/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4002863
Cute for a 16yo
/ourloli/ is going to make it

>>4002866
>16
>loli

>>4002866

>>4002867
Its a body type

>>4002866
The middle one has a lot of appeal for certain, something which completely /ic/ fails at.

lazy finished doodle

>>4002882
Fixed it for you

>>4002884

Is this one of those spot the difference puzzles?

>>4002884
Why are you gay?

Please do reply I don't mean this.

>>4002866

in that roastie's dreams.

How do I draw chibis?

>>4003050
You need to get better at normal art before you stylize. THis isn't even stylized or alt, it's just not well done. Learn anatomy.

>>4003050
Good job constructing the shoes, but there’s not much else I can compliment

>>4003175
What is normal art ?

heres a warmup i did, still trying to flesh out my style more

>>4003280
This is so cute! I love it

>>4003280
She’s leaning a tad too much for comfort though

>>4003363
this looks really good, i really like how expressive the body/pose is

>>4003363
Needs more waist.

>>4003363
>>4003418
Needs more REI-st

>>4003443
leans forward too much

>>4002863
source of sketch? i really like it.

>>4003459
That's my work :] thank you, you can find more on my instagram. I feel kinda awkward giving it out on here though, can I have your blog instead to give it to you?

>>4003473
instagram.com/nuruigumi

>>4002871
wrong

>>4003482
>the /beg/ who made 3D models of anime faces that he could trace because he refused to think spatially
Good to see you still can’t draw after all these months

>>4003443

>>4003280
From preview I through it's a headless girl holding the head in her arms

>>4003443
is it intentional that you made her upper body so small? makes her look incredibly squished

>>4003363
Long neck

>>4003492
Lol seriously stop it with the "oh I'm so much better than you shit" when you don't even have the nerve to post your own work. The fact that you're being a crab means that you suck as well so shut up.

>>4003558
lmao
the fox girl of the lefts hand is backward man..

>>4002884
BASED

WIP

>>4003577
I know, hence the file name. Not sure how I messed that up though.

>>4002884
>113kb mole
damn he big

>>4003363

:>

>>4003676
not op but i love and appreciate you redline anon

>>4003676
Thanks for the redline anon.
I'll take note of the neck and shoulder.

>>4003486
>what is a lolibaba

>>4003676
saved

>>4003601
kek

>>4002867
It's a start. We'll have a loli artist harem soon enough.

Deep sea creatures is my go-to theme for when i'm out of ideas ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

I don't feel like im improving

>>4004235
probably because you're constantly doing the same thing?

>>4004235
If you want to improve I think the biggest things you could do are
>Study the forms more, I think a lot of your work has a "flat" look to it that can sometimes be interesting, but I think it's ultimately holding you back
>Push yourself harder with coloring. Again, you often go for a flat look, but I think it would benefit you to leave your comfort zone and experiment with shading and rendering
>Study anatomy in-depth. You have some issues with the whole body, but especially your hands and feet. Even if you're trying to draw monster-like hands and feet, it's good to know the real-world basis for those body parts so you can make a more convincing stylization
Basically, if you leave your comfort zone and get on the grind, I think you can make some major gains. I like your work anon, so I hope you can make even better stuff in the future.

>>4003443
Brekkist or Keppok which one are you trying to be?

>>4002863
can someone guide me what i did wrong with this?
i need your advice and critique especially regarding the hair
redlines very much welcomed

Is she cute friends

>>4004272
I think she’d be cuter if you moved the mouth and the nose closer together <3

>>4004274
thank you friend

>>4004272
i want to put my pee pee in her girl pee pee

>>4004267
maybe try lessening the tumor coming out of her right cheek.. the mouth and hands too anon.

>>4004267
use thicker lines for the top eye lashes? and fix that hand bby

>>4004267
I’ll do a redline for you when I get home

>>4002863
been studying animu for the last few days

>>4002863
been studying animu for the last few days

>>4002863 (OP)
been studying animu for the last few days

>>4002863

>>4004710
Ohhh good job anon, this is pretty appealing
>>4004746
I like the pale aesthetic of this

>>4004746
What's the deal with that pouch rocko always has?

