/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3682863
Fuck, I mean I love doing these, but we have so many of these threads already, just pick the biggest thread to post in (that’s not about nazis) >>3653293

>>3682863
No

>>3682885
sucker

>>3682863
I've grown quite fond of the nazi ones

>>3682891
Wow OP you just wanted free art after all :’(

I’ll just go to the Nazi threads then.

>>3682896
that wasnt me, like any of you are good enough to want to steal art from anyway

>>3682885
she literally have no waist.

>>3682863
Draw it yourself and then kill yourself you stupid faggot.

>>3682863
>the shoulder width
>the perfectly round breasts
>the line conecting her lats to the super thin waist
>the wide hips
>the well defined crotch with just a hint of butt cheek below it
>the perfectly shapped legs

WHO IS THE GODDESS??

>>3682923
edgy

>>3682885
That’s fuggin awesome dude

>>3682919
you just ruined it for me.

>>3682885
looks like she has a dick, i think it was intentional

>>3683333
Where do you think you are, anon?

>>3683336

>>3682933
All i could find is that her name is Rachel and the picture is by Azimuth Designs. I couldnt find that specific picture on the site but I found her other pictures.

>>3683547
>>3682933
the picture is also heavily photoshoped and she probably looks nothing like that IRL

>>3682885
I loik it a lot

>>3682885
fucking nice. I get the stylization but you might want to make the waist meet where the knuckle of her index finger is, they way its currently done just doesnt make much sense anatomically or stylistically

>>3682885
cute

>>3683551
I noticed that on her waist, its very obviously shopped, but those legs are all real.

>>3682863

>>3682919
>>3683272
She literally have no nose and absurdly tine feet. Its a cartoon, get over it stupid realism faggots

>>3683333
it was a little intentional desu

>>3682885
>>3684190
i like these, y'all got blogs?

Ready to plow

>>3686827
HELLA

How did I do?

>>3687170
is this an honest effort

>>3686827
I hate to do this, but blog?

>>3684190
Is this what happens if you do your gestures everyday?
If so, I really should up my game.

>>3687170
bad

>>3687215
@ohheythatfisher on twitter

This is fun

>>3687171
Yeah, /beg/ here

>>3687292
Thanks

My shitty atempt.

>>3687559
>>3688357
nice job fellers

>>3688368
Thanks anon.

I did my best

>>3687523
Really cool art, you should get Insta too everyone is on it nowadays, you'd get more views

Tried, I'd like to post more attempts tomorrow tho

>>3688822
on your way to making it

>>3686827
>>3687170
>>3689088
>tfw digital is so much superior & faster to get artworks done

>>3689135
i promise not drawing digitally isn't what's holding you back

>>3689153

>>>>3684506

Well, coloring alone is 50% much faster than traditional...

>>3689135
I’m faster traditionally but it’s true effects like airbrushing are a hell of a lot easier than the real thing

>>3689160
Yusuke murata makes digishitters quake in their boots. Anything takes long for you because you fucking suck at it. Get gud.

>>3688505
Noice

>>3689194
Not him but I think we can all agree that Murata possesses a rare ability as far as artists come. The man exhibits something that goes beyond mere talent.

First attempt. Heads too small.

>>3689341
Second attempt. Much more out of my comfort zone. I'm satisfied with this one. Heads too small x2

>>3689347
What the fuck dude this is worse than the first one

>>3689341
if you could learn to put the heads in the right place these would be great

>>3689354
>Draw this and stylize it in a way you wouldn't normally

>>3689361
Not gonna lie, I just didn't really care while making these. Took like a minute each. Thanks for the advice though.

>>3689369
Faggots like you are the worst. No one cares how long you took or whether or not you “care” about it. You thought it was good enough to post for critique. Don’t be a bitch and stammer out excuses when someone actually gives you one.

>>3689373
Are you being serious right now? What's all of this fuss about? It's not like didn't accept the critique.

Just calm yourself down, it really isn't that serious. Share some art or whatever...

reminds me of zero suit

basically zero suit

fun pic tho!

thoughts?

>>3689373
Yeah it's ridiculously annoying when people do that
>h-haha it's just a quick 5-second joke sketch
>t-thanks for the critique, b-but it's not like i care
>j-just so you know i'm only using 0.1% of my full potential ok?

>>3689543
>>3689373
>>3689361

Welp since this is a huge issue, I took it upon myself to try to fix it. Does the head placement look any better?

Some of you guys kinda take things way too seriously. My goodness...

>>3689571
She looks great. Love the confidence in your lines.

>>3682863

>>3689436
Makes me want to puke

>>3689603
Jumbo?

>>3689602
Thanks man, that's something I've been trying to work on lately.

