/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3965811
Boys sharing pocky

>>3965811
Hey ic

How have yall been

I made a tiny sketch on a postit.

>>3965814
I love the suggestiveness.
>>3965839
Very nice face and gesture.
>>3965906
Nice control. Cute.

i've been regularly doing one drawing a day from this pose catalog book as practice

:/ idk what I'm doing

>>3966407

>>3966409

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>>3966411

>>3965944
Really loved the artstyle here, did you use any references for this one?

I keep buying new sketchbooks without starting any. I need an intervention.

>>3966797
Low rims = low testosterone

i've seen some sketch images from a guy called "frenchie", and i have been looking for more but never seen his art again, anyone got his stuff?

Finished playing OFF a few days ago. Decided to fill a page with sketches of some characters.

>>3965839
Amazing stuff, m8

>>3966414
I like your texture suggestions on the p e a r

>>3966380
This is so cool. Where did you get this catalogue from?

Im getting crazy smudging in my sketchbooks just from closing it/weight of pages. Use 70 page ringed cardboard cover mead academie heavy duty lingen acid free paper from dollar stores.

Is it just the cheap paper? Its fairly thick and toothy. No bleed from finerliners when used. But my graphite, regardless of type (2b, hb, 4h etc) smudges like crazy the minute i yurn a page or close it or flipping through them.

Is there a way to preserve sharpness of lines and prevent this without inking it? Read something about fixitive sprays in quick google search but no brands or details.

Not happy with all of these but oh well

Everyone's art intimidates me.

I restartet to read Michael Hampton's book and it's interesting how much new I'm learning tough it's my 2nd time. As if my brain wasn't ready the first time around.

>>3967163
Wow this is amazing. Good job anon.

>>3967234
These are great !

>>3967234
You're doing good, Anon. I've also been going through Hampton and it's been really helpful. Just keep working at it and you'll make it.

>>3965814
>>3967197
>>3967054
Quality sketchbook stuff.

Same guy as >>3967254, just put it in a different post. Did a RWBY fancharacter for kicks, even though I'm not a fan of the series.

Old work here. Did a RWBY fancharacter for kicks, even though I'm not a fan of the series. Same guy as >>3967254, just putting it in a different post.

>>3967260
These are pretty good bro

>>3967265
Thanks. The ones I posted are about a year old, I think.

>>3967239
;-; thanks anon

I sketch from my car every day at lunch. This is my robot waifu who's ass I don't know how to break down into simpler shapes yet.

>>3966409
You gotta work on those wheels. The perspective, the style, the proportions, everything.

>>3967260
Call her violet murasaki

>>3967374
Love this

Hi im new to this thread and just wanted to know your thoughts on this style of this science fiction piece. Is it appealing or is it ugly? Criticism of all kinds welcome.

Its for a science fiction mythos.

>>3967434
I find it creative and interesting. The concept is cool but the actual appeal could be worked on desu

what is desu?

i need some tips

>>3967451
Ehh it’s lil anime term. If you type “Tbh” on /ic/ it corrects to “desu” as soon as you post it

>>3967473
Start with the Gesture, then move to the structure and bones. It will give weight to the character.

>>3967479
Desu is the higher speech version of the Japanese copula da, not an ‘anime term’

>>3966839
They're more easy to draw.

>>3967508
Objectively yes, but its context on /ic/ is what they're asking about

>>3967421
Thanks

I just want to draw like FZD

>>3967539
Pretty impressive

>>3967539
cool

>>3966539
Thank you! No, i did not.

>>3966407
I like this one, love the fantasia style

>>3967178
i ordered it off amazon.co.jp. it shipped to canada in about 3 days. the lighting is horrendous but it's fantastic getting the poses in multiple angles. i'm considering buying some of the guruguru dvds for the higher resolution images, and for the convenience of referencing from a monitor instead of a physical book.

good stuff everyone

>>3968151
Haha so sick. Socials?

>>3968166

insta living.void

>>3968151
Is this micron pen? Do you sketch these out in pencil first?

>>3967487
proko teaches this too. he calls it the "robo bean" to break up the ribs and hips into boxes like that. lots of videos available.

>>3969631

super rough pencil sketch, then fountain pen followed by a waterbrush pen for some subtle value

>>3970143
looks like Mrs Butterworth starting hitting the gym. now is dee time for snu snu.

>>3965811

I have not been drawing much recently, but I have a notebook with some older sketches from various places I have been.

random doodle lol

Everything here is so cool, I can't wait to start drawing on par with these

>>3965944
>>3967055
Thank you
I haven't been feeling it lately, ive been reading more and thinking about grad school approaching. Ill straighten my mind out before breakfast and draw some.

>>3967197
>ballpoint drawing
M y n i g g a
>>3967054
Gorgeous work, very stylish.

