/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3734490
Is this thread a bit different?

canon thread

>>3734499
This is by chico, defacto best thread

>>3734542
Suck my dick bitch

>>3734544
wow RUDE

>>3734549
POST YOUR WORK OR SUCK MY DICK BITCH

ok, apparently the other thread was made by an imposter.

>>3734542
oh ok i'm new to these alt threads

thread is already better by not having rei spam.

>>3734544
>>3734551
lel stay mad, autismo

reposting >>3734079 for more feedback

>>3734572
I like her face.
Make the design more appealing.
Like what is she suppose to be?

>>3734573
Just a girl in a white dress

>>3734580
hmm what is she into?
like hobby wise?
She just looks so plan.
I'm not telling you to put a bunch of junk on her.
Its good to know where she's from or what the weather is like in her area.
For example, it could be winter so she would bundle herself up or she could be a schoolgirl so she would either wear causal clothes or a uniform

>>3734490
If the guy from the pink elf reads this, I want to say that I like your OC.

>>3734585
She's supposed to explore dungeons

Experimenting with black shadows, dunno what it is, but it looks kinda appealing. Might be the typical DC style.

Opinions on this sort of lineless style?

>>3734612
I like it. Perfect for merch designs like lilihums

>>3734612
That's a hot bear anon, can you show his ass a little? Haha

doodlin'

>>3734610
>>3734626
nice

>>3734626
dope

>>3734626
Sicknasty!
>>3734612
Cute!

>>3734622
Ngmi

>>3734612
It's really cute and fun looking. Good for merch like the other anon said

>>3734622
Haha :)

christmas butt

>>3734778
Merry Christmas orenji
Love how you draw them butts

>>3734778
I'd love to rape her anally on Christmas night

>>3734781
Thanks and merry Christmas

>>3734782
It's not Christmas without anal rape

Drawing some SMT

the cape is fucked up but i am done with it

not too happy with this, but i will practice more anatomy and lighting and will do another miku(and other vocaloids finally)

>>3734778
blog

>>3734940
still cute!

>>3734940
It's fucking winter you mongoloid
I bet you eat ice cream when it snows

>>3734997
it's not winter everywhere to be fair. but i do live in a northern hemisphere.

Any suggestions on an art program to move onto from Paint? I grew up pretty poor without any art resources outside of MS Paint and a mouse, but now I've finally got a bit of Christmas money to put towards a tablet/Art program.

>>3734991
thank you :)

I love this time of the year.

>>3734490
I love this time of the year.

totally not a baki ripoff

finished

>>3735004
Are you kidding? I mean, I also used to be in the same position when I was really young, but jesus.

Get yourself Paint Tool SAI and either a bamboo tablet or a wacom intuos.

>>3735069
All your shit looks exactly the same

>>3735004
just pirate it bro
I've been using crack csp for 5 years

>>3735238
Post your work.

>>3735069
You like KNKL, huh?

>>3735265
Who?

>>3735263
It does. Don't get angry scrub.

>>3735278
Lol you're the only one angry here. I've been mostly posting the same type of stuff cause I've been trying to study the things you guys told me to, and I just post something once a while to the web to maintain a presence.

>>3735265
That doesn't look anything like KNKL.

i took a two week break from drawing, i failed you /ic/

>>3735300
colors.

my two OC doing cringe-worthy nasty shit for Christmas special. yes their fingers are stubby.

>>3734626
i seldom reply to other's work but this is really cool, anon.

>>3735004
Have you been living under a rock or something? MyPaint, Krita, and Medibang/FireAlpaca have been around for friggin' years. Heck, there's even GIMP, although GIMP isn't exactly geared towards digital art.
Have you seriously been using Paint all this time because you couldn't be arsed to google 'free digital painting programs'? Or even just 'digital painting programs'?
https://www.creativebloq.com/advice/the-best-software-for-digital-artists
Here you go, merry Christmas.

>>3735228
>don't realize that Medibang is the superior software

>>3735375
another year and you still cant draw hands or feet

>>3735375
you seem to be fairly confident with your art, but the pig noses are just so unappealing to look at. Maybe try drawing more appealing faces?

