/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Is this some Discord meme. Why do you keep remaking threads with this one person's work? Just keep hoping people will say something bad about it to make yourself feel better about your even worse attempts?

>>3698458
it's my work...

>>3698424
I think those faces can use more constructions during their rough draft phase, because those hair really getting in the way of placement of facial features. Do you pencil or did you just started drawing in ink?

Just pencil no inking for now I need to finish my chapter first then I will do the real pages what do you think?

getting my pages to look good after ive scanned them is a huge pain.

>>3698458
I've never seen this person's stuff before

>>3698925
this is cute as hell. can i get a blog pls. also teach me to ink

>>3699289
Where's Alice? Is that going to be R-18?

hmmm, the background might be plain around the sides. not really sure how to make that better yet.

>>3699447
gosh, im loving that cute style

Some recent pages.

>>3699875

>>3699876

meh

can you guys recommend some good webcomic?

>>3700950
oops, heres a better one

>>3700919
>Ava's Demon
Horror Sci-Fi. Every page is a full illustration. For chapter finales there are often animations.

>Devil's Candy
Cutesy demon academy with hundreds of different demons drawn- either as main or bg characters

>The Witch's Throne (on Tapastic)
RPG tropes done well + and muscles. Only the first chapters are available to read for free though.

>The Inheritors (on Tapastic)
Capeshit + Meangirls + ....zombies?

>>3701149
thanks!

>>3698925
where can i read this?

>“Hyperreality and simulation are deterrents of every principle and every objective, they
turn against power the deterrent that it used so well for such a long time. Because in the
end, throughout its history it was capital that first fed on the destructuration of every
referential, of every human objective, that shattered every ideal distinction between true
and false, good and evil, in order to establish a radical law of equivalence and exchange,
the iron law of its power. Capital was the first to play at deterrence, abstraction,
disconnection, deterritorialization, etc., and if it is the one that fostered reality, the reality
principle, it was also the first to liquidate it by exterminating all use value, all real
equivalence of production and wealth, in the very sense we have of the unreality of the
stakes and the omnipotence of manipulation. Well, today it is this same logic that is even
more set against capital. And as soon as it wishes to combat this disastrous spiral by
secreting a last glimmer of reality, on which to establish a last glimmer of power, it does
nothing but multiply the signs and accelerate the play of simulation.”

I like this thread, give me some inspiration. Are there any professionals here, selling they comics?
>>3700954
What paper size is your comic? Really like this one.

>>3700919
>Dreamicide
A korean webtoon on Tapas about a highschooler waking up 7 years later as a leader in a zombiepocalypse. He realizes that every time he sleeps he has the power to tavel through time, so he decides to try to prevent the destruction of humanity. Its the only one im mentioning that you have to "purchase" with tapas coins after a certain point (or ink or whatever it is now), though in my opinion its worth it. Apparently its inspiring a new tv series over in korea.

>Mokepon
A smackjeeves comic. A comedy drama about a boy who hates friendship and adventure being forced into a pokemon journey. If you like this then I also recommend a comic called Super Effective that's also a pokemon parody albiet more streamline.

>Gloomverse
A smackjeeves comic. It has a weird premise about personified colors or something, and the art is pretty bad in the beginning (the colors may make your eyes bleed)... but desu the storytelling is solid and the characters become genuinely charming. Its getting a bit of cult following on that site.

>The Outer Door
Tapas comic about a group of trick-or-treaters getting locked into a magically-boobytrapped mansion and trying to escape. The art is genuinly and fundamentally good, and there are even animations and musical scores sprinked in there. Better yet, its finished and a pretty quick read. No reason not to check it out.

>>3701149
Seconding Avas demon

>>3701211
>>3701212

>>3698424
am i the only one here making a comic that's isn't drawn anime or murican superhero style

Just found out there's B4 paper size available to purchase in my shitty third world country.
It was called "1/8 W" all along.

Still have to purchase the rest of the stuff off the internet tho...

Here's something I did ages ago. People keep telling me to get back into horror comics...

