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3819656 No.3819656 [Reply] [Original]

What do you think of my drawing? Small doodle, nothing special.

>> No.3819662

Go to /beg/ ?

>> No.3819675

>>3819662
but then if im not wrong op got told to get out of beg when posted there

>> No.3819682

>>3819656
soft,shiny,nice

>> No.3819684

>>3819656
>>3819662
sage
off to to the drawthread or alt stylization thread, not beg.

>> No.3819720

>>3819656
Tbh I like it alot. GJ anon

>> No.3819783

>>3819656
I find her face really cute. The rendering is really smooth, gentle, and pretty

>> No.3819817

>>3819656
Pretty cute unironically
Id like to see something else, so you have any full figures, or the character in an environment or something?

>> No.3819827
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3819827

>>3819656
Actually good stuff, it kinda reminds me of shal.e's old stuff. Blog?

>> No.3819853

the lazy glossy lines are ruining the pic

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3819861

>>3819656
>Small doodle, nothing special.

>> No.3819900

>>3819656
>urushihara-style
i like you. fix the the tear duct though and move the ear up & back slightly. the positioning of her head on the neck also makes it look like she's hunching over. really good all in all though, you're almost there

>> No.3819945

>>3819656
>What do you think of my drawing?
Small doodle, nothing special.

>> No.3819953

>>3819656
>Small doodle, nothing special
God forbid people think you actually put some effort into your drawings, am i rite

>> No.3819982

do you spergs actually think OP drew this? this is obviously a joke based on another thread. >>3810090

>> No.3819985

>>3819982
...oh

>> No.3819986

>>3819982
wtf!? how could op do this to us

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3820023

>>3819982
Lord, why don't you believe me. It's just.. I saw that magical thread when I'm drawing, and deciced I need to study the art of master bait, too.

>> No.3820046

>>3820023
oh well shit, my apologies dude. I really thought you claimed someone else’s work and were trolling, carry on. got any other work to post btw? it’s really good.

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3820047

>>3819817
This is the first time I tried this style, I'm experimenting loose strokes for both lineart and rendering. My old works are tend to be too clean, so they look a bit lifeless (or soulless reee).

>> No.3820048

>>3819656
Your art is pretty fucking amateur. Whoever told you to leave beg was obviously a begfag.

>> No.3820053

>>3820048
I know they are, that's why I didn't want to leave. God bless you for telling the truth.

>> No.3820063

Oh it's that guy.
Get a trip you little shit.

>> No.3820081

>>3819662
He doesn't belong in /beg/. He clearly has been drawing for at least three years, and therefore is not a beginner.

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3820124

>>3820081
Not like this

>> No.3820138

>>3820081
>I've drawn for three years
>Not as good as op
Should I just give it up already

>> No.3820139

>>3820023
>https://bbs.nga.cn/read.php?tid=16465704&rand=887
how deep does this go?

>> No.3820140

>>3820138
Just keep drawing anon

>> No.3820142

Amazing troll OP 10/10

>> No.3820197

>>3820139
Good job google search, my original post on reddit still hasn't had any result yet, Chinese forum is so OP.
https://www.reddit.com/r/langrisser/

>> No.3820203

>>3819953
But he's right you know, it really is nothing special this is your typical 3/4 profile view blank stare animu face cropped at the bust. The only thing missing is a pretentious signature and I have to hand it to OP for not doing that.

>> No.3820220

>>3819656
i mean this is the least neg way possible, but what does your study routine look like anon? you've come a long way in your style which is no small thing and many people struggle a really long time to get there but there are underlying weaknesses to your fundamentals that are undermining the quality of your work which is why certain things and poses are so inconsistent throughout your drawings especially when you break away from the standard angles that you're used to. you come across artists like this from time to time who have very quickly mastered the superficial elements of painting but are held back because they lack the basic meat and potatoes knowledge that would make their work look truly professional. have you done any drawing from life at all? plein air especially will really help you with the quality of your backgrounds which is probably the biggest are where you're falling short right now. you have a good handle on the fancy stuff, you have an audience that likes your work, but please don't forget about the basics. you're gonna make it :)

>> No.3820250

>>3820220
Thank you so much for your advice anon. I know that my arts still have many flaws, ironically my biggest weakness is still the drawing skill. I couldn't draw good lines just because the lack of understanding of shape, form in 3d world, also don't have enough experience about human's gesture. I do draw life figures, sometimes environment too. Thanks to /ic I knew about NMA 3 months ago, and still grind their course til today.

>> No.3821347

>>3820138
change some habit in your drawing schedule.

>> No.3821367

>>3820023
>doodle
>shit load of layers
lmao @ you

>> No.3821604

>>3819656
I donno if OP is real but this is damn nice, very cute stuff.
Has a nice oldschool vibe to it
cheers

>> No.3821623

Eh, I'd fuck it.

>> No.3821643

>>3820047
Honestly if somebody tells you this is souless they are being a faggot. I get what you are saying though but I usually am in the school of thought that the cleanliness don't matter but what's behind the piece. I don't think you need to get messier, but working on improving dynamacism always helps. Honestly if the face as slightly more dynamic the whole piece would be 10 outta 10

>> No.3821712

>>3819656

It’s anime so it has no real merit. Any retard can pick up a pencil and draw a fuckable waifu.

I’d suggest you be a real artist and do realistic studies.

>> No.3821744

>>3821643
I totally agree with you that the idea behind is way more important. The reason I want to try a new style is the arts from Akihiko Yoshida, Hideo Minaba and Fujisaka Kimihiko give me the most ... feeling. I want to do something like that, I didn't draw that way when I first started, cause it's so hard for a /beg/, generic anime is easier. Now that I have more confident with my skills, I'll try.

>> No.3821745

>>3821712
Do you really believe that I don't study realism?

>> No.3821752

>>3821745

If you do then why didnt you post a realistic study instead then, you sped?

You're out here posting DA-tier how to draw manga looking shit so, no, I don't think you do.

>> No.3821757

>>3821744
>great art
>good taste in artists
>square enix inspo
Alright pleya nuff said, gave ya a follow. btw I really like the background in the finished version of this one.
I do get what you are saying. You are right. A different approach could help a lot in this case.
From what I'm seeing the more painterly and loose you go for a piece the better the outcome. Maybe you just think in painting better.
I think this new approach you are trying is lookng very promising. It has a very oldschool 90s legendary artists type of feel ( which is my favorite). keep it up.

>> No.3823934

>>3820047
hey anon do you have a blog?

>> No.3823950

>>3819656
Nothing special?! This looks AMAZING!
11/10

>> No.3824057

>>3821744
>Yoshida
Patrician taste.