>>3734490
>>3734778
>>3734940
>>3735069
>>3735375
Nice contribution, gonna trace your artworks and learn from it. Any more references for learning?

>>3735441
i'm little bit surprised someone recognized me as i haven't posted my works that frequently...
i'd say i did improved overall but yeah hands and feet are still my PTSD inducing weakness. i hope to finally overcome that problem next year.

>>3735468
i wonder that ugliness comes from that line on the nose, or overall structure, or both, or else. i honestly didn't think it would be unappealing but after you pointed out it really looks kinda ugly. which one might be better? or maybe non of 'em is still bad? i'm genuinely don't know. it'll be very helpful if someone red line the shit out of that pig lady.

>>3735485
what do you mean by reference? do you want me to post more of my work or just a photo reference i use?

>>3735527
>non of 'em is still bad
lol sorry for that double negative.

Random "morning" sketch

merry christmas /ic

Rate my tomboy

>>3735679
Love it ham, that girl on the right is great

I reach the point when I absolutely cannot look at this picture any longer, at some point i thought the sky was purple, them blinked and realized i just got fucking sick of it.

So it's finished, or abandoned.

>>3735004
How the fuck did you get this grainy result? I love it

>>3735527
blog?

>>3735820
not op but it looks like it was done in mspaints black&white mode/the airbrush tool

>>3735836
>>3735820

Yep! All Airbrush. Do main lines with max thickness and fine-tune everywhere with white, fill in blacks when needed.

What do ya thiknk?
I can't draw faces

What do you think?
I can't draw faces

>>3735783
looks og
vv nostalgic

>>3736004
draw faces then you twink loving faggot

>>3734490
my elf girl is featured in the OP image OMG AAAHHHHH. thankyou for this gift of inspiration on christmas OP.
>>3734586
thx anon, i have only drawn her 3 times now and desu the other 2 looks not so great, this one i am getting better at least.

>>3734490
merry christmas

Changed up my usual workflow for this piece and did the lineart first. Any thots

>>3736104
its great

>>3735814
Looks very much not finished.
Maybe you should go for a more simple style if you dont have the patience needed for that work.
#ngmi

>>3735004
Autodesk sketchbook is free and not bad at all imo

>>3734778
blog please respond

>>3736170
I think it's OrenjiPiru

>>3736097
I also saved her the other two times you drew her.

>>3735375
The nose looks weird as fuck.

>>3736172
>interested
>check out his twitter/pixiv
>nothing but toddlercon
>nothing bigger than A cup
yikes, am I on a list now? so much skill wasted on degeneracy

>>3736236
>Having faith in animefags ever
I'm sorry for your loss

>>3736262
MODS

>>3736262
i think something is horribly wrong but i can't pinpoint what it is.

>>3736262
Gore isn't very interesting.

>>3736262
i fuck with this
reminds me of elementary school when some kids drew shitty one or two page comics and passed it around class like it was hot shit. bad art with ironic stories

post more id like to see whats in ping's long pig market

>>3736267
Gore can be interesting depending on how it's done.
Anguished and pained expressions are hard to get right, and it's fun to come up with body horror ideas.

>tfw you prefer drawing quick and easy things over spending tons of time slaving over something detailed
>too scared to simplify your style any further, lest people call you out for 'regressing'

>>3736287
Post work or shut up anon. This is not your personal blog buddy.

>>3736287
well because there's a distinction between what you like to draw and what people like to see.

>>3735305
take what you've learned about constructing the left piece and the body of the right piece, and apply it to your waifu. her head is fugly

Unfinished coloring, but eh.

Scribbled some random faces

>>3736236
>this picture of a little girl's butt make me want more
>wtf he just draws little girls' butts

>>3736287
That's why you need to practice and do studies on the side while also drawing what you normally draw. Once you start getting comfortable with the new stuff, try slowly integrating it into what you normally draw.

>>3736596
I mean that's literally all he knows

>>3735814
Not telling you to abuse filters but it can help add some variation and give it some randomness.

Where do I even find people up for anime style porn commissions these days?

