/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Reposting in new thread

Could anyone spare me a critique or even a red line? Putting characters in environments (and drawing environments in general) is absolutely my weakest point. I want to get the perspective and everything else as best as I can before moving on.

Here's a link to the psd if it's easier: https://www.mediafire.com/file/yv7uov4cyaiveg9/help.psd/file

>>3900092

>>3900115
This is very helpful, thank you!

rate please

>>3900143
a 1 through 10 scoring system doesn't go low enough to accurately grade this abomination.

How I improved thanks to 4chan's harsh words, thank you, anons

>>3900149
Ok out of 100 then?

>>3900149

Whats wrong?

>>3900152
Also I'm sorry when I didn't listen to everyone who told me the first one was shit

Different styles

>>3900246
>>3900247
The ref used

>>3900247
>>3900248
symbol drawing/10

>>3900247
I really like this.

>>3900246
How cute !

>>3900115
Is that where the horizon is? I thought it is little higher

finished this one
thanks for nice comments last thread frends

>>3900338
no youre right that perspective grid is way the fuck off

>>3900402
it's a floor grid

>>3900409
I mean, another way to look at is is this. I couldn't tell what was going in in the BG the first time.

i made maid seiber in draw pile :)

>>3900400
Hentai

>>3900152
Neat. With rendering on the hair you can now get Patteon bucks / Kofi donations by drawing the topical anime girl of the month.

hate when i notice flaws only after im completely done... no reason to fix it now, i dont really care about the drawing enough anymore :(

>>3900247
Garbage

>>3900400
nice i like it

>>3900152
Hey! You did a good job. I'm glad I was able to help you. c:

>>3900247
Where's the dick

How do I make it look finished?

>>3900533
Clean up your sketch/line art layer

>>3900558
Looks like fucking, angry-spider-Shinji Ikari having a heart attack,

>>3900566
Lol, metal

>>3900338
Composition looks better with a lower horizon though

>>3900558
Neato

Trying to fill in colors has so far been a complete failure

Tried drawing a witch OC.

Thoughts on what I should work on improving first?

>>3900558
Looks a little bit like a mix between Katsuhiro Otomo's and Junji Ito's styles. I like it.

>>3900683
That's a huge compliment, thanks dude

>>3900173
Love this and your work from the last thread. Very evocative stuff.

>>3900475
I wish I knew how to ink like this.

>>3900460
Can I take that as a compliment ? If so, thank you
>>3900506
Thank you anon !

>>3900647
neat stuff

>>3900740
I mean... have you tried to ?

>>3900894
I have no idea how they manage to make it look this good so I can't really say I have

>>3900450
me on the right

>>3900910
>>3900475

I don't know how to explain it, whenever I finish lineart, I will start drawing a lot of lines and "dark places" to fill up my drawing until it will looks good enough. I wish I could explain it better, but it's just random drawing.

Trying to get into fantasy art. He's a wight

>>3900630
Her shoulders are squashed and the right arm is really awkward. i dont think someone could hold their arm at angle. The problem with her shoulders also effects her breasts by squishing the right one too far forward.
Also, dont do side mouths

>>3901136
And a goblin.

Now that I'm done I realize it looks like he's about to drop the coin in the drink instead of steal the coin from someone who has the drink. Oh well.

>>3901136
>>3901209
>Soft brushes

>>3900092

>>3901207
pretty on point with the anatomy critic, I didn't realize how weird the arm angle was until I tried the pose out too or how it was influencing the shoulder and right breast. I guess I need to continue building my visual library or use ref to cross check my pose (I'll probably do the former more than the later).

Also, I like side mouth but I get your point. Imma still do it sometimes but I'll try to save it for cellshaded things.

Thanks!!

>>3901297
Point taken, looking back at them they're a bit loosey goosey.

>>3901136
I thought this guy was cool so I added a little bit

>>3901368
Damn, that looks badass! Thanks anon

Rate this please

>>3900173
Blog?

>>3901433
0.5 out of 10. Keep studying anatomy anon.

