/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3716318
what's up with that westerner kana lol

About time I colored this piece.

>>3716531
Well at least you are still drawing...

>>3716318
OP artist, do you have other blogs aside from artstation? Twitter maybe?

first time trying to draw lewd stuff... any critique?

Redline please? Anything super wrong with it? Sorry for screenshot

>>3716531
I don't get you, you draw relatively well faces and bodies, but fuck up so hard with the hair

it's obviously not a problem of skill but of choise. so I must ask, why? why do you draw the hair like that

hold up, this is better

>>3716575
Maybe because the "problem" is non-existent and comes from you.

>>3716531
What the fuck is up with these proportions? What the fuck is up with these colors? What the fuck is up with their faces? And, like the guy above said, what the fuck is up with their hairlines and lack of volume in the front bangs?
I expected better of you after seeing your grayscale pics on /jp/ and here in the past, and also some colored Tatsumakis.

>>3716588
> 0 argument

Pretty shit "critic", mate. Let's see you doing a redline of it.

>>3716531
??? This is TGS? Your quality is surprisingly inconsistent. Your recent One Piece fanart was way better than this

>>3716600
No can do, m8. %)
But you wouldn't mind a little paintover that doesn't require a major overhaul, would you?

>>3716652
Oh, right, that cross on her thigh means a question: did you intend to put the pussy at this level?

>>3716652
Her front hair aren't supposed to be eyebrows lenght.

>>3716318
Wow.This drawing is cool. Who did it?

>>3716652
And here's a quick attempt to improve the colors as well.

>>3716662
Oh.
Is there a view from the side, though? I'm not yet convinced that her bangs have so little volume.

>>3716677

mikejordana.com

>>3716678
Merascylla looks like a high as fuck slut in your paintover.

>>3716680
>mikejordana.com
Thanks anon

>>3716564
h-hot

>>3716678
They does have little volume.

>>3716531
OH NO NO NO NO NO

>>3716678
Not all characters have hairstyles hiding their full forehead.

>>3716678
>>3716699

>>3716680
What the fuck is he doing here? He's actually good.

>>3716685
Actually, that's what I think about the original drawing.

>>3716693
I'd say the bangs still protrude farther than the original drawing implies. The position of the far sidelock in this view is also notable.

>>3716702
I can't agree that works very well even in this manga shot. (Huh, I saw one /beg/-tier guy draw this character at the start of the year and thought it was his original content, lol.) And if the author of the fanart changed her look this much, why not go for what looks more organic in a more realistic depiction?

>>3716712
> Actually, that's what I think about the original drawing.

Original had the "smug & confident" look, yours just looks retarded, honestly.

>>3716564
I think it looks a bit weird but I don't know exactly why... could someone comment/redline, please?

>>3716690
t-thanks... it's my first time drawing lewds and it's harder than I thought...

>>3716716
How interesting. I have a totally opposite opinion. Say, if you aren't the author, do you happen to like to draw very muscular and evil-looking demons?

>>3716564
this has lotsa potential, but i feel her arms are short

This was from the space chick thing last night. Someone called my space girl i drew a space merchant (she was pretty busted). I drew an actual space merchant.

Does anyone have advice for the "zoom" percentage to draw at. Using programs always feels so clunky. I suppose that's relative to canvas size though.

>>3716717
I agree it is harder than it looks, but you really are on the right track with the pose and expression as well as the action, it is very hot desu, as other anon mentioned her arms may be a bit too short; other than that I think you should not worry too much, given its your first time its bound to not be perfect

>>3716756
What do you even mean? It doesn't really matter, just zoom at a level you're comfortable with and be sure to always zoom out to check how the thumbnail looks.

Also, canvas rendering quality always looks the best at halves (100%, 50%, 25%, 12.5%, etc.), if you're bothered with how the canvas sometimes looks blurry

>>3716564
Maybe the right breast is too high, because it should follow the right shoulder. But I cant tell how much the breasts are been pulled up by the hands, so I am not sure about that.

