/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I SUMMON KYLE

does anyone have any good tutorials on how to draw good porn?

>>3684997
Look up for Doxi's tutorials.

>>3684773
i'd rather you didnt, he's a massive douche with a huge ego

>>3685165
>>3684997
Don't, doxy is a hack who can only trace stuff from other real hentai artists.

>>3685340
you gonna back that up?

>>3685345
He traces and copies Uno Makoto's work all the time and only adds slightly different faces, not even radically different ones. He can't even draw hands, his works have the hands almost always hidden and nothing that is below the thighs are shown.

>>3684997
Look up some JAV's and kinda sorta study off those. Alternatively it always helps to have some technical knowledge when illustrating porn. If youre interested in doing some longer form stuff, study doujin artists.
Pic unrelated. I remember just drawing from memory on this one.

>>3685340
So? even if that crap you say is true, his tutorials are still very useful.

>>3685394
Doxy is good at teaching appeal. On a technical level id say he plateaued maybe 2-4 years ago.

>>3685340
>>3685357
>>3685399
Post your work.
Newsflash, you won't.

>>3685418

>>3685359 This was also me

Dont know what you might gain from seeing my stuff. Doesnt discount any criticism or compliments i might give Doxy.

>>3685433
Lol, you draw the exact same shit as he draws and you are calling him out.
GTFO.

>mfw I want to commission Vu
>too nervous to talk to her on Discord

Why do people keep hating on my faces?

>>3685435

If youd calm down for a moment, youd notice i stated both a compliment and an observation. I really like doxy and he does this as a full time deal. Not surprised he hasnt had much time to study up on the technical stuff. Hes in a comfortable space and doesnt really need to in my opinion.

>>3685439
Those DOA pics weren't Kyles nicest pictures.

>>3685437
Please commission me i like money but also ima close commissions once november is over.

>>3685445
Why are you closing commissions?

>>3685450
I want to take a break for the holiday season. Ive been doing commissions+blog promotion stuff since february and want to start organizing my sfw pursuits.

>>3685457
So you're stopping commission for a very extended time then?

>>3685458
2 months isnt much. At least i feel like it isnt.

>>3685467
I'll send ya in a bit then! And are you ever going to race in the /v/eekend races again?

>>3685472
what is that?

is there a discord where you guys talk?

>>3685514

The only real /ic/ discord that gets advertised alot is >>3682516

>>3684763
I draw futanari, if anyone wants a commission: mckaos18.tumblr.com yeah i'm shilling my site across boards big whoop

>>3685439
Omfg that's really bad.

>>3685575
i like your stuff but the left arm is super long in that one

First timer.
Sorry for sloppy digital edits. Don't have a scanner.

Who else into dryads / deer centaurs?
I tried to capture a bit of that frustration from not being able to reach the torso when fuckin from behind...

>>3685666
Yoru torso seems a bit too on the centaur, the human part's spine doesn't look like it melds seamlessly into the deer part.

Don't take this as anatomical criticism, we are talking about centaurs after all.

>>3685678
you dropped an adjective there, it seems.
And yea, by all means, I love me some constructive criticism.

>>3685687
He meant to say the deer part melds into the human torso too low. Try to set it above the tailbone that way the spine can curve better.

>>3685687
Sorry, I am drunk as fuck.
>>3685691
What he said.

I think I fucked the torso trying to do an up shot

why no loli

sorry to keep posting these, something still feels off slightly but i jus can't quite place it, plus i wanna color em but my lines always feel too thick to work well with anything other than flat colors and maybe some texture

>>3685399
not sure if "plateaued" is the right word so much as he's reached a level of quality he's, maybe not necessarily happy with, but is good enough for what he wants to accomplish and is now focused more on increasing the speed at which he can achieve it, at least that's what he always talked about in his streams and videos where he has voice on

>>3685457
super cute, is the bowleggedness intentional cause she's riding link so much (that sounded dirtier than i'd intended) cause if so heh, clever, but if not knees tend to not really be able to part like that with the heels right next to each other. also i really need to work on drawing vaginas myself but i feel it'd benefit from a sliight bit more care to the lines and how they express their definition, at least if one is trying to go more for sexual appeal

>>3685575
dick attaches to the bottom of the pubic bone, you might wanna move it down a bit

>>3685833
giftart for bigdad?
the perspective is a bit all over the place in this piece unfortunately, i miight be able to redline it in a bit but i don't wanna accidentally get your hopes up if i pass out or am too busy but i'll try

>>3685359
>>3685433
>>3685457
>>3685917
you degenerate fucks better gib blogs now, I literally need to masturbate to all your drawings

>>3685924
the first one has their @ in the image (@juste_vu) and the next two are by them as well, but as for me, i'm afraid it's a bit of a monkey's paw, seeing as my twitter is blank
https://twitter.com/nellipher
gonna post things soon tho
maybe

>>3685575
Furfags get out!

>>3685833
Nice hands brah how do you even?

>>3685833
I saw your halfling princess in the towergirls thread, that was you right?
gib blog your stuff has appeal

Man, so far, my most liked pictures are the ones with the faces cropped out.

I did it on purpose too, to confirm.

>>3685457
Really like that perspective on Midna.

>>3685439
you suck Kyle !
if you have to ask you'll never make it

>>3685917
No actually, but he actually followed me after finding it somehow. My expectations are low but, thanks for the thought.

>>3685995
Practice and making the hand pose myself, when I realized I had two of the best hand references on earth I got noticeably better.

>>3686005
Never did towergirls, I've always seen the threads though, I'll have to check it out.

>>3685433
Vu-san what was your primary resource for studying hands? I love the way you draw yours and feel they're very emotive. Oshiete kudasai uwu

>>3686219
Please go being autistic somewhere else. Posts like that can give people cancer.