>>3901446

Whats wrong with it? Tell me pls

i suck dick at gesture
>>3900624
i noticed this after it was too late

>>3901453
not him, but.. kinda everything in general. anatomy, proportions, style, pose. its normal for a beginner, so dont worry, youre not some exception. just keep grinding fundies and youll get there

>>3901455
all seems like good form/perspective to me except the arms. they seem a little flat

>>3901455
really great forms

>>3901459
HOT

>>3901435
i have an insta
@kennykomics

Critique please?

>>3901455
Where do you post nowadays?

So, im drawing a fan art of Jade from MK11
a nude better said, i used a reference but the thing is i wanted to know if the anatomy is ok or should i fix it?

I may have gone to far in a few places

1. Don't have my own style
2. Still can't get past sketches

>>3901433
Excellent sense of form. Huge improvement. 7/10

>>3901768
your sketching style reminds of me fdseason or simon, i like it

>>3900152
How do you go about shading like that?
Every time I finish up some linework I have no idea where to start. By the time I'm finished it just comes out looking like someone poured gradients over it instead of looking properly rendered.

>>3900910
Just draw normal clean lines, then go over the top. Once you get in the rhythm it just starts falling into place. It all looks great because you're looking at it as a whole. Just pay attention to depth and where things overlap, start with that, and then you'll naturally just work subtle shading and stuff in there too.

Rate pls
I do traditional media, but beginning to practice with digital

>>3901553
Is this digital? Good use of colors for tones and gradients, but head and arms/hands look a bit disproportionate.

I am back with more pages. The chapter is almost done soon, and once it is, I want to go on a month long hiatus to beef up my fundamentals.

>>3901986
This one didn't turn out as I had hoped.

>>3901988

>>3901990
And if you're interest is piqued, here's the rest! Just passed 70 pages.

https://tapas.io/series/The-Concord-Initiative

>>3900533
Paint the lines

>>3901783
Ok ok I think I’ll be able to help you, most of the time I just improvise but I’ll try to describe my process. So, most people, when painting lay down all of the colours, start painting the overall piece, then go closer into detail right ? For some reason, that never worked for me. instead, I just go into detail right away, starting with the face- because I work right away in detail, after I’m done with one aspect of the drawing, I have a set standard for how I want everything else to look like so that it all fits together. I work normally from face-body skin-clothes-accessories-hair. When I start with the face, that’s when I decide what the light source will be and how it adds to the overall atmosphere. If I’ve finished the shading on the face and the detail is there but I’m mostly unhappy with the colours, I’ll use the airbrush to add touches of colour like pink, blue, purple, maybe yellow. The lighting on the skin then decides how the environment is affecting the clothes, even if the clothes are a completely different colour, I’ll still try to use the airbrush to add touches of the ambience colours that I added to the face- so that the clothes and the skin look like they’re part of the same environment. The hair is really reflective, so I mostly use the same process. This is probably really ineffective for other artists, but it seems to work for me :’)

>>3901992
sweet anon, I was wondering if you were still around. Looking back line art has become much cleaner and your shading is a lot more confident.

My biggest complain with your style is that you use too much gray. I recommend that you try setting the blending option to 'color burn' for the shading layer and play around with the opacity, I think you will see a difference specially with colored characters like frosty. I'll try editing one of your pages when I'm home to show you what I mean!

>>3902343
That would be incredibly helpful!

>>3901497
>>3901499
Thanks.

I think you're right about the arms. Oh well

>>3901563
I post on my twitter and this thread

Working on the hair

>>3902518
diff anon what is your twitter?

>>3902625
@fuuka2rin

>>3901768
Seconding other anon. Looks like a nice start. I have the same problem but my sketches don't even look that good

>>3901553
Very unpleasant to look at, although it seems almost good.
The rough brush texture, especially used on skin (which is usally shown as smooth) and with no texture context (for example rough textured brush background) could be a major issue. Proportions as well.
Kerp pushing though anon you're close.

>>3902650
Love how this is coming along anon, only weak part is the bottom left girl's sitting pose, she looks unbalanced. I would suggest making rough edits to her spinal curve like a mannequin until somwthing looks solid (either hunched over or arched in a more obvious and balanced way, or leaaning against the sphere with her body)

>>3902518
you're one of my favorite artists on /ic/

>>3900400
Don't lewd, pls.

