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Previous >>4028756

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

>> No.4040977
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>>4039222

>> No.4040980

>>4040977
Wait a minute, is this the anon that draw the same face for years?
He draw a whole body now? Holy shit

>> No.4040986

>>4040980
he's evolving...

>> No.4041004
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4041004

I've been told my works are caught between anime and cartoons (I'm going to post another picture after this. Some say it too anime and won't buy the manga/comic and others say it's too cartoon. So I'm stuck between two worlds both in art and story. What do I need to improve on?

>> No.4041007
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>>4041004
And sometimes I just half ass, for time

>> No.4041009

>>4040980
>>4040986
Nah, I'm the guy who drew the Rei redline who decided to redraw that guys drawing. It's kinda cute so I gave it like 10 minutes of messing around.

>> No.4041029

>>4041004
>>4041007
Half-conveinced this is bait, but the problem isn't your style, it's your fundamentals. Anime-Western hybrid styles can be very attractive and appealing, but you need to understand the elements of both: anatomy, form, perspective, gesture, and shape. You should do figure studies and read Hampton's figure drawing book if you want to improve, as it covers most of the topics I mentioned.

>> No.4041032

>>4041009
No offence man but I feel you should step away from the redlines, you're not bad but your redlines introduce a lot of new issues to the art you redraw and only really fit your own personal style, like the Rei you did in last thread.

>> No.4041044
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>>4041007
>>4041004

>> No.4041048

>>4040977
she have really short arms and the neck is too long

>> No.4041050

>>4041032
Sure, I'd love to see your redline. I'm quite curious what some of the issues are as I'm still learning myself. I don't personally care for most of the styles in the threads so I just default to how I'd do it.

>> No.4041078
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>>4041050
I didn't mean that post as "I'm better than you," I still have a lot of learning to do myself, as this sloppy redline may show. But the biggest problem you had with that new redraw specifically is your proportions. The girl has a long neck, short arms, and very long legs/torso.

>> No.4041115

>>4041078
Ah I see, I didn't bother to draw underneath the dress, so I didn't notice the legs being too long. I could've just selected the lower legs and shifted them up a bit and that would've solved the issue

>> No.4041127

Fugg I’m really tense about having my drawing as the OP because there were a lot of better drawings in the past thread, OP if you weren’t baiting then I’m flattered <3

>> No.4041130
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What do you think?

>> No.4041132

>>4041130
It’s charming

>> No.4041142

>>4040962
U N D E R A G E

>> No.4041145

LAZY EYE BUT CUTE!

>> No.4041146
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4041146

Roughing out designs. Which ones are keepers, which ones are duds, and which need just a touch up?

>> No.4041149

>>4041142
>Underage draws better than you

>> No.4041154

>>4041149
Issa yoke I left for her. Don't piss your pants.

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>>4041145
>>4041154

>> No.4041163

>>4041160
was meant for this predator right here >>4041142

>> No.4041165

>>4040962
What's the deal with the OP images lately? I dont mind /begs/ but has alt really gotten this bad that these are what you guys are putting in OPs?

>> No.4041167

>>4041165
Post your work you sorry faggot.

>> No.4041168
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>>4041160
>>4041163
She a fren.

>> No.4041169
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>>4041168
We frens

>> No.4041171

>>4041167
Not him, it's not bad, but it's weird to put such unfinished stuff in the OP. I think someone has just been making /alt/ threads using lower quality pieces as OPs to troll lately.

>> No.4041172

>>4041167
How does that change the fact the past few OPs have been complete /beg/ tier?
Did the /asg/ circlejerk ruin these threads too or something

>> No.4041180

>>4041171
>>4041172
Nobody cares what's on the OP, if you faggots were actually drawing you wouldn't be complaining over something so minute and insignificant instead you're more inclined to cause drama and be shitposting.

Quite frankly you ungrateful faggots don't even deserve someone making these threads for you.

>> No.4041186

>>4041180
>who cares
I see it every time I browse through it and it makes the thread look like it's full if low quality drawings.
>drawing
It takes 10 seconds to check /ic/ and make a post. I just got home and took a shit while browsing /ic/, not rocket science.
>ungrateful faggots
It takes half a second to copy and paste the old OP and make a picture. Fuck off.

You stink of /asg/, go back to your cringelord discord filled with "muh style" faggots.

>> No.4041191

>>4041186
>it makes the thread look like it's full if low quality drawings.
Where the fuck do you think you are?
>It takes 10 seconds to check /ic/ and make a post. I just got home and took a shit while browsing
Thank you for confirming you are literally a shitposter.