>>3736767
not him but i see where you're going with this but i feel like i can't look at her face.Feels blurry.

>>3736804
The blurriness comes from the chromatic abberation he added.

>>3736835
maybe tone it down around the eyes
i like the changes he did though

>>3735375
blog?

>>3736596
I mean, let's be fair here. The pic in >>3734778
is very tame and the age is ambiguous. There's nothing but a face to go off, which is heavily stylized. His other works, however, are extremely lewd and very obviously supposed to be pre teen girls. It's disgusting.

>>3736825
>extremely detailed, realistic body
>childish, simple anime head
I don't understand why you people do this. It's like you popped off a ken doll's head and stuck your waifu's head on top. But it didn't fit, so you had to make mad scientist like adjustments.

The drawing is nice but my god, please stop doing that. pic related

>>3736986
Why don't you let the greatest contemporary artform stay the way it is and go draw your own muh realism western pig shit girls instead.

>>3736986
Because literally nobody wants to look at ugly ass 3D pig disgusting women with their sausage pig faces.
Anime faces on realistically rendered bodies are god tier.

>>3736101
It's shit and you suck

how do i make interesting colors when painting faces?
skin doesn't change hue but if i dont change it it looks stale as shit

>>3734490
Damn my shitty chibi sketch was used for the thread pic alas I never finished the drawing

>This thread
>Look at my own art
>Feel like shit

>>3737328
pump some time into your craft nigga

you can make it only if you want to

>>3737328
post your work and i will teach you anon.

>>3737359
This ones a bit of an old piece, but it will do since I can’t bring myself to finish my more recent stuff.

>>3737007
Your taste is objectively disgusting.

Also, you have completely missed my point, dipshit. My bad, I forgot the pea brains occasionally leak in here.

>>3736825
I fucking hate the internet these days.

>>3736825
post blog please

>>3736825
Based giant loli anon

>>3736804
Filters are mostly band aids. Like anything else you need to put effort into it for best result.

>>3736982
>>3736236
Don't even lurk more, just fuck back to plebbit.

>>3737536
fuck off pedophile

>>3737444
nvm i cant help you, i only know how to draw cute girls.

>>3737536
aww someone's upset

>>3734490
How's my Simpson skill?
Rate it from 1 to 10

Don't mind the color, it's a placeholder to see what's up with my lines
Turns out they are shit
https://imgur.com/a/QcQg8TL

how do i paint fire?

>>3737254
You can't add colour over your pencil black shading and expect it to be interesting
That mix it's what's failing

>>3736825
godspeed loliman

>>3737577
Control Paint has a video on that.

>>3737577
you need to be the man to draw proper fire

>>3736990
>>3737007
based incels

>>3736825
I thought it was Tanya at first, from the wicked smug. Lots of fun to look at, but her arms are off, with the right arm smaller than the other.

>>3737491
https://twitter.com/Yilxaevum

>>3736262
>its gone
That was 21 year old female you fucking cocksuckers.

>>3736316
stop bullying my waifu thanks

>>3737957
based mods

>>3737957
It still contains gore though

>>3737957
kys pedo

>>3738242
bootlicking WHORE.
>>3738243
*cartoon gore
Also it should be irrelevant since this is a red board numbnuts.
>>3738247
Put a ballgag in it, incel.

>>3738250
>You will not post any of the following outside of /b/: Trolls, flames, racism, off-topic replies, uncalled for catchphrases, macro image replies, indecipherable text (example: "lol u tk him 2da bar|?"), anthropomorphic ("furry") or grotesque ("guro") images, post number GETs ("dubs"), or loli/shota pornography.
Nah, it's a global rule, which applies to both red and blue boards. Guro obviously refers to both irl and fictional gore.

>>3738251
Define "grotesque"

>>3738254
just look at your pic

>>3738254
Your taste.

>>3738257
>>3738258
Post your work, bitch

>>3738259
>>3738250
your garbage isn't even that good to begin with

>>3738283
So how good is it.