>>4003363
Let me see the reference

Going old school with a bunch of studies, i gotta fill this book 49/50 pages left

>>4004920
It contains a mechanism that converts her spare magical powers into what's called H.E.A.T cartridges. She can then use in her left prosthetic hand to apply a very explosive and very focus magical based violence on someone.

>>4004783
thanks, although I think I abuse those few hues of blue too much...

>>4003492
>he still has more followers than me
whyyyyyyyyyy

>>4004985
ngmi

Anime sucks but I wanted to draw some frog girl.

Designing a strawberry milkshake mascot-kinda character. I'm happy with the floating face, but I'm struggling with making the full body look cute.

>>4003280
neat style but very uneven. There is a significant lean and half of her facial features (eyes/ ears/ zig zags) are much smaller than the other. Ii know you can't mirror your canvas easily with traditional but its something you have to keep in mind.

I want to draw shoujo but I lack the finesse...

bea a CUTE

>>4004949
Love the blue splashes on the studded backpack and visor.

>>4004985
I have never got a follower from posting art, only from shilling.

>>4005023
Fixed a bit

>>4005076
hahaha i knew you would do it rinfag
keep it up!

>>4005076
man... you really oughta work on that face.

>>4005241
>Hand coming at you
>Get's smaller
That's the opposite of how perspective works.

>>4005241
I like the concept but the other anon is right about that hand... please make it bigger

>>4004949
What'd you use for reference? This is really cool

I gave up

>>4004267
I hope this helps! I would try to work over the hand but I'm not confident in my ability when it comes to hands haha...

>>4005281
>>4005297

Shit that's the last time I flatten all my layers. I'll try to be vigilant about this in the future.

>>4004161
Yay that was fun.

>>4004925
there is no ref anon
just a doodle that i decided to line

I'm trying to get better at drawing butts

>>4005661
i like that you're pushing yourself to draw more now, keep it up.

>>4005076
when the mouth level linking towards the nose is flat it makes them look like a mouse/furry

just sayin

>>4005460
hand and feet are fucked

>>4003676
I appreciate you anon

>>4005827
>>4005076
to elaborate, shelf the bottom of the nose and keep the philtrum vertical even if you don't draw it, don't draw a cone in the middle of the face
animu noses in profile like to jut out then come almost straight down into the jaw, but in a more frontal you'll have to define the bottom edge

>>4005661
Honestly your downie eyes have grown on me over the years, anon, it's a pretty cute aesthetic

But move the bopps down

Death Grips but it's a JoJo OC

>>4005135
id make the white patch on its tummy bigger but otherwise this is adorable

>>4005850
This is nice AF

How do I stop making wonky/unbalanced pictures? I flip it as I'm drawing but I can never manage to fix it and I give up. How did you get over that problem?

>>4005850
Really captures the style and feel of the original, good work.

>>4005866
Plan it out beforehand. You should be able to draw a vertical line where weight is placed and the distribution fore/aft should be roughly equal. Take these 3 pages from loomis as an example.

>>4005002
looks really flat, try to put in more construction and anatomy is real off
ngl /beg/ would probaly be more appropriate

>>4005502
try to show more twist in the torso bc it looks disconnected

>>4005609
>>4005714
good stuff

>>4005850
stand name? lol

>>4005841
Over the years? Has he really been posting the same anime face for that long?

>>4005877
hot head cus then it could go BLOBLOBLOBLOBLOBLO

>>4005609
love love love ur lines

>>4005850
This is good stuff, I love that stand design and you emulated Araki pretty well.

>>4005875
Thank you for your reply. I should have specified that my problem is even more fundamental, where I have problems even making the face look right.
Here's something I just drew. Anon's advice will probably be to go back to the basics, which I will. I just wish I didn't keep stumbling every time I try to figure out my problems.

>>4004236
I dont agree, I like to think I experiment a lot. Even in that piece I challenged myself to draw multiple characters interacting.

