/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

But isn't all art stylized?

>>3946184
damn...

>>3946184
Checkmate

>>3946184
foo poo boo poo

>>3946184
How can ALTfags EVER hope to recover from this?

Are you fags going to post work or would these threads continue being yet another circlejerk?

The leg in red is fucking with my brain man

kitty kitty
meow meow

I hate doing lineart so much. I need to zoom in for precision but i lose the long gestural lines of the original zoomed out sketch

>>3946405
This is so nice

>>3946184
Mind blowing

>>3946405
There something very fairytale illustration about this. Good job, anon.

>>3946184
dude calm down with the redpills

Reposted it here cus' I posted it at the very end of the last thread

>>3946180

I could be wrong, but I am inclined to think that cast shadows wrap around the form it's being cast on to.

>>3946562
it's actually a challenge from the artist to another artist. You must draw the form that is casting that shadow to such that it appears as a straight line over that girl's figure.

>>3946570

That's a stupid challenge.

Does anyone have examples of light filtering through tree foliage onto a subject? I'd like to use that effect on this piece. I'm having trouble finding anything on Google.

>>3946627

It's called "dappled light". You're welcome

>>3946225
i want her to slap me in the face with those huge hands

>>3946225
I want to lick the dirt off of those shoes

>>3946380
This is really cute

Just doodles

>>3946405
>zoom in for precision
idk what sort of finish you're going for but lineart neither needs to be painful nor perfect.
Eg. see pic, lots of happy mistakes and messiness but it still reads well as a "Sick knife cunt surrounded by blood and guts"

Unless you're going for inking like Wrightson's Frankenstein plates, you might not even need to zoom in.

>>3946184
retard

>>3946184
Depends on what you mean by stylized.

>>3946571
Im sorry

>>3946627
thank you for drawing yoshi and baby mario!
- my 6 year old nephew

>>3947057
Hand in the foreground looks flat as fuck. Work on your planes.

>>3946651
youd probably die but i guess its worth it
>>3946656
you and me both

Gonna stop working on this garbage

>>3947192
The hair is very nice, but feels like its too detailed compared to the rest of it

>>3946180
which head is best girl material?

>>3947246
Absolutely none of them. Learn to moe dude... your proportions are bad, features aren't placed right, and your eyes are all absolutely horrifying.

>>3947300
What do I do to make the eyes less horrifying?

>>3947246
jesus christ

>>3947344
That's my favorite head as well.

>>3947313
1. Draw a proper head to put them on. As yours is right now, the eyes are like 2x too big for that head, or the head is 2x too small for those eyes.
2. Use guidelines of some kind to line features up. You should start with a front on view first and get used to that before you move into 3/4 view. The top of your eyes are at different perspectives than the bottom of the eyes.
3. Learn perspective. Your far off eye is just on the edge of the face, there's not even a sliver of face between the end of the eye and the line for the cheek. That eye is also too big and not in perspective. Your close up eye is too big and is taking up way too much of the face, also is not resting in an eye socket.
4. Learn some anatomy. Please. Just do a skull study or something. Why does the mouth go up that far? Why is the nose pointing the wrong way? Why is there no chin, not enough cranium? Please learn anatomy.
5. The eyes on the top left corner?Horrifying. Eyes usually should be touching either the top eyelid or bottom, if not both. When they're touching neither it means the character is psychotic or scared. So every face you made that does this looks like it's about to fucking murder you. Also another problem I have with this set of eyes is the lines you drew around the iris. You're better off doing something like the top middle, where you have a pupil and shadow.
6. Learn to emote. When you smile, your eyes smile. They get picked up slightly at the bottom. Cover up the nose/mouth and look at the eyes, do they seriously look like they're making the emotion you wanted? They look confused, horrified, or yandere as fuck.

Also no highlight on the eye can mean it is soulless or evil. So try to at least draw in where the big highlight is going to be. It's fucking creepy when you don't.