Did I miss new thread? Where is everyone?

>>3901741
Do you have the image of the purple girl by itself?

>>3903704
Her right arm is still really long, anon...

>>3903704
she has the lower body of a middle-aged man

>>3903879
Size of pelvis seems alright. I think anime warped your perception of how big the average womans pelvis is in relation to her rib cage. The just need to have the same width at minimum.

>>3903896
It's not that her pelvis is too small, it's just that the overall silhouette of the figure indicates a slightly overweight male build with boobs on top. I speculate that the artist probably referenced a male photograph.
Also, this IS an anime drawing, so I don't know what your remark about anime proportions is about.

Rate my Billy Rider of Black

Critique and comments, please!

>>3904034
I guess your skill at shading would be useful if your lineart wasn't so awful. Go buy a sketchbook and a good pen or pencil.

low-effort wip-posting

>>3894607
big tablet crutch
>>3895710
b-s-c-b.tumblr.com

Anons are out of ideas

>>3904160
Meant to reply to >>3903675

>>3902656
I bet she bites her tongue a lot.
looks like good succ

>>3901045
>>3901785

Alright, imma try to do that. Thanks anons!

>>3900092
>>3901305
Trees don’t grow in bushes ( think circle of mulch)

>>3904253
Cute concept, I like it

>>3900975
>1
hooolyy fuck this is goood

>>3900450
me at the bottom

>>3904098
glad you finally made an tumblr

sticker concept wip

>>3901455
>that cringey kana
wtf lol

>>3900475
hey do u have like an insta or a blog?

>>3900247
his back!

>>3904553
>>3900475

Yeaa, I have:
https://www.instagram.com/stellar.ny/
https://stellare.newgrounds.com/

F

>>3903169
Noice

>>3902518

>>3904945
Lewd

>>3904034
Lol ic see what you’re doing anon. Tricky tricky

>>3902518
>I post on my twitter
Link/Name?

>>3904995
>>3902629

>>3904998
Thanks!

>>3904618

Thanks man, ill follow u there.

>>3904985
Arigato gozaimasu

where's everyone?

>>3905223
Just drawing

>>3905223
Busy playing Skyrim

>>3905242
>>3905259
Both look unique. Post blog.

>>3902518
i love you

>>3905259
same boring shit

Where the hell is the artbooks thread you guys?

Where the hell is the Vent thread you guys?

>upload image to pixiv
>only 20 likes after a day
>draw a penis on her face and reload
>600 likes in 10 hours
okay.

>>3905356
sauce for laugh

>>3905223
i'm actually trying to get good so i can dab on /ic/

>>3905187
Cuter if with glasses

>>3900247
hands are just awful, everything else is great

>>3900647
Holy shit that's neat! Do have any social media where you post?

>>3905375
Cassette girl huh? I see you're a man of culture as well

>>3905223

Easter Cunny

doodles

>>3900975
very nice. it has...
SOUL

>>3902518
inspiration right here

made in tegaki
rate

>>3903981
HOLA, JANNU

>>3901792
this is dope

meh

>>3905701
I havent really painted much lately really not feeling it

>>3905402
Glasses are shit

couple of tattoo designs ive done and had applied

>>3905974
this one is based on an existing design found in soviet prisons

>>3906014
Adding ambient occlusion beneath the appropriate areas of her clothes would be really beneficial.

>>3906020
Ahh you’re right, I don’t intend on carrying on working on this at the moment, but I’ll keep that in mind for the future. Thanks

>>3905600
blobby linework but this doesn't take away from the appeal

Can someone please check this perspective figure for me? Does everything look alright? Excuse the mess, I just don't want to start cleaning everything up if the perspective is wrong.

>>3905584
Is that an axolotl boy in the far right? That's super adorable.

>>3906132
hella wonked desu senpai
I can't tell what you're going for, it feels like you're going for an extreme top town perspective, but you've drawn it like its just a generic frontal view., the lower half especially looks like you've tried to do the extreme perspective deal, but the proportions just look normal.

