/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Thoughts?

>>3707373
i mean its just a silhouette you can hardly call this a painting

Harsh but thanks “yeah”

decent. also noone cares how long something took you to make. by saying "this took 15 minutes" youre trying to give yourself an excuse for the quality of the work. from now on never ever mention how long something took you. noone cares and it doesnt matter.

>>3707377
If you're new here please lurk and learn how things work instead of just jumping in and looking like an absolute fucking idiot.

Also the painting is a simple silhouette that is a fact and not good of a silhouette either its boring and begginer.

if you had the name of a famous painter, you could sellthis exact same painting for several dozens of thousands.
but since it's just *you*, people wouldn't even take it for free.

>>3707372
Nice basic composition. Try turning black shadows to blue shadows. Cool as fuck.

>>3707435
No.

>>3707435
Yes.

It's a nice painting. Just don't post it with "first painting btw" most posts like that are seen as fishing for compliments.

>>3707372
Try and add more color composition! This is actually really good on its own, but you're lacking a bit of character in it. Yellows and blues would do you some good for sure, keep practicing :)

>>3707372
needs more perspective an background
>don't go so hard on your brushes, what have they ever done to you

>>3707435
Maybe.

>>3707372
>Took me 15 minutes
yeah you can tell from the tree.
>and is one of my first ever paintings
I'd hope so.

The shitty smudges instead of going back with a smaller brush and making the leaves look normal makes it bad. And the background is boring. If you wanted to do a sundown thing you should do a wash of different sunset colors like purples at the top and yellows at the bottom and stuff. Look at a picture of a sunset and copy it idk.

Do the background colors first and don't worry about running over the tree with the colors. Make the background look cool and then go back in and make the tree look cool and then it'll be cool.

>>3707435
I don't know.

>>3707435
Can you repeat the question?

>>3709305
ahahahahahahaha Jimmy is actually giving critique

>>3707435
50%

>>3709305
Who are you to even give critique?

>>3709305
Blind leading the blind.

>>3709442
>>3709465
>>3709481
>Who are you to even give critique?
idk someone that's made like 315+ acrylic paintings, and have been painting as a matter of full time employment most of the last 2 years.

Like who is anyone to "give critique?" Who ITT has experience with acrylic? Why do you trust random kids that post anonymously but get triggered by people that actually do work?

And I enjoy the goof that I gave actual critique and suggestions for what to do going forward and virgins like (you) will just ignore it and attack the speaker for having the audacity to post their work.

I did pic related over an hour at a Mexican restaurant on a date. Originally tried to paint King Kong peeing the distance but covered it when it looked dum. This is a better attempt at sunset type of sky than OPs. Even if it is shitty and schmeary it is still demonstrating more of attempt to make an appealing sky. I'm the only person here that's likely ever even attempted to paint a sky with acrylic paint. I probably know more about it than some anonymous ngmi (you)s. Proof me wrong.

>>3709633
Your greatest folly, aside from your hideous sense of cooor, is thinking that simp,y producing work, no matter how thoughtless or downright ugly it is, elevates you above the others. In reality, your complete lack of progress both technically and creatively, along with the unwarranted arrogance, is more indicative of a learning disability than anything. Please stop acting like you know things. Thank you in advance.

>>3707435
sure, Why not

>>3709637
your greatest folly is likely that you don't do anything other than argue on the internet.

And it has nothing to do with "elevates you over others" you uppity faggot kid. Pathetic people obsess about being "better than." (You) asked me, in this shitty painting thread on a dead board full of anime perverts that draw on a computer, who am Im a shitty painter, to give critique. And then you get triggered about how inferior you feel? And then you're such a shameless faggot that you bother strangers about it?

And the tragedy on your end is that the only way you'll ever not be a useless virginal cuck that whines and obsesses about your relative elevation with strangers, is to do work; and you'll never do work because you're lazy and stupid and emotional. So you're doomed to be a loser from now until you kill yourself.
>Please stop acting like you know things.
Everyone knows things you stupid fat faggot.
Who are (you) to be asking me who I am on anonymous imageboard? Post your work m8.

And I mean this seriously: you are cancer. You have a mental illness. You offer nothing to anyone other than your problems. You're going to sit around justifying to yourself why you're lazy and emotional forever and then you're going to die. This isn't my problem.

>>3709754
Why do you get so mad when people call you out for being a bad artist? If you're going to act as arrogantly as you do, you really ought to have, you know, decent work to back it up. But you don't.

>>3709763
>Why do you get so mad when people call you out for being a bad artist?
A: Why do you feel the need to project your insecurities at bad artists for no reason in the first place?
B: When you look at >>3709305 no part of what I said was bad critique or advice. you bone-to-pick virgins that choose to attack me personally about your feelings don't make me "mad," but your implicit butthurt and dysfunction is tasty.
>If you're going to act as arrogantly as you do
Fuck you slut. What the fuck was overly-arrogant about the shit that I said to OP? The leaves look like shit. The sky looks like shit. The 2 hardest elements of that painting need more work.
>you really ought to have, you know, decent work to back it up.
Says the person that doesn't post their work.

And this is my whole goddamn point. You just fucking lie about yourself and hide behind being anonymous, and act like hyper-arrogant, gatekeeping bitches that project their anxiety at anyone that causes their inferiority complex to give them cognitive dissonance about their lifestyle.

never speak to me or my memes again without posting work. Otherwise you catch cancer.

>>3709813
what a fucking visual nightmare

he looks like a fucking half-stone ghoul or someshit

>>3709305
Fuck off to your own mental illness general

>>3707435
Can I phone a friend?

>>3707435
Debatable.