I'm sorry if this isn't worded well enough your shit scares me to look at and it's too distracting to critique any more please make eyes less spooky

>>3947133
i think i see the issue now, the perspective wasnt pushed hard enough on the leg so it looks like its really short instead of angled somewhat at the viewer

>>3947084
Fug. Yeah I see it even flatter now. I should study and practice perspective and stop going so blindly about it. Thanks for the feedback anon!

>>3947359
No that's pretty good advice

>>3946180

>>3946671
danke

>>3947406
i thought you died

>>3947411
Same to (You)

>>3947406
Please fix the torso and legs

>>3947416
eh, more or less ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

>>3947300
what book famarino

>>3947359
Is this any better?

>>3947424
nvm I see the problem I'll fix it

>>3947424
You mouth is horrifically misplaced.

>>3947424
LOOMIS.

>>3947428
How?

>>3947359
>>3947428
Alright what about now?

>>3947440
Worked better as a lineart I think

>>3947441
>>3947440
Jesus you don't need that many owls do get the idea of "owl knight" across
Be a bit more subtle with the idea, also the entire thing is leaning to the right and you need to brush up on your fundementals
>>3947438
>>3947424
this has to be some elaborate bait
go study basic geometric shapes, study a human skull then go to stylizing it
>>3947406
good stuff, check the arms and hand size besides stuff others pointed out
>>3946782
nice colors would want to see more

>>3947470
God damn it I hate this shit, why can't you just tell me what's wrong with it? I'm currently doing that, I didn't come here for long term advice I came here to understand what's wrong with this specific piece.

>>3947440
I agree with >>3947470 you don't need so many owl heads to make this idea, maybe base some armor shapes on the owls body and utilize that feather-chainmail idea some more. The painting is nice though, I enjoy the warm, comfy tones.

>>3947438
Took a stab at it

>>3947371
Thank you, I think I got it now.

>>3947424
OH NO NO NO NO

>>3947474
The mouth is misaligned. The center of the mouth is directly below the center of nose. Your mouths are all on the side of the cheek. This guys >>3947494 more or less illustrates how it should look.

>>3946405
What are you talking about. Lineart is so relaxing to do, when you're done with your gesture and pose from your sketch, just take you time and make it clean. You're not supposed to lose anything, you're actually supposed to add thing with the clean lineart.

>>3947133
>>3947371
Aside from the problem with your right leg, i think this is really well done. Good job anon.

>>3947494
>>3947524
Thanks you

a few fixes and minor changes to make but i'm pretty happy

>>3947564

>>3947568

>>3946225
The thigh of the red leg seems too short, and muscles don’t connect right to the ass

>>3947498
Now you need to make that boot a little larger for perspective since it’s closer.

>>3947630
The viewing angle is reduced that's why the legs are like that, the artist isn't wrong here.

>>3947632
The perspective will read better if the boot is larger. Drawing, especially drawing characters in wacky perspectives, isn't about be technically right. It's about selling the image to the viewer at a glance.

>>3947498
its a lot better, my first thought was "need to see more of the shoe sole", looks like you did that without me needing to say anything, though if you mess with it some more try pushing it further to see what comes of it

>>3947684
real nnice
The comic still goin alright?

>>3946405
Perfectly understanding you. I stopped linearting some time ago because i just hated how lineart would usually change the whole feeling of the initial sketch,it wasnt dinamic, felt like it concealed the initial vibe and looseness. Now all i do is directly from the sketch. I just put more time into it, give it a rather clean look and start coloring it, once that is done i just make another layer on top and start cleaning it, adding more details, getting rid of some lines or adding more.

Work how it makes you happy and that will unveil your true style

Been a long time since i draw male.

>>3946495
>>3946416
Thanks. It's the dainty snow white hands that make it look fairy tail i think


>>3946904
I'm going for like a zedig or grachh kind of clean linework and hard, kind of opaque brushed coloring.
>>3947789
Something like this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q_-pi-8UhHw now that I think on it. That video has been on the back of my mind since forever but I've never tried to copy his process.

