/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Doot

Bump.

here is some grist for your mills.

>>3872651
I want to fertilize the OL.

>>3872651
are you self inserting on your works? are you a lonely fat man irl?

>>3872651
The guy is you, isn't it.

>>3872682
Yes and Yes.
>>3872688
Yup.

>>3872674
you like?

>>3872731
>this is what low maintenance people fantasize about

>>3872731
This ain't cute anymore. Even moeblobfags don't actually imagine themselves in their sad fantasies.

>>3872651
>>3872731
ok stealing this idea

>>3872744
This and that's because they imagine themselves as the moeblob itself

>>3872416
Just rename these generals to Tumblr Thread

>>3872731
hahah, I love this
(if you're actually fat though I seriously recommend losing weight, it can change your -social- life)

Look at some of my sketches.
Also I terrible and lining and coloring things they'll always look bad. Also, would you say they look stupid and slanted? It always looks like that to me when i flip the canvas.

>>3872760
These threads really have been hijacked by Tumblr, when did this happen and how did they do it from right under our noses?

>>3872779
Can you show me tumblr blogs on fat nerds being loved by anime chicks?

>>3872782
rococo guy is the male version of landwhales who are only into hot anime dudes. They're too good for their fellow landwhales.

>>3872651
blog?

>>3872651
its actually interesting way of art

>>3871249

>>3872866
Oh you took the criticism well.
Looks good anon.

>>3872779
But Kanna doesnt have a nose, idiot.

>>3872866
I see that you read that last anon's advice, and it looks better with the DoF, but I think the hand is still to eye catching. I think it's because it stands out so much against her dress.

Not!Yuudachi still cute tho.

>>3873013
Bagbosse? I-is that you?

>>3873022
yes

>>3873030
Glad to see you're still around.

>>3873040
Why do people always post these pages of shitty scribbles in critique threads? How are we supposed to critique this shit?

>>3873050
tell us what we're doing wrong or could do better in the sketches instead of being a whiny baby.

>>3873050
>(4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique.
I don’t think these particular thread is solely for critique if it has this type of rule in the op

>>3873050
Stop being such a bitch.

>>3873050
this isn't /beg/ you fucking retard

>>3873050
These are shill threads where you can post anything alt, dummy.

>>3872866
holy shit someone who applied criticism this turned out well

currently working on this shit

>>3873151
> those proportions
YUCK

>>3873152
i dont see anything out of the ordinary with them

>>3873154
T. Furfag.

>>3873155
dunno what you're talking about, its just regular old fanart. pretty good fanart at that if i may say so

>>3873152
I agree, tits aren’t large enough

>>3873151
>freakass longarm monsterhands

>>3873151
The butt and legs look really nice, but the arm is too thin in comparison to the body

Kinda lost on this, tried to ink it traditionally but a lot of stuff feels waay off.
Her breasts are also pretty unappealing but I have no idea how to fix them from that angle

>>3870700
Still working on this from last thread

>>3872866
I'm glad you took my advice on the skirt, you executed it perfectly! Looks great.

>>3872751
Nice. I am looking forward to seeing what you come up with.

>>3872742
I wasn't sure how to parse that sentence, because I was under the impression that "low maintenance" is a positive quality. Although I am assuming what you meant is "unkempt" rather than "easy going".

>>3872744
I understand distaste. I am worse than moeblobfag, actually I am a haremfag, which is pretty much the worst. I don't think a grown man exposing his weakness like this is ever "cute", but rather pathetic. I have been just in my head for a long time, it tend to warp your perspective a bit.

>>3872777
Hey, I am glad, also I am working on it.

>>3872825
It maybe as you said, but I honestly don't know how I would react to the prospect. I have never been proposition by any woman before.

>>3872850
@ac120rfw

>>3872862
Man, you gotta elaborate a bit on that for me.

I recently went back to fill out an old sketch book, and this is the last drawing I am going to add to it. I have a bad habit buying art supplies and sketch books on a whim. I have been getting back into color pencil and experimented with it quite a bit.

>>3873190
>>3873240
hopefully a bit better, gonna have to make the edges harder there

redraw for a thread.
>>3873547
as long as you're decent looking you can pass for being a creep. at least from experience.

>>3873708
stop wasting time on tweaks and just finish the render so you can move on to something less atrocious

>>3873708
Really cute anon

>>3873520
...yet you didn't take anyone's help into account.

