/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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>>3616974
wip

>>3616974
WHAT THE FUCK I DIDNT MAKE IT INTO THE OP
WHAT THE FUCK WHAT THE FUCK WHAT THE FUCK WHAT THE FUCK WHAT THE FUCK WHAT THE FUCK

>>3616979
Sorry your art prolly sucks

>>3616979
AHAHAHAHAHAHA faggot git gud salty-kun

>>3616979
your the salt popsicle anone! you're there!

>>3616978
Finished

i'm stuck because i can't figure out the hip/crotch area an how those muscles would work but it's gonna be covered with shorts anyways so it's not like it actually matters but it's still driving me crazy cause i don't know how they work an it's like impossible to find good ref images of toned/muscular people where they're naked enough to see how hip and crotch muscles work

>>3617393
Anatomy for sculptors. Look it up and try to find them in there.

>>3617393

>>3617405
that book is AMAZING and i stare at it nearly every day but i am unfortunately too dumb to be able to make much use of it without photos of real people in different poses and angles to cross reference and compare their diagrams and photos too ;-;
you're right tho, anyone who wants to understand muscles even in the slightest should look that book up, it's great!

>>3617409
danke! this is really helpful too!!

I already had one of my shits as OP so not complaining on not getting in, but you should have used an actual drawing from last thread.

sup /ic/~
feedback?
>Not a bowsette edition
screw the rules i made a bowsette jr

I realized I colored it while using f.lux ....

>>3616979
Not with that attitude

since when does threatening to kill someones cat end up in a 30 day ban on 4chan??

also, drawing.

more bowsette pls

>>3617571
>threatening someone's cat
Kill yourself anon

>>3617495
Fatty! How can this be?! I thought you were dead.

>>3616974
Could you not include 'anime study thread' in the op? ast is already screwed search-wise by being part of 'last artist standing'

>>3617699
I haven't checked ast in a while. I will look into it.

>>3617560
face doesnt fit the style at all imo

>>3617571
>threatening to kill someone
not so ba-
>s cat
die

>>3617747
yeah its still the face i used when I did the sketch, and while I added color and details I just kept it because it looked cute, but it really doesnt fit any more at this point youre right. I didnt even notice until you said that.

Is drawing characters like this enough to get apathetic likes from people scrolling by? I feel the need to add more form to the face but I want to develop a style I can do quickly for little comics and such.

>>3617808
FUCK OFF WITH THIS GODDAMN FAD FOR FUCK SAKES

>>3617808
Make the crow explode. You'll blow up if you do.

>>3617813
Crown*

>>3617808
Color in the eyes and have better line weight and maybe.

Also wtf crown doesn't do anything? At least make her grow into a siamese twin or a clone or super peach or make her tits grow or something

>>3617815
>make her tits grow
Next page my friend, next page. thanks for the tips I'll work on the line weight.

>>3617812
Never

>>3617813
I'll keep it in mind.

>>3617632
talk about the drawingggg

>>3617495
>>3617843
Not him, but her chest is not flat enough.

>>3617847
reeeeeeeee

>>3617166
It looks off because she doesn’t have eyebrows.

>>3617917
Great even without being lewd

>>3617926
Does it look very off? I don't give her eyebrows because don't want to give her much expression

>>3618006
If you're actually serious, then please reconsider how silly that sounds.

>>3618024
I'm serious though, barely give her 2 lines for eyes. But you were absolutely right after adding eyebrows, looking at the other one is off

>>3618047
actually nvm I still like no eyebrow better

>>3617560
That face is far too simplistic for that body. Try to balance it out.

1 or 2? also anything i could improve design wise to make her clothes easier to read better?

>>3618006
Then why make her smiling? Draw eyebrows.

>>3618095
2
and draw her feet

>>3618095
I like 2 better since it’s on the other side of the wind, if it was like number 1 on the other side I feel like she would bring it closer to her body.

>>3618025
Weird perspective and proportions are wrong. The right leg has missing muscles (vastus lateralis and medialis).
I really like her face and the color tho.