>>3947684
is this ohthatfisher? (can't remember exact name) what was your twitter url again?

>>3947557
>>3947791
>>3947811
naisu

>>3947891
aesthetic breasts. I like everything about the figure on the left.

>>3947811
I don't know him but I love him

>>3947811
bruh you always do the same angle

>>3948029
Damn it i know okay, 3/4 is my curse. I swear i will try something else in the next piece.
Maybe a 3/4 back view

>upload drawing
>10 likes
>reupload drawing with the 18+ tag
>100 likes
I don't get it.

>>3948036
you mean like when they're turning away from the camera? i call that the 1/4 view

>>3947971
thanks. small breasts are the most aesthetic

>>3947411
gotta go work ;-;;

>>3947684
continuously amazing as always

>>3948048
people actually follow the 18+ tag, thus more people see your art. what is not to get?

>>3948262
but that's so dumb. Its not like it was actually pornographic.

>>3948265
more people see it. thus more likes. thats it

>>3947540
Thank you, this is part of my attempt to make my shit more dynamic
>>3947630
>>3947632
>>3947686
I appreciate the help anons

>>3947570
charming stuff

>>3947684
do you have any specific advice for improving drawing from imagination?

how come my rendering looks so shit? it looks like i airbrushed everything in on the body, which i didn't. i started it off cel shaded then i tried blending in order to make softer transitions between dark and light but it makes me want to throw up

I tried today, /jp/.

>>3947570
These are really nice, anon.

>>3946405
I feel you, these lines are already gorgeous and it'll be a shame to lose the flow. >>3947891 But I guess coloring over them worked out well, too.

>>3946904
I have seen this but with anime chicks, done by doodlezbd on tumblr. It's really good.

>>3948426
You don't need to blend every patch of shadow; it's looking too pillowy now. Maybe have a slight gradient for the local color for more contrast at the top, and hue shift the shadows.

>>3948645
Gib brush
I only recently started using CSP and I haven't had the drive to sit and play around with all the knobs
Also
>you just know

>>3948645
where's the blog to pic related?

>>3948645
I like where this is going on hope it goes there.

>>3948647
>Navigator clearly from PS
>implies that you're asking of a brush for Clip Studio

>>3948653
Fuckin identical

>>3948655
are you the same retard who couldn't see the wrench icon in that other thread?

>>3948656
Calm down crab

>>3948656
CSP has several wrench icons
Adobecrabs btfo

>>3948658
yeah nah there was an anon in some other thread who bitched about CSP after recently getting it cause he couldn't fully edit his brushes and then it was revealed he was so retarded he couldn't even notice the wrench icon to open up the brush settings. I just thought the other anon in this thread was that same anon because you would have to be mentally challenged to mistake the navigator from PS to be one from CSP.

this is a board for drawing, it's kind of sad if your eyes are so shit that you mistake one thing for another.

>>3948647
It's just the default round brush with pressure sensitivity and shape dynamics, I'm sure there's something like that in CSP that feels better.

>>3948652
Yes, it does.

>>3948650
It's pollenoxide on twitter/newgrounds.

>>3948426
Dont be afraid to use darker colors.
Also theres no reason to add the yellow outline, plus black outlines plus thin inconsistent crosshatching.
You gotta push objects to the back with darker less saturated colors to create depth.

>>3946532
I like the way you've done the fabrics, it's very nice.

The whole thing reminds me of a pleasant mid-spring afternoon dream.

>>3948645
there's a regular drawthread in/jp/?

I'm working on shading for this quasimodo-looking guy and I'm wondering if it looks like shadow on his face or just discoloration. Do most people use a partially opaque black layer or darker tones of the color they're shading like I'm trying to do?
Side-by-side in case you want to show what'd be better.

>>3948330
please fix her eyes i feel like she's looking at 2 directions..

