/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

im uncomfortable with rendering and colors in general so i decided to just throw myself head first into it and paint every day

>>3682889
nazifag please go, you spammed enough threads already on this board already.

>>3682889
Is this a joke.

>>3683193
>>3682955
You haven't been in that thread huh ?

>>3682889
You couldn't get any more CRINGE if you fucking tried

>>3682889

Sage. Start a new draw thread. That pic is beyond retarded. This threadvwas created by a nazi autist.yuck.

>>3682955
>>3683193
>>3683495
>>3683510
stop spamming, reddit faggot

Bumperino because reasons

>>3682955
>>3683193
>>3683495
>>3683510
Is everyone pretending to be retarded or has this board been subverted by special snowflakes?

>>3682889
those drawings look good

Way

>>3682889
What do you think of my drawing?

>>3685003
at least crop out the link at the bottom

>>3685003
AIDS

Ew

lol

>>3682889
Thats gonna be a yikes for me OP.

>>3685003
This gave me flashbacks to my first drawing attempts

>>3685003
i unironically like it, reminds me of that intentionally goofy stuff like sattou

been working on this for awhile critique welcome :)

some1 told me to come here

hlep;

>>3685596
this is nice

>>3684745
some mongoloid snowflake samefagging.

>>3685934
You're not using those lines right. Learn to draw and use 3d forms to construct faces (or whatever you want).

>>3686009

>>3685003
Picasso didnt died, he just accepted russian citizenship.

I wanted a new phone wallpaper that looks kind of shoegaze-y and chill. How is this?

>>3685003
So cute, anon. Do you have a blog?

i feel like theres some major anatomy flaws i cant figure out

>>3687820
updated since it wont let me delete file

>>3687892
Mayhaps it's the arms. I feel the foreshortening is not working on them.

>>3687892
Maybe check how the shoulder is oriented and where the right arm originates?

>>3687892
Good work anon

>>3685934
Hopefully this helps
I think it just helps to know that if you can see the bottom of the jaw, then you can see the bottom of the nose.

fuckit

>>3688060
Noice

>>3688060
needs longer fingers

>>3688048
Good pic

>>3688039
>>3688031
>>3688019
Thank you, is reposting multiple times for critique bad ettiquite here?

alright heres another one

>>3688280
Go ahead, this shithole couldn't get worse anyway. Those that idolize this place will talk you against it, but you can do whatever that it won't ever be as bad as having to deal with Jimmy.

>>3688292
No contrast. I get you want it to be dark, but having highlights helps it read better and separates the focal point from the composition.

>>3688296
should i do some lighter browns on the doorways? or lighten the creature up?

>>3688302
Whatever makes it clearer. If you're stuck and don't know, make a copy of the layer, squint and try to make it readable doing so.

>>3688304
Cool

You have prospective skill

no reference used so skull is prolly not really accurate, sorry for the dark picture.
also never posted on here before so hi

>>3688292
>>3688296
honestly i like the colors how they are. the fact that you have to struggle to make out the shape of it makes it wayy more creepy

>>3688548
yeah that was the intention, you gotta have that obscurity or else u might as well just draw a full body of the monster

"could I draw gokus hair from memory?"
>Can't but proceeds to draw a full scene rough based on hair despite having no idea how to draw any fundamentals because I literally never try to learn or use ref for more than 10mn

Why am I wasting so much time aaaah
I swear im going to fill 300 pages of boring basics for the next month

>>3687892
This is amazing

>>3688302
Considering I didnt even realize it was a doorway the first time I openes it, Id say yes. I thought it was a long narrow tunnel that you see the monster at the end of. Perhaps making the eyes brighter as well would help.

>>3687892
Perhaps its the forearms being too long? Especially because they are alightly foreshortened. I could be wrong but thats what jumped out at me.

>>3686551
I like the colour

i played with the arms and i think fixed most of the issues somehow

>>3691323
one issue for me is that instead of her looking like she’s spreading her ass open it looks like her ass is just like that naturally. try to give it some more movement or form or something, can’t unsee now

Most recent piece.

Be honest.

>>3691559
should cum on it to give it a finishing touch

honest crit?

>>3688060
more like Marilyn Manson
give her some big ears, maybe some fangs

listening to anne frank album while doodling.

lmk if u hate it

just trying to stsay awake

>>3691575
cleared it a bit more in photoshop

random doodle??