>>3716769
I'm not sure what i meant. But I didn't know the halves things. Thank you. It's just whenever i work in mspaint the 1px pencil tool at the default zoom feels so nice. I'm trying to get use to Photoshop/CSP

>>3716564
>>3716793
The way her right leg and the hip connect bothers me. Also the shoulder/armpit. But I don't know how to fix it.

>>3716815
1 px brushes don't work very well in CSP or Photoshop, iirc. Try out SAI.

How are my proportions this time?

I have a question about the lineart.

A lot of mangakas(and artists in general) use the brush setting which changes size depeding on the pressure. While I'm familiar with such tool and have to problems using it to draw faces, I have trouble controlling lines when I try to draw bodies or big objects in general. Because of this I always end up using a brush which doesn't change in size that much. Or has a fixed size.
Do you have any tips in this regard?

>>3716844
You're not drawing with form in mind, stop trying to draw form imagination and study from life.

>>3716850
>Do you have any tips in this regard?
Yeah, it call practices. Get to it fag.
General rule is, Thick line = places with more shadow, Thin line = places with more light.

>>3716531
lol the crabs are out in full force, i love it bruv <3

>>3716581
no not that anon but the hair looks like spaghetti or trash

Does this fit in here? Any feedback on it?

Hai domo

>>3716943
10/10

>>3716943
hot

>>3716943
power of christ compels you!

>>3716943
When wil God stop your sinful hand

>>3716943
post more sketches kyle

>>3716564
>>3716793
is this better

>>3716943
post higher resolution faggot

>>3716943
work on your portions, they look ridiculously fat and not in the sexy kind of way, especially kizuna. she looks retarded.

>>3716943
i made it better

i think i want to look more into studying lighting in the future. and maybe backgrounds

>>3716564 (You)
>>3716793
is this better?

Is this /porn/ or /alt/?

>>3717029
There's difference?

>>3717024
yeah it does. I am not sure about the small gap between the legs tho. It is creating a tangent there and I want to say that the thighs are too thin but this might be just my taste.

>>3717024
oh yes that is much much better, the change in the legs makes the pose more dynamic, i think that's what it was missing

>>3717051
>>3717069
Fixed the legs a bit, now she's slightly thiccer and the gap is smaller.

She's supposed to be thin but maybe I made her a bit too thin (https://img.gta5-mods.com/q95/images/girls-frontline-hk416-animated/dc7dad-__hk416_girls_frontline__6dc446ef214d22a93643886f6703c202.png).).

Now I don't know what to do with her right arm... I was thinking about making her touching herself or covering her pussy (so I don't have to draw it lol) or maybe just have it raised like the other arm...

>>3716943
>>3717018
delicious

>>3716854
Thanks anon.

>You're not drawing with form in mind
What do you mean?

apologies to keep posting minor updates, but i'd love to know if the far arm/hand feels like it's in proper perspective? i spent over an hour redrawing it and feel super stuck and now i've gotta go to work. also cute lil spiral tail, ye or neigh? also i might give them a pudgier belly, still thinkin on it.

>>3717228
holy shit that brush looks amazing...what program do you use? what are your settings?

how does the easel look in this

>>3716925
Are you putting "spaghetti" and "trash" at the same level?

>>3717340
It looks messing and portions obviously look freehand, but it it looks correct enough for a sketch. Do you need help making sure it's correct?

>>3717371
It looks messy**

>>3717082
posting progress in case anyone cares

>>3717377
Don't post any more "progress". Make one post when it is completed. Having every single anon nitpick your process through each step will make you second guess yourself. Just finish the piece, post it, take what criticism comes, and move on. If you keep posting for attention/validation/minor process corrections/edit suggestions, you'll spend literal days on a single piece and get tired of looking at it.

>>3717382
Got it. Sorry if this is considered spam or something, I just wanted to post what I have so far before going to bed.