>>3618025
extremely stiff and boring pose

>>3618097
I did do it, didn't like it idk desu

>>3617808
It's oversaturated already. You should've posted something on the first day

>>3618130
All that expression is in the mouth shape and position

>>3618215
yeah, it is was a silly thing to say, I'm not sure what I meant with it anymore and it did look weird without them

I fucked up early on but decided against giving up and starting fresh. Thoughts?

>>3618233
w-what went wrong?

>>3618234
See that little bit by the neck? That little lump flap? I decided to enhance my mistake until we landed there.
Still nice and thick though, I certainly would.

>>3616589

i need help with this

>>3618253
Uhm frend this is very amazing

>>3618257
help with what, specifically? i can lend a hand but not for the next 15h or so D:

>>3618276
any tip for anatomy in general. i fix a bit the legs and removed the weird terrain.

>>3618253
I like this. I think her right arm and her left leg should be longer, though.

>>3618265
>>3618287
Thanks. orz
Yeah, mixed feelings about the perspective, and saturation of the leotard. I've stared myself blind at it now so I'm not sure how bad the right hand vs the direction of the weapon is, for example. Tapered blade doesn't help.

>>3618286
perspective of her right calf is different from the upper leg, left knee is too high up
i think the pelvis is too far forward as well? and the upper arms kinda look like they're different lengths

>>3617604
>>3617759
ima kill yo cat nigguh

>>3618110
Thank you. To clarify: the proportions part is only about the legs, or is there anything else?

>>3618286
>>3618257
I decided to try and give it a go for the perspective and gesture. Not saying this is correct, but it might help you with the ground and stuff. I hope it does!

>>3618732
im confused, whats going on with the face?

>>3618752
Nothing, it's a gesture, so I use a box for it. I sometimes split it in quarters to later on have a scaffolding for the features.

>>3618752
Nothing, it's a gesture, so I use a box for it. I sometimes split it in quarters to later on have a scaffolding for the features.

Did a quick example to show what I mean.

>>3616974

Need advices guys.

Can someone redline this and/or give me some tips? Would appreciate it

>>3618815
I think you need to work on basic proportions

>>3618820

What's wrong with my proportions ?

>>3618823
looks like the sausages from sausage party

>>3618827
>sausage party

>>3618253
thank you for the reply from last thread. your improvement over twitter is very inspiring.

>>3618823
Bruh his neck is almost as big as his torso

>>3618823
Not trying to be a dick, but you can't look at this proportions and think they're right. For one, before you even start anatomy, just consider the size of the body parts. There is exagerrating, but then there's plain erroneous, which is what that is. The neck is too wide and the arms are way too small in comparison to the torso. Unless you were trying to draw Joe Rogan, that's not what a regular human looks like.

>>3618838
>>3618253

Link to his twitter?

>>3617808
>>3618194

I'm not in a rush, I just wanted to commit to finishing stuff every now and then, it's been way to long.

>>3618818
Here's a tip, stop idolising CalArts.

>>3618823
Poor bastard can't scratch his balls while standing up.

>>3619219
Seething

>>3618818
is this nikkko

been-a-while study

wanted to see how much i could do in about 3 hours

>>3619531
do more gesture drawings

how wrong is body also does it look like water?

>>3619566
I was advised that i should actually focus on drawing more proper studies instead of gesture as my current skill level was not at a point that gestures would help me yet as they all looked off... is there something I'm doing wrong?

>>3619586
all your drawings look stiff. i mean, proper studies will do you good as well of course, but you can push the emotion in the pose more. all your drawings have very action-y themes(destruction, pew pews, etc.) so learning about angles, dynamic poses will push the explosiveness.

>>3619588

>>3619588
hello fellow pen anon, nice work

>>3619615
thanks you too.
i feel that when i go back to pencil after weeks of straight pen, its way easier to draw. do you get this?

>>3619624
Definitely, the permanence really forces you to find the right line before making a mark. I need to slow down more

>>3619475
Who dat

I know the head isn't very good, but are the hands and body good?

