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how do u know if your drawings looks like authentic japanese manga art and not a shitty western clone (pic related)?

>> No.3736885

>>3736869
it's just obvious?

>> No.3736886

>>3736869
When you stop copying from anime and using Mark Cryley's or Christopher Hart's influences and start to actually using Loomis.

>> No.3736889

>>3736869
when you get off your own ego and see your art as how it actually looks

>> No.3736891

>>3736886
samefag here, wanted to add that the nips are very subtle with forms and the changes in their planes specifically when it comes to their faces. For instance take a look at those lips instead of refining form like most "western" clones do the nips imply form in abstract manner. It is quite hard to explain in detail because of the lack of detail in the form itself but the best way we can describe it is that when it comes to Chink cartoons less is more.

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3736903

>>3736891
>>3736889
>>3736886
>>3736885
I have yet to hear any real criticism over why this pic isn't japanese enough.

>> No.3736905

>>3736903
In your case it was the incorrect use of gradient tones.

>> No.3736909

>>3736903
>why is this not anime
your shapes are too harsh and ugly. fuck off anon

>> No.3736924

>>3736903
Your shapes and forms are way too harsh - that's what makes it look western. Also, the use of screentone is completely wrong if you're going for a manga look, it looks more like a confused comic book at the moment.

>> No.3737222

>>3736869
ca3games stop fucking making new threads, I don't know why mods haven't banned you yet