Got bored pretty quick with it

>>3717423
Same

Good night everyone!

>>3717618
Are you the titty sucking guy

>>3717620
I am! You mean the like weird breast feeding pics?

>>3717018
Boobs are 3D objects not 2D planes. Why do they not interact with the leg under them? The left one shoul be pushed up and pull the right one a little to the left due to clothes.

>>3717618
why do you always draw john c. reilly?

>>3716318
Rip apart my asshole. I know i need to actually study clothing and not guess so much, but i wanted to create something for colour practise that shows my current skill.

>>3717618
Love your stuff m80. What are your goals with art? Feel like you oughta do something with it or take it somewhere but idk, maybe your content to just draw like me.

>>3717259
-photoshop cs6
-lazy nezumi default "subtle" smoothing
-kyle's drawing box animator pencil 2016 (i set the flow to 100%, it defaults to 29% iirc which is great for sketching but if you want a more final line look you want less transparency) at the default 7px
-hard round pressure size eraser (keep it small relative to your lines, i think i have it at 15px, gives better control of your pressure levels)
-cintiq 13hd (it has tilt which is crucial for most brushes that i like the feel of, most especially the kyle one i used to draw pretty much every line drawing i've made for the past two years)
-years of experience not only with drawing but drawing specifically with these tools and brushes

the cap i posted of that drawing is at 50% so you can get a feel for how big i tend to draw it, keep in mind you can just increase the brush sizes as it gets larger but in my experience the pressure level control gets much more finickier which bums me out but hey, maybe i just need to practice more.

oh here's that brush by the way (tho it might be sliiiightly edited compared to what it was default when i first got it of his gumroad years ago (it was a free brush so i don't feel bad about sharing (tho also he makes his brushes for adobe officially now and if you have CC you literally have every brush he's made lol))): https://www.sendspace.com/file/3esyze

What can I do to make these action shots more thrilling? Especially the last panel, I'm not sure how to approach making that stab look painful beyond what I've done.

Also, how little background can you get away with in action scenes? This page for example. I should give the ground some texture, but what about the walls behind the characters?

>>3717805
I hate that God damned red star effect I put there, holy shit.

>>3717423
Blog?

drawing cute girls and setting unrealistic expectations for myself are the only fun art thing for me to do at this point

>>3717667
Stiff. His hands are saggy.

How would you color this without it looking like shit? I tried everything but it always look like absolute shit. It seems I can't color with flat colors/no shading.

>>3717671
I want to draw a comic one day. I'm learning how to paint. . . Very badly, but still. i want to do lots of stuff. But my favorite thing in the world is this.

>>3717667
Neck missing

>>3717959

>>3717959
this is masterpiece....

bacon girl.....

bacon girl...

>>3718176
UNICORNS, SHOW PONIES, WHERES THE BEEF

>>3716844

>>3718251
Seriously my dude, listen to that other Anon and draw from life.

how do comic book/manga artists know where to place pure black shading in their drawings?

>>3718251
your linework is pretty good but your anatomy is beyond broken. Take a break from anime for a while and come back stronger.

>>3718274
Same principles as line weight.

I was paid to draw this and told to make it as intentionally shitty as I could.

My question is; Is it shitty enough?

>>3718286
Flatten the right hand so it looks more 2d. Make it look like that left hand

>>3718286
you gotta put effort into it still. the background looks rushed, but actual bad artists take time to refine their shittiness. try blending the colors a lot and make it as obnoxious as possible. and the actual characters look way too good, ruin their anatomy a little

>>3718253
>>3718277
Yeah, I am already drawing from life, but I probably should draw much more.

Can someone tell me what is so wrong about it tho? I just can't see it. Probably because I looked at it so much.

>>3716531
twitterfaaaaag i missed you and your horrible art! are you still shitting yourself everytime someone criticzes your garbage?