My first pixelart

did tumblr delete anyone elses blog for no reason

>>3686273
I'll plug your oesophagus with my cock and cum directly into your stomach onii-san uwu

>>3685917
These drawings are months old im a bit better now.
>>3685924
twitter: @juste_VU
tumblr: day_job_VU
discord: daijouVU#8477
>>3686070
Havent drawn midna in forever
>>3686219
It helps to understand 3d shapes first. Then try studying feet along with hands at the same time. As you draw one you'll solve issues that you find with the other.

Coming down home stretch.

Drew the Oracle Princess for the Towergirls thread

>>3684763
Your faces are always so unappealing and disturbing.

>>3686719
Everything is nice but the penis; it's very very sharp.

>>3686727
Sharp? So pull the tip back more like this?

>>3686605
Some thing is off on how those breasts attach

>>3686173
he loves that character and drawing her much like you did. also, as promised, here is a asd;lfj an unfortunately kinda shitty rushed redline but basically the main thing i wanted to fix was that with boobs that large at this angle they would obscure most if not all of the shoulders and also a bit of the face as well, along with the cup leaning a biiit too much forward where she'd spill her drink ;-;

>>3686475
>These drawings are months old im a bit better now.
oh hasdl;fj sorry for that but also hell yeah at improving! i hope i can always be improving too

>>3686719
Why so many dick girls on this threads?

>>3686898
i really like your redline- blog?

How does one get references for the womb?

>>3686917
girls with dicks are cute

>>3686919
cute!

>>3686930
@nellipher

Critique my degeneracy pls

i cant draw faces, please help

>>3687201
why does that girl have a dick?

>>3687267
Becasue every girl should have a dick besides their vag.

>>3687201
>>3687269
>full package futa bro
based

>>3686898
Wouldn't the breast also be closer together and basically become like one "object" if the cloth is pushing on them as hard as implied by creases on the sides?

Rough sketch.

>>3687826
yeah, you're probably right, tho i tend to think of the big fake drawn smut boobs as like super heavy yet super soft and tend to exaggerate them like that but i'm still pretty sure that you're right in that they should be getting squeezed closer together. main thing i wanted to get across was the perspective at that angle but i was rushing cause my friends wanted to play overwatch ;-;

Minion smut

how dose this looks so far

WIP

>>3688103
Nice style anon, only the hands are a bit strange.

wip

here's another study fellas. not really porn but I think people appreciate swimsuits. new to doing fluid effects. worked off a photo but I'll have to figure out a more efficient method.

Where do yall niggas find poses for reference? Porn?

>>3688103
Please tell my how you do the lineart.

>>3686605
add more sag to your breast, you'll be bbc soon don't rush it

>>3688871
>you'll be bbc soon
>soon
LMAO

>>3688103
MOMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY~~~~~~~~

>>3689029
Weird hands but who cares with titties like that

>>3689029

>>3689079
wouldn't it be horrible if your uncle molested you using this hand. it would totally ruin E.T.

>>3688085
Terrible, learn how to draw first before doing exaggeration and WAY before doing rendering.

In what platform can I even post unsensored porn with popular anime characters (who often are 300yo, or a clone made yesterday, but don't really look like it)

I know DA can get anal about a fictional girl's age. DanteWontDie left DA after they took down his lewd Asuka.
What about hentaifoundry? Pixiv is anal about uncensored content. Twatter? I don't want to go anywhere near tumblr, that's just bots following bots who follow bots.

>>3689117
Jesus, just stop drawing little girls getting dicked and you'll be fine.
If they look like kids, then it's normal that they will be considered as kids.

Is it bad to reference and study 3DPD?

>>3689029
>>3689034
It's not weird. It's broken and rotated in the wrist.

>>3689161
In a weird way.

>>3689133
No

>>3689131
>little girls
Literally every single popular character from any popular anime is 14, and Diva from overwatch is 16.

Im not talking loli or anything, just the usual stuff.
If i post on Pixiv I will have to use at very least the translucent censorship, DA wouldnt tolerate a naked Asuka, HF does take that from the popular approved artists, but what about unapproved ones?
Can I post them on Twitter?

>>3689312
Why are you namefagging?

>>3689403
so you know where to find my pictures anon.

>>3689403
to make it a little easier to trace my work.

Hey. Just wondering how far off the shoulder, neck area is, I'm thinking I should have shortened the right arm maybe?

>>3689391
It really doesn't matter how old they are lore-wise. All that matters is how you portray them. And if you run into autistic fans, then tough luck. Just stay safe withing the laws of your country/state and you'll be fine.

>>3689391
d.va is 19

I haven't had fun with a piece in a long time, once I started working on the motorcycle. But I can't but feel something is off about the piece as a whole. I'd really appreciate a critique and some suggestions to incorporate the lighting in my background reference.

>>3689761
It looks like the viewer has a candle in his hand and that's the only source of light in the picture. So in this case there will be no light on the background.

>>3689131
Fuck Americans, there values don't matter.

Tips for drawing porn?

>>3689861
Draw tips

>>3689861
Be good at drawing in general and you'll be good at drawing porn too.
Also, don't be a brainlet. That helps a lot.

>>3689861
Download tons of porn videos in HD, take screenshots, try to not fap and use them for reference.

>>3689949
>try to not fap
Do you seriously need to pull your dick out as soon as you see sexual imagery? How much of a dickbrain are you?

I tired to make something fappable in under 2 hours. The result is no line art. Why am I so bad at lineart, it always looks so sterile and bland.

>>3690005
Poorly done lineweight.

>>3690007
I agree. I'm not sure if it's a matter of confidence or just some missing knowledge. My line art is my weakest fundie skill right now.

>>3688478
I love this, is it slime/cum?

>>3690010
>a matter of confidence
>missing knowledge
Confidence is born from knowledge.

>>3690005
Ever tried coloring your lineart with a darker hue that matched the colors around it?

