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Honest critique, help me to improve

>> No.3995487

you cant improve perfection

>> No.3995489

>>3995462
The theme is fucked up, the smile is creepy, the noses are shit, his face fits into his neck like a bad blockbuster movie poster photoshop job.

>> No.3995491

Stop being a spergy jerrycuck.

/thread

>> No.3995494

>>3995462
add harsher shadows and textures to make it more visually appealing and stand out

>> No.3995506

>>3995462
The shadows could be sharper and maybe turn the contrast up a bit more. Other than that it's sheer perfection.

>> No.3995536
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>>3995462
The kid looks like he "wants it". Make it less pedo

>> No.3995543

You're nervous

The moustache is faded, it doesn't stand proud
The swastika is soo small you'd miss it if you weren't looking for it
You were too scared to make a Hitler pic, you need to have courage and make the swastika clear to see and make the figure undeniably Hitler
Even if nobody likes it

>> No.3995548

my english isn't too good, but i'll give my opinion. the face is too bland, lacks expression lines to show the weight of his responsibilities. it would make him more austere.

>> No.3995565

>>3995462
Not sure if bait or real.

>> No.3995591

>>3995462
just from an art perspective, the boy's face is weird. his cheek is too round and his nose bridge is too pronounced. and you could make his hair more realistic. it looks very plastic. otherwise, its very good. subject matter aside.

>> No.3995593
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>>3995462
Hitler's face looks pretty good overall. The cloth folds lighting/forms on his left arm (the one that's showing) look awkward. His right hand looks like an ayylmao but that might be the lighting, I would suggest to manipulate the lighting on that specific spot there so it looks like a proper hand.

Like the others mentioned, the boy's head/smile looks off, the cheekbone to chin area being the most uncanny. The procheilon of the lips are too sharp; the white line of the smile wrinkles is an error too. And the boy's hair looks plastic-y.

Overall good job, I'm not a /pol/ guy so I don't know wtf Hitler was like, but I'm sure that if he looked at this he'd be happy for the fanart.

>> No.3995641

>>3995536
only in your head

>> No.3995707

>>3995462
Technically it's not bad, but it looks more like a meme than a piece of art.
I mean who would hang stuff like this on his wall? Think about it... That's the problem of a lot of artists. Technically they have talent, but they just have no sense for aesthetics.

>> No.3996042

>>3995462
Not your art Nazi, poster fuck off!
>>3995565
It is bait this is from an RPG book from 2011

>> No.3996660

>>3996042
Don't offend other people, /ic/ is a board for nice guys.

>> No.3996667

>>3996042
I play RPGs and never saw anything like that, don't say bullshit!

>> No.3996688

>>3996660
>>3996667
stop bumping your thread samefag naziposter OP! You are also the fatspammer, it is easy to tell this.

>>3995487
>>3995489
>>3995491
>>3995494
>>3995506
>>3995536
>>3995543
>>3995548
>>3995565
>>3995591
>>3995593
>>3995641
>>3995707
The OP picture is not by the OP poster it is from deviantart posted almost 9 years ago.
https://www.deviantart.com/manidiforbice/art/Sine-Requie-Hitler-157532177

Everyone please report OP for Rule #2 it is not his own art.