>>3717228
That bulge offends me and I like traps.

has anyone been having trouble with scrolling/moving the screen in csp lately?

Its stuttering for me, but moving is the only things that's the issue and nothing else has issues.

>>3718592
it's placeholder, gonna redraw it when i'm happy with the shorts so that they both fit together better. don't worry, femboys used to be one of my specialties

>>3718006
>>3718049
Improved? I can't get the leaning arm to look natural.

>>3718286
look up sweet bro and hella jeff and take some notes

>tfw fail the pixiv contest
Bros, i'm sorry, i tried my best. M-Maybe next time.

>>3718715
The neck is better but the form is still quite stiff. His shoulders are rigid and there's no sort of rhythm between them, his torso, and his arms. The composition itself is also kind of awkward; he's apparently outside at some kind of dinner event, but he's also smoking and staring dreamily into the palm of his hand? What are you trying to communicate with this scene?

>>3718929
cute!

>enjoy drawing and inking a lot more than painting
>but really like the look of paintings
Is there examples of artists who found a happy medium to this

>>3716564
you want to study the female form more (and just form in general) to give more life to your lewds. she has no bones in her pelvis, and virtually no ass.

when studying, memorize landmarks of the skeleton to serve as a sort of roadmap when drawing the body. most anatomy books will point these landmarks out, but the book i prefer is "Figure Drawing" by Michael Hampton

there's a lot to learn, so don't overwhelm yourself. focus on drawing alot if you want to improve quickly. for the best results, draw every day! good luck anon

>>3718929
Glovepussy and horns are my weakness

Trying to add more texture to my stuff

>>3718979
Is this supposed to be an improvement?

>>3718979
You literally fixed nothing, you need loomis

>>3718979
>the eyes
OH NO NO NO NO NO

>>3718979
Yours is just as flat as his! Study form and construction more. Cylinders, block, etc.

>>3718274
>skelly with big boobs
capefags are so embarrassing

>>3719331
But a skelly with big manly muscles is fine?

pls help
I need to figure out a way to stylise the face in manner that is appealing to me and suits my needs, but I can’t find a decent way to find GOOD western artists that are not painters.

I can go to manga sites for animu.
I can go to sadpanda for hentai artists and lots of artbooks, but their western section is disorganized as fuck.
I can go to western comic scan sites, but capeshit is fairly standardized oand when it isn’t it’s drawn by a temp, and it generally gives off a sweatshop vibe, like they put in the absolute minimum of time into a page. I got some good color ideas, but having to look at pencil and ink separately is exhausting. Euro comics are too out there for what I’m after.
I tried webcomics, but 60% were furry and the rest were terrible.
Deviantart and Artstation are garbage dumps in terms of site design, and getting anywhere is a slog, I’m either wading through trash or seeing nothing but overrendering pros and trend of the week memery.
Where the fuck am I supposed to go?
Pic unrelated

>>3718929

>>3719481
Learn from more realistic manga styles and say it's western.

>>3719481
I'm having the same problem with this too. I think the only way to do it is to immerse yourself with the western community/forums/social media and hope you can discover good artists there.

>>3719485
ACKSHUYALLEE, that is a Japanese-published manhwa, sweetie.
It’s also more disjointed stylistically than pretty much any manga I’ve ever seen, what with trying to blend “realistic”crosshatched males with ultra uguu females and super deformed chibi, commonly also crosshatched for some reason, on top.

>>3719490
What western community, though?
I know of /ic/, deviantart, that one site with porn I can’t remember the name of, disjointed platforms like twitter and tumblr where I have no idea how to hunt down people I don’t know of in the first place, and forums that have been dead for years.

>>3719585
>that is a Japanese-published manhwa, sweetie.

It's published in japan, it's a manga.