>>3873875
Actually I made a lot of changes based off of suggestions that were accurate. I'm sorry if yours wasn't one of them :^)

is loomis necesary if I don't need realism in my drawings? (manga)

How do 100% japanese artists learn to draw weeb stuff? I'm guessing it's very different from the west.

>>3873906

>>3873461
lots of adjustments
I'll have to get to the hands eventually

>>3873910
I just don't to take the loomis pill and end up drawing stuff that looks like out of the 1950's US magazines.

>>3873915
but the loomis isnt as much as about realism as about the proporties of basic face, once you know that you can do any changes you want and they still will look somehow good

>>3873927
ok, I'll give it a try then.
I feel like learning anatomy would help me a bit.

>>3873915
Study from Hitokaku if you want something more 'manga focused.' Either way the point is to learn to draw from construction rather than it is to learn any one teacher's method. You're going to inevitably deviate away from whatever was taught in the book when you get more comfortable drawing, so this or that teacher matters less and less the more you draw.

>>3873915
Why would you not want to look like Rockwell or Loomis?

>>3873935
Here, OP
>>/ic/thread/S3474215#p3475394

>>3873914
I want to zuri that pubic region

fuck anime

>>3873933
Learning anatomy definitely doesn't hurt and adds more appeal to your art when it looks correct. I don't really study from books but I learn anatomy of subjects as I'm interested in them. Right now I'm obsessed with birds so I've been studying their anatomy more closely through drawings and observing them in life, like how their wings and legs move and how they're similar/disimilar to other creatures. It's definitely not the fastest way to learn, but I find I enjoy and retain the knowledge better when I know I'm learning it for something meaningful and not just learning to know it.

>>3873970
*hentai

>>3873965
>>3873935
Thanks, will do.

>>3873013
holly shit I thought you were dead! Looks awesome

>>3873914

>>3874147

>>3874187

>>3874147
This would look a lot better if his head was a teensy bit smaller.

>>3874147
what is he doing with his hand?

>>3874147
get black to work mr.squidward

>>3874187
kek

Fun with studies

>>3874493
Please don't penis them, you fag.

>>3874646
don't listen to this fag. you should absolutley penis them.

>>3874493

These are great. Did you use a ref?

>>3874187
heh

>>3874646
Based fagposter
>>3874659
Yeah there’s no way I could do rendering like this in my head, my stuff it’s much more formulaic

>>3872416
Her drawing for today. Its part of a 4 pic gag on my twitter but Im posting this one since its the most relevant to the celebration.

I hope to learn a lot about realistic lighting from this, using sort-of loose reference

>>3874796
It improved a lot from when you first posted progress. Maybe do small value studies on the side because you're not free to mess up on a folio piece kind of work like this. I like to take my stacks of gesture/figure drawings from practice and paint over them to work on my lighting and values

>>3874796
are you ever going to draw anything other than placid expressionless girls with bad facial anatomy standing around in front flat perspective

>>3874813
Ohh that’s a very good idea ! Thank you

>>3874821
Hopefully man

>>3874796
she looks autistic. Stupidly long nose that has a tip that bends down like a jew's, crosseyed, duck face underbite, that bad coloring on the chin that an anon from another thread already corrected for you, but now it's back again. Lighting comes from our left side, so why did you shade her hair like that

>>3874845
Done it in pencils, so I could only correct the chin to this extent. Most of the stuff you criticised is a stylistic choice

>>3874848
>muh style

>>3874848
Don't use the style argument, it can only be reasonably applied to those who are able to draw reality on a high level and can exaggerate based on their understanding. You can hardly claim the same as you're still learning your foundations. It's similar to copying manga eye shapes without knowing why they are drawn that way. May get a good result but when someone says it looks off can't claim it was a deliberate choice as you don't understand why yet, you just imitated a guy that did and thought it looked good. You could draw quick thumbnail copies of her and see how she looks if you moved the mouth and nose up w/ different shapes, change the iris positions etc. Really if I were you I'd just finish it up and move on, you did a decent job but don't dwell on one drawing for a month.

I accidentally pressed that retarded april fools like button but my feelings regarding your post are the opposite

>>3874905
Yeah I am actually planning on practicing fundamentals alongside this, unfortunately I can’t rush this or quit it because it’s for my college project. I think my faces look OK as long as they’re not facing directly forward, but anything other than that I need to practice

I'm using Krita, because I'm cheap, and I would like to eventually get to a point where I can sorta replicate the look or feel of pic related.

