/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Recently completed this image set.
1/3

>>3945648
2/3

>>3945650
3/3

>>3945650

I'm genuinely surprised that people want to see flaccid dicks in their nsfw art. I get futas with ridiculous throbbing cocks, but small flacid baby dicks? What's the appeal?

>>3945668
It invokes one to want to find what makes it hard and watching it spring up out of nowhere is exciting. Have sex.

>>3945668
>small flacid baby dicks
idk about baby size but compared to the average futa cock then yes.This black penis looks 5 inches.That's average.

>>3945648
>>3945650
>>3945653
absolutely disgusting
get some taste

>>3945704
5.5” is closer to average, but whether it’s statistically “average” or not doesn’t matter. It’s percieved small so it may as well be.
>>3945668
My guess is it’s a power thing. If the guy imagines himself as the sub, they get off to the feeling of being helpless and useless, maybe they’re into humiliation. If he imagines himself the top then he likes the power he has over them, or maybe they just find it cute?

>>3945726
>not knowing your taste is irrelevant when making art
that's why /ic/ is full of failures. that and not knowing how to draw.

>>3945735
>taste is irrelevant when making art
yea, I'm sure if d'avinci was a furryfag he would be just as respected...

>>3945733

>>3945648
>>3945650
>>3945653
I want to see the target audience of this

>>3945761
cucks who want to be secretly fucked by strong,blonde Aryan Chads.

>>3945763
black cucks? HAH

>>3945648
>>3945650
>>3945653
Can I ask why post stuff on Twitter first to "ask advice" on some 4chan board? Go shill somewhere else faggot. Even BBC/Kyle took the hint.

>>3945668
At this point I feel so desensitized to erect dicks in NSFW art that seeing a flaccid one is a bit of a unique, engaging surprise. Makes me remember that the foreplay stage (arguably the best one) exists.

>>3945778
>ask advice
who is doing this?

>>3945789
>/ic/ - Artwork/Critique
Why post here if you're not asking for advice for something you did?

>>3945668
marmalademum is known for making pedo content. it's just a way to avoid going against rules.

>>3945668
Because people are tired of the dominant futa trope and don't want to get fucked in the ass.

>>3945449
Can we stop making pedo shit the op image for the porn thread? Thanks fags

>>3945853

all characters are 18+

>>3945864
Oh right, I should make sure I include that in the macro next time.

wanted thoughts before i went further. any advice?

>>3945932
draw the legs and flesh out the hands

>>3945932
Pretty dope! Do you have Twitter?

>>3945948
here's what i have right now, i think it's pretty uncanny valley-tier at the moment but i've gotta run somewhere so i'll have to fix it later. don't know what it is that makes that lower body look so freaky.
>>3945973
thanks!
https://twitter.com/drawfruit

How'd I do?
Feels flat to me.

>>3946063

>>3946065

>>3946067

>>3945988
I love the Thicc This is what I got

>>3946065
>>3946067
>>3946069
So is everything fucked up or just these specific parts?

>>3946095
i think he's saying that, yeah. Your outlines are lacking. Your tiddies are torn, work on your pussy position. Also, that one leg looks broken and that the knee bone looks like its popping out badly.

>>3946101
Thanks for clearing that up. I'm still very new to this. I did draw this about a week ago, so maybe I'll redraw it again after for practice.

>>3946104
also practice on drawing shoes too and how it wraps around the foot.

>>3945648
>>3945650
>>3945653
blog?

>>3946115
anon it literally said it at the bottom

>>3945807
not him but anon its a porn thread dumbass

>>3946133
I think what he meant was why are they shilling their blogs by plastering it on their work if they were legitimately here for critique? It's clear that the artist is masquerading as an attempt to receive critique, but what they're really doing is shilling. Notice how they waited for a new thread to be the first three posters, they might as well put a cancerous watermark signature in the middle while they're at it.

>>3946143
masquerading sure but i don't like asking for blog and not getting a response because my text is blocked out by 5 others(last thread). the blog in the picture may annoying but it stops anons from asking

>>3946069
Huh, so I learned this on my own and it's actually a good tip for better looking linework. Thanks Doxy for the moral support.