>>3738257
>>3738258
Not him but house rules state that when confronted with a request from Anon to post your work, the one with the (you) must reply with your sketch, WIP, completed piece or screenshot of the canvas with the content therein and do so in a timely manner.

So without further adieu, post your work.

>>3738293
>imagine being this retarded

>>3738293
stop samefagging, pedo. Kill yourself

>>3738300
Not a samefag and not gonna kms
now post your work, coward, before someone gets hurt.

>this much mikufag in one thread
What's the matter, bitchboy, something happen?

>>3738330
Are you talking to me

>>3738330
Malaysia-kun? I-is that you?

>>3738330
mikufag is pedofag?

Drew the resurrection

dunno what to do with the grey, maybe finish the blackout

>>3738519
Giving it a slightly blue hue might make it stick out a bit more. Rim lighting could also help, though that might be a bit much.

>>3738478
I post this
>>3738528
And this guy crits the one below me

This whole boards a joke and I'm the only one in on it

>>3738534
It's a waste of time to critique your trash.

>>3738535
Stop giving yourself crits and crit MY stuff

>>3738528
I want to try and avoid rim lighting and see if I can allude to it instead, but the blue sounds interesting. Thanks bub

>>3738541
Not him, but you want our critiques? Apply yourself first.

>>3738478
too much text, why label the key to heaven? why not show both of St Peter's keys on the ground and have the viewer understand by just looking at it? composition looks like an after thought and preliminary, would be cool to see where it could go with more work

>>3738551
I don't want your critiques. I just want qt femanons to want to be my art gf

>>3738570
Woah now loser, don't infect me with your desperation

>>3738580
Stop roleplaying

>>3738519
I find that gap between the hair(?) and the cheek a little distracting, like a tangent. But for some reason none of the other red lines are having the same effect.

>>3738687
What a cute boy!

ghost loli

>>3738687
cute!

The lines, on the right one, are too much wobbly tho. Also looks like his right knee is too low.

>>3738729
>>3738745
>/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3738748
Cuter than anything you could possibly make

>>3738726
I didn't change the tangent but I did add more contrast with red against black throughout

>>3738734
C-U-T-E

Ok, got back into drawing a bit and did a rough sketch of one of my characters. Any advice?

>>3738771

>>3738771
CUTE
U
T
E

>>3738783
Does it look that bad? I can’t quite see it.

Is this good?

>>3738795
Cmon, add some arms and the rest of the torso into the frame. That just looks too cookie cutter. The Boobs are good though.

1st attempt at weebshit. Does this count as weebshit?

>>3738808
I’d say yes.

>>3738771
>>/beg/

>>3738771
learn how the neck connects to the head.

>>3738808
Why is she so angry?
>realistically shaped eyes, nose, and lips
No.

>>3738810
>>3738814
time to duke it out fellas

>>3738800
Better?

>>3738834
clean your screen anon

>>3738813
More like this?

>>3738834
There

>>3738834
Looks much more appealing. Try to give the shoulders a few more curves though.

>>3738848
Like that?

>>3738843
>>3738843
still too on the left, but at least it looks more 3D(forms are a bit better).

>>3738298
No, I don't want to imagine being you.

>>3738848
MUH DICK. Who's the artist?

>>3738864
Nah, that’s too straight. Makes the arms look too thinn. The shoulders curve outward, convex, and reach down a third of the upper arm.

>>3738875
How about now

>>3738869
My god, it’s gonna take a while until I got it down. Thanks for the advice, though.

>>3738905
Nah, more muscle mass. Here’s a shitty edit I did on my phone to illustrate what I mean. Your drawing is coming together nicely though.

>>3738918
true beauty

>>3738922
found you

>>3738927
what are you on about?

>>3738921
I think I got it

>>3738909
get some anatomy books from the sharethread in here, study people, etc. just because it's stylized doesn't mean things can't feel "right".

>>3738872
not them and i have no clue but here's an uncropped(?) version of that image with some text that if you can read korean will probably point you in the right direction

>>3738958
Yeah, already noticed my mistake after looking at it again. I can’t quite make out the anchor point of the neck, I think.