>>3690021
yeah, I just didnt get around to doing it with the shorts + hair

>>3689761
how do you put out so much content?

>>3690004
I just know how the average 4chan user thinks.

>>3689655
Xavier?

>>3689761
>skin, metal, leather have the same texture

>>3686070
People want to see cute faces, yours seem to not be by design, and don’t look anything like midnas

>>3690387
Who?

Continuing this FFXIV piece after a quick nap. Anything about this strap on sex scene (piece will be added soon) that needs corrections or a quick fix?

>>3686605
nice
your improvement is motivating

>>3690865
do you draw these from imagination or do you reference 3d models or poses?

>>3689515
this is freaking sexy, GIB BLOG PLEASE I NEED TO TOUCH MY WEEWEE

>>3690005
Her head does not look attached

>>3690865
The pose seems right, but it is the most boring and neutral moment in the movement. Sliding the body back with more arch in the back or forward with head going up probably would have looked much better.

>>3689515
It's too far. If you want it to work, you should move her left arm farther to the right and rotate her chest a bit toward the viewer.

>>3689761
Worst case of the pillow shading.

Practicing...

>>3691401
the lighting and shadows are fine just the boots, the tires, and the back of the bike need to defined more.

>>3691535
>the lighting and shadows are fine
Not really. There's no way to tell where the light source is coming from. Right now this looks like very bad ambient occlusion.

>>3691562
all he has to do is punch up the lighting coming from up around corner on the ground and bike and boots

what about this being bad AO?

>>3691592
The figure looks like it's being occluded by some sort of obstacle (thighs and face habe this strong soft shadow on them, that is coming out of nowhere), but the scene is set in the open.
Makes 0 sense. Also, the majority of his other artworks has the same issue.

>>3690913
Thank you. I hope to continue to inspire and improve over the next year.

>>3691065
I will rework the draft with your suggestions in mind. My family comes first this weekend; there will, however, be an update Monday.

>>3691562
Specifics?


>>3690454
I agree the leather needs to be reworked, but I do not see the issue with the metal. Are you speaking of the composite hull of the bike, based on F-22 and F-35 aircraft?


>>3688852
Mileage and fundamentals. My process currently is to start with a bunch of rough gestural sketches, pick one, then apply perspective guidelines to map out the underdrawing/mannequinization.

However, this is not very efficient. After a period of study scheduled during the holidays, I will draft some tutorials for you guys to weigh in on.


>>3686793
How so?

>>3691830
The commissioner wanted me to combine a post-apocalyptic, science fiction background with a pinup shot. Let's say she is taking a selfie of sorts using a drone or some mechanical servant to rally her troops (to justify the light source and fulfill the commissioner's order). What would you recommend to better sell the scene?

You guys kept us on 4chan. The draw thread sends its regards.

>>3691899
Bump.

>>3691899
Bump

>>3691849
Kinda new here but I have seen your stuff around and I think the two biggest weaknesses you show in this painting are value control and atmosphere through light.
Lemme explain what I mean. If you for example were to look at her thigh you can see that you know what bounce light is and you know how to shade in general but the transition from high to low value are way too fast. This could either man you are going too far up the values or you want to include almost all of them. I made this mistake too when I started out but I am slowly beginning to see this "mistake" going away.
Atmosphere through light is a bit more subjective in a way because what I mean by that is that the lighting itself looks like someone used a flash on a cellphone to take the picture. Meaning the entire bike and figure get illuminated intensely.
My personal solution would be to let the bounce light of the bike do the work for you, meaning her boots aren't even hit by light that much, which of course goes back to value control.
Basically what I mean is create anything other than a front light that illuminated the general forms and go for a more artsy lighting scenario as dumb as that might sound.
I see a ton of people calling other people crabs on here so lemme tell you that I'm personally extremely jealous of how good your lineart is. If you got any tips shoot lmao.
I love the designs tho so I hope to see you come back stronger next time.

>>3691479
nice linework anon, are you drawing over your own stuff or someone else's?

>>3692859
my stuff

im new to drawing porn, just started this today but i just want sum feedback. its not near finished yet

>>3685457
Oh god her legs.

>>3688478
Where do you find your references if I may ask?

>>3693149
Your anus is where the pussy should be and the pussy is in the front of the pub lol.

>>3688369
Starfire.

>>3689761
Bro, you say you've read loomis but you keep pillow shading.

Is there a way to fix this mess?

>>3689515
please gib blog ;_;

>>3693545
Rec femdom artists please (or yourself if you do)

Bonus for lezdom

I just finished this today. The shoes suck but I'm happy with the way it turned out.

DOES ROBLOX EVEN CARE?!

>>3690016
Its oil, but can be any liquid of a similar viscosity.
>>3693248
This picture is a fetibox gallery image but generally when im studying skin tones i look for images that provide a good variety in a single image alone.

resized

>>3693608
Wtf is that shit???

>>3693735
It's not really good but it's still more interesting to me than a lot of polished turd. That being said, reconsider how to make a coherent style >>3693608

>>3693788
Thanks, Anon. I need to find an artist I like and model after them. Who are your favorites?

>>3693543
I would add more highlights to the hair and more shading to the body.

>>3693793
>Who are your favorites?
It doesn't matter. Make a map of YOUR favorites. Even the ones that are not considered good artists or whatever. Just what you find cool. Then analyze why and/or incorporate elements of their style into yours

Or just see the world through your eyes and look for your style by drawing a ton and analyzing

Or just plin copy one style you like and tweak it later

Not one solution, findthe one you feel the most confortable with

>>3693608
>>3693788
>>3693793
>>3693911
Is this some kind of autistic samefagging?

>>3693689
penis placement looks weird

>>3686605
The torso on the most left one is kinda fucky

>>3684763
I cannot figure out whats wrong, her face I know is a bit off and I wanted to give her a twist in the torso but I dont know how to make the picture more believable.

