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Why would anyone call this improvement?

>> No.3916845

Soulless - Soulles - Soulle - Soul from left to right tbqh

>> No.3916846

>>3916840
gmi

>> No.3916850

>>3916846
sadly

>> No.3917051
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>loses that really subtle striping on the vest
>loses the cape
>literally becomes a blue schoolgirl with a knife, then just a blue schoolgirl
>all motion is lost in favor of cheap, unnatural poses

>/ic/ unironically likes this
fuck this board

>> No.3917075

>>3916840
They're all terrible.

>> No.3917080

>>3916845
Retard you mean right to left

>> No.3917124

>>3916840
I think I like the second one from the left the best.

>> No.3917133

>>3916840
which direction are we goin here?

>> No.3917164

>>3916840
pyw

>> No.3917208

>>3916840
Speaking generally rather than specifically about this image, the final product isn't always a reflection of improvement in drawing skills or growth as an artist. This might seem counter-intuitive, but we as viewers are not privy to how these drawings were made. We don't know how much tracing/copying/referencing was used, how much of the design is original, how quickly and efficiently each drawing was made, and whether the artist can draw more flexibly (i.e. draw the subject from many different angled and lighting conditions). Most importantly, we don't know how well these works represent the artist's personality. A good example of this is Picasso. His earlier studies might seem more polished, but it's his latter output that is remembered.

Many beginning artists just starting to learn technical drawing often give up too soon because they think their art look worse. They never get over this hump, and their growth sputters to a halt.

>> No.3917212

>>3917051
Who the fuck said we do dumbass?

>> No.3917447

>>3917212
>>3916845
>>3916846
read nigga read

>> No.3917477

The artist has obviously improved, they're just making poor style choices. Notice how they learn to use perspective, start to shade things (thus are learning about light). They even start to draw hands.

Reverse image search didn't show a source, but I wouldn't be surprised if this were a random teenager's art. Shame on you for making fun of them. You should use that energy to challenge yourself as this artist has done for themself.

>> No.3917512

>>3916840
long answer yeah
short answer ye

just a couple of tweaks and she could be a discount gashi45

>> No.3917515

>>3916840
>hate thread
Who cares loser? Why would you stop scrolling. Save it, post it here and talk about it? Face it. You are a LOSER.

>> No.3917518

>>3917447
not being able to interpret sarcasm is a sign of autism anon

>> No.3918157

I'd say they all look good desu except for the very right one. The color scheme and the fucked up posing on the last literally hurts my eyes

>> No.3918231

>>3917477
One step forward and two steps back isn't "improvement" asshole

>> No.3918258

Faggot OP

>> No.3918595

>>3918231
How is it two steps back? Because you don't like the style?

>> No.3918620

>>3917515
Not OP but why does it feel like you're either the artist, a white knight, or a tumblrite?

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>>3918595
>because I don't like the style
Did you even listen to anything this board says? You really sound more like a white knight than anyone who knows what he's doing here.

>> No.3918875
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It's honestly better when you don't have to see those saturated ass colors.

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>>3918875
>>3918876
I experimented with the colors to see if they were significantly more "appealing" as the colors were barely desaturated (around 70% of their original saturation)

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>>3918883

>> No.3918888

>>3918884
quads and she gets the dick

>> No.3918977

>>3918888
lol
nice

>> No.3918979

>>3918620
Because of an overwhelming urge to use the argumentum ad iram fallacy.

>> No.3918983

it's fucking chibishit ofcourse the proportions are going to suck you mongrels

and you didnt fix shit by desaturating or saturating the pictures, you absolute NGMI beg.

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>>3916840

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>>3918888
WHAT THE FUCKKKK

>> No.3919821

>>3916840
It is improvement if it's right to left.
Regression if it's left to right.

>> No.3920192

>>3919821
is it one which wonder i gee
gee i wonder which one it is

>> No.3920196

>>3918888
well, you going to deliver or wait on somebody to do it for you?

>> No.3920487

>>3920196
i didn't think there was anyone who actually wanted it drawn, i just wanted a get and i got it

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>>3918884
>>3918888

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>>3918884
>>3918888
>>3920928
Shit, I accidentally shaded in that ear.

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>>3918884
>>3918888
>>3920928
>>3920930
And I forgot the tail, to boot.
This is what happens when I have too little sleep and too much caffeine.

>> No.3921241

if i saw the first one getting fucked while scrolling through twitter id give it an aye little favorite if i say so myself

>> No.3921518

>>3921241
this will be my next project for tonight
stay tuned!

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>>3921518
>>3921241
This is a nice excuse to draw porn.

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>>3918888

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>>3918888

>> No.3922416

>>3922412
hearty kek