>> No.4041209

>>4041180
>>4041191
Honestly if you wanted to have people stop posting about this, you'd just choose one of the best drawings from the previous thread as OP. No one complained when the Jojo Death Grips picture was OP. This has just been going on for weeks now and it's frankly a little obnoxious to kick the threads off with bait.

>> No.4041212

>>4041146
Top Row: All of these have potential for massive cute. 2nd one and 1st have more interesting designs but the third is closer to being well drawn.
2nd Row: All of these are duds.
Third Row: On the 2nd one, ear seems a little far back but is looking pretty cute so far. The rest are duds.
4th Row: 1st one is the worst one on the page. 2nd has the most anime esque design to the hair but the face needs a lot of work. The last one has a better face but the hair design is a little boring.

>> No.4041227

>>4041209
>just choose one of the best drawings from the previous thread as OP
You are never going to satisfy everyone, the "best" drawing may be the worse for someone else to complain about as it is subjective towards each individual with different appeals. If I remember correctly there were at least a couple of Anons who complained about the jojo knockoff due to what the figure was doing since it look annoying.

Who are you to say what's good and satisfactory to be an OP? As for myself, the reason the image was chosen was due to how it caught the attention from the thumbnail which in of itself is a good thing. Getting your attention is the whole point to stand out.

>> No.4041241

>>4041227
>Who are you to say what's good and satisfactory to be an OP?
Well, here are a few of my personal favorites
>>4031776
>>4034083
>>4033299
>>4034083
>>4035481
>>4036553
>>4040152
We really are in no short supply of appealing, eye grabbing, finished works to put in the OP. Why put a half-painted sketch in it, when you have so many other options?

>> No.4041251

>>4041241
Here's a thought, why don't you make the OP the next time you little cunt?

>> No.4041252

>>4041115
if you’re going to try and fix something, don’t you think you should bother? otherwise you’re just going to give bad advice

>> No.4041257
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>> No.4041261

>>4041257
These are very cute, anon!

>> No.4041267

>>4041261
thank you

>> No.4041275

>>4041257
these are great! guy in the top left has an interesting design..

>> No.4041278

>>4041029
I did go to animation school, for year. Of course they said no anime like all western art school I know. I got thier books brigman, Drawing From Real Life, Robert Beverly Hale, Nicolades' The natural Way To Draw hawthorn on painting and artist books combined that with so old how yo draw book and studying Hentai doujins you would think I have it down pat. But still can't any love or following

>> No.4041294

>>4041275
its steve but a fat woman sat on his head

>> No.4041323

>>4041251
I will next time, the old thread is still up. You rushed to make the thread because you're an annoying faggot. You didn't even add text to the image or do anything that would take additional time, you literally just copy and pasted the old on.

>> No.4041342
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4041342

Came up with a lil character, I absolutely despise how I did the jacket on the left

>> No.4041352

>>4041323
and make sure you add new text with your inputs on your tutorials,your rules, and your favorite artist you suck dick from you micromanaging little faggot.

>> No.4041360

>>4041342
Stop drawing anime for a while and pick up Hampton design figure drawing design and innovation.

>> No.4041362

>>4041352
nobody cares that you made the thread you dumb entitled faggot. You didn't do anything worth being "grateful" for. Every single fucking person here can make a new thread.

Stick to your shitty discord and fuck off out of this thread.

>> No.4041368

>>4041362
That's what I've been saying you drooling retard, nobody fucking cares what's on the OP yet here you are complaining and bitching and moaning about the OP. Fuck off.

>> No.4041373

>>4041360
Thanks for the feedback, but why not both?

>> No.4041377
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>>4040562
Thanks, anon.
>>4040719
Haha, that's high flattery. I'm not very good at teaching and don't have any special insight though, I just throw shit at the wall and see what sticks.

>> No.4041381

>>4041373
leaning into stylization before you know the fundamentals of a certain topic can stint your improvement. your art is rather well rendered but still has some small issues with proportion and perhaps the clothing is something else you could work on. certainly don't stop making your stylized works, but use realism when you do an exercise. this makes sort of a distinction between learning the skills and applying them.

>> No.4041383

>>4041381
This is very helpful anon, thanks for taking the time to write this.

>> No.4041384

>>4041373
You should do both if your goal is to do anime-styled art. Definitely don't stop drawing anime, but you should practice doing more realistic works and studies on the side so you can understand what you're styling.

>> No.4041386

>>4041384
Yeah you’re right, I’ve definitely been slacking off when it came to studies lately. I’ll practice some tonight

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>>4041004
>>4041007
>>4041278
oh hey kuro, like the other anon said you really need fundies, just do some studies

>>4041377
nice stuff anon

how do you guys keep a consistant style?