>>3946143
post your art.

>>3946246
desu I have to put some clothing on for one of the figures for you snowflakes give me a second faggot.

>>3946143
>>3945789

>>3946246
>>3946251
Not going to bother cleaning it any further for you retards.

>>3946268
>draws pedo shit
>shitty art
>shittalks better artists
/ic/ crab in a nutshell

>>3946268
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHSHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

>>3946268
bruh...look at this DOOD

>>3946268
if anyone else feels bad about themselves just remember you aren't this guy

>>3946268
bro, children's body aren't just a scaled down version of an adult + a big belly (and gigantic anime head)
this is so perturbating, are you studying from shingeki no titans or what

>>3945668
A Futa dick is a futa dick its hot regardless of size. I guess in this situation it's the size difference and maybe the guy/girl with the big dick liking small dicks could be apart of the appeal. Like shota x Milf, how the milf would go after short guys regardless of dick size.

>>3946268
its funny that you give them the upper body of an adult. Just glad you don't have real pictures children to ref off of.

I just can't consistently draw loli. My characters always end up looking much older. I hate it.

Too old! Literally

>>3946268
that's cute, i like it, better than the other garbo here

>>3946438
Mods please

>>3946441
seriously? not gay enough for you?

>>3946268
People are laughing at you but I instantly recognize mikufag's art style because it's actually a style. Unlike most people posting here or any other thread they don't have a distinct look.

I wish I could draw

>>3946517
She/he (I can't fucking tell, it's 2019) looks like it has hair on zhe/zhr cootch.

>>3946518
>looks like it has hair on zhe/zhr cootch
fuck, seems like i ruined it

hair is unacceptable!

>>3946438
Omg, you are so edgy and cool.
Just go die in a fire or something.

>>3946519
Look at that edge, OMG.

>>3946528
>wishes people burn to death
>calls others edgy

>>3946519
Haha wait I forgot women grow hair down there too. Man the internet really has warped my brain.

do mods not exist on this board? I can take it when they look like young anime cartoon girls, but this is just child porn

>>3946552
what are you talking about

>>3946552
?_?

>>3946528
>>3946552
>>3946441


Why can't you tumblrinas and redditors just migrate to twitter and leave /ic/ alone?

Comm for a thick muscular huntress

>>3946566
Why don't you instead start acting like a normal socialized human being. WTF is wrong with you?

>>3946585
low_quality_bait.jpg

>>3946602
post_your_work.png

See this is what I have to deal with with "closet pedophiles". We give them anime loli but when people don't completely accept that as anything else but creepy, they retaliate with depictions of real life children. Not stylized, not eastern stylized, but shit like this >>3946438; western children by mentally unstable Americans that can't seem the cope they are westerners that want easterner's "privileges" or some shit. Get some fucking therapy ffs. You shouldn't have to live with the burden the government is always on your ass.

I get the whole "punishment doesn't actually help" because boohoo people retaliate more when they don't get what they want like with drugs and shit, but get fucked and deal with it. There's a reason it's unlawful, like illegal drugs, it's ILLEGAL pornography, it's harmful, for you, for others.

Sex can produce very unhealthy conditions, hence why most fetishes are bad when applied into real life. You need to cope and seek help.

>>3946684

>t. female

>>3946684
>Sex can produce very unhealthy conditions
it's the LACK of it that makes you unhealthy, if anything

>>3946694
Not them, but the fact that sex addiction is an actual thing makes you incorrect.

>>3946734
based on your logic we shouldn't eat either because food can cause addiction

>>3946747
Not everyone is American, landwhale
Also to me sugur should be banned. The over amount of it in foods is disturbingly disturbing.

>>3946747
>>3946752
Go to some other board retards

>>3946755
pyw first faggot

>>3946745
hot

>>3946585
You can not have muscle definition on a chubby person. Fat is on top of the muscle layer.

>>3946374
No it's not. A child has no hips or butt. Their legs are a little bit shorter in terms of proportion, and they have noodle necks.
I'm disgusted by all the toddlercon going on in this thread.

