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Previous thread: >>3827266

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
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where is chico still, i've been making them for a while

>> No.3838832 [DELETED] 

Reposting from last thread, just looking for crits

Also its pretty boring but idk how to make it spicy

>> No.3838841

>>3837833

Reposting from last thread, still looking for crits

>> No.3838842
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reposting these cuz i joined the thread as it died. its not much, im at a creative loss. dont know wtf to draw

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>>3838842

>> No.3838915
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3838915

How do I /mouths/?

>> No.3838919
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3838919

I just want reaction of any kind

>> No.3838923

>>3838915
a lot of muscles, skin, and bones that control an openable hole in your mouth. some facial anatomy helps, as well as fundies. You are doing alright so far. just keep it up

>> No.3838926

>>3838919
That face kind of reminds me of really old anime where they didn't quite know what to do with the sizing. It's real rough around the edges, but kinda charming in a weird way, keep it up!

>> No.3838932

>>3835974
>>3836772
>>3835334
>>3832060
>>3829338

Blogs?

>> No.3838934

>>3838919
most of it is cool, but you fucked up the face real time. Learn more about muscles and how much they can move.

>> No.3838938

>>3838926
>>3838934
Thank u anons with your help I grow stronger each day

>> No.3838940

>>3838938
keep that mindset friend, you will grow quick.

>> No.3838946

>>3838923
thanks anon, I'll do some more loomis

>> No.3839097

>>3838671
>>3838689
you guessed right, it’s a gradient map where the midtones are blue and shift really quickly to warmer colors as they go out

twitter.com/magister_jp

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>> No.3839510

When are we going to ban anime

>> No.3839521
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>>3839506
>that sword
Lmao

>> No.3839525

>>3839506
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

>> No.3839583

>>3839506
Beautiful!

>> No.3839696
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Fuck this gay earth.

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lets throw this shite in whilst i'm at it.

>> No.3839721
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3839721

How do i draw butts and tits?

>>3838919
Her hair looks like a helmet

>> No.3839723

>>3839696
You draw like a child

>> No.3839733

>>3839696
>signing / putting dates per drawing
Its a sketch book you fuck, just add the date every few pages. Like it matters if you drew something today or two months from now when you look back at it in 10 years.

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>> No.3839790

>>3839506
It's depressing how bad your coloring skills are because your lines are absolutely beautiful.

>> No.3839794

>>3839506
>that sword

>> No.3839795

>>3839506
How do I learn to do gorgeous linework like you senpai?

>> No.3839797
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>>3839721
Maybe this will help, I haven't actually followed it myself.
Then there's this stuff that may or may not be up your alley:
https://www.deviantart.com/mldoxy/art/Butt-Toot-484053136
https://www.deviantart.com/mldoxy/art/Butt-Plane-Toot-606763383
https://www.deviantart.com/mldoxy/art/Hip-Toot-449389394
https://www.deviantart.com/mldoxy/art/Boob-Toot-1-442770559
https://www.deviantart.com/mldoxy/art/Boob-Shine-Toot-447781410
https://www.deviantart.com/mldoxy/art/Vagina-Toot-461306547
https://www.deviantart.com/mldoxy/art/Tighty-Tights-Toot-470068729

>> No.3839800

>>3839721
You look like you have good tits and ass already though.

>> No.3839826
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>> No.3839829

>>3839826
Reconsider the cooler colours on her chin/mouth, it’s starting to read as stubble

>> No.3839837

>>3839829
Toned it down towards a neutral tone. Anything else?

>> No.3839838

>>3839837
Not really, more expressiveness in the faces and dynamicism in your work would be good, but they’re getting better. I like.

>> No.3839839

>>3839826
that yellow, red, blue is good for realistic stuff not anime

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>> No.3839883

>>3839785
Is that a tiny ball sack?

>> No.3839937
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3839937

Thoughts?

>> No.3840036

>>3839937
Pregnant or just fat?

>> No.3840043

>>3839800
Then why wont my dick get hard while I draw lewd anymore?