>>4004244
Im trying anon but once a drawing starts to take more then 10+ hours I just lose so much motivation. Like if I spend 10 hours on a drawing, thats like HALF of the free time I get all week. By the time I get to colouring im already burned out.

I wouldn't mind "grinding out" some coloring practice and skipping over the linework but im not sure where to start. Should I just start colouring other peoples line art or something?

>>4002863
Its been months since I drew anything and I am really tired. Lemme know if there is anything wrong with this and I will check tomorrow morning. good night!

>>4006012
>I like to think I experiment a lot.

You're literally doing the same shit no matter what you draw.

There is no difference between drawing a pile of shit on different canvases as opposed to drawing them all on the same canvas, at the end of the day you drew the same amount of bad shit. There is no difference to drawing a normal ass guy and a normal ass guy with a mustache or a pair of wings, if your underlying technique is dogshit then the result will be the same no matter what.

Unless you address what is making your art dogshit then you will continue to draw complete shit and then wonder why you never improve or why you're hitting a wall. The subject of the art isn't the problem, so stop thinking that, stop thinking that drawing something different is the fucking solution to making your art inherently better.

>>4006027
>Man I've been trying to do this hard trick on my skateboard but I just can't land it properly
>have you tried to do a different movement with your foot? Are you balanced properly?
>Now that you mention it, I have been kind of doing the exact same movements, I should try to move differently and see if it gives a better result, thanks!

>Man I've been trying to draw better but I just can't seem to improve
>Have you tried drawing TWO people instead of 1?
>You're right, I'm drawing the exact same way I've always been but if I draw two people then it should fix all the problems I'm having with the actual drawing process! After this I should draw a girl with long hair, then after that I'll draw a girl with short hair. Thanks!

>>4006027
autism

>>4003676
Not OP, but can someone explain to me what he means by shoulder not foreshorted? Is there an rule in anatomy that I'm missing?

>>4004949
What the fuck this is amazing. Blog/Insta?

>>4005714
Just popped this out too, been in a rut so it feels good to draw cute girls again and also practice different perspectives
I worked really hard on this sketch because I'm usually bad at this perspective but I think it looks pretty good!

>>4006076
I think they just meant it’s not coming outwards towards the viewer.

>>4006082
just did this too

>>4006170
I really like your designs

>>4006174
Everything I've posted is fanart except for the last one but I appreciate the sentiment, I hope to step up my character designing game and draw more original stuff soon

>>4005031
this is really helpful, ill try to keep that in mind in the future

More wip shit

>>4006459
I love this

>>4005850
Tweet this to MC Ride please

>>4006459
upper arm looks way too long

>>4004949
48/50 i forgot how hard the brush pen is. I swear they looked better before I smudged it all together

>>4005093
Thanks, i only have like 6 markers so everything is just splashes...

>>4005304
Some random ink drawings from Pinterest

>>4006080
Blog is here >>4006645

I'm gonna start practicing backgrounds so I can make my art more interesting

>>4006686
Tomie!!!!

>>4006693
Yes!!!! :D

Daily draw

>>4006711
Do you trace 3d models, like use designdoll or something? Because it really looks like it, it's got that kinda stiff look to it. I love the smug but the pose could use some natural attitude that you can only do if you draw the pose by hand

>>4006800
Its obviously traced designdoll model

wip i've been rendering for about a week now
feel so slow and inefficient pepehands

>>4006815
the gap between the eyes and mouth are too far apart, rendereing is really nice btw

>>4006818
hmm yeah that's true, thanks!

>>4006806

It isn't.

>>4003577
>>4003589
Declare that she is half rakshasa,

>>4006815
Oh this is really nice
I'd recommend maybe moving the mouth higher up though, that usually makes it more kawaii uguu

>>4006800

Truth be told anon I taught myself entirely by doing that so Im still learning gesture somewhat late as it turns out.

wip

Help me famaland

I like how this one is coming out, I think.

>>4006896
>>4006956

It's not clear what she is doing. To me it looks like she is lying on grass, sniffing a stone with a snake checking out her cooter.