>>3946784
This. He actually recreated a disease humans can get called Dercum if anything.

>>3946268
>hasn't been deleted
>no 3 day ban from the internet gestapo
>tumblrettas and roasties mad as hell
Could these porn threads dare I say be /ourthreads/?

>>3946374
>shingeki no titans
Don't watch any of your weebshit, but some of us are aiming for the form like pic related.

>>3945648
Oh, I follow u on Dwidder. Nice to see u here :v

>>3946816
Pretty sure there are female pedophiles too, anon

>>3946784
It's what the client wanted

>>3946915
I've had clients like that. I feel bad for you.
Luckily I'm in a situation right now where I can not do those commissions

>>3946745
O MUH DICK

>>3946745
Me on the left

Be honest d/ic/ks, do I have potential?

>>3946931
How long have you been drawing seriously for?

>>39469
Causally my entire life (basically), but seriously....since 2016 I guess

>>3946940
I think you have potential, but it honestly looks like you haven't been studying efficiently enough. Your progress looks as though you only study anime, draw 1 or 2 hours a day, and have only been at it for a year. You should check out the art book thread. Good luck anon.

Drawpile session

What do you think?

>>3946268
Would you look at the time, its gas-o-clock.

>>3946268
>draw loli
>too scared to look at pics of real kids so he references 80 year old men for the bodies
wat

>>3946268
Loli, it never fails to trigger the normalfags and make me hard. Keep up the good work soldier.

>>3946931
what's the 3D model you used for tracing this?

>>3947007
I don't mind loli, but your art is bad.

>>3947007
Grug happy others mad, makes life for me not as shitty.

>>3947007
That's tobblercon nigga. I hope you don't live near a daycare/playground.

>>3947007

>>3947027
nah, kids love me

>>3947037
I'm sure they do, and you seem to love them too based on your taste in porn.

So can we rename these threads to lolicon general?

>>3947049
yeah, some of them are pretty cool

>>3947012
The same one everyone else uses

>>3947053

https://www.strawpoll.me/18060130

>>3947053
Fuck off back to your safespace if these pixels bother you so much, snowflake.
>>3946268
Another sketch, aside from all the shit flinging and queefing roasties the ribcage was too big on the other drawings? Not one of you fags seem to be able to explain why or give constructive feedback let alone a redline.

>>3947027
>tobblercon
nigga what
Also that's retarded, every neighborhood nowdays has a daycare and/or playground. Deal with it fag, we live in society with everyone else and it goes both ways.

>>3946918
Don't feel bad for me anon. Believe it or not but I also have the option of not doing a commission if it's too wack. It's just that drawing chubby people with visible muscles isn't really the that big of a deal breaker.

>>3947085
>only 3
kek pathetic

>>3947115
3 out of 39 posters is pretty good metrics

I hate a lot how it turned out.

>>3947129
Yeah me too

>>3946825
>doesn't watch anime
>want to draw anime, toddlershit at that
kys

>>3946825
How can you not know what SnK is? It's literally LITERALLY the top airing show right now in Japan and easily one the best sellers in manga of all time.

>>3947285
Attack on Titan is overrated trash change my mind

>>3947289
I didn't say I like it nor do I disagree with you. I'm just pointing out how you don't know it.

>>3946992
Uncensored version

>>3947280
>>3947285
>because you have to watch anime in order to draw it
I want /a/ to leave.

>>3947377

you piss me off a little

>>3945449

I've been trying to teach myself anatomy through drawing cartoony porn.

>>3947407
Pearl looks mildly annoyed that someone's fingers are inside her vagina

>>3947433
theyre on stage

>>3947377
imagine drawing something you're clueless and don't care about lmao
your brain is a void

>>3947454
By your logic, you'll have to first know every single nut and bolt in your fucking car before you could drive.

>>3947459
Go fuck yourself. It's why your art will never be anything more than shit void of any feeling. At least have some interest in what you're drawing. How can you expect someone to like what you made when you yourself show no interest.

