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It's about Tsuyu waking up, shibari tied up and Himiko Toga is with her on a bed
Himiko starts light torturing her like biting her hard till she breaks skin and licking the bite marks
Some stunt cock walks in the room, Himiko choking Tsuyu while getting fucked hard from behind
sweat everywhere and sore buttcheeks from spanking
Himiko grabs Tsuyu by the hair and forces her to throat the cock
She's in tears at first but she eventually lets go and wraps her tongue around it while sucking
Himiko joins in and they take turns, huge load of jizz on Himiko ahegao
Man lays down on the bed, Himiko facesitting while still tied up Tsuyu keeps giving head with her arms on her back
Frog is just insatiable and goes down to the hilt as she takes a load in her throat
Himiko gets mad because she wasn't allowed to steal the cum, she slaps her and ties her by the hair to the headrest
She takes her box cutter and says she's gonna carve SLAVE on her
she starts cutting the rope to expose some skin, Tsuyu is visibly terrified
Man puts a hand on her throat and starts fucking her legs on shoulders
Himiko starts forcefully making out with her, biting her lips as she squirms
Himiko makes the motions with her blade across Tsuyu's naked belly and nipples
Tsuyu reaches orgasm, big load of cum inside
Himiko drops the box cutter and starts licking her cunt
Something about feet on the someone's face.
Himiko goes sub afterwards, I guess Tsuyu now free of ropes pushes her face down on the pillow while she gets fucked
Everyone fucking like rabid bunnies, cum everywhere
Damn this stuff is hard to write

Any ideas? Nothing gross or weird please

>> No.3733497

she's a cute anime girl

>> No.3733507

>>3733483
What is sexier, a regular gag or a ball gag? What's the difference in practice?
I think I want Tsuyu to have a ball gag in the first part

>> No.3733523

>>3733507
Probably just personal preference anon. Though a regular (cloth?) gag would make it easier to bite down.

>> No.3733529

>>3733523
I don't think Himiko would allow Tsuyu to bite down
I think you get to hear more squeaks with a ball gag?
I'll go with a ball gag I think

There are guests and children around the house and christmas sweets baking and I'm here researching BDSM for fun
Merry Christmas everyone btw

>> No.3733541
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Himiko try to get away but tsuyu tie her like this with her tongue

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>>3733541
>Shibari with the tongue
You are a fine gentleman of taste

>> No.3733576

>>3733529
Merry Christmas. It could be interesting if Toga was threatening to do permanent damage from the start, like a psychological torture thing

>> No.3733610

>>3733576
>Toga playing with Tsuyu's hair, saying she's cute
>She pulls her hair painfully and gets in her face
>I bet you bleed nicely
She licks the ball on her ball gag
>I'm going to eat you alive, you know
>She stats biting down on her

Interestingly though I don't have that much room for torturey stuff without going into straight up torture. All in all what can you do? You can choke someone, pull their hair, bite them, slap them, spank them, tear/cut their clothes off
everything else like living furniture strikes me as stupid and nonsensical or it's based on grossness like dirty panties, I want more raw stuff but most of the ideas I have are too painful and squicky
I could do body writing but I want the box cutter threats later on so it's redundant

I swear writing this erotic stuff is tough

I'm dining with guests and watching Christmas movies and I can't help but think about this story

>> No.3733620

Who's drawing that?

>> No.3733626

>>3733620
Me when I'm good enough

>> No.3733662

>>3733626
I like you. Post it here when you finish it

>> No.3733673

>>3733610
I wasn't thinking she'd actually *do* any of the torture, just threaten to mutilate/kill to freak Tsuyu out and enjoy her fear a bit.

Also what is living furniture

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>>3733673
>just threaten to mutilate/kill to freak Tsuyu out
I like that!

So my script is somewhat broken down into 4 sections:
>Tsuyu wakes up (drugged?), psychological torture, biting, slapping, threats, hair pulling, what have you. Himiko spooks her erotically
>Man joins, sex begins. Himiko still doms the shit out of Tsuyu, escalates with Tsuyu's ropes being cut off with the box cutter
>Role reversal sort of, Tsuyu still panicked fights back and strongarms Himiko into sub, Himiko gets the dick this time
>This resolves with the two of them making out passionately in the end covered in semen
>Tsuyu may or not be broken psychologically by the sexual frenzy
I guess the guy has a quirk that gives him an unlimited reservoir
Also I just realized it's noncon for Tsuyu (at least at first) which I'm not sure if I'm ok with

>>3733673
>what is living furniture
using your sub as furniture to sit on/whatever, it's a humiliation thing