>>3689341
Definitely a lot is off, but I like it.
>>3688505
Prettt good

>>3689436
Everything about this is wrong. Start with Loomis and supplement it with Proko.

>>3689160
You'll never get fucking good with that attitude. Never. Limiting yourself with a fragile believe that can and has been proved wrong countless times will NOT take you anywhere.

>>3689436
She has bigger trapezius than Brock Lesnar

>>3688505
Tiny hands.

>>3682885
very cute, the simpler styles are so difficult to make interesting but you pulled it off

>>3689802
Is it really everything?
I felt like I atleast got torso, legs and the gesture right

had lots of fun drawing this and i tried my best, hope you anons like it!

>>3689436
hi anon! somethings you could work on here is proportions. your head and limbs could use some work. however, i totally loved the concept, and the shading looks pretty good! keep it up anon, and theres no shame in using a reference!

>>3689383
looks great anon! i love the line art and anatomy!

>>3689872
I’m just being honest here, you need to actually observe the human body before trying to draw it, ESPECIALLY if you don’t plan on using reference

>>3689436
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

>>3689872
You didn't, the torso is incredibly long, the shoulders are non-existent, the arms are completely misproportioned, the breasts are out of position considering they are held in place with latex, and she has no hips.

You really need to begin constructing with shapes, simplified forms will make it easier to construct a complicated pose. Sycra has pretty good tutorials for that however that is essentially all he has.

>>3683333
quads says we have a weiner

>>3689095
Thanks anon
.>>3688822
Here's some more stuff. Overall, this was a fun photo to work with

>>3689913
thanks, that's the kind of response I was looking for.
I'll try redoing it once I get home

>>3683751
This would remove the negative space surrounding the knuckle though, which would make the leg look like it's just glued on to the side of the person.

Also it seems like the majority of the style is intended to avoid lines meeting up.

>>3688505
No boob gap.

>>3690008
>>3689872
Honestly, yeah, near enough everything. The immediate problems visible to me are that you seem to have a general idea of basic anatomy, but it's almost like you're stitching together the torso, breasts, shoulders, limbs etc. as individual pieces, rather than thinking about the figure as a singular, working form.

Try practicing gesture and get your teeth into some anatomy texts. I personally recommend Constructive Anatomy by Bridgman, others prefer Loomis, but I definitely think gesture will improve your overall concept of form and movement.

I like that you're thinking about light, shadow and fabrics though. Taking on something this ambitious is never a bad thing though, and being bad at something is one in many steps towards becoming good at something. Good job, keep it up, proud of ya'.

>>3690306
not op, but wanted to try what they said..

>>3689905
thanks friend!!!

>>3689913
Decided to tweak the pose a little bit alongside adding some reflections on the suit.
I have a feeling like she still looks a bit stiff, am I wrong?

>>3690705
How in the blue fuck did you go from the original drawing to that? Did you just hustle us? Her left leg is still borked but it’s all immeasurably better.

>>3690715
>did you just hustle us
think I spent like an hour and a half on the thing from yesterday and 3 on this one so I guess.. yea
I don't really draw womenfor the most, is another problem. I think I spent like 1/3 of time from yesterday on figuring out how her left thigh would bend and it made me frustrated or whatever

don't really have a style tobh

>>3690759
thats because you dont know how to draw or paint

>>3690766
pyw

>>3690712
You broke her spine you stupid cunt nice face though good job.

>>3690778
She's standing completely straight up, how can her spine even be broken?

I think these stylization threads are pushing me in a neat direction.

>>3690910
the face is pretty unappealing but your mistakes are minor.

if the forearms and abdominal length is suppose to be long then you should stylize it more.

>>3690715
Nicely done, much better. Her left leg is very short and the knee on the right is not correct. Also the gun looks like a ham which is very festive considering its Thanksgiving.

>>3682863

>>3691090
Aww, cutest one yet.

>>3690968
Thanks and yea.. I felt like the right leg was a bit off in terms of size but I learnt from the past that tweaking 1 or 2 lines can sometimes eat an entire hour of my time so I didn't bother

Also through this whole shitfest I forgot to follow the actual thread's theme and stylize the fuckin thing.
very cute >>3691090

god im so horny and lonely aaaa

>>3682863

>>3692161
That’s weak, put your back into it next time like so...AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IM SO HORNY AND LONELY AND JUST WANT A GF FOR COMPANIONSHIP TO CHILL AND DRAW WITH AAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

>>3692196
I like it

The legs are a little off.

>>3690705
the body looks fantastic anon! you can still work on expression and hair, but the anatomy looks amazing dude

>>3682863

>>3692482
delte this

>>3692482
It-its beautiful.