>>3948710
jesus thank you man. what books did you read to get to that level
>>3948666
more or less got it. i know a lot of people use simple round brush but i never actually used it cause i thought it was easier to use fancy brushes. i really like the look of it

>>3948769
Lots of practice and youtube videos. I like borodantes vids. Goro fujita is another really good one to watch. Rendering isnt my strong suit but you can at least get to where I'm at just watching internet artists and practicing

could use some criticism

>>3948803
aww

>>3948645
>>3948339
thank you

>>3947783
Thanks, it’s on hiatus at the moment because I spontaneously started to hate both the characters designs. I’m still committed to the idea and the world though
>>3947891
Close, ohheythatfisher. the anatomy on that mermaid looks great
>>3948247
I love those paws...
>>3948339
Try to visualize things before you draw them, get comfortable conveying form and making it look 3D, and unironically use reference. Drawing from imagination is all about confidence in your understanding of the subject, you can’t do that without ever seeing something at least similar to it. Things like anatomy follow the same rules no matter what kind of creature you’re designing.

I draw stuff for D&D.

Edit

>>3948900
Shit wrong thread

>>3947791
These are gorgeous anon how do i get to your level? ;-;

>>3948733

i did this with a trackpad on my laptop

you can go the route you're taking and then colorize the black, play with the hue/sat and layer styles to find something you like

>>3946180
Left or right, also what should I change before going into lineart?

>>3946180
WIP paint-mouse only drawing

>>3949123
Loomis

>>3949123
Anatomy issues aside, this pose is extremely unbalanced and unless 90% of her body weight was located below her knees she would fall backwards if she were real.

>>3947791
smooth and beautiful

Any advice? Did i fuck up anywhere?

>>3949466
ok bro nice tits but, is ribcage rotated a full 90 degrees? looking at where you placed the pit of the neck, there is no stretching going on to imply she is turning her upper body. dunno if this character has the ability to transform into rubber but, i think you should take the ass and rotate it a full 90 degrees, putting it in line with the frontward facing planes of the ribcage/upper torso, and then twist it from there.

>>3949485
was confused for a sec but now i see what you mean, cannot unsee. but that's just the character facing forward, no twisting. those are meant to be petals lining her hips, not asscheeks
anyway i meant more along the line of additions, highlights and the like because i think my pic is lacking in something that could really make it feel more finished, but i never know what to do at this point or how to tell whether my drawing is finished

not sure if this is the right thread to post this, but, some cover layout thing WIP..

..felt like it's looking way too bland so far though, any idea how i can improve it?

>>3949692
it's probably that all the colors are very similar (drab greens-brownish yellows).
You could try hue-shifting all the shadows, ormaybe increase saturation overall? that's what i would try

>>3949701
sounds like a good idea, will definitely try it
anything else? some extra details etc maybe? or would that just make the whole thing too cluttered?

>>3949375
>anatomy issues aside
That seems like a pretty important thing to leave out given the entire image depends on it.

>>3949717
i think you're fine on details but if you wanna add more, put them on the guy (assuming he's the focal point). you're already following the rule of thirds so my eye is drawn to his figure. i think you're fine on detail though, unless you explicitly see the need to do so then it's usually not going to make it any better

>>3949726
i see, thanks a lot

drew the fox girl.

>>3949549
this is very well executed

>>3949793
Cute

>>3949123
Welp, not really clear on what those anatomy issues were, here's an attempt at the very least

Photoshop killed one of my drawings
>>3946532
Really like it, got a blog?

personal tee design

probably more /gd oriented but let me know if anything looks weird/doesn't read right

personal tee design

let me know if anything looks weird/doesn't read properly

>>3949692
Make the sky stand out a bit more. Also, are you working on a comic?

>>3946180
theryre alieens :x

>>3950060
Crab

>>3950060
Da fuck did you just said about me?

I can see myself getting better, I just need to learn how to render properly.

>>3949978
I like this anon keep it up.

