/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3952712
not a good image

>>3952725
I think it's technically well done, to be honest. Lalafell are meant to look a little young though. But this image has pretty wide hips.

>>3952725
no

>>3952725
you're right. it's a fantastic image

>>3952728
no it not real dont matter

>>3952733
Can you read?

>>3952712

>>3952764
Is this your work?

>>3952768
I suppose, I drew it if that's what you mean.

>>3952772
got a blog?

>>3952772
Good job on Sunibee's OC! Do you have a Twitter?

>>3952712
cute little potatoes

>>3952712
Stop being a complete asshole and starting every fucking thread with bait loli pics.

>Please contain your autism.
Listen to your own advice, dumbass.

>>3952982
He's not me. I was going to make the thread by 12pm EST. Buuuuut you're half right as I was going to use young looking girls again.

>>3952997
Just go fuck yourself, shithead. It's because of people like you that we can't have nice porn threads. You guys just want drama and don't fucking care about improving your art.
GTFO.

>>3953040

>can't have nice porn threads
>i'm the one who REVIVED these threads after it being dead for a month or 2
mmmk

>>3951525
I'm waiting, anon.

>>3953041
If you care so much as you claim (big fucking deal making a thread btw, you are amazing), then why the hell do you use pics that will clearly trigger people? Why do you try to create drama? Can't you just pick a pic that is not against the board rules?

>>3953044
>If you care so much as you claim
Clearly I give a semblance of shit since this general never had a macro to begin with.
>you are amazing
you're welcome
>then why the hell do you use pics that will clearly trigger people
Nobody cares but you. Sounds like you're slightly peeved I didn't select "the top art" in the thread. If we went about it that way then only 3 people would be on the rotation of OP every time.
>Can't you just pick a pic that is not against the board rules?
No image I've picked broke the rules.

>>3953051
Last two threads had young looking characters. If not clearly loli, then it was at least borderline. Again, why don't you pick a clearly NON loli or shota artwork?
I jus think you are full of shit, and you do this on purpose to trigger people.
Personally I don't give a fuck if people post loli shit here, but the threads are full of drama because of it.
>Nobody cares but you.
Yeah, I'm the one that made all the posts against pedofags in the last 2-3 porn threads, you got me, genius.

>>3953055
>please pick my big breasted image
>why you didn't pick my big breasted milk juggy girl :-(

Have a good day, sir. I have stuff to do.

>>3953055
>Personally I don't give a fuck if people post loli shit here, but the threads are full of drama because of it
You're literally the only poster in this thread complaining about it, though. No one said anything about it before you showed up and started whining.

Just admit that you're salty for whatever reason and then get over it privately.

>>3953057
I'm not sure why you think I'm referring to the pics that were posted in the previous threads. I didn't post anything.
I'm just saying to stop creating drama if you actually care about these threads.

>>3953063
I'm talking about the previous threads. Try to fucking comprehend already. Are you fucking dumb or something?

Oh, wait, right. You are just baiting and still trying to create drama. Never fucking mind. I'm out of this convo.

>>3953067
>Never fucking mind. I'm out of this convo.
See you in a few minutes.

>>3953055
They're probably picking those images specifically to make you (and others) angry.

>>3953152
>you (and others)
only the mentally challenged though

>>3953152
>to make you (and others) angry.
2 people

>>3953152
That's exactly what I said in the post you quoted.

>>3953160
I don't post in these threads but
>Personally inviting antagonism
You deserve for these threads to be shat into oblivion.

And just a PSA, but not allowing middle ground or differing opinion is a great way to ensure you always have knives at your throat.

>>3953338
I'm not disallowing anything. I'm over here watching you 2 make fools out of yourselves.

>>3953341
You two who? I said I don't post itt

You might not be disallowing anything, I'm just calling out the retarded shit flinging.

And in doing so, shitposting myself, so, cya

>felt legitimately really good seeing my drawing used as a thread image
>it was just to incite fighting and shitposting
i don't know how i feel but it feels pretty bad

>>3953425
Don't worry mate, I picked your image because it stood out from the rest since you did a good job with keeping the figures in a fluid and lively manner. Don't let these Roasties make you think otherwise. Also because you lazy niggers wouldn't make a new thread.

Twitter _luchored_

>>3953432
Nobody asked. Fuck off.

>>3953369
>not knowing the "all 2 of you" meme
You're clearly new around this site.

>>3952982
Loli is good shit though. I'm more likely to contribute to a thread with loli in it.

>>3953440
I'll always be new here. Call it a product of autism

>>3953444
>A pedo contributing to the thread.
Yaaay.