>>3619720
oof dude

>>3619720
i hope this isn't bait, but no friend, everything's fucked. Go practice cylinders and cubes, because your figure is too noodly, too playdoughy to even feel solid.

>>3619639
some guy in /co/ who never improved for 6 years

>>3619720
yiiiiikes

>>3618286
hey im doing a wendy"ette" too! yours looks pretty fierce. maybe have her looking at the viewer? looking down at nothing is off putting.

>>3616974
im ready to color this, but im still not sold on her proportions. especially the legs. normally i'd give it a couple days to let my eyes reset. but it's (kind of) a commission so i need it to be done asap

>>3619796
your legs could use some more nuanced curves. they're too straight. Also her neck, head is too on the right.

>>3619862
That is very cute

>>3619843
can someone spoonfeed me a redline
i made the mistake of leaving this up on my monitor all day. i can't see what's wrong- only that something IS wrong. ya feel me?

>>3619882
nevermind. i got one

>>3619843
ill see what i can do for the neck

>>3619882

>>3619914
her face is a bit uh- autistic looking
but overall there are good improvements here. 9/10. thank you anon! ill use this to guide me as well

Who is this artist?
(Sorry if wrong thread.)

>>3619936
dunno anon, how about you use that google search function

>>3619936
Nurzhan Bekkaliyev

>>3619573
It looks more like the floor is covered in crumbled sheets of paper.

1) Water doesn't have this many waves that connect to each other; moreover, they are not that straight and get less dense the closer they are to you.
2) You're using the same brush for waves as for solid objects, which makes them look solid.

To make them look like waves, you can do the following:
1) Erase most of your lines.
2) Draw new, fluid, lines that have roughly the same direction and get less dense up close.
3) Switch to the background color and move your brush quickly but discriminately over the lines to erase dots from them, removing the solid look.

>>3619985
>yev

>>3620001
>stubby feet

>>3620001
please dont insult nurz by comparing him to gutter trash

>>3619997
Oh all of that is very helpful, I did the lines like that as a guideline for shading, was planning on removing them altogether after that, but I'll try it as you did first and see how it looks. Thank you frend

>>3619920
>austistic looking
still a vast improvement on the original

>>3619720

>>3616974
I'm trying out using white lines because it looks good and also for the sake of standing out.
What's wrong with this pic?

>>3620102
>What's wrong with this pic?
Well you're using white lines and chromatic abberation for one. It looks disgusting why did you put that filter on it?

It's all symbol drawing its got a generic clip art look to it and it's just not appealing as is. It's flat and there's no gesture in there at all just a dude standing there making a face. No real fingers. No substance. Meh.

>>3620102
>it looks good
Does it?

>>3620108
The clip art style is exactly what I'm going for and I'm keeping everything but I agree on you on the sanding pose and substance.
Thank you for your input and will keep it in mind

>>3620026
>comparing trash to trash
i dont see the problem here

>>3620109
imo it is. But I need to hear what other people think.

>>3620112
Your opinion is wrong. Everything about that image is a mess. Why even ask if you aren't going to change anything?

>>3620115
Because its possible to execute the same style while making stuff look good.
Also I might just change my mind in the future. Opinions aren't always permanent.

>>3620102
I like it and think it works alright, thou the hands could be done better. They look pretty weird compared with the rest of the pic

>>3614943
that brush looks way better imo, the aliased look is meh except for when madotsuki anon does it
>>3618253
wow

wish it didn't take me so long to finish anything

>>3620197
Noodle arms

>>3620197
eyes too far apart, mouth misplacement.

>>3620202
>>3620205
I did't ask for crits.

>>3620202
thanks for the input

>>3620205
i see. spent quite a while trying to get them right but seems I failed lol thanks man

>>3620210
you're not me retard, don't do this shit

>>3620217

>>3620222
lmfao anyone can do this shit. anyone retarded knows that they shouldn't post ITT if they don't want crits

>>3620229
do what?