Any idea of what sort of brushes, or specific brushes, I should look into?

>>3874960
Have you tried playing around with the program and it’s brushes ? Just to see what’s best

>>3874796
your render skills outweigh your anatomy/construction skills. I'd suggest to focus on anatomy, perspective and gesture drawings for the time being.

can anyone tell me if anything here looks off ?

>>3875189
Her left hand looks as if it's floating because her legs are weighted on a plane. Could be easily fixed by tilting the torso done to your left and lowering her left shoulder slightly, obscuring the hand a little behind her feet, or just add an object for her to lean on. Her right palm also looks a little small and the fingers could be drawn tighter. Great job on everything else though, hot hips and legs.

>>3875200
>on a *different plane

>>3875174
You’re completely right, I am practicing anatomy and gesture but had to pause that to finish this for college

>>3874785
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>>3875200
thanks for the tips. Looking closer now I also just realized her hand had only 4 fingers. Ive been staring at this too long..

On a different note, any tips on drawing bodies in scenes/panels?
Figures like this I can fudge but as soon as I try to place characters in a scene everything looks off
>>3874181

i hate foreshortening
I haven't posted on /ic/ in a long time, maybe 3 years now
made me really depressed
hopefully I can find a small community that will actually help me improve some more

>>3875315
i didn't want to like your post wtf, i actually hate niggers like you, can i get back my like?

>>3875319
Cool
but you didn't say anything about the art?

sheep

>>3875315
I really like this man

>>3874796
Don't listen to the mouth breathers on this board- they thing anything that isn't hyper realism isn't art.

You do your anime thing buddy, the armor on her especially looks great

>>3874796
The armor reminds me of victorian paintings

>>3875315
awesome, maybe complete the piece before uploading it.
This sketch is a good base, barring the asymmetrical anatomical proportions

line it, color it, bedaubing badnboom

>>3872677
filename says it all

Fuckin gross

>>3875365
>>3875341
Thank you!

sketch for a freebie

>>3875384
lmao

>>3875384
Blog?<div class="like-perk-cnt">&#x2764;&#xFE0F;</div>

>>3875355
I appreciate that, thank you. I do think that a lot of the criticism has a point though, I’m not gonna take the insults personally, but I will try to improve my fundamentals

>>3875361
I used a 19th century ( I think ?) painting for the reference which is probably the source of the similarity haha. I’m drawing Joan of Arc and didn’t know what kind of armour she’d wear so I trusted the portrayal of an older master :’)

hi

>>3875473
Awh this is absolutely adorable, well done !

>>3875473
CUTE

>>3872416
her drawing for today

>>3875556
>t minus 10 minutes from impact
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>>3875556
How old are you?

>>3875556
why do you wanna have a relationship with your own daughter, weirdo?

>>3874659
heres the ref

>>3875473
>tfw the ugly OCs look 10x better in another artist's style

did I succeed in the "every artist on 4chan" style?

>>3875473
that's really cute, any blog pls?

>>3875715
No, cause while artists in 4chan are usually shit, they're actually very skilled at drawing benises.

>>3875384
Drop your fucking blog!!

>>3875752
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>>3873013
Goodest

>>3873708
tried my best
dont know whats wrong with the face and the hand
i don't know if i want really want to continue doing this sort of lineless stuff, but i learned a lot. i became a lot more confident becuase halfway through i merged everything and started working on one layer until the end (except for some light shit)
maybe i overdid it on the lighting, also not enough dark values in the upper half i think because it doesn't go well with a light background, not enough contrast
don't know which version is better
i am tired

>>3875338
bump

>>3875835
Dude this actually looks really appealing, I prefer the version on the right. I think it’s the sleeve that’s fucking you over right now

>>3875849
Cute

>>3876115
Cute comment

>>3876353
boring

>>3872866
Motherfucker this is nice keep it up.

>>3875717
https://twitter.com/ndrph
https://ndrph.tumblr.com/

Made these yesterday, c&c? What could I improve on?

>>3876372
This one is a WIP of a bigger illustration, the former was just a quick color/lighting blocking study

>>3875816
Do you do comissions? Or art trades? I'm willing to pay a reasonable amount desu since I love your work.