GTFO.

>>3953425
1. you drawing that shit should make you feel bad in the 1st place
2. posting in a board that doesn't allow that shit yhould make you feel bad too
3. all the rest

Post stuff that is allowed in the threads and stop being a fucking edgelord.

>>3953472
Flat > bigtits

>>3953472
lol, no faggot

Just finished drawing this piece of shit. I better stick to simple coloring schemes I think.

>>3953474
dont listen to him anon, post more :)

>>3953479
You should have just aborted it instead of polluting the internet with that.

>>3953474
>b-but you can't post it here, i-its against da rules
he did, and it's still here since mods don't care, and all you can do is screech like a retard.

>>3953489
I don't screech. I just report it.
it's much easier, and most of the time it works.

>>3953499
Shh shh let it all out, baby.

>>3953474
Kill yourself

>>3953507
pedo is mad kek

>>3952712
Make every porn thread loli from now on, itll be what wards away the tards

>>3952791
not him but i think i might know who that is.
Just the way he drew that midna...
but i am holding my tongue cause the artist i'm thinking of doesn't normally draw this kind of stuff but i could be wrong

>>3953499
Sure it does, if i didn't, you'd be throwing tantrums on porn threads with you poor-little-me syndrome. Wait, isn't it exactly what you're doing?

>>3953474
You’re right, he should stop drawing appealing things and draw stuff like >>3953479 instead. God Bless the West.

>>3953472
It's more my site than yours. Go fuck off and kill yourself if you don't like it cause I sure won't be leaving.

>>3953683
Nice work, got a blog anon?

>>3953479
i would recommend you hold off on coloring and rendering and try to work on your anatomy and proportions more in the sketch stage. The perspective is actually fine though

>>3953560
>Subject matter = skills
The absolute state of idiots on this board.

>>3954010
What he meant was that in order to appease the Eternal Roastie, you must draw in a manner where as the Roastie is not intimidated by anything that resembles youth, elegance, or beauty since naturally Roasties destroy anything deemed as a competitor of attention.

Relinquishing a beta orbiter from a Roastie is to a Jew losing a Shekel - fact!

>>3954017
>youth, elegance, beauty can only be shown by portraying underage looking characters
The absolute state of pedophiles on this board.

>>3954024
The Roastie fears the waifu.

wip

>>3954031
>cope
>>3954032
and here we go again

>>3954035
Have sex.

>>3954032

You're genius. Faeries can take on the appearance of loli but they're really thousands of years old.

>>3954032
hot

>the only thing that gets people to post in the porn thread is loli shit flinging
Post your damn work already

>>3954048
I would, but it may incite more bouts of autism. Are you willing to take responsibility for the repercussions?

>>3954032
The guy's calf on our right is absurdly thick. His left is fine.

imagine blaming a thread for your own voluntary bitching

>>3954050
I'm pretty sure the art will be too bad to trigger anybody.

>>3954032
Dude's eyes are out of perspective, move his left eye higher.
Stiff hand and fingers, make his grip more natural, right now it looks like it's laying flat on her head, which looks stiff af.
pecs attach under the biceps.
Lovely lineart and stylization of the faces.

Also, stop drawing pedo shit if you wanna make it.

This is a kawaii Korean loli during the Japanese colonization era.

Looks like the porn threads have gone down the shitter yet again. Christ.

But some of the drama is entertaining. keep posting lolis cause i love seeing people go wild over lines. :^)

>>3954192
You mean improved.
>>3954109
Looks more Filipino than Korean.

>>3954032
His head is in different perspective

I wonder how many people are intuitive when making their art or process oriented.

When I said intuitive, I mean that they already have an image in their mind when they started drawing, and it is just a matter of making adjustments as they put it down on the page.

When I said process oriented, I meant they only have an somewhat abstract ideas when they started drawing, and what the final product would look like becomes of firm up as they implement a creative process, like brainstorming, thumbnails and gestures, etc.

Like I have a process I go through when I am not having a firm idea of what I want, and it helps when you are not particularly inspired, and you end up with something workable, but sometimes I ended up getting lost in the process, I don't know if that make sense. Just spending a lot of time making different version of the same thing but never being quite happy with any of them.

>>3954032
Looks good, however axe's proportions outside the legs don't look exaggerated enough, thought it was phantom lancer at first.
Also what is he sitting on? As that could interfere with Willow's current arm and leg pose.

>>3954032
fuck you man. that's good as fuck.