>>3620222
>>3620231
>babby's first inspect element
you even missed a space between number and "(you)" on the 2nd post you sad being

>>3620265
what?

Increased resolution and redrew everything desu

>>3620150
aww ily anon, i think yev-san's pixelly brush looks great but that other brush also looks nice and fits his style

>>3619997
I followed your steps, I'd never drawn a big body of water before so i guess I was thinking of it like a mesh of polygons and stuff, honestly this is way easier and better, thank you again. I am also probably not going to keep the lines black and set them to 50% opacity

>>3620111
>post penny for portrait art
fuck right off.

>>3620356
go masturbate to those rhino legs degenerate

>>3620363
go masturbate to craft artist portraits of bald men with mustaches faggot

>>3619997
Not the guy you are replying to, but that doesn't look like water at all. It looks like she's stuck on some very rough surface on the crust of a distant planet

>>3619786
where can I find his art? And is he that bad?

Erm... I got tunnel vision, help pls

>>3620001
damn he got really good, congrats yev!

>>3620413
The proportions look solid except for the elbows and the forearms. The right arm is slightly too long and the elbow to forearm looks weird. Your hands are also not supposed to be the same size as the forearms, which is the case on her left side.
Also, whenever someone makes that pose, usually they are leaning in. She seems to just be standing straight for the most part. If you drew more leaned in the pose would look more interesting. Otherwise pretty good

>>3619720
>reverse image search
>no matches found

If you shit on yev you better post your work alongside it. You've been warned.

>>3620430
or else what ^_^

>>3620378
youmadbroroflmao

>>3620430
what are you gonna do stubby?

>>3620472
>>3620481

>>3620490
peak human performance

>>3620430
>>3620490
the fight over trash continues

>>3620430
Is there anything more repulsive and pathetic than a fanboy whiteknighting his buttbuddy over something that gets his rocks off?

yev did ABSOLUTELY NOTHING WRONG

what can i do for the underside of her dress? i dont wanna detail it too much- but right now it doesn't really vibe

>>3620413
get used to drawing while zoomed out. drawing something while being zoomed in for too long leads to wonky proportions- ie: her arms. just measure them against eachother to see what im talking about.

>>3620430
yev is shit

>>3620946
>that face
At least yev knows how to draw one, yours is trying to run away.

>>3620958
nta but yeah I hope yev can draw a face hes been drawing the same one for years

>>3620958
yev all your characters are inbred freaks
sit down

im >>3618286

decided to change the pose to something more edgy.

>>3620946
I don't like my shapes but perhaps try a yellow color?

>>3620999
not that guy but this looks relly nice, wish the skirt was more compacted (or showed better how its bunching on one side? or is it a high-low?) so the yellow was more balanced

>>3620999
is it me or does that yellow immediately lead my eyes to the skirt? i feel like it's a bit distracting composition-wise.

>>3620946
fix that damn face. at least space out the eyes more. she looks retarded bro.

>>3619862
Cute, but the perspective is kinda gross. You need some boxes in your life

>>3620946
>>3621038
there

>>3620999
You're not really feeling the form inside the skirt, also that yellow eew

>>3621033
if it was a smaller visible area or perhaps just one strip of the lining it would nicely balance the yellow on the crown at least imo
but yeah as is its probs too much yellow

>>3621051
damn you fags really don't know appeal if it beat you over the head

>>3621058
not that anon but yeah those colors are extremely unappealing

I'm tempted to make the legs longer but they seem fine

>>3620958
don't kid yourself, at least this guy can draw something resembling feet

>>3621082
I like this a lot so far! what brush are you using?

i wanted to fix the face at the end when i'd rendered and merged everything, but i really can't deal with these face edits you guys keep posting. i appreciate the effort, but theyre even more malformed than my original.

>>3621048
im gonna keep it real with you
this aint it anon

>>3620999
the yellow is gorgeous, but unfortunately i agree with >>3621033. it's *too* pretty. the amount of depth you added is nice though. i'll roll with that

#protectyev

>>3621103
think at that angle you shouldn't be seeing the side of the face so much as it gets tucked behind the eye

>>3620317
more wip I'm done for today desu

>>3621103
yikes, please study heads or at least figurines. that ear is a mess.