>>3694383
resized

>>3694321
Not my most accurate drawing. Really enjoyed posing the figures though.

study

>>3694604
>them feet

>>3694604
really like your colour choices for this, and I like how soft/well blended it is.

Only thing I would note is that at the moment the thigh/butt on the left feels a bit flat, like it's pressed up against glass.

Also, the darker lines on the shins/ankle that are in the light feel a bit out of place.

I personally like making things more colourful, and think it would look nicer if it had a soft blue/green light in the shadows to make the fleshy tones really stand out.

>>3694604
where can I finds refs like this to study

>>3694683
hehe thanks. I'm still getting used to painting.

>>3694144
Please for the love of god, do some fucking reference studies, stop drawing this garbage and actually learn something for once.

>>3694690
/s/?

>>3694696
i dont know whats worse his art or your "critique"

>>3694690
https://sukebei.nyaa.si/

>>3694690
facebook

>>3694702
>>3694698
>>3694707
thanks every time I find refs its old wrinkly woman with gross vagines

>>3694692
Tried to just do a little edit to show what I was talking about with colour, left is 50% dodge layer, and the colours I used are on the right, original in mid for comparison.

This is only how I like do do stuff though, trying to make things look shimmering/more beautiful that reality rather than doing just a stylised version of reality.

>>3694711
I paint on one layer. no dodge/overlay. thanks though.

>>3694739
I used to do the same, but found it easier to experiment with colour effects like this and the using hue/saturation sliders. I plan to head back into using one layer when I have a better understanding of how I want the final picture to look.

How do I into proportions?

>>3693608
Hahahahaha this is awesome.

WIP

>>3693149
Have a short stack reference

>>3694174
What the fuck are you talking about?

>>3694849
Dude her face lmao.

>>3685165
I couldn’t find them

>>3694950
TIL hentai is just illustrated midget porn

>>3695044
You saying that's a bad thing?

>>3693149
just finished it

>>3695028
https://www.deviantart.com/mldoxy/gallery/53604770/Tutorials

There are more scattered around the web but this is the best place to find them. Iirc there are a bunch on patreon that you can access through yiffparty

>>3685575
Why do ur Dicks have tumors

kirlia.

>>3695073
To be fair some people do have really pronounced veins in the dick. Its usually only one or two and Im pretty sure its very rare but it does happen.

>>3694696
>what is this supposed to fucking represent?
The glute? Are you dumb? Above it are the serratus and internal abdominal oblique

>>3694950
got a source for this, genuinely want to stock up on this type of ref

Anything that needs to be fixed?

Help! How do i fix it?

>>3695202
A little boring pose wise, but I like the style.

>>3695198
Something about those feet feel likes she's not standing on a floor

>>3695198
>>3695212
I think the one on the right needs to be foreshortened more.

>>3695203
give up

>>3695109
No that is a leg muscle, the quads make that contour. Glutes are flat when flexed, even on the most exaggerated body builder physique its a relatively flat plane. That contour isn't even visible to anyone with a reasonable amount of body fat and you have to flex a shit ton to even get it.

The dude uses hard lines for everything, his characters look like robots. The lines show he doesn't understand any of the anatomy and just understands symbols.

Pic related is probably what he referenced, if he referenced anything and even then he completely failed to understand what that contour is supposed to be, not only is it only this visible with oil and bright lights, but it also is a subtle plane change. Mans just needs to stop using lines for this shit. These things need to be implied through basic rendering.

>always act like a super lewd guy online
>draw girls in provocative poses
>people who like my art assume I will draw some porn when asked like its no big deal
>in reality I have never drawn any porn out side of a few sketches
>every time I try to draw something overly lewd I get really embarrassed / shy by it

I feel like once I draw some porn thats it, I'm the porn guy forever.

>>3695198
how the fuck are you doing this? Totally jealous!

>>3695709
ROFL

Can you guys recommend me other artists who are this good at drawing juicy pussy

>>3695853
can you just be satisfied with the answers you got in the thread you made and not spam this shit everywhere

>>3695876
The idiots we get on /ic/ are truly a special breed.
It's like they think that reposting the same threads and posts multiple times in an hour will somehow speed up the board and get a bigger reaction.

>>3695853
pussies are disgusting

>>3696021
This

>>3696021
Nigga you gay

>>3696021
Your faggotry is showing. And with that I don't mean that you are a homosexual guy.

Where do I post my trap art?

>>3696303
to your're mom's email fgt

>>3696303
Not here, fag.

>>3696303
Right here, fag.

>>3696021
They're undeniably one of the worst looking human parts. I'm not gay but dicks are way cooler.
Pussy's design is terrible.

>>3695194
Nah i just go into midget porn threads and save the good stuff. Have another

>>3696497

>>3696501
Getting the proportions right is the hardest part of drawing short stacks

>>3684773
My name is kyle, though I doubt I'm the one you want

>>3695203
Right now, there's very few colors, and even with a pale character like this there would be more subtle colors like dark purple or something within the skin rather than just straight up grey and white.Even with white human skin, there can be reds, tans, oranges, etc.
Another thing I notice about the shading is that it's very flat. There should be a greater contrast between the shadows, mid tones, and highlights (which should also be on the face and ass, btw). Just be a little bolder, I'd say.
There are other minor problems, like the line art is kind of boring, but I notice there is a clear highlight on the hair and although muted and pillow-ey the shadows and light have a direction, i.e, at least you understand the light source. Also, the butt-blush is kind of weird, lol.
I understand that the style you were going for was mininmalistic, but you can still shade the hair a little bit, even if it's just a gradient or whatever, because right now it kind of looks like a solid block. this also applies to the dress.
Also, your to subtle with the pussy cream(/piss?): I didn't even notice it at first, and when I first did I thought my screen was dirty. It's super tiny.
Another thing to improve on is anatomy: maybe you were trying for simplicity, but things like the head and arms could use more shape and definition. Right now, the head just kind of looks like you drew an oval with the circle tool. you can still have an ovoid head, but I would study heads more if I were you.