>>3738957
Well done. This looks much better.

soem tiem u fells ends ids ehard but ids okay cus den ppls cands look at ur highly reflectib butt en smeil .

>>3738991
Thanks for the help

>>3739102
>>3738808
>Does this count as weebshit?
I mean if you're going for a Jojo or Nana look then yeah

>>3738870
Why are you replying to a post not directed towards you and 10 hours later?

pretty satisfied with how this turned out


>>3739015
10/10 butt-sheen

>>3738918
i like this alot unironically

>>3738771
>Any advice?
draw 100 more characters. just draw alot for now and don't worry too much about perfecting each piece. your art is charming, i have faith in you anon

>>3738759
blog pls

>>3739136
send me that pizza rite naoh

>>3739132
touched a nerve probably

>>3739140
you want some 'zah, bro

>>3739151
yes, and dont send me no wendy's pls, i want pizza.

>>3739119
cool, at least i get some street rep this way

>>3735814
I's really the hair coloring thats throwing me off, maybe the face too, but just how the hair looks like one big clay block

Peni...

>>3739193
I'm an idiot, didn't attach the image?

>>3739195
You can’t draw either.

>>3739195
fuck off

>>3739212
no

hi. just doodling

Don't know why I did this. It's not even Halloween

>>3739206
>>3739212
That's mean :(

>>3738989
>>3738843
The neck points to the center point of the head.
Imagine a point in the center of the skull.

>>3739491
I think I’m falling back into thinking 2D again when I’m drawing the neck. Gonna try to fix that, thanks.

>>3739136
>>3738759

https://twitter.com/Stellarny_
https://stellare.newgrounds.com/

>>3739345
>>3739347
I like these, they are nice and dynamic. The only problem I see with them is that they are unfinished, am having the same problem as well

>>3738729
>>3734667
>>3734721
>>3734991
>>3737560
>>3738745
>>3738750
>>3738785
These are some cute comments UwU.

>>3737577
finished it yesterday. The bottom half of this is shit and i know it. Gotta give more of a shit on the stuff im less interested in painting

>>3739729
It's good but why add so many shadows in your lineart if you were going to paint it afterwards I feel like there's too much going on in his face especially

>>3739751
honestly i just wanted to sketch it but im a dumbass pothead and over did it

>>3739729
I'd advise against the pinstripe background. It's extremely noisy and draws too much attention to itself.

felt the need to draw an AR-10 toting alchemist girl from some really odd island

>>3739822
Don't get so caught up in the fine details like the wrinkles on the fingers. You should do lots of hand studies to get a better feel for the shape. Also, don't draw from imagination when you can use references.

Anon right back at ya with some more neck practice. I think I improved a little? Tell me if it still looks off.

>>3740001
Stop drawing anime and go study your fundies dude, this is not good.

I drew Spike spiegel sort of

>>3740041
nigga lmfao so bad brian

>>3740041
Do you have a mental disease or something? Regression this hard is not normal.

redraw thingy... i didn't draw a lot in the last 4 years

>>3740059
I've got Parkinson's, I should record my self portraits to show my decline in mental facility

>>3740079
Soul vs souless

>>3740220
Quite the opposite for me

Design advice? Especially regarding color choices.

The theme is 'naive village girl's first day trying to be an adventurer'.

Someone make a proper new thread soon, the Nazifag shitposter is trying to push a new /alt/ thread.

>>3740238
the theme is also totally fucking overdone, make something original for once

>>3738957

this people, is how you take and use critisicm, good work anon!

>>3740252
Could you provide some examples? I'm not that familiar.

>>3740295
>WOowowoW wacky color-coded adventure girl
absolutely fuck off

>>3740311
>high guardian spice is the first thing that came to mind
kek I was thinking Violated Heroine or DQ, but that's certainly informative.

>>3737560
>when some autist requests chisel chin chad characters in your thread filled with nothing but anime girls
why? I just want to draw cutes, is that so hard to ask?

>>3740001
You keep putting the head really far from the torso, try doing a few references drawings of just a head + upper chest.

Also please, please, please erase your construction lines when you're done with the actual drawing.