>>3839797
thanks anon

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>>3839937
learn anatomy

>> No.3840066

>>3839937
post the pic you copied it from and we'll tell you what you did wrong

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3840153

>>3840066

>> No.3840156

>>3839937
Use less line weight on the breasts and belly area. Overall need varying line weight like you used for the hair.

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>>3840066
>>3840153

>> No.3840160

>>3839937
big yikes on the legs and arms back2loomis

>> No.3840162

>>3840156
yeah i noticed lacking in that field. I will try to look for some tutorials about that.

>> No.3840163

>>3840162
You should just experiment yourself honestly. Tutorials are of little to no help in this area.

>> No.3840171

>>3840064
Let's see your art, faggot.

>>3839937
Also, work on perspective. Otherwise, it's a good looking picture for it's style. The coloring is good. The hands are great. But yeah, you could sharpen your anatomy skills a little. Like in the shoulder area. I can tell what you were trying to do with the downwards angle. But the legs don't look right. It just looks like she has abnormally short legs, as opposed to just being seen from a downward angle.
Work on your lines too. Your lines seem a little bland and one dimensional. Like.. they could use some variation.

>> No.3840173

>>3840153
Where did you get this? Is it a 3D model? I would like to use it too.

>> No.3840179

>>3840171
Thanks anon.

>>3840173
Its 3d model from sketchfab, they got lot of models of diffrent body parts.

>> No.3840223

>>3839506
>>3839826
what's your blog again?

>> No.3840257

>>3840223

@MrMcFlintcock

https://twitter.com/MrMcFlintcock?s=09

>> No.3840271

>>3839826
foreshortening on the sword is a little off

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Both rough sketches but which looks better?

>> No.3840363

>>3840289
I have no strong feelings, one way or the other

>> No.3840442
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3840442

Should I be not wasting time with fun silly things like this when I still have fundies to learn?

>>3840363
Have any feelings on how to go about making the paintjob more interesting? Essentially something that isn't just autofill single colour?

>> No.3840520

>>3840442
There's no such thing as wasting time if you're having fun.

>> No.3840561

>>3840520
yes there is

>> No.3840563

>>3838919
is this done in mspaint?

>> No.3840608

>>3840442
Still think your design would benefit from moveing the ears farther away, the arms down and the legs closer together like the redraw you got in the last thread.

>> No.3840656

>>3839506
How to I make my line work so clean

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WIP

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too busy with college
can only draw quick chibis for the time being

>> No.3840767

>>3839721
blog?

>> No.3840772

>>3840725
Cyclops' make me hard

>> No.3840788
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3840788

can someone please help me with her left arm, the one holding the bundle of wheat

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>> No.3840965

>>3840886
You really need to make that thumb bigger, I first thought you've given her a second right hand.

>> No.3840969

>>3840442
Stuff like that gives you practice with your program of choice and gets you building muscle memory and techniques for simple shapes. That's as foundational to learning as fundies, I'd say, but I'm not really in a position to speak authoritatively.

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>>3840886
eye level / perspective of the books on it

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>>3840788
How about this?

>> No.3841017

>>3839839
It does but the blue only works on male faces, it gives female faces the appearance of stubble.

>> No.3841020

>>3840788
I really like this.

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>> No.3841113

>>3840179
can u link that particular one?

>> No.3841125

>>3841080
Lovely proportions, you've got construction down pat

>> No.3841185

>>3840608
Thank you for pointing this out, I didn't see the redraw!

>>3839277
>>3839279
Thanks so much for the input my man. You make many great points and I'm definitely going to take them!

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3841329

Finished Comic Style Coloring Commission

https://twitter.com/MrMcFlintcock/status/1103805357963522050?s=19

>> No.3841377

>>3841329
Yep, colors look like shit like always.

>> No.3841430

>>3841329
Nice

>> No.3841434

>>3841329
>think it’s just flats and rough shadows
>it’s the fucking final
This has to be a sin.

>> No.3841435

>>3841377
Elaborate.


>>3841430
Thanks.

>> No.3841436

>>3841113
just type ''female torso'' in search bar

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3841477

dickbot

>> No.3841497

>>3841125
>>3841080
at least make it 2.5 heads 2 heads is too small

>> No.3841579
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3841579

drew this last year, then never drew anything again

also my scanner is wack. don't know why the right side is so blurry and dark

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3841609

Things to do to improve this?
Besides finishing rendering ofc.

