4052624

>>4052588
anon, he just has a veiny dong....

>> No.4052628

>>4052588
have you never had butt spaghetti? oh man, i dunno how to tell you what you're missing, it'd be like explaining blue to someone born blind

>> No.4052740

>>4052624
Incorrect. If he had penis veins it would resemble a vein filled penis.

>> No.4052768

>>4052501
Shoo

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>>4051363
>>4052588

>> No.4052771
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>> No.4052787

>>4052239
I'm sorry, I thought I could post some gay art here

>> No.4052944
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>>4051886
I'm here not often, but don't you think it's maliciously mean? Or is atmosphere suppose to be that hostile? How do you guys tolerate it?

>> No.4052960

>>4052771
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4052962

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4053101
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>>4052027
>>4052488
Well, that character is kind of a sticc.

>> No.4053106

>>4051886
shoo shoo gains goblin

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>>4052944
The internet has always been like this. I would argue that 2004 was much, much crueler, things like Chrischan vs Bluespike is just surface level shit compared to what people were capable of. Hell when I was 12, I posted my shitty photoshop art onto some old trolling forum and got told to kill myself, even got a private message that was linked to a virus site and almost got my PC bricked- but I laughed and acted goofy overall, because everyone always said "internet is (not) serious business", and there wasn't too much business opportunity back then too. Just don't be retarded like revealing your phone number or provoke the wrong people and you're all good.

But now a days its rare to even see /ic/ be vicious as they were in the past. Newfags and summershits posting their own threads asking for special critique on their calarts SU original character do not steals are kindly told to read the sticky/use the general thread, and might even get feedback for their doodles.

>> No.4053531

>>4051886
Shoo Shoo gains Goblin!

>> No.4053562
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>>4052500
>what's the rent cause it looks like i'm living rent free in your head
your characters' entire faces are living rent free in their heads
shoo shoo gains goblin

>> No.4053583

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4053585

>>4052787
I will happily look at your gay, dick in ass, homosexual, absolutely non hetero art if it isn't badly drawn and you're improving. Its better than the Goblin's offerings.

Other than the aforementioned neck problem its not bad.

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trash trad prespective practice

>>4051773
>>4052247
@nellipher on twitter (dead atm, working on improving first)
nel#2502 on discord since someone already posted it in another thread

>> No.4053682
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my twitter handle is @consumerpeach
I'd appreciate if someone could just give me a long term critique on persistent issues and rip it apart.

>> No.4053769 [DELETED] 

>>4052787
literally anything under the board/thread rules is alright (no loli and furry)
just don't be like gains goblin who doesn't make an effort to improve his work and is an overall nuisance

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Talking about gay, dick in ass, homosexual, absolutely non hetero art.

I absolutely hate this fucking helmet, which is the last thing I assume you're focusing your eyes on, but I really need to get a grip on what to do with this helmet, texture/coloring wise.

It's definitely detracting from it and I need to get better at coloring in general but this fucking helmet.

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how bad is it? first thing I finished from my free draw from practice.

This is also the first time I colored something. Any tips or critiques are appreciated.

still working on it.

>> No.4053941

>>4052787
gay is allowed dont listen to cumbrains

>> No.4053970
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4053970

https://mobile.twitter.com/wootbloot
Just a sketch. Not completed works. Any critique? How could I improve this.

>> No.4054158

>>4053860
>I really need to get a grip on what to do with this helmet
You need to get a grip on fundamentals like perspective, anatomy, values and color theory, not that fucking helmet.

>> No.4054160

>>4053932
It's pretty much crap. Study fundamentals (google it) and come back in a year or 2.

>> No.4054162

>>4053970
No sense of weight. She looks like she's floating instead of having her body press against a surface. Study perspective. Look at that right hand of hers. Is that the way a hand wraps around a round object like a thigh?