I drew my new friends gigantic dawg

>>3691863
More dawgs

>>3691864
love these! especially roy

>>3691551
i agree, thank you

If anyone could parse why the proportions seems so off that would be awesome

>>3691323
so, you've drawn her pussy with the perspective of her bending over when she's standing up. also her buttcheeks are somehow spread open and lifted despite her hands being way too far apart and out of position to do so. you have absolutely no weight or gesture in this drawing. stop drawing with your dick and start drawing with your head

>>3691863
>>3691864
>2446x3011
>2446x2962
resize your shit, dawg

>>3691993
can you tell me how to fix these things because ive attempted all of them through fucking with this over time (except vagina angle) and it failed.

if i give it stronger perspective of being bent over it just looks like the proportions are a mess and the arms are strangely lengthed. the arms look awkward at almost any angle that isnt that one as well.

Been trying to learn how to use CSP

Final version

>>3692044
This looks pretty shwifty! What medium?

>>3692048
Pencil, then digital

>>3691609
Nice booty

>>3691575
The whole unstraight club isn’t working unless you hyper stylize the rest of the lines consistently. Good work

I was feeling pretty proud of this but looking at it finished those lower bodies are stupidly jarring she looks like a midget. Under 2 hours and no refs though, I'm gooder than my yesterday self

i haven't draw anything since that date

how does drawing gestures help? i've been doing a lot of'em and they still look like shit and it takes me two minutes to do a still shit tier gesture. i understand proportions well and how to make animated looking people though not in perspective

>>3692372
You're doing it wrong mate, gesture is supposed to be just swirly action lines to convey MOVEMENT, not a body. So it's not really about understanding proportions, it's about understanding dynamism and posing in general. More than drawing a body it's like doing gusts of wind.

But don't worry no one really expects you to do it right, I knew all of that and I still ended up drawing humanoid shapes for my gesture. The grind still helps you, internally. I did my gesture exercises 5 months ago and today as I was drawing an action scene I thought
>Huh this thing I drew is similar to X gesture I was seeing in Quickposes some time ago, so it helped

Just keep going.

im jus coming from /beg/ looking for critiq on this work
any critic is accepted with open arms

looking for feedback on composition, lighting, colour, anything really

>>3692579
would be nice if you put more time and details into it

>>3687820
>>3687892
Anon, sorry to say this but the sketch is like 20% better - the breast lost the sense of gravity and weight 'cause you put it wayy higher for some reason, and her face was cuter 'cause of the way she was only showing her eyes. The hatching and unnecessary marks prevent her skin from looking smooth as a baby's ass.
Either do a lot of linework studying from your fav porn artists, or find a workflow that doesn't involve refining your lines, something more painterly.

Nevertheless, you did a great job.

I don’t have any drawing.
I tried drawing from life THREE FUCKING TIMES.
A plaster cast shit thing and all of them were shit.
Sightsize.
Comparative measuring.
Tore up the comparative.
The sightsize was lopsided.
Tried sightsize again tonight.
Oh, the fucking chin was way too low, or was the shoulder too high.
Fuck measuring.
WHY CAN I NOT FUCKING MEASURE?
WHY
WHY
WHY
WHY
WHY
I MEASURE SHIT AND THEN CHECK AGAIN AND RECHECK AND IT SEEMS RIGHT AND THEN WHEN THE FUCKING SCAFFOLDING STARTS TO COME TOGETHER ITS FUCKING OFF.
AM I A FUCKING ALIEN THAT CANT DO SHIT AND FUCKING FUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!
FUCKING FUCCKING SHIT

>>3692619
Just letting you know that at prestigious ateliers in Italy, for example, the expected student output is, at most, four Bargue drawings or four cast drawings per QUARTER. A lot of students don’t finish four. You have to realize how much of a time investment this is going to be for you if you want to improve.

>>3692621
Hey thanks man.
I just get so frustrated.
I seemed to be getting the hand of it with doing sightsize copies of master drawings and Barge plates but this drawing from life is kicking my ass.
I appreciate the encouragement.
I’m not gonna quit, just had to scream for a moment.
No art friends, no instructors, no anything around me.
Just a big black hole all around me with a light light shining on a stature that mocks me when I try to draw it.