>> No.3841613

>>3841477
>muh dick
post more

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3841624

did this to try and figure out shiny clothes in crosshatching.
Got no fucking clue what to do to improve it so fuck it im going to bed

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>>3841609
The composition could be done better, right now the ship-fu and the actual ship looks similar in size in your work, so they are competing for attentions. I'd advice you to put your figure forward and the ship backward. Pic related.

Also you could put rimlight on the figure since it seems that the sun is right behind her back.

>> No.3841707

>>3841624
she looks like she was sculpted by a chisel-wielding Michael J. Fox

>> No.3841715
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3841715

Trying to practice my line art.

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>>3841707
as in the dude on the left looking like mike or as in parkinson induced handiwork

>> No.3842029

>>3839785
the boobs look like they're gonna fly off her body at any second. Even if you wanna make them look perky, you gotta let them big tits sag a bit.

>> No.3842187

>>3838842
very static almost no dimension given to this girl (looks flat). but i guess cool design maybe rethink about her pants cause those reminds me of a hobo!

>> No.3842260
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What would you improve on this?

>>3839864
I fucking love danganronpa, that hair looks interesting

>> No.3842281
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3842281

How do you create finished linework that doesn't suck all the life out of the rough sketch? It's something that I seem to struggle with a little.

>> No.3842284
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>>3842281
Like this, it's more finished than what I usually do but it's still half-assed and the linework just doesn't feel as nice to me. I have major problems with actually sitting down and finishing something instead of banging out tons of rough sketches all day instead.

>> No.3842294

>>3841723
the fuck do you think, you tit?

>> No.3842316
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3842316

I made some updates to the drawing, eventually I got my head up and out of my ass and realised that the original drawing did indeed look muddy because of how desaturated the colours were. A disclaimer- the colours look browned because it's meant to resemble an old fashioned photograph.

>> No.3842324
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Working on this request. I don't normally do superheros, so this is a nice change of pace.

>> No.3842344

>>3842324
ease up on the legs lmao

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>>3842324
>those ankles

>> No.3842357

>>3842324
why are her tits falling from her chest

>> No.3842362

>>3842324
I fucking love this style pls post more or link where i can see more your work

>> No.3842386

>>3842316
how long have you been working on this for?

>> No.3842415

>>3842386
Way longer than it should have taken me to get to this point desu, I'd say 4 hours ? a lot of the time was taken up by me constantly changing my mind about colours and contrasts

>> No.3842427

>>3842415
And I don’t think that includes the “lineart”

>> No.3842490

>>3840767
https://twitter.com/SojournFantasy

>> No.3842495
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3842495

I'm new to actually trying and this might sound dumb but is there a tool in Sketchbook which will give me better line quality or I do i just need to keep making shitty ones till I gitgud?
I'm using the ballpoint pen here and am not sure it was the right choice

>> No.3842496

>>3842324
Lovely but leg game too strong for this mere mortal.

>> No.3842503

>>3842495
try using a thicker brush until you get better control. It looks like shit because your lines are wavy as fuck.

>> No.3842521

>>3842496
What can I say, I like long legs.

>> No.3842543

>>3840788
For the angle she's holding the wheat of say the left image looks more natural/ comfy.
If the wheat is heavy the angle of the object should lean out more, emphasizing the weight of it and you should go for the pose on the right.

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>>3841080

>> No.3842632

>>3842495
Think the lines themselves look fine, you just need to increase the variation of their thickness.

>> No.3842664

>>3842583
Very cute

>> No.3842673

>>3842583
I love how your draw faces, but those calves look kinda funky

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>>3841715

>> No.3843061

>>3842495
>xabungle
Good taste

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From the mgm thread

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gotta break free from the circle head crutches

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So stupid shit but does anyone have advice on getting my head to work out the 3/4 angle?

Did ask in /beg/ (where these roughs belong) but didn't get any help.

Looked into guides for drawing spheres but so far that hasn't helped me get my head around it.

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Drew this today!

