/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

First

Gonna follow some advice anons gave in the how to render anime thread

Experimenting

>>3864600
First work of yours without a random penis.

>>3864600
overrated faggot

>>3864600
Looks alright

>>3864615
Just wait

>>3864600
Hands too big

>>3864629
He knows it.

working on my lighting.

>>3864644
The average /ic/ user.

>>3864650
Stop projecting.

nicest thing I drew this week

>>3864644
holly shit nice

>>3864502
Mathilda's drawing for today! I always wanted a merchandise of her so I designed her as a nendoroid.
Id do anything to get one.

>>3864669
what's the deal with this guy?

>>3864679
He's a very passionate fella.

>>3864679
He is baiting hardcore rape porn with his OC.

Been working on this hermit for the towergirls thread but I'm getting kind of bored of it

Been working on this hermit for the towergirls thread but I'm getting kind of bored of it

>>3864696
good work anon

>>3864679
Mentally retarded people exist on internet you know. But it doesnt change a fact how fucking creepy this is.

I must be desensitized because I don't feel anything about his shit. They're just like white noise

>>3864696
>towergirls
Neck yourself lmao, literally a mod protected art begging thread for a /tg/ circle jerk. The people who make / bump those threads dont even DRAW.

>>3864732
ok

>>3864732
he bumps those threads, and I'd venture to guess he draws better than you. fuck off and take your autism with you faggot.

>>3864618
>>3864650
>>3864732
Still pathetic

does this belong here? i usually just. /beg/ tier paint.

>>3864658
I like her outfit design

>>3864615
I'm interested, drop link

can't sleep

reposting from last thread cuz it died when i posted. any suggestions/advice pls? i dont really know where i want to go with my style

>>3864920
this is good. blog?

>>3864920
I like it but it's kinda bland. What style are you going for? Might be better if you put a strong light source or add more contrast? Look into Marco Bucci and Goro Fujita

Does this look good to you? I think it's finished, besides deciding which rotation is the best one. If you have any recommendations on it I'd be happy to read because this was my limit. I used 42 layers and did a grayscale for everything which I then multiplied with a flat layer below it
That's how it's done right?

>>3864989
This angle feels more detailed

>>3864756
After you clown

How am i doing so far ? Anything i can improve on ?

>>3865086
Aww I’ve had a night like this, except it wasn’t handholding fully dressed. Single mattress too

>>3865088
That's exactly the kind of feeling i was aiming for !! Is a commission for a friend, he proposed to her just like that.

I haven't had a idea for weeks now

>>3864502
Her drawing for today.
I love her so much.
Sleep well, my beautiful starchild.
You're the hope of all mankind.

>>3864644
Gamers rise up

>>3864679
knowing that people like him exist keeps me from suiciding. It could be worse... much worse...

>>3865316
this. things don't look so bad now.

Sketch.

I call this ''tfw no armenian warrior gf''

>>3864732
Towergirls is handy if you want to draw something and have limited time and don't want to waste it on thinking of what to draw.

I was fucking around on paint and did this. After a clean up on PS I tried using some limited color palette. What you guys think?I like how experimental it looks but I don't know if it's useful in any way.

>>3865615
Oh yeah, paint version if someone wants a comparison.

>>3864948
thanks, i actually planned on watching bucci soon. i agree that its bland, im still very new to actually coloring things, but as far as i can tell its a pretty good improvement from my old art.
>>3864926
thanks! https://newty113.tumblr.com/ dont expect anything good though - although i feel like ive improved recently so maybe ill post something decent soon.

freak

>>3865792
again with your wor,k alias looks good if u actually use the right size, other wise this looks like shit.

>>3865356
I don't like the way you draw faces

>>3865185
wow lovely

I was doing this for the Towergirls thread but dunno if it's good

>>3865466
Kinda fucked up on the nose, anon

>>3865833
It doesnt matter what You like or dont like on this thread, your critique is invalid if you cant give a reason

WIP, input always appreciated

>>3865997
The forearm holding the umbrella looks really short.

>>3865997 Her hair exposed to the sunlight needs to be more shinier. It's kinda dull in comparison to how well you did the skin.

>>3865833
Lol

>>3865598
Yeah, I use that thread in pretty much the same way.

>>3865688
the feet look really stubby

Update

>>3865997
good shit

>>3864502
Mathilda's drawing for today!
A parent and child duet.

>>3866410
nice colors
you got a blog?

>>3866411
@mighty_buzzer on twitter.
I'm drawing her once a day.