Almost done inking the cover for chapter 5 of Jasper Gold

I'd like to begin making some short comics as a way to improve my consistency in my drawings and force myself to do more environmental design. Do you guys have any tips for someone inexperienced?

>>3703481
Start with a simple story. Something that has an introduction, middle, and ending. If page count is your issue, then something along the lines of 10-15 pages would be alright. It can be shorter than that, so long as you share your ideas onto the canvas.

>>3703429
I remember checking this out a few years ago, nice to see you're still at it

>>3698424
Japshit does not count as comics.

>>3703698

Yawn.

>>3703005
I can see why. This is good

>>3703510
Thanks for taking the time to check it out Anon.

Here is the inked version.

>>3703818

Thanks. Right now I'm focusing on animation, but sometimes I miss doing this kind of thing.

>>3699877
not this shit again

Need honest critics, is this style good enough or should i try harder?

>>3704237
Artstyle needs to complement the tone of the comic. If this is super serious then no but if it's more comedic then sure. I can't tell which it is since I don't speak refugee.

>>3704239
First panda comic is for kids, second is darker, something like yu gi oh.

>>3703864
The diaper wearing furry absolutely ruins what could've been good.

>>3704263
this

>>3704224
S-sorry

hey guys help me out did i get the panel order wrong for when the dude gets shot

>>3703838
What? This is actually good!
What a great surprise Anon.

>>3698424
Dead project, what a shame

>>3705148
Yep, unless you are doing manga.

>>3705270

Even if he is doing a manga, there is not enough space to breath for the reader, you have to make this more dynamic and breathable.

>>3705275
i get what you mean by breathable, but what do you mean by dynamic? this is my first strip in years by the way just to add.

heres previous page panels not drawn but you can prob make out whats happening

>>3705148
>>3705350
it looks cool af but it looks like you just drew this in all fine tip sharpie, which is fine if thats your thing, but you could try adding some bolder lines in with a thicker marker in places that turn away from the light. you could put a shadow under the figure. or the underside of the arm or fingers/kuckles. to give your figures more dimension than they already have

>>3705375
ya im doin that too these are just rough prototypes right now

>>3704263
this right here
i cant force myself to look past it

>>3707035
kek

>>3699875
i really like this comic, do you host it on a webpage or something, the art looks super cool!

>>3707100
I sure do, dubsman. I hope you like the rest. I've been spending a lot of time recently trying to improve my lettering and speech bubbles, so progress was slowed this past week.

https://tapas.io/series/The-Concord-Initiative

>>3705172
Thanks. Here’s a penciled panel

>>3699447
I have a tumblr, but its about to be marked as private soon. I have a twitter, tho its very nsfw, its ac120rfw. I don't think I am qualify to teach people how to ink. The way you ink is kind of your own aesthetic anyway, like your inside line and outside are are very disconnected, its creates a specific look to them. Although I will say that in general, its good to slow down your inking speed and think about what you are doing briefly before making each mark, until you find a rhythm you think produces desired results. Another thing about mark making is that, try using your whole arm, like shoulders and elbows and less of your wrist, particularly if you are making a long arcs. I generally do as if my arm is like a hanging robot arms, with my shoulder and elbow pulling from the a long line's origin, with wrist making minor adjustments, if that makes sense. I probably have too many "leap of faith" type of lines, but I'll usually go back over to reinforce them, particularly where lines intersects.

>>3701207
That's part of a collab piece. There is also a tumblr for it, but this particular part won't be up there until its done. Although I suspect their tumblr will be "private" soon too. I don't always have time to update the threads, but when I do I usually put it in /co/'s weekend creation thread. They have a thread that starts every Saturday morning for brainstorming collaborative projects.

>>3707212
Bump with some inks.

>>3705350
Very cool, but I don't understand the order of the panels.

>>3699447
I'm at that point in this project where I can't stop doubting myself. Someone kick me in the ass

>>3707035
hehe

>>3707636
thanks for the advice. i'll have to check out the collab stuff on /co/ more often. seems like fun

>>3709537
yeah idk what tf im doing

>>3709804
Your thumbnails are giving me a throbbing erection. You are doing something very right.

>>3709943
excellent

>>3707035
Your visual humor is fucking ace.