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>> No.4041521

>>4041467
Ohh you’re good

>> No.4041576

>>4041146
2nd middle and bottom middle are the one's im most interested in.

>> No.4041579

>>4041377
someone else who draws shit from 41 strange i see. anyway, the lines on that net are lazy

>> No.4041591
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A bug is at home performing menial tasks. Whether to labor in the hive or in battle makes no difference.

>> No.4041593
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a quick cell sketch while rewatching DBZA

>> No.4041596

>>4041579
I don't usually do this, my friend just sent me a tweet from the account and suggested I turn it into a character.
Yeah, the net lines are lazy. I tried doing some more complex and realistic ways of drawing it but they all looked too busy and unappealing to me, so I decided I liked the flat pattern best.

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>>4041146
love this one

>> No.4041601
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>>4041593

>> No.4041606

>>4041424
True, true, also I forgot my names were on these pictures too. I hoping to use this thread and to teach the others

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>>4041601
hey come on man he's half perfect

>> No.4041656

>>4041373
Where did he say stop drawing anime forever? Don't be so defensive. I guess since you're just 16 it comes with the territory, but you do need stronger fundamentals. Is that so wrong to say?

>> No.4041657

>>4041656
I wasn’t really that defensive... I feel like you misread the tone of my reply

>> No.4041692

>>4040977
Hey, I'm the guy who drew the original pic. Appreciate your redline. It's kinda nice to sometimes see another persons take at drawing something you draw.

>> No.4041753
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4041753

Im not sure if its the right place but in photoshop how do you disable color build up for pressure sensitive brush strokes? I'm trying to paint on clipping layers and having to blend the touching strokes makes it too blurry overtime.

>> No.4041758

>>4041753
pretty sure you dont

>> No.4041771

>>4041758
Thats annoying, thanks

>> No.4041798

>>4041656
have sex

>> No.4041819

>>4041641
Just give up you clearly have no talent

>> No.4041836

>>4041819
not him but post your work fuckface

>> No.4041839

>>4041819
Huh? Maybe try and give an actual critique?

>> No.4041844

I miss Chico.....

>> No.4041863

>>4041601
lel

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>>4041601

>> No.4041869
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Middle column done.

>> No.4041928

>>4041869
Very nice, blog?

>> No.4041930

>>4041928

Here you go.

https://twitter.com/WhiteBox_Studio

>> No.4041956
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4041956

>>4041869
very nice bro, keep going
study that perspective!
your hair is always really nicely done!
I think your art has the potential to look really cool. The girls you draw are cute. If you sharpen up your perspective/fundies
a little bit more your art will look awesome.
here's a random doodle as a present for u

>> No.4042007
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So girl scouts and shit usually have an animal theme so I figured why not make em squirrels? And what if- they were in space?

>> No.4042121

>>4041956
Thanks, man. I'm honored.

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4042157

>>4040962
Posted in the dead thread by accident...

>> No.4042160

>>4041869
HardstonesMcflintcock?

>> No.4042296

>>4042007
great concept and lighting, I love it

>> No.4042333

>>4042157
c-cute

>> No.4042336

>>4042007
L-LEFTY?

>> No.4042339

>>4040962
Garbage header pic, OP. Trying too hard to promote your work? :)

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>>4042333
danke anon

>> No.4042344
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I'm not all that great at character design but I wanted to design my own mascot. Anything that could be improved design-wise?

>> No.4042346

>>4042344
Looks good albeit a bit generic.

Need more context as to what she is supposed to be a mascot for to give suggestions.

>> No.4042362

>>4042344
Give her an iconic hat

>> No.4042363

>>4042336
yeah it's that guy from long time ago. Still recognize his 3/4 view it's nearly the exact same omegalul.

>> No.4042404

>>4042339
I didn’t even make the thread anon, it was clearly put up as bait considering it’s even unfinished and you’re falling for it

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>>4042346
She'd be a mascot for my "brand" I guess? For my social media and stuff, and maybe my online store I guess? I just want a cute character to draw that people will see and associate with me

>>4042362
Drawing hats is a pain but I think she actually looks pretty good with a hat
She definitely needed something on her head

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>>4042425
Glad to have helped! Looking at this character, I’m getting an impression of a circus show woman? So maybe it’d be cool to give her a cane and the two little things at the back hanging off her vest

>> No.4042513

>>4041656
seething

>> No.4042520

>>4041146
woof woof<3

>> No.4042527
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Some generic jrpg type design

>> No.4042529

>>4042363
Nope, guess again I have no idea who this Lefty guy is, I'm the guy who made the /ic/ wiki.