>>3866414
good stuff

>>3866410
you're getting worse everyday

>>3866411
>>3866414
>>3866417
look at this blatant samefagging

>>3866424
his posts were pathetically cute for the first few days, but I think /ic/ is about to eat him alive any day now... its only a matter of time

He's either going to knock up some foolish bitch or kidnap someone else child to live out his fantasy. He will dye the kid's hair white and call her Mathilda even if her name is something else. Dress her up like a doll. Screenshot this. He'll be on the news in 3 or 4 years.

>>3866424
>>3866433
450 followers more then me.

>>3866410
What are those coordinates in the meteor saying?

>>3864625
who you be

>>3866410
why is this whole thing so creepy?

>>3866640
Care to explain to them as to why?

>>3864644

>>3866734
Uncle A is right. Based as fuck.

>>3866734
based

Just a big eyed gal

>>3866734
lmao my sides. I accept this into the canon

>>3866734
based

>>3866594
https://twitter.com/ohheythatfisher
>>3864854
https://twitter.com/Lambrey3

>>3866734
blog?

>>3867168
I’m glad you’re still here

>>3866410
wtf is this
and what's 7mt

>>3867174
tnx, im more in drawpari discord

My Cintiq just die after 3 years of use, go on without me bros...

>>3867239
laugh at this faggot

>>3867239
Please share tips on colors

>>3867239
>tfw 10 year old wacom bamboo is still alive and kicking
anyways, always have a backup tablet

>>3867326
why are you tripfagging

>>3867332
he thinks hes good lol, let him have his fun.

>>3867332
>>3867376
i never bother to take off the trip
who cares

>>3867329
>wacom bamboo
My nigga. Old Wacom bamboo user for 8 years here

>>3867386
I do, have sex autist

>>3867403
haha, im pretty sure i get more dick than you do anon but have a good night

>>3867287
What do you want to know? I really can't help you if you don't be specify
>>3867329
Ya, should have keep my intuos pro instead of selling it.
No money to buy a brand new cintiq anyway so i will have to stop drawing for awhile.

Any help is appreciated

>>3867456
make longer strokes when you draw

>>3864644
>>3866734

>>3867606
>>3866734

>>3867606
>>3867608
Is this porn? Please say yes

>>3867456
breddy gud attempt at stylize the body, but I would take the anatomy one step further
take a look at pic related and see how different it is from your pic. Look at how the lines flow, your legs lacks muscle presence.
The same critique can be made on nearly everything else (hip area, sholder area)
not a bad attempt at all, but I gave you something to work on.

oh and do what >>3867493 says.

>>3867612
hahaha, I dont think so. I drew the initial fatguy but another anon did the awesome comic sketch. maybe that's what he had in mind but who knows.
>>3867608 hmmm my monitor isnt giving me true colors. they look so washed out. Its supposed to look like this.

>>3867606
>>3866734
Please give blog you two

>>3867623
my blog isnt worth mentioning desu

>>3865619
Comfy, leave it rough

>>3867641
Goddammit anon

>>3867641
ok fuck off then

>>3867641
give me your blog NOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Taeko Ohnuki

>>3867430
Based faggot.

Upgraded to a Render with a Complex Background

>>3867126
So the guy isn't just a one-off too practice on? What do you feel about them having sex?

>>3867606
>>3867616
Looks amazing by the way. For some reason when you draw her it makes her looks like a high school version of penni, maybe I should draw fat peter for this.

>>3867612
Not yet anyway. I am swamped recently, I will put them as a subject in my rotation if the other anon is ok with it. Otherwise can I replace uncle A with uncle B.

>>3867623
@ac120rfw

>>3864502
her drawing for today ~
Mathilda likes to bite if she's extremely happy so watch out!

>>3867854
>spain
but the coordinates were in poland

>>3867854
tfw no large man who lets you bite him while you sit in his lap

>>3867803
Eye shouldn’t be that small for a 3/4ths view, and colors/shading would look a lot better for that style if you went for more solid colors.

>>3867168
Delicious, it’s rare that someone bothers to draw socks with that texture. Nice splaying on the breasts, and ass rendering.

>>3867803
>So the guy isn't just a one-off too practice on? What do you feel about them having sex?

I dont mind it if that's what people want it to be. I don't normally draw porn but i can figure it out. And yeah this really was just a one off. I just really liked your comic idea

>Not yet anyway. I am swamped recently, I will put them as a subject in my rotation if the other anon is ok with it. Otherwise can I replace uncle A with uncle B.