Elves

I did this one from pure imagination without reference. So im pretty proud of it even though looking at it now I can see its pretty fucked.

>>3875835
You need to learn how to really defining edges.

>>3875303
>finish drawing
>zero critique
How come this always happens? Is my stuff just boring?

>>3876447
Its hard to critique a "style". Btw are you using krita? If so, what brush do you use to ink.

>>3872416
Mathilda's drawing for today ~

>>3876496
An animated version because she looks like shes dancing if you flip the canvas really fast.

>>3876353
This looks so good ! Blog ?

Base Colors Delivery

https://twitter.com/MrMcFlintcock/status/1113111652826800130?s=19

at this point im going to move on to something else
some of the brushes i used in this were not at 100% opacity so if i drew outside what i already had on the page it would produce a translucent line, so i had to switch to an opaque brush whenever i wanted to work on the edges, though at points i just blended the edges needlessy and ruined their definition
gonna work with only opaque brushes from now on and try to get better edge control. also had trouble defining masses in the upper half like the head, though the shape is more or less clear i think i couldve used slightly darker colors for the shadows as to make the shapes more prominent
a recurring problem of mine is i use values that are too light, like what should be a midtone area is more of a highlighted zone and what should be a dark area is closer to a midtone
still figuring out how to make appealing faces

>>3876500
Thanks! https://www.instagram.com/saissha/
However I don't post too much

>>3876530
I think this would look a lot nicer if you just cropped it.

How do I draw like that bastard Harada?
He’s clearly a lolicon and his proportions are so weird, but damn if it isn’t appealing

>>3876399
I used a stabilizer to ink this, I thought it really worked out well.

>>3876595
>no bulge
You had one job, Anon.

>>3876595
Go thinner next time

>>3876595
flip canvas

>>3876604
I wanted him to be a bit ambiguous, physically anyway. I felt like a bulge would be too much.

>>3875384

>>3876612
there's nothing ambiguous about it, it looks like a girl.

Brap

what would you do at this point if you wanted a lineless render? in the past i merged the line layer with the colors layer and just blended the lines into the colors inside them, but i could just as well take the right pic, smooth/correct the edges and continue adding values and detail to make the eyes and everything else visible.

>>3873520
Top cute

good night, moon

>>3877118
Impressive line work, would mating press. It's interesting to compare the sketch to the cleaned up lines and see all the corrections

>>3877279
kyle?

Inking on wet paper

>>3877369
fuck shit, 4mb

>>3877369
I really like the texture and movement of the tail. The mouth is oversimplified and doesn't mesh well with the rest. Why on wet paper? I am trying to learn to also ink, how do you create that smooth gradation in line thickness from thick to thin/vice versa?

>>3876456
Manga studio, I'm just using the default "Rough" brush, but some of the lines are from traditional
>Its hard to critique a "style"
What do you mean? That my style is hard to critique?

>>3877522
Not him but I imagine it goes like this: Someone can say ''hey, your snake girl's torso looks like it is missing half her rib cage and internal organs, seriously it is way too thin also those tits look weightless and too wide''. And you can simply reply ''yeah well heh that's just the snaek mango style nothin personnel kid''.

One more thing and consider this a compliment from this anon, your skill looks high enough for you to make less glaring errors that absolutely cannot be explained away

>>3877529
Honestly I'd prefer hearing that then nothing at all

>your snake girl's torso looks like it is missing half her rib cage and internal organs
as in, her waistline is too thin? I tried not to go too narrow since I have a habit of doing that, unless it's still there
>those tits look weightless and too wide
Did I attach them wrong or was the itself chest too wide?

the amount of traction I get for drawing shit like this makes my blood boil but in a good way

His face is absolutely fucked since I drew it with no reference, but I do like the overall drawing

doodle

>>3877736
Love it

>>3872416
Apologies if my attempted resizing isn't good to fit the needed guidelines.
Anyways, I started this sketch last night and so far it's been going pretty well, but I'm still hesitant to go at it with pen and copics. My main issue is the hands and how they look, but I'm unsure of how to fix them. I'd appreciate some pointers for them. Also, if you have any advice for anything else on it, I'd love to know.

>>3877360
Thanks. Yeah, I'm not sure why but I've always found it really difficult to make 'clean' sketches. I've always sketched really quick and messily.