>> No.4054171

>>4052944
oh neat, this is pretty cool, looks like the cock goblin wants to do some cock goblin'

>> No.4054185

>>4054171
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4054248
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After some lurking it seems like good 85% of this board is ridden with useless topics and empty responses. Wew. I wonder where it came from, can't believe it generated naturally.
>>4053526
Eh? I mean usually in specialty board specific threads there's naturally develops small cozy community and stuff. Batshits usually in lower numbers and easy to detect but here it feels like waves of feces going back and forth.
>>4053932
It seems like you're trying to draw a cartoon character with a very specific stylisation that's probably never was depicted in this angle. So you're trying not only draw a foreshortened gesture but also reconstruct your struggles under this stylisation. That's extremely hard by itself. idk what to add.

>> No.4054251

>>4054248
>Eh?
Nigga you ain't an anime character.

>> No.4054257

>>4054251
Nani!?

>> No.4054258

>>4054248
Of all the people that posted some work in here, you decided to give critique to the biggest beginner, that won't take away ABSOLUTELY ANYTHING from it.
Are you unironically retarded?

>> No.4054268

>>4054251
I just cut myself on your edgy post.

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Update on the Samus piece a friend and I are working on, this time working on the right side image.

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>>4053970
Although everything is relatively correct - confusion comes from little thing where transition between ass and torso are not reading seamlessly (or it's just me). And simple shadow should solve weightlessness problem.
>>4054258
huh?

>> No.4054282

>>4054268
>edgy
Fucking how?

>> No.4054508

>>4054280
>huh?
I guess you are just dumb.

>> No.4054570
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4054570

How much do you guys think this is worth? I've been selling them for 35 dollars but it seems a bit too little, idk.

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>>4049750
ಠ ᴥ ಠ

>> No.4054590

>>4054588
blog?

>> No.4054592

>>4054590
https://twitter.com/Ordnance20
:)

>> No.4054600

>>4054570
They are worth as much as people are willing to pay for them.

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4054603

>>4054600
Makes sense.... I mean it IS only linework.

Also, the portrait might be a bit too expensive, idk either o_o

>> No.4054646

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4054716

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4054782

>>4049750
That's not Quiet, that's Ariel Rebel.

>> No.4054785

>>4054588
are you actually into scat?
i don't know if i should think less of you now or respect that you don't give a fuck.

>> No.4054791

>>4054785
Nah, I dislike scat, I was just poking fun at a youtuber I share a server with.

>> No.4054797

>>4054791
then i guess i respect someone that has the stomach to draw scat porn ironically so to speak
i'd sooner draw gore than scat, then again, i'm pretty autismo about feces.

btw why do you never update your blog? there's a couple of your pics i found on booru sites but not in your twitter.

>> No.4054804

>>4054797
Yeah. There are some things I don't want to share on Twitter, because of people getting easily disgusted/ breaking tos or other things. But I share what I have for people to enjoy, whether it be hot or funny.
I also haven't updated because I got nothing to share. I am busy otherwise. But I do when I can :^)

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This is one of my latest drawings. I tried to render it as best I could, but I'm not really happy with the result. I think I'm done with this drawing but I'd like to know what I could do better the next time.

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This is one of my latest drawings. I tried to render it as best I could, but I'm not really happy with the result. I think I'm done with this drawing but I'd like to know what I could do better the next time.

>> No.4054955

>>4052944
Thick skin is always a good thing for any creative person frankly, so just use these experiences to build that up.
You can't make people be nice so just learn to handle the cruelness and be appreciative of the kindness.

>> No.4054961

>>4053860
You have the same texture on the helmet as you do on the skin on the right which makes it look uninteresting try crisper shines and shadows and you have a shine that doesn't match the form on the left try to make the highlights and shadows conform to the shape of the helmet.
Either one might work better, give it a go.

>> No.4055131

>>4054876
Ok faggot

>> No.4055149 [DELETED] 
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4055149

You all suck dicks. Your "art" is fucking ugly.

Pic related is what I currently work on. That's how erotic art should look like. You have no talent. Search an other hobbies

>> No.4055180

>>4053101
Hot.
I like the indentation of her skin showing how tight the ropes are.