>>3950181
okay thank u i have

>>3950192
i love

>>3949686
i see. well your pic looks okay in terms of painting, try to add variation in the chroma and saturation of the boy's skintones and maybe even tsareena's as well, it will make them feel more alive.

but, i gotta say after looking at the image you provided, the form of your pic is still off - look at how far forward the front petal is oriented on the hip, and if it bending of shifting, the anchor point (the little triangle that connects it) still needs to be roughly where it came from. the side petal as well should be more on the actual side plane of the character instead of towards the back.
i really don't have much of a problem with anything else in the image, though, it's just the drawing. the boy's hands could however be more planar and descriptive of how they're oriented in space, just like with the petals.

oh, add highlights on the plant pokemon, too, as well as the boy's skin. highlights should be stronger on her, though, imo, or at least broader in shape. her legs seem like they're supposed to be rubbery, so make them like, you know, sexy latexy highlights and stuff.

i would do a paintover but i'm actually tired soooooo yeah looks pretty good tho overall just fix some of the drawing

C(r)owboy.

>>3949969
>Make the sky stand out a bit more
gotcha, thanks

>comic
sort of, yes
although it's rather text-heavy, so i guess it's more of a graphic novel than a comic?

i know it needs work but one thing i have a harder time with are the eyes. I don't understand how they work or wrap around the eyelid.

>>3950269
sorry the file was too big so i shrunk it

>>3949793
unwrinkled apron makes it feel uncanny

>>3950323
I like your values

>>3950266
If you have anywhere that you frequently post, id gladly follow.

>>3946180
Going all in on animu style

>>3949858
Miyabi_pixel on instagram

>>3950615
Drop blog or else

>>3946380
YOU
BLOG
NOW

>>3950736
Ilovebedsart on instagram

>>3950879
blog?

>>3950176
My dude. That thing where the mouth stops just before the edge from a side view? It was only done in animations purely as a way to avoid having to animate the entire face. There is no reason to do it in an illustration, unless your guy's mouth actually is on his right cheek and not where a mouth should be

>>3950323
YO WTF I FOLLOW U ON TWITTER

>>3946180
I feel like a hack if I publish stylized shit when I can't draw like pic-related. Anyone else feel the same?

>>3950194
(sigh) tired and am done with this

>>3950192
>>3951189
i really like this anon, you have a really unique and interesting style
do you have a blog/twitter where you post your stuff?

>>3951179
no, I am completely unashamed of the absolute garbage I post.

>>3951189
really like unown-chan

>>3950963
don't bother that nigger never posts blog

>>3951195
https://twitter.com/Atrpntime
https://atrpntime.tumblr.com/
i try and vary the content between the two...
>>3951230
thanks anon

The Voux du vin have a fleshy organ similar in appearance to a human mustache. Aside from its warm and inviting effect, it's great for savoring every last drop of intergalactic booze.

>>3951251
whoops

>>3951233
It's all crap anyway

>>3948846
thank u anon ! <3

a lot of overpainting needs to be done to fix my mistakes

anyone have tips for the general head shape? I usually mess up on the chin/jaw line.

>>3950223
this is all i have after 2 hours, i am a beginner to rendering so i don't really know where to put what. the lineart alone looks better than this version. i guess by chroma you mean something like different hues, tried varying skintones slightly but idk if it's noticable.
i'm gonna drop this for now and read a book on this, gonna try scott robertson

>>3951278
These are some really great colors man, good job

>>3951281
actually you did well, i think you're just worried that you don't know how to do it properly. too many highlights, though, go read up how highlights work - they are reflections of the light source than only happen when the angle the light source comes from vs the direction of the plane facing outwards (surface normal) is the same as the angle between our eyes and the plane's "surface normal".

i heavily recommend Dorian Iten's Mastering Light And Form. you will not be disappointed.

honestly just remove the highlights on the more backwards-facing planes of the pokemon's body, and place the highlights on the boy's eyes more leftwards and you will be pretty swell. good luck with learning more about rendering.

>>3950176

watching brotherhood for the first time

>>3951434
Cute!