>>4007065
Looks nice except for face

>>4007072
thank you senpai, I never even though about what she was doing

>>4007065
Looks good anon, I like it.

i need some pepperoni pizza

>>4006650
47/50 more studies - i hate how with traditional, i cant just slide the whole figure up when its too tall. Also, its too dark outside, i had to fudge with the white balance ... stupid tangible drawings

Got hard time doing these feets...

Can anyone give me some guidance on how to go about translating greyscale values to their respective hue? For example how do I know what color dark blue to pick for the shaded part of her scarf? And also some help on the canister things would be appreciated as well, I'm having issue with the dome shape at the tops of the canisters in perspective and shading it to fit the lighting. Ignore the color palette

>>4007224
Just want to say. You're my favorite artist on the board.

>>4003482
dude holy shit, your stuff is like the better version of how i draw.
I'm kinda projecting a little here but do you have trouble doing studies/making ur shit better?
because that's how I feel I've been drawing the same shit for years with 0 improvement and I don't know how

>>4006633
It’s probably an inch or two long, but good call.

>>4007264
>For example how do I know what color dark blue to pick for the shaded part of her scarf
You have to value match by eye, there's no way around it. The value number listed on a digital palette doesn't actually reflect the true darkness/lightness of a color because each hue as an inherent value associated with it (purples are inherently darker than yellows, for example). I'd color pick all of the values you have laid out and make a reference chart with them so you can match up hues from your palette it.

dark omens

Is she cute friends (the arm is not cute I know please help I am suffering)

>>4007443
Historia? Also yes very cute.

>>4003443
I feel pic related

>>4007448
that looks like a Squidward/Shrek lovechild

>>4007446
No it's just some girl wearing a hat I found on the internet but I see the resemblance, and thank you friend.

>>4007455
It is a parody of this

>>4007264
Lin Ran's tutorial is worth a read: https://paperasylum.files.wordpress.com/2009/01/lin_rans_tutorial_translated_by_paperx.jpg

>>4006815
>>4006818
i actually dont think the eyes are too far apart at all, it's the nose and mouth that's off.
unless that's your preferred style, then go for it.

>>4007580
That face looks so much better

>>4007584
Cute, but it's super stiff and it looks like their right hand is backwards or has no thumb

>>4007567
Goddamn, this is amazing. Thank you.

>>4007567
>>4007606
That trial and error to get the right brightness seems like a painful way of doing things when you could just overlay blocked out hues using the "Color" blending mode in PS.

I probably belong in /beg/ but anyway I got a bit burned out on practicing anatomy and wanted to try something a bit more stylized. I was going for a sort of Disney vibe. Been practicing this was my first attempt without trying to directly reproduce something (except the hair which I still suck at).

>>4007584

>>4007734
needs contrast

>>4007738
was trying to imitate this color palette

>>4007672
Yes, it's time-consuming, but it will give more accurate values than using layer blending mode.

>>4007264
I'm not sure if this is even what you're trying to do, but a month back I wanted to have a color wheel where every part of the wheel was the same color luminance so I ended up making exactly that in pic related.

I use CSP but it can also work with Photoshop as well. Dunno about other programs. Also instead of having to set this up every single time I threw everything into an action so the art program just sets it up for me at the click of a button.

I don't use it all the time, but it's a time-saver when it's needed. I don't have to guess colors if I was looking for one with the same value, I just pick the value I want, then set the value to the color wheel and pick whatever color I want.

Also, I have a .tga file containing a perfect color wheel at 5000x5000 size (the one I use) but I don't know what people use to share files and if 4chan will even accept those links, so if anyone wants to help me with a website to share the file it would be most appreciated.