>>3906190
Damn, that sucks. But thanks for telling me. How do you think I'd go about fixing it?

>>3906202
by drawing it in proper perspective?

How do I man the fuck up and stop using a super washed out palate?

>>3906190
You gotta grow some ball and push the perspective into the extreme and toning it down, not the otherway around, try drawing a box in the perspective you desire first

Sorry,
>>3906235
is meant for
>>3906202

>>3906230
Start by using vibrant colours only on objects you want to stand out

>>3906014
Not feeling the veil desu, looks obviously rushed, especially the edges.

>>3905946
I wear glasses and I agree with this statement

>>3905584
I really like that short witch, I want to grab her and just go to sleep without letting go

>>3906297
Yeah, you're right about the veil. Originally that was just the starting point and I was planning on layering on top of it, but as I worked into it, it just kept getting worse.

trying to cram as much practice into each page as i can.

>>3906356

>>3906356
>>3906359
Good on you, these look good

>>3905419
Thanks, I just resurrected my twitter actually
@ohheythatfisher

I did an over-paint of one of my drawings from three years ago

>>3906314
I like your maturity in taking critiques! Don't half ass anything and you'll go very far.

>>3906516
Would lick cunny

>>3906516
Face looks a little flat towards the lower 2/3rds. It lacks a lot of the definition the rest of the body has.
Lips look a little out of perspective as well. Like the lips are turned, but the face is facing the viewer.

Paintover is pretty good though. I wouldn't mind a bit more contrast in the dress like the original had though. Maybe blend in some more darker values on the veil too to make it a bit more translucent as well.

>>3906787
Thank you for taking the time to write this ! For the face, I was kind of trying to do the Kawacy thing where there’s a lot of three dimensionality in the body but the face is mostly anime flat, I guess I didn’t pull that off well. About the lips you’re completely right, I’ll fix them next chance I get.

And for the dress, I really wanted to add little contrast to the dress to make it seem like a glowing pure white, so that it contrasts mostly with the hair and background. However, if I didn’t achieve that well, what do you suggest I do to improve on that ?

>>3906721
I’m blushing :)

Nah but seriously, thank you for your kind words !

is this look outdated?
i will fix few more hours after this upload

What's a good way to improve one's mental visual library? When I want to add detail to an outfit / hair / armor etc I find I don't know where to look. I've been downloading everything I see that I like lately but I never see like I remember to refer back to it when drawing, or I never have quite what I want. Is it just a time and practice thing?

>>3907544
Still would.

>>3900080
I wonder if this style can work for illustrations if I keep pushing it (but not much)

>>3907146
what do you mean outdated?

>>3908203
That's a very cute pup idk, maybe I'm retarded, but his front legs seem too far back.

>>3900080
Couldn't stop doodling this doodle

>>3908215
nah you're right. i forgot that part

ugh

Trying my hand at comics

>>3908228
Looks good. Might need to work on the braid though. Looks a little loose.

>>3908291
>>3908292
The Bait Hooks kind of look like dicks.

Keep up the good work!

>>3908291
Like your stuff dude

>>3908291
hell yea, this some good stuff. Cool to see you dippin into comics now

>>3904625
I see somebody is taking after tksm or however his name is

>>3908293
you style is so appealing to me but i fucking hate when you draw degenerate shit

>>3908512
>wah! Draw what I like!

>>3908512
I’m gonna try to keep this one clean

I have trouble feeling form until I start laying in the values. Is this a normal beginner thing and confident construction with lineart alone comes with experience, or I need to do some special exercises?

My tablet broke so I had to draw this on my phone, this is why the lines are worse than usual. Can I get a critique, please?

>>3908653
I didn't use a reference because I'm dumb

>>3908653
Your knowledge of form is limited to symbols, in order for you to draw convincingly enough from imagination study the basic forms from the figure and learn how to identify each and every bony land mark, where the muscles manifest from and to, where the common tendons are, and basic anatomy. That way you will understand how to simplify and work with basic forms in order to draw from imagination; first and foremost though spend more time doing quick sketches of several figures and start taking in the fluidity and gesture of a figure.

