/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3673456
Holy fuck. I wanna see how this things skeleton works.

hips/legs look weird compared to body tbqh

>>3673456
Legs and feet are out of perspective and his head needs the looms

>>3673463
Thank you for the feedback, I definitely see the legs now.
What about his head though? What does he need?

>>3673461
you're totally right, thank you

The line quality of the body and the wings/cloth/shoes don't match, the body should have cleaner and thicker lines to match everything else.

The coloring/shading on the body using a textured brush doesn't match the other parts either. Shadows with cleaner edges and some crosshatching would look better imo. Maybe a very slight texture in certain places would look cool too.

Proportions have been said already.

Also, his bottom left eye shifts slightly to his left.

>>3673456
If it's bothering you a lot the easiest and most direct response is starting over or moving to your next project. But since we're both going ahead on the assumption that that's untenable

His centre eye has a nub and that throws off the symmetry.
His face may or not? be too crowded
Others have mentioned the torso/legs. In addition to that, their size gives an impression of perspective, so they look like they're throwing off his pose

>>3673456
the /beg/ thread is your target place anon
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>>3673456
Line the body and the clothes/wings with the same type of linework. The bird wiongs are asymmetrical and also aren't anatomically accurate. Study up on bird wings a bit, they're just modified arms.

Are the hips supposed to be so wide? The fact that they are completely covered so you can't see the stuff underneath makes it look like one person's body pasted onto another's legs. If it's not a stylistic choice, make them proportional to the rest of the body. If it is, move the cloth so you can see the extension of the body into a hip more and see that it is stylistic.

The head is also very large and the legs quite short. The length from the top of the head to the pubic bone is approximately the length of the legs, and the feet would hang down below that.

>>3673456
Upper body looks alright, legs look like a faggot. Try to fix it.

>>3673456
Something like this anon.

Study more perspective. Your drawing is very flat and seems to sit on one plane. Imagine how objects would diminish in space. Study wrapping lines over forms, just read the sticky.