>>3719585
Honestly I can't give much advice since I'm still lost myself.
But on Discord servers, people often posts inspirations on designated channels. So if you can find an artist with a certain taste you're looking for, you can probably also catch them post some of their inspirations there
On Twitter/Tumblr it's also a similar thing, if you find just one artists with a style you're interested in, it can easily lead you to a ton of other similar artists by just browsing their retweets/reblogs.
Pinterest is also a very great way to find thousands of images stylistically related to what you're looking for. It can be a seriously deep rabbit hole of timesink, if you're careful.
For Reddit, you can probably also catch some nice art posts occasionally, but I'm not too familiar with it.

You can also look into popular video game or movie concept art and see if you can find any good artists there

I recently found this western artist that make some really cute stuff this way.

>>3719606
*if you're not careful

>>3719355
Yes. Would fug.

>>3719326
My understanding of form isn't as solid as I'd like, but I like to think I got my main points across.
If my attempt bothers you enough to leave 4 replies, you could try redlining it. Maybe you could teach me a a few things.

You wouldn't leave me hanging, right senpai?

>>3719603
Here’s your manga for the night, sir.

>>3719773
Quality =/= it's a manga

Plenty of western looking manga drawn by japs exists. Frankly there is no actual rule, so while your point stands, it's as pointless to talk about as debating with crap like "is OPM shonen or seinen".

>>3719585
Kinda like Berserk

>>3719804
>quality
I wasn’t implying peepo choo is of lower “quality” than the average manga at all, just that stylistically it is obviously not, just like how skr is obviously stylistically korean for anyone who knows what a manhwa is.
As for no rules, I was literally replying to to someone defining manga as something locally published in Japan, so...

>>3719816
Berserk never went full uguu, even when it was all loli unicorn elves.

>>3719827
Anon come on

>>3719829
That’s not uguu, that’s moe

bakugou x tsuyu child

>>3719866
Casca in the last chapters was very uguu honestly.

>>3719934
cute. her arms are too long though
and please RESIZE

>tfw the more you understand anatomy and perspective the more you 're scared to draw in a stylized way for some reason

Anyone already had this problem? Any tips/experience? I fucking love ulra stylized stuff and I don't really resonate with semi-realistic.

>>3719939
Can you post some examples of what you mean by ultrastylized stuff?

>>3719481

>>3718979
its mostly better, dont listen to the crabs.

I made a comic about a figure drawing class I went to when I was 19

>>3719965
Do artists really clap for the model when the class is over?

>>3719966
no lmfao, what the fuck

>>3719965
>steals your car

>>3719966
If their tits are big enough, yes. It's hard having big tits be a punchline on /ic/ cause you guys draw titty monster inflation porn.

>>3719940
Something like those

https://www.instagram.com/blackysan/?hl=en

http://minomush.tumblr.com/post/180949599317

http://mylydy.tumblr.com/

https://www.instagram.com/violainebriat/

But there are various styles.

>>3719869
cute

>>3717618
my only complain is that lighting should be more yellow/orange and have the shadows be darker

>>3719939
it's time to break the rules now that you know them

>>3719934
I like the face. the mouth in particular, how the bottom just infers the bottom.
>>3719003
I really like the bottom of the dress on the pose where she's sitting. it really "pools"

I rushed the coloring process. wanted to get done before bed.

>>3718892
I believe in you, anon!

2nd character in the game im doin

Goldfish punch!

>>3719482

>>3719485

Cool but his mouth placement is weird

>>3716318

Nice OP used my drawing as thread starter

Here's the last one of the Bloodborne fanarts

>>3720607
how did anime manage to get even more formulaic, i feel like all anime, professional and teen-tier had been whittled down to like 4 characters. there used to be at least 12.

>>3719961
a friend said my redline strays too far from the original's style, so i see now how it could be taken the wrong way

>>3720669
No, the problem is that you took mistakes and just redrew them into different mistakes.
It’s “better” in the sense that it’s more confident, the forms more solid and you’re not chickenscratching as much, but the anatomy is still wrong, the proportions are still wrong even where you “fixed” them, and the face is strictly worse in every way conceivable including somehow managing to to make his shovelface symbol drawing less adhering to forms while killing any appeal it had.