As is the neck is too thick, figure stiff, with no sense of three dimensional forms.

>>3908665
This is fucking amazing :) seeing stuff like this is what keeps me going

>>3908668
Thank you anon for helping me :)

why do i feel like im not gonna make it?

Do you guys have any tips for managing line weight in drawings? I'm not sure if I should use a highly pressure-sensitive pen or not and where to thicken and where not to.

>>3908714
If you're using a ball-point pen or a fine-liner type of pen then switch to a brush pen or a fountain pen. I can personally recommend the Faber Castell Pitt soft brush pens. You can easily get expressive differences in line weight with those.

You usually want to emphasize lines where there is an overlap to get that extra sense of depth, or wherever the figure/object falls away from the light to emphasize the sense of shadow.

>>3908742
I'm drawing digitally, sorry for the confusion. But that advice is helpful. I've also heard conflicting things about whether I should make the lines where objects are pushing together thick or thin to emphasize the smush.

>>3908687
you'll make it if you really want to. don't give yourself ways out, and the longer you say you wont, the sooner you'll believe it.

I haven't posted any mspaint in awhile.
>>3908291
love it

>>3906356
good asses

>>3906155
i like how smooth some parts of this face art. particularly the nose/cheek area

>>3900080
^_^

>>3901553

>>3908785
I BELIEVE, I BELIEVE WHAT THE OLD MAN SAID Though I know that there's no lord above I believe in me, I believe in you and you know I believe in love. I BELIEVE IN TRUTH THOUGH I LIE A LOT I feel the pain from the push and shove No matter what you put me through I'll still believe in love.

>>3908773
The thumbnail made me think it was pixel art. It's cute, but it could really use a repaint. It's a little muddy, especially in the ears. Cute tho!

i've done a lot of mspaint art but i'm not great at making things look interesting/ doing backrounds. any tips/ critiques ?

>>3908653
>tablet broke so I had to draw this on my phone
take the chance to do a bit of traditional practice till it's fixed then, it's never not helpful and definitely better than on a phone
>>3908292
>>3908291
wowee that's great stuff, would love to see more. Reminds me a bit of Ashley Woods

I just finished this thing and I wanted to know if you guys see stuff that looks not great to you (like shading, highligh, the way I drew something, etc, anything) and how I could improve it. I've been staring at it for four hours and can no longer tell.

>>3909055
Need more edge control for shadow and highlight, not a fan of pencil lines.
Shadow need more work

Hey guys, it's been awhile. I've missed you, how you holding up?

I want to draw more of her

>>3909074
I'm sure you can improve your faces kamabro, gambatte

>>3909055
Looks nice. I suggest practicing line weight and draw on a larger canvas

>>3909152
Whats wrong with it? The two I drew before were kinda cringe desu.

>>3900400
amazing!

wip, have been working on this for a while but im gonna go to bed now. looks like im gonna get up at noon again

>>3909262
yo i just saw this in a /tv/ thread

>>3909257
Hey, that looks pretty good, the shading is especially nice. Good Job anon!

>>3909141
The horns look off. I think, judging by the angle of her head, they should be facing a little more towards the viewer. Not directly towards us but just a little more to the right. The viewers right, not the characters right.

I'm /beg/ as fuck tho so take that with a grain of salt. I'm probably wrong.

call the judge and get some fudge

>>3909163
Not him but here's what I think:
A: You must solve her chin in a different way. See red circle: The way the black lines meet like that is no good. Also the way her neck connects to her chin makes her look like she's got a bunch of loose skin there.
B: The shading you use requires you to handle the nose differently. Right now it's like a razor sharp plane closer to the tip. Also note the red circle above: You almost always make the nasal bone extremely big and prominent, and you render it with severe shadows that makes it look like sharp ridges. Imagine if we moved that face into profile view, how would far would her nasal bone project from her face?
C: This area looks weird. Perspective wise, it's like her face wants to escape to the upper right. To try and solve it I tilted her eye a bit (made her eyelash point more toward the horizon) and tilted/moved her hair down to cover that area better. I also moved that eye slightly toward the center of the face and pulled in the place where the zygomatic/frontal bones meet.
D: This area with a bunch of dark value attracts bad attention. To solve it easily, I just blatantly made another big strand of hair and covered it up. Nice
E: Made neck slightly thicker because I think it works better for this type of illustration, and more importantly fixed the values/line in the red circle. You must be more careful with the shading/lines on this part where the jaw goes into the head, or the face will look like a mask.
F: Toned down highlights and moved them to better match where the light seems to be coming from

Also I forgot to mark it but I moved her mouth up a bit.