>>3947462
>implying anime has any form of quality
The modus operandi of anime is to animate on the cheap, stay within a budget and simplify forms that are designed to look good in motion hence the side mouths and the lack of grace in the figures.
If what you're saying is that an immersion is necessary in a learning process I agree, however we get more than enough of the immersion from this site alone. Stop trying to shove your cancerous gook fandom onto others we're simply not interested.

>>3947469
>The modus operandi of anime is to animate on the cheap, stay within a budget and simplify forms that are designed to look good in motion hence the side mouths and the lack of grace in the figures.
>implying anime is only just about the visuals
Spoken like a true idiot.
>If what you're saying is that an immersion is necessary in a learning process I agree
I could care less if you want to be immersed in what I like. It's no excuse to be drawing anime and not know what AoT was and then proceed to call it "weebshit". It's far from "weebshit" more like mainstream garbage sure. At least say that. But you come off as some old ironic pedophile who is drawing this 1 character for years now just to get a rise out of people on this board.

Ika Musume is old. Let it go and draw something else. Oh that's right, you don't keep up with trends. My mistake.
>however we get more than enough of the immersion from this site alone
Imagine spending hours on this site for your immersion experience instead of just immersing yourself in the actual thing. You're pathetic.
>Stop trying to shove your cancerous gook fandom onto others we're simply not interested.
Could care less. Just saying you piss me off.

>>3947480
Not going to read another one of your walls of autism, are you that same faggot we were arguing with before?
>you piss me off!
boofuckinghoo. Stop replying.

>>3947482

>this ironic pedophile is still talking to me

>>3947459
Viewing art /= creating it fucking retarded mutt. If driving = building cars, it'd be impossible for anything to not be shit at creating art or everyone could just make cars after driving one.

Why are Americans so fucking stupid when making analogies? Stick to food analogies, landwhale.

>>3947480
Don't bother, he calls it weebshit, insult the fanbase(his futur public and clients) but still draws it(badly). Doesn't make sense.
Let's not waste our time arguing with him, he's ngmi with that attitude (and skill) anyway

>>3947459
nice analogy retard in this case it would be more like building a car without knowing where each nut goes

>>3947544
The whole point was that you don't have to watch anime to be able to draw it, you anime faggots are the equivalent of furries thinking they're in good company with you just because you're drawing their commissioned OC and then all of the sudden you're one of them and failure to partake in their fandoms would be an insult - point in case not watching your gook cartoons.

Anything specific I should work on?
I've drawn for a bit but I'm a bit lost on how to improve since alot of my drawings tend to look a bit same-y in the bodies.

>>3947572
noses?
no, it's really cute

>>3947560
Look at you, your work is low quality and unappealing and you can’t even hide your own contempt for what you do, but yet you dabble in anime stylization and consider yourself above it despite that. What’s wrong with you? You really hate yourself that much?

Personally, I don’t have qualms with loli/shota or care if someone draws anime or whatever else even if it’s otherwise incongruent with their interests, that’s their business. From your posts here though, I just get the impression that you’re a sad being with a nasty outlook who doesn’t even like art or drawing for that matter, so why should anyone waste time giving you honest to goodness feedback when you don’t even respect the craft or care about your own work to begin with?

>>3945648
>>3945648
yeah fuck right off, this is a critique thread not an advertising platform, posting finished drawings is already weird but its not like you even
posted here first to make sure nothing is wrong/get critique so you can maybe go back and change something, you finished those drawings like fucking 5 days ago and posted it on your galleries, this is just advertisement.

Dunno about this. I was confident with the sketch, but now I think it looks weird.
Any critique/advice?

>>3947685
Did you trace this from 3D?

Does someone have feedback to spare?

>>3947720
No. I don't even use refs.
So it looks that sterile?

>>3945449
been playing a lot of FFXIV lately

>>3947685
>>3948108
It looks fine, that poster thinks everyone uses 3d because their perspective is better than what they're capable of

>>3946931
card?

>>3948308
No, I think it looks like 3D because the accessory elements like the ears and hair clip are out of perspective while the figure is in perspective.

>>3947407
I hope Nintendo nukes all your accounts.

>>3948480
Do your part and report them.