All in all, you've got a long way, anon, but I wouldn't squander all hope just yet.

TL;DR: Add more colors to the skin, bigger contrast of shadows, butt-blush is weird, more puss-juice, but you somewhat understand shading. Also could improve on anatomy.

Coming down home stretch. Will resume after some FFXIV. Just got to refine the ellipses of the glass and touch up the hands.

Coming down home stretch. Just got to refine the ellipses of the glass and touch up the hands. Anything else?

WIP, first time in a few years since I picked up the pen, trying to practice colours and cleaner lines. And yeah, I know, Sadida dudes have their face covered, I'm adding the hair once I finish up the body.

>>3695074
blog please, I really like your brush work

>>3696812
mommie

>>3696463
Found the gay

>>3697393
Twitter: @Juste_VU

>>3696463
Based

>>3695198
the thighs are too short, bro

>>3696558
I tried to copy everything I could from screenshots and I actually measured her head. Though there is a lot of issues with the shadows, if i make them darker they look "posterized" as in bands of color appear instead of being gradients.

>>3691849
>I will draft some tutorials for you guys to weigh in on

Fucking nice. I hope that you find the time to do so, as I'm very interested.

Update. Fire away.

>>3698188
how long did it take you to get to that point in the drawing?

>>3698201
I drew a little bit here and there throughout my life, but I only I began taking art seriously a little over a year ago.

>>3697617
>bands of color appear instead of being gradients
idk dude it could be the brush settings. If you're using photoshop I'd turn the hardness down for shadows, but if not I really don't know, and I don't want to tell you the wrong thing.
imo it's hard to pull off a guaranteed boner with a style like Ruby Gloom (I didn't even know the cyclops was a character in the show up until your post), and i guess i'm not the ultimate authority on hentai or whatever, but if you tried to make it look like a frame in the show you did an ok job, super hard to pull of though.

I’m currently studying how to properly draw a nice pair of tits. Any suggestion/ reference on how to draw nips? I like these ones, but variety is cool, from puffy to inverted, they all look nice!

>>3698609
How are people supposed to help you if you don't show your art?

>>3696497
>>3696505
awesome, she's like a pocket wife

>>3698188
sorry, I won't have time to redline it but the middle one is out of balance falling to the right. Either shift her upper body to the left or move left leg to the right... or make her hang on something from the left.

>>3698188
This sounds kinda odd but I like how you drew her underarm in the right panel; it's not needlessly complex but shows the bicep's definition

Also it's great in general. Wish I knew how to draw on a tablet like this

>>3698760
You’re right. Be brutal, I’m a beginner, and should probably spend more time in the general. Currently on paper, may spend money on a tablet once I get decent.

>>3699158
I am fapping to this!

>>3699350
Learn construction and figure drawing first buddy.
Learning nipples now will not help you at all.

>>3699487
Aight, thanks! I’ll go basics first then.

>>3699350
Don't go into a drawing by outlining. Start from the basics, learn how to construct the body with simplified forms. Sycra has good videos that break down the simplified forms whereas Proko has great in-depth anatomy tutorials.

Drawpile is hard

idk I'm pretty unsure how to do stuff like this but this is an orc I'm attempting

look, >>3699881
if your trying, thats the first step, and i personaly love it even though i am a faggot.

>>3699886
Thank you, the worst thing about this is that i'm going for that orc loincloth that just makes her look like she's wearing old woman panties.

>>3699773
Why does she have a concave ribcage?

>>3695074
what brush settings are you using?

>>3695062
nigga thats just tristana with wings

>>3699945
stabilizers at like, 10. Itrs a custom NIP pencil from Clip Studio
>>3699919
Yeah its not perfect drawpile does that to ya. I was aiming for the rolled forward shoulder look.

>>3699996
link to that brush?

>>3694849
Idk why but the fake that her pussy is so detailed really freaks me out

>>3689515
blog

>>3690659
Xavier renegade angel. He's a character from an Adult Swim show. The bird guy in that pic looks really similar to him.

>>3699881
Sorry for the shitty redline

Your muscles are pretty decent so far. At a glance, the biggest issue is probably the abs. They feel flat, and are all about the same size. The abs should stretch from the lower ribs to the pubis - try placing them with those landmarks in mind. Make sure to vary the sizes, and emphasize the corners where they meet.

The leg muscles are good, just make sure you're paying attention to how the muscles are connected and fit together before you render the prominent ones. Also, your knees feel very round. Knees are boney, don't be afraid to use straight edges to strengthen your drawing.

And just a quick note - I know they aren't included much in your drawing, but the lower leg muscles bulge out on the outside and then the inside lower down.

>>3700180
>having pelvis bones on the same level with navel.

Duude.There's the whole bottom 2 pack between tthem.
Abs go like
>4 pack on the top
>navel
>2 pack
>pelvis
>the bottom of the 2pack connects to the groin

>>3700180
>>3700183
Wow I was not expecting such a detailed response. I will admit I eyeballed the WoW model and did suspect my abs were a little off. Thank you so much for the critique, I really appreciate it.

>>3700180
>>3700183
Wow I was not expecting such a detailed response. I did take inspiration from the WoW orcs and the abs did feel iffy when I drew them. Hips and legs have been a real struggle for me as well, so thank you for showing me the details I couldn't perceive. I really appreciate the critique and redlining.

>>3698188
This was more just me playing around with it. Really like your line work though.

>>3700347
Very good suggestions, only problem I see is the right figure is a bit too thin around the stomach now compared to left and middle.

What should I work on (besides fundamentals I mean)first if I want to be basic commission-level like? Emulate a certain style (that sells more tha the others maybe?) Any other suggestions or general tips?