>>3621114
don't you see even more of the side of the face from a 3/4ths view? i think im misunderstanding you

>>3621121
my punishment for liquefying her head. i'll add this to my to do list, good catch

>>3621120
keep up the comfy arts senpai

>>3621120
still doesn't look like water much,but its so hard and i'd probably do worse desu

is she kawaii uguu enough
its for my friend who really likes gungirls

>>3621147
Autistic gf/10
Would touch

>>3619531
>>3619532
NICE

>>3620983
i liked your other pose. just power through it anon

>>3621081
this has some solid shape language. my only complaint is the feet looking like slippers.

trying my hand at character design, i want something a little edgy but not too busy

i feel like my line work is too lacking, so im trying out something a bit different

>>3620410
Don't want to call him out so no

>>3620999
Pee color
I prefer the original

>>3621129
I mean like this. The main issue before was you drew the head too big for the face or vice versa. Also if you could define the nose more.

I'm I going somwhere or do I scratch?

>>3621235
oooh i see. i might not make that change, but i'll keep it in mind. i've been noodling on this one too long.

i know it said no bowsette but whats wrong with this pic, i hate how it turned out.

>>3621256
Everything

>>3621261
woah i didn't expect that one. nice one anon haha

>>3621256
use your program's lines feature to keep consistent angles in your sketches. her figure's angles is not the same as the bike's bike's is more straight while figure is more to the side.

>>3621256
butt no big enough

>>3621256
the back of the head is looking funny, ponytail too far to the left, looks like you added a random blob to the side of the head, you haven't centered it properly. Left shoulder popping out too much and body looks misaligned with the bike.
Another nitpick the right horn looks like it got shaved off mid way

>>3621256
Hope you don't mind. a couple of the issues i had could just be nitpicks but i found that the index and middle fingers are too far apart, the hand looks too square and the thumb is too short for that angle (the position of the thumb was also a bit unnatural), the ponytail and left horn look like they're not attached properly to the head and the left shoulder and arm look plain strange

>>3621266
>>3621271
>>3621281
>>3621294
i see, i see. the arm was actually a lot more wrong than it is, and I changed it, but guess i needed to correct even further.

Okay i wasn't done, now I am

>>3621133
I try frend

>>3621136
yeah it is very hard honestly I give up already, i tried with the ripple effect here and there but I can't really do much more

How's this look? Specifically wondering about the hatching and the face.

Old doodles

>>3620378
Lmao rekt

>>3621326
okay now I'm done, it looked too empty and boring

>>3621852
Nice, can't wait to see the next finished version

>>3621256
So, some people have pointed you out that the body is not aligned properly but to me what is out of alignment is the backside of the bike, I did a quick eyeballed plane layout, blue is horizon, yellow is the parts that are out of perspective, red is what the bike and body feel like they are pointing towards. Again, I'm not totally accurate with the lines I dropped, but what does jump to me is the rear wheel, axles and exhausts.

c and c appreciated, especially for the anatomy, it still feels kind weird

>>3621986
that's very cute anon I think this one's pretty on point, there's not much sense of scale but anatomy wise it's great

>>3621986
The perspective on the crown is fucked, and her spots could use some slightly different texture so they don't look painted on rubber. Maybe her belly button needs to be tilted in a different way because it's at an angle to show her shifted body, but the angle of the body is unclear to begin with. But, everything else is good, I like the shadows on your work.

>>3621986
it doesn't look like she's rising, it looks like she's resting on the water.

Whats a good resource for learning how to do paneling and comics?

And a slightly more autistic question, when you draw comics, do you do it right to left, or left to right if its animu style.
I'd assume the natural of just doing it left to right, just because that's how words flow and it being in English. But at the same time its easy to get confused if its anime-esque art and I've seen some people do it in reverse just to simplify things.