>> No.3843169

>>3843164
Nice. I really want someone to put her in an actual sauce packet as well. Have the corners bitten off for her legs and arms to pop through

>> No.3843175

>>3843164
>'I dont participate in trends'
>Participates in trends

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>>3843164
I hate this bitch, this artist.

>> No.3843275

>>3839826
Why did you do that awful shading on the green Part of that dress. It looks like spray paint. And also the face shade looks like it needs smoothing. It looks rough.

>> No.3843277

>>3839937
The legs look off and non 3D. The righteg looks shorter than the other one and does not look balanced.

>> No.3843284

>>3843175
>I'm not a Pedophile, lollicon should be banned especially anime.
>Gets caught with 86gb of Child porn

>> No.3843288

>>3843164
worse than bowsette

>> No.3843299

>>3843164
I hope this is the last we're getting on this shitty trend. I have adblock for a reason.

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3843344

>>3843118
Did you remember to flip it while working on this?

>> No.3843346

>>3843344
Yeah but I may flip it so much it defeats the purpose

>> No.3843366

>>3843156
The eyes are kind of like stickers slapped on a ball. Try getting a ball, drawing the face on it, and then observe while rotating it.

>> No.3843437

>>3842316
This really hurts my eyes

>> No.3843441
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3843441

>>3843156
It is not working for you, because you're still trying follow the proportion lines, which only works for flat views. When doing a 3/4 your lines must converge to a vanishing point.

>> No.3843491

>>3843441
Thanks man, you've been a massive help with. Same guy as last thread I assume?

Either way I'm still working through Loomis and this is the first time I've heard of this but I see what you mean. I've actually been meaning to ask what the point/reason of horizon lines were in drawing characters/portraits. Thanks for helping to clear that up for me.

>>3843366
Thanks man I wouldn't have thought of that but sounds like a good exercise. Will give it a shot!

>> No.3843510

>>3841624
doesn't really look like cloth but fuck, it looks good

>> No.3843590

>>3843491
Whenever you're doing Loomis or other figure drawing exercises, and they instruct you to think of simple forms like boxes, cylinders and spheres, then you're working with perspective. If you don't understand the basics of perspective, then you won't be able to check if your forms are correct, and you will be stuck in one big guessing game of whether or not something is drawn right.

>> No.3843593

>>3838845
>>3838842
hello whats your blog? i hope you dont mind me using it as a pfp on discord its really cute !

>> No.3843702

>>3843437
I’m guessing the contrast is too strong atm my bad, but I feel like the more I continue the values will look more normal ?

>> No.3843752
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3843752

Trying to study how some artists use screentones

Right (original) somehow looks softer, with more depth, and generally more appealing.
Any help with this? Tried to recreate it the best I could

>> No.3843869

>>3843752
Dude I see what you mean ! I’m trying to figure out what it is that makes it seem that way but I can’t put my finger on it. It could just be that the reference image is in a bad quality ? Like slightly more pixelated

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I need to learn posing and to buy some colored pencils or something, but here is some worm cop guy for this story developing in my head

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>>3843869
>>3843752
Erased the original's face and put mine in.

The tones look okay now zoomed out, but they start misbehaving and looking all funky if you go in.

>> No.3843998

>>3843901
It could just be the fact that the original artist is more confident with the result that they’re trying to achieve ? Like when sketching they just naturally left insignificant marks that somehow improved the overall appeal

>> No.3844004

>>3843288
>cute waifu fanart with good design worse than "I'm not gay for bowser" genderbent character with shit design
Alright honey.

>> No.3844006

>>3843998
I'm purely talking about the look of the screentones here, you can just ignore the line art
see how in the zoomed-in picture here >>3843901 the tones form these weird patterns?
It's especially apparent if you take the right pic and zoom out of it

>> No.3844035

>>3844006
Ohhh I see what you mean now, I’m not sure how to help then :’)

>> No.3844072
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>> No.3844129

>>3844072
Jesus fuck

>> No.3844131
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>>3838813
my lil cast of characters

>> No.3844143
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>>3838813

>> No.3844229

>>3842324
Give your blog, damn it!

>> No.3844233

>>3842521
I think he's referring to the fact they're bent like a crescent moon.