I'm okay with it. But I'm busy on a project at the moment so realistically I dont know if I'd have a lot of time to commit to this.

more girl sketches from me

>>3868186
heads are all too big

>>3868097
Oh, I am not asking you to draw anything, I was just asking if you are okay if I draw the man that you created doing something super immoral with his niece.

>>3868235
you'll never see a complaint from me. looking at your sketches is a treat for me.

>>3868186
cute yuis!

>>3868186
>all those contour lines
>drawing still feels flat
Hmmm

>>3868235
Hot, you're really into ugly dudes fucking hot chicks ain't ya?

>>3868235
Oh the top was short? How did I miss that. My bad dude. Gah your handwriting is so clean. teach me your ways

>>3868235
Oh the top was short? How did I miss that. My bad dude. Gah your handwriting is so clean. teach me your ways

>>3868676
where'd you learn to color like this? i'm guessing you're really into pixar

>>3868235
CUTE

>>3868746
excellent and cute flan but her right shoe looks over-rotated

>>3868755
I love pixar and Disney in general. I learned from YouTube videos mostly. >>3868676
calling it done.

>>3868903

>>3865167
cool

>>3868912
would work with you if it was film/10

>>3868912
nicely colored but I dont really get the narrative

>>3869116
see
>>3866734

>>3868244
Thanks, I appreciate it.

>>3868487
Kind of, I like scenarios where what I perceived to be men of low social status /social worth being treated well or given special treatment, or declare eternal love to or submission by high status/beautiful women. Although it does often worked out that its an ugly guy and beautiful women.

>>3868676
>>3868903
>>3868912

That's amazing, Although the uniform being short for her is an idea that I hit on in the second sketch. Wasn't originally intended to be so.

>>3867974
I will be careful next time, although I disagree about the coloring style. for solid color to look good I think it'll need to be done using different medium, like Guache or Acrylics.

>>3868790
You like?

>>3868441
Fucking nice

>>3864502
her drawing for today!
dance dance ~

>>3869492
Mathilda a cute, cute, CUTE!

>>3869492
Please use a name! I would love to be able to highlight your posts and make sure I always see your cute daily art!

>>3869492
This is why I come to this thread.

>>3864917
blog?

>>3867606
She looks like being illuminated from the behind, but the Disgaea penguin is being illuminated from the front.

>>3869587
Because the penguin is obviously in the light of a window, while she has light coming from her room. There's clearly multiple light sources here.

>>3868480
Not him, but how do you fix this?

>>3869679
Generic advice: Create the illusion of depth by getting better at foreshortening, doing more overlapping forms and improving understanding of form in general.

Am I retarded, /ic/?
I have been drawing since my early teens and have read every book under the sun and done so many excercises, but my art is still on the same level it was 8 years ago...
Do I just not have the mental capacity to improve any farther?
There has to be cases like this other than me, right?

>>3869714
holy shit

>>3869714
Draw some hair, finish the hands and feet. This would look at least 5x better. Add eyebrows too.

>>3869725
It’s not finished

>>3869714
Your figure doesn't even match the ground perspective you set for yourself

>>3869752
I know that.
I’ll fix it

>>3869752
>>3869725
>>3869724
Back to the issue at hand, is it possible I’m just too stupid for art?

>>3869761
for 8 years yea but if you have been slacking a lot like months in between that would be expected

Guess I’ll just share the updated pic. I was hoping people would pay more attention to my text than the pic

>>3869765
I have taken long breaks.
Felt like giving up a lot.
One year of suicidal depression where I didn’t really do anything, let alone drawing.

>>3869768
>just symbol my shit up

>>3869771
Thanks boss. More please.

>>3869768
>>3869714
Here’s something I finished at least.
No background and perspective cause I was too afraid to go outside my comfort zone for this.
Will rectify in the future

>>3869704
Thanks. I had those in my mind but didn't want to lead the answer

>>3864502
Does this count as alternative/stylization? I've found that, of all my work, my monsters seem to be far better than my people, I just can't get proportions right, though I try and try and study my ass off. Guess it's just because I always drew monsters and shit as a kid. I can post examples of my attempt at people if anybody wants, otherwise I guess just general criticism would be welcome.

>>3869791
It's kind of cute but also terribly technically. Please do some of the sticky exercises.

do you guys have tips for drawing the dress from this angle? Can't find a reference and it's hard to make it look right...maybe it makes more sense if i don't try to push the angle from top to bottom like that but then i feel like it doesn't look as interesting

>>3869907
Fuck off, shill.