>> No.4042579

>>4042529
nah I remember you dude. I don't know who the hell lefty is, if someone could post an example of lefty's work that'd be helpful, but im almost 99.99% sure I know who you are.

>> No.4042610

>>4042579
>3/4ths view
Yeah usually they're kinda the same in anime. If you have a problem with the face feel free to redline it, give me those gains bro.

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>>4042527
Oh slight change

>> No.4042785

Pyw

>> No.4042787

>>4042633
This is really charming!

>> No.4042788

Pyw

>> No.4042860

>>4042787
Thanks!

>> No.4042878
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>>4042579
>if someone could post an example of lefty's work

>> No.4042928
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>> No.4042933

>>4042928
Nice perspective man!

>> No.4043011

>>4042878
Yeah no, I'm way better than this guy,
Whenever I rush or don't really care about something (like doing redlines on ic) I usually get careless and make dumbass mistakes.

>> No.4043017
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>>4043011
>I'm way better than this guy
Yeah, no, post your work.

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4043068

>>40430178
>post work
I was the guy who posted those Space Squirrels. I could see an argument for him being good at figure drawing, but my faces, rendering and coloring skills far exceed his.

>> No.4043074

>>4043068
meant to reply to
>>4043017

>> No.4043085

>>4043068
>>4043011
Better or not please learn some humility

>> No.4043090

>>4043068
You're baiting right? I refuse to believe someone is capable of being this high level of a dunning kruger.

>> No.4043104

>>4043085
>humility
Sorry if I was being rude, I was just stating my observations. Perhaps in your eyes he's a better artist and that's not for me to decide especially for stylized art.
>>4043090
Stop being triggered and post your work. Tricking others into getting into a fight on image boards is not benefit to anybody.

>> No.4043107

>>4043068
Your faces are cute but you can only draw one kind. Not to be rude or insulting, man, but you have a serious case of same face syndrome and only every really draw them from one angle.

>> No.4043110

>>4043107
>Same face syndrome
I disagree with the same angle thing as I have drawn different angles before, but I can agree that my faces need more variety.

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4043121

>>4043104
First of all we're not trying to pick fights with a shrimp like you, I was simply appalled by your boastful post and needed to see just what kind of faggot was behind it. Why don't you post something other than a cliche bust shot with a 3/4 view angle? I'd post the entire figure but you are not worth getting banned over.

>> No.4043125

>>4043121
4 months and you still working on this ? also post the full figure and dont be a wuss

>> No.4043127

>>4043125
Some of us do not have the luxury of being full time NEETS

>> No.4043128

>>4043121
Post the full figure, faggot. I want to see how much of a pedophile you really are.

>> No.4043132

>>4043121
>shrimp like you

Says the actual pedophile hahaha hoooly shit dude get some help

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>>4043128
Nice try glowie.

>> No.4043139

>>4043121
MODS!

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>>4041227
>>4041209
>>4041180
>>4041171
>>4041167
>>4041165

Why not just make a collage of the best images ITT for the next OP....?

>> No.4043147

>>4041819
stop being so toxic

>> No.4043152

>>4043144
That sounds like a good idea! :0

>> No.4043154

>>4043127
cope

>> No.4043157

>>4043144
That what we used to have in old /alt/ threads. The person who did them stopped eventually, I guess/

>> No.4043169

>>4042427
I like that cane idea, I might just do that, thanks again anon

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4043190

>>4043121
>checks thread
>sees some retard arguing with some guy posting his work
>posts your work wars begin
>autist posts stiffly posed loli ""WIP"" of Hatsune miku

Congratulations, you doubly fucked yourself.

>> No.4043196

>>4043190
at least he posted is work not like 99% of ic

>> No.4043207

>>4043190
Care to analyze it a bit more and provide some useful feedback instead of shitflinging?

>> No.4043210

>>4043121
Is this the real Mikufag or just someone posting his work?

>> No.4043240

>>4043207
Look at where you light source is coming from. There seems to be light coming from above and to the left of the figure, yet there are highlights on the right side of her eye.
The way the eyes are shaded as a smooth gradient clashes against the more sharply defined hair and is also just wrong in a lighting sense
The way her arms and torso is drawn, the figure feels very stiff. Try to add a tilt in the shoulders and curve the body a little.
Also the fingers on the hand look like weird sausages with no definite form or sense of proper joints. Study on hands a bit more.