>>3948487
For what, retard?

>>3948492
Copyright infringement, defamation, unauthorized use of proprietary content and infraction of property rights.

>>3947407
Nice. What's your blog?

>>3948496
Only Nintendo of America cares about that, plus only defamation would count if anything. Rights to create parodies protects anyone. That's why there are Iron Man x Wonder Woman pornos.

Preview page WIP (1/3)

Looking for critiques on panel flow and composition in the rough stages. I will add the perspective grids tomorrow to refine the readability, anatomy, and forms.

Previous posts:

>>3944292
>>3944293

>>3948512

>>3948492
Yeah, she definitely looks like a 2000 y old dragon.
KYS, retard.
I hope they get you, I really do.

(3/3

>>3948512
>>3948515
>(2/3)

>>3948518
Nintendo came up with their age, not me.
Also I'm not that artist, retard.

>>3948524

Hey retard. Why is retard the top word in your mental vocabulary, retard? Read a book, you god damn retard.

>>3948525
>says I overuse retard
>says it more than me

>>3948531

Wow you are stupid. Can't you see I'm doing that to show you up?

>>3948524
Do you even understand what I wrote?
Even if they say she's 2k years old, she still looks like a fucking 6 year old.
Are you blind?

>>3948536
There are many people that don't look their age. Plus they are a species that doesn't exist, so who cares?

>>3948535
Do you have any idea how RETARDED you sound?
u mad.

>>3948540
>who cares?
People like that anon just like to shit on everything that doesn't match their moral code. They'd probably argue that whoever draws young characters is a pedo when said artists are completely harmless (and maybe even less toxic than shitters like him who need to stay anonymous)

>>3948536
they all look like midget goblins and especially their faces. Their species aren't human so they have these downie face or fetal alcohol syndrome

>>3948545

>still made after 24 hours of calling his art shit
lol cope amigo

>>3948564
I'm not the artist, also,
>He mad

>>3948569

You're the other loser who posted the pedophilic squid, I know.

>>3948572
Seething!
Also no.

>>3948576

You can't lie to me I can see the proof.

>>3948583
These two posts were me
>>3948487
>>3948496
Quite frankly I'm done arguing with you retards. Came back to check if there was anyone with the mental capacity to offer a critique yet.

i made this for a thread on /co/

>>3948625
>/co/
i'm sure this got removed

>>3948636
not yet the post still there maybe we just have to wait

>>3948664
soon...soon.

>>3948671
well was it a good drawing tho?

>>3948664
post them thread you posted it on

>>3948674
the construction looks ok though idk how to feel about how that dick is entering that butthole.Looks weird and gaping

>>3948677
i wanted to make the penis look like it's getting in/out like the pic below

>>3948688
i guess i didnt understand the contours of your butthole outlines.
Just looked like a gaping asshole

>>3948698
Those are balls anon.

>>3948688
You just should have done speed lines, like in the ref.

>>3948706
exactly i didn't see any reference when i started drawing that so everything was just memory, never done any speed line before btw

>>3948706
omg when i saw your ref i didn't get the idea of balls deep.Like SEEING balls deep in the reference you had.Its implied in the ref but i see what you were attending.Lol the balls are creeping their way into her ass

>>3948712
oh wait sorry i thought you were the artist my mistake.
>>3948711
>>3948712
meant for you,anono
its not too hard to do speed lines. it just implies you're throbbing the dick fast and deep

>>3948715
>>3948706
sorry for the mistake anon.

>>3948715
i'll try to improve that bro thanks btw hope you sleep well this week

>>3948518
Careful, anon. Too much estrogen can give you breast cancer.

>>3948720
>>3948712
this comment was meant for you not the other anon>>3948706
sorry for the mistake

>>3948712
*attempting not attending lol

>>3948723
don't worry i knew it, anyways you are the only one to undertood the thing that i was trying to do

What do you say, guys?

>>3948739
Decide on a light source.

>>3948739
you need to improve in every area.

Uncensored versión on my Twitter @_luchored_

helpp

>>3948497
Search juste_VU on your favorite search engine.

>>3948814
what brush?