>>3954358
I am definitely process oriented. My visual imagination is pretty poor, and it isn't clear enough to just transfer to paper. I only work with what's on the page.
It's a little tricky in the beginning of a drawing, when I'm figuring out how to compose everything, the angles, etc., but it becomes less challenging as I establish things more concretely

>>3954364
>>3954358
That's what rough sketches and thumbnails are for, to give you a clearer picture of your concept on canvas and so you may pick and choose which of the roughs would work best with the idea.

>>3954341
really cute

>>3954358
I'd call myself process oriented. I actually have a pretty clear idea of what I'd like to draw unlike >>3954364, but I just don't have the technical skill to create 1-to-1 what I see in my head on paper.

>>3954317
That doesn't matter. Heads are able to rotate on the neck and the different angle allows for a more dynamic pose.

>>3954032
hips and waist feels kinda too narrow compared to the rest his body, especially with how chunky the legs are

>>3954395
It makes for a pose that doesn't make sense. Why is he straining to look at the viewer while most men would be looking at the girl sucking their dick?

>>3954414
cause your next buddy

>>3953425
Your drawing is great but the roastie's jealousy of nubile women will always be greater

>>3954425
keep coping, while more experienced artists redpill every single one of you /beg/s

>>3954470
>experienced artists

Where? ITT?

>>3954480
In basically all porn threads.

inb4 post your work.

>>3954341
Nice and good
>notices dick
Damn

>>3953044
not that anon, but op pic isn't triggerfull in any way really

if you get that easily triggered then it's on you anon

>>3954480
definitely not in porn threads

>>3954470
Post your work.

>>3953044
Stop being a little bitch

Where can I learn to draw furry porn? (besides hell)

>>3954081
>>3954102
>>3954317
>>3954361
>>3954410

Thanks for the crits, I didn't notice his narrow torso. I'll try to redraw today.

>>3954651
Awesome! Keep us updated. c:

>>3953444
>>3953475
>>3953476
>>3953688
>>3953483
>>3953489
>>3953507
>>3953560
>>3953051
>>3954509
>>3954598
Just so you'll know, people making the posts you're replying to are the same who often brag on other boards/discord about shitting threads with flaming. Or do you really think anyone would come to this shithole to seriously preach against what people draw? It's interesting how you talk about how they're shitting the thread while you reply en masse to literal shitposting. You're the ones shitting the thread, so stop being retarded and just don't fall for the bait. If you're not mature enough to ignore people calling you names, you shouldn't even be in this site.

>>3954702

Don't (you) me again or I'll ring you neck in two.

Jesus post some porn people. Let’s get over this bull and let’s see some fucking titties.

Fuck these captchas

>>3954893
Eyes WAY too fucking far apart
Literally just select tool them closer together
No one's eye goes off of their face

>>3954893
wow

>>3954893
How’s is this porn?

>>3954893

a request I did for /y/

>>3955224
Wow this looks incredibly gross, good job

>>3954566
Kill yourself.

>>3954893
ROFL
Kemonomimi bunny girls have normal human facial anatomy. You don't need to put her eyes on the sides of her head LMAO.

>>3954893
I tried to make her look a little bit less like an alien without changing her features radically

>>3955235
Anything to go on beyond the usual noise above?

>>3955272
Significantly better

>>3955272
I think you lost a bit of what made her face interesting. She looks less Asian now, more "standard". It's in the eyes and skull shape.
Unify the colors so it doesn't look like a skin rash.

>>3955446
Oh, I'm not the original artist, I just felt sad seeing everyone shit on him when his picture really only needed a few tweaks.

>>3955443
dope lines/shading, but the colors are a bit dead when seen against a white bg.

>>3955446
If interesting means unappealing, then sure, it lost a lot of that garbage.

>>3955443
blog?

>>3955443
FBI open up

>>3954032
The guy's style is a bit too western forme but the fairy is real hot and a real nice pic overall.

>>3954109
This is it chief
>>3954341
real cute

>>3955246
>Kemonomimi
She's wearing a headband.

started this

>>3955542
Sherlock fucking Holmes.
The rabbit joke wouldn't work without that, dumbass.

>>3955557
Maybe you should have come up with a better joke, or perhaps even contributed something good to the thread.

>>3955559
Your nitpicking is definitely contributing a lot more than me pointing out how absurdly bad those eyes are placed.
Just STFU already, retard.

>>3955563
>wah, you ruined my shitty joke, r-retard!
lol you're so mad

>>3954893
Here's the major fixes I've done. I don't really have time to explain them all or why I did them, but by just overlaying the changes you can compare and contrast. I think the biggest problems were your head to body proportions and placement of the facial features.
Best of luck anon! You have a lot of potential.

gib advice, how does it look so far

>>3955583
>wah, you ruined my shitty joke, r-retard!
>lol you're so mad
Nobody really ruined anything here. They are just a dumbass nitpicking over nothing.