>>3877666
Her midriff is thin and long, compare with second image. Third image is flipped original, look at the tits

>>3872416
her drawing for today. only a quick sketch since im busy with something else.

>>3873151
Looks good ! How do you do that nice "grainy" texture on the piece of fabric ?

>>3876514
Am I seeing things or her right elbow bends the wrong way ?

>>3877835
it's a sai paper texture, don't remember where i found it

another doodle

>>3877717
Then fix it you massive lazy faggot

>>3877834
Any critique of this?

Prep for a painting.

>>3877750
Nice. Blog?

>>3877812
Thanks anon I see what you mean now
I kinda want to draw sexy slender women like Sadamoto and Kajiyama but I guess I'm still figuring it out

mo' doodle

>>3878189
Looks good

supposed to be working on something else but cant think of anything atm, does anything need fixing?
>>3877331
cute!

>>3872416

>>3878103
https://twitter.com/mab_jpg

>>3878809
Oh my god I love this so much, blog ? <3

>>3877736
moar

the heck happened to the nsfw threads?

>>3878947
last one died and no one wanted to remake due to near constant trolling and crabbing in them

>>3873784
Did your character became super deformed in the second draft?

also, you mean decent looking in terms of my art or just my appearance? Because I am utterly lost on the latter, I am a ugly bastard. A girl once told me to keep my glasses on because I look like a serial killer without it, I think that's pretty much the height of creepiness, and I was relatively thin back them.

anyone have a folder of fisher's works?

Critical Response please.

Any good resources on this kind of style? I guess you would call it a western imitation of anime style?

>>3879417

>>3879417

>>3879417
that's gonna be yikes for me dawg

>>3879454
can you please elaborate for me?

Fei yen study

>>3879605
Morris? I-is that you?

>>3879612
>Morris
no - who is Morris?

Is her raised shoulder acceptably wrong, or nightmare fuel?
I know there are other issues too, there always are for me, but I only really realized her shoulder once I finished her so I'm hoping I can just fix that and leave everything else alone

the first one 1980

Hey, guys. Had a wack day today, and tried real hard to sit down and draw but my hand was not doing what I want it to do. So I came up with this garbo. Anyone wanna rip me apart and have some fun?

forever a wip

>>3879818
that's one big arm

>>3879802
Use your own body as an example. How much can you rotate your feet when sitting like that? In order to get your foot in that position, how can you rotate your knee and leg.
Realize human limitations. You should also start constructing figures instead of drawing where you think they'd go.

>>3879664
Shoulder is fine, but the folds of her shirt make it look scary. Find an IRL ref.

>>3879850
Hey, thank you so much for the feedback!
I'll try to pay more mind to how much things can really twist and contort. Can I ask what exactly you mean by constructing figured rather than drawing where I think things would go?

>>3879857
Not that anon but mannequins basically it helps putting things into place first, made better if you got some reference.

>Finish pic related, initially very happy because it's a step up from my more recent lazy stuff
>Post it around, first comment 'I like everything else but what is with that weapon? is it a wand?'
>second comment 'Why does he have a rattle?'
>eventually anyone that sees it just comments about the weapon

God damnit how was I so blind to not realize how fucked that mace was? It's already posted everywhere so I can't go fix it without deleting everything first. Why did I put a screw top on it?
I'm so pissed at myself for this like my mood just swung completely from elated to devastated. Just wanted to vent that, I don't normally mind my mistakes, just fix them for next time and move on, but this one is hitting me hard for some reason.

>>3879882
>A fucking screw

>>3879882
this is really cute anon! you can still post a revision, just be open about why you wanted to change it. the biggest thing that throws it off imo is that handle is so short it & the coloration is such that it ends up looking more like a kendama or a toy

>elated to devastated.
art is a monster like that, it makes you happier than anything but then some little thing happens and it just sucks all the life out of you. if there is any positive to be found it's that this can only happen because you care deeply and want to make really good work which is a desire that will keep making you stronger in the long run. you've already improved a lot from the last time i saw your work.

lady doodle

>>3879882
The weapon handle should be longer, and blunt part should look bigger. If it’s coming towards you, everything should be bigger. However it appears that his weapon is small. Not sure how you’re going to fight like that.