>>3692482
Perfection

>>3682863
I try...

>>3690759
soz, added a bit more to this abortion

>>3692636
oops thumb on wrong side

>>3682919
>stylize
>"stylize"
>""STYLIZE""

>>3692680
stop discussing my picture reeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

I bit way more than what I can chew. I haven't drawn humans in ages.

roast me I deserve it

>>3693528
>I haven't drawn humans in ages.
you still haven't.

This was fun

>>3682863
fuck off shlomo

>>3693636

no, post blog you fag

>>3694259
Neat but holy fuck that neck and head isnt close to where its supposed to be.

>>3692645
>ywn suckle at a cosmonaut's vacuum-sealed pussy and asshole and nip at the pockets of pussy juice that build up

>>3694259
chairmode

>>3694907
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH GODDAMMIT I AM SO LONELY AND HORNY AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH FUCK FUCK FUCK

>>3694259
The breasts and stomach look like a penis.

>>3693636
Looks reverse cross-eyed.

>>3690586
Not bad. I take back my comment on the negative space.

Perhaps adjust the hip so it lines up with the surrounding as well.

Picture related.

¯\_(ツ)_/¯

>>3695541
tHE ONE PLACE THAT hASn'T BEEN iNFECTED BY CAPITALISM
SOPACEDFS

I can't color for shit so here

Want to add some pretty colors, but also want to post it before going to sleeps. So here is it.

>>3695497
stop editing my picture rrrreeeeeee

>>3682863
This woman was made for sex.

>>3691090
That's cute. Blog?

>>3682933
>>3683547
>>3683551
>>3684149
http://www.jamesart.com/Photos/pRachaelThumbnails.html
found more

>>3696754

>>3689571
You didnt really have to fix it, but I agree with the other dudes, in general people that say things like
>just a sketch lmao I didnt even try
to get out of critique are really annoying

>>3696754
>http://www.jamesart.com/Photos/pRachaelThumbnails.html

Jesus, those thirsty boomer comments on each photo

>>3696754

it's still no fap novem goddamnit

>>3696800
>Rachael was introduced to us by her long time pal, Jasi. All we can say is..."Thank you, Jasi!" Rachael is a gorgeously proportioned 5' 3" package with a figure to die for! There's NOTHING this girl lacks, a pretty face, a voluptuous, all-natural bosom, a tight, tummy, shapely legs, pretty behind, and for you foot guys out there, perfect little feet! Add to that, that Rachael is very sweet and quiet, and seems to actually enjoy dressing girlish, i.e wearing Mike's silk bows, and you have what every red-blooded male (and probably not a few females) would give their eye teeth for. Rachael's a freaking KNOCKOUT!

a final version

>>3696800
>>3697671
He makes some pretty good erotic sculptures though.

>>3694363
https://twitter.com/thebreadphones

>>3694363
>>3699579
samefag

>>3682885
>that waist
Rory?

>>3699593
you're telling me I waited 3 days to reply to myself?

>>3699638
Yea why not? The (You) when replying to yourself goes away by that time if you're phone posting.

bump cause i still wanna post mine but i'm slow

> Innominate

>>3699691
Sorry no one asked for your blog anon

i know my anatomy sucks. literally just started diving into loomis today

>>3688822
I like this a lot. gmi/10

>>3689383
on your way anon. Keep at it

>>3690705
could work on anatomy but you're def heading in the right direction m8

>>3690910
i like your stylization anon. good shit

>>3692196
unironically the best one in the thread

>>3692555
good sense of anatomy. getting there brah

i cant stylize this because i'm still a beg fag but i took this as an exercise

>>3688822
now this is some good anatomy and style. Save it for later reference keep it up anon

I was going for something different in the sketch and ended up with a Frank Cho rip off. At least it was some practice

Might try coloring it tomorrow

>>3703900
head too small

>>3698050
pen settings?

I keep interpreting the hips as bony even though she's pretty beefy.

>>3688357
>>3694259
Can I see y'alls tumblr, da, pixie or other galleries so I can determine whether I want to commission you

>>3682863
i dont wanna draw that bimbo tho

>>3704489

>>3704490
I'd still fuck her at her age, old ladies can't get pregnant. Old Age-no dondom=nirvana.exe

>>3704011

>>3682863
That was fun!

>>3704489
lol you just replaced her with another thot

>>3703912
Better?

Any tips on getting the head size right? I always draw them too small, specially when I'm in a life drawing class

Here I cropped the top of the head and the bottom of the crotch into fourths and resized from there but I might still be a little short

>>3704676
Love the colours!

>>3704210
Blog?

>>3704489
>>3704490
i goobed on the face art is gay

>>3704744
Thanks!