>>4007847 here, a couple things to note about the layer setups:

-you only need fill layers, one that's white, one that's black, and another that's gray
-the 50% gray fill layer should be set to "saturation" and its opacity should be put to 0, you can delete this layer if you want but it's useful for reducing the gamut of the color wheel overall and makes it easier to select colors that are closer to 0% saturation.
-for Photoshop, the color wheel should be a Smart Object, just like how in CSP the Color Wheel layer is a File Object. If you're unaware, both File Objects and Smart Objects are the same thing and behave the same exact way. It's important that your color wheel is an object and not a raster so that you can resize it non-destructively (for when you're doing close-up work or you're working while zoomed out)

and here's a literal overview of the layer setup in text form if you don't get it from the picture:

-Folder
|-- 'HSLuv' Folder (Blend Mode: Luminance/Brightness)
|--|-- White Fill Layer
|--|-- Black Fill Layer
|-- 50% Gray Fill Layer (Blend Mode: Saturation, Opacity: 0)
|-- ColorWheel.tga (as a Smart Object/File Object)

Photoshop: 'HSLuv' Folder should be Linked to the ColorWheel layer, with a mask of the ColorWheel layer on the 'HSLuv' Folder

CSP: Just clip the Saturation and the Brightness Layer to the ColorWheel layer.

>>4007847 here, a couple things to note about the layer setups:

-you only need fill layers, one that's white, one that's black, and another that's gray
-the 50% gray fill layer should be set to "saturation" and its opacity should be put to 0, you can delete this layer if you want but it's useful for reducing the gamut of the color wheel overall and makes it easier to select colors that are closer to 0% saturation. Naturally, if you want to desaturate the color wheel, just increase the opacity of this layer.
-The Black fill layer should always stay at 100% opacity, you get your values from the white fill layer's opacity working off the black fill layer and all this is read through the folder it's nested inside while the folder's blend mode is set to Luminance/Brightness
-for Photoshop, the color wheel should be a Smart Object, just like how in CSP the Color Wheel layer is a File Object. If you're unaware, both File Objects and Smart Objects are the same thing and behave the same exact way. It's important that your color wheel is an object and not a raster so that you can resize it non-destructively (for when you're doing close-up work or you're working while zoomed out)

and here's a literal overview of the layer setup in text form if you don't get it from the picture:

-Folder
|-- 'HSLuv' Folder (Blend Mode: Luminance/Brightness)
|--|-- White Fill Layer
|--|-- Black Fill Layer
|-- 50% Gray Fill Layer (Blend Mode: Saturation, Opacity: 0)
|-- ColorWheel.tga (as a Smart Object/File Object)

Photoshop: 'HSLuv' Folder should be Linked to the ColorWheel layer, with a mask of the ColorWheel layer on the 'HSLuv' Folder

CSP: Just clip the Saturation and the Brightness Layer to the ColorWheel layer.

>>4007734
>>4007742
notice the composition in your reference image, my only complaint with yours is that the composition is lacking and it looks like it’s cropped.

>>4007847
>>4007861
That's a really fascinating way to work. The black/white layers coupled into one folder is a pretty smart trick, I like that.
You can upload the file to zippyshare.org or mega.nz, those are usually the most reliable go-to filesharing services.

>>4007065
(?

>>4007567
wooo this is awesome anon! thank you for share

Hi, i'm the world's slowest drawer

>>4007847
>>4007861
>>4007870
https://mega.nz/#!7Z12zAYB!tg2aYByJHA81NjjWoa05cMsMWWGYKooWqdcCT7VP3O4

Here, I just uploaded the psd file I used to create it so you can export it at whatever size you want. If you want to export it as a circle you'll have to enable the mask (you'll know what I'm talking about when you see it)

something i got really frustrated with after spending too much time on it.
not the worst thing in the world i guess but man could be so much better if i wasnt fuken retarded

>>4007933
>skipping hand day

Any major flaws so far? Left arm looks off to me but idk how to fix

>>4007877
Holy fucking shit, dude. Thank you so much, this was amazing.

>>4005875
yo my dad used these when he was younger.

>>4007877
you're amazing!

How can I make this more interesting? It seems too still.

>>4008455
Add more throbbing dicks

Playing around with steam punk stuff

>>4008455
Give up.

>>4007891
wtf rei post on ic

>>4008470
Fuck off with that shit.