If you stop falling into A and B your appeal will go up a lot.

>>3908665

>>3909529
too blurry? trying to make it feel fast but idk

>>3909805
Looks great, specially that Zelda and Impa!

Though there's something off about the horse's face

>>3909074
She looks like she's got a mask on, the way her face is shapes. That's not how noses or faces work, it should be more pronounced where the nose ends and the mouth begins, same in the other direction, the nose ridge is non-existent

>>3900152
you didnt really improved, it still sucks, you aspie jean arc girl

>>3909849
Ok mean anon

>>3910155
>>3910158
>>3910160
they're all really great anon
love the girl

>>3909497
Shit, thanks so much anon. I want to make excuses and blame how stressed out I have been lately but you're right I just flat out missed this and fell back into making mistakes that I have made time and time again. I appriciate you taking time out of your day to help me and you have my upmost gratitude. I suspect you are not a native english speaker either, so again thank you for making the effort to help me you have my gratitude.

>>3910155
>>3910158
so expressive man. any tips on how to draw like that?

>>3910289
No prob. No I'm no native but it's no problem. I know how to mask the ESL shit but I've embraced it.

Good luck

>>3910300
Okay I tried what you suggested and I think it looks better.

>>3908907
Fix your hat

>>3900533
>knees together in a full squat
literally anatomically impossible

>>3910346
It does look better. At some point it becomes a matter of taste but I still think that the nasal bone is too strong in your version. It's not like you must to do it the standard way but still, I'd argue that the way you tend to draw noses deviates quite hard from what's considered normal and aesthetic. I know I'm repeating myself a lot but I push this hard because this is probably the main reason why people bully you about the way you draw faces.

If I were you I'd look around at popular anime artists and study their noses extremely hard. Pic related (by ataruman) almost has no nose at all but it's still very nice to look at. Why not do like 10 painting studies (simple ones, 2-3 layers is enough imo) of images like this one? You need to crush your huge nose tendency. Less is more in terms of anime noses, you must realize this or you're fucked in terms of mainstream appeal imho

>>3910396
Yes will do, I was planning on going back to studies for another month or so. Thanks again for the suggestion. I am going to go check out some of these ataruman works.

>>3910408
Do it. I'm sure there are more artists out there, it's just the first one I could think of that does semi rendered anime with small noses. He's got a pixiv

>>3910155
stop smoking!

>>3909074
Fixed that for you because the this guy >>3909497
Doesn't address the core issues greatly

1.Your hair, especially the side are trying to run away from the face
2.Eyes too wide, if you going to draw wide eyes then mod the face to fit it
3.Chin too long because your nose is high but you but your chin too low
4.Eye lid shadow is wrong
5.The Your chin is too square, human face is not like that, the chin must curve up.
And because your hair is too far from the face. It make the whole face look weird.
6. Neck too long

That's pretty much it, just move the whole chin up if you want the girl to look younger.

>>3910434
Your idea of addressing core issues is adding man chin, penis nose and incorrectly placed ears?

>>3910449
If you think i'm wrong then redline it instead of throwing buzzwords like a crab.

>>3910454
I already did in >>3909497. Your version is inferior. Not going to argue though.

>>3910457
>>3910454
You're both completely shit and not at all worthy to redline, in order to address Anon's issue you would have to overhaul the entire figure as it contains fundamental issues regarding the proportions of the torso and an extremely awkward looking gesture. As you draw the figure ask yourself who does this in real life? Take the pose and if you feel stupid doing it would be safe to bet that the entire concept behind the figure is ridiculous.