>>3955593
>>3955583
That's me dumbass. Now contribute to the thread, pyw, or gtfo.

Snap judgement...which is more appealing...left or right?

>>3955596
Left is more appealing.

>>3955596
Left, but mainly because right's right eye is leaving her face.

>>3955596
Left for structure, right for emotion.
Currently the right one is looking bad because of the weird eyes, you could either try redrawing them or use the head of the right, and the left's eyes.

>>3955596
left but give her more emotion

>>3955594
>doesn't know when to stop cause assblasted
GTFO
there, I once again contributed to the thread

can't wait for your reply, snowflake.

>>3955596
Left, but only because the perspective and anatomy are executed better.

Ok next. Is this appealing? If yes or no then why? Does it matter that it's basically just a copied JAV model with a copied Sakimichan face?

>>3955685
Spend more time on the hands and then study eyes. Come back to it when you understand that eyes have shape and depth to them. Lips look pasted on too.

>>3955489
Hello facebook

>>3955685
I think it's alright. But I think the appeal is less than the sum of its parts. You have the tiddies, the smouldering look, the legs, but none of it works together for a more pronounced effect. Little synergy. The way her head is tilted doesn't work compositionally since it draws your eyes away from your body. The hair doesn't contribute to the motion/flow of her body. Stuff like that.
I think you should think about composition and line of motion more carefully. You have the raw ability to draw nice bodies but don't use it poignantly.

>>3955685
Your understanding of perspective is shit and because of it the artwork has no depth. Work on that.

can anyone point out any mistakes? i really wanted to include the pussy on the right but it feels like it should be eclipsed by the leg or asscheek
also the foreshortening on the whole body on the left looks fine to me but there's always a chance i could have fucked it up.

>>3955713
Pyw

>>3954102
I thought this was trolling, but ended it up agreeing.

>>3955723
I agree with you about the pussy on the right. It wouldn't be very visible, if at all. It definitely comes across like you wanted to include it but couldn't find a good place to put it. The way you have it currently, I think it looks like it's sliding down and detached from her body. If you want to include significant pussy, spreading her legs more and angling her a bit more towards the camera would help.
Foreshortening on the left looks fine to me although the shape of her ass didn't read right on first glance. I think it's due to the way it's interacting with her tail. However I think that problem would be solved with shading/color or a little more linework to suggest that the tail overlaps the asscheek instead of running through it
I like your work though. It looks really good.

>>3955713
Nice bait, but tell me exactly how this similar pose by Sakimichan has any more depth than the sketch i made if you take away the fancy rendering. At least i tried to make some normal proportions...look at this fucking monstrosity!

>>3955713
Nice bait, but explain to me how this pose by Sakimichan has any more depth than the sketch i made once you take away the fancy rendering?

>>3955765
Are you seriously saying you think Sakimichan's artworks have depth? ROFL.

>>3955765
Quit responding to him, anon. You're embarrassing yourself. Your drawing is a little flat, but certainly has depth

>>3955771
Give him your own advice about the art and leave other people that are giving advice alone, you absolute moron. People like you are the reason this place is pure cancer.

>>3955765
Not him but the pose isn't the problem with depth, it's how you define the forms. Of course a drawing loses depth when you strip away all the shadows and just trace the bare outlines. Bare outlines don't suggest depth well in general. With linework you have to compensate, using some cross contour lines helps, etc.

>>3955769
I am asking the question because shes making close to a million dollars a year, so why the fuck does things like perspective and proportions even matter? She's not the only artist that does this either. Make a grotesque assNtiddies body based off a JAV picture and slap a generic samey ayyylmao anime-ish face on it and people eat it up over and over. I'm trying to figure out why people prefer this type of stuff.

>>3955779
She's making cash because she has a good work ethic, knows how to promote herself, she's female and she was in the right place at the right time.

None of this has anything to do with how good her art is. Stop copying her. You won't become successful by copying successful art, you absolute moron.

>>3955779
Dude, you do you. If you try to chase how someone else is making their bread you won't be successful because you'll constantly be throwing darts and missing i.e you'll constantly be trying to appeal to a demographic you don't really care about and end up making it not appealing.

>>3955783
I disagree. There are lots of Sakimi-clones that are doing pretty well. It's not just a one off fluke...people are drawn to that type of stuff. The question is why.