>> No.3844243

Why can’t I have a thread about cartoons without you anime parasites latching onto it

>> No.3844256

>>3844243
Because this isn't /co/ you massive retard, lurk for more than a month you Tumblr tourist.

>> No.3844258

>>3844243
/alt/ has always have anime, what the fuck are you on about newfag?

>> No.3844277

>>3844258
It shouldn’t

>> No.3844282

>>3844243
Fuck off shitter

>> No.3844283
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gotta defeat the circle

>> No.3844300
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Fixed a few things.

>> No.3844307

>>3840563
Tegaki with a mouse

>> No.3844318 [DELETED] 
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>>3844229
>>3842362
I appreciate the interest but I think I'll refrain. Thank you though.

>> No.3844330

>>3844229
>>3842362
I appreciate the interest but I think I'll pass. Thank you though.

>> No.3844355
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3844355

I feel like this is missing something but I'm not sure what.

>> No.3844372

>>3844355
At this point maybe you can add another few sprigs of leaves/plants in the bottom right and draw out and refine the rest of the steps. Then pull in the silhouette of the foliage in the top left to reveal more of the lighter blue backdrop color and make the foliage silhouette a little starker and less hazy

>> No.3844392
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>>3838813

>> No.3844397
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>>3842316
Please read Color And Light by James Gurney and How To Render by Scott Robertson. I recolored the face for you with more attractive colors. Sorry for not going into more depth, but I'm on a tight schedule.
Good luck! This took me less than 30 mins so editing shouldn't be a problem for you. c:

>> No.3844434
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>>3841613
here's a something

>> No.3844455

>>3843164
make one for horsey sauce!!!!

>> No.3844517

>>3844355
light on face is off. Try to add more light or cover his right hand with shadow

>> No.3844528
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>>3844434
>got lazy with perspective off again
JUST

>> No.3844555
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>>3843901
Maybe the screentone scale is too small?

>> No.3844561

>>3844131
you have a very unique style, in a good way. it looks awesome, you have a blog?

>> No.3844588
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>> No.3844589
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3844589

still in the works, someone help me choose a background color

>> No.3844608
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>>3844588
Sorry wrong image

>> No.3844632

>>3844355
Start actually practicing anatomy.

>> No.3844636

>>3844632
ngmi spotted

>> No.3844638

>>3844636
actual ngmi spotted

>> No.3844674
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>>3844143
God, youre so fucking god. Did you ever post a twitter?

>>3844355
The simple face really lags behind the quality of the rest of the picture imo

>> No.3844766

>>3844674
>Hair over eyes
It is a dude right?

>> No.3844768
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3844768

>>3844355
I think I'll stop fiddling with it now.

>>3844674
>The simple face really lags behind the quality of the rest of the picture imo
Hm, I really don't wanna go too detailed on the face sine I want it to look simple, cute, and animu-ish, but I get what you're saying. I tried adding a bit more detail.

>>3844517
I'm a peanut brain at lighting but I tried.

>>3844372
I think that helped, thanks anon.

>> No.3844771

>>3844674
>this brush
>this linework
>this artstyle
I don't remember this artist doing lewds.

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Guess I should get used to drawing things in side view first, to prevent characters from glitching through objects.

>> No.3844800
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Guess I should get used to drawing things in side view first, to prevent characters from glitching through objects.

>> No.3844816
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3844816

Rate pls, I spent 2 hours on this.

>> No.3844834

>>3844816
Heh, it’s cute

>> No.3844837

>>3844397
Thank you so much for taking the time to recolour and giving me advice, I’ll make sure to do that :)

>> No.3844838
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3844838

just doing the do

>> No.3844847

>>3844816
Why binary?

>> No.3844853

>>3844816
>actually doing her hat correctly
Fucking ten out of ten.

>> No.3844855

>>3844847
Easier to bucket paint.

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>> No.3844880
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3844880

Progress, it's taking ages.

>> No.3844956

>>3844880
It’s really dynamic, anon

>> No.3844961
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3844961

>>3838813
Did a drawing of my daughter.