No amount of turd polishing, eye candy antics and filter abusing gimmicks would correct the underlying fundamental flaws so with that being said a turd is a turd is a turd.

Simply put - it's shit.

>>3910466
Kill yourself. I only gave my opinion regarding the face because that's what >>3909163 was asking about.

>>3910454
>>3910457

I think you guys are both right, you're each arguing for your own sense of style. You both manage to create an appealing alternative. The op image isn't wrong either, it all just comes down to personal sense of what can be considered appealing. I like all three versions. but I think OP is my favorite as I like the more mature look

>>3910466
Wow, a guy that doesn't have much exp under his belt can't draw a fully dynamic figure? Color me fucking surprised.
Turd or not, he asked for crits and we give him so he can selectively take it and improve.
Saying polished turd doesn't help anyone beside inflating one own ego.
I suggest hundred of threads shitting on popular artists over there so you can fuck off.

Porn thread hit the bump limit

>>3910656
And yes I’m aware of how ridiculous the tits look. It’s not my character

>>3910412
>He's got a pixiv
And a twitch two, I see him everyday when I check

>>3910656
what is going on here?

>>3910682
a character with balloon tits jacking off under a table while following instructions on a phone. its from a game

>>3910689
Jenny Wrong Number? Looks like Jenny at least. :^)
I recommend showing the phone from a different angle, like right in front of her. I couldn't tell what she was holding at first.

>>3910694
thats the one. yeah there were a lot of potential positions for the phone i had in mind that were better then i drew a hand i was happy with and got stuck with that. i can probably make it a bit more readable though

>>3902656
cool

>>3910694
>>3910656

>Jenny Wrong Number
Tell me more

>>3910160
>>3910158
>>3910155
You have a Twitter I can follow?

>>3900652
Pretty rough. Tried to retain your image in the edit. You draw very flat. Add dimension. Use coils to build shapes, and make sure they're in perspective. Her clothes are skin tight, yet wrinkled in other spots. She has no hips/crotch. The hands are very small, with no wrists. Go for around the size of the face for hands. With the head, the neck is too long. The neck also goes into the "underside" of the jaw, which goes into the chin (I shaded it.) The way you drew it would make the neck as wide as the head, or a double chin on a skinny character. Also needs more complexity, use references if you need ideas.

You need anatomy practice. I also suggest a thin marker like brush while practicing before going for hard lines which are not forgiving.

>>3910754
@Lambrey3 for nsfw, @ohheythatfisher for sfw. The comic isn’t up yet but I’ll get to that soon

>>3910709
A fun little visual novel through a fake phone interface by doxy

>>3910762
The styles on these two pages seem so different. Followed regardless

>>3910762
So you're one of 'em gays huh?

>>3910762
How'd you end up liking fem boys so much fisher anyway? Nice stuff as always but really?

>>3910954
Self inserts to make up for being fat through my peak twink years

>>3908293
You got a insta senpai?

>>3910762
>A fun little visual novel through a fake phone interface by doxy

Not only do you hit my fetishes on the head but you're also a cool guy. Keep being a cool guy my man.

Never change.
>>3910962
>Self inserts to make up for being fat through my peak twink years
Unless you're worried about this in which case I wholeheartedly urge you to change and know that's it's possible. This is coming from someone that was fat for as long as I can remember and have only just turned it around in my mid 20's. 30kg in 6 months from simple changes to my diet and some basic exercise 30 minutes a day.

>my peak twink years
Also guys out there don't worry too much about this. Not the end of the world. Just look after your body and moisturise, stay out of the sun and find a decent lotion. Look after your skin and someone will look after you.

>>3911149
>Just look after your body and moisturise, stay out of the sun and find a decent lotion. Look after your skin and someone will look after you.
Unironically this. ALWAYS put a sunscreen on and don't forget to moisturize

>>3911511
man this STINKS

>>3911511
Malnourished thanos

>>3911511
There's some potential for cool shit, but it falls apart with the anatomy.

So is there a new thread up?

>>3912128
go go go >>3912190

>>3912074
Elaborate further please