>>3955779
Appeal is mysterious. There are a lot of factors. One thing a lot of appealing art has in common is that it has a good, solid direction (ex. gritty masculine art can also be appealing, just in a different way.) Lowest common denominator is involved.
But it's not worth stressing out about. Art style is not the only reason people throw money at an artist. It's probably not even the most important one. Momentum, steady output, and good ideas mean more. If you draw stuff you enjoy, you'll probably be a better artist for it. More "soul" I guess.

>>3955723
Even if the pussy is exaggerated, it is one of those things where you are allowed to cheat, and your preference simply decides whether you want to show it or not.
It looks a bit painful that the foot on the left figure is rotated some 60+ degrees compared to the direction of the knee.
On the right one, could you show just a little bit of her hand to indicate her right arm is stretched out, since even though I can see the overlap at the shoulder, by mind keeps telling me that the right side of her torso, is actually her arm going down her side. I'm guessing this is because her back spike, muscles, butt and tail are completely overlapping the part, with no holes in the line to connect it to the rest of the body.
A final thing, the first look I took of the left figure, made me think you were drawing inflation, only the second figure is telling me that it is an exercise ball and not her bloated belly.

>>3955790
Show me 3 of them that are making at least 5k on patreon. Let's see.

>>3955812
I read somehwere that Ayyasap is making like 9k a month. Liangxing has over 800 patrons with $3 being the lowest tier so you do the math. Logancure has 800+ patrons as well and most of his patrons are probably the 5-7 dollar tiers. Each has slightly different rendering style, but they are essentially the same stuff.

>>3955588
Pretty good, I like the dick. The arm on the left could use a little work though. It doesn't look like it's supporting his weight. The torso could probably be constructed better too but it isn't too much of a problem.

>>3955535
Your fucking retarded, never post again you filthy weeb.

>>3955812
I read somehwere that Axsens is making like 9k a month. Liangxing has over 800 patrons with $3 being the lowest tier so you do the math. Logancure has 800+ patrons as well and most of his patrons are probably the 5-7 dollar tiers. Each has slightly different rendering style, but they are essentially the same stuff.

>>3955829
I think there are a lot of subtle things here that could be improved by using reference. The way her asscheek connects to her body. The way the leg on the left curves and the angle it connects to the foot with. I think the titties look a little stiff, they could be flowing a little bit more, especially since she's jerking around/struggling. Is it meant to be that she's been raped with the carrots on the floor? If so, I think it would be fun to add a bit of the lubricant dripping from her pussy, to connect it to the carrots more.
Fun idea, the ropes are nice.

>>3955852
good points, thanks!

>>3955535
You're fucking based, please keep posting you glorious Otaku.

>>3953515
You can tell me, if you guess right I'll give you trips

>>3955829
the knees look like their going inwards, or they look flat. I liked that hand sticking out

Does this have a sufficient amount of random floating hair to be popular?

>>3955272
>>3955583

Thanks anons! Yes, the eyes are a stylistic choice >>3955446 This anon gets it basically.

It's interesting to me that you each shaped the head differently, also one chose the to move the left eye in rather than the right eye? I gotta say I prefer the way the first anon pushed the top of her head forward and lowered her bangs. But I also liked the way you tilted her head in the last panel, has a nice appeal. Anyway, I appreciate your time. When I get around to it I'll post the finished pic on pixiv @dvdchan bye now

>>3956008
Thanks, anon, Looking forward to it.

>>3956007
Giving the hair more of a concrete flow would help
I also think aiming her eyes a little more would help

progress, feel like i dropped the ball with the one on the right though. i guess i stop thinking as much when i get more confident

>>3956019
Just noticed, she has no torso on the right. She nipples also should be hidden under her.

>>3955847
None of these people were in the situation you were describing. They didn't try to copy Sakimichan, they have their own thing going on. Just because they draw rendered pinups, this doesn't mean they are successful because they copied Sakimichan.
I rest my case, you are a dumbass.

>>3956007
Pupularity has nothing to do with how you draw. Please understand this, you dumbass.

>>3956008
>Yes, the eyes are a stylistic choice
ROFL
Stylistic choice is not the same as making a huge mistake like you did here. Stop trying to come up with excuses. Just fix your art and move on, ego.

>>3955907
https://twitter.com/CHZJAE/media?lang=en
i could be wrong just scroll through

>>3956019
Any help?

>>3955443
>>3955467
You're right, I was basing it off of screencaps to try and make it as authentic as possible but it doesn't work in a still image. Turned up the saturation and cleaned it up.
>>3955488
I haven't been using it cause I've been doing mostly SFW but here ya go, pixiv.net/member.php?id=16041920

>>3956048
I know you're just baiting. But just in case you're delusional. Here you go.