>>3946184
Says alternative, so btfo. Now we ask ourselves, what makes something alternative? My guess would be whatever isn't amazingly popular.

>>3951455
Slash stylization.

>>3949466
bloggu?

>>3951480
https://twitter.com/drawfruit
gonna fixer up a bit before posting it

>>3951764
give the crab huge tits and i'll jerk off to this

>>3951783
my pleasure

>>3950060
I feel like you could be pretty good in the future but I get the feeling you draw the same animu head over and over and always draw eyes that are on seperate continents. I think you need to imagine 3d forms better or something.

>>3951791
absolutely based

>>3950977
Unless the idea is to make the drawing look like an anime frame.

>>3951791
10/10
OP for next bred pls

Can someone give me some crit? About anything is fine but I'm looking for help on the Iliac crest/waist area, I can't seem to fully grasp how they work, is the torso too long perhaps? And also how do pointed heels work?

>>3951852
I'm no expert, had a quick go. The armpit/shoulder stood out to me the most

Does anyone know where this is from/who the artist is?

>>3951911
>worlds smallest png

>>3951914
yeah had to get it from a ck2 mod portrait...

>>3951278
Blog?

>>3951911
Easy search. Google image search helped. Took me like 4 minutes not bad, i guess it you had to look a tiny bit deeper for this
https://www.artstation.com/kangdh1202

'tis a wip

>>3952046
Arms are a bit long

lines

>>3952048
u were right ty

>>3948645
>"Yeah, I eat ass"

>>3951905
Oh wow thanks anon, appreciate that

>>3948645
this is so fucking hot.

Feels like I've hit a wall recently, just trying to get through it

>>3950879
>>3952460
anon please post blog plsss

How's this looking?

>>3952460
love that genderbend K

>>3950176
first off please resize your pics to less than 1500 pixels (or 1000 if you can)
the large issue I see right now is your eye placement and skull shape. Someone probably already recommended loomis to you and I trust that you are continuing your studies. To add to your grind, try tracing (see/google the shrimp method to get full instructions) and then after you traced, try replicating your trace using construction etc.

your chuuni drawings are sort of cringe right now (not the worst I've seen but still) but you can do it. I believe in every /ic/rab in this site, even if you don't make money you can all still be better than the average faggot who on reddit normie who has never heard of hampton.

>>3947811
draw him selling his body to older, fat men
haha just asking for a friend haha

>>3952773
Looking good except for the nose.

Hey guys, Could I have some critique?

>>3952917
Arms small head big.

>>3953005
thdark yo?

>>3950977
Yeah, I knew that but I wanted to have some "anime frame authenticity." now I realize that it's stupid. I fixed the lips.
>>3952780
Thanks for the feedback. I made the eyes a little lower and adjusted some minor details. No one has told me to do loomis, and I wont. I am realizing now that certain parts of the head are larger than others, so i will be aware in the future. Ik it's cringe but we were all cringe at one point, right?

>>3953280
holy shit i'm retarded, fixed even further

>>3953280
>>3953283
>No one has told me to do loomis
Okay, here’s someone officially telling you to do Loomis, because you need it.

Are there any good guides to learn hot to paint tits and tummy like the pic related?

ᕙ( ・ ◡ ・ )ᕗ

been trying to figure out this ass, i don't have a ref for this particular angle so i'm just guessing

>>3953394
Don't forget to add cast shadows for those things dangling below the boobs!

>>3953301
Air brush and lasso tool

>>3951279
think of the jaw as not one curve but two lines one that goes down to form the structure of the jaw and then one that follows that definiton. try drawing a circle and practicing it , it's kinda hard to describe but if u want a defined jaw it can't be one curvy line but one defined line that curves off of it. hope this redline can help you.

>>3953394
Getting better with the faces.

>>3953469
At least learn how to draw before you start critiquing others

>>3953469
you're a poopy head
>>3953394
hi Kyle <3

>>3953495
Just trying to help
>>3953493
this isn't representative of my drawing skill, buddy

>>3953498
no the guy in the picture looks like avgn. its a quote.