Eh.

>>3704900
>blacked
Come on man

>>3704900
i know that fucked up anatomy anywhere
youre the guy that deflects all crit, right?

>>3704210
please teach me how to be good. this reads really well

>>3704926
I mean it's better than thunder thot in the op right.

>>3704909
Uh, I don't think so. Maybe? I think I'm pretty accepting of crit normally.The OP did say to draw it in a style you wouldn't normally do right?

>>3704900
Good, but you missed the shininess of the suit, which was the most interesting/notable thing about the reference image.

>>3682863
Posting so I can finish tomorrow

>>3704957
Nigger

>>3704966
There is nothing lolita about this.

It made me laugh

>>3704977
Where did they say it was lolita lel

>>3704957
but you didnt draw it in a different style at all
she looks exactly like all your other girls- ie: deformed, unattractive

>>3705069
Your filename says lolixxxplorer.

>>3705574
oh that's Lol I xxxplorer

>>3682863

>>3705187
Kinda cool but did you give up drawing the heels and left hand

>>3705867
Is this loss?

>>3706193
U wot m8?

>>3705679
Sure.

>>3704977
loli isnt the same thing as lolita, anon

>>3706302
Loli is literally shorthand for lolita. They're the same thing, regardless of what your Mongolian fingerpaintings tell you.

>>3706315
someone is mad

>>3706315
Loli as a term is based on the novel Lolita, yes, but it has evolved to mean its own thing, focusing on the pedophilia aspect.
Lolita as a full term tends to refer to either the novel or the fashion. The origin of the name for the fashion is unknown, but for simplicity's sake, it's assumed to also be from the novel.
They have similar origins, but refer to completely different things. If you want to use both interchangeably, that's on you, but that will no doubt only cause confusion.

>>3706339
I'm just being a nice guy and explaining basic Western terminology to a paedo weebs on the internet :-)

I tried.

>>3706315
no...no they aren't.

>>3705867
>>3706193
>>3706237
It ISN'T?

How come none of you draw her in way resembling the way she actually looks?

I mean, shes kinna ugly, and that rouge and lipstick ain't helping any. All I see are people drawing pretty cartoon faces that don't look anything like her.

>>3707311

>>3682863
>Draw this and stylize it in a way you wouldn't normally

>>3707291
Hey man I would like to commission you

>>3688357
I triyed one more time.

Late to the party.

>>3708450
Thank you mrs skeletal

>>3707291
BLOG
i beg you

>>3708188
Look man, can ibplx commission you

>>3704900
>arguably one of the best ones in the thread
>didn't use the reference for nothing, literally fucking nothing at all
Come on man, it's a study thread. You could've taken some stuff from the pic and made yours better. Still great tho.

>>3709283
>best in the thread

hahahahahaha

>>3709299
I said "one of", faggot. There's around 70 drawings here.

>>3708450
Let me commission you

>>3708450
10/10 I like it and I want to watch an animated walk cycle of this granddaddy longlegs spider
>imagine her walking on stilts in an 18:9 portrait painting

>>3708188
The proportions of the face are fucked. She doesnt have a forehead. Her eyes are way too high.

>>3682863
My latex game is lacking

>>3709936
You forgot to add the white stripes and the adidas logo.

I practiced

>>3696754
Early 2000's was a strange time.

pls rate dont be rude tho

>>3702701
>>3703358
Thanks anons, I really appreciate it

>>3696759
attempted this. Challenging, but still fun

>>3713771
Here the ver. with latex values, if anyone cares

>>3713147
1/10 I wanna fuck your mom

>>3689988

Where can we find you?

p fun

>>3689436
how do I get this physique

>>3692196
This one wins.

>>3714576
Cute, I like the textures!

>>3704900
Why you made her a nigger?

>>3709148
Heres a (you)
Because (you) did a good job

>>3709936
i like it

>>3682863
so many nice ones itt, i'm not gonna ruin it with mine

>>3714867
thanks friend :~) I used Kyle T Webster's Gouache pack, very fun brushes

I almost pissed myself laughing. I've never drawn a woman before. I skipped out on a lot because I wanted to get it done before I had to go to work.

>>3715423
happyspacemerchant.jpg

>>3715423
>>3715568
kek

>>3709921
Thanks anon, i'll go to whipping myself.

>>3690712
Patreon?

>>3715423
I'll finish mine tomorrow
I SWEEAR

>>3715423
holy shit

>>3682863

>>3682885
>>3686827
>>3684190
These are amazing.

>>3715909
Don't you want to suck his dick too?

>>3716106
Only if he'll let me ;)

>>3715568
realhappyspacemerchant.png

>>3715910
finish it now!