/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3915355
sure

>>3915355
>>3915358
>>3915366
Where's the construction?

>>3915368
>using spiderman to loomispill kids
based

>>3915378
2D anime faces don't really need construction since it's purely 2D design.
Bodies and backgrounds need it tho.

>>3915378
wtf wheres the construction bros...

>>3915355
Why is Lum so fucking hard to draw?

>>3915378
in your head :^)

>>3915355

og waifu best waifu

>>3915378
These aren't meant as actual tutorials, these are "how to draw kirby" tier tutorials for normies so they can reproduce a drawing.

>>3915355
>starting with the bangs
wha...?

>>3915379
indeed. spiderman and batman are the single good superheroes

how can i improve?

>>3916093
All American comic superheroes are terrible.

>>3915358
What absolute fiend starts a drawing with the eyes?

I tried

>>3916127
thats like saying all d/ic/ks are /beg/s. you might be 99% right, but it doesnt make me wrong

>>3916136
I said ALL of them were bad including Spiderman and batman, not a single exception, if I was "99% right" I would be wrong.

>>3916127
Compared to what? Manga? Bud, I hate to tell you this but weeb trash is still trash

>>3916139
exactly, thats what I was saying. you are wrong, I am right

>>3916140
You know what's funny. Weebs will say they love Goku and hate Superman, despite DBZ Goku being a complete Superman rip-off

>>3916146
>the most basic fantasy of each young boy, to be strong
>the second character build around that trait to get famous its a rip off of the first

>>3916156
Im talking about
1.being an Alien race
2.being sent off by parents while planet is being destroyed
3.parents are against a tyrant
4.Other survivors come to contact him

Pre-DBZ Goku was supposed to be Son Wukong, a mythological earthling, and the space shenanigans were added at Z when Toriyama ripped off Superman

>>3916163
>being an Alien race
thats all fluff you use to justifie your premise. the idea of aliens was popular last century, so it was easier for authors to use that excuse for the mc's power and have it understood by a wide population, hence the fame

everything else just fit into place after you set the premise
>being sent off by parents while planet is being destroyed
Being an orphan in strange lands means it needed a reason for that, destruction of natal lands was the easy answer
>parents are against a tyrant
every story with fights need a villain, how many young protagonist in the 20 century where out to revenge their father/ mother/ parents? I bet you 90% of stories with orphan mc and villains will have them being opposition of the parents. see harry potter for a famous example, its not alien, but its orphan, its a story with fights, hence main villain killed mc's parents. story 101
>Other survivors come to contact him
when theres an alien, theres more. most stories if run long enough will present more aliens later on, see aliens or predators. first movie had one, sequels had more

they are not called cliches without reason

>>3916171
I would agree if he was an alien from beginning, but Goku was retconned into one in DBZ.
>so it was easier for authors to use that excuse for the mc's power and have it understood by a wide population
Except even earthlings can use chi, so there wasn't any reason to make Goku an alien, when Karin, ChiaoTzu and Oolog exist

>>3916175
when was him retconned? he had a tail from the very beginning and came in a small pod. also everybody had chi but no human could transform afaIr. also nobody was as strong as him at the same age with no training

>>3915358
I don't have a tablet but i tried

>>3916178
>he has a tail
Yeah, because he is Son Wukong, duh
>came in a small pod
Where is that addressed in the Dragon Ball manga?

>>3916178
Toriyama himself said Goku wasnt supposed to be an alien and was retconned. The story was supposed to be based on the Journey to the West
https://www.kanzenshuu.com/intended-end/dragonballs/

>>3915358
This smug bitch is so bappable from the first step onwards

pot the cat

>>3915378
Learn to draw without it

>>3916134
C U T E

>>3915366
I did it!

>>3915355

>>3916089

>>3916125
Do abstract stuff

>>3915378
>the construction workers have been laid off and are living in your head, rent-free

>>3915355
>every step is a completely different drawing
nice

>>3916134
Looks better than the original

>>3917367
?

>>3915355
More 80's tutorials?

>>3915378
ngmi

>>3916604
Is that genderbent Samurai Jack?

>>3917963
man, sonic is fucking weird looking

>>3916134
your handwriting sucks

>>3918346
it just works

>>3918365
Well duh, I don't know how to write japanese

>>3917561
?!?!

IT LOOKS. BETTER. THAN WHAT THE FUCKING TUTORIAL SHOWS. YOU FUCKING MONGREL.

>>3916146
Not a fan of DBZ either but the difference here is that there are manga other than DBZ and they don't shove Goku down your throat every fucking minute. At this point the West won't even try making something that isn't a fucking 80 year old property of dumb strongmen in red underpants.

>>3915355
>redrawing the whole thing for every panel
Man the past was wild.
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>>3916545
perfection.

>>3917963
a fact they forgot to mention is how one of the pupils will always "hang" from the eyelid, so in a 3/4th view the one farther away from the camera will be making contact with the brow, there is not a single sonic render of the games that doesnt follow this rule, making them "float" just makes him uncanny like in the movie

EXCUSE ME, COULD YOU SHOW ME A TUTORIAL ON HOW TO DRAW SHIBUYA RIN???

>wanna post Blacksad tutorial webm
>"file exceeds 3MB size"
fuck

>>3920622
post it on Catbox.moe and share it

what the fuck heck guys I've been reading book after book about anatomy for artists and these fuckers are just drawing it without giving a fuck.

>>3920622
>Can't into ffmpeg
Shit anon. Do this >>3921275