>>3946184
wtf

>>3953498
Nah, I’m pretty sure that’s representative of your skill level. Feel free to prove me wrong.

>>3953532

>>3953394
move the head back slightly. right now it makes her look like shes's slouching

>>3953394
give me your blog nig

>>3953546
oh no

>>3953546
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U1UtRnGn5hc&app=desktop

>>3951302
do you know where i can find an mp4 or something of Mastering Light and Form? can't find it in any of the links in the artbook/video thread and the course isn't even available to be bought on the guy's website since it says it's being revamped for 2019

>>3953495
blog?

>>3953593
juste_VU

>>3953546
well at least you posted...
anon, i don't think you should give redline advice

>>3953584
cgpersia

>>3953614
thank you, i found it! didn't know about this site

>>3952965
Alright, I'll work on that

>>3953618
no prob, it's our little secret bud ;)))

Very cute stuff, l like your lines

>>3953635
Sorry, was talking about >>3953628

>>3953628
Very cute nice job
>>3953394 those are pretty big freckles I would downsize it a bit but nice drawing btw
Here's a study I did

>>3952853
This any better?

>>3953049
also daij

>>3951459
Actually in this case it is ambiguous whether "Alternative Art/Stylization General" means "Alternative Art General and Stylization General" or "Alternative Art General and Alternative Stylization General"

>>3947424
>>3947438
Your construction is all wrong, especially the nose.
Try and figure out what the stylization is representing.

>>3953628
Really liked your work, tried to emulate it a bit

c

>>3953551
Kairunoburogu@twitter

>>3953832

Drew fat batman
>>3953806
Looks like a bit of Sycra mixed with bekkaliyev, I dig it.

>>3953832
just give up man

>>3953832
>>3952575
>>3950060
What's the point of posting these? You're obviously not interested in improving since all you keep doing is drawing the same, shitty anime face over and over. It's not like these are interesting or technically proficient to look at, either, so we as viewers aren't gaining anything from it.

>>3953832
just draw the head at a different angle or something.
You keep drawing the same thing over and over again

>>3950060
>>3952575
>>3953832
You see, this is what happens when you do nothing but copy anime without understanding the underlying processes of drawing it form imagination as its intention due to the deviation from life in a manner of a style.

You become a one trick pony only capable of regurgitating the same 3/4 view bust shots with slightly different smiles and become completely dependent on references - ergo Irya otherwise known as the Cyka "tribute" offering plagiarizer. Stop copying anime.

>>3953832
lumis heads wasnt meme, learn base build and fter it build ur own

>>3954496

>>3954496
this

>>3954496
Nobody wants to have to be creative and think of their own l00mi5

>>3954498
that is really cute wow

>>3954498
looks like generic ugly anime desu

>>3952235
finished

>>3946184
whoa

>>3954541
Pretty cool. The armor design makes me think of Magical Starsign in some intangible way.

>>3954389
who the hell is irya? You're speaking some russian codes here anon.

>>3954567
Don't worry about it, nobody worth mentioning anyway.

>>3954378
he got better though..

>>3954587
No he is not. Hes been drawing this shit for 2+ years.

>>3954587
fixed

why the hell ya'll gotta be uploading these big ass >3MB images?

>>3954588
I'm not defending him or anything, but if you can't see any kind of improvement among the faces then you must be blind, beg tier, or a salty crab. If you don't like his shit then just ignore it wtf. Nobody cares.

>>3954541
Good job, strong design

>>3954594
Not him, but sugarcoating and defending your little buttbuddy here is not helping. Drawing the same exact thing over the span of years is not something to be proud of. As a matter of fact some of us don't even come to these threads but we still happen to see his works when he posts on the front page and we immediately recognize him not because of the individual workflow or preferred subject matters like Rinfag but because he's been literally drawing the same exact face for years now.