>> No.4043244

>>4043240
Thank you

>> No.4043276

>>4043127
How little free time do you have dude? I can only see it taking 3 days max to paint that

>> No.4043304
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>> No.4043406

>>4043304
terrible

>> No.4043457

>>4043406
post your work

>> No.4043485

>>4042007
So wait.. Let me get this straight. I called you out on drawing the same face lifeless stiff and dull 3/4 view for over 3 years, and now you think you're better than this guy?>>4042878

can you just shut up and accept you're shit. go draw more. You have too much pride for someone with that little skill level. I haven't really seen someone with this much dunning kruger before..

>> No.4043489
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4043489

>>4043457

>> No.4043492

>>4043121
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

>> No.4043534

>>4043304
shit
>>4043489
based

>> No.4043535
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4043535

>>4043121
you need more loomis

>> No.4043539
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4043539

>>4040962

>> No.4043555
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4043555

>>4043121

>> No.4043556
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4043556

>>4043535

>> No.4043571

>>4043068
You can't draw for shit subu. It's all stiff and poorly anime styled

>> No.4043578

>>4043121
Based pedoanon

>> No.4043579

>>4041591
Underrated!!!

>> No.4043580

>>4041165
Chico is gone, OP image is not a place of honor anymore, it's just a way for retard begs to promote themselves.

>> No.4043583

>>4043580
who

>> No.4043587

>>4043583
Some tripfag from /a/ that didn't even draw and took it upon themselves to create these threads for a couple of years.

>> No.4043594

>>4043489
yep, as I thought. you are based and free to shitfling

>> No.4043595

why do so many of you draw lewd art or porn? No offense to anyone It's just really boring subject matter. There's dozens of posters on this board making more or less the same type work.
It's a bit disappointing when someone has good drawing skills or art style but they just mostly post incomplete smut drawings.

>> No.4043598

>>4043539
this is pretty cool

>> No.4043600

>>4043595
Because not a lot of people draw the kind of porn I like

>> No.4043601

>>4043595
it's fun

>> No.4043602

>>4043600
You're not a special snowflake. Stop pretending.

>> No.4043606

>>4043602
Sorry for pretending to have specific preferences, anon.

>> No.4043629
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>> No.4043635

>>4043629
Inb4 this is the next op

>> No.4043639

>>4043539
noice

>> No.4043646

>>4043629
SAME AS IT EVER WAS
SAME AS IT EVER WAS
SAME AS IT EVER WAS
SAME AS IT EVER WAS

>> No.4043647

>>4043629
>same shit

please just stop coming back here

>> No.4043650

>>4043629
can't wait for the whiteknights to come and defend this piece of rancid fecal matter

>> No.4043651

>>4043646
>>4043647
I bet it's more appealing than anything you've ever concocted.

>> No.4043652

>>4043646
ha.haha>>4043647
haaaaaaaaaaaaha

Seeth-uhhh---ingg---

>> No.4043654

>>4043650
>>4043651
Lel
Not the people you replied to but the dude seriously needs to exit his comfort zone if he ever wants to improve. He's essentially posted the same drawing over and over again, and it's not a great drawing at that. No point is posting the same image to these threads, especially if you don't plan on taking any advice or crit on them.

>> No.4043657
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4043657

>>4043651
you don't know shit try again

>> No.4043658

>>4043654
The point still stands, the probability of his regurgitated animu face being more appealing than your best material remains very high.

>> No.4043660

>>4043657
dumbass

>> No.4043661
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4043661

tee hee no bully allowed nerds

>> No.4043664

>>4043657
While it may be structurally sound, the choice of medium literally puts a strain on the eyes and you actually managed to turn it into nothing but an eyesore.

>> No.4043665

>>4043658
I mean this is my stuff, >>4041377. Appeal depends on your own personal tastes so I'll leave you to decide which one you enjoy more.
Personal preferences aside, appeal doesn't really mean a lot if you can only capture it from one specific face at one angle. If he wants to draw cute anime girls he should probably practice doing some figure drawing, or at least draw more than just head head looking face-on.

>> No.4043668

>>4043665
Okay you also got an appeal. He's still more appealing than most of you fags.

>> No.4043669
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4043669

>5 years
>any kind of attempt at drawing from below the neck will result in maximum garbage
>but fuck the haters lets keep shitposting

here we go

>> No.4043671

>>4043669
He is the hero you all fucking deserve.

>> No.4043672

>>4043668
that's subjective and his art it's objectively bad period, sorry to break it to you sweetie

>> No.4043674
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4043674

lol i dont really do that much finished stuff though they're all just sketchy stuff. I still find drawing a frontal view of an anime face kinda hard though. so its a challenge whenever I attempt it.

>> No.4043677
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4043677

it feels like yesterday

>> No.4043679
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4043679

>>4043672
He's drawn other faces before, and they're all very appealing - a trait that is often not found from here.