>>3956053
Wrong I'm afraid.
Thanks though, I shall follow them

>>3956059
And pt. 2

>>3956061
You are not gonna make it if your plan is to just copy Sakimichan. There's more to making it than just the art you create. Realize this already, imbecile.

>>3956064
Jesus that dick vain

>>3956064

I like it. Her left arm looks a bit weird on the right

>>3956064
references?

>>3956059
>>3956064
Add some variety to your lineweight. Right now it makes your artwork look stiff.

>>3956066
Please show us how successful you are then Salty-Kun.

>>3956081
I don't need to prove you anything. Take the advice or leave it. Your call.

>>3956084
Not him, but I second that motion to post your work.

>>3956081
Salty-Kun you stick out like a sore thumb. You want to know how i know its you? The constant petty juvenile insults every single reply. The air of superiority but without EVER backing it up as usual.

>>3955546
Shrek-chan?

>>3956088
samefag here, I withdraw my motion after investigating that faggot wanted to be a Sakimiclone

>>3956071
I drew this some weeks ago and was using just using image search for some ideas, didn't save anything unfortunately.
>>3956076
Noted. I've been having trouble keeping a good line economy when inking digitally, think I'll try to work with a bigger brush size and lighter hand. Thanks.

>>3956084
Talentless crab confirmed

>>3956084
Salty-Kun you stick out like a sore thumb. You want to know how i know its you? The constant petty juvenile insults every single reply. The air of superiority but without EVER backing it up as usual.

>>3956058
very helpful, thank you! made some changes based on yours
i kind of prefer your version to a perfect anthropomorphization but i don't wanna make such significant changes after spending a couple hours stressing over lineart
i tried adding light but idk, airbrush kind of looks tacky to me but maybe it'll all come together better when i blend the shadows and add reflected light

Another big beait6

>>3956101
If it really was salty kun, then I would've insulted mcflintcock. It's not salty kun, stop being paranoid. 90% of posts here contain random insults.

>>3956131
Give the ball some shine and make the pink a bit lighter around the edges as to show “stretching” since the rubber is going to be thinner on the part bulging out.

Dope work tho anon

>>3956007
>attention whore

>>3954358
I envy people who are intuitive. I tend to over analyze everything I am drawing. I tend not to care about whether my drawings make sense or not. I stick with what I have. If I fail it is what it is. I move on and try something else. Maybe I can do better the next time.

>>3954358
Also, these drawings look nice. Do you have any social media or an online portfolio?

>>3956063
what was the tru blog?

>>3956183
The only attention whore in these threads is you Salty-Kun. You shit up every single one...and you still wont PYW.

>>3955783
absolute bull shit, her art quality as good as possible in a mass appeal sort of way where the lighting and coloring is mostly photoreal while her anatomic exaggerations are appealing and sexual without losing too much realism due to her superb rendering. shes arguably the strongest in terms of polish in the pin up game

>>3956379
That foot looks painfully rotated.

>>3956379
The upper body is an absolute mess

>>3956396
Haha. You are so cute.

gonna probs hate these colors when i wake up but eh

>>3956379
B-blog?
Nice colors and lines, but that foreshortening dude, lmao

>>3955836
Thank you, I will work on those points
>>3956476
i realy like the way you draw limbs

>>3956058
Not that guy, but i liked this one alot more than
>>3956131
and
>>3956019

Critique please

>>3952764
Blog please?

Lesser degen version

>>3956131
How about this? I think you could use more mod-tones. I know you are not finished but there is a lack of alternate band transitory blues at some places.

I like to use other porn artists to help put together what style is perfect for myself.
This is going to be very subjective but who're your favourite porn artists and why? What particular aspect of their style you like that just takes it above and beyond for you?

>>3956629
The ones that have good fundamentals and know how to draw hands and feet.
Show me how you draw hands and feet and I'll tell you if you are a good artist.

>>3956615
Good job on the ball.

This is what /ic/ should be about right here. Anon came in with a picture asking for simple help and was not being a cocky ass. People give him legit help and Crits and anon listens and does not get offended. Anon continues to update his work while continuing to listen and take advice thus leading him/us to some good work.

One again dope stuff anon and this is the kinda stuff and teamwork that keeps me coming back here.

>>3955443
That spooge looks pastey. Best word I can come up with. Look up some tutorials on cum and see if you can fix that.