>>3946067
So something like this?

>>3948869
i installed csp on my ipad an this was literally the default pencil brush

>>3948876
You're still not thinking of things as physical objects that displace if touched or moved. Go look at some videos of boobies on /gif/. Pause the videos and take screenshots, then do studies off of them. Boobs of all shapes and sizes.

>>3948898
Nope, still not making sense. Can't get more physical that. Draw me an example so I can understand better, cause this ain't working.

>>3948933
Compare your pictures one to one anon. How are you supposes to tell the difference between my art and your art, if you can't tell the difference between your art and real life. I can't spoonfeed you if you can't see the spoon.

>>3948952
Because you're being vague about it. If I look at IRL images without actually knowing what I'm looking for I'll just be polishing shit. Just draw me an example of how your supposed to do it and I'll compare and correct my stuff.

>>3948540
You are fucking delusional.

>>3948876
You have no idea what appealing forms are and how to make them.
Literally JUST DRAW more and in a few years you'll be decent.

>>3948978
Those were rough I wasn't trying to make something appealing. I was trying to make sense of the guide

>>3948999
>I wasn't trying to make something appealing
good artists don't need to try. that's why you aren't a good artist.
as I said. JUST FUCKING DRAW and stop being lazy trying to find shortcuts to everything via tutorials and stuff.
fucking dumbass.

>>3949013
Lol who said I was good artist? I'm just asking how to draw tiddies. Pyw faggot I'd love to see how great you are.

>>3948156
those are some cute lalafells. And that's something for a race that's basicaly a walking potato. Good job anon

>>3948809
>greenboard
Are you retarded?

>>3948624
(you)

>>3948814
what do you need help with?

>>3949026
thanks anon

>>3948876
Those little ones are nice. Waist is a bit too pinched tho.

>>3948876
Are these better?
>>3949085
Thank you

>>3949014
>>3949095
You lack fundamental knowledge and mileage. That's why your stuff looks bad. It's really not rocket science.

>>3949132
I'm not asking if it's good I'm asking if I drew the breast right and any help on how to draw them better. Why are yall asuming i think i'm some hot shot professional. Also pyw

>>3948624
>>3948583
This is why i used to be a tripfag. I have been inactive here for months though...

hello!

>>3949354
Poor thing, someone smashed her head in her ribcage.

>>3949384
Oh shit I never noticed that, thanks anon

>>3948809
I like your linework but the way you draw bodies is not very appealing.

>>3948961
Another anon. What he is trying to say is that you draw the torso and then you draw the boobs. But your boobs are not actually connected to the torso. It's more like you took two pictures and layered it one onto the other without any care about how boobs should be shaped by the ribcage and pecs (though you could ignore this part for most female figures) under them.

>>3949402
They have really big feet, like Street Fighter+

>>3949400
Huh? How are they not connected? Here, I just drew this. Tell me exactly where I'm fucking up at so I can understand what your talking about.

>>3949402
I guess the SFW doesn't pay the bills like porn, eh Hardstones?

>>3949428
Personal project. Drawing porn is tolerable when you are free to draw your own designs.

SFW pays damn well, in my experience. Closing off with a crowdfunded project would be a nice to end my old trade, and gain experience for future projects.

>>3949406
Fixed. Thanks.

>>3949425
I think the only thing that can help you is a water ball.

You connect the lines, not the 3D forms to each other. So take a water ball and see how it interacts with different hard/soft objects. OR get a girl and use her boobs as reference.

>>3949439
Good shit Flintlock just do what you like.

>>3949396
Thanks anon

>>3949501
Draw me a correct example or red line it, cause you guys aren't making sense. I'll just assume I'm doing okay and yall are fucking with me.

>>3949528
Maybe nobody wants to help you because you're defensive, uncooperative and irritating.

>>3949545
Or none of you actually know any better than me. I've been cooperative this entire time asking for help. Stop being vague and actually explain what's wrong and I'll fuck off.

>>3947090
The ribcage on the previous image was to wide yeah. Seems a lot better in this one though. The girl on the left in the previous one has a wonky face as well with oddly placed eyes. At this point you just need more mileage and reference. I personally like and reccomend the work of om_(nk2007) for that.