>> No.3844990
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3844990

Didn’t see a nsfw thread so I’m posting here

>>3844874
>>3844880
These are neat

>> No.3844993

>>3844990
Fuck just noticed how weird those legs look

>> No.3845012

>>3844990
>>3844990
what the fuck, that dick is longer than his entire torso
poor boi will die a horrible death

>> No.3845050
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>>3845012
What a way to go

>> No.3845052

>>3845050
I’m scared for him

>> No.3845057

>>3844990
poor shota

>> No.3845096

>>3845050
I love that subtle worried expression on the big guy's face

>> No.3845104

>>3845050
I've never wanted to be a blonde before.

>> No.3845188
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3845188

I like skate maids.

>> No.3845190

>>3845050
blog?

>> No.3845191

>>3845188
I like it its pretty good, but she looks too stiff. Also deck is too big, and shoe/feet should bend a little from weight.

>> No.3845196

>>3845191
Thanks for the input, these points where bugging me as well, but I didn't really know what to do. Where do I go for crits on this kind of stuff? I was lurking on /beg/ before, but I didn't post there yet.

>> No.3845198

>>3844766
It's what ever you want it to be, it doesn't matter to me

>>3844771
I don't do lewds, I am an eternal tease

>> No.3845201

>>3843141
>>3844283
when are you gonna start drawing?

>> No.3845262
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>> No.3845265

>>3845262
Stop tracing it still looks like Akko

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>> No.3845276
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>>3844768
liqufy his face anon

>> No.3845293
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3845293

Saturday's update. I've been getting conflicting advice and praise/criticism--specifically panelling and "style." I don't feel equipped to be able to discern which is the right lead to follow. Fortunately, I absolutely love the process.

>> No.3845295
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3845295

I'm new to digital drawing, is this shit?

>> No.3845296
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>>3845293

>> No.3845312

>>3845295
I personally like it

>> No.3845351
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3845351

finished up his face and hand other than that owoops

>> No.3845400

>>3845265
I didn't trace it tho. I based her off Akko so it makes sense why it looks like it.

>> No.3845415
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bullying

>> No.3845455
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>> No.3845464
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>>3845400
Bullshit

>> No.3845467

>>3845464
That doesn't prove anything anon. I liked her eyebrows and general expression so I copied it, it's not too hard to draw desu.

>> No.3845469
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3845469

>>3845464
>using a reference is tracing

get out of your own head anon

>> No.3845492

>>3845464
It looks far from traced. Fuck off.

>> No.3845499

>>3844330
Do you not have one or just shy? The latter is a bit autistic desu senpai.

>> No.3845500

>>3845415
Oh ! so cute !

>> No.3845529

>>3845499
I'm shy and don't want anon to make fun of my husbando drawings. I am pretty autistic so you're not wrong.

>> No.3845577
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>> No.3845611
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>> No.3845616

>>3845611
Oh boy, excited to see this one finished.

>> No.3845618
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3845618

I lost interest after the linework but this is still the closest i've come to a finished thing, i'll be leaving this one be.

>> No.3845645

>>3844632
Dude, what? The anatomy is fine

>> No.3845648

>>3845296
ok I still hate your stuff, but its starting to grow on me dude. Keep going please, those speech bubbles are a great idea.

>> No.3845649

>>3845196
>I was lurking on /beg/ before
why?

>> No.3845685
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>>3845648
Believe it or not, trying to impress specifically YOU, anon, has been one of my motivations in trying to get somewhat decent. One day, my man.

>> No.3845716

>>3845296
Your art style is still really unappealing but I love that you actually went ahead and made your own story a reality. Good on ya mate.

>> No.3845733

>>3839506
please please PLEASE don't make her nose red when you colour it...

>> No.3845774

>>3845733
>>3844300

>> No.3845978

>>3845201
i don't understand

>> No.3845998
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>>3845201
no really i don't understand

>> No.3846013
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>> No.3846020

>>3846013
HE SAID HE DONT UNDERSTAND

>> No.3846022

>>3845998
>>3845978
I said when are you gonna start drawing?

>> No.3846023
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3846023

mismagius

>> No.3846032

>>3846023
Hey, you.

>> No.3846086

>>3846032
hi there

>> No.3846106

>>3845050
>me and my dad
are you a euro by the way fisher?