This is a little sketch of Tibia Bonebreaker from Harpy Gee. (I use an Android tablet as a sketchbook, btw)

>>3971593
Kunoichi from The Ninja Warriors Again

>>3971598
GI Guy from Kid Radd

>>3971599
An android named Jericho

>>3971603
An alien girl named Selene

>>3971606
Robo-bug lady

>>3971609
The Ninja Warriors (Again) spending quality time together

That's it for my stuff, I'll stop spamming now

>>3970837
Here is another one

>>3970837
>>3971768
These are quite nice. Very moody and quiet. Makes me feel somber.

>>3971768
An old one from 2013, I believe, when I visited the Canyon

>>3972331
Blog?

R8

A developmental sketch of a new character.

This threads are pure shit.

>>3972855
pyw

>>3972861
Why? it's shit... like all this drawings.

>>3971603
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>>3971617
Really like these, you got a instagram or something?

>>3972879
I do but I haven't updated it in like three years :v

I sometimes feel like if anyone were to find my sketch books they would commit me to an institution.

Going to dump some life drawings, would appreciate some analysis

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>>3973605

>>3973608
Usually I focus too much on getting the face right, to the detriment of the figure (since you only have 15 minutes) so it's good to blank it out to prioritize the figure sometimes

>>3973615
Last one, all drawings are using the same model, he's pretty skinny

>>3973603
>>3973605
>>3973608
>>3973615
Looks good. I don't think I could give you any meaningful analysis, but you look like you're on the right track.

I've managed to draw a lot more this week, I took the week off so I've had a lot of free time that I've spent sitting in one place like a useless lump.

>>3973765
Also did a few sketches from photos for the first time in over a year. I need to study moar

>>3973767
More stuff

>>3973769
I need to make more finished work too. I don't even remember the last time I actually fully completed a drawing.

>>3973772
That's probably it for now.

>>3972686
actually i haven't a blog but: look for dioszc in deviant art and in artstation. There's some old stuff, but i pretend to back to post .

>>3973792
Ooh, I like it.

About 2 hours of work here

After frazetta

>>3973615
Thats valuable. People often avoid the face; i congratulate you for tackling it head on. Your bodies sometimes turn out small or large fot the head, but you get it right most of the times.

>>3973821
thnaks man!
>>3973905
gorefield, loved it!
>>3974043
realy like it man, post more!

To quote George Lucas, "I may have gone too far on a few places." I don't know why I made the ass like that.

Drew a hoatzin a little bit ago. Trying to branch out from birds of prey, what kinds of animals do you suggest i draw?

>>3975052

>>3975055
>>3975052
In addition, here are some other birds i drew a little while ago, sorry if i already posted it in another sketchbook thread.

so what is considered sketchbook? I use single papers and a clipper

I used to do about a dozen pastel drawings a day. Don't know why I stopped, it was the most fun I've had with art probably ever. This one's from four years ago, don't have anything more recent

Couple more hours of work

>>3968151

from today

>>3975779

i drew this for lunch

pose practice.

>>3975219
Don't really think it matters for it to be a sketchbook, so much as it just refers to what you'd find in one. Examples of this are rough sketches, or more experimental stuff. So, like practice drawings, I guess.

>>3965811
Is it weird that i think sketches look way cooler than a final product? I'm more concerned with learning how to sketch well than drawing well.

>>3975985
Sketches leave space for imagination and our mind fills in the blanks. Painterly styles do smth similar. Fully rendered stuff immerses you instead. It's two different sensations you experience.

>>3975909
what kind of pens did you use for this?

>>3976026
This is done with procreate on the ipad.

>>3971025

>>3976509

>>3966407
how do i know you're a girl

>>3975688
>>3975648

very good

Aka a drawing with no general purpose repeating few ideas I’ve drawn over and over again for the past three weeks. I want to sudoku.

>>3965944
nice
>>3966380
its not the case with you but forshortening a womens body from a top perspective makes the proportions so manly there is only a very small error margin when distinguishing between a thin male and a muscular female, im always disappointed when of a girl in said perspective turns out like a dude haha
>>3966407
if you want input: the thing you need to define first in your drawing is the 3d shape of your motiv.
>>3967163
>>3967197
not to be mean but that looks more like finished piece than a sketch
>>3970491
that dope, would love to see more, maybe size down the img a little next time
>>3973905
trippy, some color would go well with that
>>3975688
cool
>>3971025
>>3976509
>>3976511
awesome

because i look sad

>>3966797
very expressive faces i like it a lot

>>3974043
this done on a whiteboard? love it, would like to know which you use

This character was meant to be geode-themed; did I do well?

>>3975838
How did it taste?

>>3976509
For me the green house is too tall and the wheels are too close together. Definitely want to push back that rear wheel. Proportions are everything in car design.