>>3692602
Thank you, ive messed with it some more but i dont think ill post since its getting repetitive. thank you and everyone else for the criticisms, scathing or not. i will do better

I feel like an expert. Though I could improve the legs on the one flying, looks like a different perspective from the body

>>3692627
It will sound absurd, but you really should spend like 60 hours on a drawing sometime to push yourself to your absolute limit. It’s a good experience to have.

Is this how a gesture would look?

>>3692803
No but that doesn’t mean it’s a bad way to draw

We don’t have a term for using your brain that way, it’s just skill

>>3691621
Needs neck
Face too Disney prince for a hunchback

>>3692261
It just looks like an amateur sketch, just keep drawing, the less anime you draw the faster you’ll get better

>>3691323
You have such an intuition for drawing that you aren’t even using your brain
You’re like sorta good and it’s made you lazy

Concentrating on being more efficient.

what should i do with her hands?

>>3693191
Make them onions

>>3692159
Reminds me of courage the cowardly dog cockroach episode , good stuff anon

my friend was really tired so all these drawings are her half asleep

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>>3693498

>>3693191
This is lovely but what could have motivated you to do this

Autismo programmer here. Haven't done any sort of drawing since middle school. Need to learn basic anime tier style for my own video game. How do I start?

Pic related, just got my tablet and this is the first thing I picked to draw from my anime folder

>>3693514
>Autism
>Programmer
>Haven't drawn since middle school
>Anime
>Making a video game
>Just got a tablet
>Anime folder

BINGO! I GOT BINGO!

>>3693516
>Just got a tablet
Yeah, let me draw shit in paper and just scan it in to a computer to later use in a program

>>3693519
But that’s extremely common, especially considering that every phone can use a document scanning app

>>3693514
its bad

>>3693526
thanks Sherlock

>>3692562
I tried

>>3693191
her pubic hair doesn't reflect in the water.

>>3693560
oh thank you so much I never noticided any of these problems when painting
thanks I'll fix it up

>>3693501
because layers

>>3692034
Nice lighting

>>3691960
Read Loomis’ figure drawing book and check up on the proportions. I’m pretty sure the waistline/bottom of ribcage is the halfpoint of the torso, so you placed the crotch too high. Also your anatomy is too symmetrical, especially in the thighs and arms.

Posted this everywhere, nobody gave a fuck. It is vectorial and made with inkscape.

>>3691960
the abdomen is too short, same goes for the amrs and the legs from the knee to the grounds.
The tits should rise with the arms in that position.

>>3693191
this is amazing lol

>>3693711
this is a slow board stop being impatient go make something else until you get some critiqs or start posting it elsewhere

>>3693711
is this your first drawing of an eye, a vector? what of it

Something seems off with the face, but I can’t really figure it out? Please help me out and point out other flaws you see

>>3693711
it's mediocre shit, no wonder it doesn't stand out.

I tired to do some digital art. These are from imagination/memory no reference. What do you think.

>>3693794
cute

>>3693794
I think you should stop lying on the internet

Took about an hour for this study.

>>3693499
finished this

>>3693826
Fuck man it looked better previously. The design choices were much more interesting imo

>>3693828
>be me
>post unfinished version
>no replies
>post the finished version
>"IT WAS BETTER BEFORE"

i cri everytime

>>3693835
it looks really nicely rendered and but (you're gonna hate this) the gesture is really terrible. He's supposed to be aggressively firing his gun, right? Well it looks like the gun has cooties and he's trying to throw it away but it's super glued to his hand.

>>3693826
The cast shadow from the body looks strange for some reason

from last thread

>>3693835
how do they raise theyre arms to the side?

>>3692008
My advice is if you aren't using a ref, use one. If you are using one already, use multiple.

>>3692803
simple way to understand gesture is to draw the "action" the person is attempting to perform using only c, s and i lines. this is very hard to do if the subject isn't doing anything or is being viewed from an angle where the human figure is hard to express. this is why it is often suggested that you exaggerate when drawing gesture. that and it just flat out makes a figure more appealing to look at

>>3692099
>>3691613

Thanks for crit, didn't mean it to be not straight, didn't even notice.

i like studying Rockwell

>>3691997
but the dog is a giant

>>3693826
The first iteration was pretty good, as you kept the shadowing at minimum outside the face/hands/legs which made them to pop up, especially the face though which was good. Interesting and easy to look at.