>> No.4055184

>>4052771
Shoo shoo gains gobwin!

>> No.4055230

>>4054961
Thank you, ill give it a go.

>> No.4055259
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4055259

Devour me.

>> No.4055272

>>4054876
Add precum leaking out of his peen
Also, b-blog?

>> No.4055349

>>4053682
How did you make the fishnets mesh?

>> No.4055363
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4055363

>>4053860
Hey youre the guy that does all the creepy midna shit. If say stick to doing value studies. Greyscale. Right now youre jumping headfirst into the deep end without any waterwings.

>> No.4055611

>>4053101
how do you draw such thin lines? ive been trying to get this aesthetic forever but cant seem to pull it off

>> No.4055653

>>4055259
gross lines, work on that first

>> No.4055668

>>4054603
5$
>>4051886
>SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4055683

>>4055668
That uhh- That seems a bit low there anon-kun

>> No.4055688

>>4051886
shoo shoo gains goblin

>> No.4055699

>>4055683
your drawings arent very good.

>> No.4055701

>>4050079
Quiet doesn't even look like her and has a generic face and there's meme hentai fluids coming out of her crotch without any logical explanation.
Decently rendered and drawn but still souless and unfappable.

>> No.4055730
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4055730

>>4053101
That's a Copic Multi-liner 02, and I don't think its particularly thin... it comparable to Sakura micron 01 or 02. It is drawn on a piece of scratch paper size 9"x6".

You can try putting some paper under it so it give a little when you ink it. If you need to draw longer lines, try using your shoulder rather your wrist, by "pulling" on the pen to make the lines for those longer marks. I don't know if I am making any sense.

>> No.4055731

>>4054258
What do you expect accomplishing? Why you act like this? It's not your deviantartlet discord you've spawned from where such behavior reinforced and acceptable.
>>4054955
Why willingly tolerate that? What am I still doing here? That's the good question.

>> No.4055732
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4055732

>>4055730
I messed up, I meant to reply to >>4055611

>> No.4055739

>>4055699
>>4054603
Help me out then, how can I get better? This linework-only way is kind of hard to make appealing. It doesn't POP as much, you know?

I could add in some shadows or simple values sort of like manga/doujinshis.

>> No.4055763

>>4055349
>make pattern using brush or image
>warp mesh pattern so if fits contour of of legs
>use mask layer or selection+copy to crop the pattern to the bounds of the leg/part
If the body part doesn't bend much you can do this in one part, but if it bends significantly you might have to do the mesh in 2~3 parts, hence the shitty alignment and transition I'm getting around the knees. Theres definitely a better method but I haven't found it yet

>> No.4055781
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4055781

I made a short doujin based on a modded skyrim playthrough a while back. It was a lot of work but quite fun and I'm thinking of making more, but I think it'd be great to get any feedback I can get first. Please and thank you.

>> No.4055783
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4055783

>>4055781
oops sorry for the gigantic size, resizing from now on. Sorry also for bad camera quality. Can't exactly scan these in the school scanner.

>> No.4055784

>>4055731
>What do you expect accomplishing?
Make you realize you are wasting your time. Take it or leave it. You sound like a little bitch btw.

>> No.4055785
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>>4055783

>> No.4055788
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4055788

>>4055785

>> No.4055790
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4055790

>>4055788
That's it, I hope they are not too bad.

>> No.4055795

>>4055781
>>4055783
Autism.

>> No.4055797

>>4055785
>>4055788
>>4055790
More autism.

>> No.4055806

>>4055795
>>4055797
yes I have autism

>> No.4055878

>>4051695
>>4051248
In your sketch you have a lot of varying transparency but don't bring that to your line work at all. Try using more different line weights and leaving out certain parts of line art. For instance on her right boob in the sketch there is a blank part of your sketch but you just filled it in for the line work.

>> No.4055881

>>4052787
Most the art here is gay

>> No.4055883

>>4055781
>>4055783
>>4055785
>>4055788
>>4055790
I like it! Got a blog, anon?