>>3720619

>>3719934
good one, Rush. those high heels are lovely.

is it just me or is it super difficult to find anyone accepting commissions for line art

every time I find someone with the right style they have been inactive since 2016 or they're too active and popular and booked for the foreseeable future

>>3720984
I don’t know, I don’t pay people to draw for me

>>3721029
wtf

>>3721038
they saw it

>>3720617
Is this based on something?
Looks like Amelia (or whatever), but without her size the proportions look off. Looks like normal human proportions but that head throws it all incredibly off because of how large it is, especially with how lithe everything else is.
It works better when she's the size of a building but everything is proportionally scaled correctly, but this looks human sized and off.

It's a bit rough, kind of like where the design is going though

>>3720814
I love that two of them are supposed to be twins.

>>3716318
I'm finally working on the characters I've wanted to make for years now.

>>3720694
>shovelface

>>3719961
>dont listen to crabs
>literally tells people to stop drawing in the beginner thread

go back to being invisible thanks, trash

Latest two pages. Fishing for advice and/or attention, as always.

>>3721874

>>3720855
Did you use a reference? the breasts look very uneven.

>>3720617
you have a blog friend?

>>3721821
I'm doing them a favor, completely different. Giving up early is the right move in more than 80% of artists. And the right move for more than 95% of artists I target.

With Pixiv's Whitecube UI update being completely rolled out, is there no way to see the Software used under each artwork anymore? In the old UI, you can see what software is used if the artist decides to list it.

>>3721885
>im doing them a favor
no youre a petty little bitchboy who likes bossing other people around.
dont make me humiliate you again pussy
how's that purple hair portrait going? still garbage? after all this time? wow

>>3720669
thats not my view of it

>>3721896
Yikes. You need to study more anatomy. That ribcage/torso in general is fucked seven ways to Sunday.

>>3721896
Nosebro you're fucking terrible, stop posting.

>>3721896
OH NO NO NO NO

>>3721896
>trying too hard

>>3721896
Why didn’t you fix the left hand?

>>3716531
It's not even the hair that's the problem, the art is just subpar looking in general.

>>3721996
Post you work, crab.

>>3716531
it's the nasty pillow shading that makes it bad

>>3716531
This is deviantart-tier. The coloring and hair are horrendous.

>>3721999
no

>>3719003
blog? love this

>>3719102
Torso too long friendo.

>>3722005

>>3720424
You like modeseven, huh?

>>3722188
pure coincedence on this design but yes

>>3721999
haha dude don't get salty that you're still shit after all these years. Just get over yourself and maybe find a new occupation. Nobody wants to buy your chicken scratch animu drawings.

>>3722052
Hey thanks bro it started as a bust shot. I knew the torso was too long but I kinda drew it as an afterthought.

>>3722037
Thanks. https://twitter.com/inkpleb

>>3716318
Hmm, maybe I'm being paranoid but I've been studying animals lately since it's one of my weakpoints, and done some imagination stuff with it.
Thing is I'm sure I read somewhere around here that furry shouldn't be posted and I guess doing anthropomorphic stuff is considered furry? I'm not really sure, it's outside of my expertise desu.
I did try to look for it under the HEED THE rules under the sticky but it don't seem to find it for /ic/, my issue would be, would pic related be an example of something allowed or not?
In case it is, critiques are welcome, else sorry and is there any place I could ask crits about it?
Thanks in advance.

Prompts from the website

>>3721896
i like this alot more, except for the face
but general consensus is that every face is shit no matter what you do

so nice job

>>3721901
how so? can you show us the correct way? for something that's "fucked up seven ways to sunday", i'm having a hard time pointing out very many (that aren't just personal preference)

>>3722590
>he read the sticky
>AND the rules
i want you to stay and keep posting, but at the same time /ic/ doesn't deserve you, newfriend

never really done comics/manga before, and kinda making story as i draw.

its hard to describe what style this would fall under. but i was hoping for something non cliche. all though i really do like classic manga styles like dragon ball or one punch man.