>> No.3846152
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3846152

More mspaints.

>> No.3846187

>>3842583
do u got a blog?

>> No.3846211
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3846211

How can i get better?
I hesitate to post my art here anymore cause last time i ended up a meme. rip. Anyway i just draw from imagination. I should prob learn to use refs but legit don't know how.

>> No.3846219

>>3846211
What’d you post last time that you ended up a meme?

>> No.3846231
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3846231

>>3846219
Dono if you seen the "which ngmi are you" im "muh style". rip.

>> No.3846245

>>3846231
Oh Anon, RIP indeed.
I’d push your gestures more.

>> No.3846255

>>3846245
yeah it was disheartening since i already shit on my art and know i got a ton of places to improve on and im just looking for guidance or nudges to the right direction.
but the meme made me into a confident delusional character that shoos away critique with muh style bs.

and if u try to fight it u get egged on even more. but it was also funny i guess. but im not good enough to enjoy the humor in it.

and thank u for the advice. i want to do more lineofaction gestures but im pretty sure my anatomy is broken and made up so it hard to figure out what to work on first.

>> No.3846523

>>3846255
Dude I actually really like your art :’)

>> No.3846705
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3846705

Hit me with crits

>> No.3846748
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3846748

Drew my daughter again but on a different day.
I love her too much.

>> No.3846755

>>3846705
is she putting a hand in her pocket? behind her back? because at the moment it just looks like it's phasing into her body...

>> No.3846800
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>> No.3846805

>>3846755
It's a blocky outline of her left hand. I have to draw it and another sword.

>> No.3846824

>>3845716
Hey thanks my dude, I appreciate you saying so. For clarity’s sake, is it the actual style or the technical failings that make it unappealing? I assume a ratio of the two? It would be helpful to know what rabbit to chase.

You too, >>3845648

>> No.3846887
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3846887

>>3846211
Use reference, study photos, do live figure drawing, and always think about what you are doing, what you are trying to accomplish and how you might get there. I always recommend visualizing the finished piece before starting, even if it doesn’t end up that way.
>>3845190
@Lambrey3 on twitter
>>3846106
Nope I’m a burger

>> No.3846895
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3846895

Anyone knows some good hair colouring tips? Whenever I get to the hair, it feels a lot more complex than all the rest, so I usually wing it.

>> No.3847017
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>>3846824
Your faces and expressions are what I find unappealing. I dont know, I feel like everyone is constantly screaming and suffering.

>> No.3847031

>>3846211
You're already better than 70% of /ic/, so don't give up.
I'd say michael hampton and michael mattesi would can improve your work A LOT.

>> No.3847063

>>3847017
Holy crackers, that's great! Made my year!

To your point, I think you're actually right in that I've dwelt too long on this emotionally charged scene. This first chapter has been a long lesson for me that way. I'd do it all very different. Hopefully, this scene will end relatively soon, and I can work on less exaggerated angsty stuff.

>> No.3847094

>>3846887
mods

>> No.3847126

>>3847063
no wait it's ok if your story demand it, what I dislike is how you display such emotions, I just cant stomach your faces, they are just kinda flat and hugly. Maybe you could try to experiment whit simpler page layouts, less dinamic poses and shots and more 3D shapes for bodies and heads.

>> No.3847134
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3847134

drawpile://syntheticdream.net/f0b477d2-d47a-45b3-8220-c8dc50583815

>> No.3847174

How to deal with being a zero imagination retard?

>> No.3847177 [DELETED] 

>>3844674
thanks mate. sorry man I dont have a twitter
>>3844143
viz dev thing I'm working on

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3847180

>>3844674
thanks mate. sorry man I dont have a twitter
>>3844143
viz dev thing I'm working on

>> No.3847193

>>3847174
Sit in v draw threads all day drawing bimbos for attention.

>> No.3847194

>>3847174
Look for inspiration in things that you like

>> No.3847205
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>> No.3847226

>>3847174
Watch more things, break out of your comfort zone
Don't usually watch romance? Watch some
People watch

>> No.3847304
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3847304

Critique please! I'm new to this kind of shit and digital drawing.