With this one it seems to me that you kind of overdid the shading. Am I supposed to look at the sky where the most contrast is? But there is nothing interesting there. Is the ground under the rug the important? No, but the high contrast still guides me to look there. Same thing with the shadow under her, which does look out of place as the dress is so flat.

These places seem to compete with her face for my attention, keeping my eyes too busy to actually take it in as you might have seen it yourself when you were drawing it.

idk lol

As a person who hasnt really drawn much before but I would be interested in doing so. Would I be better off starting off digitally or working with pen and paper? Just asking because I already have an intuos Pro medium.

>>3694333
I personally think it really does not matter, as long as you study the fundies

portrait of an old Patagonian man
>>3693191
lmaoo
>>3693826
like desu
>>3693768
don't like desu
>>3694013
symbols

>>3694333
Whatever you enjoy the most

first time doing fanart hows this

Newbiew with ink, just trying stuff out.

Learning digital art. Came from drawing what I seen traditionally. Just was trying to draw expressions.

sage this thread.

I refuse to post in a nazi,racist, bigoted thread. edgy teen or not i don't like it. mods should have deleted this thread already.

disappointed.

I've been working on this little comic and so far i'm enjoying myself more than ever. I usually draw some sketches and can't finish any project of mine because of perfectionism and the fact that i suck at drawing. But now i just said fuck it and went with anything. What do you guys think i could improve though

>>3694804
you actually started coloring that piece of shit?

on the same surface of paper too. How delusional are?
Assuming you believed your comic is anything to be proud of. You went forth to color it. Fucking pathetic.

>>3694804
Well for one, I have no idea whats going on and where my eyes are supposed to go. I don't know how I would go about fixing it so telling you is all I can do.

>>3694855
Holy shit dude, he's trying something new, its a learning experience. Fuck off.

>>3694855
Worst kind of person

>>3694855
your outburst is infinitely more pathetic

>>3694855
You’re a miserable piece of shit. Literally kys

tonights project

>>3694855
Does your mother know this is what you do with the internet connection she's been paying for? What have you been telling her? Do you have her convinced you're working on a portfolio to get into art school? Why would you lie to her about that?

why are there 2 draw threads?

anyway.

Trying to make a tatoo for a friend.
After i gave the first sketch 2 the tatoo artist, she said it was flat and she wasnt inpressed. So here is second attempt. Anyone with experience in this field have any advice?

first try

>>3694969
the second attempt is definitely a lot more impressive. Maybe make sure you check the reference picture's eyes and your sketch's eyes, something looks derpy about them.

>>3694855
To be fair that's the kind of reply i was expecting.

>>3694937
>mother paying for my internet

Nice try.

>>3694855
dubz never lie.

>>3694869
yes I am miserable. I agree with this statement completely. I have a very troubled mind.

I also know what is good and what is bad.

>>3694855
Jesus christ, reaching crab levels that shouldn't even be possible.

>>3695040
you should kill yourself, the troubles will melt away

>>3695043
I do what I love.

>>3695048
You don’t love this though. It’s a cry for help because you have nothing or no one to turn to. Get help.

>>3695054
I do love it. I love trying to make somebody feel bad about their efforts. I want them to know they suck balls. I want them to impress me someday. I want them to recent hateful comments that hurt them. One day they will prove me wrong.

>>3692579
Is he gonna stab kraid right in the pussy

>>3694855
Retard

>>3682889
Damn that girl is cute, photo and the drawings.

yuh

>>3695086
awesome style.

>>3695080

you mad bru?

>>3693514
Well its a start.
Copying drawings you like is a good place to start, try to make it look as close to the original as possible.
Read the sticky, loomis, blah blah, you get the gist.
Oh and draw something everyday don't have to be anything big, but as a rule get into the habit of drawing every single day, no exceptions.