>>3722590
Blog? this looks great
>furry
If it's not sparkledog tier then you're good

>>3721914
>>3721901
>>3721923
snib snib motherfucker

>>3722590
full feral face with full anthro body is best.

Pic is me n u.

>>3722774
Aint nobody jealous of you lmao

>>3721029
A nipple?

>>3722726
the style is a slightly more detailed "guy who did invader zim"

>take a small break from drawing
>started learning how to juggle
>after 2 days I made some gains
Was it the break or the extra gray matter?

Bayonetta from yesterday. I had a bad headache today so I couldn't draw much.

>>3722890
How many times are you going to post this shit?

i drew my charcter for dnd yesterday.

>>3722700
Last prompt before bed

>>3722972
igram?

>>3722974
Literally new:
www.instagram.com/mothesstuff

>>3722890
Rude af

w.i.p

>>3716318
more drawpile stuff

>>3723034
But why anon.

>>3723433
Blog? Solid stuff

Anatomy still bothers me a bit, but I will try to get it out by the month's end

>>3723531
yikes

>>3723433
Aw hell that's fucking amazing
Blog??

>>3723708
That fact that is leaning really bothers me

>>3723713
I realized too, but it was too late since I was pretty much done and didnt wanna work on it more. couldn't rotate it either since it's pixelart.

trying to push a more retro style. ahhh comics are tedious!

is anybody getting a retro vibe? thoughts are welcome.

>>3723433
Cute mobrei <3

>>3723705
please help

>>3723531
n i c e

>>3722890
blog?

>>3723531
the whole shoulder area is fucked to heaven. how the hell is a raised shoulder lower than a resting shoulder?

>>3723960
The shoulder looks fine to me.

I want to take on more commissions because I need money, but it gets in the way of a project I'm trying to finish.

>>3723960
you do know that's the weight bearing shoulder and it would also raise

>>3723960
because she's resting on the shoulder causing it to go up because the entire weight of her body is using it as a focal point?
are you a dumbo anon?

this is why i don't post on /ic/

>>3722828
torso too short for legs that tall

>>3723963
you get commissions? i'm surprised. because this is terrible work.

>>3723965
could you be any more histrionic, faggot?

>>3723974
that's all you have for me? surely you can do better than this, crab-kun.

>>3723975
maybe DK faggots should keep their shitty critiques to themselves, you've clearly proven you do need to be a cook in order to tell when beef is undercooked.

>>3723984
i agree, so shut the fuck up.

>>3723984
go pose in a mirror then come back, cunt.

>>3723993
Shoulder and armpit are out of perspective now, good work.

>>3723974
I can tell with your insecurity that you're way below skill level than any alt and beg posters here uwu

>>3723998
no shit, i didn't redraw it i only moved the arm.

>>3723993
yikes,

>>3723993
>>3724012
>>3724002
>>3723998

yikes.

>>3723974
You would be suprised, he’s probably reasonably priced

>>3723957
@AZAV858 on twitter.

>>3724044
are you serious? where does he advertise? elementary schools for special need kids?

>>3717659
lol krueger-kun

>>3717018
damn nigga. post your blog.

>>3724021
>>3724032
>>3724044
>>3724051
Big yikes.

bump

>>3724107
Blog?

tear me to shreds

>>3719965
I don't get it.

>>3724146
P cute

>>3719965
BLOG?