>>3686475
>daijouVU
clever

>>3686475
There is not enough r34 Midna in the world that would seem to satisfy me.

>first time on /ic/
>porn thread
Boy there's a lot of /d/ in here.

>>3696303
more, please

>>3696303
>>>/ic/
>>>/co/
>>>/a/
>>>/d/
>>>/i/
>>>/y/
>>>/cm/
>>>/v/

that should cover you , on to the art I think the trap is too high on the fat NTR man he should be just a bit lower for him to penetrate him properly at that angle it looks like he's trying to fuck him with the bottom of his belly. The random pillow is kinda awkward uless they're on the floor and you're just doing Dutch Angle to make it lewder.

>>3695194
Source is literally on the image

>>3698188
You were influenced by BBC-chan too

>>3701540
>>3701445
There's something horribly wrong with you people.

>>3701445
Source was literally not on the image I quoted

>>3701542
I think it's pretty useful for fantasy beings like imps

>>3696303
have the femboy rubbing the big man's nipples with his toesies

>>3694950
>>3701445

I don't know what to draw for christmas... I'm still behind on my halloween stuff

>>3694701
wait what's wrong with their critique?

>>3701950
I like her face, but the rest it's awful anon. Look for some reference to correct her proportions.

>>3701950
>>3702501
I think it’s fine enough. obviously it’s already done so there’s no point in wasting hours of your time constantly fixing your art for some anon. Make sure to post it on her birthday. The only glaring problem I have for it is the neck and shoulders. Obviously no normal person would really care, so just continue to study and fix these problems in your next work.

>>3702507
He ask for critic and/or opinions, you dumbass, is not like he has to fix the pic for anyone here.

>>3702501
It's a bit messy, but any better?

>>3702543
I dig it

>>3702545

>>3702662
I like the shading makes my penis tingle

>>3702945
-George H.W. Bush fails No-Nut November
-medium: digital
_artist: Anon

>>3687834
great anatomy man keep it up

>delivering for drawthreads
>serious lack of artistic talent and skill
name a more iconic duo

>>3701445
m...mods?

Let's see, so I went ahead and posted Same Face Syndrome as the OP pic for this thread and surprise, surprise...>>3701540
>>3694144 you didn't fail to disappoint. MONTHS later and after COUNTLESS critiques on your crap, you STILL continue to post your plateau, half-assed, uninteresting work. But then again, why should anyone expect anything more of you, to be honest. That's a tough life to live I imagine, having to wake up every single day of your miserable existence and consciously know, that this, is the best you'll ever amount to; that you take no pride in the work that you do, with absolutely no progress whatsoever.

You're a failure in every sense of the word and no matter what ridiculous reply you try to come up with to answer back, know this. You're going to wake up tomorrow, sit up on your bed and think, "I'm going to draw the same garbage today as I did yesterday, and I'm going to do the same tomorrow, and the next day, and the next. Two weeks from now, I'm still going to live in the same, miserable existence of my work until a month passes, and I will have NOTHING to show for it."

You have got to be, one of the most LAZIEST artists I have ever come across in my life. In fact, to call you an artist, is an insult to those who actually manage to make progress in their work. To call you a hack, is to voluntarily give you some accrued praise for the pile of shit you continue to pass off as work.

Your work is a disgrace to the fantasy realm and community, but not for the reasons you think. Your lack of effort is what makes your work such an EYESORE, and anyone within that community who truly values the genre will be one of the first to tell you to quit. There's no salvaging this thing you call an art ability, kiddo. Try as you might however, you'll medicate your mind with some lame excuse, never batting an eye to the harsh criticism and wake up tomorrow, ready to draw the same bullshit again.

Your work speaks for you—and it sucks to be you.

Ah, and then there's Jay Chris Jefferson, the Greg Land of the thread. You'd be wise to do your research on who that artist is, then you'll know why I make that distinction between the two. Your life now, REVOLVES around tracing and heavy reference Jefferson, and it's clearly evident in the work that you post here, because let's face it, your attitude has gotten you kicked off more other social media platforms than anyone else hosting their "career" up over their heads.

You started off as ABitofCrumpet on Hentai Foundry only to end up here, polishing these heavily referenced, Burne Hogarth-esque, pillow shaded pieces that have very little interesting value. I'm not surprised if you anonymously post after the fact just to keep up some form of appearance, by the, "next Brit Boy Cuck- Chan" replies you've been given to your posts here. You've been drawing what, a year now, and this is what you have to show for it?>>3689029
Greg Land-esque heavy reference, developing your own brand of stupid grin, cheesecake looks to your work as if every drawing you post is magically sexy in some manner? There's no magic to the amount of work you put out, Jefferson. All you to is trace the work. >>3695198 You just hide the reference layer when you post your work here, so that you can give off this impression of, "Look, I'm using the same skeletal framework that the rest of you do so if I can do it, so can you."

Please, spare me the Impact font jpeg you're going to reply to this. You can go back a few months on your namefag on Google and see that you've actually gotten worse with your work. And sure, you can put out lame excuses like you always do, cancerous in nature. I predict withing a year, you'll still draw the same. Mark my words, a year from now, much like you are now, you'll keep riding the plateau top to absolute mediocrity.

Greg Land should be proud to have someone follow in his footsteps. Like Same Face, you both share in the LAZIEST attribute any hobbyist can acquire.

Even more vexing, is this new entry into the co-dependent cycle of drawing half-way shit >>3685359 to posting old work to try to justify namefagging the entire thread for themselves >>3685433 only to draw this garbage >>3702662 , effectively showing the regression of one's own ability to draw.

But at least you're honest about your so called "painting" techniques >>3694739 . Much like Jefferson, you share in the Greg Land style of learning, which is copying, or in your case, "Painting", over a reference picture. How quickly you posted the actual photo you copied so that no one could call you out on your crap. But notice how that clearly shows how you can't draw a thing without you having to rely on copying, much like the cancer Jefferson creates. The proof is in your work, just like Jefferson, Same Face and every talentless...