>>3695090
thank u

every time I'm happy with something I wait a day and hate it again

>>3695155
yep, thats gunna happen a lot

>>3695161
I know that, I just figured if I posted this I could see if there was any feedback that might make me understand why I hate this particular one

>>3695170
the more exposed shoulder sticks out a lot to me, it doesnt need to match the other but maybe mute it out slightly more so the face is more obviously the focal

>>3694804
Hey pal, if that's one page its a lot of panels. Try to save yourself some trouble and spread it out. I think on average comic pages have 5 panels per page, max like 8 or 9. When you add more panels to a page it makes the scene go faster, so save them for action scenes. When you have less it sets the scene more and lets the viewer be drawn into the characters and emotions.
Try Scott Mclouds comic books, they were extremely helpful to me for that kind of thing.

>>3693191
cursed image

>>3695170
Youve actually got a pretty nice portrait there. You just need to push the values more.

>>3695184
Fuck, forgot image

>>3695155
that's a good sign you're progressing. It essentially means you're persistent about how to improve your next painting.

keep it up anon, looking good.

>>3695185
In fact, you could take the lights even lighter depending on the atmosphere you want to convey.

>>3695155
the day you're happy with a painting. is the day you've stopped progressing.

criticize your work. be a hard ass on yourself. but also reward yourself, glass a wine.

>>3695195
>>3695189
>>3695188
>>3695185
>>3695173

thanks ya'll. I wasn't expecting such good advice desu but those are some pretty good ideas and the encouragement helps a lot

>>3682889
Haaan

>>3695207
I give advice to those who are ready.

>>3694804

unlike this degenerate.

>>3682889
would appreciate some crit, thanks in advance anons

>>3695219
looks cool but what the fuck is going on

>>3695222
im guessing its some extra dimensional aircraft battle

Smoothed out this drawing

Drew some faces today, each constructed using a different method. Bottom right is the way I normally draw faces, the other three were drawn differently. Also, I wanted to try shading the first two, since I don't normally shade with non-mechanical pencils.

I may post in /alt style/ to to see which thread people think my work best fits in.

>>3695297
Better image

>>3695324
good stuff.

>>3694855

you will wake up tomorrow with shame. i feel sorry for you.

>>3693191
It's great you fucking wierdo. Mostly her hands are disproportionate. They appear to be different sizes yet they're both the same distance from the viewer.
Great lighting!

>>3692159
Very good

>>3691960
Like the others said crotch is too high. Do studies on the pelvis area.

>>3693191
i always thought fionna was sexy when she turned green. im not the only one lol

boycott.

>>3693768
Her first right eyeball isn't proportionate. A great part of good illustration is recognition

>>3694911
Cool

>>3693835
Both his legs should be longer, especially his right leg.

>>3693855
i like it.

>>3694855
Him coloring only the last panel is not a bad choice. It puts emphasis on the mood of a pothead spider-man.

>>3695324
The distance of the brows to bottom of nose should be about the same as from the bottom of nose to chin. You’re drawing the nose too long, this is a common proportion mistake

>>3695410
Nobody cares about your rules of thumb you fag.
What pisses me off is that he couldn’t make the lines more organic

>>3695663
why couldnt you just give the first part and not the second

>>3695176
Thanks man i'll check it out.

>>3682889
desu im not even taking the art thing seriously

>>3695222
It’s abstract, so I’m not too sure myself. Was mainly going for texture and composition. Nice trips btw

makoto's left hand is wrong i know.

>>3694744
nice

>>3695965
i didnt even notice the hand, the first think that popped out is

>>3695965
the hand didnt even register to me, the first thing that popped out is that the faces both look like vegeta. good taste though

>>3695987
i feel like the hatching covers up the low quality of the rest of the drawing, you would benefit from tighter construction as well as some crosshatching or at least varying the width or spacing of your lines to push the value range

>>3696005
both look like vegeta? how come? too pointy faces (jaw line)?

>>3696020
yeah just the general likeness. eyes, eyebrows and nose mostly

help

>>3695965
Man my biggest problem is that Makoto is smiling. That bitch is too serious.

>>3693855
Ignoring the boring composition this is a very boring looking tree, its silhouette is static and too symmetrical. Trees with a growth like this are pretty much always a result of human cultivation, designed for parks, gardens and public spaces.

In the environment you painted a tree would grow differently. We're probably seeing a meadow on an exposed, windy hillside, so a tree would be subject to grazing animals, strong winds, and maybe even get hit by lightning. Such a tree would have a strong, gnarly and twisted trunk, the treecrown would be ragged and pushed to one side by the wind. It's a far more interesting subject, and makes for more dramatic picture.