>>3739729
The thumb prominence on his right hand is really bad

>>3740238
It is not bad, but the only thing I can tell about her is that it is a girl, I can't even guess her age because it is stylized.

I mean what in the design is suppose to convey the "naive", "village girl", and "first day trying to be an adventurer"? what is a "adventurer" on this setting? what setting is this?

I hope I'm inching towards better paneling, now. I know the contrast is still lame--I'm baby stepping my way there, i swear. Clothes are darker and flesh is lighter. Now I'm unsure about my speed lines and such. The journey never ends.

>>3740238
It's an eroge?

>>3740363
The details aren't important, but I mean the term 'adventurer' in the same sense as modern Japanese western-styled fantasy you would see in LNs, RPGMaker games, etc. Other key terms being 'hero' and 'demon lord'.

I put a level of cuteness and impracticality as my first priority. Thus the skirt and the white headband, which I've heard is associated with immaturity. There's also nowhere for anything to be carried but the bib pocket. The overalls are supposed to be evocative of a rural lifestyle while still not fitting in the period to create distance from reality similar to how panties are often used. Meanwhile, I intended for the tunic to better indicate that this isn't modern. I had hoped the braid would add to a sense of homeliness. The deep V and miniskirt might compensate a little for the lack of sex appeal.

I've looked at darker browns and blonde for the hair, but the former seemed to be too homogeneous and have too much contrast with the skin and the latter came off as too high-class. Fair hair, meanwhile, seemed like a more inviting balance. Other than the headband, I figured the off-white tunic might suggest a cheaper, more worn material such as linen. I went for leathery browns for the skirt and boots for a similar reason. I used earthy colors to reinforce the ideas of farming and comfort, but have two major concerns. For one, everything is a different tone of one color, which is both bland and unfashionable. Second, I feel like the colors can very easily be taken to look like every variety of literal shit.

Thoughts?

>>3740454
I was deliberately leaving that out, but yes.

>>3740079
you learned how to improve your art, but not how to resize the image?

>>3734490
Everyone please report, sage and hide the thread. Don't fall for the OP nazifag spamposter's bait threads, get him banned again.

>>3740376
Paneling is much better now, still needs work but you're spicing things up and that's really nice.

>>3740585
This thread isnt even at bump limit yet but people keep posting art in the Nazi thread.

>>3740692
You can solve that by making a proper new thread and link it here. People will just go to the Nazi thread because "oh there is nothing else" and they are lazy to make a new one themselves.

>>3739581
You always try to make a complete illustration?? Try to have some fun with it, man.

>>3740966
favorite person on /ic/

>>3740966
do miku next please

>>3736236
still not bad as thatfisher

>>3740966
i love seeing your work basically every time i come to /ic/, it's like you're a fixture in the board culture at this point. you do stuff other than the giantess city crushing stuff right? i think i remember you posting something about it a while ago.

>>3740966
your colors look different this time

>>3741038
From time to time yeah. Thank you for the words of encouragement

>>3741041
This is cute

I really don't know what I'm doing...

>>3740464
Didn't you say the other day that your art wasn't good enough to make an eroge yet? What kind of game? What engine? What fetishes?
I think the protag looks too brown. Add at least ONE accent of another color, like a green ribbon. Or just try less hard to make her look plain. And I think the short skirt already makes her sexual enough, but you could go further.

>>3739132
>>3739142
I had to get a new ip

>>3741041
this is awesome nigga!

>>3740464

yeah I can guess what the term means, the point is that I can see it on the design. She has nothing that is commonly associated with adventurer, as a weapon, a staff, a bag, that cape with hood thing, etc.

I think that the skirt ruins the rural look of the overalls. I would suggest to remove the skirt and make the overall more fantasy-looking (like the cowgirl from goblin slayer, it has some uncommon buckles) to make the setting more clear. Or just give her a peasant-like dress.

the white headband is not doing its job tho. maybe it is too small, or it just me. I would try different headdress with different sizes.

Maybe you are limiting you self too much with the colors here. The worn off cheap thing can be suggest by any washed out color and/or texture. And there is no reason for the skirt and the overall be made of leather or the boots even.
If you are set with the hair color, make it the primary color and choose the others based on it using one of that color scheme things.