Working through a pose for an idea I have.

>>3976908
Yea man, whiteboard. Im an art teacher at a high school for emotionally disturbed kids. I draw on the whiteboard like this all the time. Dont know which kind tho sorry.

>>3971204

>>3977632
neat-o

cyborg something-something

>>3966980
jjfrenchie
look him up on gelbooru or something
he has a pixiv too

>>3978455
I prefer seeing your pictures start these threads off

>>3978689
fuck me you're good

>>3979092

>>3979066
thanks, y-you too

>>3978689
Get out of beg.

>>3978689
Nvm I just realized this isn't beg. Sorry I'm stupid.

>>3975909
Woah. Blog?

>>3978689
This is trad goals for me
Do you have a blog?

>>3978689
Nice. What materials did you use?

5 min sketch. How do I improve.

Some other stuff

>>3979650

>>3979344
Don't have one because I'm a retard
>>3979548
0.7mm lead pencil for light values, Pentel Ink brush pen for darker ones, Pigma Micron (01) for tight corners, and Sakura Permapaque marker for filling in

>>3976795
Thanks anon, you'r really kind, here are some more...

>>3979678
these are pretty great anon. gmi

>>3965906
Get your shitty pen out of the picture. Pretentious af. Sick little doodle tho m8
>>3966797
>>3979678
DOPE
>>3967539
Super fun. Couldn't hurt to spend a couple more seconds on the block in phase to make sure they are in perfect perspective. Not that it matters too much, but thats the type of shit they drive home at FZD so maybe you care lol. Keep it up m8.
>>3967696
sick. would like to see this inked!
>>3970491
Noice, I wanna see some more of this. Don't really know what I'm looking at but I like how it feels.
>>3971025
>>3976509
>>3976511
yummy
>>3973802
gay. anyone that draws one eye is ngmi. Doesn't help you get better either. sry m8
>>3975648
gunna downvote when you post this trash on reddit
>>3975688
lol this is fuckin neat
>>3978689
Drawn really well. i wanna see more design. It's not reading as cyborg to me. keep at it

Imaretardedfaggot

Doodl

>>3979945
no idea whats going on, but looks fucking cool

>>3979945
This is really cool.

No ref vent sketch, should I keep the concept and redo it?

>>3975779
Nixe.How do you hatch like that?

I was gonna post this in the improvement thread that was up last week but I guess it got archived : (
ah I'm a little proud of my improvement and would like to share if that's okay. It makes me motivated to study harder and draw even more.

>>3977362
pulpy

>>3980046
Nice improvement anon

>>3979699
i left the pencil in the picture for scale.

>>3980035
I use a 005 prismacolor fine line marker. I like drawing with smaller nib sizes. the hatching just takes practice. been trying to learn different textures through hatching.

>>3967539
Saved

>>3968179
Where you in LAS? Love your work, I forgot about you

>>3980030
Yes. Could be really awesome. Is already cool, but could be much cooler.

Some pencil studies

>>3967696
D-drazzan?

Some more stuff

>>3980679

>>3980679

>>3980679

legitimately forgot how to draw from imagination
any advice to fix it ?
thanks...

>>3980694
shid forgot to resize sorry for the gigantic wirt

>>3965811

>>3970776
This is cool, got a blog?

>>3971204
Really nice, I like the colors you used too.

>>3971598
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>>3971609
Love those designs, you got a blog? I'd like to see more of the story.

>>3972832
Nice attention to detail! Do you post anywhere on social media?

>>3973905
>>3975648
This is great hahah

>>3975617
Nice lines and colors

>>3976716
Pretty cool, I like it.

>>3977326
I think so. Colors would definitely bring clarity to that concept as well. Reminds me of MtG card art.

>>3978689
Love how you inked that. Such a cool vibe!

>>3979092
I like the simple and clean lines.

>>3979567
Great energy, anon! Good work.

>>3980518
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>>3980524
I really like these and how simple you kept them.

>>3980700
That giant Wirt haha. All hail the mighty Wirt! I can't help with your question but I like your art.

>>3980714
The head looks pretty detached from the body/neck but other than that it's cool.

>>3980760
>>3970776
>>3980714

Thanks bud, I try but I have a shit attention span and give up on pieces fast.

shyoon3 on ig.

>>3971598
All I can see is gerudo link.

>>3966380
This is what I need to do. Exactly this kind of study and go on a diet.

>>3967487
if i read the whole book and study it then will i learn how to draw?


is it also better then loomis body book?

>>3967487
Is this the hampton book advertised in the sticky? If not, what is it called?