>>4008455
tilt head backwards

Still studying the japanese style

>>4008600
I like this, the only thing that’s really bothering me is the rim light- it seems too thick

Think I'm finally satisfied with the basic shapes

>>4007443
Arm is fine

Fix face

>>4008455
>>4008516
Thanks! I tilted the head and the whole upper body. I think it looks a lot better now.

>>4008643
I love your lines. Do you have an insta or twitter?

It's a living!

>>4008681
Oh cute, another panderingfag out to get them likes views and favs.

>>4008698
“Oh cute, another artist who knows how to market themselves in the community”

>>4008681
thanks. I post here
https://twitter.com/inkpleb

>>4008703
cool

>>4008698
Can't get commissions without publicity, sorry you don't know marketing 101

>>4008610
Thanks! You think so?

>>4008749
You don't know marketing period. What you're looking for is a one way ticket to a lawsuit by Nintendo.

>>4008758
You have no idea what you're talking about.

>>4008686
This reminds me a lot of PhonyFun videos. I wish he still put stuff out :(

>>4007224
46/50 more studies. It looked better before coloring, and yesterday’s was cooler.

>>4007270
Thanks!

>>4008686
I think they stick their hands into the cows ass

>>4007580
Way better now soften the jaw and we got a winning face model

>>4007891
the seagull looks great and the girl is coming along nicely

Might add a background to this later to make it a little less plain. I need to stop drawing figures standing in a void.

>>4008846
45/50
More studies - i hate white balancing shit at night, any tips on how to do it on iOS?

>>4008643
What in the fuck
Are you serious with these clown shoes? Because you went overboard

>>4007877
saved

>>4009149
I'd rather push things to their upper limit and just downsize them if they look funny, because the reverse creates blurriness. Might shrink them, it just depends at this point.

>>4009176
the big shoes balance the composition nicely, don't listen to him.

Did this for the tower girl thread and even if it's just a wip I'm pretty happy with it

>>4009406
It's looking nice, anon. I like the colors. I think if you work on those edges some more you could turn this into something really great, keep it up.

Fear not the folly, fear not recompense, all actions performed today were our very best.

Just finished this, need feedback.

anyone have any strong opinions before i slather some color on this

>>4009470
The hands seem a bit small with regards to the way the rest of the proportions are stylized, and the fabric seems to be "floating" around her body rather than draping around it.

>>4009470
Nothing strong. Nitpicks on stringed thumb. String seems to be going through the thumb and there's no obvious sign of tension applied against the string (put a bend in it.)
Eyes might be slightly cross-eyed?
Neck may be placed slightly too far backwards on the ribcage.

>>4007864
is this comp better?

>>4009484
>Rei
Fuck, all this time I thought you were drawing a pretty male oc. I like your style a lot, but I think it would help to round out those shoulders a little so she looks a bit more feminine.

>>4009477
Lovely design. Particularly the face, hair, and the way you drew the hands, all very nice. The only thing I'd want to point out is that the irises are slightly different sizes.

>>4009506
it looks fine

>>4009477
Fuck this looks so cool, any blog or social media?

>>4009484
honestly at this stage I think it's best just to accept the composition as it is and just learn from it for future projects.

Also, take note of the purpose behind the way the shot is composed: the main subject is the only character in-frame while he's sat directly in front of an open window showcasing nothing but a cloudy sky. Your composition is tight and crowded, and you don't seem to be giving a message through your composition. Rei could be shot such that she's being caged by the window frames, or make the scene more crowded to show how trapped she is or some shit.

In the reference image you provided, the subject is relaxed and siting in front of a vast sky, giving the impression that his mind is freely wandering while everyone else is of little importance (due to how out-of-frame they are, the scene could've done without them but chose to include out-of-frame characters anyways).

This shit is a huge topic of importance for stuff like photography, so if you want to develop an eye for shot composition I would suggest taking your endeavors to photography-based discussion to see how other people sell a "story" through a shot.