Go out, observe some real trees and their environments; take photos, take notes or draw them.

>>3696273

She is having a good time fighting Ryu.
I always found it strange that Makoto was never paired with Ryu. That spot was filled by Sakura.
I think Makoto fits that role better considering all she cares is fighting and is serious about it, not ever goofin around, unlike Sakura.
Makoto feels like a better pair, a better pupil for Ryu

>>3694911
Awesome! Already saw it on Insta tonight. Love this character design.
>>3695987
That's some quality hatching. Maybe next time you could go for something softer in the background? So that the characters stand out more.

And here's my attempt at isometric design...

>>3696359
This is one your best yet, pyr0

>>3696359
pretty good, not a fan of that kind of art but it looks right at home in The New Yorker

Made a study using a coated paper en drawing on it with a piece of silver.

anyone else ever tried this?

Sargent study

>>3696359
cheers dude, i really liked your palette for this one + the tree frog one!

>>3693821
Put in more of that yellow light on the side of his face. I know it probably looks weird in blotches, but if it's all over like in the painting, it'll look like a light patch, splotch it up with more colors too, I think I see some green and white in there

>>3695057
Lol at you thinking you have an impact on anyone you fucking loser.
This person was going to improve regardless and now you're just interjecting your meaningless insults so you can feel as if you're actually doing something when you're a waste of space.

You motherfuckers are delusional. Even more pathetic than you consider this person's efforts to be, when he's actually doing something he likes.

Critique on the progress so far?

>>3696413
Very good

Welcome to the “making it” club

Critique on the progress so far?

>>3696512
Good. Great colours. Generally great.

Yet that is an abhorrent forehead, messed up calves and doughy super bad shoes/feet. Tiny hands, all around stylistically unattractive hands, freakishly large head, messed up wrists, twisted forearms.
Yeah

Completely change your “style” of how you draw girls. I know you can make it.

>>3696519
>>3696518

This is to this

now colored

I'm not really sure what I'm doing when it comes to not using outlines, wtf do I do next? Just keep mottling and refining color areas? Would a more textured brush help me out here?

Also, do you like the yellow bg object like this, or....

>>3696582
like this?

>>3696518
Did you use designdoll or something?

>>3696567
Very berserk inspired

>>3696615
of course

>>3696519
>>>3696512
>Completely change your “style” of how you draw girls. I know you can make it.

Specifics?

I painted some fruit

>>3696702
your brush strokes just suck so much. you're so addicted to the gimmick that you hurt every piece you paint. you even use pencil like that.
You're entranced by the idea of a hard bold line like a toddler that first learns to press crayon to paper.
Instead of making efforts to sophisticate yourself you embrace amatuerish technique in an ineffective and pretentious attempt to be seen as having insight or depth, which ironically prevents you from actually achieving the result you want by clinging to this stubborn display of style over substance.

Worked on this for wayyyy too long, first time with this highlight stuff on dark paper

>>3696718

>>3696711
it's just a table and some apples...

>>3696711
>Instead of making efforts to sophisticate yourself
this is the only part of this that comes close to a critique, the rest is just you insulting me. sophisticate myself how?

>>3696730
what is that supposed to mean
how does that relate to what i posted, im not blind i know what the fuck it is.
Everything i said still stands.

>>3696734
no the rest is just accurate and true. try not painting and with your fist closed over your pencil like a 20 IQ ape and mashing it down as hard as you can, TRASH. (that was an insult, to be clear)

>>3696734
use less bold lines
try making it realistic before stylizing it because youre stylizing before fundamentals

i think thats the message at least

i think you should too anyways because without knowing its "fruit" id have no idea what i was looking at.

>>3696736
This board is useless. Getting critiques from people who don't make art. It's like I'm back in art school.