...to be quite honest, I take that back. You all have talent. It takes TALENT to come up with the kind of crap you do. It takes talent to self-medicate yourselves with wave after wave of endorphins when someone calls your work out as shit, only to gravitate on by like if nothing was wrong.

And I imagine you too, are going to come up with some poor lame excuse. But I've noticed that rarely do I get a reply from my posts, which is your team-based response to the harsh words of "Salty Kun". Don't reply to the troll, it CLEARLY doesn't know how to draw so, how can it judge us? We're above the hate!

Much like I did for Same Face, Jefferson gets to be the OP picture next thread. Vu's had his chance and so has Brit Boy Cuck-Chan. We're going to watch as each and every one of you gets a chance to shine as OP pic, only to further my truth that none of you have the balls to get any better. Participation awards all around , because everyone here's a winner.

I rather enjoy seeing you all hit the proverbial wall with your garbage. There is no God here to save you from your miserable work.

>>3703136
>>3703170
>>3703185
based and redpilled

>>3703199
do those artists usually post here?

>>3703318
lobsterkiahl AKA "i cant handle critique" come here everyday and post her disgusting art, why im assuming is a girl? because she have that attitude of "i dont care what you think". even when she is one of the most hated posters here, she keep posting, i assume she do this because she think she is somehow "trolling" anons. She ignore every critique, even when is good and keep her art the same without any type of improve. She is like that pic of a anime girl bitting a fish "i gonna post this every day until you like it".

Hardstones McFlintcock AKA "manamah jeff" "bbc-chan wannabe" somehow, this man managed to be even worst than lobs, why? because everyone knows he trace/high reference all of his art, and is so souless, boring and stiff that the only thing that opaque that is his pillow rendering, he dosnt know the difference between skin, steel/iron or leather, he render everything with the same texture. his dream is to become the "next" bbc-chan, and he claims to be already because he samefag his art with replies saying shit like "you gonna be the next bbc" but he isnt even the shadow of bbc, because the 3d models he use are too stiff, and bbc art have more flow and less "perfect anatomy/perspective". he dosnt fuck with these for more appealing because he dont know how to do it.

DaijouVU AKA "walmart mahmapuu/eigaka/gloss" keep trying to copy these guys. trying is the keyword here.

>>3703185
I'm glad only one paragraph of this observation was a complaint towards my technique. Compared to the other guys I guess that means I'm doing pretty well.

Yeah I did a photo study using a photo reference. I was practicing skin tones. I think you might be missing the point of a photo study. I dont paint over the photo, I keep it on the side and use it as a reference when picking colors. The pose was merely for accuracy to the reference material.

As for regression, cant really argue against that. I've only been posting for maybe a few months now. Its reasonable to say not all my drawings are going to be better than the last. I dont always put my all into each and every sketch. My work from last year though was pretty awful and I'd like to say I've been improving.
Pic is dated to November 2017

>>3703387
if that's what you were making november of last year you've improved quite a bit, vu!

>>3703387
if that's what you were making november of last year you've improved quite a bit, vu!

also if i drew some fanart of your boy lieu would you mind if i sent it to you directly on discord or twitter?

>>3703396 >>3703402
They're gonna think I'm samefagging with a reply like that just keep calling my stuff shit its actually more productive that way. Youd be better off asking me stuff through my DM's. I'm constantly shilling my blogs. You know where to find me.

If more people posted their work here I'd be happy to give any advice I might have.

>>3703413
shit sorry asldfj i wasn't really thinking, tho i can prove i'm not samefriending cause i'm about to maybe post some of these soon and i've been here long enough that i'm sure anyone else who's been here as long might recognize some of these

>>3703136
>>3703170
>>3703185
pyw

>>3703424
Oh hey it's the toriel belly bump guy. Really dig those pics.

>>3703170
Oh, Salty-Kun...had I known you felt so strongly for me, I'd do a little something for you. Or should I be calling you RedMatzoo, since you have posted similar screeds under your handle before? Sometimes, using that Loud House jpg?

It's like whenever you hear the handle Salty-Kun, PTSD flashbacks flood into your hormone-addled mind. And as vapid as your rants are, at least they offer the value of this...dark kind of humor projected at everyone who triggers your insecurities. Very few have managed such a consistent level of fail.

But, you kind of squandered your entire rant by repeating the tired accusations over and over. Hoping they'll come true and elevate your work. Instead, you repeat the same nonsense as you did in the past. Kicked off social media? With the exception of Tumblr's NSFW purge, almost all of my accounts are intact. Your accusations of tracing and heavy reference is a joke at this point. The two pieces you isolated do not support your asinine claims. The first, I referenced from a WoW screencap and relied on my own knowledge for the bust shot, the other roughed then constructed from memory after doing my usual routine of thirty second and two minute gestures

As for the 3D models accusation, I have only used Skelly. Never used anything else except a bad experiment with the models three years ago back when it was known as Manga Studio.

But whatever floats your boat.

>>3685445
wait did you not call doxy a hack? or was this >>3685340 not you?

>>3703514
I used to follow doxy and I think I even gave him money on patreon at one point. I dont really use his tutorials anymore because I've started to move in a different direction stylistically. I would never call doxy a hack. His work has inspired alot of people to try and strike it on their own and anyone with that much success must be doing something right.

>>3703527
apologies then. I was wrong.

>>3703136
lol never change man, never change

>>3703498
danke! hope to keep my work consistently on that quality if not better from now on, also working more on color hopef

Is this erotic at all? I feel like I'm not exaggerating enough.

On a less fundamental note, I haven't started the hair yet, and my brain explodes whenever I think about how it should move. I'm currently working on restyling it.