>>3956615
i remember you've helped me before, thanks for always helping. i've finished one of them, and messed with the contrast a bit. i remember the brushes you use and i use pretty much the same 3 tools only my main brush is round instead of a square. you can still pull off an organic look way better though. maybe i don't airbrush enough and instead rely on the blending/smudge tool
anyway i think i am getting a better understanding of form, but i still have a way to go before i can do this on my own really fast (took me like 2 hours using yours as a ref)
partway through i merged every layer together and continued working cause it's just a pain in the ass otherwise, should have done it like that from the beginning.

>>3956899
Okay >>3956615 here
Great job there Anon, I am so happy you found my help useful. You have improved as well I can see that so do not worry you will get this down sooner or later! Keep working at it! You got this!

>>3956928
looked really bare without some backdrop of any sort so i tried to add some very rough shadows to make it look less like they were floating in space
i feel like the one on the right is more saturated and uses fewer darks, like it's not as defined as the one on the right. i just have to stay mindful of my palette in the future i guess, and not be afraid to use darker colors. i feel like I usually pick very muddy colors though

Working on this. Any thoughts? First time I'm putting a whole piece together instead of doing studies.

>>3957172
You hid everything thats attractive in a porn pic. Face, breasts, pussy and ass. Jfc.

>>3957172
I’m digging the pose and what you’re going for.

>>3957172
Start with simpler stuff. You aren't good anough to draw complex poses and foreshortening of this kind.

>>3957209
Can you point out the mistakes? Paint over perhaps?

>>3957232
>>3957232
Don’t listen to them you’re doing fine so far with that pose.

>>3955596
Left because I think you failed to properly pull off right.
But if you refine right it would have more broad appeal.

>>3956486
itsukarine

>>3956466
>>3956461
upper body was intentionally a mess because i just went nuts with it

but thank you both, i will take it into consideration

>>3957311
and yeah i still need work with foreshortening. i dont know why im always so bad at it, is it proportioning?

>>3957232
The whole thing would had to be redrawn from scratch. The composition and the general idea is lacking. As >>3957190 said, you chose a pov that is not flattering.
On top of that the forms are all over the place and the perspective of most of the elements of her body just isn't right. Hair looks like a fabric. Etc, etc.
I mean, you can try and fix what you have, but if I was you I'd draw this from another point of view.

Also, a wip for once. Redpill me pls.

>>3957333
glad youre still around

Pls buy my porn?

>>3957419

nigger why are you messing around with porn you should be doing editorial illustration for New York magazine or something

>>3957428
Right?! This fool needs to go back in time and work for playboy magazine. And I’m not talking shit, this some good stuff.

>>3957419
This just makes my heart feel warm. They're so happy

>>3957419
>>3957438
This Xs 10000 Huey would hire

>>3957419
This is too stylized to be good for porn commissions. Maybe as erotic parody material or something, but I'm afraid there is no market for this kind of stuff.
It seems like you have skills, but you'll have to change your style if you want to be marketable as a porn artist.

>>3957419
you make sex look so fun. I feel a bit happier.

ironically I wouldn't fap to this. so i think your art has another purpose

>>3957419
>>3957464
This seems like it would be great for a wholesome sex/comedy comic (lol if there is such a thing). I see it like a married couple trying to spice the sex life back up again and all the silly antics that would. follow. I would read.

>>3957333
I think the most jarring things are the legs.
The legs are positioned in a way that makes them look like they're coming forward, but perspective wasn't executed too well, so it makes them look short. They are also both in the same position, which give them this sort of uncanny feel. In addition to plumping out and rounding the thighs, I made the calves thicker to give the illusion like they were coming toward the camera. In turn, the guys hands and upper body have also been enlarged.
The shoulders were quite small, and I understand that her head is pushed forward, but rounding them out and giving them some flesh helped define the reality of the character more.
Her torso was kind of a mess. Belly button wasn't placed right and the belly folds/rolls weren't drawn at all. I made it so it was easier to tell what angle the torso was at in contrast to how the pelvis was.
Speaking of the pelvis, in a position like this it should be rotated forward or towards the viewer. A penis simply wouldn't be able to go in otherwise. To make more sense, I made it so the pussy and labia were angled accordingly. In your original image, it also looked like the penis was going into the urethra.

If I didn't explain a change I did, let me know and I'll do my best to explain it in another post. I'm afraid I'll reach the character limit.

>>3957496
This is great. Thanks a lot for taking the time to go so in depth with the redline and fixes. I especially love what you did with the crotch area. It's much better than what I had going on.
Much love, anon.

>>3957792
Thanks! I'm glad you found it useful. c:

>>3956050
that's right! I am egotistical. The other anons have you covered, but here's your (you). I know /ic/ is laser focused on anatomy, but crits on color, brushes, texture, layering would also be helpful thanks.

>>3957543
blog?