>>3622092
Framed Ink. And I find a westerner doing right to left so pretentious, it's not like it was a conscious aesthetic decision by nips. It's how it is there.

>>3622098
Well I just always find it weird because you go in and see it, and expect to read it right to left, but its actually reversed.

Plus weebs and superior nipponelevens might think lesser of my art for using inferior western standards lowering my view count.
Not that i care that much, just curious what yall do

>>3621986
the crown is flat/perspective on it is flat
the boobs are also flattened and one is smaller than the other.
Otherwise, fucking love this! the colors and painting style are great.

>>3619935
done?

>>3622473
>didn't even write signature or blog anywhere in the image
>believes it's done

>>3622477
i have niether of those

>>3622473
>not including a render of your stylus and tablet in your image
>believes it's done

Drew that McD chick from The Fifth Element. Critiques would be awesome

This is going to be a decal for my friend's PS4 (sans red)

>>3622550
> the color scheme is not easy on the eyes. I get Mc D's is red and yellow but everything but the shadow and eyes are bright, saturated, and warm tones. try to find a better balance, too much of any color or type of color isn't so easy on the eyes.One thing that could save this is changing the white background to a color that can balance things out more like a pleasant blue or teal.
> you should've had highlights and shadows on more parts, it looks good.where it is done, do it more
> some of the thickest lines are in her hair and that doesn't mesh well. Also some of the most even lines are in her hair and that has problems too. Keep them thinner but still tapering
> her expression should be as lively as her pose but it's more like a forced smirk than anything. I also recommend omitting harsh shadows on the face, it makes the character look creepy more often than not. And as for whatever else I don't like what I REALLY don't like is the way her chin sticks out there. Personal opinion.
>her torso is very stiff and could be more conventionally "curvy", as it is the space between her chest and hips looks like a soda can or something
> the legs are also very stiff, both being completely straight which would be fine if her weight were balanced between them in a more static pose but two straight legs cannot support or balance her in this pose, let alone on roller blades.

I see a lot of potential in this sort of stylized anatomy and line dynamics and stuff but for me the colors and more disturbing/unnatural stylizations ruin it

>>3622574
Thanks dude. I like this

>>3622564
kwel, but It's hard to read the coil-thing that does the tail, just make it so you can only see the end of the tail and not the incide of the belly. Such a minimalist style should read in a snap
>not the same pose but what matter is the read on the intersection.

>>3622610
>incide
ay ay ay

was pumped the entire time drawing this and now i think its fucking shit :^) i just want to die sometimes! ha ha

on to the next one

>>3621147
I see your friend is a man of taste.

>>3622649
You got my thumbs up on this one. Got a higher res or blog you post your stuff?

>>3622473
>left all that white space on the page
>under the impression it's complete

>>3622649
I think it's very cute. Keep up the good work.

>>3622526
>>3622668
>>3622477
you cunts think this shit is a joke?
yes it is

>>3622649
I like it anon, it's pleasing. The expression could use some work and be more vivid, lively, it's a bit stiff at the moment. But what jumped to me is the arm that comes up close. I red lined what I meant. It's shorty compared to the nearest one, maybe you wanted to do some foreshortening but I don't feel it's working. Very nice overall.

>>3622695
What happened yev? Why'd ya chop off her fingers?

>>3622730
That was nearly funny if it wasnt so stupid

I will finish this when the bandwagon die.
>>3622695
Yev please stop

>>3622747
>bowsette
you first

>>3622747
It's already dead though

>>3622747
too late laggard

>>3618253
JJ Frenchie tier, my man.
Having your blog would make me very happy

>>3621256
A more daring pov wouldn't hurt m8

>>3619532
Looks fresh af

>>3621082
I'm very, very much looking forward to your next step. Lotsa potential there

>>3621147
All you weebs out there, take notes. This is how you make your animu not trash - by introducing volume. You can see inside her mouth as well as the exact place where her eye is overlapped by the bridge of a nose that's not even drawn there.