>>3949566
Thanks fren

>>3949555

>>3949572
I think we've gone full circle... So somehow I'm not imagining a mushy ball. But I still don't get how mine are "disconnected" from the torso. Are you saying they're flat and need more depth? If so how? Does the blue line mean I have them in the wrong place, or does it mean the flow of the shape is wrong? Is it nipple placement? You can only interpret so much from an image without any type of captions explaining what's going on. I'm going to go buy a water balloon. If I can't get it right after that then fuck it. All my girls will just have fucked up tits.

>>3947076
link?

tit advice? it's bothering me and i'm having a hard time finding a reference for this specific angle/orientation
would also appreciate any advice on how to make this look more polished/finished

>>3949567
We're both on similar paths
Gotta help each other out, even if a little

>>3949713
I think it would really help if you fit the other leg in the image somehow so it doesn’t look like she’s twisting.

>>3949781
almost impossible but i tried
the target audience should get it anyway

>>3948814
hans' a bit too big
also is it me or did you give him leggings so you wouldn't have to draw his feet?

>>3949892
hand's* w.e

Anyone know a good way to design alien genitals? Besides using humans as reference/base.

>>3949934
Check sites like Bad Dragon and furry pornography of fictional species such as dragons, aliens, etc.

>>3949939
Thanks sport.

>>3949528
>>3949555
I already told you what your problem is here >>3949132

A redline won't teach you fundamentals, you dumbass.

>>3949999
Post your work

>>3946371
I actually do feel better now. Thanks for pointing that out, anon.

>>3950211
Face reminds me of jdotkdot

Do you guys use any specific sites to find porn references? Right now I've been relying on /s/ and /hm/, and a couple subreddits - but I'm thinking I should just take screen grabs from videos at this point?

>>3949999
Quads of truth.

>>3950218
Usually I use google. All I need to type in is "female nude model kneeling" and I get lots of good results.

>>3950215
>>3950217
Love your stuff. :^)

>>3950125
Kill yourself.

>>3950215
>>3950217
Kind reminder that you are drawing kids again.

>>3950322
Hey I went out of my way to give him lankier proportions, this could easily be a skinny 19yo

where am I going wrong?

>>3950522
Top-half and bottom-half of the girl are out of perspective with regard to one another
Dude's dick is attached to his inner thigh

>>3950522
That must be one insanely curved dick

>>3950567
>>3950583
I'll try to fix it afterward

>>3945733
This is why I love 4chan, anonymous scholar responses to anonymous stupid questions

fucked up the left leg pretty hard and the whole thing is rough. Thoughts?

>>3950656

>>3950656
lol i dont even see anything

>>3950322
Doesn't even look like a kid lol.

>>3948814
hands should be half smaller, and legs/feet need more definition

>>3950211
face looks great but dick looks like it's melting

>>3950322
kind reminder that you are a faggot

>>3950464
Looks just like any other of yours kids with big dicks drawings.

>>3950698
>>3950757
pedos spotted.

>>3950778
He kinda looks like the guy that played Joffrey in game of thrones (who is of age)

>>3950778
faggot spotted

>>3950781
keep coping

>>3950217
I like that artist thank you.
>>3950748
Yeah I have a hard time rendering fluids without tones/color to help out. Linework hard.

>>3948308
>It looks fine
back to /beg/ with you if you didn't notice anything wrong with the sketch, especially the elbow and perspective fuckups

>>3950215
You know with all the penises and fem boys you've drawn, im beginning to suspect you might be gay...

>>3950215
what was your twitter again? I forgot

which art website creator is best for lolicon?
i could imagine many art website builder don't allow lolicon, especially western ones

>>3951107
just use whatever loli artist on pixiv is using

>>3951109
i already tried to find what a lolicon artist uses, but no idea how to
simply searching for the words in the address doesn't help

hows this

how is this

>>3951321
Bad.