>>3954590
For instance, take a look at this piece he has yet to learn the proportions of a face regardless of style; unless he purposely wanted to invoke a fetal alcohol syndrome the eyes are much too far apart an no it's not cute either.

>>3954541
pretty nice anon, give me blog

All i had time for today grunting emoji

>>3953546
Youre gunna make it anon

>>3954660
do you have a fetish for small hands?

>>3954587
>20161126_134904.jpg
protip: if you're going to samefag, change your typing style, and the filename

this is my first post here, what you guys think of this? im learning so i don't really have a style but i liked how it turned out

>>3950192
wow we follow eachother on twitter. funny to see you here :3

>>3953628
inspirational

>>3953832
over 5 years and you are still doing the same pose and making the same mistakes


never be like this retard and learn your fucking FUNDIES

>>3954835
He is the poster child of /ic/

>>3954843
but he is a dentist anon he got no time for loomis and studied and the most prestigious school

>>3954852
It's you faggots who are to blame, not him. You enabled and coddled him by replying "Cute!" and then defended him whenever someone gave a critique. By playing buttgrab relentlessly you've essentially managed to sheltered him in a hugbox environment within /ic/ of all places.

>>3954860
fuck youuuu! if you ever say something that isn't praising you are a fucking crab period, we never should discourage begs even if they are bad, fuck loomis! every work is CUTE, NICE AND A GOOD ATTEMPT


FUCKING CRAB!

>>3953546

>>3948645
I finished it!

>>3955103
Now draw her taking the knot please

>>3955103
i liked the almost nervous expression she had in the original sketch, feels like that was lost in translation

>>3955103
Is there a lewder version

>>3955148
>>3955111
yes, shes still drawing another piece as well.

This rough brush is a fucking godsend. It's helped me loosen up and not worry about minor mistakes in my line work.

>>3955162
How'd u know

>>3955148
There is the big dog dick version

low effort pillow shading

>>3955164
blog?

>>3955492

>>3955494

>>3955483
twitter.com/no123450n

on to a more simple design

>>3954558
I didn't know that game, very cool designs
>>3954595
>>3954635
ty anons, https://yaow12.tumblr.com/

>>3952460
This is fucking great, I wish I could draw fun stuff like these, I have spend so much time grinding anatomy and figure that I start to feel like my creativity left my body.

>>3954835
>>3954843
>>3954852
>>3954860
>>3954870
Hi saltmaster. Just cause u suck at drawing doesn't mean you have to put down others.

>>3955492
>>3955494
>>3955498
is that you gerph?

>>3954800
groovy

>>3955164
What brush? enlighten me

>>3955959
Here's what I have in Sai.

>>3952460
Nice tourguide and rocket grunts

>>3955651
I'll take that as a compliment I guess but that is kind of an issue I'm having. What do you do if the way you like drawing ends up mirroring another persons style? I've been told my style resembles Gerphs and o_8s skullgirl stuff. And I do want to try some comics with the same style. I guess my question is, do I force myself to change as to not invite comparison, or in the worst case "copycat" claims? I really enjoy drawing this way, and although I've got a ways to go I dont want to put the effort in if I'm just going to be "that guy who draws like gerph". Is this even a problem in the first place?

>>3956267

>>3956269

mdr

>>3956274
have my babies

rate

>>3956269
Are you taking pictures of your computer screen?

Not going to waste any more time on this but gonna share anyway

>>3956408
do you have more cute lewd drawings and if so blog

>>3956226
Color her overall and give me your blog

>>3956226
>>3956490
It's not really active cause I haven't been doing as much nsfw, pixiv.net/member.php?id=16041920

Didn't color the overalls but here's another.

>>3956670
Nice

she was a bit hard to make cute

>>3956389
Sorry. Yeah these are from a while back and where I am I dont have access to the original files. Not the best quality.

>>3956433
i had a smut tumblr but then they banned smut.
my sfw stuff is mymoonjelli on insta and twitter. i need to make a nsfw twitter or something

>>3954800
nose and mouth are well done