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4055894

>>4055781
I think your comic panel compositions are decent
just work on your drawing skills, the lines are a bit too thick, you can use digital or use a bigger paper + thinner pens to fix that. Your faces need work, I think its because either the eyes are too close together or the side of the face (cheek bones, ears, etc.) are too long; and it looks a bit flat. If you struggle with facial parts like me, what I found helpful was tracing over anime pics, seeing how they made the proportions etc. then try to recreate that face without tracing.

but overall I think you're GMI; beginners struggle with finishing a single illustration, comics are even better. ganbatte anon-kun

>> No.4055905

>>4055883
Thank you, I don't have a blog sorry I only draw on paper and garbage camera so I don't feel right putting my stuff up yet. And not sure as well what platform is for NSFW stuff now.

>>4055894
Thank yo anon, I defnitely struggle with facial parts especially stylizing them. I think I can draw realism better but turning them into stylized is very difficult since I can't just copy from the photo. I will try tracing over my favorite mangas!

>> No.4055918

>>4055806
You don't say.

>> No.4056047 [DELETED] 

>>4055905
don't forget to recreate the pic without the trace
overlay/multiply your pic over the traced lines to see if you got anything right/wrong.

Also draw the perspective outlines on your traced forms if you can, god speed doujin bro

>> No.4056094

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!!!

>> No.4056498
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4056498

Foreshortening!

>> No.4056681
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4056681

>>4056498
What is this? Where is her leg?

>> No.4056751

>>4052944
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN

>> No.4056904

>>4054588
god, please stop shading with black immediately, it does not work for you

>> No.4056910
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4056910

>>4049897
just "finished" this one. what do you guys think?
also how much do you guys think i should charge for commissions?

>> No.4056920

>>4056910
Actually the hair is bugging me too much. I'll redo it when l come back home

>> No.4056925

>>4056920
>>4056910
Why is it that whenever we post something online we almost immediately see mistakes that we otherwise missed despite spending hours prepping, going over fine details and double checking all so it can hit you in the face like a banana cream pie?

>> No.4056931

>>4053599
any particular discord servers you post your stuff?

>> No.4056932

>>4056925
you eyes get tired eventually. that's why i don't post anything immediately after working/looking at ir for a long period of time.

>> No.4056937

>>4056910
i don't really like her legs. they're kind of disproportionate. overall you did a great job.

>> No.4056948

>>4056925
I have no idea but I feel like we should have a word for that

>> No.4057079

>>4056681
Yeah. Looking at tbis the morning after i'm not sure what the fuck i was doing.

>> No.4057108

yo, is newgrounds gonna fuck me raw if i post art of characters that are not loli but are still technically not 18+ in their canon, should i just slap cowtits on there to get around this or what?

>> No.4057112
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4057112

>>4055363
>Hey youre the guy that does all the creepy midna shit

That seems to be the case, i've been shying away from the supposed creepiness (pic related) but im pretty sure i've had enough of bitching out of doing what I want/like. Which is the whole point.

Thanks for the tip, i definitely need to iron out the form and weight of things, also, do you have a page I could follow your work on? I like the way you draw Midna.

>> No.4057135
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4057135

>> No.4057164

>>4057135
Blog?

>> No.4057300

>>4055790
I would swim through endless advertisements to read a part 2.

>> No.4057325

>>4057164

pixiv dot me slash desgardes

instagram davidkaplan977

>> No.4057367
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4057367

Recently a glitch in BOTW was discovered where you could ride Prince Sidon anywhere.

>> No.4057371

>>4057367
>nipples too big for a boy
>clitoris too big for a girl
fuck

>> No.4057388
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4057388

>>4056931
/las/ and house of mass occasionally but i'm mostly looking for constructive crit/feedback cause i don't feel i'm really good enough at producing finished works yet

>> No.4057456

>>4057112
https://twitter.com/Juste_VU
Stick to your guns. Also, im currently trying to make midna easier to animate so her figure is sorta in flux for me.