I suggest you to make lots and lots of quick sketches trying different ideas — assuming that you are not already doing it—, because it is easier to come up with a good design this way, and post the best ones here to get some feedback too.

Hey guys, once this thread hits bump limit use up this thread >>3733801 next so there isn't an overcrowding on the board, and since there is activity in that thread picking up there.

>>3740966
Dude you need to step something up.
Your works are solid but they've been solid for a long time already.

Try and make your next work real fucking serious with rendering and colors and smooth out your brushstrokes.

>>3740966
get your anatomy right and you'll level up insanely

>>3741437
This is the hardest step for me right now, I have no idea where to go. The best way I can think to get out of this rut right now is to pick up some clay modelling and do some actual things that will force me to think in 3d.

>>3741434
I get the sentiment, but it feels like whenever I do that it just ends up being "another piece"...

Giving up on this.

>>3734490
yo, have any new books about drawing manga been translated or made in the last few years?
i'm not talking about drawing, but making manga specifically. comicking is fine too.

send halp. i'll take articles or snippets too..

>>3741463
I think some composition choices and doing more than glorified pinups could help. Your drawings are always just muscle girls on a broken city. At best they're stepping on things. Give us something more than just a girl on a background. Give us big girls interacting with animals or building buildings, just something more in action.

>>3741463
try studying all the photos in hyper angle, and try studying figurines of the characters you draw. i feel like you need to study weird angles to get a fully 3d sense of how things fit. (study porn if you want, they have weird angles) also practice more readibility. never forget to make your painting tiny then see if you can understand it. like for this drawing the sky is too similar to the ground in value so they both just fuse. it's kind of frustrating to have those smaller things between things looking full pro level, but luck my man.

>>3740079
She lost her personallity.

heres a mountain

>>3740001
Some more anatomy studies anon. I am not an expert but I tried changing some things that looked wrong.

>>3742200
Nvm I messed the neck up myself.

>>3742200
>when you spend all day on a drawing and end up liking the shitty rough sketch the most.

I'm not sure if I'm just impatient and don't leave enough time for doing line weights and coloring correctly, or if it's an experience thing but damn it's kind of frustrating.

>>3742200
>>3742220

>>3742224
Get used to it.

>>3742230
>mfw.jpg

I feel like part of it is the illusion of detail in the sketch from all the scratches. Lets my brain think that someone actually knew what they were doing, but then when I get down to solidifying each line I don't really have the knowledge yet so replicate what I was "seeing" in the sketch.

>>3742224
your linework is decent. Learning how to color and shade is another thing to consider

>>3742234
Thanks, I'm usually burnt out by coloring time, so I think I'll just start focusing color practice next.

>>3742224
The sketch has values. Even if it's just half assed shading it has values atleast.

Try shading your drawing buddy. Adds depth

>>3742225
What is this meme? I am confuse.

>>3742239
Thanks man, I did actually have shading on it but it looked terrible so I just hid the layer. I think I'm gonna come back to it tomorrow or in a couple days, clean up some of the line weights and do some proper coloring practice on it instead of this rushjob, cause looking back at the sketch I feel like I could have done a lot better with it.

>>3742200
lmao

Any tips or info pics on drawing anime stylized hair? I feel like I'm just drawing spikes.

>>3743765
post work with spiky hair and maybe someone can help you with your problem

>>3743797
I have no idea what I'm doing, that's the problem.

>>3743798
Maybe study other references with less spiky hair?

>>3743810

>>3743812

Giving it another go.

>>3743877
... This should help.

been sick lately

how long did it take you to learn to draw a fucking appealing eye?

Guy who sucks at drawing necks here. Studied some of the muscles as well as the spine and shoulders. Does this look any less bad?

>>3744559
Looks like Rons simplification. Rewatch his video, he breaks down the neck like 10 million times.

>>3744571
Link? I don’t think I watched that yet. I only saw Proko’s video.

>>3744559
Still like a giraffe neck, but otherwise it's a step up.