>>3879888

my tablet pen suddenly lost its sensitivity and the secondary click-and-drag/waterdrop tool as well (the long button on the pen)
does this mean it's losing battery? should i replace the pen? i've done it before when my dog chewed up my first one.
my tablet pen hasn't experienced problems like this and i've had it for years so it's quite old

>>3879888
will you update on twitter anymore uk?
miss your posts...

Okay, so I was originally just throwing this away as a scrap but I'd like to make it better. Redrew it trying to fix some of the issues about body positioning. Any feedback is super appreciated!

>>3879818
I enjoy his masculine thiccness

>>3879991
little too high to give in depth instruction but construction
you gotta construct
and also learn more how bodies work, reference till you can do this kind of pose from imagination. i cant tell if your character is on their back or floating in the air or sitting

>>3879968
epic, how did you guess this?
i miss my posts too

>>3880099
What can I say? Im a fan of your works is all.

>>3879888
>>3880099
Blog?

>>3879417
Work on anatomy and proportions.

Time for color I think!

>>3880302
all i have time for right now

>>3880051
Holy shit that looks amazing! Thanks for blowing me out of the ballpark, haha.
Definitely I'm trying too hard to make this out of my imagination when I haven't actually studied how these kinds of erotic poses would look in reality. I'll probably move on from this one then and try out something else based more on references.

>>3880302
Holy broken hips.

>>3880357
redline?

>>3880349
>trying too hard to make this out of my imagination
Don't.
Just don't, use reference if you can, you're still not on the level to be doing that. Also learn how to construct.

>>3880383
Not that anon but use your brain and compare what you drew to this model in basically the same angle, see what's wrong?

>>3879802
Here’s a quicky - look at her right wrist, her forearm just kinda blends into her hand. Try to bend your hand in that position, either into a mirror or a camera, and use what you see to define her wrist better. You can probably find a reference somewhere of a hand in that position too.

>>3880383
Can't touch a pen for the next week or so, but I'll explain what I can. Navel should be on her centerline (trace a line through her giddy gap, you'll see what I mean)
Her hips look as if they're facing the viewer due to how wide they are (instead of following the perspective of the pose which I'm guessing is meant to be 3/4.
There's an overall lack of structure as well, you haven't considered the abdomen as a volume it's all just flat (in the wrong kind of way) face is cute tho.

>>3880302
>>3880347
your forms are flat, and I think the form is thrown off by the skindentations from the clothes, look for ways to emphasize the form and to make it more three-dimensional

>>3880622
>>3880531
Thank you very much, these are very helpful!

>>3879910
thats fucking cool

>>3880349
>I'll probably move on from this one then and try out something else based more on references
Good on you
honestly even doing a poor job trying to copy a reference will build your art muscles a lot more than just going at it freehand.
That mental library is what you're missing, gotta build it up
good luck

>>3876592
To me, it looks like coloring, shading, and shape design. Unfortunately I can’t help you much with the first 2, but when it comes to shapes, he basically simplifies human anatomy in a way that’s pleasing to the eye. Mike Matessi’s Force: Dynamic Life Drawing for Animators has an excellent section on this that I’ve uploaded a page from. Basically, know your anatomy well enough and you should be able to simplify the body into appealing shapes the way Harada can. Try it yourself by tracing that drawing you uploaded, but rather than going line for line, break her body down into simple shapes and see if you notice a pattern. You can also try it on real life figures as well as your own drawings.

>>3880622
>changing the pose

ayyy

second digitalgarbage
what should I change for it to be more appealing? (I'm learning my fundies in the meantime)

took the doodle a bit further

>>3880707
Looks really good anon

>>3880694
Try out different poses that fit the character? Fitting example, Lamb has a pretty nice posterior, try to use it to your advantage.

>>3880803
such fantastic advice, though i need to get out of my comfort zone and draw more intriguing poses

want to know if there's something wrong before i ink her. also fuck hair

>>3880828
Went over with a few suggestions
Her butt looks mashed on the left and the right is kind of squarish. Like you hip bones though
head also feels kind of squashed.
The hair in the reference is pretty weird and open to interpretation so I put down what I personally would do.
Ah, and her right forearm is too long I think

>>3880945
thanks for the help.
what kind of brush are you using?

>>3880986
kyle's animator pencil in photoshop

>>3878836
miruku-p on tumblr, dont post much tho
>>3880196
cute anna !