>>3703581
Wtf!? man, look for help immediately.

>>3703708
i've been looking for a while but no one's ears are able to fit me, someday anon, someday

>>3703701
>Is this erotic at all?
no
>On a less fundamental note
lets stay on the fundamental note please, work on everything before trying to make arousing animations. itll never be arousing until you do. study your anatomy and draw it in perspective, foreshortened, etc, and imagine it as 3d forms.

Is this worth continuing?

>>3703581
I think your actual problem with defining muscles with harder lines is that they are too small for that. Check out Tradd Moore's "Luther Strode" to see how it is done on guys who have inhuman levels of muscle definition and how it stacks up to normal characters in the same series.

You would be much better off with adding a second shade of grey to each of the characters and using cell shading.

>>3704086
good point, will keep in mind for the future, will also break out my strode collection cause it's been a while since i reread it, thanks

>>3703956
Only if you make huge changes. Her face is completely symbol drawn and nothing is in place; the mouth in particular is falling off the side of her face. Also boobs that size wouldn't touch like that, theyre currently being held together by an invisible force. I'd recommend flipping your canvas while you draw quite frequently.

>>3703956
I'd say so, I had a quick go too if it helps at all.

Hey guys, I posted this in the other thread too.
I recently watched FLCL alternative and there's literally no good porn of that show on the internet.
What is it about flcl and especially FLCL alternative that artists struggle so much with?

>>3704286
Insanity.

>>3704293
So you're saying that most porn artists are too normie to do it justice?

>>3704298
Either too normie or their cockroaches are not in the right alignment.

>>3704286
The show sucks and nobody asked for it.

>>3685433
It's quite like norasuko (sp?)
I like it.
>>3703185
K, so this is probably bait, but I'm gonna bite - just to give you a piece of sage advice.
Don't get so worked up over other people's creative pursuits. Sure, you can like or dislike works, but try to ease up on the holier-than-thou attitude towards critique.

Furthermore, have you ever considered that "improvement" isn't necessarily the goal for all people at some point?
Perhaps "hitting the wall" is simply another way of describing comfort.

Here's an analogy (and not a food one!?)
When you are looking for a partner, you try to improve your game, your attractiveness, your conversation skill.
You don't just throw yourself upon the first single person you meet do you?
You develop tastes and interests, you maybe date a bit if that's your bag.
Eventually you will settle for a person that meets your requirements, tastes and situation.
You don't then keep busting ass and dating in the hopes to find someone better, rather you settle.

Art can be a release for some people, and is subjective - so to make it into a massive struggle to be the best is pointless and self-defeating.

I hope your life becomes more fulfilling, and you have a run of good luck, so that you can have a bit more positivity in your sphere. Then maybe you won't feel the need to express yourself with such a detracting intent.

In short. I hope you chill, and have good reason to do so cos you realise this is all kinda pointless!

>>3694849
>noodle
Fucking saved

>>3702543
>mitsuki

My nigga

>>3703379
As I asked RedMatzoo, your associate, I will ask for proof of your piggybacked accusations and a fresh line of bullshit that dribbles down afterwards.

On a side note: the "metal being the same texture" accusation is hilarious because everybody else discerns it right off the bat. The folks on Discord have been helpful with their advice on rendering leather. Take note if you actually give a toss about helping artists improve.

If you want to know my inspirations, ask.

>>3702543
blog?

>>3704286
The original flcl was made back in the early 2000's with a few episodes so i can see why
people from the newer generations wouldn't draw porn of it.
Its sort of hidden even though its loved by many fans.
However, the newer one isn't that good and the characters are too boring to draw porn of.
All i can say is keep looking.

>>3704860
Show sucked and didnt make sense anyways, same goes for the new season

>>3704863
i can respect your opinion.Even though i liked the first one.
I felt that the original was more experimental with the animation.The newer one is just dull and lifeless.There were no scenes where i can say "yeah i'd go back for that".

>>3704860
Well I'd assume people who draw anime porn are more into anime than normal people.
That's why I was wondering. I think I saw some flcl porn on a japanese twitter recently.

>>3704874
try to look on pixiv too.

>>3704877
You can stumble upon untagged flcl lewds once in a blue moon if you follow a lot of japanese artists on twitter, I think a lot of them have migrated from pixiv to twitter these days. So it's a bit of a treasure hunt.

>>3704874
flcl is my favorite thing of all time, for some reason this makes it really difficult to try and draw lewd things of it. i could probably draw cheesecakey fanart of characters being intimate but i can't really bring myself to draw them actually having sex. wait shit i just remembered kitsurubami, brb

>>3704932
haruko is such a tease though, her entire character is sex appeal

>>3704970
yeah but her whole point is she's just playing with naota, using him, even when she does start genuinely caring for him it's more so as an older sibling, it starts getting too deep in my brain with my weird dumb feelings for others and how i relate to intimacy lol

>>3705010
That's the point, you wanna fuck her cuz she's playing so much. Payoff.

I'm not at all an animator, but I've always wanted to try. It's kinda fun

>>3705317
Do a Blaziken with fat tits

What should I draw?

>>3705349
more BUM

>>3705330
this
>>3705349
draw >>3705330

>>3705330
not them but sure i'll do this when i wake up

>>3705413
probably gonna give her a big fat cock too tho so b reddy

>>3705418
I tried so hard and got so far, but in the end it doesn't even matter

>>3705330
Here ya go

>>3705450
Goddamn that was quick. She's great, can I get a link to your blog?

>>3705450
>>3705452
By blog I mean your Tumblr/Twitter/LinkedIn/whatever. Man I'm tired

>>3705358
>>3705386
I tried.
I'm sleepy. Hope you don't hate it.

>>3705450
>>3705468
that's epic

Please people, I cant decide which pose to choose. I've been stuck at this point for a while now...
I'll pick whichever people like the most (if any)