>> No.4043681

>>4043672
idk what you're constantly trying to prove, as if you're art is better than mine? Do you really just come here to jerk off to how good your drawings are over others? fuck. yeah.. i can say your art is bad too so fuck off lol.

>> No.4043684

Why does this dude have such a big defense squad? Not even good artists get this much defense.

>> No.4043686
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4043686

>>4043684
LEAVE DENTIST-KUN ALONE.

>> No.4043689

im
>>4043647 and like >>4043646 this guy said "same shit" in any moment i said your art it's shit but you do the same shit always and never ever go out of your confort zone you don't come here to improve or get feedback you only come here to shitpost and seek attention, why do you even bother coming here this isn't /i/, it's not like you care anyways

another day on /ic/ NOTHING but shit

>> No.4043694

>>4043689
what? I literally just drew another picture of a girl holding a sword. like.. What the hell do you want from me lol? It's all just lines on paper..>>4043686
haha desu.. school didn't work out that well.. I mean I don't really have the motivation to really continue.. While I'm still pursuing a degree in the life sciences, I may take a gap year possibly thinking of other alternatives.

>> No.4043723

>>4043629
Holy shit he improved wtf.

>> No.4043733

>>4043668
>>4043658
>>4043651
Stop talking in third person honey. I'm sorry you're incapable of improving for the past 5 years

>> No.4043736

>>4043679
Your pic related is from pops, not the dentist faggot

>> No.4043743
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4043743

Tried drawing Phos to practice gem shine shit, but can anyone give me advice to achieve a sharper/geometric light effect that would suit gems more?

>> No.4043748
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4043748

>>4043733
can you just shut up. Go critique someone else's art. Sorry for posting here and on a side note gtfout of my life.

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4043757

>>4043743
I know there's a tut somewhere on how to draw gembutt hair
Try to look for crystal tutorials too, see if you can incorporate that to your work

>> No.4043765
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4043765

>>4043757
Yeah, I really gotta practice more, I just find it hard to copy that geometric shine look like in pic related, I thin it looks super pretty, even if it isn't specifically realistic.

>> No.4043767

>>4043765
>>4043743
You may want to try using more hard edges for those shadows and highlights, I feel.

>> No.4043768

>>4043595
sooner or later loli is going to be illegal and then I will only have myself to rely on so I have to practice now to git gud
it's insurance for the future

>> No.4043771

>>4043767
Yeah, I tend to shy away from doing hard edges since it's hard to imagine what it'll look like when its done, often times it comes out looking like I've just been drawing a bunch of white triangles over my art.

>> No.4043777

>>4043765
aaaaaah i love phos

>> No.4043782
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4043782

>>4043121
>You're baiting right? I refuse to believe someone is capable of being this high level of a dunning kruger.

>> No.4043784

>>4043489
Based cunny artist

>> No.4043786

>>4043629
Cute ;)

>> No.4043790
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4043790

Opinions? I've seemed to keep the same style through out the years and I've been trying to use more reference to give more personality but I still feel it looks very mechanical

>> No.4043797

>>4043790
There's a few anatomy bits that look a kind of wonky like her knees and chin/jawline shape, but otherwise its pretty nice, like the colour palette and clothing, and you've got very clean line work.

>> No.4043798

>>4043790
The highlights look rather odd and don't quite make sense. She looks oily more than anything. The soft shading and blushes also don't give much sense of form. I'd suggest using harder shadows and being less timid of using them, and softer highlights.

>> No.4043878
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4043878

Messing about

>> No.4043884

>>4043878
Oh these are fucking lovely good job, I love the Rei

>> No.4043911
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4043911

I always post feedback but never my work so here is a little monster girl doodle

>> No.4043945

>>4043911
Cute, looks like it could be a logo for something if it was simplified more

>> No.4044095
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4044095

This is almost done

>> No.4044103
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4044103

Where should i put the shadows of the character if the umbrella is in the top right, help please

>> No.4044107

>>4044095
looks bretty good, weeb

>> No.4044109

>>4044095
wholesome my dude

>> No.4044110

>>4044103
improve the feet then I'll tell you

>> No.4044115

>>4044107
I am a dirty weeb.

>> No.4044117

>>4044110
:( Ok

>> No.4044210

>>4044095
wow

>> No.4044216

>>4044095
Gib me your blog senpai

>> No.4044218

>>4044103
Very very cute

>> No.4044228

>>4043748
you gotta go back...

>> No.4044295

>>4044216
@malintfalch

my feed is kind of random tho, still figuring out what type of drawing I wanna do.