Tried doing an inky comic style

>>3880991
i tried to create a similar brush in the program i use, and it's seriously great. don't know why but it's a lot less stressful to draw now and it feels good to put down lines. thanks for your help man, this is huge

>>3881065
Hell yeah, its amazing how much just using a different brush can help.
That looks great by the way! love what you did with the braid

Playing around with some brushes myself. I feel like the right one came out a lot better

>>3872651
>>3872731
Genuinely interesting concept.
>>3873013
reminds me of wizards
>>3874493
looks like clay models
>>3877736
3 finger master race
>>3877750
looks clean to me
>>3877717
human bodies with feral animal heads is pretty good. Id say try to make it as accurate as possible.
>>3881040
adorable

hi people, never used this thread before.

>>3881081
The left looks better while the right looks like something in a 90's anime.

>>3881081
dont listen to the fag. The right looks better. The left looks like tumblr roastie bitch.

>>3881290
That's a weird pose, the sword hand is too far to the left and doesn't rest on her shoulder making it look like she about to fall with it
The left hand also doesn't rest on her leg making look like she trying to rest on it but having a cramp-

>>3880707
Position of the right arm sucks it also makes the blade too short and thick. Maybe lay it down on the thigh?

how'd i do

>>3881290
Yikes anon what are you doing with those colors. I wouldn't consider that a decent skin tone for anyone that isn't decomposing, the harsh black lines that you've used to indicate certain muscles doesn't help either. Also her right ankle seems to be a bit broken.

>>3874493
WTF, did you delete your twitter blog!?

>>3881444
yeah...

>>3881444
goddamnit, I should've made a backup of his twitter...
anyone here have one?

>>3881448
and I was about to make a full save of it last night...
fuck me
well hope your doing well thou.

>>3881314
eh, it was supposed to be an action pose, I guess i failed to convey that. It is very heavy on the left side, so yeah, she may look like shes gonna fall. I wanted her to be in a "about to throw machete forward" pose but problems arise.

>>3881432
idk colors, how'd you know? I was having trouble with the skintone. I dont know how to color linework to match with the overall tone. And i probably didnt attach the achillies tendon or something. Visual library blunders.

thanks you guys.

>>3881453
https://mega.nz/#F!TyoyjSgY!757Hva-dhwy91NUxSxoJSg
Heres my fish folder
Was trying to collect more of his older works
If anyone has a save of his twitter that would be nice.

>>3879429
I would call it an eastern imitation of western style, or maybe french? its very ambiguous

>>3881081
Don't listen to those too idiots anon!
>>3881311
>>3881306
Both drawings look great and appeal to different people. Keep up the great work!!

>>3881534
Why'd this dude delete his shit, he's definitely going places.

>>3881550
99% of artists are incredibly insecure faggots
if you delete your shit regularly you're a bitch

>>3879429
Get steve ahn's ebook. Tons of similiar style to your pic related. He's the artist of korra and voltron

>>3881534
thank you for the rare fishes
do you have his process vid of some purple girl/boy holding down their own dick? I wanna watch that again

>>3881617
unfortunately no, i might have some of his other twitter works saved but its just going to take awhile sorting thru my folders.
Hope someone has a full save of his stuff.

>>3879429

Voltron could be anime if it wanted to. It's done on purpose to sacrifice for more fluid animation for western audience. Same with boondocks, same with Avatar/Korra. At this point it's a hybrid of its own.

>>3880991
>>3880945
>>3881065

>kyle's animator pencil in photoshop

Nan that looks nice (the faun too). Any idea how I would go about getting something like that for Krita?

sometimes I feel like my genius would be more appreciated over at the drawthread on the incel board.

>>3881551
This, i just let my twitter die constantly and only update when i feel like it

>>3881783
There's a drawthread on r9k? The /ic/-/r9k/ parallels are getting less funny everyday.

>>3881792
well they are RIGHT next to each other.

>>3881832
>>3881832
>>3881832

>>3881667
i just gave a default brush in sai a paper texture and made it choose direction of the stroke depending on tilt, it's close enough. don't know if krita supports pen tilt

>>3881548
>Criticism is idiotic only listen to good goy posts praising you.
I can understand why you are a disappointment in life.

>>3881667
>>3881919
forgot to say i also gave it a rectangular bristle

I see so many gross NSFW here so here is mine

>>3882475

>>3882475

>>3881448
please message me i just want to know you're okay, i'm really sorry for what i did, please be okay

>>3882605
This is normal for this faggot