>>3622649
I was about to crit your use of contrast and poor composition, but you redeemed yourself completely in the last update. Smart background solution, very appealing. Good work anon.

>>3618286
>>3620983
Out of curiosity, do you happen to be the author of pic related?

i'm drunk, please yell at me

>>3622786
the muscle lines are just disgusting dude. Feels like i'm looking at blood vessels coursing throughout the top of her skin which makes it hella unappealing.

>>3622786
The lines you have defining the muscles look too harsh in the contrast, tone them down a bit, maybe with a softer brush.
Overall I like your koopa hime

>>3622797
>the muscle lines are just disgusting dude.
Imagine being this big of a fag,

>>3622808
hes right tho...

>>3621815
good lines, could fill spaces with better subjects tho

>>3622797
>>3622804
ultimately i wanna learn to be more rendery so i can do things more subtly so i understand, jus trynna internalize the placements of the major muscle groups at the moment, but yee

>>3622808
eh, they're entitled to their opinion, no need for the mean words

>>3622808
suck a dick faggot

>>3622808
if you can't see whats wrong with those lines you are clearly /beg tier. gtfo where you belong to deviantart or a tumblr hugbox if you're gonna be a major bitch and whine about a critique directed towards a complete stranger. Although I can't say for sure you aren't the guy who actually made the art just pretending to be someone else, because there are retards that do that nowadays.

>>3622695
eugh.

>>3622473
it's done for real this time

>>3622747
Looking good for far.

>need to mount back my tablet to the dock
>too tired, decide to shove my keyboard in tablet dock
>it fits snugly
>realize I just made a makeshift keyboard tray to put above my cintiq

I love moments like this.

>>3622924
https://www.amazon.com/CTA-Digital-PAD-AFS-Height-Adjustable-Gooseneck/dp/B00HFRYAGQ/ref=sr_1_5?s=electronics&ie=UTF8&qid=1538314047&sr=1-5&keywords=tablets+stand

Something like this if anyone is curious on a cheap fix. Although that isnt my model. Then I prop it behind the desk and it clamps behind the top of the tablet.

>>3622928
https://www.amazon.com/SR-Keyboard-Multimedia-Computer-Laptop/dp/B01IQL2VCE/ref=sr_1_4?s=electronics&ie=UTF8&qid=1538314461&sr=1-4&keywords=mini+keyboard

*top of the front tablet

and keyboard has to be this small

studies and doodle

You didn't just trace those space Jin drawings right?

I didn't, but I'll take being suspected of it as a complement

>>3622986
I roughly remember those two drawings, so didn't directly compare with the original, was just wondering since fully tracing seems totally pointless.

First concept sketch of a OC of mine.

>>3622610

Thanks, super simple fix

>>3622946
whose style are you going to steal next?

>>3622786
gimme your blog
and also go over the muscles with an eraser on 50% opacity

>>3622709
i agree with you on the face, but i noodled on it far too long and just had to settle at some point

>>3622764
thanks for noticing the nose thing on my gun girl. i cry

>>3622747
how long does it take you to finish something like this? the way youre going about it looks really inefficient

looks good though

>>3622649
Whoa, that style evolution is simply amazing. Has it already been so long?

>>3622756
Thanks man, I think you overestimate me though. fuuka2rin on twitter
>>3618898

I intend to add some color, but is this level of line roughness passable or should I be cleaner to get more social media fame shekels?

>>3623220
It's true your older drawings aren't as strong, but that's a good thing - not all artists show a visible progress over a short period of time.

If I were you, I'd stick to developing this rendering style - low contrast, keeping the palette soft and close together and alternating between areas of more and less rendering for an extra layer of appeal. A cheap trick you can use is to put a saturated layer over the top, set it to overlay and play with the opacity, it brings all the colors together.

>>3623173
I like the nose, tho

>>3622995
hey there, smurf. looks interesting!

>>3623274
Amazing work as always especially the face.

>>3623277
liar

>>3623274
Amazing face as always especially the face.

>>3623274
Amazing face as always especially the face.