>> No.4057506

>>4057367
where's the second dick

>> No.4057527
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4057527

Not sure if this belongs here but this is what i drew

>> No.4057551

>>4057367
>pedo shit
Enjoy never really making it as a smut artist.

>> No.4057564

>>4057551
she has literally already made it. Plus girls get a pass for pedo stuff most of the time

>> No.4057577

>>4057564
>she
>girl
It's a tranny anon.

>> No.4057588

>>4057300
Thank you anon, I will do my best to make another!
As a point of reference, what aspect is most appealing to you? The fetishes, the setting, or something else? Thank you

>> No.4057636

>>4057564
>she has literally already made it
Not at those patreon numbers.
>she
My sides.

>> No.4057654

>>4057551
>Drawing Link limits you as a NSFW artist
Oh I see anon is pretending it's opposite day!

>> No.4057664

>>4057636
4000 a month is pretty good

>> No.4057668

>>4057664
They are at around 1k+ a month. Stop spreading lies.

>> No.4057671

>>4057664
It was about 1100 per month before they made the number private. The amount of patrons since then hasn't changed significantly.

>> No.4057679
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4057679

>>4057668
>>4057671
They were at almost 2k. If the trend is correct, they should be at 2.5k at the moment.
I think those are kinda good numbers.
I agree with that anon tho. Pedo content is only going to limit them in the long run.

>> No.4057738
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>> No.4057830
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>> No.4057835

>>4057830
would be cool to see this completed

>> No.4057838

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN

>> No.4057841

>>4057588
Not that anon but i really liked the flimsy adventure feeling, i would like seeing her maybe travelling around skyrim and getting into hijinks i guess. Also good job for pulling through and finishing it! looks great and consistent.

>> No.4057855

>>4051886
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!!!!!!!!

>> No.4057856

>>4057738
your faces are hideous

>> No.4057858
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4057858

Any advice on rendering? Is the anatomy ok? What about perspective? Thank you.

>> No.4057864

>>4057858
I feel like you should read about hard edges and soft edges with shading as well as pushing your values more. The head is also a bit small, but you’re on the right path anon

>> No.4057934
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4057934

>>4049750

>> No.4057948

>>4057934
holy shit that linework is bad. i can barely tell what's going on.

>> No.4057957

>>4057948
Sorry, I was using mouse :)

>> No.4057969

>>4057856
great help. opinions like these are worth 0. either help them improve or keep your personal opinions to yourself.

>> No.4057979

>>4057856
give objective critique, retard.

>> No.4057988

>>4057679
hey retard, it’s not April any more

>> No.4057992

>>4057969
>>4057979
no u

>> No.4057997

>>4057979
Learn to draw retard

>> No.4058015

>>4057997
how about you learn to give critique and stop posting on /ic/ until that happens?

>> No.4058018
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4058018

>>4056904
Calm down :P it is a rough painting. I paint in grayscale and set it as muliply, then add colour under. This allows me to colour the "lineart layer" above. Here is a quick example using soft light

>> No.4058019

>>4058015
how about you post on /beg/ instead

>> No.4058028

>>4058019
How about you post your work now, and if you do I will post mine as well?

>> No.4058032

>>4058028
you 1st loser

>> No.4058033

>>4057988
Are you unironically dumb?

>> No.4058034
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4058034

>>4058028
>>4058032
Just post your work you limpdick cock suckers, why is it always so fucking difficult for you to do so?

>> No.4058038

>>4058034
pyw

>> No.4058040
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4058040

>>4058032
Here goes.
Let's see yours.

>> No.4058041

>>4058038
>pyw
Is that supposed to be an nu-version of post your work?

>> No.4058045
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4058045

>>4058040
Sorry but I draw better so back to /beg/ with you

>> No.4058046

>>4058032
I'm waiting.

>> No.4058051

>>4058041
lurk more

>> No.4058052

>>4058045
You aren't CSR, I know him personally, and he doesn't act like an complete idiot when he gives critique.
I on the other hand posted my own artwork.
What's the problem? Did I just BTFO you?