>>3719966
fuck no. its usually like 2 or 3 people left and they're the dedicated quiet artists, everybody just says thank you and the model fucks off. i found that bit funny, nice comic brian. keep it up, but stop posting weird shit, like posting a selfie and saying:

>what it looks like when diarrhea comes out hard

>>3719481
>>3719585
Holy shit, this anon phrased it perfectly.
I'm having the same problem, although my goal is to absorb more of an eastern style than western, but I too want to develop a smooth mix of both. And I fell into the trap of cute but sameface-ish girls and absolutely not anime-ish men. Pic related.

Things getting worse with the process of rendering both of them. Smooth like an egg girl faces look ok, but men's faces demand more detail in shading, and in the end I get the drawing that feels eclectic and inconsistent. Some korean artists can pull it off, but I struggle to understand how exactly.

>>3724406
solution: draw some feminine youthful looking men who have smoother faces like your women, also draw some older women with more detailed faces like your men. just have it be an age thing.

>>3724406
make you girls a big more detailed/rougher. You give her thin line while the guy have thick lines, that part isn't really hard to fix.

>>3724407
Thing is, young boys looks alright when I draw the without falling into the bishounen category, although the also have sort of default look to them. It's the aged ones that I cant figure out.

>>3724408
I fucked up a little bit and posted a lineart stage for the girl. Here is the rough sketch.

>>3724406
The bald guy is great, the girl is run of the mill deviantart tier.
Try finding a better way to do women, your guy game is on point.

>>3724406
The only solution is to start drawing porn featuring a young girl and an old man

>>3724450
Well, that's what I'm trying to do. More interesting looking girls and a bit more anime looking guys to make the style look consistent. Put these two at the same canvas and they will look like collab of the two artists.
Have some examples of the girls?

>>3724455
t. my client

>>3724457
I don’t know if there’s a name for the style, but what I consider the “classic seinen” look usually has rough, detailed men and cute women, and it probably works because the men are animu with extra scratching and women are less animu and more stylised Asian girls.
I can’t remember any examples off the top of my head because it’s been years since I read a manga.

Other than that, maybe you can find some well drawn ugly man x pretty girl porn japs love so much, see how they handle it?

>>3724465
>and women are less animu

Look at her nose, that's as anime as you get.

>>3724465
will do, thanks

>>3724489
Women don't have nostrils in real life

>>3724557
correct

Excuse the scuffed outline for now.
>>3723470
Digging the embrossed sheath. nice pose dynamism too
>>3717919
Hessra

>>3724051
god, you're boring

>>3716318

>>3724583

>>3724750
>draw for an hour
>flip canvas
>no mistakes
feels good

>>3724713
the girl's proportions could be fixed by selecting her and just making her bigger. she is WAY too small

>>3724755
the guy is obviously meant to be 2big

>>3723963
cant get the legs to look right

>>3724826

Another prompt, the cat was harder

>>3724826
only redlined one because the other is the same story. too tick at the top and too thin at the bottom. legs got a bit more curve to them

screwed up with tones :/

>>3724894
No offense but i think you screwed up more than just the tones

>>3724916
I do not exclude this. Then, it would be nice of you to say what exactly and how you think it should be
sorry for engrish

breh...

>>3724109
https://twitter.com/pantsu_ripper

>>3725026
CUTEEEEEEEE blog pls

>>3724871
ah thanks

>>3724858
actually this is MUCH better

>>3724755
>>3724766
Yeah, no the guy is supposed to be massive compared to her. I guess if that's all you guys got for crits then I'll call it a day.

>>3722828
>>3723433
>>3724146
>>3725026
kino and based anons
idk how to paint

>>3725462
No. Look.. closer

>>3726658
Ah I see. Her feet wouldn't reach the ground so she'd bascially be floating. She'd have to be taller visually for her feet to reach the ground.

>>3726780
So am i doing this right? All I'd have to do is just make her bigger visually?

>>3716318
really want to post here
but i feel like this thread is gonna pack up and move to a new one

>>3726837
you're right, new thread >>3726836

>>3725037
I liked some of your work but the color here is not good. Either learn better color and landscape or keep in black and white

>>3726799
Much better!