>>3869912
no u

>>3869849
Blog?

>>3869849
is latex what she's wearing on top?

>>3869849
Your lay-in for it doesn't look bad. I'd make sure to emphasize the way it's swinging around her hips from behind though, I think that'll sell the gesture and you won't have to worry about precisely how the fabric is folding as long as it's flow-y.

>>3869951
it's all one big dress like a medium-length nun's dress but I have it clinging cause she's a big titty char and i felt like it helped to not lose her waist in the pose

>>3869953
oh that makes a ton of sense thank you, i think i can imagine it a lot more easily now

>>3869934
@magister_en

>>3869768
Hopefully worked out some of the flaws

>>3870129
Ok so mine isnt perfect but hopefully you can gain something from it
You have a lot of symbol drawing going on.
Your most immediate, glaring issues are the limbs. Tiny forearms with baby hands. and weirdly elongated ankles with feet on the end that you didnt construct, you just used symbols like the other anon said.
Honestly when you hit this point with a pose, stop, zoom out all the way, redraw it starting with gesture and construction and really try to start with a reference. best of luck

>>3870204
Thank you for clarifying what he meant by “symbol my shit up.”
It was about as helpful as “you’re doing it wrong.”
No shit I’m doing it wrong, that’s what my posts were all about.
I need to study feet more for sure. I’m guilty of usually hiding them and during my construction just make a sorta elongated triangle.
Has this improved any?

>>3870228
It’s still too small, isn’t it?

It’s things like this that make me depressed.

>>3870204
>when the redline is just as bad as showing gesture as the first drawing.

>>3870233
Can you redline, then?

>>3870233
i didnt want to deviate from his drawing entirely, so yes its pretty stiff. if i had a ref id bother with gesture

>>3870232
Don't worry, you will get used to it

>>3870232
>he's going to polish that turd

>>3870265
Got anything constructive to say?

>>3870267
if you are too lazy to learn your fundies use a reference otherwise you are just developing bad habits that will cripple you in the long run

>>3870270
>caring about the long run

>>3870270
What does that have to do with finishing a drawing? If I never finish a drawing cause I’m not a master at construction yet I’ll never get the hang of coloring.
Are you seriously suggesting someone wait years before ever attempting color?
Also pyw.

>>3870242
LONG

>>3870276
I understand getting defensive but anon is right. gave you the constructive words you asked for.
You can color a drawing all you want but if the lineart is bad, good coloring wont make it look better. Serious answer? Yeah, wait till you have basics before trying to learn color. If you just want to play with color then do it, no one is stopping you

>>3870276
Not him but what he's trying to say is stop wasting your time polishing a turd and invest more time in figure drawing with multiple drawings, such as hundreds of quick sketches emphasizing the gesture while working with forms both in proportion and perspective.

In other words needs more Loomis, read the sticky faggot.

>>3870242
blog?

>>3870242
>that head
>that neck
nigga what are you doin'???

>>3870242

>>3870352
Shinji?

>>3870383
No?
I was the one who posted the Bruce Lee guy.

>>3870281
>>3870280
Aight. Guess I’ll grind for a while and come back. I’ve read loomis’ stuff before but I only draw like once a week.
I think rereading could help me a lot.
That and grinding what I’ve learned.

>>3870395
>rereading could help me a lot.
No, it won't because reading won't teach you about how to apply form in space.

>>3870390
He's making a joke, dummy

>>3870419
My bad. Dunno how I didn't make that connection.

trying to do some hollow knight fanart without the consistent black outlines that are in the game

>>3870398

WIP

>>3870465
cute

>>3870242
you a fan of seth?

>>3869714
Are you coldfusion?

>>3870352
Now it looks like that chick from re7

A rough and early concept for my character Red Rabbit, a courier for Mercury in a cyberpunk future. shes missing her fanny pack in this earlier version and the skull on her bandanna was changed to look more like a bunny skull logo, the script is coming along pretty well too.