>> No.4058055

>>4058052
You're not BBC because I'm talking to him right now and he says you're lying

>> No.4058059

>>4058055
You don't know when to stop posting when you get destroyed, do you?

>> No.4058062

>>4058051
>>4058038
>>>/b/806704469

>> No.4058063

>>4058059
I have more patrons than u

>> No.4058067

>>4058032
>>4058045
>>4058055
>>4058063
Rekt so hard it broke.

>> No.4058071

>>4058040
No patreon watermark.
>>4058045
Patreon watermark for the public.

BBC, stop engaging with nobodies.

>> No.4058073
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4058073

>>4058067
No, I'm the real CSR

>> No.4058078

>>4058073
>so desperate to get a (you) from senpai
yikes

>> No.4058081

>>4058078
>lying on the internet
sweetie

>> No.4058088

>>4058081
>keeps being yikes
yikes

>> No.4058094

>>4058088
cringe and redditpilled

>> No.4058104

>>4051886
FUCK YOU, YOU DIRTY GOBLIN MUTT, SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN, GET THE FUCK OUT

>> No.4058132
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4058132

https://twitter.com/vintagecults

>> No.4058143

CSRxBBC doujin collab when?

>> No.4058269
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4058269

nun is done.

>> No.4058276
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4058276

>>4058269
HOT
HERE'S A PRESENT 4 U

>> No.4058277
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4058277

>>4058276
naruto vs jotaro?

>> No.4058282

>>4058277
100% ORIGINAL CHARACTERS

>> No.4058325
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>>4057841
Ok thank you anon I plan to make her get raped by other factions/creatures all across skyrim!

>> No.4058371
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>> No.4058395

>>4058371
blog?

>> No.4058434

>>4058395
https://twitter.com/RonmeruArt

>> No.4058445

>>4058434
have you ever been commissioned?
be honest, I am not a potential client, don't worry

>> No.4058448
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4058448

>>4058371
"ay senpai can you get this wrinkle out of my panties?"

>> No.4058449

>>4058445
Judging by their skill and follower count + price = they were.

>> No.4058454

>>4058449
that's it, I'm done, I'm doing porn

>> No.4058455

>>4058454
pyw

>> No.4058459

>>4058445
>have you ever been commissioned?
almost everything posted on my twitter are commissions, also, i have a lot of private commissions


>>4058448
steam powered panties, anon. the future.

>>4058454
im not doing "porn" i just draw cute girls doing cute things.

>> No.4058469

>>4058459
Ty for the answer. I didn't mean to imply that you are doing porn.
<3
I didn't mean to sound rude.

>> No.4058477

>>4058459
Private commissions of lolis being banged my guess?

>> No.4058527

>>4058477
funny enough is that i havent got some of these, yet.

>> No.4058563

>>4058527
time to change this

>> No.4058684

>>4057367
This would be really hot if the Sidon's penis wasn't so huge. It just looks painful, Link would be bleeding everywhere.

>> No.4058686
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4058686

>>4058477
>>4058563
You're glowing in the dark.

>> No.4058733

>>4051886
Shoo shoo gains goblin

>> No.4058742

>Hamster getting into fights with randoms again
>Marmalade doing unappealing shit as usual, and strangely being more mature than Hamster is acting at this point
>porn thread serving its job as a containment thread for /beg's rejects
>/alt, draw, and /asg humming along as usual
>no lolicon, furry, or bestiality in sight
>mods doing their jobs

And all is right with /ic.

>> No.4058806

>trying to create a pixiv fanbox
>in accordance to paypal's terms of service paypal payments cannot be used for R-18 content
hold up hold up what, this only affects payments right? i can still receive pledges through paypal or? in fanbox's FAQ it says "Regardless of publishing settings, all creators can receive payout via PayPal."

>> No.4058814

>>4058269
nice. blog and do you know how to market yourself?

you could make it

>> No.4058816

>>4058742
Obsessed.