>>3696740
I have fundamentals. Its all I have. If you want to draw anime go to /alt/

>>3696768
sure as hell doesnt look like it

>>3696762
mommy mommy i went to art school, my teacher waws sooo dumb i know so much better than everyone else

you clearly dont have fundamentals, you draw like a 17 year old and spend the rest of the time taking selfies in coffee shops lol. poser trash :)

>>3696772
It's nice that I get to come here and interact with the absolute bottom of the barrel when it comes to artists, but it gets tiring sometimes. You are all so bad at art... which is frustrating because it's so easy for me

>>3696779
P Y W

>>3696771
You guys have such a wonderful opportunity to talk to an accomplished artist like me and you squander it every time

>>3696779
im so much better than you is the thing haha
do you even see how autistic you come off

>You are all so bad at art... which is frustrating because it's so easy for me

heh....nothin personnell......kid....

>>3696785
if your smegma and grapes table is indicative of anything, definitely not

>>3696783
http://brianvcomforti.squarespace.com

>>3696791
>mfw he actually has fundamentals

>>3696791
ok so you make generic half assed paintings of women and landscapes. let me just throw that in the pile of unoriginal garbage thats been shat out for centuries

>>3696791
sorry, you do have fundamentals

your style just sucks

>>3696804
Maybe I have fundamentals

My style just sucks

>>3696808
are you alright man

>>3696808
i think your drawings on your website were really good!

crits please?

>>3696881
Nice geomatry

You should do major hair studies and many serious neck studies.
A neck done correct is as expressive an entire face

>>3692874

>>3697150
Good stuff

Keep moving towards that sharp 3Dness I see in your shading. Your clearly progressing out of muddy shading

>>3697187
Thanks anon, glad i'm onto something

>>3687892
her nose looks chopped off. it would look better fixed so that it doesn't look chopped off. that's my two cents.

>>3693821
you made his head more oblong than round. the hairline goes back further.

>>3697266
thank you, i hated the whole face so i went with a profile view in the end but i see exactly what you mean. i have a bad habit of shading the "shadow circle" i use for noses even though it looks like trash.

>>3694606
good linework. It seems very stiff, it needs more of a feeling of contour to it. Try to render a cylinder, think about how the contours of the cylinder would look on a page. this needs to look way more 3d than it does. you have pretty steady linework though, just keep at it.

>>3696971
thank you i will start working on those :)

>>3697150
do you have a blog?

>>3697296
many sketches:
https://www.deviantart.com/dutenck

>>3693191
her pubic shouldnt be brown but blue instead
btw this is a great one kek

>>3696791
You do seem to have pretty decent understanding of some fundamentals but in the end everything is pretty boring, i mean if this is something you are into its fine i guess.

All of these seem like life drawings and honestly they are pretty boring, where's the story or interest in this kind of art? Everything just looks like studies and the style isn't strong enough to be interesting to look at it by itself.
Have you thought of doing something more interesting with your skills?

I want to study Sadamoto’s work but i can’t bring myself to warp her torso proportions

Would love some feedback on this. I was mainly focusing on conveying atmosphere and mood, but i'm wondering if the roughness of the guy who's in focus is a bit distracting/jarring.

>inb4 noise and blur
i like it

I finished this today, it's always fun to draw this character of mine

>>3697471
Looks good, blog?

>>3697568
Cool. I use instagram as a sort of art blog @artbytobias

>>3697590
>artbytobias
how did you get so many followers?

your work is garbage. i mean the level of your work is garbage.

>>3691575
It looks very stiff, can I see your ref?

>>3697602
what the fuck are you talking about, post your work

>>3697375
>Have you thought of doing something interesting with your skills
Kind of all I think about

>>3697639
your brush work and rendering is sick but the underlying drawing skills need work

>>3697602
His work is awesome, you are just a crab.

>>3696582
>>3696584
I still have no idea what I'm doing, somebody help

Finished this >>3693191
thank you guys for the nice comments.
>>3697353
thanks. but why blue? fiona is a redhead ain't she?

>>3697466
Good stuff

>>3697580
Good shading behlit exercise

wow a king

>>3697602
Why don't you just admit that you're jealous and stop trying to convince those that are leagues ahead of you that they are bad because you'll never catch up? It's pathetic.

>>3698022
Best goddamn movie ever, just watched it the other night, you sir, are a hero.

>>3698058
>>3698022
Also, blog?

>>3697663
Made some progress, I still don't know if I'm doing this right or not

>>3698230
Actually this is the color correct version. My artist friend said the clouds arent realistic, I guess I was going for realistic/semi realistic, how could I improve them?

>>3696359
I love this so much it looks like it is from a magazine