Despite being digital concepts it will be done traditionally

This is Cupid, an intergalactic rockstar bounty hunter, on the road he likes drugs and groupies. despite his decadent lifestyle and flamboyant persona hes an accomplished and deadly hit man for hire

Despite being digital concepts it will be done traditionally

This is Cupid, an intergalactic rockstar bounty hunter, on the road he likes drugs and groupies. despite his decadent lifestyle and flamboyant persona hes an accomplished and deadly hit man for hire

Despite being digital concepts it will be done traditionally

This is Cupid, an intergalactic rockstar bounty hunter, on the road he likes drugs and groupies. despite his decadent lifestyle and flamboyant persona hes an accomplished and deadly hit man for hire

>>3870465
Fucking excellent Patchy

The initial sketch for RR

A side view of Ribette, an anxious plucky mechanic on a mission too big for her

dump almost over

A side view of Ribette, an anxious plucky mechanic on a mission too big for her

dump almost over

I think shes pretty cute for a frog

Deadwood Bill, another bounty hunter.

And then finally a live drawing I did a little while ago, with some obvious errors

okay all done

>>3868903
it's a nitpick, but the light is being cast incorrectly on the drawer & book in the background

>>3870465
i want to bully patchouli

left ankle feels wrong but i dont know how to fix it

>>3870614
the shin is tilting in towards the crotch, but the foot is remaining facing straight forward, the ankle cant bend very far outwards so it looks a little unnatural at that angle

>>3870352
Head too big/neck too thin if he's going for realism proportions.
>>3870242

>>3870627
la goblina...

>>3870242
thats a big lookin girl seth

>>3870582
how would I fix it? I'm trying to get better at my lighting.

Working on a magical girl idol

>>3870465
Purple n' yellow always looks moody as fuck, I'm glad I don't abuse it .

>>3870700
looks difficult always having to hold two items when performing on stage. Why not make the magic wand also a mic?

>>3867144
LOL why did i get a different link . OKay

>>3870813
It's not my character unfortunately so I'm trying to respect the owner's design as much as possible

>>3870821
makes sense

>>3870831
nice stuff seth
whats tntt all about?

I just realized how limited men are in the poses they can do.

>>3870700
what did you study to get to this level?

>>3869492
Where is your daughter for today, huh?

>>3871035
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

>>3871041
kys desu senpai

>>3870700

>>3871047
SEETHING

>>3871047
God damn that autism, i'm almost impressed

Heey i think i'm finished with this piece , any advice ?

>>3870721
blog?

>>3870614
i thought all the tumblr fags were already bullied out of this place, guess i was wrong

>>3869849
progress

>>3871249
The colors are really boring for this kind of scene imo. Pushing the saturation could maybe help, but otherwise it's p.cute

>>3871047
this is so pathetic

>>3870700
Blog?

>>3870700
the hands you drew are completely broken, and those legs don't connect into the hips right. It looks like you didn't draw through the forms properly

>>3864684
H-hey. M-mind if I steal that gif?


Thanks...

>>3865997
>gookcolle

>>3871387
forgot to add that I like it tho.

>>3870232
Tomoko or Zone-tan?

>>3871206
wait, what makes it tumblry?

>>3871119
aww I like this one. its super cute. do you have a blog anon?

>>3871249
i'd stop or dump that sketch now. the composition is garbage, the only thing my eye goes toward is that front hand.

>>3871396
uninspired character with buzzword features
just not very original

I'm absolutely terrified of doing line art. I've never made it past this draft stage and I always keep stalling, trying to fix as much of the anatomy and proportions as I can, before giving up.

>>3871400
Are you talking about the horns being buzzword features? Not complaining, but kawaii anime girls aren't very original either but its what most of the thread is. I genuinely thought 'tumblr style' was still this realm of drawing

>>3871416
freckles, big hair, that side shirt thing, popsicle, "oh and shes a demon", band aid on leg, big round earrings

nothing too offensive individually but together its all a bit bland, i suggest designing characters from the ground up. just my taste though.
it seems like people design characters and confuse adding features with adding personality and depth. less is more

>>3871429
>>3871400
I never seen someone pull out so much shit ou of their own ass and my main fetish is fucking enema.

I don't if I get mad or impressed.

>>3871249
Anticlimax

>>3871437
what's your problem? you can disagree with me but reply with more than "fuck you durrr"

>>3871429
Oh alright then? I was going for a lion-esque theme with the tail and mane of hair but admittedly I dont have any backstory for her. Just threw her in summery clothes with a popsicle because its getting warm finally, its not supposed to be deep lol

>>3871437
post your work also

>>3871398
Don't listen to this schmuck.They should Finish it!

>>3871249
The hand is little distracting; maybe you could blur it a little so the image focuses on her face. It is nice over all.