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>> No.4044338
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4044338

>>4044318
loomis

>> No.4044355

>>4043598
>>4043639
:) Thanks, anons.

>> No.4044356

>>4043660
>>4043664
ultra cope

>> No.4044361
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4044361

>>4044318

>> No.4044364

>>4043657
based

>> No.4044396

>>4044103
Me on the left

>> No.4044412

>>4044095
Finally, some not-garbage in here.

>> No.4044515
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4044515

I'll probably give this guy some clothes later but I'm still not quite sure what to put on him. Not 100% on the colors but at this point they'd be a bit more difficult to change

>>4044095
Adorable! The simple background painting is really charming

>> No.4044528

>>4044515
Ohhh nice colours

>> No.4044548

>>4044515
I think the colours are fine on that pic, not garish but still varied.

Not sure what clothes you’d be going for, maybe a scarf or a hat? Would be pretty cute.

>> No.4044561
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4044561

The ocean is a source of life with few knights feeling drawn to protect it.

>> No.4044602

>>4044095
Saved for inspiration

>> No.4044659

>>4044561
Fantastic pic

>> No.4044662
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4044662

>>4044561
Cool as always, Boss, but the eel kind of disrupts the whole image. It stands out too much imo

>> No.4044691

>>4043945
If you just isolate the head it looks like it could be a logo for some streaming service.

>> No.4044710
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4044710

>>4044103
Umbrella in the top right doesn't mean anything if you don't give us a preferred lighting direction. Light from top left would cast the umbrella off the right.

If you take light coming from top right, almost behind the camera, you might be able to get the top of the torso covered with cast shadow and leave the lower half/legs in the sunlight, which lets you show off body curvature using the hard edge of the cast shadow. Personally I think this is more interesting.

Pic slightly related as example.

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4044719

>>4044326
bring the fur down at least midway down the thigh to link the two, right now it just looks like pic related because the subjects are so disconnected

>> No.4044782

>>4041160
Man, that's an old image.

>> No.4044787
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4044787

>>4043878
I fucking love this, do you have an instagram or something
And how do you get to just drawing the figure right off the bat without doing gestures? Is it just practice or it there a certain method, for some reason I can’t get past doing a gesture and then putting anatomy on top

>> No.4044791

>>4044719
Is it bad that I wanted it to have a somewhat disconnected look...? I’m not trying to be defensive, it’s just when I was drawing it I was having a lot of fun trying to make it look like a badly photoshopped image

>> No.4044886

>>4044791
intentionally disconnected shitposting has its own appeal so no

>> No.4044890

>>4044886
I feel like you’ve just forgiven me for my sins, thanks anon

>> No.4045051
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4045051

>>4042633
Added some more to it. Excuse the weeb symbols it just adds a cool factor for me personally.

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ahh

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>>4043121
Figured out what I don't like, the face is flat because none of the shadows suggest cheeks. Try this.

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>>4040962

>> No.4045452
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>> No.4045474 [DELETED] 
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4045474

Idk

>> No.4045542
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>> No.4045552

>>4045542
B I G G E R

>> No.4045553

>>4045542
Why did you delete and repost

>> No.4045569

>>4045542
Tits too small. 0/10

>> No.4045598

>>4043489
Your anatomy is fucked

>> No.4045611

>>4045542
When are we gonna get some small boobed girls with cute pixie haircuts :c

>> No.4045621
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4045621

>>4045552
Maybe

>>4045553
Changed the highlight from green-ish to blue-ish and other stuff

>>4045569
:<

>>4045611
I will add one in my next poll but idk if my patrons will choose her, in the meantime have a quick sketch

>> No.4045683
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4045683

So, i have gotten to a point where I could say that i'm pretty happy with my sketches, rendering from this point onward is not an issue. But i feel like my future drawing random anime girl #213 for commissions and twitter retweets is not what i have been striving forwards all those years.

>> No.4045688

>>4045683
Take some time looking through work that inspires you and decide what you want to do with your art, try to absorb everything you see for creativity- watch movies, play games, listen to music, read books and even observe from life. You just need a stronger visual library so you can have more ambition with your art

>> No.4045694

>>4045688
i've done this every day, but nothing just stimulates or inspires me anymore. It's like i've seen everything and nothing at the same time

>> No.4045697

>>4045694
I’m sorry to hear that, anon, I hope you find your spark again one day

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4045702

>>4045697
i hope so, I need to find the enjoyment from drawing again, and hopefully everything falls back into place

>> No.4045712

>>4045702
The good thing is, your skill is on point so when you do find inspiration, it won’t be hard to draw your ideas

>> No.4045726
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4045726

Why this had only 30 shares on my facebook account, i dont understand

>> No.4045728
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4045728

I was playing around with my coloured pencils cause I realised it’s been a while since I used them, also this might sound tacky and cheap- but I noticed that a concept becomes 10x more interesting to me if I make it steampunk haha

>> No.4045730

>>4045726
It looks good anon

>> No.4045734

>>4045730
Something must be off and unappealing in this one that im not seeing. It had a very low like rate on my instagram too

>> No.4045735

>>4045734
It must’ve been fucked over by the algorithm maybe?