>>3949425
hi Anon, I drew a messy diagram breaking down some ideas in breast that I'll break down. I think the disconnected breast issue stems from the lack of contact they appear to have in relation to the chest. A lot of tutorials use a water balloon against a plank to demonstrate how boobs fall against a chest. Personally I use shadows to map out to forms instead of using the water balloon method, but it's up to your preference.

Your boobs seem to just hover and curve at the bottom, instead of flattening out where it touches the ribcage (like it's in its own field of space). While the actual edge of the boob slightly flattens, the shadows are rounded to the from of the breast.

Boobs are really tricky with lineart since a lot of the form is implied. Using varying line widths is your best bet to make them look plushy and comfy. Nsio's boob tutorial is more comprehensive than mine and cover the lineart aspect more.

I suggest you do more studies to figure out what they look like in different orientations (small, large, pressed together, stretched vs. relaxed, birds/worms eyes).

Sorry if my examples are too messy, it's 2 am and I felt bad that no one was giving you a redline. I'm basically trying to break down what the other Anon was trying to say about them not connecting.


tl;Dr curvy top, curvy shadow, flatter bottom (contact area)

>>3946268
I was lurking until I saw your post. Keep up the salt and btfo the moralfags.
Nice art btw.
>>3946374
>>3946392
>>3947004
>doesn't know JY
>will never know what is JY
Stupid, it's accurate moe proportions. You're are a retards who only know shonenshit. Post art and we will wreck you all.

>>3951507
>Post art and we will wreck you all.
Not your personal army, faggot.

>>3947469
>what is stereographic vision
>doesn't know how to project 3d-ness in a flat surface
You will never ever ever ever ever make it.

>>3947469
>i only have one eye like a camera inside a CAD program
Lol. Enjoy your 3DCG. I bet you never had any experience with VR either.

>>3951510
>anon will never know what is JY
Post art, I can whip up a spitpaint and wreck your pathetic spark.

>>3951525

>>3947129
I hate it too

>>3951663
How is he gonna eat that cake if he put his dick on it

>>3951663
cankles

>>3951663
feet is kinda chubby

someone who has a foot fetish help me, my family is dying

>>3951683
how else are you supposed to know it’s his cake

>>3951685
>>3951706
i have thick ankles
i have thankles

>>3951525
>>3951541
REKT

based on olympia by manet

im aware the arms are too short

>>3951778
gross

>>3951782

to each his own

>>3946065
>>3946067
>>3946069
doxy is /beg/

>>3951754
Hands are pretty big. I think it would help to make his face look like it's angled down if you raised the ears a little higher.

>>3951869
to some people probably davinci is /beg/ too, but I seriously doubt you are a person that can call any of them /beg/.

pyw, champ.
newsflash, you won't.

>>3951869
Doxy isn't /beg/, but I do feel he has stagnated.

>>3951754

>>3951541
based BBC senpai

>>3951994
he reached a level where he's comfortable with his skills.
now he's just focusing on the subjects he draws.
you guys have unrealistic expectations and goals. probably because you have no idea what it means to draw for a living.

>>3945449
What should i do with this regarding the bottom half? This is my first time doing digital btw.

>>3951994
Doxy hasnt stagnated. Hes comfortable. He had a very distinct style and he doesnt feel like changing. He has perfected what he does and what he does is successful.

>>3952339
Not worth critiqueing. Start over and try again. Use a reference and follow it closely. You didnt even attempt proper anatomy.

I know it sounds mean, but its the truth. There is nothing of value to critique. Start with what is in /beg/ and study models.

>>3951525
>>3951541
haha fucking redpilled

>>3952413
>nothing of value to critique
I think a better way to say it is that there is so much wrong with the drawing, that it would require an essay longer than the character limit here on 4Chan.

>>3952339
Go check out the Art Book Thread and /beg/. Try to think of the body in smaller 3D forms.

Make a new thread already you lazy niggers.

>>3952701
No u

>>3952712
>>3952712
>>3952712

>>3950215
blog?

>>3952855
>>3951047
https://twitter.com/Lambrey3

>>3946063
Practice with a focus on depth, learning to draw cross-contour lines will help

You can either draw them as, for lack of a better term, parallel lines, or as grids