>>3871443
right im not coming down hard on you just my opinion im getting the lion theme now that you bring it up but i think you could push it a little harder in that direction

>>3871444
Does anybody have that Proko Imperial Guard picture that we always use for this?

>>3871451
>we
how about just post your fucking work memester

>>3871440
>>3871444
I'm serious, i'm more impressed then anything, i'm not even calling you out on in it. You're so good at this that you should drop art and become a politician or something. True talent don't come easy like that to others.

This or starting behaving like a respectable human being and grow some sense, because I really don't expect you to believe that people would take you serious or respect you in any way with you using your mouth like a swear pipe.

>>3871456
why are you so triggered

>>3871206
"right im not coming down hard on you just my opinion"

>>3871462
yeah? it wasnt even a harsh critique calm down lmao seething

>>3871458
I'm pretty chill actually, i'm just giving you some pep talk so you can follow your true calling, my man. There are plenty of farms that could use someone like you, spouting out more bullshit than saliva through your mouth is not something anyone can do.

>>3871464
do something with your life other than starting fights on the internet, you just dropped in here to throw insults around for your little dopamine rush pretty pathetic

>>3871467
>>3871464
Get a fucking room already you faggots everyone knows how badly you want to such each other cocks, take it to your tranny discord server.

>>3871468
>give critique
>get attacked out of left field with no explanation

wow there truly are two sides to every arguement

>>3871463
heh. I mean, a meme face image calling something tumblr-discarded isnt really critique. Though I appreciate the small amount you gave after I pushed some questions at you

>>3870622
also thank you, this helped a lot

>>3871467
Fights? What fights? I'm not fighting anyone here, i'm just curious to see how far you will keep replying to me when clearly i only want toy with you and call you names, like you said yourself.
And I must say, i'm trully impressed right now, even being more butt mad then someone from tumblr lurking on /pol/ you keep at it, the determination of an ox and the mind of a dunce, the perfect quimera of stupidity.

Keep at it, anon, will won't go far but at least you are entering in some level.

>>3871470
im not the guy who posted that picture and that guy you just thanked is me lol

>>3871471

>>3871471
>And I must say, i'm trully impressed right now, even being more butt mad then someone from tumblr lurking on /pol/ you keep at it, the determination of an ox and the mind of a dunce, the perfect quimera of stupidity.

jesus dude thats embarrassing

>>3871468
Well, if anon give me his discord I would mind giving it a try, i'm pretty sure he would love me giving him a spanking in real life too.

But that's quite lewd don't you think? You shouldn't say such things like that, is or duty to keep the level on this board nice and high as always been.
>>3871473
You can be on top if you wont, I don't really mind.

>>3871479
I prefer awkwardly sexy.

Hohoho, looks like I won. Is so easy to make kids feel uncorfatable, just talk a little bit about sex and pull out you cock and it's enough for then to leave.

Funny how that cute anon was the one saying things about tumblr when himself could't handle a little bit of sexual misconduct. Really cute, would really love to really hurt him with my cock. Those redditors thinking they know something about IB's always makes smirk a bit.

>>3871496
just stop i get youre doing the fedora tipping autist bit but its just old

>>3871545
I don't think you know what a fedora tipping autist really is.

Shut the fuck up autists.

>>3871468
The fuck's wrong with Red and his goon squad as of late? First the tranny's sad power struggle over on /aco? And now this shit?

This really reminded me of pic related

>>3871735
Imagine being so stupid that you think anyone that uses words outside your own limited and childish vocabulary is talking like someone from a book or anything outside your own reality perspective.
A swear to god, if you are not a hillbilly redneck living in a small city you are so fucked in life.

>>3871757
it sounds straight out spiderman noir, not childish but teenage angst level writing at best.

>>3871861
What the hell are you even on about? Spiderman Noir is not even that dramatic, just uses the 20's aesthetic and apart from that it kinda sucks exactly for that reason.

Wouldn’t be an /ic/ thread without childish shit throwing matches

this board needs better moderation

>>3865997
i kno u. where have u bin

is he fun to look at, or is it boring?

>>3870445
Not him but try Drawbox. It's a slowburning slog but the end result will definitely help you. If you actively spend time every day working through it like your instructed to, while drawing personal shot on the side, it will definitely help you.

If you put the time in to it.

>>3870533
>>3870530

>I think shes pretty cute for a frog

I agree. She has style.

You niggers don't make a new thread.

>>3872416

>>3867376
You literally conjured this out of thin air due to your own insecurities. This place is pathetic.