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4045771

>>4045452
this is amazing

Is she cute boyss what do you think??

>> No.4045872

>>4045771
She’s very cute

>> No.4045875
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4045875

>> No.4045900

>>4045542
So uhh where's that redditor woof woof guy when we need him

>> No.4045907

>>4045875
it would better if it was more anime looking

>> No.4045921 [DELETED] 

>>40459075
go post that in /asg/

>> No.4045933

>>4045907
i wanted to go for a stylized look like tristana from league

>> No.4045951

>>4045875
I feel like this piece in handicapped by the unsteadiness of your lines, especially in the gun areas. The rim of the cannon lacks both clear form and confidence, which kind of brings the rest of the piece down.
Also, you may want to think more about the silhouette of the twintails and using them to frame the figure, having the tip of the right ponytail obscured behind the figure makes the hair less easy to read (I thought they were one ponytail for a while) and doesn't really direct the viewers eyes well.

>> No.4046009
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4046009

>>4045875

>> No.4046013

>>4046009
why does she look like the piss girl

>> No.4046021

>>4046009
>let's flip the canvas so nobody would know
I gotta admit I'm guilty of doing this sometimes

>> No.4046039

>>4046021
>>4046009
i never said it wasnt from a ref

>> No.4046054
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4046054

Rei

>> No.4046058

>>4046054
cute aaaaaaa

>> No.4046060

>>4046054
I like your style anon, but she looks like a he
in the face

>> No.4046062

>>4046060
ooo... naughty ;)

>> No.4046063

>>4046054
Very very cute

>> No.4046069

>>4046062
fukk am I mental?
has all this trap shit finally brainwashed me?

>> No.4046084

>>4046069
clearly yes.you are now a full fledged fag

>> No.4046088

>>4046069
no, it just looks like shinji doing a rei cosplay

>> No.4046095

>>4046084
but I can't be a fag, I only like little girls...
That's why this image confuses me, it's a little girl, but I'm not attracted
wtf?

>> No.4046121
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4046121

>>4046095

>> No.4046124

>>4046121
That’s cuter

>> No.4046125
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4046125

Asuka

>> No.4046130

>>4046121
You nailed the body, got the hair wrong and the face isn't quite right either.

Still like it though.

>> No.4046131

>>4046125
I really like this anon, I think her feet are connected to her legs weird though

>> No.4046134

>>4046125
Nice

>> No.4046140

>>4046125
are you using reference ?

>> No.4046143

>>4046125
Her left leg calves are misplaced but overall pretty nifty

>> No.4046148

>>4046140
no

>> No.4046154

Now that this thread has hit the bump limit someone please don’t put bait as the next OP image so that there isn’t any shit flinging

>> No.4046163

>>4046154
Would have made one already by now but let's leave it to the other cunt that insisted on an original OP with new text and a personalized image collage for the OP.

>> No.4046165
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>>4046163
Yes. Let’s

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>>4046165
Do you think he's struggling to make the image collage an interesting composition?

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>>4046169
I hope so

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>>4046172
Who /comfy/ here?

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>>4046177
Me!

>> No.4046201

>>4046163
You seem a bit upset, but if you want a collage I'll make one.

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Tick Tock OP, and remember you're doing it for free

>> No.4046209

>>4046201
Please make one so that those 3 anons stop shitting up /alt/ with their complaining

>> No.4046217

>imagine actually drawing instead of frogposting

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>>4046217
I was actually drawing! Just picked my phone up occasionally to check this thread

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>>4046223
It's okay fren we can all draw and frenpost at the same time

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>>4046226

>> No.4046249

>>4046248
Migrate

>> No.4046279

>>4046249
thank you

>> No.4047128

>>4046054
Real nice. Any blog?

>> No.4047947

>>4046165
>>4046169
>>4046172
>>4046177
>>4046193
>>4046206
>>4046223
>>4046226
>>4046231
cute
GMI

>> No.4048126

>>4046130
>got the hair wrong
I disagree. I like his style here. instead of literally copying detail for detail. I dislike how precious people can sometimes be with iconic anime characters.