>> No.4058827

>>4058816
Havin' fun.

>> No.4058920
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>> No.4058922

>>4058920
good renceding but the legs look too much like tubes, the forms could use some refining.

>> No.4058923

>>4058920
If you were trying to convey a botched up mtf sex change you hit the nail right in the head.

>> No.4058946
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4058946

>>4040555
>>4054276
Moving further along with it now.

>> No.4058958
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4058958

How do i draw someone being blacked without it looking like they're extruding a log of shit out their vagina /ic/?

>> No.4058962

>>4058958
Stop trying to draw corprophagia and bestiality rolled into one for shekels, and dedicate yourself to drawing stuff that is actually appealing.

>> No.4058966

>>4058827
>not drawing
NGMI

>> No.4058969
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4058969

>> No.4058972

>>4058969
SHOO

>> No.4058973

>>4058972
more like (you)

>> No.4058983

>>4054588
Based.
Wouldn't mind another edgy artist like shad, except actually good.

>> No.4058987

>>4055781
Using japanese sound effects is kinda cringe dude.

>> No.4058995

>>4058969
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4059013

>>4058686
not everyone lives in countries that like to censor art

>> No.4059025

>>4058969
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN

>> No.4059037

>>4058920
That wound looks like a neovagina

>> No.4059095
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4059095

>>4058814
Its me, VU.
And kinda sorta.

>> No.4059388

>>4058958
Feces and black penises have different colors to them. With feces, you can add in greener tones and lumpy textures. Usually when someone poops they have harder stool at the beginning of pooping and it gets softer as it goes.
Black penises are redder towards the tip and you can add veins to sell that it's a penis even more. You also have to get the shape right, it's like the opposite of feces. Penises are thicker at the middle and thinner at the base and tip.
feces are thicker towards the beginning and gradually thin out more and more the longer a poop is.

t. scat artist

>> No.4059398

SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

>> No.4059425

>>4058969
i swear, couldnt you just try to change your style

>> No.4059435
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4059435

Done with the spookum

>> No.4059483
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4059483

wip

>> No.4059511
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4059511

>> No.4059526

>>4059511
Shoo shoo gains goblin.

>> No.4059532

>>4059511
Do you have a blog mr gains goblin? I want to see how many of your drawings look exactly the same

>> No.4059541
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4059541

>>4059532
i have a twitter, and if it can be expected of me to dig through several years of threads to find the 3 times anyones given me useful info on faces then i feel you can give a look back for when i've answered this the other 30 times

>> No.4059565

>>4059483
Who's penis is that? God, I hope it's Lycans.

>> No.4059568
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>>4059565
Axe, obv.

>> No.4059819

>>4051709
I'm glad to finally have confirmation that lambrey and ohheythatfisher are the same person, I felt like I was taking fucking crazypills

>> No.4059990
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>>4054588
ord cmon man

im redoing my mummy pic based off of some feedback. how does this read

>> No.4060012

>>4059541
You construct faces like they're furries.

>> No.4060026

>>4059541
Shoo shoo gains goblin.

>> No.4060199
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>>4060012
that's what i was thinking too lol

>> No.4060361

>>4060012
Also he's doing grossly exaggerated manga style that fails to capture any appeal of eastern or western erotic tradition.

>> No.4060473

>>4059511
>>4059541
SHOO SHOO GAINS GOBLIN!

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>>4059541
>expected of me to dig through several years of threads to find the 3 times anyones given me useful info on faces
Holy fuck as if being bad at art wasn't enough, you're ungrateful to the people who give you feedback too. Maybe instead of "digging through years of threads" to see what people said to you, just fucking practice and learn when they have something to offer.

You admit to posting here for years. YEARS nigger, as in increments of 365 and is at best a percentile of your entire lifespan. How the fuck are you getting upset people expect more and not in a doomspiral because HOLY FUCK YOU'RE STILL AS BAD AFTER YEARS OF HABITUAL PRACTICE,

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>>4053682