>>4009513
>>4009527
thank you so much! i post art over at twitter.com/bongbai

>>4009463
The foot doesn't fit the perspective

>>4009025
Amazing colors

The lighting is shot though

>>4006459
REEEE my iPad is out of battery

>>4009532
oh this is really great insight, thank you. i wasn't even thinking of any sort of narrative when drawing it.
i feel like i have a mental image of what i could've done here, i will try something different in the future. thank you again, really truly helpful!

>>4006459
>>4009538
blog

>>4009555
@gerddraws on insta,
Berguukion on artstation

>>4009535
Thanks. Yeah, there are a lot of issues with the lighting. I've been trying to play with using more simple shapes and curves with the shading and it's been difficult to figure out. Tried fixing it a little.

>>4009532
>>4009541
ok i know you said to accept it, but it was just a 30 min sketch and i felt inspired after that reply, so i decided to experiment a lil bit

>>4007422
take 2

>>4009587
Women and Men have differences shape design. It's how people define gender at first glance.
Female have upside down triangle for the torso.
You drew the whole body in rectangle, that's not an appealing look for female unless it's your fetish.
It's how you got this anon >>4009506 all confused
tl:dr: Accentuate the body more.
Also give the outside some light shine into the window will make it look more interesting.

Yuuka lineart

>>4009636
unnecessarily condescending Tbh.
the clothing is boxy, so i got caught up in that.

>>4009656
Just want to say every time you adjust things it looks better to me. It's like she's looking at the viewer and we both agree we don't want to be here and would rather be outside. Keep up the good work.

>>4009656
>unnecessarily condescending
Just giving out advice, never meant anything beyond that.

>>4009679
it's fine, i realized if you hadn't put it into words i wouldn't have redone it, so thanks.

Before laying Ink. What about it bros?

>>4009656
Yeah, I agree, if you had widened the hips, It would've been spot on. But for a sketch, it's still good, anon.

>>4009719
The face on the full body one is fucked bro

>>4009607

>>4009636
Clothing can negate the body shapes and give that "rectangle" shape that you're talking about (the extreme example being the hijab). Not all women have a defined silouhette and it can be interesting to make it look between a man's and a woman's body shape.

PS: Not everything has to be linked with "fetish" in art by the way.

>>4009719
I love the face on the one on the left but the full body one's face is a bit of a yikes like other anon said

>>4009607
>>4009736
There's this great invention called printer paper, anon. Have you heard of it?
You should try drawing on it

>>4009740
Clothing play a large part yes but you will still need to define the shape cater to the body of an individual.

>>4009724
>>4009741
>I had one job.

Regardless, I appreciate it bros.

>>4009607
Do you work at a paper plate factory?
Your always drawing on them nel

>>4009736
Do you keep the plates?

>>4009719
I rly like the bodies but the eyes on your faces bother me. The one on the left has similarly sized eyes for what I think is a 3/4 view, so the on away from the camera should be bigger.

>>4007933
Her eye placement looks off.
The left eye needs to be closer to the bridge of the nose, or the right eye needs to be further away.
Aside from the hand and eyes, it’s looking pretty damn good.

>>4009752
This is extremely neat, got source on the artist anon? image searches failed me.

>>4009830
Sorry, i forgot the artist, the character is Olivia from Asobi Asobase if that help.

Idk

Thoughts on this shading style?
(Yes I am aware that he's missing the two vertical red "scars" on his chest)

Yuukachan

Not sure if I'll finish this piece. I wanted it to be a little quirky and it came out downright depressing

>>4009961
It's pretty difficult to do a non-depressing take of the fucking Black Plague

>>4009951
try figuring out one consistent light source and shading from there

>>4009961
yeah its heartbreaking but might as well make it the strength of the piece and finish it

>>4009973
fuckin lmao

>>4009961
>People dieing
>Quirky
Anon...

>>4008681
Is the butt too big?

>>4010130
This is a smaller version, uncleaned

>>4010130

Large ass is fine.