>>3957942
See, this is much better and something you can call a stylistic choice. The previous train wreck of an artwork you posted wasn't.

I don't feel qualified to talk about colors, but in terms of anatomy and gesture, your stuff seems kinda stiff. Work on that.

>>3957947
glasses?

>>3957957
>your stuff seems kinda stiff
Good, anon. But I could not care less about anything else you've said, were you baptized in bong water?

>>3957958
i like it. they have potential

>>3957967
Good to see your attitude sucks just as much as your """"art"""" does.

(Excuse the potato-quality of the picture.)

Wondering if this is good enough to be used for further work in digital.

>>3957985
(Alternate option.)

>>3957496
What's the brush you used for this redline?

>>3957985
nice gheys!

>>3956059
>>3956064
I think the vein is too squiggly for lack of a better word, look up some dicks (lmao) and see how the veins are more straight. But I can see where you're coming from since veins can have that kind of curve, you're just overdoing it here
Neat work though

>>3957947
>>3957968
Not the artist but I follow them on twitter
https://twitter.com/Juste_VU/status/1135640362272415744

Every thread is dead so I suppose I'll post these here.

>>3957984
Anon, I'm here to improve my art. If you want to le harsh critique for the sake of truth and beauty and art, do it right.

>>3958009
I like you so here's a tip.
To avoid your shades looking dirty (same hue just darker) you shoul move the whole HSV thing, not only the value.

And the cheap and lazy wY to do it is to overlar with a gradient map.
>Have a pic with dirty colors
>Put a gradient map going from blue to yellow on top (neutral 50% value)
>Light 10-20% overlay or color blend mode
>Suddenly looks better

>>3957942
>I am egotistical.
you don't say, kek

>>3957999
Thanks, Anon. Which of the 2 pictures feels more "right", for lack of a better word? (Someone else said the 1st picture looks more natural.)

>>3957419
I wouldn't buy this as porn... but a humor/slice-of-life comic in this style would be top-notch. It feels very wholesome and the sense of gesture is good.

>>3957967
Then don't improve your gesture and keep being shit at art. Good for you I guess.

>>3957311
keep the painfully rotated foot. i do that sort of contortionism when i'm either really bored or when i'm trying to think real hard about something.

i'm a boy btw.

>>3957419
this should be in a book about sex

>>3958027
Lol desperate to call it “shit”

Pyw

>>3958033
>>3954893
Shit art at its finest. I simply cannot look at this without laughing kek.

>>3958026
I think >>3957987 is better just for the fact that the sub is hugging the dom's back. It shows a different emotion

>>3958008
>>3958009
faces looks like a 2D version of some of mantis's horrible, horrible face models

>>3958050
kek

>>3958046
I think both of them had that. Must have erased it on the other, honestly.

I could probably combine both of them...

>>3958008
>>3958009
this is neat, but her eyes could use some work i think
the iris is too large and dark imo

>>3956476
always a pleasure to see your drawings.

>Use a small brush size to do line art
>Looks too flat, and faded
>Go over overlapping areas of the figure to add weight
>Ends up looking too western again
Fug

Is the nut goblin in the right place? I moved it around a few times and it just never seems right. I think the placement is correct now but a second eye would be appreciated. Just want the baby puker in the right place before I start detailing and laying color down.

Also this is my 1st lewd or whatever. Been lurking here for a few months and it’s about time I break my cherry. This thread has had some legit good help/crits and seeing people’s work advance to a final product is really great.

>>3958009

>>3958104
a brush with size on pressure, there fixed your stupid problem, shit face.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2CL2lYuL6Ko

Anyone here knows where to find some good boob-drawing tutorials?

>>3958312
check the artbook thread

>>3957942
This is the best image in this thread. You are honestly better than 99% of /ic/.
Your stylistic choices give you a sense of attitude and I personally think everything about this picture is P E R F E C T.
Don't let anyone keep you down. You keep doing you.
<3

>>3958497
spoken like a true redditor
gg

>>3958515
Makes zero sense. Are you even trying?

>>3958518
why would I try if they aren't?
that's a clear bait post. from the % to the spaced upper case perfect, kek.

>>3958540
It’s “clear” huh? Super so clear. You should work for the FBI with all this extensive knowledge of human thought based on text. Truly a person of great knowledge and insight.

gg

>>3958549
>>3958540
>>3958518
Have sex.

>>3958559

>>3958497
You can stop posting now.

>>3958555
Why are you speaking in 3rd person?

>>3958565
Just don't reply

>>3958104
>line weight and heavy lines makes it look western
Ngmi.

new thread >>3958893