>>3623274
kill them with kindness

>>3623274
i want to lick her booettehole

>>3623274
Amazing face as face especially the face.

>>3623274
YIIIIIKEEEESS

>>3623274
Why does everyone on this board hate yev? Surely there are worse artists who frequent here.

>>3623274
yikes..

>>3623274
Holy fuck can people stop arguing over trash? Let trash stay trash.

based yev

>>3623274
hes still getting W O R S E . god damnit.

don't mind me, just doing my part to kill this cursed (>>3623274) thread

>>3622946
possibly the worst ITT below yev

>>3623274
sis... you're cancelled

what the fuck happened to this thread

>>3623173
twitter?

>>3623168
>steal next
Can't steal what can't be owned; try """"be heavily influenced by"""" instead

>>3623466
too far

>>3622995
Smurf getting into that giantess territory now too?

>>3622995
it kinda looks like shes holding a cigar and smoke is coming from it. btw I'd live on her tits

>>3616974
new thread when

>>3623564
>newfag

>>3623274
Well done

>>3622797
Okay cuck

i have no idea what im going to do with this hair
>>3622649
blog?

>>3623653
vewwy noice. all i can say is you should extend the abdomen length on the right figure, it feels too squashed into her ribcage

>>3623691
Magister?

>>3623274
>>3623691
What the hell is going on? Did the Bowsette meme end so quickly that another meme came up to fill its place in an instant? The Boosette? I already see 800 images under the tag.

>>3623710
im sad my ninji girl wasn't drawn by people. (i dont think i did good on it so i get why)

Wonder if this ended up uncanny valley.
>>3623256
Yeah I'll try the method some more later.

>>3623730
That's surprisingly good coming from you.

>>3623485
professorSugoi on twitter

>>3623691
can i have yours too?

>>3623697
There was a lot wrong with her perspective I think, it's still weird but kind of better

I also feel I should re-do her whole head

>>3623800
The one on the left is 70% legs
Looks kinda freaky

>>3623787
ty! mine's miruku-p on tumblr, same but with an underscore on twitter

>>3623175
>how long does it take you to finish something like this? the way youre going about it looks really inefficient
Too long, i don't know how to improve my work flow desu

>>3623800
I guess the legs are too long. Have them only 3-4 heads tall. Also make the weapons larger

>>3623274
I like it, but you've got to do that hand better because it's too small considering the perspective.

>>3623800
You CAN make long legs work, but yours aren't, probably a mixture of big heads and big hands, or Idk, but you can make it work if you really try. Legs are one of those things that you can get away with

>>3623173
cute dog nwn
no links tho, apologies
also the way i do lines makes that a bit more easier said than done ;-;

>>3623220
nah you're great, keep at it, i look forward to more of your work, especially in the style of your last one if you feel like keepin that up
>>3623730
noice, reminds me even more that i needa practice rendery things

>>3623800
>>3623914
>>3624082
i'm ver tired an have job interview tomorrow an i still have to workout and take shower but if you have patience i promise to return in the next day or so with some tips and diagrams on proportions in general and how i like to approach longer legs

>>3623667
eat dick faggot

>>3623858
yep
>>3623914
actually didn't notice since I tend to do 5 head tall characters, but these heads are pretty big, so makes sense to be only 3-4
>>3624082
>>3624105
wasn't trying to have them long desu, just bad at proportions ;_;

Also re-did right figure's face and uh, just going to try and hide mistakes with the clothes desu. thank you all for the help

can someone link me to kyles blog

no

>>3623730

Oh yeah
>>3624105
Thanks. Armor girl workflow did indeed work out well.

low-effort dupe-posting in dead thread

>>3623691
not gonna go any further

>>3624970
pls color it frend, it's lovely

>>3624965
gimme your blog or else

>>3625085
Space Jin.

new thread when

Also fuck you chicocalte use an actual fucking drawing from the thread you piece of shit

NEW THREAD PLS

Oh >>3623736
Thanks, feels like I botched the face lighting though. Gonna do some studies later.