Mezzy

Battle stance

>>3979573
Kinda flattered at your attempt. You need to try and go with some of the forms. I try to outline then do the hatching so I know where my lines need to stop

>>3971204
>>3978455

>>3965839
Heres a self portrait

>>3981447
Heres my cat

>>3981447
>>3981449
Really nice use of lines.

>>3981614
Thank you sir

>>3981231
This is very nice. Wish i could work with this looseness

How is this so far? I think the arm on the right looks off.

>>3979658
Fuck me ur style is good. Shame you don't have a blog.

Did some hand studies. Also the ink is uv reactive

Random boxer

>>3979658
Nice work senpai

Couldn't finish this earlier cause I was spending time with family. Hopefully I'll have it done later for the character design thread.

>>3967054 Not much.
Made a Conker today.

Got a hammock, and doodled my thoughts upon testing it

>>3984470
Forgot to resize..
I also did this today. I've started more animal drawings lately, they're my stress relief when human anatomy kills me

I have lost my sketchbook but at least I have a picture

Yeet

Last one

Just finished this.

I need to fix that foot tomorrow, but it's 2AM here and I've got work tomorrow.

>>3985371
This is really nice. It's super detailed yet clean at the same time if that makes any sense. Do you have a blog/ig/twitter?

>>3966380
what pencils are you using?

>>3985368
what tool is used here? trying to get into art again and only have two drawing pencils to my name ...

also, a page from today

>>3967539
>>3976511
>>3978689
>>3979678
saved and cool!

>>3978689
>>3979650
>>3979658

holy hot dicks from hell

>>3985416
fuck yes, toytals.
Cool

1/4

>>3985451

2/4

>>3985452

3/4

>>3985453

4/4

>>3985383

Thanks!

I post my stuff in a few places.

https://theshutteredcity.tumblr.com/
https://www.instagram.com/theshutteredcity/
https://www.deviantart.com/benjamin-the-fox

>>3985364
>>3985367
>>3985368
Sick

>>3985453
This is amazing, do u have more?

>>3985486

1/n

>>3985486

2/n

>>3985486

3/n
Completely missed the shadows in this one.

>>3985486

4/n

Lot of issues with it, most visible being bad anatomy

>>3985486

Bonus

Small sketch (10 x 7 cm)

>>3979658
From today's trip outside

>>3981231
>>3971204
>>3978455

>>3985859

>>3985408
just a regular hb wood pencil

>>3985862
Very nice. Ya got a blog?

>>3985465
Thanks homebro

>>3985409
I use a 35 year old mechanical pencil that got me through architecture school, that was a gift from my dad that also got him through architecture school, I use 2B 0.5 lead in general, but I generally also use normal pencils depending on the drawing

>>3986314
Forgot image

>>3985371

A couple of other things I'm working on.

>>3986353

>>3986354

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>>3986353
These lack a point of interest due to content and poor contrast. Create a reason to look at this and point the viewer to it via composition and value

>>3985579
Poor lighting expression due to value distribution

>>3987454

They're just going to be painted. Adding additional rendering while they're in this state will only muddy them up in the painting phase.

>>3985496
Blog?

>>3987454
Pearls before swine
>>3987521

>>3987555

Don't have one

Sketch of the day

Please help, crit plox

A sketch

>>3989087

>>3989087
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>>3989087
Just fix the left eye and its perfect anon

I dont think I'm a very good artist, but please criticize if you will!

>>3965811
boys with guns

>>3966411
I really like these

>>3985451
SHUFFLIN SHUFFLIN

Hi how's this?

>>3979699
No one cares about your opinion mass reply fag.

>>3985496
What do you use to get such dark shadows. A soft pencil like a 8B?

>>3989875
Nice body, ugly facial expression

>>3965811

>>3989981

Yep

>>3975538
Hey I have a boxing one too

>>3990972

>>3990570
your stuff needs more contrasting values

Here some below average monster sketches

>>3991272
I really like the right

>>3991272
like em both.

I just bought a scanner, testing

sketches of the Suspicious Beggar
Honestly the only one that got the "beast" feel I wanted was the bottom left, others were a bit too human or calm looking

>>3976511
Based on some guy from IG

>>3991705
Or you could just get the Office Lens app.

>>3973578
keep practicing anon
>>3970942
Really like the use of color here
>>3967260
Body and pose look good but the head is too 2-dimensional and flat in comparison
>>3973976
qt butterfree
>>3985367
Cool use of shadows

>>3994205
The what?

idk

>>3994430
>Office Lens
Office Lens is the new camera built into OneNote for iPad or iPhone that lets you take pictures of whiteboards or printed documents, then enhances your photo by cropping, sharpening, and straightening it, so it looks almost like a scanned image

>>3995451
Cool, but i dont have an iPhone and iPad

Set this one off to the side to wait until I could come back to it with a new perspective.

doodle sheet

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>>3995934
I really like this one.