>> No.3847325

>>3846187
https://twitter.com/RonmeruArt

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>> No.3847431

>>3847180
I actually hate this, what the hell happened?

>> No.3847499

>>3843164
>horsey
I cannot fucking believe Arbys reblogged your drawing.
congrats anon, i bet your blog will blow up now

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3847504

>>3847499
>Arbys reblogged
I wish. I think you replied to the wrong person.

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>> No.3847719

>>3847716
I cant tell whether they are fucking or fighting in the second to last panel

>> No.3847727

>>3847431
you'll get over it

>> No.3847731

>>3847716
This looks really stilted and awful.

>> No.3847735

>>3847716
>>3847731
I mean I like it. Honestly there are much worse things posted in this thread that haven't been attacked which makes me think you are projecting your on insecurities or shortcomings.

>> No.3847742

>>3847735
Anyone who's posted anything half-competent in the thread has been attacked, it's basically expected here.

>> No.3847778

>>3847742
>I have been posting here on and off for like 2 years and I have never been "attacked" or given a single critique.

The fact is only artists with potential get critique, I hope one day to be good enough that people will hate me enough to critique my work. Or if people get "to many" (you)s then it can become a landslide of suddenly everyone and their mother wants to give a critique.

>> No.3847779

>>3847727
Your work usually has much more soul, the house is nice but everything beyond that sucks

>> No.3847805
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3847805

Nice to squeeze in some personal projects in here and there.

>> No.3847811

>>3847805
What’s going on here?

>> No.3847812

>>3847805
I'm still not sure presumably mustache is doing being half life half shilhouette.
Also the nose is creating annoying tangents with her crotch.

>> No.3847817

>>3847811
Accidentally summoned a familiar out of one of her magical radio-grimoires.

The Scottish banking shark fella was her brother's familiar.

The skull's story hasn't been set, but he is instrumental in helping the witch find and rescue her brother.

Lots of things to work out.

>> No.3847818

>>3847812
I'll decrease its size.

>> No.3847819

>>3847332
I love the look of the face, really sweet and gentle. The dick looks a bit deformed though

>> No.3847825
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3847825

Am I getting money if I slap a dick on this or nah?

>> No.3847826

>>3847825
Please don’t :’) looks cute though

>> No.3847891

>>3846887
do you still have the old splatoon drawins you did? Can't find them anymore after tumblr got purged

>> No.3848031

>>3847094
>>3845052
he's just playing with slides, anon. Chill out

>> No.3848053

>>3846887
buh bye

>> No.3848068

>>3847819
Thanks, anon. That was my first dick, i'll unironically study them later.

>> No.3848132

>>3847779
well I'll keep that in mind moving forward. I'm still learning this side of things but I'll figure it out eventually

>> No.3848139

>>3844608
Dog with a Blog?

>> No.3848144
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3848144

heh

>> No.3848148

>>3848144
MUH DICCC

>> No.3848220

>>3848144
wtf so good please blog,,,,

>> No.3848221

>>3848144
Oh shoot, I forgot to link my blog! Here it is: https://twitter.com/gigawix

I'm a 35 year old Ameri-frickin-can and I love goblins.

>> No.3848224

>>3848221
idk who keeps posting this but i'm not 35, thanks for posting my blog though please pop a follow ;)

>> No.3848228

>>3848144
>>3848221
Nice goblins, but i'd like some feet

>> No.3848229

>>3848224
>not 35
fucking DROPED

>> No.3848244

>>3848228
me too but I gotta grind them more first, stay tuned

>> No.3848246

>>3848221
wow you're so good are you going to open commision soon?

>> No.3848252

>>3848246
Well as you know I'm frickin American, which means I'm a capitalist. I'd love to make some money, so I will in the future!

>> No.3848292

>>3845262
her hair is defying gravity. nice work tho

>> No.3848295
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3848295

What is there even to draw

>> No.3848298
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3848298

>>3848295
I ask myself that question daily

I wish i knew the secret to creativity

I spend more time trying to think of an idea then drawing.

>> No.3848301

>>3845529
What an odd fellow you are.

>> No.3848325

>>3848301
What are some art discords?

>> No.3848343

go go go >>3848342

>> No.3850447

>>3839785
Someone's hungry