>>4009607
>>4009736
t-thats not what they meant by bargue plates anon

>>4010136
I don’t know how much you still want to change at this point but I think you should straighten out her foot to be parallel to the tibia

>>4004235
Just based on this picture, you could stand to learn some dynamic posing. The way the knight is portrayed here stabbing the demons looks more akin to a pose in a play or a greek vase depiction of an epic's scene.

Try having them interact a little more, like the knight stabbing into them from a minor elevation above the demons. Have the knight's foot pinning down the purple demon's hand with the knife as the knight stands above them and the blue demon grabbing the knight's sword as if she's trying to (futilely) stop its plunge into her.

a small lioness hunting an antelope

>>4002863

>>4007398
>>4007567
>>4007847
>>4007861
Thanks anons for this! I did start playing around with color but it looks....dirty? I don't know how to describe it. I wanted it to be textured/painterly but I feel like it's too much and it overall looks very patchy like a shitty lipstick or something. If I use a smoother brush then it looks too plasticy if you know what I mean. How do I go about getting a smooth but textured look? Also thoughts on the colors/values in general?

>>4010992
if you can't figure that out yourself you won't grow as an artist. There comes a time when you need to solve that kind of shit by your own.

>>4010992
just do the rendering with a smooth brush and put a noise filter over the whole thing then do some overpainting.

>>4010992
I think what you're missing is saturation, the figure is a lot duller than the background which makes her look detatched from the scene. Sorry for the sloppy edit I fiddled with the image and cranked up the foreground saturation and contrast. Is this something closer to the mood you want?

>>4011012
Clarify some of the hard edges on this and I think you have a winner.

What could I have done to make the shading on the skin look like actual shadow and not a 3rd degree burn?

>>4011040
The colors are honestly fine. It's the lineart (or lack of it) that looks bad.

>>4011040
I colored some lineart with your exact colors and it looks fine. It's your drawing that looks bad.

>>4011046
>>4011065
Thanks Anons, I'll make sure to work extra on drawing and keeping clean line-art.

I drew with a mouse for fun

>>4007877
God bless you

>>4002863
Any nit-picks?

>>4011465
Your figure is looking really stiff. Not just in pose, but in anatomy as well, it lacks the natural rhythms of the human body. I'd recommend studying the book Force for some quick gains.

>>4009830
@NoriZCI

>>4003558
>>4003556
Good shit

Is she cute friends

>>4011634
Well done

>>4007264
>>4010992
hard ruined

>>4009052
44/50 had to way for daylight to take a normal picture

drew a friend's jojo oc

>>4011883
love ur shape design

>>4011883
I love it, and I love the fact that you're doing it with markers. Copics?

>>4002884
>113kbs to remove a tit mole

Hello everyone

>>4011919
>>4012008
Thanks - I’m traveling and only brought my favorite copics, they aren’t going to last... R29 and V15 are best colors and RV08 when i’m feeling flashy

Post more marker drawings!

>>4012385
>Post more marker drawings!
Chronologically, this is my most recent other marker drawing, but I think it's so old it was actually in an earlier thread. Most of what I've been doing lately is pencil.

>>4011634
honestly.. fix the face retard

>>4012773
Could you tell me what is wrong with the face friend, I was going for a blank stare sort of feel

>>4012882
i need to read the manga now lol. just finished the anime so i figured i'd post this here to get bullied

>>4012819
not him but the nose is too long and the mouth is on the chin and should be moved up, closer to the nose.

>>4012886
thank you friend

>>4012884
Just to let you know Shield Hero is actually a novel and then became a Manga.

>>4013237
>Just to let you know Shield Hero is actually a novel and then became a Manga.
That wouldn't be the first time something like that took off.

not sure if this is the proper thread to ask, if it isn't then feel free to redirect me, but what type of studying do i need to do if i really like Daigo ikenos art?
I don't want to just start copying his stuff directly because I know the guy didn't just magically start drawing in this artstyle , but i don't know the process he went through to perfect it or his influences. i'd just like to know his inspirations/routine so i can undergo a similar process.

New thread:

>>4013699
>>4013699
>>4013699

>>4002882
nazis are so fucking lame lmao, neck yourself